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Read both of the last two updates in a go... Really nice they are.... I feel and feel it quite strongly that story is still building up....
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Update - 28

JAIL BREAK - 3
Mast update bhai

JURISDICTION


Deewar ko todna shuru ho chuka tha......is samay wanha maujood sabhi kaidi isi kaam me lage the......halanki us deewar ki motaai 18 inch thi....lekin 50 aadmiyon ke zor ke aage 18 inch koi jyada badi baat nahi hoti.....or jab ki wo aadmi ak se badkar ak muzrim ho....or deewar bhi kuch kamzor ho gayi ho......



Kuch samay laga lekin jaldi hee us deewar ko dhaha diya gaya or alarm to pahle hee bnd kar diya gaya tha....to us par lage taaro ko bhi hata diya gaya.......


Yeh kaam kar wo log aage badh gaye......or dalaan se hote hue last point par pahucha gaye ......lekin yanha ak baat hui.....billa or uske sabhi kareebi saathiyo ko aage jaane dekar kareem ne baaki logo ko ishara kar ke wanhi rok liya......or kuch logo ko wanha chhod kar or kuch ko apne saath lekar wapas jail me aa gaya........



Idhar Billa or uske saathi jo ki kareeb 10 12 the.......bina piche dhyaan diya......tezi se bhaagte hue aage nikal gaye.....or dekhte hee dekhte last point par pahuch gaye......


Saamne hee jail ka teesra hissa tha jiska ki abhi kaam chal raha tha...or uske aakhri kone par deewar ki jagah taaro se baade bandi ki hui thi......
Lekin janha us jagah pahucha kar sabko khushi or Josh aa jana chahiye tha......wanhi sabhi ko gussa or shock laga tha......

Lekin us se bhi jyada shock unhe tab laga jab unme se kuch log wapas jaane ke liye piche palte......or piche kisi ko nahi paaya......or jab tak wo log or Billa kuch samajh pate bahut der ho chuki thi......



Pakiya or uske saathiyo ne......ajji or uske saath waale kaidiyo ko bhi hathiyaaro se less kar diya tha......ab sabhi logo ke pass 2 2 ak 56 raifal thi.....or kuch ne apne saath kuch hand graned bhi le liye the.....


Wo sabhi log wanha se nikal kar sidha rasoi ke paas aa gaye janha kareeb 15 se 20 police waale the....lekin unme se bas ak 2 ke paas hee hathiyaar the.....kyoki abhi khaane ka time tha to jyadatar log apne apne hathiyaar gourds waale room me hee chhod kar aa gaye the.....ab unhe kya pata tha ki anzaane me hee unse bahut badi galati ho gayi he.....

Un logo ne aakar Chaaro taraf se unhe ghera liya.....or sabhi ko surrender karne ko bola......lekin shaayad un mai se kuch sipaahiyo ka zameer abhi zinda tha or unme kuch desh bhakti ki bhaawna baaki thi....to unhone resist karne ki koshish ki.....

Lekin zameer sirf unka zinda tha.......saamne hathiyaar lekar khade kaidiyo ka nahi.....unhone kuch hee der me sabhi ko galiyo se uda diya.....unke aisa karte hee jin logo ke man mai abhi bhi resistance ki bhaawna ne janm liya tha....unki bhi himmat jawaab de gayi or sabhi sipaahi apne ghutno ke bal baitha gaye......
or kaidi baaki logo ke saath shaamil ho gaye.....or hathiyaar utha liye.......



DUSRI TARAF PAKYA ke dwara main gate ke paas chhode hue 2 bando ne kisi tarah gate khulwa kar wanha Par maujood sipaahiyo ko thikaane laga diya tha....or unki uniform pahan kar unki jagah khade ho gaye the.....



AB TAK JAIL PURI TARAH SE KAABU MAI AA CHUKA THA....AB AGAR KOI PARESHAANI BHI HOTI TO BHI USE BANDUKO KE BAL PAR THIK KIYA JAA SAKTA THA....




Idhar vikram jailor ke room mai jata he.....jailor ka room kisi normal sarkaari afsaro ke room ki tarah hee tha....saamne ki taraf table uske piche jailor ki seat Or uske saamne 2 seat .......aane jaane waale logo ke baithne ke liye.....

Vikram ne us pure kamre ko dhyaan se dekha....wanha corner me ak Almaari rakhi hui thi jis par ki lock laga hua tha....vikram ne Yusuf se kahkar almira ka tala tudwa diya.....


Almaari me koi khaas chij nahi thi....bas kuch papers......files rakhi hui thi ak taraf jailor ki uniform TANGI hui thi jo ki ak long khaakhi coat tha jis par ki kaafi models or sitaare lage hue the.....or saath me ak revolver bhi rakhi hui thi......vikram ne wo revolver uthakar apni kamar me laga li.....TAB HI achanak uska dhyaan Almaari ke right hand k gate ke andar lage kaanch (mirror) ki taraf gaya.....



Usne gate ko pura khola or dhyaan se Usme dekhne laga.......apne chahre ko aaine me dekhne par uski utsukta badh gayi or usne apna kurta (jail me kaidiyo ke dwara lining wala karta or wesi hee half pant pahni jaati he) utaar diya or khud ko dhyaan se mirror me dekhne laga.....


Ise dekhne se uski utsukta badh gayi.....or phir wo apne pure shareer ko haath laga laga kar check karta hai.....






Phir wo mirror se kuch door jaakar apne aapko pura us aaine me dekhta hai....uski psych same aisi hee thi.....





Ya Yu kahe ki uske saath jail me jo kuch bhi hua usne vikram ki haalat aisi bana di thi.....
Phir usne apne sine ko upar karke hila kar dekha......jis par ki use bas pasliyo hee dikhaai de rahi thi....maans ka to naamo nishaan hee nahi tha uske shareer par.....





Ak hatte katte 6 feet ke aadmi ko iss dasha me laane ka pura shrey......ak hee aadmi ko jata hai....or wo hai.....


JAILOR


Vikram ne apne kurte ko wanhi phek kar sirf coat pahan leta hai.....lekin use bas nahi karta......saamne se uska pura nanga shareer saaf dikhaai de raha hota hai....



kuch samay baad hee main gate ke bahar kisi gaadi ke rukne ki aawaz aayi....or use rukte hee jailor turant utar kar jail me Bhaga.....use aate dekh kar .....bahar khade sipaahiyo ne jo ki asal me kaidi the ne fatafat gate khol diya.....or wo bhaagte hua andar gaya ......andar jagah jagah kaidiyo or jail karam chaariyo ki laashe padi hui thi......or har taraf khun hee khun faila hua tha......ye sab dekh kar wo aag babula ho gaya or bhaag kar apne cabin me gaya....lekin wanha pahucha kar jo usne dekha.....use dekhte hee use beintehaan gussa aane laga kyoki usne dekha ki saamne uski seat par koi uski hee uniform pahan kar haath me gun liye baitha hai....or usne apna haath apni jeb me rakhi revolver nikaalne ke liye badhaya.....

Lekin wo aisa kuch kar pata us se pahle hee.......
Thaayeeee........
Thaayeeee.....
Karke 2 goliya uske dono ghutno me jaa lagi or wo gala phaad kar chillata hua niche gir gaya.....khoon uske dono ghutno se paani ki tarah bahne laga.....or charo taraf uski chikho ki aawaze gunjne lag gayi....



Goli chalane Wale haath vikram ke the......jo ki abhi jailor ki kursi par baitha hua tha......
Vikram uth kar uske pass gaya or usne puri taakat se ak laat jailor ke chahre par maari....or phir ak or maari .....or phir ak or or aise karke maarta chala gaya.....wanha bas jailor ke chillane ki aawaze sunaai aa rahi thi....uske chahre ko puri tarah bigaadne ke baad hee vikram ruka....


Or jab vikram hata to jailor ka pura chahra khun se lathpath ho gaya tha....jagah jagah se kat fat gaya tha....aisa ki agar koi normal insaan use dekh le to ulti kar de....



Jailor niche gira karaah raha tha.....vikram niche uske paas hee baith gaya or uske bigda hue chahre ko hila ta hua bola......


JAILOR TUNE MUJHE BAHUT BAAR NARAK DIKHAYA HE NA.....YANHA.....
AAJ ME TUJHE DIKHAAUNGA....
TERI HEE JAIL ME
TERE HEE AANKHO KE SAAMNE



HAIL IN THE JAIL



Vikram ke ye baat sunkar darr ke maare jailor ki haalat or jyada buri ho gayi thi.....
Phir vikram ne Chaaro or dekh use paas hee ak rassi padi mil gayi......iss rassi ko vikram achchi tarah pahchan ta tha.....usne rassi uthai or use apne chahre par ragad kar mehsus karne laga.....


Ye wahi rassiyo hai jailor jise tune kitni hee bar mujh par use kiya he......aaj me bhi dekhta hu ise kaam me lena par kaisa lagta hai......or wo use rassi se jailor ka ak pair kaskar baandh deta hai.....or rassiyo of apne kandhe par lekar jailor ko ghasit ta hua rasoi ke saamne waale maidaane me le jata he.....



DUSRI TARAF Billa or uske saathi un taaro ke pas pahuch gaye the....unhe bataya gaya tha ki use jagah par unhe 8 10 sipaahi milenge....banduko se less.....lekin jo unhe bataya gaya tha.....wanha aisa kuch nahi tha.....wanha taaro ke dusri taraf jungle k ilaake me 15 se 20 hathiyaar bnd aadmi khade the......dekhne se hee sab professional gunde lag rahe the.....or un sabhi ke haatho me machine guns thi......

Phir jab saamne khade gundo ne Billa or uske saathiyo ko dekhte hee andhadhun goliya chalana shuru kar diya.......

Ab tak Billa bhi samajh chuka tha ki use fasaya gaya he or jab usne apne piche sirf uske hee aadmiyon ko khada paya to use iss baat ka Yakeen ho gaya......

Dekhte dekhte kuch hee pakad mai Billa ke lagbhag saare sathi khun se lathpath hokar jameen par pade the.....
Iss situation me Billa ko ye bhi yaad nahi raha ki uske paas bhi gun he .....or jab use yaad aaya to usne apni gun ka Istemaal kiya or kuch logo ko maar giraya....or apni furti or chalaki ka Istemaal karta hua wapas jail me bhaag niklne me kisi tarah kamyab ho gaya.....lekin in sab ne uski bhi haalat buri ho gayi thi or saath hee use 3 goliya bhi lag chuki thi......jisne ki khun bah raha tha.....kisi tarah wo langdata hua us deewar tak pahucha jise un sab ne mil kar giraya tha.....

Wo jaise hee wanha pahucha ki achanak se 2 2 Banduke aakar uske sar par tan gayee.....ye kareem or baaki ke kaidi the......jo ki andar jaakar apne or apne saathiyo ke liye Banduke le kar wanha wapas aa gaye the....kyoki unhe pata tha ki Billa wapas jarur aayega.....or wo yanhaa rahkar usi ka intezar kar rahe the.......

Billa ko pakad kar use bhi wo log usi maidaane me le gaye janha jailor ko laya gaya tha.....



AB YE JAIL PURI TARAH SE VIKRAM KE CONTROL ME THA.....OR USKE YANHA PAR MAUJOOD SAARE DUSHMAN BHI.......
USNE KAHA BHI THA KI AAJ WO JAILOR KO DIKHAAYEGA....

HAIL IN THE JAIL



ORIGIN OF DEVIL
 
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(Somewere in Arizona-vikram view)

Jab meri dobara aankh khuli.....to maine apne aap Ko kisi aur hee jagah par paya.....

Ye jagah pahli waali jagah se bilkul ulati thi.....pahle janha mujhe ak badi see fish supermarket jaisi jagah par rakha gaya tha.....wanhi ab ye koi bas ak chhota saa kamra tha.....jo ki lagbhag....12×12 ke kareeb hoga.....


Aankhe khulte hee sabse pahle maine apne jism ka jaayeza liya.....kyoki mujhe abhi bhi kaafi dard ho raha tha....lekin rahat ki baat ye thi.....ki abhi mere jism par kanhi bhi kuch bhi nahi tha......or abhi bhi mai pahle jaisi hee ak kursi par baitha hua tha.....



Or Mere shareer par abhi agar.....Kuch the....to wo the.... bas un machliyo ke kaatne or apne kaanto se chubhaaye jaane ke nishaan.... jo ki puri body par jagah jagah lage hue the.....



Jin me ki rah rah kar dard ki Tees uth rahi thi.....ak line me kaha jaaye to....itne to mere sar par baal bhi nahi honge jitne ki abhi meri body par nishaan ban gaye the....


Waise mujhe unka ye tarika personally bahut pasand aaya tha.....kyoki normally to log kisi se kuch ugalwaane ke liye use se mar pit.....karte hai....lekin yanha to in saalo ne mujhe haath bhi nahi lagaya tha....or meri haalat itni buri kar di thi.....jitni ki mar pit se bhi nahi kar sakte the.....


Mera Pura jism laal hua pada tha...bas chahre ko chhod kar....

Or inki ye harkato dekh kar me achchi tarah samajh gaya tha....ki jis kaam ke liye me yanha aaya hu.....agar me use karne ke liye inhe convince nahi kar paya.....to ye meri haalat itni buri kar denge jitni ki me soch bhi nahi sakta......or ye aisa karne me jaa bhi nahi hich kichaayenge....


Lekin abhi tak meri insert koi baat nahi hui thi.....mujhe bas intezar tha unke saamne se pahl karne ka......jiske liye ki mujhe jyada wait nahi karna pada....


Mai abhi Inn sab ke baare mai soch hee raha tha ki...tabhi room ka gate khula.....or4 log andar aaye.....jinme se 3 ne to ak jaise kapde pahne hue the...jeans t and jacket.....jinhe dekh kar samjhne mushqil nahi tha ki ye tino chhote mote gunde hai....or unke saath ak jo aaya tha....wo soot boot me tha.....


Tezi se chalte hue wo mere pass aaye...or iss bar unke saath...wo nigro bhi tha.....mere pas aate hee wo soot boot wale ne mujhse sawaal karna shuru kiya.....

Wahi saare ghusa pite sawaal......KON HO TUM..??...KYA HO TUM..??...YANHA KYO AAYE HO TUM..??...waigara waigara.....

Lekin maine uski baato ka koi jawaab nahi diya.....kyo....iska jawaab aapko abhi kuch hee der mai milaya jaayega....

Jab maine use koi jawaab diya...to usne phir se wahi ghatiya dialogue shuru kiye....TU MUJHE JAANTA NAHI......TU YANHAA AA TO GAYA HAI LEKIN.....ZINDA WAPAS NAHI JAAYEGA......LAWDA LASSAN ....


Lekin iss bhi maine koi jawaab nahi diya.....jis se use gussa aa gaya....or usne us nigro ko kuch ishara kiya.....jis se ki wo nigro bhaagta hua.....pure gusse mai aage badha....or mere kareeb aakar.....pure jor se ak punch mere pet me de diya.....


Jaane saale ka haath tha ki hathoda.....itna dard hua jaise uska haath....pet cheer kar pet ke aar par ho gaya ho.....uski taakat ka andaza isi baat se lagaya ja sakta tha....ki uske sirf 1 punch se hee me kursi sahit.....ghist ta hua kamre ki deewar se ja laga jo ki mere 4 feet piche thi....or mera sir deewar se laga......


Dard to bahut tha...or deewar se lagne ke kaaran....sir bhi ghum raha tha.....lekin kisi tarah maine apne aap Ko control kiya....chillane se.....


Jab maine tab ne bhi koi aawaz nahi ki to.....
Wo shaks- abe gunga hai kya...??...

Tab maine pahli bar apni jabaan kholi...

Mai-mai tumhare saare sawaalo ka jawab dunga....lekin mujhe us se pahle.....Tumahare boss se Milna hai.....
Wo shaks- mai hee yanhaa ka boss hu....bol kya kaam hai..?..

Mai- lagta hai meri baat tum logo ki samajh mai nahi aayi....mujhe tum sab ke boss se Milna hai......
To wo thode gusse mai...
Wo shaks- maine kaha na me hee yanha ka boss hu....

Mai- choduo mujhe apni tarah samjha hai.....boss agar ak ak se puch tach karne khud aane laga.....to phir use....
TUM JAISE BOSDIKO KI KYA JARURAT THI...???..


Lekin kutte ki dum Tedhi ki tedhi....mere samjha ne par bhi nahi maane....or us soot waale ne ak bar phir se nigro ko bhej diya.....lekin ab bahut ho chuka tha....mai chahta tha sab kuch normally ho jaye....lekin ye duniya sharaafat se jeene hee nahi deti.....


Uski baat sunkar wo nigro meri taraf aane laga.....or jaise hee usne apna pahla kadam uthaya waise hee maine soch liya tha ki mujhe aage kya karna hai.....

Iss waqt mai ak lakdi ke chair par baitha tha.....jo ki jyada mazboot nahi tha.....or mere liye ....ak achchi baat....ye bhi rahi.... ki mere pair.....khule hue the jabki haath .....kursi ke hattho se .....bandhe the.....



To mai turant khada hua or piche ki taraf kood gaya.....apni peeth ke bal.....mere aisa karte hee.....mere wazan se kursi toot gayi....or mai fauran khada ho gaya......ab mere haath bhi khule the...bas unse kursi ke dono hatthe bandhe hue the.....lekin alag hokar....

Or jaise hee wo nigro mere kareeb aaya....maine apne haath me us hatthe ko pakda.....jobki tut chuka tha or tutne se uske kinaare par 2 kile bahar nikal gayi thi jo..... jo ki kareeb 2.....2 inch lambi thi......us par meri nazar gayi


Mere kareeb aate hee usne.......apna right hand..... punch ke roop me..... meri taraf kiya....lekin uska punch mere face tak pahuchata us se pahle hee maine.....apne haath me pakde us hatthe ka ak war....apni jagah se uchal kar.....apni puri taakat se....uske left temple par kiya.....




Jis se ki us hatthe me lagi....dono kile.....uske sir ko cheerti hue uske temple me ghus gayee......or wo dard se buri tarah cheekh ta hua.......niche let gaya.....

Mera war itna tez tha ki kisi ko kuch samajh nahi aaya...or palat jhapkte hee wo nigro niche let gaya......or kursi ka hattha 2 hisso me bat gaya...aadha mere haath me rah gaya .....or wo keel waala hissa uske sir me hee ghusa rah gaya.....

Me jaanta tha ki ye us nigro ko rokne ke liye kaafi nahi hai....isliye maine use mauka na dete hue....bhaag kar pure or se.......us hatthe par kood gaya.....jo ki uske sar me gada hua tha.....

Mere aisa karte hee iska sar kisi kharbuze ki tarah fat gaya....use to cheekhne ka mauka bhi nahi mil paya.....uske khoon udta hua mere face tak aa gaya....lekin mai bas itne me hee nahi ruka.....me lagatar 8 se 10 bar uske sar par jump karta raha....jis se mere pure pair uske khoon se sann gaye....


Or mera pura muh uske khoon se bheeg gaya.....
meri iss harkat ...or masumiyat ko dekh kar ....saamne khade wo log...... jo mujhe maarne ke liye ......aage badh rahe the ......unke pair wanhi jam gaye......

Abhi mera muh us nigro ki taraf hee tha...lekin jaise hee mai paltaa....unki aankhe dar or hairaani ki wajah se chaudi ho gayi......


Hairaani iss baat ki.....ki kaise ak patle..,,..kamzor se dikhne waale aadmi ne....unke itne taakatwar hathiyaar ko 2 hee moves me khatm kar diya.....

Darr mere us nigro ke maarne ke tarika ka.....or use maarne ke baad ke mere reaction ka.....

Kyoki jaise hee uska kaam karke mai paltaa......mere chahre par ......thik waisi hee smile thi.....jaise jailor or billa ko maarne ke waqt thi......








 
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Read both of the last two updates in a go... Really nice they are.... I feel and feel it quite strongly that story is still building up....
Please carry on....
Thanks bhai....aapne sahi kaha....story abhi height par jaa rahi hai...aage bade gi jab vikram wapas India lautega.....jo ki abhi hone hee wala hai....till then..... keep supporting....stay tuned...
Thanks bhai

Thanks bhai
Awesome story with full of suspense. Waiting for next
Thanks bhai....
Update kar diya hai....or sham tak ak or dene ki koshish hai....
Mujhe bhaut confusion ho raha rai
mujhe bhi ho raha hai bhai.....
Anyways thanks
 
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