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PLACE *****HOSPITAL
JODHPUR
ye us pure shahar ka ak jana mana hospital hai.....or aas paas ke sabhi hospitals se kaafi advanced bhi....
Hospital ke ICU mai ak ladki admit thi JISKO charo taraf se machino ne gher rakha tha....ye ladki koi or nahi jailor ki beti NEHA hee hai....
Intro- NEHA- age 17 abhi 12th mai hai....science se.....very cute or chulbuli.....itni nathkhat ki rote hue ko bhi hasa de.....rang doodh jaisa safed....ak chota sa update
PLACE *****HOSPITAL
JODHPUR
ye us pure shahar ka ak jana mana hospital hai.....or aas paas ke sabhi hospitals se kaafi advanced bhi....
Hospital ke ICU mai ak ladki admit thi JISKO charo taraf se machino ne gher rakha tha....ye ladki koi or nahi jailor ki beti NEHA hee hai....
Jail waale incident ko guzre aaj pure 10 din ho gaye the.....lekin ise abhi bhi hosh nahi aaya tha....abhi kuch der pahle hee doctor neha ko chek karke gaya tha...Neha ke gale or face ki chote sahi ho gayi thi....yanha tak ki face par to chot ka koi naamo nishan hee nahi tha...lekin gale par abhi bhi kuch stitches the...jo jaldi hee khulne waale the......lagbhag roj commissioner neha ko dekhne aata hee tha....or jis din wo khud nahi aa pata.... us din apne kisi officer ko bhejta....
Pure hospital ki security kaafi kadi ki hui thi....khas kar neha ke room ki....uske room ke bahar or us corridor mai Hamesha 4 5 police waale pahra dete the.....24 ghante...
Or aisa hota bhi kaise nahi .....aakhir wo ikloti gawaahi thi.....jo bata sakti thi ki us din jail mai kya hua...or kisne itna bhayanak khel khela.....ab tak police walo ne jitne bhi kaidiyo se saamna kiya tha...unme se jyadatar encounter me maare gaye the...or jo bache the.....unme se koi bhi kuch bhi bataane ko taiyaar nahi tha.....police waalo ne apni taraf se har koshish or har tarah ka torchar kar ke dekh liya tha....lekin koi bhi apna muh nahi khol raha tha.....kaaran....vikram ke dwara jailor ko di hui vibhats maut..... jiska darr usnke dil or dimaag mai bahut gahra baith gaya tha.....aise mai ak Matra ummid NEHA hee bachi thi ....
Doctor jaate jaate nurse ko NEHA ki dressing karne ko bola gaya tha...to wo nurse abhi dressing ka saman lekar uske pass aayi hee thi....ki tab hi uski nazar NEHA par Padi jo ....aankhe band kiye hue hee ....apna sar takiye par.....baicheni se idhar Udhar ghuma rahi thi.....abhi nurse kuch karti us se pahle hee usne tez tez saans lena shuru kar diya .....jaise wo milo dur se daud kar aa rahi ho....or uske pass rakhi machine ne jo ki dil ki dhadkno ko control karti hai achanak beep karna start kiya....jis se neha ka saans lena or tez ho gaya.....or pure room mai bas uski tez saans ki or machine ke beep ki hee aawaze gunj rahi thi.....
Nurse ne or der karna uchit na samjha or wo bhaagte hue doctorrr.....doctorrr chillati hui room se bahar bhaagi....
Kuch samay baad wo doctor ke saath wanha aayi or doctor use chek karta hai....or nurse ko anesthesia ready karne ko bolta hai...jise wo turant lekar aati hai....doctor use anesthesia dene hee wala tha ki.....NEHA ki dono mutthiya bhich gayi.....or
DAAAAAADDDDDDD
HA HA HA HAA AAA HAAA HA
Chillati hui uth baithi....or betahasha ronee lagi.....use hosh mai aata dekh kar doctor thoda khush ho gaya or usne nurse ko commissioner ko bataane ko bhej diya......
Neha kuch der tak roti rahti hai....to docyor uski mental or physical haalat ko dekhte hue .....use neend ka injection dekar sula deta hai.....
Kuch samay baad neha ki aankhe khulti hai...to wo apne charo tarah dekhti hai....to wo apne aap Ko hospital mai paati hai....
Pahle to use kuch samajh nahi aata.....lekin jab kuch der baad use sab yaad aata hai to uski aankho se 2 bund aansu nikal kar gir jaate hai....lekin phir na jaane Kyo wo unhe poch leti hai....or uth kar baith jaati hai.......iss samay wo us room mai akeli thi.....to wo dhire se uth ti hai or slowly slowly bathroom mai jaati hai or mirror me khud ko dekhti hai.....phir niche jhuka kar apne muh par paani maarti hai....or phir wo aisa kai bar karti hai....or uske baad ak dum se ruk jaati hai.....or apni aankhr khol kar mirror mai dekhti hai....iss waqt uske chahre par zamaane bhar ki nafrat or gussa bhara tha....
Phir jaane kya soch kar wo apne dono haath puri taakat se mirror par maarti hai.....yaaaaaaaaaa
Jis se wo mirror puri tarah tut jata hai or tukde tukde hokar niche girta hai....or saath hee kaafi saare kaanch neha ke haatho mai bhi ghus jaate hai......or uske haatho se khoon bahne lagta hai...lekin use ab usse koi farak nahi pad raha hota hai.....uska gussa ab bhi waise hee hota hai...
Phir wo us mirror ke kuch tukde uthaai hai or usme apne aapko dekhti hai.....
Phir wo unhe niche fekta hai or room se bahar nikal jaati hai.....kismet se abhi abhi raat thi or wanha koi police wala bhi nahi tha...to wo sidhe hee dhund te hue ak room mai jaati hai janha use staff ke kuch kapde mil jaate hai....or wo unhe pahan kar hospital se bahar nikal jaati hai.....
Iss samay uske chahre par patthar jaisi kathorta thi....or uske dil or dimaag mai bas ak hee bat gunj rahi thi......or uski AATMA bhi use bas ak hee baat lagatar cheekh cheekh kar kah rahi thi.....
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Pure hospital ki security kaafi kadi ki hui thi....khas kar neha ke room ki....uske room ke bahar or us corridor mai Hamesha 4 5 police waale pahra dete the.....24 ghante...
Or aisa hota bhi kaise nahi .....aakhir wo ikloti gawaahi thi.....jo bata sakti thi ki us din jail mai kya hua...or kisne itna bhayanak khel khela.....ab tak police walo ne jitne bhi kaidiyo se saamna kiya tha...unme se jyadatar encounter me maare gaye the...or jo bache the.....unme se koi bhi kuch bhi bataane ko taiyaar nahi tha.....police waalo ne apni taraf se har koshish or har tarah ka torchar kar ke dekh liya tha....lekin koi bhi apna muh nahi khol raha tha.....kaaran....vikram ke dwara jailor ko di hui vibhats maut..... jiska darr usnke dil or dimaag mai bahut gahra baith gaya tha.....aise mai ak Matra ummid NEHA hee bachi thi ....
Doctor jaate jaate nurse ko NEHA ki dressing karne ko bola gaya tha...to wo nurse abhi dressing ka saman lekar uske pass aayi hee thi....ki tab hi uski nazar NEHA par Padi jo ....aankhe band kiye hue hee ....apna sar takiye par.....baicheni se idhar Udhar ghuma rahi thi.....abhi nurse kuch karti us se pahle hee usne tez tez saans lena shuru kar diya .....jaise wo milo dur se daud kar aa rahi ho....or uske pass rakhi machine ne jo ki dil ki dhadkno ko control karti hai achanak beep karna start kiya....jis se neha ka saans lena or tez ho gaya.....or pure room mai bas uski tez saans ki or machine ke beep ki hee aawaze gunj rahi thi.....
Nurse ne or der karna uchit na samjha or wo bhaagte hue doctorrr.....doctorrr chillati hui room se bahar bhaagi....
Kuch samay baad wo doctor ke saath wanha aayi or doctor use chek karta hai....or nurse ko anesthesia ready karne ko bolta hai...jise wo turant lekar aati hai....doctor use anesthesia dene hee wala tha ki.....NEHA ki dono mutthiya bhich gayi.....or
DAAAAAADDDDDDD
HA HA HA HAA AAA HAAA HA
Chillati hui uth baithi....or betahasha ronee lagi.....use hosh mai aata dekh kar doctor thoda khush ho gaya or usne nurse ko commissioner ko bataane ko bhej diya......
Neha kuch der tak roti rahti hai....to docyor uski mental or physical haalat ko dekhte hue .....use neend ka injection dekar sula deta hai.....
Kuch samay baad neha ki aankhe khulti hai...to wo apne charo tarah dekhti hai....to wo apne aap Ko hospital mai paati hai....
Pahle to use kuch samajh nahi aata.....lekin jab kuch der baad use sab yaad aata hai to uski aankho se 2 bund aansu nikal kar gir jaate hai....lekin phir na jaane Kyo wo unhe poch leti hai....or uth kar baith jaati hai.......iss samay wo us room mai akeli thi.....to wo dhire se uth ti hai or slowly slowly bathroom mai jaati hai or mirror me khud ko dekhti hai.....phir niche jhuka kar apne muh par paani maarti hai....or phir wo aisa kai bar karti hai....or uske baad ak dum se ruk jaati hai.....or apni aankhr khol kar mirror mai dekhti hai....iss waqt uske chahre par zamaane bhar ki nafrat or gussa bhara tha....
Phir jaane kya soch kar wo apne dono haath puri taakat se mirror par maarti hai.....yaaaaaaaaaa
Jis se wo mirror puri tarah tut jata hai or tukde tukde hokar niche girta hai....or saath hee kaafi saare kaanch neha ke haatho mai bhi ghus jaate hai......or uske haatho se khoon bahne lagta hai...lekin use ab usse koi farak nahi pad raha hota hai.....uska gussa ab bhi waise hee hota hai...
Phir wo us mirror ke kuch tukde uthaai hai or usme apne aapko dekhti hai.....
Phir wo unhe niche fekta hai or room se bahar nikal jaati hai.....kismet se abhi abhi raat thi or wanha koi police wala bhi nahi tha...to wo sidhe hee dhund te hue ak room mai jaati hai janha use staff ke kuch kapde mil jaate hai....or wo unhe pahan kar hospital se bahar nikal jaati hai.....
Iss samay uske chahre par patthar jaisi kathorta thi....or uske dil or dimaag mai bas ak hee bat gunj rahi thi......or uski AATMA bhi use bas ak hee baat lagatar cheekh cheekh kar kah rahi thi.....
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Wanhi dusri taraf...
Banglo no-25
VIKRAM apne secret room mai gaya jo ki usne apni kapdo ki almira ke piche bna rakha tha.....jiska rasta bhi almira ke andar se hee tha......wo use room ke andar gaya ....
Room kuch jyada bada nahi tha lekin wanha sabhi tarah ke letest weapons rakhe hue the.....machine guns..... hand guns....bullet proof jackets wagaira......
Usne aage badh kar kuch hand guns apni kamar mai lagaayi....or ak rifle apni pith par taang kar.... ak ko haath me le liya or bullet proof jackets pahan liya.......
Dushman se Ladne ke liye vikram ready to ho gaya tha....lekin abhi bhi uske saamne ak bahut badi pareshaani thi.....or wo yeh thi ki wo iss room se bahar kaise nikle.....kyoki saamne ke gate par to wo saare commandos khade the......wo to darwaza 6 inch steel ka tha or sath me biometric lock bhi nahi to wo kab ka andar ghusa chuke hote.....
Jo 2 window iss room mai thi wo bhi bangle ke piche khulti thi.....or wanha bhi un commandos ka pahra tha.....
Tabhi use kuch dhyan aaya or wo turant bathroom ki taraf Bhaga......bathroom mai ak roshandan tha...jo ki kareeb 10 feet ki uchaai par tha or wo bhi lakdi ka bana hua tha...... or movable bhi tha.....
Wo itna bada to tha ki Usme se ak aadmi bahar nikal sake.....wo roshandan bangle ke left side ke hisse mai khulta tha janha ki purana waist saman rakha hua tha....or uske or boundary ke bich bas 5 feet ka hee faasla tha or is taraf waali boundary bhi puri upar 2 manjil tak bani hui thi......jis se iss hisse mai jyadatar andhera hee rahta tha....
Vikram kisi tarah us roahandan par chad gaya.....or bahar ki taraf jhaak kar dekha.....lekin use siwaaye andhere k kuch bhi nahi dikhaai diya.....lekin niche utarna to tha hee.....kyoki darwaza bullets ko rok sakta tha....lekin un commandos ko nahi....or abhi uske pas koi rassi bhi nahi thi......
Phir kuch soch kar usne jump karne ka plan banaya....lekin phir wahi baat aati hai....ak to andhera....upar se iss galiyaare mai purana waistag saman rakha hai...jinme kya Kya hai ye khud use bhi nahi pata....or sabse main baat uske or boundary wall ke bich sirf 5 feet ka antar hai.....Inn sab baato ko dhyaan aate hee wo samajh gaya tha ki agar wo kuda to chot lagna to tay hai....lekin agar wo nahi kuda to shaayad uska marna pakka ho jaaye....kyoki saamne bhi black commando the....der sawer wo kamre mai aane ka raasta dhund hee lete....
Phir kisi tarah wo apna man ko kathor kar kud hee gaya....
Aaaaaahhhhhhhh
dhhhhhhhhaaaaaammmm
Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh
HAA haaaa haaammmmm
Haannn
AK tez aawaz hui.....pahli aawaz to vikram ke muh se tab nikli jab wo wo kudte hee saamne waali deewar se takra gaya....or uske chahra usi deewar ke saath ragad khata hua niche aaya.....jis se uska ak taraf ka chahra puri tarah se damage ho gaya tha....or phir uske girne ki aawaz hui jise ki bangle ke andar or bahar khade sabhi commandos ne sun liya tha or wo use sun kar turant uss or bhaage.....
Lekin bas uska chahra hee kharaab hona kam nahi tha....jaise hee wo niche gira.....wanha kabad mai ak jung lagi rod rakhi hui thi ....jo sidhe vikram ke pet ke aar par ho gayi......or isi se wo bahut tez chillaya tha.....
(Ab se story vikram ke anusar)
Betahasha dard tha.....aisa lag raha tha kisi ne pet hee phaad diya ho.....wo rod mere and janha ghusi hui thi......maine apna haath dhire dhirw le ja kar use jagah par rakha....
Aaaaahhhhhhhh
HA hu ha hu ha aaaaaaaaaa huuuu
AK bahut tez dard ki lahar mere pure jism mai daud gayi.....aisa laga jaise abhi meri aankhe bahar ko aa jaayeng......ak aisa dard jiski koi kalpana bhi nahi ki jaa sakti.....mere pure jism mai daud raha tha......
Tabhi mere kaano me kisi ke aane ki aahat sunaai di......
Tab maine kisi tarah apni puri taakat lagakar khud ko khada kiya.....bahut khada to ho gaya lekin abhi bhi mere pair kaamp rahe the....pet se khun ki ak lambi dhaar bah rahi thi.....iss dard k aage mai apne chahre ke jakhm bhi bhul gaya tha....
Rod kareeb 1 inch motaai ki thi.....maine kisi tarah himmat juta kar use aage se pakda or bahar ki taraf khichne shuru kiya......lekin aisa karte hee...us rod jeb saath saath pet ki antadiya bhi khich kar bahar aane lagi...or dard ki ak aisi lahar jism mai uthi .....jise bayaan karna naamumkin hai.......or mai apne ghutno par aa gaya......
Lekin maine abhi himmat nahi haari thi.....or phir ye ak lagga hee to tha.....or mujhe apni taakat ka andaza tha....isliye maine dubara zor lagaya or iss bar puri taakat se rod ko pakad kar bahar khich hee liya......
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
HA haaaaaaa huuuu
Dard se meri haalat bad se BADTAR ho gayee thi....khun bhi pahle se jyada aane laga rha.....or tabhi mujhe kisi ke mere piche hone ka ahsaas hua....jo ki mujhse kuch duri par hee tha.....or aisi situation mai mere dimaag dauda.....sabse pahle to maine apni dono ....dono guns niche rakhi.....bina aawaz kiye...phir apni jacket or shirt bhi nikal diya....or shirt ko rol kar jakhm waale hisse par kamar se lapet kar tyte bandhi diya....taki jyada khun na nikle...
wo log janha khade the wanha Par kuch roshni thi jo ki bangle ke piche jal rahi light ki aa rahi thi....lekin meri taraf bilkul andhera tha....jiska ki mujhe faayda tha...or wo ye ki unhe pata to tha ki mai yanhi kanhi hu....lekin wanha rakhe kabaad ki wajah se wo mujhe nahi dekh paa rahe the.....
Maine apni pakad apni rifle par mazbut ki or turant khada hokar piche mud gaya or andhadhun firing karne laga or sath hee saath piche bhi badhne laga.....mere achanak fire karte hee wo log sambhal nahi paaye or unme se 3 log niche gir gaye......or mai bhi un par goliya barsata hua...piche se nikal kar bangle ke front side mai aa gaya or......Bhag kar turant main door par gaya....isi bich mujhe ak commando or dikha lekin maine andhadhun goliya chala kar us ko bhi Hamesha ke liye lita diya tha......
Mai jaanta tha agar mai aisa hee karta raha to unme se aadhe bhi nahi marenge or meri saari goliya khatm ho jaayegi ........agar maine aise hee goliya waist ki to....
Lekin mere pet se khun abhi bhi bahut raha tha...or dard ki wajah se mai aim nahi laga paa raha tha......isliye mujhe yahi raasta sahi laga....unhe thikaane lagaane ka....
Bangle ke sabhi gate biometric access the......or unhe ya to mai ya ramlal hee khol sakta tha.....
Ramlal.......lekin ramlal kaha hai......itna sab hone ke baad bhi wo utha nahi ......kanhi in logo ne use kuch kar to nahi diya......
Ramlal ki yaad aate hee maine apne anguthe se turant main gate khola.....lekin mujhe kuch bhi dikhaai nahi de raha tha...kyoki ghar me andhera bahut tha...maine piche se aate waqt lights bnd kar di thi.....
Tabhi kanhi se ak goli aakar mere kandhe par lagi or mujhe phir se dard ke ahsaas ne gher liya or mai apni gun lekar right side mai rakhe some ke piche kud gaya......or apne kandhe par haath lagaya.....jakhm gahra nahi tha...goli bas kandhe ko chu kar nikal gayee thi.......
Or saamne se bhi ab andhadhun firing hone lagi....firing se sofe ki rui nikal kar ud rahi thi.....or wo sofa bhi jyada der un goliya ko bardasht nahi kar sakta tha...to mai halka sa utha or Bhag kar saamne rakhi table ke pas pahucha or use apne aage gira liya......mere aisa karte hee unhone us par goliya chalana shuru kar diya.....jawaab mai maine bhi.....hath table ke niche or gun unki taraf rakhte hue fire kiya.....
Mere fire karne ke baad mujhe 1 2 logo ke girne kuch aawaz aayi or mai samajh gaya ki maine ab tak lagbhag 6 7 ko uda diya hai.... lekin abhi bhi shaayad 10 baaki the......
Ramlal ka kamra.....ab mujhse bas 5 7 kadam ki duri par hee tha....lekin agar mai apni ungli bhi bahar nikaalta to wo use bhi bhun daalte.....lekin mujhe uski fikar thi.....isliye uske pass to jana hee tha......
or maine ak bar phir se himmat jutaai or bhaagne ke liye position le liya....lekin mujhe ye nahi pata tha ki ye daud meri life ki aakhri daud hogi....
Mai wanha se puri jaan laga kar Bhaga...lekin jaise hee main bahar nikla wo phir se firing karne lage or isi mai mujhe 2 goliya lagi ak mere haath mai jis se maine rifle pakda hui thi.....or dusri mere pair mai.....
Haath me lagi goli to koi khas asar nahi dikha payi.....bas meri rifle mere haath se chhut kar wanhi gir gayi thi... lekin pair mai goli meri jaangh(thigh) par lagi thi jis se bhaagte use mai uchal kar ramlal ke room ke gate ke andar jaakar gira.....or uth kar uske bed tak gaya......
Bad par ramlal ki laash padi thi....mere jism ke jakhm mujhe utni takleef nahi de rahe the...jitni ab ramlal ki laash dekh kar hui thi....or aaj bahut samay baad mere ankhon mai aansu aa gaye the....
Kuch pal me ramlal ke saath raha.....or phir khada ho gaya or apni pith se apni dusri raifal nikal li......
Or dhire dhire aage badh gaya......
Iss waqt meri aankhe gusse se bilkul laal ho gayi thi......unme se angaare dahak rahe the.....
or mai pure gusse mai jaakar un par firing kar di......or tab tak kar ta raha jab tak ki wanha maujood sabhi commandos maut ki neend nahi so gaye......YA ghaayal ho kar niche nahi gir gaye......
Raifal ko fek kar maine apni dono hand guns nikaali jo ki maine room se niklte waqt li thi....or badh chala un commandos ki taraf......
Un mai se 2 abhi zinda the maine wanha pahucha kar unki taraf dekha or apni dono guns mai jitni bhi goliya thi saari un dono ke jism me utar di......or apni guns wanhi fek di.....
Aaj bahut samay baad mera Mann kar raha tha rone ka......or wo isliye nahi ki mai jakhmi tha......balki isliye ki Inn kutto ne ramlal ko Mar diya tha......
Ramlal mere saath pichle 1 saal se tha.....wo mere khane pine ka khaas khayaal rakhta tha.....raw chhodne ke bad shaayad aisa pahli bar tha ki mai kisi ke saath raha hu......kanhi na kanhi uski maut ka jimmedar mai khud tha....or ye soch kar meri aankho mai dubara paani aa gaya.....tabhi mere kaano mai ak aawaz Padi or use sunte hee meri bhohe tan gayi or gusse mai meri mutthiya phir se bhich gayi......
KESA HAI MERE BHAAI...??
ye aawaz us aadmi ki thi jis se mai duniya me sabse jyada nafrat karta tha.....RAJ
YA rajesh mera raw ka saathi.....or mera sabse bada dushman....
Uski aawaz sun kar mai uski taraf mud gaya.....meri aankhe wapas gusse se jalne lagi thi......
MAAN GAYA TUJHE ......JAKHMI HONE PAR BHI MERE 15 COMMANDOS MAAR DIYE TUNE.....LEKIN KOI NA.....TU FIKAR NA KAR TUJHE NIPTAANE KE LIYE MAI HEE.........
abhi wo aage bolta us se pahle hee bhaag kar mai us par tut pada or puri jaan laga kar uske chahre par punches ki barsat kar di......or use maarta gaya....maarta gaya....ye shaayad gussa tha....mera mere khud ke upar.....ramlal ko na bacha paane ka....jo ab us par nikal raha tha.....
Lekin mai jakhmi tha.......wo nahi.....upar se wo thahra 7 feet ka or ak tagde wwe pahalwan ki tarah physic wala.....usne mujhe utha kar dur fek diya....lekin maine bhi haar nahi maani...or us par phir se punches ki barsata kar di.....lekin tabhi usme apni puri taakat se mujhe ak punch wanha mara janha mujhe rod ghusi thi......
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mere muh se ak jordar chikh nikli.....uska punch itna powerful tha ki uske maarte hee mai jameen se 2 3 inch upar uth gaya tha....or phir usne mujhe par punch maarna shuru kiya ....jo ki jyadatar mere chahre ke damaged hisse par hee lag rahe the or samay ke saath meri haalat or bigadti jaa rahi thi....lekin maine bhi pura protest kiya....puri taakat se kick mar kar use apne se dur kiya or pas hee rakha pital ka flower Base utha liya or use pure zor se uske sar mai mara....ab ki bar chikhne ki ki baari uski thi....
Or uski bhi ak bhayanak chikh bangle mai gunj gayi....lekin mai itne mai hee nahi ruka....or us gamle se lagatar war uske sar par karta raha.. jis se uske sar se bhi.....khoon ki ak moti dhar bah kar zameen par girne lagi.....or Wo apna sar pakad kar niche baith gaya .....
Phir maine use Base ko dur fek a or usko uthaane gaya or yanhi galati ho gayi....usne pata nahi kanha se ak khanjar nikala...or mai kuch soch samajh pata us se pahle hee....mere pet mai lagatar kai saare war kar diye.....or us se meri aankhe bahar aane ko ho gayi or mai bad hawaas sa wanhi par baith gaya....
(Now from 3rd person)
Wanhi dusri tarah
Ramlal's room
Wanha vikram or Rajesh ki fight chal rahi thi...or yanha ramlal ki laash bed par Padi thi.....ki achanak....
RAMLAL NE APNI AANKHE KHOLI OR TURANT BED SE UTH GAYA......OR APNE BED KE NICHE SE SK BAKSA NIKAL KAR USME SE KUCH SAMAN NIKALA....
YE KISI GUN KE PARTS THE JO KI ASSEMBLED NAHI THE .....WO UNHE ASSEMBLED KARNE LAGA....KUCH HEE PAL MAI USNE UNHE PURI TARAH JOD LIYA...OR LAST MAI BAAKI RAH GAYI THI US GUN MAI MAGAZINE LAGANA...JISE WO AK BAR DHYAAN SE DEKH KAR LAGA DETA HAI......
Ye 50 CALIBRE KI goliya thi....
Or wo gun thi....
BEOWOLF 6.8 FULLY AUTOMATIC
gun mai magazine lode kar wo use uthata hai....
abhi wo kuch iss tarah lag raha tha....
Gun lekar wo bahar ki taraf chala jata hai.....bahar wo dekhta hai ki.....
Vikram deewar ki tak lagakar baitha hua tha or wo kaafi jakhmi tha...rajesh ne chaakuo ke war kar kar ke vikram ke jism ko bilkul bekar kar diya tha..or usne use utha kar deewar se laga diya tha...taaki use uski aankho me dekhta hua Mar sake...or abhi wo uske saamne khada tha...rajesh.....jiske haath mai abhi ak raifal thi jo ki usne kisi commando ki utha li thi....
Rajesh vikram ke sar par gun rakhta hai ....tab vikram ko lagta hai ki uska aakhri waqt aa gaya hai or apni aankhe bnd kar leta hai....or rajesh trigger daba deta hai......
Thhaaaayeeee
AK bahut tez aawaz aati hai...jo pure bangle gunj jaati hai....ye goli ki aawaz thi.....jo ki rajesh ki nahi ramlal ki gun se chali thi or rajesh ke sar ko kholte hue uska bheja lekar deewar mai ghus gayee thi....or agle hee pal lovesh.....bezan hokar niche gir jata hai.....
Goli chalne par bhi jab kuch nahi hota to vikram apni aankhe kholta hai...to use rajesh ka khula hua sar uske saamne pada hua dikhta hai .....jise dekh kar use shock lagta hai...lekin us se bhi jyada shock use tab lagta hai .....jab wo rajesh ko maarne waale ko dekhta hai...or uski aankhe shock ke maare khuli ki khuli rah jaati hai.....kyoki uske saamne ramlal ak bhari see rifle le kar khada tha...
Vikram ko apni aankho par vishwas nahi ho raha tha.....lejin Jo sach tha...wo saamne tha....lekin us se bhi badi baat ab ye thi.....ki ramlal agar zinda tha to wo itni der tak kyo wanha pada raha...... kisi laash ki tarah.....or ab bahar kyo aaya hai......
Tabhi vikram.....
Vikram- ramlal tum zinda ho to.....
uski baat ko bich me hee kaat kar.....
Ramlal- ha malik me zinda tha......lekin mai pahle bahar nahi aaya......kyoki mai isi pal ka intezar raha tha....
vikram kuch na samajhte hue...
Matlab.....???...
Ramlal- matlab ye maalik kiiiii.....
or achanak uski aawaz badal jaati hai kisi 24 25 saal ke ladke ki tarah .......or wo apni asli aawaz mai.....
▪▪JAB MERE PASS ORIGINAL CHIJ HAI TO MAI DUPLICATE KO KYO KAAM MAI LU.....▪▪
▪▪JAB ORIGINAL VIKRAM AA GAYA HAI TO......DUPLICATE KA KYA KAAM.....▪▪
or wo ye bol kar turant ak goli us nikli vikram ke sar me maar deta hai....
Goli sidha uske sar mai lagti hai or uska chapter wanhi khatm ho jata hai......
Phir ramlal apni jeb se phon nikaalta hai....or kisi ko phon karta hai.....
Ramlal- ha ab mai aa gaya hu na....to use bhi hata do....
Saamne se-...........................
Ramlal- (tez aawaz mai) jaisa kaha hai waise karo.....khatm karo use or yanha aa jaao.....
Or wo phone kat deta hai....
Phir wo apni jeb se kuch rdx or c4 explosive nikaalta or pure bangle mai fit kar deta hai or garage se ak gaadi nikal kar rat k andhere mai kanhi gum ho jata hai.....
Uske thodi dur jaate hee ak bada dhamka hota hai or wo ghar malbe mai tabdeel ho jata hai.....
Banglo no-25
VIKRAM apne secret room mai gaya jo ki usne apni kapdo ki almira ke piche bna rakha tha.....jiska rasta bhi almira ke andar se hee tha......wo use room ke andar gaya ....
Room kuch jyada bada nahi tha lekin wanha sabhi tarah ke letest weapons rakhe hue the.....machine guns..... hand guns....bullet proof jackets wagaira......
Usne aage badh kar kuch hand guns apni kamar mai lagaayi....or ak rifle apni pith par taang kar.... ak ko haath me le liya or bullet proof jackets pahan liya.......
Dushman se Ladne ke liye vikram ready to ho gaya tha....lekin abhi bhi uske saamne ak bahut badi pareshaani thi.....or wo yeh thi ki wo iss room se bahar kaise nikle.....kyoki saamne ke gate par to wo saare commandos khade the......wo to darwaza 6 inch steel ka tha or sath me biometric lock bhi nahi to wo kab ka andar ghusa chuke hote.....
Jo 2 window iss room mai thi wo bhi bangle ke piche khulti thi.....or wanha bhi un commandos ka pahra tha.....
Tabhi use kuch dhyan aaya or wo turant bathroom ki taraf Bhaga......bathroom mai ak roshandan tha...jo ki kareeb 10 feet ki uchaai par tha or wo bhi lakdi ka bana hua tha...... or movable bhi tha.....
Wo itna bada to tha ki Usme se ak aadmi bahar nikal sake.....wo roshandan bangle ke left side ke hisse mai khulta tha janha ki purana waist saman rakha hua tha....or uske or boundary ke bich bas 5 feet ka hee faasla tha or is taraf waali boundary bhi puri upar 2 manjil tak bani hui thi......jis se iss hisse mai jyadatar andhera hee rahta tha....
Vikram kisi tarah us roahandan par chad gaya.....or bahar ki taraf jhaak kar dekha.....lekin use siwaaye andhere k kuch bhi nahi dikhaai diya.....lekin niche utarna to tha hee.....kyoki darwaza bullets ko rok sakta tha....lekin un commandos ko nahi....or abhi uske pas koi rassi bhi nahi thi......
Phir kuch soch kar usne jump karne ka plan banaya....lekin phir wahi baat aati hai....ak to andhera....upar se iss galiyaare mai purana waistag saman rakha hai...jinme kya Kya hai ye khud use bhi nahi pata....or sabse main baat uske or boundary wall ke bich sirf 5 feet ka antar hai.....Inn sab baato ko dhyaan aate hee wo samajh gaya tha ki agar wo kuda to chot lagna to tay hai....lekin agar wo nahi kuda to shaayad uska marna pakka ho jaaye....kyoki saamne bhi black commando the....der sawer wo kamre mai aane ka raasta dhund hee lete....
Phir kisi tarah wo apna man ko kathor kar kud hee gaya....
Aaaaaahhhhhhhh
dhhhhhhhhaaaaaammmm
Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh
HAA haaaa haaammmmm
Haannn
AK tez aawaz hui.....pahli aawaz to vikram ke muh se tab nikli jab wo wo kudte hee saamne waali deewar se takra gaya....or uske chahra usi deewar ke saath ragad khata hua niche aaya.....jis se uska ak taraf ka chahra puri tarah se damage ho gaya tha....or phir uske girne ki aawaz hui jise ki bangle ke andar or bahar khade sabhi commandos ne sun liya tha or wo use sun kar turant uss or bhaage.....
Lekin bas uska chahra hee kharaab hona kam nahi tha....jaise hee wo niche gira.....wanha kabad mai ak jung lagi rod rakhi hui thi ....jo sidhe vikram ke pet ke aar par ho gayi......or isi se wo bahut tez chillaya tha.....
(Ab se story vikram ke anusar)
Betahasha dard tha.....aisa lag raha tha kisi ne pet hee phaad diya ho.....wo rod mere and janha ghusi hui thi......maine apna haath dhire dhirw le ja kar use jagah par rakha....
Aaaaahhhhhhhh
HA hu ha hu ha aaaaaaaaaa huuuu
AK bahut tez dard ki lahar mere pure jism mai daud gayi.....aisa laga jaise abhi meri aankhe bahar ko aa jaayeng......ak aisa dard jiski koi kalpana bhi nahi ki jaa sakti.....mere pure jism mai daud raha tha......
Tabhi mere kaano me kisi ke aane ki aahat sunaai di......
Tab maine kisi tarah apni puri taakat lagakar khud ko khada kiya.....bahut khada to ho gaya lekin abhi bhi mere pair kaamp rahe the....pet se khun ki ak lambi dhaar bah rahi thi.....iss dard k aage mai apne chahre ke jakhm bhi bhul gaya tha....
Rod kareeb 1 inch motaai ki thi.....maine kisi tarah himmat juta kar use aage se pakda or bahar ki taraf khichne shuru kiya......lekin aisa karte hee...us rod jeb saath saath pet ki antadiya bhi khich kar bahar aane lagi...or dard ki ak aisi lahar jism mai uthi .....jise bayaan karna naamumkin hai.......or mai apne ghutno par aa gaya......
Lekin maine abhi himmat nahi haari thi.....or phir ye ak lagga hee to tha.....or mujhe apni taakat ka andaza tha....isliye maine dubara zor lagaya or iss bar puri taakat se rod ko pakad kar bahar khich hee liya......
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
HA haaaaaaa huuuu
Dard se meri haalat bad se BADTAR ho gayee thi....khun bhi pahle se jyada aane laga rha.....or tabhi mujhe kisi ke mere piche hone ka ahsaas hua....jo ki mujhse kuch duri par hee tha.....or aisi situation mai mere dimaag dauda.....sabse pahle to maine apni dono ....dono guns niche rakhi.....bina aawaz kiye...phir apni jacket or shirt bhi nikal diya....or shirt ko rol kar jakhm waale hisse par kamar se lapet kar tyte bandhi diya....taki jyada khun na nikle...
wo log janha khade the wanha Par kuch roshni thi jo ki bangle ke piche jal rahi light ki aa rahi thi....lekin meri taraf bilkul andhera tha....jiska ki mujhe faayda tha...or wo ye ki unhe pata to tha ki mai yanhi kanhi hu....lekin wanha rakhe kabaad ki wajah se wo mujhe nahi dekh paa rahe the.....
Maine apni pakad apni rifle par mazbut ki or turant khada hokar piche mud gaya or andhadhun firing karne laga or sath hee saath piche bhi badhne laga.....mere achanak fire karte hee wo log sambhal nahi paaye or unme se 3 log niche gir gaye......or mai bhi un par goliya barsata hua...piche se nikal kar bangle ke front side mai aa gaya or......Bhag kar turant main door par gaya....isi bich mujhe ak commando or dikha lekin maine andhadhun goliya chala kar us ko bhi Hamesha ke liye lita diya tha......
Mai jaanta tha agar mai aisa hee karta raha to unme se aadhe bhi nahi marenge or meri saari goliya khatm ho jaayegi ........agar maine aise hee goliya waist ki to....
Lekin mere pet se khun abhi bhi bahut raha tha...or dard ki wajah se mai aim nahi laga paa raha tha......isliye mujhe yahi raasta sahi laga....unhe thikaane lagaane ka....
Bangle ke sabhi gate biometric access the......or unhe ya to mai ya ramlal hee khol sakta tha.....
Ramlal.......lekin ramlal kaha hai......itna sab hone ke baad bhi wo utha nahi ......kanhi in logo ne use kuch kar to nahi diya......
Ramlal ki yaad aate hee maine apne anguthe se turant main gate khola.....lekin mujhe kuch bhi dikhaai nahi de raha tha...kyoki ghar me andhera bahut tha...maine piche se aate waqt lights bnd kar di thi.....
Tabhi kanhi se ak goli aakar mere kandhe par lagi or mujhe phir se dard ke ahsaas ne gher liya or mai apni gun lekar right side mai rakhe some ke piche kud gaya......or apne kandhe par haath lagaya.....jakhm gahra nahi tha...goli bas kandhe ko chu kar nikal gayee thi.......
Or saamne se bhi ab andhadhun firing hone lagi....firing se sofe ki rui nikal kar ud rahi thi.....or wo sofa bhi jyada der un goliya ko bardasht nahi kar sakta tha...to mai halka sa utha or Bhag kar saamne rakhi table ke pas pahucha or use apne aage gira liya......mere aisa karte hee unhone us par goliya chalana shuru kar diya.....jawaab mai maine bhi.....hath table ke niche or gun unki taraf rakhte hue fire kiya.....
Mere fire karne ke baad mujhe 1 2 logo ke girne kuch aawaz aayi or mai samajh gaya ki maine ab tak lagbhag 6 7 ko uda diya hai.... lekin abhi bhi shaayad 10 baaki the......
Ramlal ka kamra.....ab mujhse bas 5 7 kadam ki duri par hee tha....lekin agar mai apni ungli bhi bahar nikaalta to wo use bhi bhun daalte.....lekin mujhe uski fikar thi.....isliye uske pass to jana hee tha......
or maine ak bar phir se himmat jutaai or bhaagne ke liye position le liya....lekin mujhe ye nahi pata tha ki ye daud meri life ki aakhri daud hogi....
Mai wanha se puri jaan laga kar Bhaga...lekin jaise hee main bahar nikla wo phir se firing karne lage or isi mai mujhe 2 goliya lagi ak mere haath mai jis se maine rifle pakda hui thi.....or dusri mere pair mai.....
Haath me lagi goli to koi khas asar nahi dikha payi.....bas meri rifle mere haath se chhut kar wanhi gir gayi thi... lekin pair mai goli meri jaangh(thigh) par lagi thi jis se bhaagte use mai uchal kar ramlal ke room ke gate ke andar jaakar gira.....or uth kar uske bed tak gaya......
Bad par ramlal ki laash padi thi....mere jism ke jakhm mujhe utni takleef nahi de rahe the...jitni ab ramlal ki laash dekh kar hui thi....or aaj bahut samay baad mere ankhon mai aansu aa gaye the....
Kuch pal me ramlal ke saath raha.....or phir khada ho gaya or apni pith se apni dusri raifal nikal li......
Or dhire dhire aage badh gaya......
Iss waqt meri aankhe gusse se bilkul laal ho gayi thi......unme se angaare dahak rahe the.....
or mai pure gusse mai jaakar un par firing kar di......or tab tak kar ta raha jab tak ki wanha maujood sabhi commandos maut ki neend nahi so gaye......YA ghaayal ho kar niche nahi gir gaye......
Raifal ko fek kar maine apni dono hand guns nikaali jo ki maine room se niklte waqt li thi....or badh chala un commandos ki taraf......
Un mai se 2 abhi zinda the maine wanha pahucha kar unki taraf dekha or apni dono guns mai jitni bhi goliya thi saari un dono ke jism me utar di......or apni guns wanhi fek di.....
Aaj bahut samay baad mera Mann kar raha tha rone ka......or wo isliye nahi ki mai jakhmi tha......balki isliye ki Inn kutto ne ramlal ko Mar diya tha......
Ramlal mere saath pichle 1 saal se tha.....wo mere khane pine ka khaas khayaal rakhta tha.....raw chhodne ke bad shaayad aisa pahli bar tha ki mai kisi ke saath raha hu......kanhi na kanhi uski maut ka jimmedar mai khud tha....or ye soch kar meri aankho mai dubara paani aa gaya.....tabhi mere kaano mai ak aawaz Padi or use sunte hee meri bhohe tan gayi or gusse mai meri mutthiya phir se bhich gayi......
KESA HAI MERE BHAAI...??
ye aawaz us aadmi ki thi jis se mai duniya me sabse jyada nafrat karta tha.....RAJ
YA rajesh mera raw ka saathi.....or mera sabse bada dushman....
Uski aawaz sun kar mai uski taraf mud gaya.....meri aankhe wapas gusse se jalne lagi thi......
MAAN GAYA TUJHE ......JAKHMI HONE PAR BHI MERE 15 COMMANDOS MAAR DIYE TUNE.....LEKIN KOI NA.....TU FIKAR NA KAR TUJHE NIPTAANE KE LIYE MAI HEE.........
abhi wo aage bolta us se pahle hee bhaag kar mai us par tut pada or puri jaan laga kar uske chahre par punches ki barsat kar di......or use maarta gaya....maarta gaya....ye shaayad gussa tha....mera mere khud ke upar.....ramlal ko na bacha paane ka....jo ab us par nikal raha tha.....
Lekin mai jakhmi tha.......wo nahi.....upar se wo thahra 7 feet ka or ak tagde wwe pahalwan ki tarah physic wala.....usne mujhe utha kar dur fek diya....lekin maine bhi haar nahi maani...or us par phir se punches ki barsata kar di.....lekin tabhi usme apni puri taakat se mujhe ak punch wanha mara janha mujhe rod ghusi thi......
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
mere muh se ak jordar chikh nikli.....uska punch itna powerful tha ki uske maarte hee mai jameen se 2 3 inch upar uth gaya tha....or phir usne mujhe par punch maarna shuru kiya ....jo ki jyadatar mere chahre ke damaged hisse par hee lag rahe the or samay ke saath meri haalat or bigadti jaa rahi thi....lekin maine bhi pura protest kiya....puri taakat se kick mar kar use apne se dur kiya or pas hee rakha pital ka flower Base utha liya or use pure zor se uske sar mai mara....ab ki bar chikhne ki ki baari uski thi....
Or uski bhi ak bhayanak chikh bangle mai gunj gayi....lekin mai itne mai hee nahi ruka....or us gamle se lagatar war uske sar par karta raha.. jis se uske sar se bhi.....khoon ki ak moti dhar bah kar zameen par girne lagi.....or Wo apna sar pakad kar niche baith gaya .....
Phir maine use Base ko dur fek a or usko uthaane gaya or yanhi galati ho gayi....usne pata nahi kanha se ak khanjar nikala...or mai kuch soch samajh pata us se pahle hee....mere pet mai lagatar kai saare war kar diye.....or us se meri aankhe bahar aane ko ho gayi or mai bad hawaas sa wanhi par baith gaya....
(Now from 3rd person)
Wanhi dusri tarah
Ramlal's room
Wanha vikram or Rajesh ki fight chal rahi thi...or yanha ramlal ki laash bed par Padi thi.....ki achanak....
RAMLAL NE APNI AANKHE KHOLI OR TURANT BED SE UTH GAYA......OR APNE BED KE NICHE SE SK BAKSA NIKAL KAR USME SE KUCH SAMAN NIKALA....
YE KISI GUN KE PARTS THE JO KI ASSEMBLED NAHI THE .....WO UNHE ASSEMBLED KARNE LAGA....KUCH HEE PAL MAI USNE UNHE PURI TARAH JOD LIYA...OR LAST MAI BAAKI RAH GAYI THI US GUN MAI MAGAZINE LAGANA...JISE WO AK BAR DHYAAN SE DEKH KAR LAGA DETA HAI......
Ye 50 CALIBRE KI goliya thi....
Or wo gun thi....
BEOWOLF 6.8 FULLY AUTOMATIC
gun mai magazine lode kar wo use uthata hai....
abhi wo kuch iss tarah lag raha tha....
Gun lekar wo bahar ki taraf chala jata hai.....bahar wo dekhta hai ki.....
Vikram deewar ki tak lagakar baitha hua tha or wo kaafi jakhmi tha...rajesh ne chaakuo ke war kar kar ke vikram ke jism ko bilkul bekar kar diya tha..or usne use utha kar deewar se laga diya tha...taaki use uski aankho me dekhta hua Mar sake...or abhi wo uske saamne khada tha...rajesh.....jiske haath mai abhi ak raifal thi jo ki usne kisi commando ki utha li thi....
Rajesh vikram ke sar par gun rakhta hai ....tab vikram ko lagta hai ki uska aakhri waqt aa gaya hai or apni aankhe bnd kar leta hai....or rajesh trigger daba deta hai......
Thhaaaayeeee
AK bahut tez aawaz aati hai...jo pure bangle gunj jaati hai....ye goli ki aawaz thi.....jo ki rajesh ki nahi ramlal ki gun se chali thi or rajesh ke sar ko kholte hue uska bheja lekar deewar mai ghus gayee thi....or agle hee pal lovesh.....bezan hokar niche gir jata hai.....
Goli chalne par bhi jab kuch nahi hota to vikram apni aankhe kholta hai...to use rajesh ka khula hua sar uske saamne pada hua dikhta hai .....jise dekh kar use shock lagta hai...lekin us se bhi jyada shock use tab lagta hai .....jab wo rajesh ko maarne waale ko dekhta hai...or uski aankhe shock ke maare khuli ki khuli rah jaati hai.....kyoki uske saamne ramlal ak bhari see rifle le kar khada tha...
Vikram ko apni aankho par vishwas nahi ho raha tha.....lejin Jo sach tha...wo saamne tha....lekin us se bhi badi baat ab ye thi.....ki ramlal agar zinda tha to wo itni der tak kyo wanha pada raha...... kisi laash ki tarah.....or ab bahar kyo aaya hai......
Tabhi vikram.....
Vikram- ramlal tum zinda ho to.....
uski baat ko bich me hee kaat kar.....
Ramlal- ha malik me zinda tha......lekin mai pahle bahar nahi aaya......kyoki mai isi pal ka intezar raha tha....
vikram kuch na samajhte hue...
Matlab.....???...
Ramlal- matlab ye maalik kiiiii.....
or achanak uski aawaz badal jaati hai kisi 24 25 saal ke ladke ki tarah .......or wo apni asli aawaz mai.....
▪▪JAB MERE PASS ORIGINAL CHIJ HAI TO MAI DUPLICATE KO KYO KAAM MAI LU.....▪▪
▪▪JAB ORIGINAL VIKRAM AA GAYA HAI TO......DUPLICATE KA KYA KAAM.....▪▪
or wo ye bol kar turant ak goli us nikli vikram ke sar me maar deta hai....
Goli sidha uske sar mai lagti hai or uska chapter wanhi khatm ho jata hai......
Phir ramlal apni jeb se phon nikaalta hai....or kisi ko phon karta hai.....
Ramlal- ha ab mai aa gaya hu na....to use bhi hata do....
Saamne se-...........................
Ramlal- (tez aawaz mai) jaisa kaha hai waise karo.....khatm karo use or yanha aa jaao.....
Or wo phone kat deta hai....
Phir wo apni jeb se kuch rdx or c4 explosive nikaalta or pure bangle mai fit kar deta hai or garage se ak gaadi nikal kar rat k andhere mai kanhi gum ho jata hai.....
Uske thodi dur jaate hee ak bada dhamka hota hai or wo ghar malbe mai tabdeel ho jata hai.....
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Very nice and fantastic update
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utna hai nehi
jelebi ka patch hai
story jitni sidha lag raha hai
utna hai nehi
jelebi ka patch hai
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