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Mai sher Singh ko yad kiya or mere pith pr Jo tiger ka tattoo bana hua tha vo bahar aa gya Neelam sher(tiger) ko apne samne dekh kr dar hi gyi thi or vo bhi mere pith se niklta dekh kr sher Singh samne ja kr baith gye or ek bar jor

Sher Singh- daro nhi putri Neelam tumhare man me chal rhe sare savalo ke javab Mai dunga or Mai tumhare bare me bhi batauga ki tum Kon ho tiger kyo tum se vivah nhi krna chahta tha magar majburi me karna pada.

Aao mere karib aao or apne aakho ko band kr ke mere sir pr hath rakho tumhe sab pata chal jayega.

Neelam ne meri taraf dekha to Maine use jane ka isara Kiya to vo thoda darte darte sher Singh ke najdik gyi or darte huye hi sher Singh ke sir pe hath rakha or aakhe band kr li.

Sher Singh ka sir chamakne laga or or neelam ko vo sab dikhai dene lga ki kaise neel garh nast hua or kaise vo apni maa Amanda ke garbh se nikal kr varsha ke garbh me aayi or uska janm prithvi me hua fir kaise uske papa ko uske dosto ne bhadkaya or unke bahkave me aakar usne dusmani nikali sab kuch use sher Singh ne dikha diya.

Fir sher Singh ke sir se rosni niklni band ho gyi tab Neelam ne Sher Singh ke sir se apna hath hata liya or fir mud kr meri taraf dekha to Maine dekha ki uske aakho me aashu the vo dodte huye mere pas aayi or Bhai bol kr mere gale se lag gyi .


Fir Neelam ko kuch yad aaya to vo mujh se alag ho kr fut fut kr rone lgi

Neelam - ye kya ho gya aisa nhi hona chahiye tha.

Mai- ab kya hua or kya nhi hona chahiye tha.

Neelam - hum dono ki shadi or jab tumhe pahle se pata tha ki hum dono sage Bhai bahan hai to fir tumne shadi kyo ki.

Ye bol kr vo fir se rone lgi.

Mai - is ka javab bhi tumhe sher Singh hi de sakte hai.

Sher Singh- hamare Neel grah me ye sab aam bat hai vha pr bhai bahano me shadiya hoti hai or ye pap puny to is prithvi lok me hi mana jata hai hamare garh me nhi or tum ye kyo bhul rhi ho ki tum bhi Neel grah ka hi hiss ho or tiger ka apne ristedar se vivah karna uske bhagay me hi likha hai jise koi badal nhi sakta.

Sher Singh ki bat sunkar Neelam muskura kr mere gale lg gyi.

Sher Singh - baki bate bad me karte rhna abhi apne agle padav ki taraf dhayan do , patal Lok ka ka darvaja jayada samay ke liye nhi khula rhega ab jao der krna thik nhi hai.

Ye bol kr sher Singh mere ander vapas aa gye or tattoo bn gye,

Mai - Chalo ab hame chalna hoga.

Neelam - pr kaha.

Fir maine Neelam ko patal me jane ka rasta dikhaya.

Neelam - ye kya hai aisa maine kabhi nhi dekha nadi ka pani sirf yhi pr hi vapas ja rha hai aisa lg rha hai.

Mai - ha kyo ki yhi pr hi patal Lok me jane ka darvaja hai .

Neelam - pr hume yha kyo jana hai.

Mai - kyo ki mujhe sakti yhi se prapt hogi ab or koi saval nhi Baki bad me puchh lena.

Ye bol kr mai Neelam ka hath pakd kr nadi me kud gya.
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Acme

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Excellent update bhai
 

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Nice update bhai ab maza Ayega iske bad sayad mam se kuch hoga
 

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Excellent Update Bhai
 

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Superb update
 

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BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR AUR INTERESTING UPDATES BHAI.
BHAI AAP SE YE REQUEST HAI KI AAP PAHALE KI TARAH DAILY UPDATE DE.TAAKI READERS KA INTEREST BARKARAAR RAHE.AISE DO CHAAR DIN KE BAAD UPDATE AAYEGA TOH READERS KA INTEREST KAM HONE LAGEGA.PHIR AAP BHI BOLOGE KI READERS HI NAHI HAIN TOH STORY KYA LIKHU.BHAI AAP KI STORY APNE AAP ME EK ALAG HI MAHATVA RAKHATI HAI.EK ALAG HI LAGAAV HAI AAP KI STORY SE.BAAKI AAP KI MARJI .
AGER KUCHH GALAT KAHA HO TOH MAAF KARNA
 

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Nice update... Keep it up...
 

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BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR AUR INTERESTING UPDATES BHAI.
BHAI AAP SE YE REQUEST HAI KI AAP PAHALE KI TARAH DAILY UPDATE DE.TAAKI READERS KA INTEREST BARKARAAR RAHE.AISE DO CHAAR DIN KE BAAD UPDATE AAYEGA TOH READERS KA INTEREST KAM HONE LAGEGA.PHIR AAP BHI BOLOGE KI READERS HI NAHI HAIN TOH STORY KYA LIKHU.BHAI AAP KI STORY APNE AAP ME EK ALAG HI MAHATVA RAKHATI HAI.EK ALAG HI LAGAAV HAI AAP KI STORY SE.BAAKI AAP KI MARJI .
AGER KUCHH GALAT KAHA HO TOH MAAF KARNA
Bhai aapne kuch galat nhi kaha lekin bhai kya kru mujhe jab bhi samay milta hai Mai update likhta hu or jis din samay nhi mil pata us din update nhi de pata or Kai bar to likha hua update bhi apne aap delete ho jata hai update regular na dene ke liye sorry bhai fir bhi meri puri kosis rhegi ki Mai regular update du

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Nice beautiful superb update bhai, mera andaza sahi nikala, Achcha huwa Nilam ko sab pata chaleyga, is bajah sey mama ki ghar mey gusna asahn hoga, dekhtey hey agey patal lok mey kya kya hota hey unkey sath
keep it up and as always waiting for
 

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Awesome update bhai waiting for next
 
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