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Bahar ka nazara abhi bhi kaafi shaandar tha.....lekin jaisa ki maine pahle bhi kaha tha.....mujhe is se koi matlab hee nahi tha......mujhe bas meri manzil chahiye thi.....kisi bhi KEEMAT par.....
Or ab wo chij.....Jiske liye ki me ARIZONA aaya tha.....me us se bas 1 kadam ke duri par hee tha.....
Abhi hamaari van....Arizona ke desert waale hisse ki taraf tezi se wapas jaa rahi thi....
Or mai van mai baitha abhi abhi kuch der pahle jo hua uske baare mai soch raha tha.....
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Bahar ka nazara abhi bhi kaafi shaandar tha.....lekin jaisa ki maine pahle bhi kaha tha.....mujhe is se koi matlab hee nahi tha......mujhe bas meri manzil chahiye thi.....kisi bhi KEEMAT par.....
Or ab wo chij.....Jiske liye ki me ARIZONA aaya tha.....me us se bas 1 kadam ke duri par hee tha.....
Abhi hamaari van....Arizona ke desert waale hisse ki taraf tezi se wapas jaa rahi thi....
Or mai van mai baitha abhi abhi kuch der pahle jo hua uske baare mai soch raha tha.....
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KAISE HO DOSTOOO..??.....
YE aawaz thi vikram ki jo ki abhi bhi un logo ki taraf dekh kar muskura raha tha.....
or phir usne us nigro ke sar me se.....jo ki pichk kar bilkul paapad ki tarah ho gaya tha....dhire se us aadhe hatthe ko nikala....jiske saath hee uski khopadi ka ak chhota sa hissa bhi.....un keelo mea tak kar .....us hatthe ke saath hee....uske haath me aa gaya.......
Jisme se ki khoon abhi bhi niche tapak raha tha......or us tukde ke saath hee....khun se sana hua....uska bheja bhi....dikh raha tha.... ye sab dekh kar....saamne khade charo ne apne haath apni aankho par rakh liye the......or apna chahra dusri taraf ghuma liya.....
Ab ye kahna galat nahi hoga....ki Vikram ke andar wo jallad ak bar phir se wapas aa chuka tha.....jiski jhalak ham ak bar pahle bhi jail me dekh chuke hai......
Usne us haath ko ....jisme ki wo hattha pakda hua tha.....use apne sar ke upar kar liya........or aisa karte hee....us tukde se girkar khoon ki dhaar.....sidha vikram ke sar se hoti hui.....uske pure shareer par fel rahi thi.....
Phir usne apna sar upar kiya.....or us tukde ko azib see nazro se dekhne laga....jaane kya soch raha tha wo........us tukde se niklta khun uske chahre par girne laga .......or kuch kuch.....uske naak par se hote hue .....muh khul hone ke kaaran......uske muh me bhi jaane laga......
Jise wo bina kisi hich kichahat ke......apne gale ke niche utar raha tha......
Ye drishya dekh kar samne khade logo ke haath paanv kaampne lage....or unhe ghhinn aane lagi....
Lekin tabhi us SHAITAAN ki nazar un sab par chali gayi....or bina ak pal gawaaye....wo unke pas dauda......or unke pas pahuchte hee....us hatthe ke keelo waale sire se ak war.....us soot waale ke gale par kiya....jis se ki wo kile uske gale me 1 inch tak andar chali gayi....or soot waale ki 1 dardnaak cheekh us kamre me gunj gayi.....
Tabhi kamre ke bahar se bhi....bahut saari goliya chalne ki aawaz aayi....jise sunkar vikram samjha gaya...ki uske log aa chuke hai...jinhe ki usne khud hee....hee bulaya tha....
Apne right hand ki middle finger me paani ring.....ka ak button daba kar.....us nigro ke room me aate hee.....
Jis se wo log or jyada hadbada gaye....or koi kuch samajh pata ya kuch kar pata is se pahle hee usne us hatthe ko.....opposite side me .....pure zor lagakar khich diya......jis se ki wo Keele uske pure gale ko faadte hue uski gale ki saari naso ko cheerti hui apne saath bahar le aayi.....or aise hote hee.....soot wala wanhi khatm hi gaya....
Ab us kamre mai bache the.....bas 4 log...... jinme se ak tha wo SHAITAAN.....or baaki 3 jo us soot waale ke saath aaye the......
Lekin ab tak wo tino sambhal chuke the......halanki apne saathiyo ki itni dardnaak maut se...unke dimaag hila chuke the....lekin unhe apne bachaav me bhi to kuch karna tha....to bina ak pal bhi gawaaye....
Unme se ak vikram par kood gaya or use maarne laga or uske aisa karte hee baaki ke dono ne bhi aisa hee kiya.....or tino mil kar Vikram ko buri tarah maarne lage......
Halanki unke pass hathiyaar bhi the .....lekin unhe sakht hidaayat thi ki vikram ko zinda rakhna hai....isliye koi bhi apni guns ka Istemaal nahi kar raha tha.....
ya phir ye kahna thik hoga ki Vikram ke DEVIL avatar ko dekh kar wo apni guns ke baare mai bhool hee gaye the.....jo ki unhone aate hee side waali table par rakh di thi.....us soot waale ke karhe par.....
Vikram ki haalat ab tak kaafi buri ho chuki thi....or wo kar bhi kya sakta tha.....ow akela tha or wo 3.....
Lekin tabhi unme se ak ko un guns ka khayaal aata hai....or vikram ko chhod..... guns ki taraf badhta hai.....or yanhi us se galati ho gayi.....
Jaise hee wo hathiyaar uthaane ke liye aage badha..vikram to itni der se isi mauke ki talaash me tha......uske jaate hee usne dusre waale ko ak zordar laat dekar dur gira diya.....or pahle waala.....jo ki use punch Marr raha tha....uska 1 haath pakad liya or apni puri taakat lagakar....use palat kar uske upar aa gaya...or uske gale par toot lada.......or pure zor se uske gale par apne daat gada diye....
Jis se wo cheekhne laga.....tabhi dusra waa apne saathi ko bachaane ke liye aage aaya or vikram ko uske upar se dhakka dekar dur kiya....
Lekin jaise hee uski nazar us pahle waale shaks par Padi iski aankhe bahar aane ko ho gayi.....kyoki uske pahle waale ke gale ka maans bilkul gayab tha......or uski jabaan or aankhe bahar ko nikli hui thi.....or uske gale se lagatar khoon bah raha tha....
Udhar Vikram apne muh me pahle waale kar maan s ka tukde ko dabaaye piche palta......or usne wo apne haath me pakad kar side me phek diya.....
Tab tak wo teesra aadmi gun load kar chuka tha....or gun load karte hee usne turant fire kar diya.....
Thaaayyyee......
Ki aawaz y
Hui.....or uski banduk se ak goli nikal kar sidha vikram ko jaa lagi........or goli lagte hee....vikram ladkhada kar niche gir gaya......lekin ak mistake ho gayi.....
Usne fire karne me bahut hee jyada jaldbaazi kar di....or aanan fanan me goli apni sahi jagah nahi lagi.....wo maarna to dil par chahta tha...lekin jaldi ke kaaran nishana chook gaya or goli dil se 3 inch door pasliyo me lagi....
Ye dekhne ke liye ki wo mar gaya hai ya nahi ......wo dono dabe paanv.... gun taane hue uske kareeb gaye.....
Or unse yanhi galati ho gayi......jaise hee wo vikram ke pass pahuche....vikram achanak se khada hua or un dono ki gun ki naliya pakad kar.....un par pura jor lagata hua un dono ko deewar se laga diya....ak ke dono peroxide ke bich ak jordar kick di....jis se wo gala phaad kar cheekhta hua apne ande pakad kar niche baithne laga....tabhi vikram ne use dhakka dekar dur kar diya or dusre waale par toot pada......
Lekin ak to vikram kamzor or upar se goli ka sheekar......dhire dhire vikram kamzori padbe laga....or wo dusra us par bhaari......
Lekin tabhi vikram ki nazar us dusre bande par gayi jo ki ab tak sambhal gaya tha.....or usne apni gin utha kar Vikram ko nishana ban liya tha.....
To vikram ne bhi dubara zor lagaya.....jis se saamne waale ko lage ki dono barabar hai or wo goli chalaaye....
Or jaise hee saamne waale ne dono ko barabar hote hue dekha....usne apni finger trigger par...rakhi....or goli chalane di......
Philip se ak bar goli ki aawaz hui...lekin iss bar uska sheekar.....vikram nahi wo dusra wala banda hua.....goli lagte hee wo bedam hokar niche girne ko hua....lekin vikram be use pakad kar dhakelte or khud ko cover karte hue......bandook wale aadmi par patak diya....
Hua Yu ki Vikram ki nazar to us goli chalaane waale ki taraf hee thi...or jaise hee wo trigger dabaaye ki hua wali se hee vikram ne apne waale aadmi ko jhatke se palat diya.....
Uska nishana to vikram ka sar tha......lekin vikram ki height us bande se kam thi......isliye goli uske sar me na jaa kar.....uske gale ke aar par ho gayi.......
Jaise hee vikram ne us aadmi ko us gun waale par patka....wo hadbada gaya...or iss MAUKE ka faayda uthaate hue.....uski gun cheen kar usi par taan di or goli chalaane ke liye trigger par apni finger rakh di.....jise dekh kar ....us aadmi ko apni maut apne saamne khadi hui dikhaai diya...or usne....aane waale pal ke baare me soch kar..apni aankhe bnd kar li......
Lekin abhi vikram ke dimaag par wo SHAITAAN sawaar tha.....or wo SHAITAAN kisi ko bhi itni aasani maut nahi deta......
To vikram ne bhi apni ungli trigger se hata li.....
Jab thodi der tak goli na chali to us aadmi ne apni aankhe khol kar saamne dekha......lekin jo usne apne saamne dekha us par use bahut aashchrya hua....
Kyoki vikram ne abhi bhi gun to pakad rakhi thi......lekin ulti......us gun ki naliya vikram ki taraf thi...or handle us aadmi ki taraf.....
Lekin use kuch jyada sochne ka mauka na dete hue vikram ne ak bharpoor war uske sar par kiya....jis se ki wo buri tarah cheekhne laga.....or tadap ne laga.....
War itna ghaayal tha ki uska sar fat gaya tha...princi uski aankho ke aage ndhera Chaa gaya tha...lekin abhi bhi wo thoda thoda hosh me tha....jis se wo kud ko bachaane ke liye idhar Udhar ghisat raha tha....
Lekin jaisa ki pahle bhi kaha hai....ye SHAITAAN kisi ko bhi aasani maut nahi deta ......to ab bhi isne aisa hee kiya....
War par war.....war par war......or na jaane kitno hee war us aadmi ke sar par karta gaya.....karta gay....or uske sar ka puri tarah kachumar nikaal diya......
Wo aadmi to tisre war me hee mar gaya tha....lekin phir bhi wo use maarta gaya.....or tab ruka jab banduk ka wo handle toot kar dur ja gira......ab tak bahar se bhi goliya chalne ki aawaz bnd ho chuki thi....
Or phir kuch der tak ruk kar usne gahri saans li.....
or phir apne dono haath hawa me phaila kar....apna sar upar kiya....or ak jordar dahaad maari.....
GGGHHHHHHHUUUUUURRRRRAAAAAHAHHHHHHHHHHHHH
HHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Thaaayyyee......
Ki aawaz y
Hui.....or uski banduk se ak goli nikal kar sidha vikram ko jaa lagi........or goli lagte hee....vikram ladkhada kar niche gir gaya......lekin ak mistake ho gayi.....
Usne fire karne me bahut hee jyada jaldbaazi kar di....or aanan fanan me goli apni sahi jagah nahi lagi.....wo maarna to dil par chahta tha...lekin jaldi ke kaaran nishana chook gaya or goli dil se 3 inch door pasliyo me lagi....
Ye dekhne ke liye ki wo mar gaya hai ya nahi ......wo dono dabe paanv.... gun taane hue uske kareeb gaye.....
Or unse yanhi galati ho gayi......jaise hee wo vikram ke pass pahuche....vikram achanak se khada hua or un dono ki gun ki naliya pakad kar.....un par pura jor lagata hua un dono ko deewar se laga diya....ak ke dono peroxide ke bich ak jordar kick di....jis se wo gala phaad kar cheekhta hua apne ande pakad kar niche baithne laga....tabhi vikram ne use dhakka dekar dur kar diya or dusre waale par toot pada......
Lekin ak to vikram kamzor or upar se goli ka sheekar......dhire dhire vikram kamzori padbe laga....or wo dusra us par bhaari......
Lekin tabhi vikram ki nazar us dusre bande par gayi jo ki ab tak sambhal gaya tha.....or usne apni gin utha kar Vikram ko nishana ban liya tha.....
To vikram ne bhi dubara zor lagaya.....jis se saamne waale ko lage ki dono barabar hai or wo goli chalaaye....
Or jaise hee saamne waale ne dono ko barabar hote hue dekha....usne apni finger trigger par...rakhi....or goli chalane di......
Philip se ak bar goli ki aawaz hui...lekin iss bar uska sheekar.....vikram nahi wo dusra wala banda hua.....goli lagte hee wo bedam hokar niche girne ko hua....lekin vikram be use pakad kar dhakelte or khud ko cover karte hue......bandook wale aadmi par patak diya....
Hua Yu ki Vikram ki nazar to us goli chalaane waale ki taraf hee thi...or jaise hee wo trigger dabaaye ki hua wali se hee vikram ne apne waale aadmi ko jhatke se palat diya.....
Uska nishana to vikram ka sar tha......lekin vikram ki height us bande se kam thi......isliye goli uske sar me na jaa kar.....uske gale ke aar par ho gayi.......
Jaise hee vikram ne us aadmi ko us gun waale par patka....wo hadbada gaya...or iss MAUKE ka faayda uthaate hue.....uski gun cheen kar usi par taan di or goli chalaane ke liye trigger par apni finger rakh di.....jise dekh kar ....us aadmi ko apni maut apne saamne khadi hui dikhaai diya...or usne....aane waale pal ke baare me soch kar..apni aankhe bnd kar li......
Lekin abhi vikram ke dimaag par wo SHAITAAN sawaar tha.....or wo SHAITAAN kisi ko bhi itni aasani maut nahi deta......
To vikram ne bhi apni ungli trigger se hata li.....
Jab thodi der tak goli na chali to us aadmi ne apni aankhe khol kar saamne dekha......lekin jo usne apne saamne dekha us par use bahut aashchrya hua....
Kyoki vikram ne abhi bhi gun to pakad rakhi thi......lekin ulti......us gun ki naliya vikram ki taraf thi...or handle us aadmi ki taraf.....
Lekin use kuch jyada sochne ka mauka na dete hue vikram ne ak bharpoor war uske sar par kiya....jis se ki wo buri tarah cheekhne laga.....or tadap ne laga.....
War itna ghaayal tha ki uska sar fat gaya tha...princi uski aankho ke aage ndhera Chaa gaya tha...lekin abhi bhi wo thoda thoda hosh me tha....jis se wo kud ko bachaane ke liye idhar Udhar ghisat raha tha....
Lekin jaisa ki pahle bhi kaha hai....ye SHAITAAN kisi ko bhi aasani maut nahi deta ......to ab bhi isne aisa hee kiya....
War par war.....war par war......or na jaane kitno hee war us aadmi ke sar par karta gaya.....karta gay....or uske sar ka puri tarah kachumar nikaal diya......
Wo aadmi to tisre war me hee mar gaya tha....lekin phir bhi wo use maarta gaya.....or tab ruka jab banduk ka wo handle toot kar dur ja gira......ab tak bahar se bhi goliya chalne ki aawaz bnd ho chuki thi....
Or phir kuch der tak ruk kar usne gahri saans li.....
or phir apne dono haath hawa me phaila kar....apna sar upar kiya....or ak jordar dahaad maari.....
GGGHHHHHHHUUUUUURRRRRAAAAAHAHHHHHHHHHHHHH
HHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Or kuch der baad use room ka darwaza khula jo ki bahar se hee khola jaa sakta tha.....or ak ladki haath me rifal liye andar aayi.....
Lekin jaise hee uski nazar vikram par Padi....usne apni apni rifle ko dur fek a or turant apni jeb se ak shotgun nikal kar ak goli vikram par chala di......
Lekin wo goli vikram ke shareer ko touch hote hee.....usme se ak faced rang ka dhuaan nikla or....fikram ke face ke Chaaro taraf fail gaya......
Or us dhuaan ki chapet me aate hee vikram ladkhada kar niche gir gaya...jaise ki uske sharer me bilkul hee jaan na bachi ho....
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Thanks bhai
Sorry bhai..lekin arizona ka safar abhi kuch samay or chalega.....kyoki maine bahut socha...is part ko ak bar me hee khatm karne ki....lekin ye kaafi important hai.....puri story ke taar is ARIZONA waale part se hee jude hai....isliye ise puri detail me hee dena hoga....
Lekin phir bhi koshish karunga....jaldi khatm karne ki....and at last
Thanks for the comment ....
Thanks bhai.....aapke comments padhkar.....haatho me nayi jaan aa jaati hai....likhne ke liye.....
Thank you bhai
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Update post kar diya hai bhai
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Update posted kar diya hai bhai
first of all thanks for your precious comments.....
Now about the story.....ye sab violence nahi hai bhai....violence to tab shuru hoga jab ye arizona wala chapter finish hoga.....
or violence hee story ka main subject hai.....ok bhai....
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RAJIV SHAW
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