Fantasy The Untold Story of Devil ( Romance,Nafrat,Thrill)

[crazyrex]

Very nice update

 

[Black water]

Nice update bhai

 

[Black water]

good update but regularly update doge to hi anna vara story close kardo we know life me problems hogi sab ki he par ek message nahi kuch nai 1 y do update do phir gayab pls start if you want to continue or else leave

I agree with you bhai

 

[Siraa]

good update but regularly update doge to hi anna vara story close kardo we know life me problems hogi sab ki he par ek message nahi kuch nai 1 y do update do phir gayab pls start if you want to continue or else leave

Thanks bhai, Daily updates nhi de sakta due to my profession but week mai 3 - 4 update jrur dunga..

 

[Siraa]

Nice update bhai

Thanks bhai

 

[Siraa]

Very nice update

Thank you bro

 

[Vipul]

Update 7:​

Rudra kuch bolta usse phle he Vihaan waha se gayab ho jata hai aur samya chakar ruk jata hai aur waha koi prakat hota hai. Jisse dkh kar Rudra aur Ragav ek baar gabra jate hai aur apne ghunto pae baith jate h.
ab aage:


Rudra: parnam tridev.


Tridev: aaushman bahv.


Rudra: hum dhanya hog aye apke puna dharshan karke.


Tridev: aap jante he hai hum yha kyu aae hai?


Rudra: maffi tridev parntu mujhe gayat nhi aap ke aane ka karan.


Tridev: (gusse mai) mai apko uss vachan se pune awgat karwane aaye jo apne aur Vihaan ne liya tha. Aur Ragav apne uss vachan ko toda hai.


Ragav: (gabra kar) mujhe shama karde tridev.


Tridev: nhi hum apko shaman hi kar skte. Iska dand apko dono ko milega.


Rudra gusse se Ragav ki trf dekhta h aur bolta h


Rudra: parntu tridev isme humari koi galti nhi hai, humme tho iss bare mai kuch malum nhi tha.


Tridev: fir bhi saja tum dono ko milegi. Aur tumari saja ye h ki jo duwaesh tumne Vihaan ke prati Rajkumari ke man maid ala h wo mit jaega.


Rudra: (gabra kar) nahi tridev isse tho pralye aa jaega agar usne raj kumari ko sab yaad dila diya tho tho aur Vihaan hum devtao ka vinash kar dega.


Tridev: Rudra Vihaan ne vachan diya hai ki wo rajkumari ko kuch yaad nhi dilwaega jab tak rajkumari ko kud kuch yaad nhi aa jata.


Ragav: wo bhi tho apna vachan tod sakta? (Gusse mai)


Tridev: wo apne vachan ko apna dhram samjta h aur humme ye apse janne ki jrurt nhi hai.


Itna khne ke bad tridev chale jate h aur samya chakar fir se chlne lagta hai.


Kon h Vihaan kyu usko Devil khte hai aur kon h rajkumari aur unke bich kya rista hai.


Flashback start:


10,000 saal phle do rajya the. Phla Inderpur jaha Angels ka was tha dusra Yampuri jaha Devil ya rakshako ka was tha. In dono rajyo ke bich ek jangle tha jiska naam Ganghorvan tha jisse aaj hum log Mumbai khte hai.


Yampuri aur Inderpur mai aksar yud hota rhta tha jisme kabhi Devta jeet te ya kbhi Devil.


Yampuri ke raja ek neek dil shasak the aur apni praja ka bhut dhyan rhte the parntu unka koi vansaj nhi tha issi baat ka gum unhe rhta tha. Ek din we apni samyah ko lekar unke Rajguru ke paas gaye aur bole


Intro of Devil King and Queen:


Andhkasur: Devil king h har trah ki sudh sheli mai nipun. Ek nek dil raja, apni paraja ko apne bache ki trf mante the. Har kisi ki madad karte.


Mantha: Devil queen bhut he kubsurat jo bhi dkhe inka diwana ho jae. Apne pati se bhut prem karti hai. Chakarvayh sheli mai nipun.




Back to story :


Rajguru: aaie maharaj aur maharani apka swagat h, aur batie kaise aana hua


Andhkasur: (unke paao chute hue) Rajguru aap tho jante h, humari taklif ko?


Rajguru: hum jante h rajan.


Mantha: Rajguru uska koi upay batae.


Andhkasur: Aur rajguru rajya ko yuvraaj ki bhi avshakta bhi hai.


Rajguru: Andka tumare jivan mai santaan ka sukh nahi hai.


Mantha: koi aur rasta tho hoga guruwar?


Rajguru: ek hai. Parntu wo bhut kathin h.


Andhkasur aur Mantha: hume sab majur h guruwar.


Rajguru: thik h apko Ganghor Vaan mai jana hoga aur Tridev ko Parsan karna hoga.


Andhkasur: jaise apki aagya gurudev.


Itna kha kar Andhka aur Mantha chale jate h aur Van mai jane ki trayari karte hai.


Inderpur: Angels ka rajya. Ye rajya Yampuri se bhi sampan aur kushal tha yaha ke raja apni parja ki madad karte the aur unko apne bacho ki tarh mante the.


Intro of Angels


Rajdeep: Lord of angles Andhka ki trah har sudh sheli mai nipun. Devils ne nafrat karte hai aur unko ktam karna chte hai. Apni paraja ko bache ki tarh smajte hai.


Avanti: Queen of Angels apne do bacho aur pati se bhut prem kari hai. Jada tar apne dono bache ke sath rahti hai aur bala ki khubsurat ye yaha ke rajguru ki putri hai.


Rudra: Rajdeep aur Avanti ka bada beta. Yuvraaj ko Angels. Inko Tridev ka vardaan h inke kilaf yudh mai koi nhi jeet sakta siwae uske jaike paas Tridev ki di hui shakti ho.


Ragav: Rajdeep aur Avanti ke dusre bete. Ye abhi yudh sheli mai mahir hona sikh rahe h apne bade bhai ki trah.


Back to story:


Rajdeep aur Avanti ko ek beti ki chah thi. Jiko lekar dono kafi pareshan bhi rhete aur dono bhai bhi unse jid karte ki unhe ek behan chaie.


Andhkasur ki trf:


Dono ne jungle mai janne ki tayri kar li thi aur Rajguru ko karya Raja ghoshit karke van mai chale gye aur van mai ganghor tapsya karne lage parntu unki yeh tapsya jaldi he purn hone wali thi kuch saalo bad Unke samne Tridev parkart hue aur unne vardaan mange ko kaha.


Mantha: Parbu hume kuch nahi chaie bas meri cock hari kar dejiye.


Tridev: ..........


Jisse sunke Andhkasur aur Mantha ke hosh udd jate hai.
(sorry bhaiyo short update ke liye, esa kya kha Tridev ne aur kya raaj h ganghorvan mai jaha koi nhi jata siwae kuch logo ke janne ke liye sath banne rahie)

Bhai as main silent reader hun but bohot jald story ko cover kar lunga magar main bas itana kehana chahata hun ki story kafi achhi hain magar kuchh word galat ho jate hain jisse story padhane ka flow vivad jata hain to apane word aur writing par dhyan do thoda sa aur fir se yahi kahunga story kafi achchhi hain

 

[Vipul]

Ohh...
Congrats bhai aur story kafi achhi thi

 

[Vipul]

Update 9:​

Rajguru: Maharaj apki purti bhut he bagya shali h ye vishv vijeta ki sangni bnaegi aur iska naam “Aishani” hoga.


Rajdeep aur Avanti ye suneke kush ho jate hai. Parntu uske bad jo Rjguru khte h usse sunkar dono Pareshan ho jate hai.

ab aage:



Rajguru: Rajdeep tumari putri ka vivah kisi angel se nhi Devil se hoga.


Rajdeep: ye nhi ho sakta gurudev.


Rajguru: ye he satya h aur tum dono ye satya jitni jaldi ho sake manlo.


Itna kha kar rajguru chale jate aur piche dono preshan aur heraan hote hai. Unko dkh kar Rudra apne pitah ke pass jake unke pareshan hone ka karan puchta h aur Rajdeep usko sab bata deta h.


Rudra: (gusse mai) esa nahi ho sakta?


Rajdeep: hum kuch nahi kar skate putar.


Rudra: aap nhi kar skate par mai tho kar skata hu.


Rajdeep: kya karoge tum?


Rudra: aap bhul rahe h pita ji mujhe kya vardaan prapt hai.


Rajdeep:: hum jante h putar. Parntu hum maha shukar gran se phlae yudh nahi kar sakte aur maha shukar ghran mai abhi 3 saal h.


Rudra: parntu pitaji tab tak hum yudh ki tyari tho kar skate hai.


Rajdeep: thik h Rudra yudh ki tyari karo.


Hero side:


Isis tarh 3 saal bit jate hai aur Vihaan ke vaan mai jane ka samya aa jata h .


Andhka: aaj humare putar ko vaan mai jaana hoga.


Mantha: nahi mai apne putar ko kahi nhi jane dungi.


Andhka: jane tho hum bhi nahi dena chate parntu uske jivan ke liye yeh avashak hai.


Iske bad Mantha kuch nhi bolti aur Andhka Rajguru ko bula kar Vihaan ko unko soump dete hai aur Unko har samyah Vihaan ke sath rhne ke liye khte hai.


Rajguru Vihaan ko lekar vaan mai chale jate hai aur piche Mantha ro-ro kar apna bura haal kar leti hai.


Dusri tarf:


Aishani aaj 3 saal ki ho gayi h Rudra aur Ragav usko ek shank e liye bhi nhi chote uske sath khelna usko apne hatho se bojan karwana sab dono bhai he karte hai.


Aishani in dono ko he apna maa – baap samjti thi aur kisi ke paas nhi jati thai. Parntu aaj Vihaan aur Aishani ke liye bhut bada din tha. Aishani ko bojan karwa ke Rudra apne pita ke kaksh mai jata hai jaha unke sath Rajguru bhi the.


Rudra: Pitaji aaj Shukar gran samapt ho chukka hai aura b hume jld se jld akraman karna chaie.


Rajguru: nahi Rudra hum abhi akarman nhi kar sakte.


Rajdeep: kyu nhi kar sakte gurudev?


Rajguru: kyuki samyah humare anukul nhi h aur jo tumari isha h ki sabhi Devil ko katam krne ka kahi ye mumkin na ho pae.


Rudra: gurudev aap meri shakti h parshan kar rhe hai.


Rajguru: nhi putar esa nahi h. Parntu....


Rajdeep: (bich mai katte hue) agar esa nhi h gurudev tho hum kal he akarman karege.


Rajguru: thik h Rudra jaise tum chao.


Itna kah kar Rajguru chale jate hai aur piche Rudra aur Rajdeep yudh ki taryi karti hai.


Iss traf:


Andkha apne sihasan pe baitha Vihaan ko yaad kar raha tha ki tabhi senapati bagte hue aata h aur bolta hai.


Senapati: maharaj Angels ne akraman kar diya h.


Andkha: kya?


Senapati: ji maharaj aur iss bar kud Lord of Angels aur Prince aae h.


Andhka: aap jldi se sabko satrak karde aur hum kud yudh mai jage.


Senapati: ji maharaj. Khke chale jate hai.


Andkha( maan me) iss sayah uh akarman karna kuch samj nahi aaya. Tabhi Manhta aati hai aur bolti h.


Mantha: kya hua maharaj?


Andhka: Angels ne akarman kar diya hai.


Mantha: Hum bhi apke sath chalege.


Andhka: nhi maharani aap iss baar nhi jaegi.


Mantha: aapne vachan diya tha ki hum har yudh mai apke sath jaege.


Andhka: parntu iss baar ya yudh kisi ki maritu se he sampat hoga.


Mantha: chae kuch bhi hum apke sath jaege.


Yeh keh kar Mantha chali jati hai aur Andhka iss samachar ko apne Rajguru ke paas puncha dete h aur sath mai Vihaan ko shurakshit rkhne ke liye kh dete hai.


Dono senaye aamne samne thi


Rajdeep: aaj thume aur thumare rajya ko koi nhi bacha sakta.


Andhkasur: ye veham apne dil se nikla do aaj tumse se koi jnda bachke nahi jaega.


Dono ke itna khte he shank ki davni hoti h yudh aarambh ho jata hai. Dono senaye ek dusre pe tut parti hai.


Rudra aur Ragav apni shatiyon se Devil sena ko ktam kar rhe the aur whi Rajdeep aur Andhkasur ek dusre pe apne shaktiyon par hamla kar rhe the.


Yudh koi abhi shuru hue kuch der he hui thi ki Rudra par ek aag ke gole ka parhar hota h jo Mantha ne kiya tha, jisse dkh Rudra gusse mai aa jata h aur apni sabse badi shakti se Mantha par humla karta h jisse takrate he Mantha niche gir jati h. Jise Andhkasur dkh leta h aur bokla jata hai Mantha ki tarf jane lagta h par usse Ragav aur Rajdeep rok dete hai apni shaktiyon se.


Andhkasur puri kosish karta h par nhi ja pata aur idhar Mnatha dard se tadpti hui mar jati h jisse dkh kar Andhkasur pagal ho jata h aur apni puri shakti se Rajdeep par prahar karta h jisse Rajddep murshit ho jata hai Andhkasur bhi niche gir jata h par jab tak wo uthta Ragav apni talwar uske dil mai utar deta hai.


Ragav aur Rudra bhag kar Rajdeep ke paas jate h jaha dkhte h Rajdeep bhi mar jata hai jisse dkh kar Rudra apna aapa kho deta h aur sabhi Devils ko marne lagta h Yumpuri mai parvesh karke bache budhe aur Autro ko marne lagta h.


Wo ek ek karke sabhi ko mar deta hai jab wo antim Devil ko mar deta hai tho uske chre par ek muskan aa jati hai aur wo wapis ran bhumi ki aur jata h aur apni sena aur pita ki laash leke wapis chala jata h. Jab wo Inderpur punchta h tho sab ko kushi aur dukh dono hote h.


Essse he kuch smya nikal jata h aur aaj Rudra ka Rajya abhishek tha. Rajguru Rudra ka tilak krte hai aur Avanti Rudra ko raajmukat phnati hai. Rudra apni jagh se uthta h aur bolta hai.


Rudra: Inderpur ke wasio aaj ke bad iss darti pe koi devil nhi hai.


Rudra kuch bolta usse phle wha roshni hoti h Tridev prakat hote hai. Unne dkh ke sab jukh jate h. Tridev sabko uthne ke liye khte h.


Rudra: mai dhnya ho gaya ki tridev meri taaj poshi mai aae.


Tridev: hum apki taajposhi main hi aae sirf apke khatan ko sahi karne aae hai aur apko Inderpur ke sabse bade khtre se avgat karwane aae h jaisa ki humne apke pita ko vachan diya tha ki jab bhi Inderpur par sabse bada Khatra aaega hum uhne avgat karwaege.


Rudra: hum kuch samje nahi Tridev? Kharta aur kaisa khtra.


Tridev......

(bhaiyon kal dena tha update but aaj he de raha hu aur kis ki baat kar rhe h Tridev kon h Devil king Andhkasur se bhi bada khtra janne ke liye sath bane rahie)

Nice update bhai

 

[Vipul]

Update 12:​

Vihaan bhar nikal kar Car mai baitha hai aur car start karke Mumbai k eek sunsan ilake mai chala jata h. Waha jake who kisi ka intazar karta h par uska koi shuru ke he picha kar raha tha.

ab aage:


Vihaan ko aae kuch der he hui thi wha pa eek kala dhuna hota haur jab wo chtta hai usme se Kalkol niklta h.


Kalkol: aaj tum mere hath aa he gye?


Vihaan: aao Kalkol mai tumhari he partiksha kar rha tha.


Kalkol: phalli baar dkh raha hu koi apni maut ki partiksha kar raha hai.


Vihaan: ye tho samya he bataega.


Vihaan ke itna khte he Kalkol ek aag ka gola Vihaan pe chorta hai.Vihaan wha se jump kar deta hai aur jal ka avhan karta h, kuchi shan mai uske hath mai jal aa jata hai aur Vihaan usko ek talwar ke roop mai dalkar kalkol par parhar karta hai.


Wo talwar Kalkol ki trf badti hai aur jab tak Kalkol kuch karta wo talwar aake usko lagti hai aur wo udta hua bhut dur girta hai.


Kalkol punah kahada hota h aur iss bharwopure gusse mai apni shakti ko yaad karta hai, tabhi uske hath mai ek laal rang ka gola aa jata aur uske much par muskaan aa jati hai aur wo uss gole ko Vihaan ki traf chor deta hai.


Jaise jaise wogola Vihaan kitraf aa raha thaw o aur bada ho rha tha uski cahpet mai jo kuch bhi aa raha tha wo usse apne ander samet raha tha. Parntu vihaan apni jagah se nhi hil raha tha aur nahe kuch kar rha thaw o gola Vihaan ke lagne wala he tha Vihaan apna hath aage karta h.


Wo gola Vihaan ke hath mai sama jata hai jisse dkh kar kalkol bhokla jata hai aur bolata hai.


Kalkol: ye kaise ho sakta hai. Koi bhi Manushya, Devil aur Angel uski puri shakti ka samna nahi kar skata aur tumne sirf apne hatho se rok diya.


Vihaan: Kalkol tumari shkati mere samne kuch bhi nhi ai abhi bhi samya h chle jao.


Kalkol: mai tme marityu diye bina yaha se nahi jauga.


Vihaan ke kuch bolne se phle Kalkol ke maan maiRudra ki ek awaj aati hai(tum isse shakti se nhi hara skte tum isse talwar yudh ki chanoti do hume pura vihwas h ye usme parast hoga tumare hatho se mara jaega)


Kalkol: parntu agar maine esa kiya tho iski talwar?


Rudra: humne batayana iski talwar Ninder awasta mai hai.


Kalkol: thik hai.


Fir Rudra ki awaj nhi aati aur Kalkol Vihaan ki tarf dkh kar:


Kalkol: Thik h vihaan mai yaha se Chalajauga parntu usse phale mai tumne talwar yudh ki chonti deta hu.


Ye sun kar Vihaan ke mukh pe bhi muskurahat aa hai.


Vihaan: kyu apni Marityu chate ho kalkol chale ao yaha se.


Vihaan ki ye baat sunke Kalkol ki ankho mai gussa utar aata h aur wo apni talwar leke Vihaan ki traf daud laga deta. Vihaan pni garden halki si naa mai hilakar kuch mantar padta hai aur apni sari vidya bhula deta h aur apne hath mai bhi ek talwar le aata hai.


Kalkol Vihaan pe hamla karta haijisse Vihaan rok deta h aur shrur hota h dono mai yudh. Kalkol Vihaan pe bari pad raha tha kyuki Vihaan ne apni Vidya bula di thi. Kalkol apni puri takat se Vihaan par parhar karta hai aur Vihaan ki talwar tut jai hai.


Vihaan ki talwar tute he Kalkol Vihaan ke sine par talwar marta hai aur Vihaan ki chike nikal jati hai.


Dusri taf:


Aishani apne bed par leti so rahi thi usko kuch bechani si hone lagti hai. Usse kuch samj nhi aa raha tha ki kya ho raha hai uske sath. Jaise he kalkoln Vihaan pe hamlan karta hai uske muh se chik nikal jata hai “Vihaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnn”


Aditi bhi uske paas he baithi thi wo bhi chonk jati hai aur bhag kar Aishnai ke paas jati hai aur bolti hai:


Aditi: kya hua Aishani?


Aishani kuch hi bolti aur jor jor se rone lagti hai par Aditi ke dobara puchne pe dihre se boltihai.


Aishani: unko kuch ho gaya hai.


Aditi: kisko Aishani?


Aishni: Vihaan ko....


Aditi: Vihaan ko kuch nahi hua wotho kaam se office gaya h uske.


Aishani: Nahi Aditi maine abhi Mahsos hua h ki unke upa hamla hua ha.


Aditi: Aishani shant ho ja mai usko call karti hu.


Aishani kuch nhi bolti aur Aditi Vihaan ko call karti hai aur call pick ho jata hai.


Aditi: tum kaha ho?


Samne se: office hu. Bataya tho tha kyu kya hua?


Aditi: kuch nhi bas ghumne jana tha bhul gaye?


Samne se: Ha yaad hai 45 mins mai aa raha hu.


Aditi: thik hai.


Aditi call disconnect kar deti hai aur Aishani ki tarf jati hai aur bolti hai.


Aditi: office he h wo aur kuch hua usse aur wo Aihani ko lita deti hai usko kambal de kar bhar aa jati hai aur sochti hai.


Aishaniman me) tum kaha ho unki madat karo....


Aditi: kahi usse kuch yaad tho nahi aa gaya? Nahi par Vachan? Kya karu kuch samj nahi aa rha kahi sachmai Vihaan par Rudra ne? Nhi esa bhi nhi ho skata kya karu kuch samj nhi aa raha.....


Back to hero side:


Kalkol Vihaan par har tarhse war karta h aur Vihaan ko lahu luhan kar deta h, ant mai Vihaan apne gutno par baith jata hai aur Kalkol Vihaan ki neck par hamla karne wala h tha tabhi suraj ko badlo ne gher liya aur bijli chamkti hai aur asman se ek talwar rafter se niche aati hai aur Kalkol ki garden uske dahad se alag kar deti hai aur jamin mai gad jati hai.


Duri trf:


Jo saya Vihaan ka picha kar raha tha wobhi ab waha se gayab ho jata hai aur khi punchta hai.


Saya: Bhai wo lout aayi uske paas..


Rudra: kya kah rahe ho Ragav. (apne sahi socha wo saya Ragav tha)


Ragav: ha bhai mai sach kah raha hu maine apni aankho se dkha h usse kalkol ki garden katte hue.


Rudra: kahi usne thon hi?


Ragav: ha bhai mujhe bhi yhi lagta hai.


Back to hero side:


Vihaan abhi bhi apne ghutno par baitha tha par uske chahre par smile aa jati hai aur wo talwar ab ek akriti mai badne lagti hai aur sunder si ladki mai badal jati hai.


Wo chalti hui Vihaan ki tarf jati hai aur usko uthati hai. Vihaan usko dkhta h aur wo ladki Vihaan ko apne gale laga leti h aur Vihaan bhi usko apne aagosh mai le leta hai aur bolta hai.

(kon h wo ladki aur kya rista hai Vihaan ka usse aur Aihani ka kya Rista h Vihaan ke sath, jaane ke liye sath bane rahie and sorryb for late reply)

Bhai mujhe lagata hain is forum ki sari story ka avenger story bana rahe ho???