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:hinthint2:Hello guys, i starting another story which is some kind of non-human story, and this totally based American culture and American characters, desi character har koi likhta hai i want to write something different, thode din pehle ek web series dekhi mene wahi se idea aaya is story ka, lekin copy nahi hai ye.

Ab kuch baate clear kar du

1. Story jyada lambi nahi hogi maximum 50-55 update ki hogi, update ki size bhi lambi hogi (meri nazar me) . Mujhe jyada lambi story nhi pasand kyuki unme jyada characters hote aur unko maintain kar mujh jaise chotu-motu :shy:writter ke bas ki baat nahi.
2. 1 update to daily aayega hi aayega kabhi free hua to 2 bhi dedu aur update ki timing raat 10 baje ki.
3. Main baat bata du sex wex jyada nahi milega isme haa demand hogi waha milega so sex ko leke hope na lagaye.:evillaugh:


Ab aate hai main baat pe story ke baare me, it is about a concept that is as old as human civilization itself.

Me ye story bhi episodes me likhunga har episode ke kayi parts honge 5 ya 6 aur may be 4 isse kam nhi honge. Ab aate hai episodes par,

EPISODE 1:- A man encouters a mysterious women.

EPISODE 2:- khushal recieve a message which leads to trouble.

EPISODE 3:- khushal becomes a prisoner of the state.

EPISODE 4:- What does naina want with khushal? Answer revealed.

EPISODE 5:- khushal decision to change life as he knows it.

EPISODE 6:- As they wait, khushal and kat gets to know each other better.

EPISODE 7:- The rescue and the reunion.

EPISODE 8:- an unexpected development changes everything.

Episodey 9:- The rebel regroup and a new plan to be devised.

EPISODE 10:- The new plan into the action with dire consequences.

Episode 11:- The final chapter or endgame of the saga.



Introduction mangna mat me nahi dene wala:bat: kyuki sab kuch story me hi clear hoga..


UPDATE raat ko 10 BAJE....


Sab sath bane rahe yahi chaiye :bootyshak:

:congrats: for new story brother....
 
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Chapter:- A man encouters with a mysterious women.


Part-1

{UPDATE:-1}

Khushal apne chote se apartment ki khidke me khada hoke surya udaya ke bich uchi building se khach-khach bhare apne seher ko dekh raha tha jisey wo apna ghar bhi bolta hai. Chote chote vehicle city ke sadko pe bhid bhada rhae they. Badi badi buildings hone ke karan city pe nazar rakhna ek tarah muskil tha lekin hawao me udne wale silver drone is kaam ko mumkin bana rahe they, charo aur nazar rakhe huye they aur har building ko scan kar rahe they ki kahi kuch galat to nahi ho raha.

Khushal ko kisike apne piche hone ka ehsas hua usne piche mudke dekha to waha cori khadi thi wo bhi uski subah ki drink ke sath.
Wo bahar ke scene ka last look lene ki jaise hi piche muda to uske bilkul face ke saamne ek weapons se lada hua drone khada tha wo sir uske kuch inches ki duri pe tha.

Usne apni saase sambhalte huye window pe ek button ko press kiya aur us drone aur khushal ke bich me ek black glass ne cover kar li. Aur aisa karte hi pure apartment me andher cha gaya tabhi usne ek led jalayi.

Cori ne chekte huye kaha :- Gud morning.

Khushal:- gud morning cori.

Aur wo ek sofe pe baith gaya aur usne ek button dabaya to waha center me rakha bed chota hoke ek bhari bharkam table me badal gaya aur fir usne cori ke hath se ek glass liya jisme green colour ka tha usne ek ghut piya to usko wo bhut kadwa laga lekin wo aise karke sara pi gaya.

Cori (muskurate huye):- kya aapko kal achi nind aayi?


Lekin khushal to waha baitha hoke bhi absent tha to usne bas sir hilaya aur apni jeb me square object jo kisi box ki tarah thi, usne usey bahar nikala aur saamne rakhi table pe use dhang se set kiya aur us box ke uppar ka button press kiya aur press karte hi ek lady ki holographic image banne lagi jo ki ek chair pe baithi thi.

Lady:- Gud morning! Citizen khushal. Aaj Wednesday, 28th march hai, aaj aapki 7:30 pe department of communication ke sath meeting hai. Aapke ghar se waha ki duri 17 minute ki hogi aapke ghar ke bahar taxi aapka intezaar karegi.

Ye lady hologram image khushal ki assistant thi jo khushal ko duniya ki har baato se rubaru karwati thi. Usne ek angdayi li aur cori ki taraf dekhne laga wo cori ka aadi sa ho gaya tha.

Islamic republic aur chini-russi gathbandhan ke bich huyi ladayi ke baare me sochke apne pair pasar liye

Cori:- aap aaj ki hone wali baithak se ghabraye huye hai.

Ye puche se adhik ek bayan tha.

Khushal:- ye ek behtar kadam hai, isse hume ek achi jagah ek bada ghar aur ache paise milene ye hum dono ke liye acha hoga.


Cori:- aap jante hai is meeting me aapka pardarshan koi mayne nahi rakhta nirnat liya jaa chuka hai ye bas opcharikta hai.


Khushal:- mujhe pata hai, bas me murkhtawas kuch galat na kar du.

Cori:- kya aap mujhse apna tanav dur karna chahenge . (Cori ne ek shaitani muskaan ke sath kaha)

Khushal ne jhat se apni garden modi aur cori ko dekha wo kuch bolta usse pehle cori ka sir table ke niche hua fir uski pant ki zip khuli aur usey apne lund pe garmhat aur anand mehsoos hua. Cori ne uski puri length ko apne muh me le liya tha aur uske sire pe apni zubaan firane lagi usey pata tha khushal ko isme zyada maja ata hai aur khushal bhi full erect ho gaya tha. Ye khel kuch der chala aur khushal cori ke muh me hi raskhalit ho gaya.


Cori ne apna muh saaf kiya aur uske penis ko saaf karke uski zip me wapis karke band kar diya. Cori kitchen me chali gayi aur khushal apne bathroom me jab wo wapas aaya tab usey awaz sunayi di wo bhi kitchen se jo cori ki hi thi.

Cori:- mujhe lagta hai ab tumhe jaana chaiye.

Khushal ne us box ko wapis pocket me rakha aur kitchen me jaake ek pizza ka piece uthaya aur cori ke maathe pe kiss karke bahar aa gaya.


Taxi parvesh dwar ke paas uska intezaar kar rahi thi, jisme uske naam aur photo ka ek holographic image tha, khushal ne cab me parvesh kiya aur apni piche ki seat pe baith gaya aur ek button press kiya to uske saamne wo subah wali assistant fir se aa gayi.

Assistant:- gharelu jaankari, kal raat ek aur atankwadi hamla hua, ye airs street par new boston academy me hua 30 bacho ko badi hi nirdyata se maar giraya gaya.

Khushal:- impossible!
Aur usne us ko mute kar diya. Tabhi uske bagal me baithi ek aur passenger jo ki lady thi wo uski taraf mudi.

Lady:- kya aap kal raat huye atankwadi humle ki khabar sun rahe hai?

Khushal:- haa, kya aap janti hai main us academy me padha hu bhut bura hua.

Lady:- hum log sabhya logo ke sath nahi lad rahe hai. Hamara saamna mutant se hai Aur ye mutant bhut nirdayi hai jo diwar ke us paar outerlands me rehte hai.

Khushal:- kya tum sure ho is baare me?

Lady:- yes, nahi tum bata do itna nirdayi kaam aur kon kar sakta hai?

Tabhi taxi me ek awaz huyi ki khushal apni final destination pe pahuch chuka hai. Wo cab se bahar aaya aur apni watch me time dekha. Aur fir waha pe ek line me laga gaya uska muh ka swad bhi bigda hua tha subah wo juice pine se.
Thodi der line me khade rehne ke baad wo ek machine ke saamne aa gaya.

Khushal:- chocolate bar!

Usne machine ko ye baat boli

Tabhi machine ne ek ladki ki awaz me respond kiya:- i am sorry citizen khushal you reach your sugar level of this month. To kya aap kuch fruit lena pasand karenge.

Khushal :- no thanks!



TO BE CONTINUED ??
Nice start Brother ? ??
and Update bhi kafi acha hai...to yeh ek sci fi story hai...chalo shuruwat kafi Bhadiya rahi...
keep writing...
keep posting....


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Thanks brother for your support, aise hi sath bane rahiye aur mujhe bhedchal pasand nahi iskiye aage aur bhi aise different different stories leke aata rahunga agar aap logo ka support raha to...
Humara support humesha rahega bas tu Update time par diya kar :bat1:
 
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Is story ke update abhi na dene wala kyuki bhut dimag lagega ek story complete hone pe iske update dunga
Waise teri 6 stories hai running mein...itna load kyo leta hai...
 
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Chapter:- A man encouters with a mysterious women.


Part-1


{UPDATE:-2}


Tabhi machine ne ek ladki ki awaz me respond kiya:- i am sorry citizen khushal you reach your sugar level of this month. To kya aap kuch fruit lena pasand karenge.

Khushal :- no thanks!

Ab aage:-


"Citizen khushal" ye awaz ek mahila ki thi jab khushal conference hall me pahucha tab usey awaz aayi. Khushal ne bhi adab se uske samne sir jhukaya aur wo mahila bhi is gesture se khus ho gayi. Is city me wo bhi doosro ki tarah lambi smart ekdum perfect fit body thi aur wo ek genetic engineer thi. Usne apne lambe baalo ko ek perfect shape de rakha tha aur uske kapde bhi thode se alag they.


Khushal ne apne daaye taraf us mahila ko dekha tabhi uske uper ek screen si ban gayi aur us screen pe mahila ka sari pehchan thi jaise ki name, hieght, weight, profession, age and background.


Khushal:-citizen conners se milke acha laga.

Aur khushal itna kehke table pe rakhe jaar ko tatol ke dekhne laga jo ki choti candies se bhara hua tha.

Conners:- kya tum inme se kuch lena pasand karoge?


Khushal thoda sa hichkhichaya aur thoda sa socha kahi ye uska koi test to nahi le rahi.


Conners:- its okk. Mujhe pata hai aap is mahine ke sugar level tak pahuch chuke ho. But i have power me aapko de sakti hu ye, aur mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki tumhe apna mitha muh karna hai.

Khushal:- dhanyawad! ( Usne ajeeb tarah se muskurate huye kaha)

Khushal dheere dheere jar ki taraf badha wo ab bhi conners ki aankho me dekh raha tha usey ye koi test lag raha tha lekin uska hath pahuch gaya aur usne ek candy nikal ke apne muh me daal li.


Conners:- tumne apne c-mat ke exam me 19th position hasil ki hai jo ki bhut hi kharab baat hai. ( Ye baat bolte huye wo khushal ko ghur rahi thi)

Khushal:- mujhe bataya gaya tha.

Conners abhi usey ghur rahi thi maano uska parikshan kar rahi ho

Conners:- waise mujhe viswas nahi ho raha ki me kisi adams ke khandan ke kisi admi se mili hu abhi, waise kya tum isi city me paida huye ho?


Khushal:- haa, jab se manie apna hosh sambhala hai tabse me yahi hu.

Wo thodi der ke liye ruki aur kuch soch kar boli...

Conners:- tumko maine director of communication ke post ke liye promote kar diya hai kal se tum ye karya bhar sambhaloge tumhe bas bahar ke logo se sampark me rehna hai, aur tum hi senator hobbes ki speech likha karoge abse, aur kal tumhe retaired DOC se milwa diya jayega.


Khushal sir jhukate huye:- aapka dhanyawad mujhe is kabil samjhne ke liye aur ek awsar dene ke liye....

Conners:- ye jo bhi hamari baate hai wo record kar li gayi hai central government ko dikhane ke liye.


Aur usne apne sir pe udta hua device pakad ke table pe rakh diya.

Conners:- kya tumhara aur koi sawal hai tu pucho.


Khushal:- me bhut khush hu lekin kya aap log is promotion ke sath kuch benifits bhi add karenge kya?

Conners:- yes offcourse, tumhara ration level seven kar diya jayega tumhari security double ho jayegi aur tumhe ek high-tech apartment bhi provide kiya jayega.

Khushal:- thanxx
Aur apna sir jhuka ke chala gaya...



TO BE CONTINUED ??
Nice update brother.....
to bande ko promotion mil gaya...lagta hai yeh laundiya iski boss hai....
keep writing....
keep posting.....
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