Horror The Mirror..(complete)

[sudeep Kumar RAJPOOT]

A1

 

[sudeep Kumar RAJPOOT]

Good story

 

[Creepy story]

Bura na Manna lekin story bkwas hai.but narration achi hai.

 

[Adirshi]

Bahot hi mazedar starting huvi. Kuch kuch jagah par sabdo ki mistake dikhi, par samaj me aaja jate hai.

Wese RauoSahab bar bar Sandhya ko gaon jane kya kyu keh rahe the?

Dekhte he aage kya hota hai.

Shukriya

Bahut hai mazedar update.

Wade ki detailing aur Anish ke purvajo ki history ko bahut hi khubsurat tarike se dekhaya gya hai.

Aur akhri me kisi agyat mahila ki chabi ko aese darsaya hai, man me uska picture ubhar aaya.

Bahut khub

Shukriya

Bahut hi mazedar update tha.

Shukriya

Bahot bahot achi story thi. Maza aa gya

Shukriya bhai

अंत अदभुत लिखा आपने Adirshi भाई।

Dhanyawad bhai

पूरी कहानी एक दिन में पढ़ली। बहुत ही रोचक कहानी थी।

बहुत ही बेहतरीन तरीके से आपने पुराने वाडे की छबि को दर्शाया है। और अनीश के पुरखो का इतिहास भी बड़े ही संसार तरीके से दर्शाया है।

और इसका अंत तो बड़ा ही लाजवाब था। संध्या का जानने के बाद भी कामिनी की उसे मार देगी, फिर भी उसने उसकी मुक्ति पाने में मदद की। वाह मजा आ गया पढ़के।

Thank you so much

 

[Adirshi]

Intresting starting he bhau

Finally uski bhi entry ho gayi

:wow: ek arse baad Aisa thriller horror padhne ko Mila he bhau
Gajab he

Matlab anjani ki bhi entry ho gayi he

Beda gark he jo pehle he se idhar

Marta Amartya ki takkar, aatma dushtatma ki jalan, Raosahab ki aiyyashiya , aappasaheb ki krurata aur ant bhayankar tha
Kamini ki shuruaat se leke ant tak jo jo hua wo sab shocking to tha he par uska ant bhi nishchit tha !
Sandhya ki ichashakti ne use wo karne layak banaya jisse uski aur Anish ki Jaan bachi he.
Sach me gajab story thi ye.

Shukriya mere bhai

 

[Adirshi]

Nice

A1

Good story

Thank you

 

[Adirshi]

Bura na Manna lekin story bkwas hai.but narration achi hai.

Theek hai bhai thank you

 

[Thakur]

Bura na Manna lekin story bkwas hai.but narration achi hai.

Theek hai bhai thank you

Bandar kya jaane adrak ka swaad

 

[Creepy story]

Bandar kya jaane adrak ka swaad

Tu bandar hai kya

 

[The Wolvarine]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


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Prizes

Position	Benifits
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