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Raat me der se sone ke karan subah
meri nind nhi khuli vo to jab suman ne darwaza khatkhataya tab jakar meri nind khuli or jab uthne ko hua to dekha ki samita mujhe apne bahon me lekar soi hui hai fir jab yaad aaya ki raat ki dhuadhar chudai ke baad hum dono nange hi so gye the to maine dhire se samita ko apne se alag kiya aur samita ko chadar se dhak kr maine apne kapde pahan liye fir jakar darwaja khola to samne suman ko paya.

suman: kya bat hai raat me kuch jayada hi mehnat kr li thi kya jo abhi tak so rhe ho.

mai : aise koi bat nhi hai vo so aank hi nhi khuli isi liye hai.

suman : mujhe mat sikha raat me tum dono ki aawaje humare room tak aa rhi thi ,chalo koi bat nhi jao ready ho kr aa jao college nhi jana hai kya.

mai: aap chalo mai jaldi se naha dhokr aata hu.

fir mai bathroom chala gaya aur taiyar ho kr dinning table pr aa gaya fir hum teeno ne sath me nasta kiya aur unhe bata diya ki baad ne samita ko utha de unhe bhi bua ke paas jana hai.

Aaj last day tha competition ke liye students ko select krne ka jisme aaj mera boxing ka match bhi tha, isliye mai sandhya ko lekar jaldi se college ke liye nikal gya, bike ko park krne ke bad canteen me chale gaye jaha humare group ke sabhi log baithe huve the aur aaj to kavya bhi sath me hi thi hum bhi unke pas chale gaye sabhi ko wish krne ke baad hum vhi baith gye .

manoj : yaar tiger aaj tumhara boxing me selection hona hai kuch taiyari ki hai ke nhi suna hai ki apne college ka ek banda state champion hai .

sandhya: tiger ko prectice ki koi jarurat hi nhi hai vo aise hi samhal lega.

rachana: fir bhi yaar bhaiya bol rahe hai vo state champion hai to sochna to padta hai .

mai :jo hoga dekha jayega jayda se jayda kya hoga mai haar jaunga aur kya hoga vaise bhi aur dusre sports me to bhag le hi rha hu.
rachana: ha vo to hai.

mai : mere khayal se apne group ke lagbhag sabhi log competition me participate kr rhe hai vaisa lag raha hai .

vinod: ha bhai sahi kaha tum ne apne group ke sabhi log bhag le rhe hai .

neelam : chalo tiger vhi chalte hai jaha boxing ka match hona hai hum bhi jakar dekhte hai us bande ko ki kaissa dikhta hai.

fir hum sab us hall ki taraf chal diye jaha mera boxing ka match hone vala tha vha pr kul char log hi participate kr rhe the sabhi vhi pr moujud the dekhne se hi lg rha tha ki sabhi hatte katte bodybuilder tip lg rhe the dhire dhire vo pura hall students se bhar gya refry bhi ring pr aa gya,


Hum kul char hi log the to 1-1 ko apas me ladaya jana tha (nam to jaruri nahi hai fir bhi likh rha hu)
  1. Rajan (state champion)
  2. Mohan
  3. Tiger
  4. Yogesh
pahlehua un do students ke bich jisme se ek state champion tha 2 mohan vo dono ring me chale gaye or match bell bajte hi start hua.

Mohan ne bhi thodi bahut trening li Hui thi us hisab se vo Rajan ko punch mar rha tha, magar rajan us ke sath khel rha tha rajan thahra state champion koi naya banda us ke samne khilone ke saman tha thode der tak Rajan us ke sath khelta rha fir rajan suru hua aur 7-8 mukke jam ke mare mohan ko fir mohan fir gya ring pr referee 10 tak ginta rha lekin mohan uth nhi paya aur referee ne bell bajva diya isi ke sath rajan rajan.... Bol kr chilane lge .

ab dusra match suru hone vala tha jo ki mere aur Yogesh namak ladke ke sath tha hum dono ring me aa gye mere pith ki tattoo tiger sab ke liye aakrshan ka kendra ban gya tha
dono ne ek dusre ko hath milaya aur referee ne bell bajva kr match start kiya mai pahle round me aisa dikhaya ki mujhe jayda kuch aata hi is liye pahle round ke jayda tar point use lene diye ,jab mai apne side me gya to neelam mujhe pr bhadk gyi ki ye aisa kyo khel rhe ho tab maine use se kah diya ki bas dekhti jao ,fir second round start hua Yogesh mujh pr mukko ki barsat kr di mai use rok rha tha




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Fir maine fir palatvar kr ke maine bhi uske chehre par sine pr mukko ki barsat kr di second round khatam hote tak us ki halat hi kharab ho gyi thi bell bajte hi hum dono apne apne side me aa gaye mere dost mujhe bata rhe the ki ye aakhir round hai aur ise tum jitna hi hoga pr unhe kya pata tha ki mai kuch alag hi soch rha hu , fir tisre round ki bell baji hum dono apni apni position me aa gaye fir maine Yogesh ko ek Jabar dast mukka mara ye mera knockout punch tha jisse vo pichhe ki gir gaya


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Fir referee ne Das tak ginti ginne laga magar vo nhi utha kyo ki vo behos ho gya tha, referee ne bell bajva diya isi ke sath meri jeet ki ghosna hui manoj aur vinod mujhe apne kandhe par utha liya fir hume pata chala ki agla match aadha ghanta baad hai to hum log sabhi canteen me aa gaye vha bhi vo log mujhe samjhane lge ki bhai samhal kr khelna vo state champion hai par jo log mere power ke bare me jante the vo log nischint the aise hi aadha ghanta bit gya hum log ring ke pas aa gaye rajan mujhe hi ghur rha tha .


Rajan: bachche abhi bhi samay hai apna nam vapas le le kyo maar khayega kahi chot vot lag jayegi .

Mai : ring ke andar chalo fir batata hu ki baap hu ya bachcha.

Rajan (jhalla kr ) sale tu ring me to aa tera muh hi pura tod dunga .

Fir hum dono ring ke andar aa gaye aur referee ne bell bajva kr match start karvaya hum dono apni position me aa gye

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referee ke bell bajva diya vha pr jayda se jayda log Rajan Rajan bol kr chilane lge the kyo ki rajan State champion tha or mai normal college boy mai suru se hi attack kr rha tha jisse rajan kuch had tak rokne ki kosis kar raha tha fir bhi mukke use lg rhe the.



Pahle round ke samapt hote tak rajan ki halat buri ho chuki thi second round me maine uski halat aur buri kr di vo ring pr gir gaya



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Referee ginti ginne laga magar vo 8 me hi uth gya referee use tko lene ke liye puchh rhe the magar vo nhi liya aur ladne ke liye taiyar ho gaya fir maine ek jabardast mukka mara

Vijender-Singh-1

Jisse vo ring pr dhadam se gir gaya refree 10 tak ginta rha magar vo uth nhi paya or knockout le diya gya sabhi log tiger tiger bol kr chilane lge maine unka abhivadan svikar kiya


Vijender-Singh-2
Referee ne bell bajva aur mera ek hath pakad kar upar uthaya mera selection final go chuka tha competition ke liye sabhi log mujhe badhai dene lge
damdaar update bhai
 

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Annu bhai plz story ko yad karlo update de do plz
 
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Update ka intizar h Annu bhai
 

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ab jane ki baari meri thi mai bhi Kabaddi Kabaddi bolte huye samne chala gaya pahle to bahar se hi unlogo ko kaise niptana hai vhi soch rha tha fir mai thoda andar gya 2 log mujhe pakadne ke firak me the unlogo ko ghuma kr ek ek kick lagaya tab ek aur mujhe pakadne aa gye mai pichhe jate huve uske sir ko pakad kar crossing line pe la ke patak diya is tarah teen point humare teem ko mile

apne player ko injured dekh kar south ka captain bhi thoda achambhe me pad gya ki ye kya aur kaise ho gya ham dusre team ke player ko injured karte the aur yahan to hamare hi pair injured ho gaye hai tab unka captain apne sabhi player se baat krne laga .

caption-abe ye hai kon jo hamare teem ke player ko injured kr diya pahle to kabhi aise hote nhi suna tha sirf hum hi dusre teem ke player ko injured karte the ye kon aa gaya .

player 1 - anna ye ek boxer hai maine ise boxing ring me dekha tha.

caption- sirf ye ladka hi boxer hai na baki ke player to kuch nahi hai na.

player 1- ha anna sirf ye player bs boxer hai baki ke sabhi lallu panjju hai.

caption- to thik hai is ladke se bach kar rahna hai baki ke player ko target kro aur hamhal kr khelna.

ab unke taraf se ek player aaya pahle to home line ko hi touch nahin kar raha tha fir vo andar aaya main Manoj aur Vinod ko Ishara kar diya tha Jo ek ek Kone mein Khade the main bich mein tha vo player mere se thoda dur hi rah raha tha jab uska dhayan dusre taraf gya tab mai furti se niche jhuk kar uske ek pair ko ek laat maari vo chikh pata us se pahle hi manoj aur vinod ke sath baki ke sabhi player us pr kud gye vo dab kr dard se chhat pata rha tha jab refree ne siti bajai tab jakar use chhoda .

ab humari taraf se manoj gya vo koi player ko bahar to nhi kiya lekin bonas point lekar vapas aa gaya ab south ki teem se khud unka captain aaya vo jaise hi Kabaddi Kabaddi bolte huye idhar aaya usi time vinod ne meri taraf dekhte huve kaha bhai ab iska kya todna hai , tabhi vinod ne kaha tiger iska bhi hath pair tod dete hai .

manoj -mujhe to iski naak hi pasand nahi hai mai to kahta hu iski naak hi tod do .

ye sunkar wo south ka captain dar gya vo humara home line hi touch nhi kr paya aur vapas ho gya tab refree ne use bahar ka rasta dikha fir vinod gya vo bhi ek player ko bahar kr ke aa gya aise hi humari team badhat banati chali gayi aur hum 20-05se jeet gye , jeetne ke baad sabhi ne hume badhai di uske baad hum canteen ki taraf chale gaye .

Canteen me gye to vha alag hi mudda suru ho gya ,
kavya- Kabaddi bhi tum jeet gye ab kal ke baare me bhi socho,kal humara dance hai ki uski bhi taiyari shuru krni hai aur sab se pahla kam ye hai ki hume kal ke liye dress lena jaruri hai .

neelam- ha tum sahi kah rhi ho kavya, aur sabse pahle to hume kal ke liye dress bhi chahiye to kyo na college ke baad shopping pr chale.

kavya good idea.
 

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nice update bro
but itna late update doge to story hi dimag se out hone lgti h
 
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