Fantasy The Untold Story of Devil ( Romance,Nafrat,Thrill)

[Siraa]

Kaun hai yeh unknown shaks bro
Yeh unknown shakhs mumbai kyun nahin jaana chahta aakhir kia rishta hai iska mumbai se?
Aditi kise pyar karti hai
Aishani kisse nafrat karti hai aur kyun?

Hai bhai ek shaks.
Mumbai se kyu nhi jana chata,
Aditi kise pyar krti hai,
Aishani ki nafrat
sab aage story mai pata chalega...

 

[Siraa]

Waiting..

Thanks bhai

 

[Siraa]

Nice update bhai

Thanks bhai

 

[Siraa]

Bro story to acchi lag rahi hai par update chote de rahe ho starting me hi update bade kro dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

Thanks bro bhai office ka kaam h bhut busy chl rha hu thode din mai full update dunga

 

[Siraa]

Update 3:​

Aur wo ladka bina kuch aur bole jane lagta tabhi Malik usko piche se bolta h: kal subh 7 bje ghr se aur car tume pata h usko konsi pasand h tumara wait karuga.
ab aage:


uske jane ke bad:


Dhawan: tum tho pure confidence se kh rahe the ki ye jaega par isne tho mana kr diya aur tumne un dono ko bhi paromise kr diya? Ab kya karoge?


Malik: Mai janta hu usne mana kar diya yah ape par wo jrur jaega.


Dhawan: tum ye baat itne yakeen se kaise kh skte ho.




Malik kuch nhi bolte bas muskrat dete aur uske baad dono mai thodi aur baate hoti h aur dono apne apne ghar chale jate h aur udhar wo ladka bhi apne ghar chala jata aur apni soch m goom ho jata h.




Agli subh Aishani tyar hokar apne papa ke sath Aditi ke ghar chli jati hai kyuki uske sabhi dost whi aane wale the.


Aisahni: Aditi konsi car mai jar he h ye tho bata?


Aditi: pata nhi yaar.


Aishani: Matlab? Tuhje kaise nhi pata tere ghar se tho jana h.


Aditi: arre papa ne kha than a ek ladka jaega hamare sath wo he laega.


Aishani: ohhhhh okay. Koi baat nhi aane de uski bhi trip m watt laga denge.


Uski baat sunke sab dost hasne lagte h aur koi kuch bolta usse phle he car ka horn bajta h aur sab ussi aur dkhte h aur samne Range Rover Evoque enter karti h jisko dkh ke Aishani aur Aditi kush ho jati h(kyuki ye unki fav car h) aur bhag ke Malik ji ke gale lag jati h aur thanks bolne lagti h..


Malik ji kuch khte usse phle car stop ho jati h aur ek ladka bhar niklta h usne mask phna hua tha.


Malik: jao bacho sara saman gadi mai rakho.


Sab log apne apne bags gadi m rkhte h


Malik: Mai janta tha tum aaoge


Unknown: mai sirf ek shart par jauga inke sath.


Malik: bolo?


Unknown: Ye log mujhe mera mask utarne ke liye nhi bolege.


Malik: thik h dhyan rkhna sabka.


Sabhi log car mai baith kar nikal jate hai aur unke piche:


Dhawan: kya ye whi h? aur isne ye mask kyu phna hai?


Malik: ha ye whi h. iski marji.


Fir dono log aner chle jata h aur apni baato m lag jate h.




Little intro of Friends:


Neha: 22 yrs ki h. Aishani aur Aditi ki childhood friend h. ye bhi B.sc kr rhi hai. Kud kuch karna chati hai


Priya: 23 yrs old. Isne abhi graduation complete ki hai. Full of attitude, naak par makhi bhi baithne nhi deti.


Riya: 18 yrs old. Neha ki choti behan hai abhi school mai hai, chulbuli hai aur dil ki saaf hai.


Mansi: 24 yrs old, Kitabo mai he gussi rhti hai sara din aur duniya dari se dur rhti h apne aap mai mast


Back to story: in car:


Aishani: (dire se) Aditi humne kya kya plan bane the car mai drink krege aur full on enjoy karege kin ab iski vajh se kuch nhi kar paega aur agar kiya tho ye papa ko bata dega.


Aditi: ruk kuch krti hu

(dosto next update mai suspence kulega ki ye h kon jab tak sath bane rakhye)

 

[tpk]

nice update

 

[@kki]

Bhai agle update ka besabri se intzarr hai
Pta to chlr ye hai kon

 

[Akil]

So the trip started hmm that's nyc par abhi bhi is unknown ka suspense bana hua hai.... Pr jo bhi ho is kahani ka ek main character hai yeh itna toh pata chlta hi hai..
Dekhte hain kab tak yeh chahre par naqaab pahane rah sakega
Dekhte hain aditi kia karegi....

 

[Manojsharma]

Nice update bhai

 

[John Cena]

Boht khoob yar lagta ha ya trip kafi mazedar hona wala ha