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Fantasy The Untold Story of Devil ( Romance,Nafrat,Thrill)
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Update 4:
Aishani: (dire se) Aditi humne kya kya plan bane the car mai drink krege aur full on enjoy karege kin ab iski vajh se kuch nhi kar paega aur agar kiya tho ye papa ko bata dega.
Aditi: ruk kuch krti hu
ab aage:
Aditi us Unknown se: hum log trip pe ja rahe h enjoy krne aur full on enjoy krna chate h. tum smj rahe ho na mai kya khna chati hu.
Ladka kuch nhi bolta aur Aditi ki trf dkh ke haa mai sir hila deta h aur hath se ishara kar deta ki enjoy karo. Aditi uska ishara samj jati aur Aishani ko bata deti hai lekin Aishani fir Aditi se khti hai.
Aishani: pakka na Aditi ye papa log se kuch nhi bolega aur isko koi problem nhi hogi?
Aditi
kuch sochte hue) Tum papa se tho kuch nhi khaoge na aur tumhe tho koi dikat nhi?Unknown kuch nhi bolta aur apna sir na mai hila deta hai. Ye dkh ke Aishani aur uski friend’s sab kush ho jate hai aur lagte h enjoy krne. Inkokuch he der hoti h ki Unknown jor se break laga deta h jisse sabko ko jatka lagta hai aur sab smne dkhte h tho 2 Scorpio ne kina rasta block kiya hua tha.
Neha: ye log kon h aur rasta kyu block kiya hua h?
Unknown: jab tak main a kahu gadi se koi bhar nhi nilega.
Aur ye khke wo gadi se bhar aa jata hai aur uski awaj sunke Aditi kuch sochne lagti hai.
Unknown bhar niklta hai aur un logo ke pass jata hai.
Unknown: kya hua rasta kyu band kar rkha h?
(Yaha un logo ko g1,g2 likhuga)
G1: jo kuch bhi yhi chor ja warna yaha se tu nhi teri lash jaegi.
Unknown: Kyu marna chate ho chle jao yaha se.
G2: bhai wo sab choro gadi mai dkho kya maal baitha hai.
G3: Aur ye mask kyu phan rkha h dalal h kya unka? Aur wo sab hasne lagte hai
Unknown itna sunte he gusse mai aa jata hai aur apna mask utar deta hai uski aakhe lal ho jati h au wo G3 ke pet mai ek laat maarta h aur wo dur jake gir jata h aur uske muh se khoon nikle lagta h.
itne mai G2 uska collar pakad leta hai, wo ek dum se mudta hu aur uss G2 ke face full force se knockout punch marta hu aur G2 ki garden piche ki trf ghum jati hai aur wo niche gir jata hai aur dum tod deta hai.
Mere punch ko dkhe kar waha G1 gabra jata hai isse phle maai khada tho G1 ne apni jeb se ek khanjar nikala aur meri left baju par war krta isse phle wo dusra war karta unknown uska khanjar pakad liya aur bich mai se todkar ussi ke pet mai war karne shuru kar diye, uske pet se khoon ka fawarah chut jata h aur wo whi mar jata h.
Dusri traf:
Us ladke ki hawaniyat dkh kr sari ladkiya dar jati hai aur jab uspe kanjar se war hota h tho Aditi se muh se cheek nikal jati hai “Vihaan”.
Main Intro of Story:
Vihaan Arya: Hero of story 23 yrs ka hai. Dil ka saaf hai par agar gussa aa jae tho isko kabu mai krna namumkin h siwae kuch logo ke, 8 pack abs, 6.6 feet height hai, Bachpan se anth ki jindgi ji rha hai pariwar hote hue bhi. Iski life ek rahayasa hai aur jada iske bare mai jada koi nahi janta siwae Malik ji ke aur esa kyu wo age story mai pata chalega.
Back to story:
Aditi gadi se bhar nikal ke Vihan ki traf daud laga deti h aur usko lage laga leti aur jor jor se rone lagti h aur Vihaan ka gussa shant ho jata hai aur Aditi ko gale laga leta h aur thodi der bad chup karwata hai.
Aditi chup hone bad Vihaan ki ankhon mai dkhti hai usko kich ke 2 thappad marti hai aur bolti h
Aditi: Tumne mujhe bhi nhi bataya ki tum yha aur Papa ne nhi bataya aur mai bhi sochu ki meri favourite car kon le aya kyuki ye tho ako bhi pata.
Vihaan: Ab tumara ho gaya ho tho chle hum phle se late ho rhe h aur mujhe face bhi wash krna hai.
Aditi: ha chalo tujhe tho bad mai dkhti hu motu.hehe
Vihaan bhi hass deta aur dono car ki traf chale jate hai.
Iss sare seen ko Aishani aur uski friend bade gaur se dkh rhe the. Aditi jake gadi mai baith jati. Gadi ki trf jate waqt Vihaan kisis ko call krta h.
Vihaan: aapko thode dang ke admi bejne chaie the Malik uncle.
Malik: (ji haa dosto ye log malik ji ne beje the)mai Janata hu ki un teeno kya kya haal hua hoga. Aur ab tho tume Aditi ne bhi pechaan liya hoga.
Vihaan: Par apne esa kyu kiya?
Malik: Taki tum bhi unke sath enjoy kr sako aur apna past bhul jao.
Vihaan: Esa kabhi nhi ho skta? Aur Vihaan Call cut kr deta hai aur car mai baith jata hai.
Vihaan jab bhar call par baat kr rha tha tab In car:
Priya: Aditi ye whi Vihaan h na jiski baat tu hamesha krti rhti h ki Vihaan bachpan mai esa tha wasa tha.
Aditi: Ha Priya ye whi Vihaan hai.
Neha: Par tune usse pehchana kaise aur kitna khatarnaak h. par bhut cute.hehe
(agar Vihaan shuru se Aditi ko jnata tha tho usse muh kyu chupa rha tha aur Malik ne esa kyu kiya jaane ke liye jude rhiye. bhaiyo update ek din chorke aaya karga)
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Toh yeh apna hero haiUpdate 4:
Aishani: (dire se) Aditi humne kya kya plan bane the car mai drink krege aur full on enjoy karege kin ab iski vajh se kuch nhi kar paega aur agar kiya tho ye papa ko bata dega.
Aditi: ruk kuch krti hu
ab aage:
Aditi us Unknown se: hum log trip pe ja rahe h enjoy krne aur full on enjoy krna chate h. tum smj rahe ho na mai kya khna chati hu.
Ladka kuch nhi bolta aur Aditi ki trf dkh ke haa mai sir hila deta h aur hath se ishara kar deta ki enjoy karo. Aditi uska ishara samj jati aur Aishani ko bata deti hai lekin Aishani fir Aditi se khti hai.
Aishani: pakka na Aditi ye papa log se kuch nhi bolega aur isko koi problem nhi hogi?
Aditi
Unknown kuch nhi bolta aur apna sir na mai hila deta hai. Ye dkh ke Aishani aur uski friend’s sab kush ho jate hai aur lagte h enjoy krne. Inkokuch he der hoti h ki Unknown jor se break laga deta h jisse sabko ko jatka lagta hai aur sab smne dkhte h tho 2 Scorpio ne kina rasta block kiya hua tha.
Neha: ye log kon h aur rasta kyu block kiya hua h?
Unknown: jab tak main a kahu gadi se koi bhar nhi nilega.
Aur ye khke wo gadi se bhar aa jata hai aur uski awaj sunke Aditi kuch sochne lagti hai.
Unknown bhar niklta hai aur un logo ke pass jata hai.
Unknown: kya hua rasta kyu band kar rkha h?
(Yaha un logo ko g1,g2 likhuga)
G1: jo kuch bhi yhi chor ja warna yaha se tu nhi teri lash jaegi.
Unknown: Kyu marna chate ho chle jao yaha se.
G2: bhai wo sab choro gadi mai dkho kya maal baitha hai.
G3: Aur ye mask kyu phan rkha h dalal h kya unka? Aur wo sab hasne lagte hai
Unknown itna sunte he gusse mai aa jata hai aur apna mask utar deta hai uski aakhe lal ho jati h au wo G3 ke pet mai ek laat maarta h aur wo dur jake gir jata h aur uske muh se khoon nikle lagta h.
itne mai G2 uska collar pakad leta hai, wo ek dum se mudta hu aur uss G2 ke face full force se knockout punch marta hu aur G2 ki garden piche ki trf ghum jati hai aur wo niche gir jata hai aur dum tod deta hai.
Mere punch ko dkhe kar waha G1 gabra jata hai isse phle maai khada tho G1 ne apni jeb se ek khanjar nikala aur meri left baju par war krta isse phle wo dusra war karta unknown uska khanjar pakad liya aur bich mai se todkar ussi ke pet mai war karne shuru kar diye, uske pet se khoon ka fawarah chut jata h aur wo whi mar jata h.
Dusri traf:
Us ladke ki hawaniyat dkh kr sari ladkiya dar jati hai aur jab uspe kanjar se war hota h tho Aditi se muh se cheek nikal jati hai “Vihaan”.
Main Intro of Story:
Vihaan Arya: Hero of story 23 yrs ka hai. Dil ka saaf hai par agar gussa aa jae tho isko kabu mai krna namumkin h siwae kuch logo ke, 8 pack abs, 6.6 feet height hai, Bachpan se anth ki jindgi ji rha hai pariwar hote hue bhi. Iski life ek rahayasa hai aur jada iske bare mai jada koi nahi janta siwae Malik ji ke aur esa kyu wo age story mai pata chalega.
Back to story:
Aditi gadi se bhar nikal ke Vihan ki traf daud laga deti h aur usko lage laga leti aur jor jor se rone lagti h aur Vihaan ka gussa shant ho jata hai aur Aditi ko gale laga leta h aur thodi der bad chup karwata hai.
Aditi chup hone bad Vihaan ki ankhon mai dkhti hai usko kich ke 2 thappad marti hai aur bolti h
Aditi: Tumne mujhe bhi nhi bataya ki tum yha aur Papa ne nhi bataya aur mai bhi sochu ki meri favourite car kon le aya kyuki ye tho ako bhi pata.
Vihaan: Ab tumara ho gaya ho tho chle hum phle se late ho rhe h aur mujhe face bhi wash krna hai.
Aditi: ha chalo tujhe tho bad mai dkhti hu motu.hehe
Vihaan bhi hass deta aur dono car ki traf chale jate hai.
Iss sare seen ko Aishani aur uski friend bade gaur se dkh rhe the. Aditi jake gadi mai baith jati. Gadi ki trf jate waqt Vihaan kisis ko call krta h.
Vihaan: aapko thode dang ke admi bejne chaie the Malik uncle.
Malik: (ji haa dosto ye log malik ji ne beje the)mai Janata hu ki un teeno kya kya haal hua hoga. Aur ab tho tume Aditi ne bhi pechaan liya hoga.
Vihaan: Par apne esa kyu kiya?
Malik: Taki tum bhi unke sath enjoy kr sako aur apna past bhul jao.
Vihaan: Esa kabhi nhi ho skta? Aur Vihaan Call cut kr deta hai aur car mai baith jata hai.
Vihaan jab bhar call par baat kr rha tha tab In car:
Priya: Aditi ye whi Vihaan h na jiski baat tu hamesha krti rhti h ki Vihaan bachpan mai esa tha wasa tha.
Aditi: Ha Priya ye whi Vihaan hai.
Neha: Par tune usse pehchana kaise aur kitna khatarnaak h. par bhut cute.hehe
(agar Vihaan shuru se Aditi ko jnata tha tho usse muh ky8u chupa rha tha aur Malik ne esa kyu kiya jaane ke liye jude rhiye. bhaiyo update mai update ek din chorke aaea karga)
Yh aditi ko kaise janta hai
Kia hua tha uske past mein jo woh aaj aditi aur aishani ke samne bhi naqaab mein tha.. Eagerly waiting