Fantasy The Secret Island (Completed)

[Shahrukh]

Kya karu dost, abhi me work se free huva. Freelancer ko chutti nahi hoti.

Koi na bhai 2 ya 3 din mein full update do half me maza nahi aata

 

[mrDevi]

Koi na bhai 2 ya 3 din mein full update do half me maza nahi aata

Ok main apni taraf se pura try kraunga.

 

[vicky4289]

Gauri rasoyghar me Vikrant ke liye jadibutiyan ka ras tayar kar rahi thi. Vikrant kamare me bistar par leta huva, soch me duba huva tha. Uska man kisi ki yad me khoya huva tha. Jo bilkul Gauri ki tarah uska khayal rakha karti thi. Vikrant ki aankh se aansu beh nikalte hai.

Gauri kamare me hath me ras se bhara huva pyala lekar aati hai, Kamare me aate hi usne Vikrant ki aankhon me aansu dekhe to chinta me Vikrant se puch bethi.

Gauri: Kya huva? Ro kyu rahe ho?

Vikrant: Kuch nahi bas ghar ki yad aa rahi thi. Ki kab ja paunga wapis?

Gauri: Kyu tum yaha nahi reh sakte?

Vikrant: Nahi, Gauri ji me hamesa to yaha nahi reh skta na! Ghar pe meri ma he jo mera intezar kar rahi hogi. Meri chinta me aansu baha rahi hogi. Unko me akela chod ke yaha nahi reh skta na.

Gauri: Ohh, To tum yaha se chale jaoge.

Gauri ka chehra udas ho jata hai.

Vikrant: Ha jana to padega hi. Lekin jesa rani ji ne kaha tha, uske liye abhi waqt hai. Pata nahi wo waqt kab aayega.

Gauri(Dheere se khud ko bolti hai): Wo waqt kabhi na aaye.

Vikrant ne kuch halke sabd sune to usne pucha.

Vikrant: Kya? Aap kya boli?

Gauri: Ji kuch nahi.

Tabhi ghar ke mukhya darwaza ko khatkhatati huvi awaz aati hai. Gauri Vikrant ko pyala deke darwaza kholne chali jati hai. Jese hi darwaza kholti hai, uske samne mahal ki sainik khadi hoti hai. Gauri usko dekh ke gabhara jati hai aur sochati hai, Kahi Vasundhara ne to nahi bheja isse.

Sainik: Pranam, Guari ji.

Gauri: Ji kahiye!

Sainik: Raani ji ka bulava tha. Unhe aapse bat karni thi.

Gauri: Ji thik hai me aa jaungi.

Sainik: Ji, Rani ji ne kaha he agar Vikrant ji ki bi tabiyat thik ho to wo bhi aa jaye.

Gauri: Ji thik hai, me unse puch lungi, agar wo aa sakte ho to sath me aayenge.

Sainik: Thik hai, me chalti hu.

Gauri sainik ke jane ke bad, chinta me Vikrant ke pass chali jati hai. Use pata to tha hi ki Rani unke sath hai. Par kya pata rajya ki suraksha ke liye Rani kuch bhi nirnay le sakti hai.

Gauri wapis kamre me jati hai, aur Vikrant se kehati hai.

Gauri: Rani ji ne hume bulaya hai.

Vikrant: Ha to fir chalte hai, iske darne ki kya bat hai?

Gauri: Muje dar hai ki kahi Vasundhara aur Anandita tum ko kaidi banane ki soch ko Rani ji se firse kaha ho. Aur Rajya ki suraksha ke liye wo man gayi ho.

Vikrant: To isme galat kya hai, Agar mene jane ke waqt tak muje kaidi rehna pade to muze manjur hai.

Gauri: Aese kese bewajah kaidi banna?

Vikrant: To fir aap dar kyu rahi ho? Chaliye chalte hai.

Gauri: Ha thik hai, par tum naha to lo, ki aese hi chalna hai?

Vikrant(haste huve): Naha to lunga par pehnuga kya? Mere kapde to ladai ke waqt hi fat gaye the. Usse pehan kar to Rani ji ke samne nahi ja skte na.

Gauri: Ha ye bhi hai, lekin kya kar sakte hai, abhi to naye vastro ka intezam bhi nahi ho skta.

Vikrant: Chalo thik hai, jesa bhi hal he chalete hai.

Gauri Vikrant ko snanghar dikhati hai. Vikrant nahane chala jata hai. Tande pani se nahane se uske badan me kampan uth jati hai. Vikrant apne sarir se ragad ragad ke jadibutiyan ka lep hataata hai. Aur fir pani dal ke khud ko saf kar deta hai.

Nahake bahar ke bad Vikrant fir se apne purane kapde pahan leta hai. Aur mahal jane ke liye tayar ho jata hai. Par use Gauri kamre me dikhay nahi de rahi thi. Wo Gauri ko dhundhta huwa, dusare kamare ma jata hai.

Waha Gauri kamare lagatar chinta me chalte huve chakkar laga rahi thi. Vikrant usse dekh kar puchata hai.

Vikrant: Kya hua, Gauri Ji, aise chakkar kyun laga rahi ho?

Gauri: Kuch nahi, chalo, chalte hai.

Vikrant aage chalne lagta hai, aur bahar aajata hai. Par dekhata hai ki Gauri uske sath nahi aayi thi.

Vikrant wapis us kamare me jata hai, aur dekhta hai ki Gauri ki aankhon se aansu beh rahe the.

Vikrant: Kya hua? Aur aap aese ro kyu rahi ho?

Gauri: Pata nahi, mujhe Mahal jaane mein dar lag raha hai.

Vikrant: Arre, kuch nahi hoga mujhe, aap chinta mat karo.

Gauri bas khade khade aankho se aansu bahaye ja rahi thi. Vikrant kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare. Wo Gauri ke chehre ko apne hatho se pyaar se thaam leta hai, aur apne hotho ko Gauri ke hotho pe pyaar se rakh deta hai, aur Gauri ke hoth ko pyaar se chumne lagta hai. Gauri Vikrant ke is kadam se chauk jati hai. Wo kuch nahi karti, bas waise hi khadi rehti hai. Thodi der Gauri ke hoth ko chumne ke baad Vikrant piche hat jata hai. Gauri usko dekhti hai, uske aankhon mein sharm aur pyaar ki bhaavnaaen dekhkar. Unka mann tham jata hai, aur aansu tham jate hain.

Vikrant kamre se bahar chala jata hai, aur Gauri ka intezar karne lagta hai. Thodi der baad, jab Gauri ka mann sant ho jata hai, woh bahar aati hai. Vikrant use dekhta hai, uske chehre par ab sharm ke rang chadh gaye hain.

Gauri (Sharmate hue): Chalo, chalte hain.

Vikrant (majak mein): Aise hi chalna hai, aapke aansu se bhare chehre ko dekhkar, Vasundhara Ji ka shaq yakeen mein badal jayega, aur woh mujhe kaid kar lengi.

Vikrant ki is baat par Gauri uski chati pe mukka marti hai, aur fir apna muh dhone chali jati hai. Gauri ke aane ke baad, dono mahal ki aur chal dete hain.

Bahot hi acha update tha.

 

[S M H R]

Nice update lekin thoda chota tha ho sake tho thoda time or lekar bada update do

 

[mrDevi]

Gauri aur Vikrant mahal ki taraf ja rahe the Rani se milne ke liye.

Jo bhi koi unse rasta mein milta, woh Vikrant ki taraf muskurata aur samman mein sir jhukata tha.

Woh seedhe darbar ki taraf badhe. Unhe lag raha tha ki Rani wahaan unka intezaar kar rahi hongi. Lekin jab woh wahan pahunchte hain, toh barbar khali hota hai, koi nahi hota. Gauri aur Vikrant laut ke ja kar ek sainik se Rani ke baare mein puchte hain.

Gauri: Rani kahan hain, unhone hume bulaya hai.

Sainik: Nahi, aaj darbae mai koi nahi aaya, shayad woh apne kamre mein hongi.

Gauri: Thik hai, dhanyavaad.

Gauri aur Vikrant Rani ke kamre ki taraf badhte hain. Jab woh wahaan pahunchte hain, toh kamre ke bahar khadi ek sainik muskurakar unke samman mein sir jhukati hai.

Sainik: Rani aapka hi intezaar kar rahi hain. Aap jaa sakte hain.

Gauri: Dhanyavaad.

Gauri aur Vikrant kamre ke andar jaate hain, Rani kamre mein idhar-udhar ghoom rahi hoti hain, aur unka intezaar kar rahi hoti hain.

Rani: Swagat hai.

Gauri aur Vikrant samman mein sir jhukte hain.

Gauri: Rani Ji, aapne hume bulaya?

Rani: Haan, Gauri ji, mujhe jaanna hai ki yeh kaise hua? Aapne us dawai mein kya badlaav kiya? Vikrant ke vyavhaar mein ShairShing jesa haiwani badlav kyu nahi huva?

Gauri: Mainey kuch nahi badla, kyun ki usmein kisi parivartan ki aavashyakta nahi thi.

Vikrant itna uljha hua tha ki woh samajh nahi pa raha tha ki kya ho raha hai.

Vikrant: Kya koi mujhe bata sakta hai ki kya bat ho rahi hai?

Kyun ki Vasundhara ne jab bite varso ki baat ki thi, tab woh behosh tha. Gauri Vikrant ko sab kuch samjhati hai. Jab Vikrant ko pata chala ki Gauri ne unko us jadibuti wali dawai bina unki anumati ke di thi, toh woh thoda gussa ho gaya.

Vikrant Gauri ko dekhta hain aur puchta hain.

Vikrant: Kya tum log mujhe bata nahi sakte the?

Vikrant ke awaaz mein gussa tha, aur Gauri usse mehsoos karti hai.

Vikrant: Kya hota agar main woh raat mar gaya hota, jab aapne mujhe dawai di thi?

Vikrant: Aapko mujhse madad maang leni chahiye thi, aap to jaanti ho Gauri ji, main aapki madad jarur karta.

Gauri ke aankhon mein aansu aa jaate hain, usse lagta hai ki usne Vikrant ka bharosa toda hai.

Gauri (aankhon mein aansu ke saath): Main maafi chahti hoon Vikrant, lekin humare paas koi aur vikalp nahi tha, jab hume tumhare bare main pata chala.

Vikrant ke samajh mein nahi aa raha tha, woh samajh nahi paaya kya bat ho rahi hai.

Jab Rani, Gauri ko rote hue aur Vikrant ko gusse mein dekh kar beech mein bolti hain.

Rani: Vikrant, woh sirf mere aadeshon ka palan kar rahi hai. Unhone to mujhse mana kar diya tha par wo mere aadeshon ka palan kar rahi thi.

Vikrant: Lekin agar woh mujhse madad maangti toh main madad kar deta, woh to jaanti hai mujhe itna acchi tarah.

Rani: Thik hai, sab kuch meri galti hai. Main maafi maangti hoon. Chalo, main tumhe sab kuch pehle se samjha deti hoon.

Rani: Jab tum is dweep par aaye the, aur pehli baar hosh mein aaye the, tab maine hamari Guruma se baat ki thi.

Vikrant: Kaun?

Rani: Guruma, woh param divya vyakti hain. Unhone saalon tak tapasya ki aur divya shakti prapt ki hai jisse woh har cheez aur har vyakti ke baare mein jaan sakti hain.

Rani: To jab main ShairShing ke atyachaaron ka shikar thi, toh ek din unhone mujhe bataya ki, Jab ek aadmi is dharti aur samay ke pare se aayega, tab tumhe apni sab pareshaniyon aur dukhon se mukti milegi.

Vikrant Rani ko rok deta hain.

Vikrant: Agar unke paas divya shakti hai, toh phir unhone aapki aur aapki maata ki madad kyun nahi ki?

Rani: Woh sirf jaankari prapt kar sakti hain, woh sangharsh mein hastakshep nahi kar sakti, woh sirf sahi disha dikha sakti hain.

Rani: Isiliye jab Vasundhara aur Anandita ne mujhe tumhare baare mein bataya, toh mujhe ummeed jagi. Lekin mujhe tumhare baare mein kuch bhi nahi pata tha. Isiliye jab tum hosh mein aaye, toh maine phir se Guruma se baat ki aur tumhare baare mein aur adhik jaankari prapt ki. Aur jaan kar maine samjha ki tum Prakriti dweep ke rakhshask ban sakte ho.

Rani: Iske baad maine yeh sab yajana banayi, aur Gauri se dawai dene ke liye kaha. Woh bebas thi, woh sirf mere aadeshon ka palan kar rahi thi.

Vedant zamin par beth he aur apne haath apne mathe par rakh deta hai.

Vedant: Toh main yahan kaise aaya aur wapas kaise ja sakta hoon, aapko iske baare mein pata hai, hai na?

Rani: Haan, mujhe pata hai.

Vedant: Kya aap mujhe yeh samjha sakte ho?

Rani: Thik hai, toh suno. Iss duniya mein do prakar ke hole hote hain, black hole aur warm hole.

Vedant: Haan, mujhe pata hai. Lekin warm hole sirf ek anumaan hai.

Rani: Nahi, yeh ek anumaan nahi hai, yeh sach hai. Guruma ne mujhe iske baare mein bataya.

Rani: Toh warm hole kya karta hai, yeh samay ki yatra karta hai. Tum samay ke kisi bhi waqt mein ja sakte ho, chahe woh bita huva waqt ho ya aane wala, yeh tumhari marzi par nirbhar karta hai.

Rani: Toh jab tum woh naav mein phase huve the aur woh taufan aaya tha, aur tumhari naav main bijli lag gayi thi, toh tum naav se door phenk gaye the. Tumne ek lakdi ki tukda pakad liya tha.

Rani: Lekin kya tumhe iske baad kuch yaad hai? Nahi, na?

Vikrant yaad karne ki koshish karta hai, lekin safalta nahi milti.

Vikrant: Nahi.

Rani: Sahi. Jab tum us lakdi ki tukdi par jeevit rehne ki koshish kar rahe the aur samundar mein behosh ho gaye the, tab tumhare samne ek warm hole tha, aur tum usme gir gaye. Aur us warm hole ke dwara tum samay mein piche yahan aa gaye.

Rani: Tum samay ki yatra ke asar mein the, isiliye jab tum yahan pahunch ke behosh ho gaye the, toh tumhein hosh me aane mein lamba samay laga.

Vikrant: Toh main wapas kaise ja sakta hoon?

Rani: Yeh warm hole lagbhag har 6 mahine mein ek baar khulta hai. Yaad hai, Pichli baar jab hum mile the, to maine yeh kaha tha ki abhi sahi samay nahi hai?

Vikrant: Haan.

Rani: Toh tumhein bas 6 mahine ka intezaar karna hoga. Uske baad tum wapas ja sakte ho, apne samay aur stan mein.

Vikrant: Lekin me sahi samay mein kese jaa sakta hoon? Agar main galat samay mein chala gaya toh?

Rani: Uske liye tumhein chinta nahi karni chahiye, jab tum warm hole mein wapis pravesh karoge, toh woh tumhein usi samay par patak dega jis samay tumne usmein pravesh kiya tha.

Jab yeh sab baatein samapt hoti hain, toh ek sainik aata hai aur bataata hai ki Vasundhara aur Anandita aayi hain aur anumati maang rahi hai. Rani keh deti hain ki unhein bhej de. Sainik wapas jaati hai, aur Vasundhara aur Anandita andar aate hain. Woh Rani ke samman me sir jukari hain.

Vasundhara: Main maafi chahti hoon Vikrant, maine tumhari madad ke baad tumhein pakadne ka aadesh diya tha. Main dilse maafi chahti hoon.

Vikrant: Main koi aitraz nahi karta is par.

Vikrant Gauri ki taraf dekhta hain aur Vasundhara se kehta hain.

Vikrant: Lekin maine is jagah par sabse adhik bharosa jiss par kiya tha, aur woh mujh par bharosa nahi kar saki.

Iske baad, Vikrant kamara chhod kar chala jaata hai. Gauri ro rahi hoti hai aur neeche baith jaati hai.

Rani: Gauri ji, uska mann shaant ho jaayega, tab woh samjhega.

Gauri: Lekin woh sahi hai, Is dwip par sirf mujhe hi wo uski dost manta tha, aur maine uska bharosa toda hai.....

 

[mrDevi]

Koi na bhai 2 ya 3 din mein full update do half me maza nahi aata

Bahot hi acha update tha.

Nice update lekin thoda chota tha ho sake tho thoda time or lekar bada update do

Dosto ek aur update post kar diya hai. Bada wala

 

[1112]

Ek 27 saal ka ladka boat par sawar tha. Andheri raat mein boat samundar mein aandhi tufan ke beech mein thi. Samundar ki lehre boat ko hila rahi thi, jaise ki use tabah karna chah rahi ho. Boat ki halat bahut hi nazuk thi. Ladke ko lag raha tha jse kabhi bhi ye sath chod sakta he.

Tabhi akash me achank se roshni cha jati he, or tadake ki awaz aati he. Ladaka dar jata he. Use lagta he jese ab wo nhi bach payega.

Ladka boat se hi najdiki zamin ki khoj kar raha tha. Jaise taise karke use zamin par pahuchna hai.

Ek aur bijali ki roshni akash me cha gyi, or Ek bijli sidha aake boat pe giri. Ek toh bijli gir aur upar se boat ki khasta halat. Boat pr dhadam ki awaaz ke uske tukde hote chale gaye. Ladka uchal kr pani me gir jata he.

Baris or aandhi ki vajah se ladka kuch nhi dekh pata he.
Apni jaan bacha ne ki leye idhar udhar hath pair chalne lagta he he. Kese bhi karke wo samudra ki satah pr rehna chahta hai. Pr lehre bar bar pani ke andr dhakel de rhi thi.

Tabhi use boat se tuta huaa 1 bada lakdi ka tuta hath lagta he. Ladka use pakad leta he or apna adha sarir us pr tika deta he. Use apne bachane ki kuch umid nazar aati he.

Jese tese raat dhal jati he. Savera hone hi wala hota he. Aandhi or baris bhi ab kam ho gyi thi. Puri raat apni jaan bacha ne ki mashkat me ladka thak jata he. Uske hath pr ab jawab de gye the. Ladka abhi bhi us lakdi ke sahare tha. Itni thakan ke karan ladka usi lakdi pe hosh kho bethata he.

Samundar ki lehre use apni marzi se kahi leja rhi thi. Dur sidhi rekha me, jamin dikh rhi thi. Lakdi samundar ki lehron ke saath usi tarah apna rukh rakhti hai. Kuch samay bad lakdi us retili jamin pr thi.

Ladka na to hosh me tha, wo bs usi lakdi ke adha leta huwa tha, samundar ki lehre uske pairo se takrati he. Aur chali jati hai. Puro raat pani me rehne ko vahaj se uske pairo me juriya pad gayi thi. Or kahi kahi pe chale bhi dikh rhe the.

Ladka ek aise dvip par tha, jahaan use ab nayi chunautiyo ka samna karna tha. Jahaa na aaj tak koi aa paya tha, nahi koi iske bare me jaan paya tha.

Kahani ki badhaai. Mast likh rahe ho bhai.

 

[peerdip Meena]

Nice update bro

 

[vicky4289]

Bahot hi mast update tha.

 

[mrDevi]

Kahani ki badhaai. Mast likh rahe ho bhai.

Thank you