Fantasy The Untold Story of Devil ( Romance,Nafrat,Thrill)
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Update 14:
Rudra: kise dhund rahe ho Vihaan?
Vihaan: (gusse mai) agar dum h samne aao?
Rudra: hahahahaha Vihaan mujhe dhund rahe ho thik hai.
Mai whi hu jaha iss sab ki shuruwat hui thi.
Vihaan: mai aa raha hu .
Rudra: aa jao hum tumari partiksha kar rahe hai aur ha uske paas jada samya nahi hai.hahaha
Vihaan ki gusse se aknhe laal ho jhati hai aur gayab ho jata hai au puchta hai.
ab aage:
Vihaan jab apni aakhne kholta h tho wo ek sunsan jungle mai hota hai aur samne ek mahal hota hai jise dkh kar wop aur gusse mai bhar jata hai kyuki wo mahal Inderpur ka hai. Vihaan jaise he aage kadam badata hai uske samne Ragav aa jata hai.
Ragav: sawagat h Vihaan apni mrityu mai.
Vihaan: (apne gusse ko bnadte hue) Ruhani kaha h?
Ragav: ussi ke liye tho mai tumhe yaha lene aaya hu.
Vihaan: (shock ho kar) Matalb?
Ragav: sab samj aa jaega bas mere piche aao.
Vihaan kuch nhi bolta hai aur Ragav ke piche chalne lagta hai. Ragav usse mahal ke ander le jata hai aur usse ek khali madian mai le jata hai. Vihaan kuch nhi bol raha tha aur na kuch soch raha tha usse tho bas Ruhani ki chinta thi.
Usse Ruhani ko bachana tha cahie isken liye usse kuch bhi karna pade.
Dusri Tarf:
Vihaan ke iss tarh jane ke bad Aishani rone lagti hai aur sabhi dare hue the Vihaan ka roop dkh kar siwae Aditi ke (kyuki wo tho sab kuch janti h )
Neha: Vihaan ko kya hua aur usne Aishani ka gala kyu dabaya aur Aishani ke bhaiyo ne Ruhani ko kidnap kiya hai?
Riya: ha didi mujhe bhi kuch samj nahi aa rha!!
Mansi: tu he bata Aditi tut ho janti h usko?
Aditi: nhi mai bhi nhi janti usne esa kyu kiya aur wo sab kyu kaha?
Aditi ko Aishani ka khyal aata h aur wo Aishani ko uthati h aur ander le jati h, itne mai Riya pani lakar Aishani ko deti h. Aditi sab ko unke room mai bej deti kyuki wo jnati thi ki sabke maan mai koi na koi sawal h.
Aur Aishani ko kuch pills deti h aur Aishni bhi bina kuch puche wo pills kha leti h aur thodi der bad wow hi pe so jati h Aditi usko wha par shi se lita deti h aur uske paas baith jati h kisi ko yaad krne lagti hai.
Vihaan side:
Vihaan jab maidan mai khada tha use bas Ruhani ko dkhna tha tabhi waha Rudra aa jata h aur haste hue kahta h.
Rudra: aao Vihan mujhe tumara he intazar tha.
Vihaan: Ruhani kaha h Rudra?
Rudra: bahi tak tho jiwit h par bawishya ka pata nhi ( itna khne ke bad wo jor jor se hasne lagta h)
Vihaan: Agar use kuch hua tho tumhra kya hoga ye tum soch bhi nhi sakte.
Rudra: yha tume mujjhe yudh karne ke liye nhi bulaya h. Tumhe tho apni Behan ke liye maaf karna apni patni ke liye ladna hoga.
Vihaan ke sunke thoda shock hota h ki Rudra kya kh rha h agar wo yudh nahi karna chata tho uski jagah kon yudh karega. Vihaan ko asmanjas mai dkh kar Rudra hasta h aur bolta h.
Rudra: jada pareshan mai ho Vihaan sab kuch pata chal jaega.
Tabhi wha Ragav ek pinjara laga h jisme kuch tha use dkh kar Rudra bolta h.
Rudra: Dkho Vihaan tumari mout aa gayi h. Hum jante h tum hum dono ko marna chate ho parntu tum ye bhi jante h ki abhi tum hume nhi maar sakte.
Vihaan bhi ye janta tha ki Inderpur mai in dono ko kuch nhi kiya ja sakta kyuki usne Tridev ko vachan diya tha ke wo inko wha kuch nhi krega aur na he wo dono use yha aur Yampuri mai maar sakte h.
Rudra: hum janta h Vihaan ki tumj kya soch rhe hum tume nhi maar skate parntu kisi aur jariye se tho tum mar sakte ho yha par bhul gaye kya kha tha Tridev ne.
Vihaan: yaad h mujhe ki humari mrityu dono rajiyo mai sirf humari Patni he kar sakti h.
Vihaan: (kuch sochte hue) nhi Rudra tum esa nhi kar skte.
Rudra: Hum kuch bhi kar skte h Vihaan aur jor jor se hasne lagta h aur Ragav ko kuch ishara karta h.
Rudra ka ishara milte he Ragav uss Pinjre se kapda hata deta h aur usme Ruhani thi aur uski lal thi aur abhi wo kisi janwar jasi lag rhi thi.
Ragav uss pinjre ka gate khol deta h aur Ruhani bhar nikal aati h aur Vihaan ke samne khadi ho jati h.
Rudra: Vihaan ab tumare samne do raste h ya tho kud mar jao ya apne hato se Ruhani ko maar do aur agar tumne use maar diya tho tumara vachan tut jaega aur tumhe yudh karna ho Tridev se. Hahaha.
Vihaan jo abhi tak sab kuch samj chukka tha ki kyu Tridev ne usse Devil King kaha tha aur kyu Tridev ne kaha tha “ ab wha se kon aaega Vihaan ya Devil King”.
Vihaan kuch aur sochta usse phle he Ruhani uss par hamla kar deti h aur panjo ko Vihaan ki chest par maar deti h (n jo usske janwar banne ke baad nikal aae the) Vihaan ko panje lagte he wo waha se dur gir jata h.
Jaise he Ruhani ne Vihaan par hamlan kiya tha ussi samyah Rudra Ragav ko leke gyab ho jata h aur wo dono kisi surakshit sthan par punch jate h aur Ragav bolta h
Ragav: bhai aap mujhe yaha mujhe usse marte hue dkhna tha ya apne prem ko marte hue.
Rudra: nhi Ragav agar Vihaan mar nhi sakta aur wo kyu ye hum dono jante h.
Ragav: tho kya hua bhai hum Ruhani ko tho marte hue dkh sakte h na.
Rudra: Ruhani ke marne ke baad wo puri trah se Devil ban jata aur wo hum dono ko bhi mar sakta tha.
Ragav: (chonkte hue) hum dono ko? Kaise maar sakta thaw o?
Rudra: jab wo puri trh se Devil banta tab iss jahan ki jitni bhi ausuri or rakshi shaktiyan ho jise Vihaan ne bandh diya tha wo khul jaege aur uske paas lout aaegi tab uske aas paas ko bhi hoga uski mrityu aniwarya h usse sawam Tridev nasht kar dene ye unka vachan tha.
Ragav ye sunke shocked ho jata hai aur wo kuch nhi bolta aur haa mai sar hila deta h. Rudra Ragav ki traf dkhta h aur bolta h
Rudra: chinta mat karo hum usko nhi dkh sakte tho kya hua jeet tho humari he hoga na aur wo dono hasne lagte h.
Aditi Side:
Aditi apne maan mai kuch mantar padne lagti h aur kisi ka awahan karti h thodi der baad usske samne koi aata h jisse dkh kar wo uthti h aur usko gale laga leti h aur bolti h
Aditi: papa ye sab kya aur kyu ho raha h?
Malik: jo kuch bhi ho rha h wo tum sab ki niyati h aur tum sab isme kuch anhi kar skate jab tak ye dono ek nhi ho jate tab tak kuch nhi kiya ja sakta.
( Ab Aditi ke liye ye sab kuch mushkil nhi tha kyuki wo Detya guru ki putri thi aur jab usse sab yaad aaya tho uski sari shaktiyan bhi yaad aa gayi)
Aditi: kintu baba Ruhani he kyu?
Malik: kya kha tumne baba? Lagat h humari putrid ko sab yaad aa gya kyu?
Aditi: ji baba.
Malik: fir tum Ruhani ke bare mai kaise bhul gayi?
Aditi: mai kuch samji nhi baba?
Malik: Ruhani aur koi nhi tum tinno mai se h jo uski shakti aur patni h.
Aditi: kyaaaaa?? Iska matlb Ruhani??
Malik: ha putri tum shi soch rhi ho.
Iske baad malik gayb ho jate h aur Aditi bhi Aishani ke paas baith jati h aura ram karne lagti h.
Vihaan side:
Vihaan ke liye ye ek dum se hua usko kuch react karne ka mauka nhi mila aur Vihaan dur jake girta h par wo usi sath khada bhi ho jata h aur samne dkhta h Ruhani uski tarf doudti hui aa rhi h.
Vihaan cha kar bhi usse koi nuksan nhi pucha sakta tha isliye wo kuch bhi kar nhi pa raha tha aura b tak Ruhani Vihaan ke paas punch chuki thi aur Vihaan par firse hamla karti hai.
Vihaan fir se dur jake girta h aur iss bar uski chest se khun bhi nikale lagta h. Ab Vihaan ka Devil roop bhar nikle lagta h aur Vihaan thoda thoda badlne lagta h. Ruhani firse uske paas aake uspar humla karne wali thoti par Vihaan uska hath pakd leta h aur usko guma ke dur fank deta h.
Ruhani udti hui dur jake girti h aur muh se chink nikal jati h Vihaan hosh mai aa jata h. Vihaan duad ke Ruhani ke paas h aur usse uthane lagta h parntu Ruhani firse Vihaan par humla kr deti h aur Vihaan fir se dur gir jata h.
Vihaan ki samj main hi aa rha thaw o kya kre kyuki na wo Ruhani ko kast puncha sakta tha aur naa he wo apna vachan todna chata tha.
Tabhi Vihaan ko kuch yaad h aur wo dhyan mai baith jata hai aur dhyan lagane lagta h aur usse Tridev aur Rudra ki baat yaad aati Tridev: ye tumare pyaar ki priksha h.
Rudra: Tum dono mai yaha par ek ki marityu teh hai.
Vihaan yaad ate he Vihaan ke chahre par muskaan aa jati hai aur wo kahda ho jata h aur apni dono baju ko fahla deta h aur uske ander ke kuch tarnge bhar nikle lagti h jo pure maidan ko dakh leti hai aur wo baad kuch karne wala he hota h Ruhani uss par fir humla karti h par Vihaan uski baju pakad kar ek dum se wha se gyab ho jata h.
Rudra aur Ragav dono mai shaktiyo se dkh rhe the Vihaan aur Ruhani ke ydho ko dono shock ho jate h Vihaan waha se gyab kaise ho gaya.
( kaha gayab ho gya Vihaan aur kiase usne Rudra ke maya jaal ko toda kya wo Ruhni ko firse wapis la paega ya apna vachan tod dega... jaane ke liye sath bane rahie)..
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good update but regularly update doge to hi anna vara story close kardo we know life me problems hogi sab ki he par ek message nahi kuch nai 1 y do update do phir gayab pls start if you want to continue or else leave