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baadshah ki baat sunkar vajir ko apne bete ki chinta hone lagi agar sach me ye vhi talwar hai tab to mere bete ki jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai.



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Us talwar me kitni takat hai ye to mujhe bhi nahi pata tha.

ab maidan me mai aur jafar aamne sanme the abhi jafar bhi hum insan ki tarah normal roop me hi tha us ne bhi talwar pakad rakhi thi, charo taraf jinn lok ki janta ka shor tha.


fir mukabla suru hua jafar ne pahla waar kiya jise maine sirf roka hi tha lekin mere talwar se takrate hi uski talwar do tukdo me bat gyi ye dekh kar sare jinn lok ki janta ka shor tham sa gya jafar kabhi mujhe dekhta to kabhi apni talwar ko fir usne apni talwar ko phek kr apne jaadu se dusri talwar le li lekin uska bhi natija vhi hua jo uski purani talwar ka hua tha aise hi usne 4-5 alag alag prakar ke talwar se mujhe pr waar kiya parantu un sabhi ka ek hi hasar hua vo do tukdo me kat jata tha ab jafar ka dimag kharab ho gaya tab usne apne aap ko jinn roop me badal liya jo mujhe se kai guna ucha aur bada ho gaya aur has rha tha jaise mujhe chidha rha ho ki dekho mai tum se kitna bal sali hu ,mai to pahle se hi janta tha ki jinno ko pass bahut hi takat hoti hai jisse vo kuch bhi kr sakte hai isliye mujhe koi aascharya nahi hua uske bade hone se.

jafar: (apne maan me) ye to mujh se dar hi nahi rha hai abhi isko dikhata hu jinno me kinta dam hota hai.

fir jafar me mujh par apne hath se aag barsane laga ,aag itni jayda aur tej thi ki kisi ko bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha sab ko yhi laga ki mai aag me jal jaunga suman bhi jor se tiger...chillati hui apne jagah se khadi ho gayi thi ,fir jab jafar ne aag uglna band kiya aur mujhe sahi salamat pa kr sab ko aascharya hua suman ne bhi rahat ki sas li ,

jafar ka gussa ab badhne laga to usne apne jaadu se ek badi si chattan apne haathon mein le liya.

chattan ko dekh kar mai apne maan me sochne laga ki aag to mera kuch nahi bigad payi us se to mai bach gaya pr ab is chattan se kaise bachu asal me vo jafar ke liye chattan tha pr mere liye to vo ek pahad se kam nhi tha main maan hi maan bhagwan ko yaad kiya aur kaha ki he bhagwan ye pahad mujh tak pahuchne se pahle hi nast ho jaye mai ye soch kar mai apni talwar ko pahad ki taraf kr diya .


jafar ne vo chattan meri taraf fek diya tabhi achanak meri talwar se jor dar aawaj ke sath bijli niklti hai aur sidhe chattan se takrati hai natija ye hua ki ek tej visfort ke sath chattan chaknachur ho gaya .

ye dekh kar sab achambhit the mai bhi kyonki mujhe khud hi nhi pata tha ki meri talwar me itni takat hai.

jafar ka gussa ab badhne laga sath hi use dar bhi lag raha tha ki kahi sach me vo jayda takat var to nhi ,jafar ne mujhe pakdne ke liye apne hath ko aage badhaya tab mai hava me udte huv hi uski pahuch se bahar ho gaya .

jab mai udte huv uske sir ke samne aaya tab vo mujhe pakdne ke liye hava me hi hath ghumane laga magar meri speed jayda thi jis karan mai uske hath hi nahi aa raha tha tab maine bhi teji se udte huv ghum ghum kr apni talwar se uske sarir me chote chote cut dene laga kabhi hath me kabhi pair me to kabhi kandhe,ghutne,aur galo pr ab uske sarir ke har hisse se khun bahne lge, jisse jafar ko aur bhi gussa aane laga aur isi gusse se vo tilmila kr apne kale jaadu ko jaga diya.


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Jisse vo aur bhi jayda bhayanak dikhne laga charo taraf sor hone laga kyonki ki jinno ki is duniya me kala jadu karna gunah tha.

JAfar ne jab kalajadu ko jagaya tab mousam bhi change ho gaya tha charo taraf andhera hi andhera tha tab mai bhi vapas jamin me aa kar khada ho gya.


jafar ne apne kalejadu se baat k ajib hi prakar ka hathiyar apne hath me le liya aur meri taraf feka mai is bat se anjan tha kyonki andhere ke karan mujhe kuch bhi dikhai nhi de rha tha .

vo hathiyar mujhe lagti us se pahle hi vo kisi chiz se takra kr ek visfort ho gyi aur us se ek tej rosni Hui us rosni me maine dekha ki koi mere samne aa kr khada tha.....
 
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Update 170


baadshah ki baat sunkar vajir ko apne bete ki chinta hone lagi agar sach me ye vhi talwar hai tab to mere bete ki jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai.



images
Us talwar me kitni takat hai ye to mujhe bhi nahi pata tha.

ab maidan me mai aur jafar aamne sanme the abhi jafar bhi hum insan ki tarah normal roop me hi tha us ne bhi talwar pakad rakhi thi, charo taraf jinn lok ki janta ka shor tha.


fir mukabla suru hua jafar ne pahla waar kiya jise maine sirf roka hi tha lekin mere talwar se takrate hi uski talwar do tukdo me bat gyi ye dekh kar sare jinn lok ki janta ka shor tham sa gya jafar kabhi mujhe dekhta to kabhi apni talwar ko fir usne apni talwar ko phek kr apne jaadu se dusri talwar le li lekin uska bhi natija vhi hua jo uski purani talwar ka hua tha aise hi usne 4-5 alag alag prakar ke talwar se mujhe pr waar kiya parantu un sabhi ka ek hi hasar hua vo do tukdo me kat jata tha ab jafar ka dimag kharab ho gaya tab usne apne aap ko jinn roop me badal liya jo mujhe se kai guna ucha aur bada ho gaya aur has rha tha jaise mujhe chidha rha ho ki dekho mai tum se kitna bal sali hu ,mai to pahle se hi janta tha ki jinno ko pass bahut hi takat hoti hai jisse vo kuch bhi kr sakte hai isliye mujhe koi aascharya nahi hua uske bade hone se.

jafar: (apne maan me) ye to mujh se dar hi nahi rha hai abhi isko dikhata hu jinno me kinta dam hota hai.

fir jafar me mujh par apne hath se aag barsane laga ,aag itni jayda aur tej thi ki kisi ko bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha sab ko yhi laga ki mai aag me jal jaunga suman bhi jor se tiger...chillati hui apne jagah se khadi ho gayi thi ,fir jab jafar ne aag uglna band kiya aur mujhe sahi salamat pa kr sab ko aascharya hua suman ne bhi rahat ki sas li ,

jafar ka gussa ab badhne laga to usne apne jaadu se ek badi si chattan apne haathon mein le liya.

chattan ko dekh kar mai apne maan me sochne laga ki aag to mera kuch nahi bigad payi us se to mai bach gaya pr ab is chattan se kaise bachu asal me vo jafar ke liye chattan tha pr mere liye to vo ek pahad se kam nhi tha main maan hi maan bhagwan ko yaad kiya aur kaha ki he bhagwan ye pahad mujh tak pahuchne se pahle hi nast ho jaye mai ye soch kar mai apni talwar ko pahad ki taraf kr diya .


jafar ne vo chattan meri taraf fek diya tabhi achanak meri talwar se jor dar aawaj ke sath bijli niklti hai aur sidhe chattan se takrati hai natija ye hua ki ek tej visfort ke sath chattan chaknachur ho gaya .

ye dekh kar sab achambhit the mai bhi kyonki mujhe khud hi nhi pata tha ki meri talwar me itni takat hai.

jafar ka gussa ab badhne laga sath hi use dar bhi lag raha tha ki kahi sach me vo jayda takat var to nhi ,jafar ne mujhe pakdne ke liye apne hath ko aage badhaya tab mai hava me udte huv hi uski pahuch se bahar ho gaya .

jab mai udte huv uske sir ke samne aaya tab vo mujhe pakdne ke liye hava me hi hath ghumane laga magar meri speed jayda thi jis karan mai uske hath hi nahi aa raha tha tab maine bhi teji se udte huv ghum ghum kr apni talwar se uske sarir me chote chote cut dene laga kabhi hath me kabhi pair me to kabhi kandhe,ghutne,aur galo pr ab uske sarir ke har hisse se khun bahne lge, jisse jafar ko aur bhi gussa aane laga aur isi gusse se vo tilmila kr apne kale jaadu ko jaga diya.


41310734-1079754275538878-3576099313790484480-n


Jisse vo aur bhi jayda bhayanak dikhne laga charo taraf sor hone laga kyonki ki jinno ki is duniya me kala jadu karna gunah tha.

JAfar ne jab kalajadu ko jagaya tab mousam bhi change ho gaya tha charo taraf andhera hi andhera tha tab mai bhi vapas jamin me aa kar khada ho gya.


jafar ne apne kalejadu se baat k ajib hi prakar ka hathiyar apne hath me le liya aur meri taraf feka mai is bat se anjan tha kyonki andhere ke karan mujhe kuch bhi dikhai nhi de rha tha .

vo hathiyar mujhe lagti us se pahle hi vo kisi chiz se takra kr ek visfort ho gyi aur us se ek tej rosni Hui us rosni me maine dekha ki koi mere amne aa kr khada tha.....
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Update 170


baadshah ki baat sunkar vajir ko apne bete ki chinta hone lagi agar sach me ye vhi talwar hai tab to mere bete ki jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai.



images
Us talwar me kitni takat hai ye to mujhe bhi nahi pata tha.

ab maidan me mai aur jafar aamne sanme the abhi jafar bhi hum insan ki tarah normal roop me hi tha us ne bhi talwar pakad rakhi thi, charo taraf jinn lok ki janta ka shor tha.


fir mukabla suru hua jafar ne pahla waar kiya jise maine sirf roka hi tha lekin mere talwar se takrate hi uski talwar do tukdo me bat gyi ye dekh kar sare jinn lok ki janta ka shor tham sa gya jafar kabhi mujhe dekhta to kabhi apni talwar ko fir usne apni talwar ko phek kr apne jaadu se dusri talwar le li lekin uska bhi natija vhi hua jo uski purani talwar ka hua tha aise hi usne 4-5 alag alag prakar ke talwar se mujhe pr waar kiya parantu un sabhi ka ek hi hasar hua vo do tukdo me kat jata tha ab jafar ka dimag kharab ho gaya tab usne apne aap ko jinn roop me badal liya jo mujhe se kai guna ucha aur bada ho gaya aur has rha tha jaise mujhe chidha rha ho ki dekho mai tum se kitna bal sali hu ,mai to pahle se hi janta tha ki jinno ko pass bahut hi takat hoti hai jisse vo kuch bhi kr sakte hai isliye mujhe koi aascharya nahi hua uske bade hone se.

jafar: (apne maan me) ye to mujh se dar hi nahi rha hai abhi isko dikhata hu jinno me kinta dam hota hai.

fir jafar me mujh par apne hath se aag barsane laga ,aag itni jayda aur tej thi ki kisi ko bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha sab ko yhi laga ki mai aag me jal jaunga suman bhi jor se tiger...chillati hui apne jagah se khadi ho gayi thi ,fir jab jafar ne aag uglna band kiya aur mujhe sahi salamat pa kr sab ko aascharya hua suman ne bhi rahat ki sas li ,

jafar ka gussa ab badhne laga to usne apne jaadu se ek badi si chattan apne haathon mein le liya.

chattan ko dekh kar mai apne maan me sochne laga ki aag to mera kuch nahi bigad payi us se to mai bach gaya pr ab is chattan se kaise bachu asal me vo jafar ke liye chattan tha pr mere liye to vo ek pahad se kam nhi tha main maan hi maan bhagwan ko yaad kiya aur kaha ki he bhagwan ye pahad mujh tak pahuchne se pahle hi nast ho jaye mai ye soch kar mai apni talwar ko pahad ki taraf kr diya .


jafar ne vo chattan meri taraf fek diya tabhi achanak meri talwar se jor dar aawaj ke sath bijli niklti hai aur sidhe chattan se takrati hai natija ye hua ki ek tej visfort ke sath chattan chaknachur ho gaya .

ye dekh kar sab achambhit the mai bhi kyonki mujhe khud hi nhi pata tha ki meri talwar me itni takat hai.

jafar ka gussa ab badhne laga sath hi use dar bhi lag raha tha ki kahi sach me vo jayda takat var to nhi ,jafar ne mujhe pakdne ke liye apne hath ko aage badhaya tab mai hava me udte huv hi uski pahuch se bahar ho gaya .

jab mai udte huv uske sir ke samne aaya tab vo mujhe pakdne ke liye hava me hi hath ghumane laga magar meri speed jayda thi jis karan mai uske hath hi nahi aa raha tha tab maine bhi teji se udte huv ghum ghum kr apni talwar se uske sarir me chote chote cut dene laga kabhi hath me kabhi pair me to kabhi kandhe,ghutne,aur galo pr ab uske sarir ke har hisse se khun bahne lge, jisse jafar ko aur bhi gussa aane laga aur isi gusse se vo tilmila kr apne kale jaadu ko jaga diya.


41310734-1079754275538878-3576099313790484480-n


Jisse vo aur bhi jayda bhayanak dikhne laga charo taraf sor hone laga kyonki ki jinno ki is duniya me kala jadu karna gunah tha.

JAfar ne jab kalajadu ko jagaya tab mousam bhi change ho gaya tha charo taraf andhera hi andhera tha tab mai bhi vapas jamin me aa kar khada ho gya.


jafar ne apne kalejadu se baat k ajib hi prakar ka hathiyar apne hath me le liya aur meri taraf feka mai is bat se anjan tha kyonki andhere ke karan mujhe kuch bhi dikhai nhi de rha tha .

vo hathiyar mujhe lagti us se pahle hi vo kisi chiz se takra kr ek visfort ho gyi aur us se ek tej rosni Hui us rosni me maine dekha ki koi mere samne aa kr khada tha.....
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