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Zas23

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Mai sher Singh ko yad kiya or mere pith pr Jo tiger ka tattoo bana hua tha vo bahar aa gya Neelam sher(tiger) ko apne samne dekh kr dar hi gyi thi or vo bhi mere pith se niklta dekh kr sher Singh samne ja kr baith gye or ek bar jor

Sher Singh- daro nhi putri Neelam tumhare man me chal rhe sare savalo ke javab Mai dunga or Mai tumhare bare me bhi batauga ki tum Kon ho tiger kyo tum se vivah nhi krna chahta tha magar majburi me karna pada.

Aao mere karib aao or apne aakho ko band kr ke mere sir pr hath rakho tumhe sab pata chal jayega.

Neelam ne meri taraf dekha to Maine use jane ka isara Kiya to vo thoda darte darte sher Singh ke najdik gyi or darte huye hi sher Singh ke sir pe hath rakha or aakhe band kr li.

Sher Singh ka sir chamakne laga or or neelam ko vo sab dikhai dene lga ki kaise neel garh nast hua or kaise vo apni maa Amanda ke garbh se nikal kr varsha ke garbh me aayi or uska janm prithvi me hua fir kaise uske papa ko uske dosto ne bhadkaya or unke bahkave me aakar usne dusmani nikali sab kuch use sher Singh ne dikha diya.

Fir sher Singh ke sir se rosni niklni band ho gyi tab Neelam ne Sher Singh ke sir se apna hath hata liya or fir mud kr meri taraf dekha to Maine dekha ki uske aakho me aashu the vo dodte huye mere pas aayi or Bhai bol kr mere gale se lag gyi .


Fir Neelam ko kuch yad aaya to vo mujh se alag ho kr fut fut kr rone lgi

Neelam - ye kya ho gya aisa nhi hona chahiye tha.

Mai- ab kya hua or kya nhi hona chahiye tha.

Neelam - hum dono ki shadi or jab tumhe pahle se pata tha ki hum dono sage Bhai bahan hai to fir tumne shadi kyo ki.

Ye bol kr vo fir se rone lgi.

Mai - is ka javab bhi tumhe sher Singh hi de sakte hai.

Sher Singh- hamare Neel grah me ye sab aam bat hai vha pr bhai bahano me shadiya hoti hai or ye pap puny to is prithvi lok me hi mana jata hai hamare garh me nhi or tum ye kyo bhul rhi ho ki tum bhi Neel grah ka hi hiss ho or tiger ka apne ristedar se vivah karna uske bhagay me hi likha hai jise koi badal nhi sakta.

Sher Singh ki bat sunkar Neelam muskura kr mere gale lg gyi.

Sher Singh - baki bate bad me karte rhna abhi apne agle padav ki taraf dhayan do , patal Lok ka ka darvaja jayada samay ke liye nhi khula rhega ab jao der krna thik nhi hai.

Ye bol kr sher Singh mere ander vapas aa gye or tattoo bn gye,

Mai - Chalo ab hame chalna hoga.

Neelam - pr kaha.

Fir maine Neelam ko patal me jane ka rasta dikhaya.

Neelam - ye kya hai aisa maine kabhi nhi dekha nadi ka pani sirf yhi pr hi vapas ja rha hai aisa lg rha hai.

Mai - ha kyo ki yhi pr hi patal Lok me jane ka darvaja hai .

Neelam - pr hume yha kyo jana hai.

Mai - kyo ki mujhe sakti yhi se prapt hogi ab or koi saval nhi Baki bad me puchh lena.

Ye bol kr mai Neelam ka hath pakd kr nadi me kud gya.
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Update 61

Mai or neelam dono nadi me kud gye or hum dono teji se ander jane lage pani me hote huye bhi hum dono ko sans lene me koi pareshani nhi ho rhi thi or yha ka najara bhi bahut hi sunder lag rha tha pani me rahne vale jiv,machhliya hamare pas se ho kr ja rhi thi.

Abhi hum is manoram drishy me khoy huye the ki koi bada sa jiv me hame nigal liya .

Mai or neelam us bade se jiv ke pet me aa gye , mujhe lag rha tha ki ye koi bada sa sarp hai Jo hume sidhe nigal gya hai.

Neelam- ye hum kha aa gye bhai yha to bahut garmi hai jo bardast nhi ho rhi jaldi kuch kro, chhi kitni badabu bhi hai yha pr.

Fir maine apne talwar ko yad kiya or talwar mere hath me aa gyi or Mai talwar ko nichi ghusa diya mere aisa karne se us jiv ko dard hua or vo chat patane laga is karan hum jha khade the vo jagah bhi hilne lgi Mai jayda der na karte huye jha se talwar ghusai thi vhi se 360 deegri talwar ko ghuma diya or vo jiv to tukdo me bat gya or hum bhi bahar aa kr rahat ki sans li .

Bahar aa kr jab humne us jiv ko dekha to sach much me vo ek bada sa sarp hi tha Jo ab to tukdo me hone ke bad tadap rha tha or kuch hi chhado me nast ho gya or uske sthan pr ek devi prakat ho gyi.

Hum dono ne devi ko pranam Kiya .

Devi- sada khus rho, he manav aaj tum ne mujhe us dust danav patalasur se mujhe aajad karaya hai us dust danav ne mujhe kaid kr ke apni maya jal se mujhe ek bade se sanp me badal kr apni dwar ki rakchha ke liye rakh diya tha jis Karan Mai Kai varso se apni mukti ki pratikchha me thi, jise tum ne mere is danav rupi sarir ko mar kr mujhe mukt kiya hai is ke badle Mai tume ek vardan deti hu ki aag tumhe jala nhi sakti or pani tumhe duba nhi sakti.

Ye bol kr devi ne apne hath upar Kiya or un ke hatho se ek rosni nikal kr mujh pr padi.

Devi - or ha manav ye sakti tum jis jis se vivah karoge unke pas bhi ye sakti chali jayegi.

Ye bol kr vo devi gayab ho gyi fir Mai or neelam dono aage badhe or patal Lok me pahuch gye.

Vha pahuchne pr hume koi bhi dikhai nhi de rha tha hum age chalne lge or jaise jaise hum aage badh rhe the to rasto pr kai jagho pr manusyo ke kankal to khi hath pair ke haddiyo ke avsesh hume mil rhe the vha ka vataaran bahut hi ajib tha, kuch or aage jane pr sade gale mans ki badbu aane lgi kyo ki udhar kai loge ke aadhe sarir ke man's ko noch kr baki chod diya gya tha jo sad kr badbu dene lge the .

Neelam - chhi yaha pr manusyo love mar kr khaya jata hai aisa lag rha hai or kitni badbu bhi hai .

Mai - chalo aage chale hai kon sa hume yhi rukna hai apni sakti leni hai or chale jana hai .

Neelam - yha tumhe kon si sakti milegi?

Mai - yha mujhe teji se udne ki sakti milegi jo pagasas namak udne wale ghode ki sakti hai jise patalasur ne kaid kr ke rakha hai lekin us ye sakti abhi tak prapt nhi hui hai.

Neelam - wow matlab ye sakti milne ke bad tum udne lg jaoge.

Mai - ha meri maa ab aage badhe.

Kuch dur or chalne ke bad hum log ruk gye kyo ki vhi pass ki jhadiyo se kuch aawaj aa rhi thi to Mai ne Neelam ko pichhe kiya or jhadiyo ke par jhakne lga .

Jhadiyo ke pichhe Mai kya dekhta hu teen log Jo dikhne me danav jaise lag rhe the vo log ek ladki ke sarir ke mans ko kat kat kr kha rhe the ye drisay dekh kr mujhe ulti si hone lagi thi mere pichhe neelam bhi aa gyi or usne bhi ye drisay dekh liya or vo jor se chilla di or ulti krne lagi .

Uske chillane ki aawaj sun kr un danvo ne hamari taraf dekha or dhire dhire hamari taraf badhne lage , Mai Neelam ko apne piche rakh kr dhire dhire piche hatne laga vo log ajib si aawaje nikalte huye lalchai najro se hume dekhte huye aage badhne lage

Tabhi ek ne teji se dodte huye meri taraf aane laga vo mujh tak pahuch pata us se pahle hi maine teji se apni talvar uske pet ke aar par kr diya uski saitani aawaj ruk gyi tab maine apni talvar uske pet se nikal li or vo Jamin pr dher ho gya , tabhi dusra danav apni talvar le kar mere pas aaye or mujh pr war kiya jise maine rok kr week lat uske pet me mari vo jhuk gya or maine teji se uska gala dhad se alag kr diya Jo tisra danav tha vo apne sathiyo ko marta dekh kr bhag gya .
Yha pr ek bat ye thi ki ye danav nange the sale or unka lund or anddo ka size bhi bada tha.

Fir hum dono aage badh gye kyo ki aab dhire dhire rat hone lagi thi or hume kahi surakchhit jagah bhi dekhna tha rat gujarne ke liye.
 

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Superb update bhai
 
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