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Fantasy THE TIME MACHINE .........ACTION SCIENCE FICTION THRILLER

Mayaviguru

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..Episode 6
Jab tak machine ban nahi gayi gaurav ka man hamesha hi use rokne ki koshish karta tha. Gaurav ko to ab ye lagne laga tha ki uska man aur wo do alag-alag insaan hai jinki aapas mai behas hamesha chalti rehti hai. Gaurav ko pata hi nahi tha ki Uske man mai aise khayal kyu aate hai jabki wo machine banane ke liye maansik aur sharirik dono tarah se drid tha.

Kuch din baad...
Machine taiyar ho chuki thi bas ab use test karna baaki tha.
''Mai jaunga test karne..'' gaurav ne dridta se kaha.
''tu pagal ho gaya hai kya?? Kuch gadbad ho gayi to??'' sarang ne chintit hote huye kaha.
''Abe kuch nahi hoga.. machine sahi hi bani hai..'' gaurav poori tarah ashvast tha.
''To mai bhi sath chaloonga..'' sarang ne kaha.
''Lekin phir bhi machine test to karni hi chahiye..'' balwinder bhi pehle machine ko kaam karte dekhna chahta tha.
''lekin machine mai remote control system nahi hai.. kisi na kisi ko machine ko ander se hi operate karna hoga..'' gaurav ne kaha.
''Ek kaam karte hai.. machine ko 1 ghanta peeche le jate hai aur 2 second ka return timer set karte hai..
Agar machine ne kaam kiya to wo 2 second mai hi laut ayegi aur agar nahi to Andar wala banda bas 1 ghanta hi samay mai peeche rahega..'' sarang ne idea diya.
''Idea to achha hai.. lekin machine ko test mai hi karunga..'' gaurav bola.
''Chal theek hai.. best of luck..'' sarang ne usse kaha.
''Best of luck buddy..'' balwinder ne bhi use best of luck kaha aur gaurav machine ke control area mai ghus gaya aur gate band kar liya.
Machine dekhne mai badi ajeeb thi. Uske dono side par bade-bade antenna lage the aur peeche tachyons wali machines ke prototype lage the. Beech mai control area tha jisme ek chair thi aur Uske aage control board tha. Gaurav ne control board par maujood ek touch-screen par 1 ghanta pehle ka time set kiya yani 2 July 2021 1:47 P.M. aur return timer 2 second par set kiya. Uske baad kuch sochkar location set kar di.

Iske baad usne 'Go!' button ko jaise hi dabaya poori machine hilne lagi. Aur phir kuch hi seconds ke baad machine achanak hawa mai gayab ho gayi.
Sarang aur balwinder ankhe faad faad kar us jagah ko dekh rahe the jaha abhi thodi der pehle time-machine khadi thi.
Lekin wo abhi us jagah ko ghoor hi rahe the ki machine usi tarah hawa mai se achanak prakat ho gayi jaise gayab hui thi.
Andar gaurav vismay sa baitha tha. Jab machine ke control area ka gate kholkar dono ander ghuse to gaurav ekdum se chillyaya-
''Ye kaam karti hai.. ye sach mai kaam karti hai..''
''Achhaaa....'' dono ascharya aur khushi se ek sath bole.
''Kya dekha tune?? Machine kaha par le gayi thi?? Matlab lab mai hi thi ya kahi aur?? Hume to yaad nahi ki ghanta ghar pehle humne machine hawa mai se paida hoti dekhi ho??'' Balwinder ne ek hi saans mai saare sawal pooch liye.
''Relax.. bhai.. sab batata hu..'' gaurav ne kaha aur gheri saans lekar phir bola, ''machine hamare hostel ke room mai le gayi thi.. wo bhi ghanta bhar pehle ke..''
''Lekin waha kaise pahunch gayi?? Machine lab mai hi kyu nahi aayi?? Aur tujhe kaise malum wo ghanta bhar pehle ka hi room tha??'' sarang ne bhi ek hi saans li poori baat kehne ke liye.
''Kyuki maine hi wo location set ki thi.. tumhe to pata hi hai ki is lab mai koi wall clock nahi hai..
Time janne ke liye hi maine room ki location set ki thi.. aur waha pahunchte hi sabse pehle wall clock par hi najar ghumayi.. ab agar yaha lab mai hi aata to time kaise pata lagta wo bhi sirf 2 seconds mai hi??'' Gaurav ne samjhaya.
''Chalo.. koi baat nahi.. machine kaam kar rahi hai isse achhi baat aur kya ho sakti hai.. chalo papa ke paas chalte hai aur machine banne ki khushkhabri unhe sunate hai..'' sarang ne sari baat jaan kar tasalli se kaha.

''Rukkkoooo.....'' isse pehle gaurav kuch bolta peeche se aayi balwinder ki jordar awaaj ne uske kadam aur honth dono rok diye.
Peeche mudkar dekha to balwinder un par revolver taane khada tha.
to be continued...
 

Hunterrrr69

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Bahut hi shandar story choose kri hai Bhai Apne
But maffi chahunga Bhai ISS story ko choddne ke liye bcz as u I am hunterr to happy ending Jada psnd hai mujhe Nd ISS story ki nhi hogi I know that sorry u keep it on
Mayaviguru
 

Siraj Patel

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Hello, Ladies :kiss: & Gentleman, :hi:
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur
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Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur
Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.


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Nevil singh

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Bhai log sarvapratham ye khani meri ekdum nhi hainamere ko credit chahiye.....iska writer niks77kill hai aur ye bhaisahab kha hai mujhe nhi pta inki ye story aj se 4 saalpehle aayi thi and bhagwan ki kripa se ye completed bhi hai....mere pass is story ke sare updates hai...jinki sankhya 8 haiaur ye ek gazab ki story hai...agar aap log ki aagya ho to isko yha post kr du....
mujhe pta hai meri tin stories already ruuning hai... but mujhe isko regular post krne mai koi dikkat nhi hai kyoki ek to english font mai already hai aur dusra mujhe koi edit nhi krna hai isme.......
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Nevil singh

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Nevil singh

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Kya Time-Travel sambhav hai?? Kya koi samay mai peeche jakar apna past badal sakta hai.
Ye kahani aise hi ek insaan ki kahani hai jisne ek hadse mai apna pyar kho diya aur phir use wapas pane ke liye time-machine tak bana dali.
Kaun dost hai aur kaun dushman ye har mod par equation badalte rahenge.
Lekin kya apna pyar wo wapas paa saka?? Sazisho se bhari ye kahani aap jarur padhiye jiske har mod par haii ek naya twist.
Aapke sochne ka tarika badal degi ye kahani.
durdrishtita
 

Nevil singh

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1. Kawya Dies
Episode 1

Gaurav aaj phir let ho gaya tha lekin ye koi
nai baat nahi thi. Wo hamesha se hi let-Latif tha aur
aalsi bhi lekin bechara aadat se majboor tha. Uske
dosto ko bi ashcharya hota tha ki itna aalsi insaan
quantum physics ka genius Kaise ho sakta hai aur
kaise kawya jaisi ladki usse se impress ho gai.
Gaurav ka room-partner aur uska jigri yaar tha
sarang Jo khud bi quantum physics mai champion
tha magar gaurav to jaise maa ke pate se hi physics
seekh kar aaya tha.
Sarang ne gaurav ko jaldi-jaldi taiyaar hote hue
dekha to apni hansi rok na paya aur use chidate hue
bola, ''beta, aaj to tu kawya se maar khakar hi
rahega. Pata nai kawya jaisi ladki tujh jaise ghonchu
se kaise pyar kar baithi.''
''kamine... to bas yehi sochio... saale dost hai ya
dushman.''
''sahi hi to keh raha hu. Usne tujhe 8 baje Milne ko
kaha tha aur tune 8:15 to yaha hostel mai hi Baja
diye. Sach mai bhai, agar kawya meri gf hoti to use
mai apni nazro se kabhi door hi nai karta.''
Sarang sach hi to kah raha tha. Kawya jitni sunder
aur masum shayad hi koi ladki hogi is duniya mai
magar uski achhi kahe ya buri kismat ki wo gaurav
pe fida thi. Halanki gaurav mai koi khami nai thi. Wo
handsome tha, well-behaved tha, genius tha magar
aalsi bhi tha jis karan kawya usse kai baar naraz bi
ho chuki thi lekin bechara aadat ka maara tha.
Lekin aaj uski let-latifi usko kitni bhari padne wali
thi iska andaja bhi gaurav ko nahi tha.
Jaldi se taiyaar hokar jab wo kareeb 9:15 par green-wood mall pahuncha to waha kawya use nai dikhi.
Usne use phone kiya to phone switch-off jaa raha
tha.
Wo use aas-pass dhoondne laga magar wo kahi
nahi dikhi. Pareshan hokar wo yeh soch kar wapas
jaane laga k kawya usse buri tarah naraz hokar
wapas ghar chali gayi hai aur isiliye phone bhi
switch-off kar rakha hai.
Wo apni bike taken pahuncha hi tha k use kuch shor
sunayi diya. Janne k liye ki maajra kya h wah usi
taraf chal pada.
Waha kafi bheed jama thi jo kisi cheez ko ghere hue
khadi thi. Bheed ko cheerkar jab wo andar ghusa to
uski ankhe phati ki phati reh gai aur uski taango
jawab de diya. Waha kawya ki khoon se lathpath
laash padi thi.
Thodi hi der mai police aa gayi jisse use saari
ghatna ka Pata chala. Kawya jab intejaar karte karte
thak gayi aur vapas jaa rahi thi to ek gunde ne use
rok liya aur uske saath jabardasti karne laga. Jab
kawya ne uska virodh kiya to usne kawya ko goli
maar di.
Police se saari kahani sunkar gaurav phoot-phoot
kar rone laga aur apni let-latifi ko kosne laga.
Tab tak sarang bhi waha aa chuka tha aur kawya k
parents bhi. Sarang k liye apne dost ko samhalna
mushkil ho raha tha isliye wo use apne saath wapas
hostel le aaya.
Gaurav ab ro nai raha tha magar kuch bol bhi nahi
raha tha. Room mai bhi wo khamosh hi apne bed pe
pada raha.
Achanak wo bola ''Bhai mai mar jaunga uske bina.
Muje kawya wapas chahiye.''
Sarang ki ankh mai bhi aansu aa gaye,''Apne aap ko
samhal gaurav, wo ab kabhi wapas nai ayegi.''
''Muje kawya wapas chahiye.'' Gaurav ne ek hi rat
laga rakhi thi.
Sarang ne uski manodisha ko sochkar usse jyada
behes nai ki aur side palatkar so gaya.
Agle din gaurav jaldi taiyaar hokar kahi nikal gaya
aur shaam ko hi lauta kuch books k sath.
Uske aate hi sarang bola, ''police ne us kutte ko
pakad liya.''
''ohhh....''
''tujhe khushi nai hui???''
''kya fayda? Meri kawya to chali gai.''
''Haaa... magar phir bhi...''
''Bhai, meri ek madad karega?''
''kya???''
''Muje kawya wapas chahiye aur use wapas laane
ke liye mujhe teri madad chahiye.''
''tu pagal ho gaya hai kya? Kawya mar chuki hai, wo
ab kabhi wapas nahi ayegi.''
''mai use wapas laa sakta hu.''
''kaise?''
Kuch der chup rehne ke baad gaurav bola, ''Time-machine se....''
laajwaab update.
 
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