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Update 67

Aadhe ghante tak hum aise hi lete rhe fir jab hume Mallika ke munne ki rone ki aawaj aayi tak Mallika foran uth kr apne room ki taraf aise hi bhagi Mai bhi apne aap ko saf kr ke let gya bistar pr or sochne lga ki manusyo tak to thik tha aaj ek danav mahila Jo bhi chod diya wah tiger bete or kaha tak jayega pata nhi.

Kuch der bad Mallika vapas aayi,tab unhone kapde pahan liye the.

Mallika - chaliye aap bhi hath muh dho lijiye Mai bhojan lga rhi hu vo kya hai na munna bhi bhukh ke karan hi uth gya tha to Maine socha ki hum sath me hi bhojan kr lete hai.

Mai - thik hai aap chaliye Mai aata hu.

Fir hum ne sath me bhojan kiya or fir kuch khas Kam to tha nhi to mai aaram karna hi uchit samjha Mallika bhi apna kam nipta kr mere room me aayi .

Mai - or bataiye Mallika ji maja aaya ki nhi .
Mallika- ha bahut maja aaya aapke sath itna ki aaj tak mujhe kabhi itna aanand nhi mila kas ki tum yhi rahte to kitna achchha hota.

Mai - isme aisi Kon si badi bat hai Mai nhi aa sakta to aap to aa sakti hai prithvi lok me.

Mallika - ha ye sahi rahega or ab to mai tumhare alava kisi or se kabhi sambandh nhi banaungi ye Mera vada hai tum se .

Mai - to isi bat pe ek bar or ho jaye, kya khayal hai aapka.

Mallika - neki or puch puch or vaise bhi unko aane me abhi samay hai

Fir ek bar or maine jabardast tarike se Mallika ki chut mari fir Mai so gya or sidhe sham ko hi utha tab Tak bhairav bhi aa gya tha .

Mai uth kr fresh hua tab bhairav se bat hui to unhone bataya ki

Bhairav - Maine pata lagaya hai ki aapki patni ko unhone kha rakha hai vo log unhe Mahal ke vishes kamre me puri surakchaa ke sath rakha hua hai or ek bat

Yha pr bhairav mujhe bata rha hai ki vha Mahal ke darbar me kya hua magar Mai AAP logo ki sidhe vhi raj darbar hi let chalta hu.

Do sainik Neelam ko pakad kr patalasur ke pas darbar me lekar aate hai .

Sainik - mahraj ki Jai ho mahraj ye ladki prithvi lok se aaye huye us manusy ke sath aayi hai.

Patalasur Neelam ko ek bar dekhte hi mohit ko gye .
Patalasur - sainiko chhodo use inki najuk or gori kalaiyo ko tum Logo ne pakad kr lal hi kr diya hum is ladki ko apni patrani banayenge

Neelam - dust danav Mai ek sadisuda ladki hu meri sadhi ho chuki hai to ye sapne dekhna chhod de .

Patalasur - tum se puch kon rha hai meri jaan Mai tumhe apni patrani to bana kr hi rahunga chahe jabardasti hi kyo na karni padegi .

Ye bol kr patalasur apne singhasan se uth kr Neelam ko chhuna chaha usi samay Neelam ne apne mangalsutra ko hath me lekar kaha

Neelam - ruk jao patalasur agar maine apne pati ke alava kisi or ke bare me socha nhi hai to koi pr purus mujhe hath bhi na laga paye .

Fir jaise hi patalasur ne Neelam ki bato ko ansuna karte huye Neelam ko chhuna chaha to 6 inch ki duri pr hi patalasur ko jhatka lga or vo fir dur ho gya usne do bar or prayas kiya lekin natija vhi hua , patalasur Neelam ko chhu bhi nhi paya tab patalasur gusse me aakar jor se chillaya.

Patalasur - Koi hume batayega ki hum is ladki ko chhu kyo nhi pa rhe hai .
Tab darbar me baithe danvo ke guru ne bataya ki ye ladki Sadisuda hone ke karan iske gale me pada mangalsutra me takat hai jab Tak iska pati jinda hai tab tak aap ise chhu nhi payega ha agar iska pati mar jaye to mangalsutra ki takat bhi khatam ho jayegi.

Patalasur - to fir thik hai iske pati ko marne ke bad hi Mai tumhe apni dasi bataunga ,senpati jao or us manusy ko dhund kr khatm kr do or dasiyo tum log ise lejakar vishes kamre me chhod do or Puri tarah inki hifajat karna

Fir dasiyo ne Neelam ko le ja kr vishes kamre me chhod diya.

Ab aate hai vapas bhairav ke pas jo mujhe mahal me Neelam ke sath kya hua vo bata rha tha.

Mai - meri Neelam ko agar kuch bhi hua to Mai patalasur ko jinda nhi chodunga.

Bhairav - use kuch bhi nhi hoga jab tak aap sahi salamat hai tab tak to patalasur aapki patni ko chhu bhi nhi payega.

Mai - to aage kya karna hai.

Bhairav- hum aaj raat me hi mahal jayenge or aapki patni or pagasas ki sakti ko bhi lekar aayenge.


Fir raat me hum sab ne sath me bhojan kiya or Mahal jane ki taiyari karne lge bhairav ke 20 visvas patr sainik bhi hamare sath the mujhe bhi danvo ke jaisa lagne ke liye vesbhusa ka intjam kiya gya tha jise Mai pahan kr koi mujhe kah nhi sakta tha ki Mai danav nhi hu .

Hum log mahal ki taraf nikal gye fir ek jagah pr ek gufa jaisa bana hua tha hum log masal le kar gufa ke ander gye gye or kuch der chalne ke bad gufa ke aakhri chhor tak pahuche to vha pr divar tha or aage ka rasta band tha tab bhairav aage jakar divar ko hatho se khiskaya to aage ka rasta bn gya ye sidha mahal me khulta tha

Hum log sabhi gufa ko par kr ke ek kamre me khade the vha hum sabhi ne yojna banai ki mahal me moujud sare sainiko ko chup chap dhire se marte jayenge nhi to puri danvi sena jag jayegi hume pahle Neelam ko bachana tha fir bad me pagasas ki sakti hasil karni thi .
Fir hum log dhire se ek ek kr ke kamre se bahar aaye or chhupte huye mahal ke ander ke jitne bhi sainik raste me milte gye unka muh daba kr marte huye aage badhne lage .

Hum log sainiko ko marte huye ek jagah pr pahuche vaha pr mahila sainik the to bhairav ke sath aaye huye sainik aage gye or un mahila sainik se ander jane ke liye puchha tab unhone mahraj ne kisi ko bhi ander jane se mana kiya hai aisa javab diya tab un logo ne mahila sainik ko bhi muh daba kr mar diya tab Mai ander gya to dekha Neelam aaram se so rhi thi tab Mai use hilate huye kaha

Mai - o maharani yha aaram se so rhi ho or Mai tumhe bachane ke liye din raat ek kr rha hu.

Neelam - dhire se aankhe kholi kuch pal to vo mujhe dekhti rhi fir uth kr gale lag gyi or rone lgi .

Neelam - mujhe yha se le chalo mujhe yha nhi rukna hai mai tumhare bagair kaise bitaye hai ye Mai hi janti hu .
Fir maine use sant karaye or kuch sainik ke sath Neelam ko bhairav ke ghar bhej Diya Neelam mujhe chhod kr nhi Jana chahti thi tab maine apni kasam de kr use bheja or kaha ki jald hi Mai sakti le kr aaunga yha khatara ho sakta hai isliye tum chali jao.

Idhar pata nhi palatasur ko kuch aabhas hua or vo uth gya.





 
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