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bhai ye system-based story hai ya magic based ya fir inter-planetary story hogi
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Shaandar jabardast Romanchak UpdateUPDATE 1
Ek bara drawing room. Rishtedaar, cousins, aur family ke saare members ek jagah baithe hain. Dev ko sabke beech mein khada kar diya gaya hai, jaise uska court-martial chal raha ho. Uska sir sharam aur bezar se jhuka hua hai, aur har taraf se awaazein uske dil ko chhalkane wali hain.
Badi Behen (tez awaaz mein): "Main toh sochti hoon isko ghar se nikaal do. Har koi apne bache pe fakr karta hai, lekin ispe? Mujhe toh log seedha muh bhi nahi lagate. Pata hai, kal Mrs. Sharma kya bol rahi thi? 'Tumhare bhai ke kaam-dhanday ka kya haal hai?' Kya bolti main? Yeh toh apne ghar ka naam mitti mein mila chuka hai!"
Chhota Cousin Bhai (hassi udate hue): "Didi, iska kya haal hoga? Yeh toh wahi banda hai jo chair ka screw bhi tight nahi kar sakta. Last time yaad hai, jab table theek karne bola tha? Table aur tod di isne!"
Sab log hassne lagte hain, aur Dev ka sir aur jhuk jata hai.
Chacha (taana marte hue): "Mujhe toh sharm aati hai yeh soch ke ki hamare khandan mein aisa koi hai. Har khandan mein ek ladka hota hai jo apne ghar ka sahara banta hai. Aur yeh? Yeh toh poora ghar khali karwa dega."
Cousin Sister (ghinn se): "Isse toh koi shaadi bhi nahi karega. Kis ladki ke ma-baap apni beti ko ek nakara aadmi ke saath shaadi karayenge? Shaadi toh door, isko toh koi apne ghar ka naukar bhi nahi rakhega."
Dev ki maa, jo ek kone mein bethi hain, chup reh nahi pati. "Yeh toh meri zindagi ka sabse bada pachtawa hai. Pata nahi kyu isko janam diya. Arre, koi apne maa-baap ke liye izzat ka karan banta hai, aur yeh? Yeh toh sirf hamare liye sharam ka karan ban gaya hai."
Dev ke papa apne kursi se uthte hain aur thandi si awaaz mein bolte hain, "Tu kisi kaam ka nahi hai, Dev. Main toh yeh sochta hoon ki agar tu ghar chhod de, toh shayad sabke dukh kam ho jayenge."
Dev kuch bolne ki koshish karta hai, lekin uski awaaz dab jaati hai. Uski chhoti behen bolti hai, "Bhai, tumne ek baar bhi kuch prove karne ki koshish kyun nahi ki? Hum sab tumhare liye pareshaan hote hain, lekin tum... tumhare chehre pe bas ek hi cheez dikhai deti hai—haar."
Cousin Brother (aur ek taana maarte hue): "Bhai, ek suggestion doon? Kisi circus mein kaam dhoondh le. Wahan toh tere jaise useless log bhi fit ho jate hain. Kam se kam wahan toh log tere upar hansenge aur tu apni useless life ka kuch kaam kar lega."**
Room ek baar phir se thaakon se gunj uthta hai. Dev ke dil ke tukde ho rahe hain, lekin wo chup-chaap khada hai. Uske aankhon se aansoo girne lagte hain, lekin wo unhe pochne ki bhi himmat nahi kar pata. Wo dheere-dheere andar ki taraf hi ghoom jata hai, jaise uska dard kisi ko samajh nahi aayega.
Dev ke papa ka gussa aur unki beizzati ka silsila ruka nahi tha. "Tu mar kyun nahi jaata? Tere marne se kam se kam humein toh sukoon milega. Ek bekaar insaan ka bojh uthana humare bas ki baat nahi hai," unhone thandi aur tez awaaz mein kaha.
Badi behen: "Pata hai, Papa? Yeh zinda hai toh hamare liye sharam ka karan hai. Ek din koi is ghar ke darwaze pe humein taane dene aa jayega, aur hum sir jhuka ke sun lenge. Isse accha yeh mar hi जाए!"
Chhoti behen, jo ab tak chup thi, apni jagah se khadi ho gayi. "Aap logon ko sharam aani chahiye! Bhai aapka beta hai, aapka khoon hai. Aap sab ne kabhi usse pyar kiya? Kabhi usse kuch sikhaya? Har waqt bas taane marte ho. Aap sab usse maar daloge ek din," uski awaaz gusse aur aansuon se bhar chuki thi.
Papa ne ghusse mein kaha, "Humare ghar ka naam mitti mein mila diya isne. Tu chup reh, uski tarafdari mat kar. Yeh kabhi sudhar nahi sakta."
Cousin ne mazaak udaate hue bola, "Arey, chhoti behen ko toh apne useless bhai pe bada pyar aa raha hai. Kyun? Yeh toh khud bhi apne marne ke laayak hai. Iska kuch nahi ho sakta!"
Dev ne pehli baar apni behen ki taraf dekha, uski aankhon mein aansoon aur sharm ka samundar tha. "Chhoti, bas kar... mujhe kisi ki zarurat nahi hai. Shayad sab log theek hi bolte hain. Main kuch nahi hoon, kisi kaam ka nahi hoon," uski awaaz dard se bhari thi.
Uske papa ne usse dekh kar kaha, "Agar tere mein thodi bhi sharam bachi hai, toh yeh ghar chhod de. Teri wajah se yeh ghar dooba ja raha hai. Ab aur mat rah yahan."
Dev dheere-dheere wahaan se chal diya, bina kuch bole. Chhoti behen uske peeche jaane lagi, lekin badi behen ne use rok diya. "Chhod, uski tarafdari karna bandh kar. Aise log ke liye rona bhi paap hai," usne gusse mein kaha.
Dev ne darwaza band kar liya, aur kamre ke kone mein baith gaya. Uski aankhon se aansoon ruk nahi rahe the. Usne socha, "Shayad yeh log sahi keh rahe hain. Shayad meri zindagi ka kuch matlab nahi hai."
Lekin chhoti behen darwaza khol kar uske paas aayi. "Bhai, kuch mat socho. Main tumhare saath hoon. Tumhe sab prove karne ka mauka milega," usne kaha, lekin Dev kuch nahi bola.
Baaki log aakar uski chhoti behen ko khich kar lekar chale gaye dheere dheere time gya aur samay hua raat kaa.
Raat ka samay. Ghar mein sab so rahe hain, lekin Dev ke kamre ke bahar kuch saazish chal rahi hai. Uske papa, badi behen, chacha, aur cousin ne milkar ek plan banaya hai.
Papa (dheere awaaz mein): "Aaj raat is chapter ko yahin khatam karte hain. Is ghar ka bojh khatam hona chahiye."
Chacha (raazdaar tone mein): "Usse yahaan nahi maar sakte. Ghar ke peeche ka jungle sahi jagah hai. Subah tak koi uska pata nahi laga payega."
Sab log apne haath mein rassi, danda, aur chhura lekar Dev ke kamre ki taraf badhte hain. Dev neend mein hai, apne sapnon mein khoya hua. Uske sapne bhi dukh bhare hain—aise sapne, jo sirf ek toota hua insaan dekh sakta hai.
Darwaza dheere se khulta hai, aur wo log uske kareeb aate hain. Ek hi jhatke mein Dev ke munh par rassi baandh di jati hai aur uska haath-pair pakad liya jata hai. Dev aankhein kholta hai, lekin kuch samajhne se pehle uske papa uske sir par danda maarte hain.
Badi Behen (gusse se): "Zyada shor mat karna! Jaldi se isse gadi mein daalo."
Dev adhoori hosh mein hai, lekin kuch kar nahi paa raha. Usse ghaseet kar ek gaadi ke andar daal diya jata hai. Gaadi andheri raat mein ek sunsaan jungle ki taraf chal padti hai.
Jungle ke beech ek jagah gaadi rukti hai.
Cousin (hassi udate hue): "Yeh jagah perfect hai. Koi idhar nahi aata."
Dev ko gaadi se neeche ghaseet kar nikala jata hai. Uska sharir abhi bhi half-conscious hai. Chacha ek chhura nikal kar uske papa ki taraf deta hai.
Chacha: "Aap hi khatam kijiye. Aakhir iska bojh sabse zyada aapne uthaya hai."
Papa bina ek shabd bole chhura uthate hain aur Dev ki taraf dekhte hain. "Tune humein sirf dukh aur sharm di hai. Aaj teri kahani khatam hoti hai."
Badi behen aur cousin Dev ko pakad kar rakhte hain. Papa chhura uske peeth mein ghusa dete hain. Dev ki aankhon ke samne andhera chha jata hai, lekin wo poora behosh nahi hota. Uska sharir lagbhag motionless hai, aur wo log samajhte hain ki Dev ab mar chuka hai.
Badi Behen: "Kaam khatam. Chalo yahan se niklo. Koi iski laash tak nahi dhundhega."
Wo log Dev ke sharir ko jungle ke andar ek gehera gaddha dekh kar wahan phenk dete hain aur upar se patthar aur mitti daal kar dhak dete hain. Sab log wapas gaadi mein baith kar ghar laut jate hain, jaise kuch hua hi na ho.
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Nice updateUPDATE 2
Character Introduction:
1. Dev (Hero, 25 years old):
A seemingly useless individual, Dev has always struggled with basic tasks, earning him the label of "useless" from his family. Though always ignored and belittled, there's more to Dev than meets the eye.
2. Ananya (Chhoti Behen, 18 years old):
Dev's younger sister, Ananya, loves him dearly, and despite his flaws, she believes in him more than anyone else. She stands by him even when the whole world turns against him.
3. Sakshi (Badi Behen, 30 years old):
Dev’s elder sister, more pragmatic and often critical of him, seeing him as a burden. She struggles to understand him but cares for him in her own way.
4. Raghav (Papa, 50 years old):
Dev’s father, who has little faith in his son’s potential. His tough love often comes across as cold and indifferent.
5. Gita (Maa, 48 years old):
Dev’s mother, whose harsh words have always made Dev feel unwanted. She doesn’t believe in his worth and expresses her frustration openly.
6. Sudhir (Chacha, 45 years old):
Dev's uncle, who plays a key role in keeping the family in check. Though not particularly close to Dev, he follows orders without question.
7. Aarav (Cousin Brother, 20 years old):
A cousin who doesn’t see Dev as someone worth helping but is tied to the family’s affairs.
8. Isha (Cousin Sister, 22 years old):
Another cousin who, like Aarav, does not get along with Dev. Their relationship is strained and full of tension.
Subah ka Samay
Ananya subah apne palatial ghar ke garden ke andar morning walk karte hue ruki hui hai. Aas-paas well-maintained lawns, fountains, aur marble benches hain, lekin Ananya ka mann un sab sukh-sauvvidhaon mein nahi lagta. Woh ek bade French window ke paas khadi hokar apne bade bhai Dev ke baare mein soch rahi hai. Uske dil mein ek ajeeb sa khali pan hai.
Breakfast ka time hota hai. Dining table par imported crockery aur freshly brewed coffee ki khushboo hai. Gita, Ananya ki maa, ek elegant sari pehne, table ke head par bethi hain. Woh ek calm aur composed aurat lagti hain, lekin unke shabdon mein aksar thandak aur authority hoti hai.
Gita: "Ananya, agar tu Dev ke baare mein sochna band karegi, toh tera din zyada productive hoga. Uski fikar chhod de, aur apne academics pe dhyan de."
Ananya unki baat sun kar kuch nahi bolti, lekin uska chehra udaas ho jata hai. Uska breakfast untouched hai. Woh bina kuch khaaye uthi aur apne room mein chali gayi. Dressing table ke saamne khadi hokar apne uniform ka ek button lagate-lagate uski soch wapas Dev ki taraf chali jaati hai. "Bhai ab tak ghar wapas kyun nahi aaye?"
Ananya apni cycle nahi, apni sleek white car le kar school ke liye nikalti hai. Driver car chala raha hai, aur woh backseat mein bethi hai, apne backpack ko apne saamne rakhe, khidki se bahar dekh rahi hai. She’s lost in thought. Driver bhi samajh raha hai ki Ananya kuch disturbed hai, lekin kuch kehta nahi.
School ek elite institution hai, bade-bade lawns aur marble entry gates ke saath. Jaise hi Ananya apne doston Priya aur Ayush ke paas pahuchti hai, dono uske chehre ki udaasi dekh kar thoda tense ho jaate hain. Priya ek designer dress aur Ayush branded shoes pehne hue hain, lekin dono ke chehre pe apni dost ke liye genuine concern hai.
Priya: "Ananya, tu itni serious kyun lag rahi hai? Subah ka mood spoil kar diya kya kisi ne?"
Ayush (halki hasi ke saath): "Ya phir... kya tumhare Bhai ne phir se koi aise stunt maar diya jo front page news ban jaye?"
Ananya ka gussa ek dum se bharak uthta hai. Woh Ayush ki taraf gusse se dekhti hai.
Ananya: "Ayush, mazaak mat karna! Tumhe pata bhi hai main kitni worried hoon? Bhai ghar nahi aaye, aur tum log unka mazaak uda rahe ho!"
Priya beech-bachav karne ki koshish karti hai. Woh softly Ananya ka haath pakad kar bolti hai
Priya: "Ananya, Ayush bas casual baat kar raha tha. Relax kar na. Mujhe pata hai tu Dev Bhai ke baare mein pareshaan hai, lekin shayad woh kisi kaam ke liye busy hain. Chal, andar chalte hain, shayad tera mood better ho jaye."
Ayush bhi ab apologize karta hai.
Ayush: "Sorry yaar, Ananya. Main bas mazaak kar raha tha. Mujhe pata hai ki tu kitni attached hai apne Bhai ke saath. Tension mat le; sab theek hoga."
Ananya unki baat sun kar thoda relax hoti hai, lekin ab bhi uska mann kharaab hai. Woh unke saath classroom ki taraf chal padti hai.
Classroom mein teacher apna lecture de kar ja chuke hain, aur lunch break hone mein abhi thoda time baaki hai. Class ke saare students apni notebooks band karke apni baatein karne lagte hain. Ananya apni seat par akeli bethi hai, aur uska mann kahin aur chala jaata hai. Uske dimaag mein Dev ke saath bitaaye bachpan ke pal ghoomne lagte hain.
Usse yaad aata hai ek din, jab woh chhoti si thi, sirf 7 saal ki, aur Dev tab 14 ka tha. Dono ek baar park mein khel rahe the, aur Ananya ek jhule se gir kar zor se ro padi thi.
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Bachpan Ki Yaad
Ananya ke ghutne se khoon nikal raha tha, aur woh zameen par bethi zor-zor se ro rahi thi. Dev uske paas bhaag kar aaya aur uske paas jhuk kar bola
Dev: "Anu, rona band kar na. Dekh, agar tu roti rahegi, toh sab log yeh samjhenge ki tu darpok hai. Chal, main tujhe ek magic trick dikhata hoon."
Dev ne apni jeb se ek chhota sa coin nikala aur usse apne haath mein chhupa kar bola:
Dev: "Dekho, yeh coin ab gayab ho jayega."
Ananya, apne aansoon pochhte hue, uski taraf curious nazron se dekhne lagi. Dev ne coin ko haath mein ghuma kar kaise bhi karke apni shirt ke andar gira diya. Phir usne apni jeb se coin nikal kar bola:
Dev: "Tada! Magic!"
Ananya ke aansoon thode ruk gaye, aur uske chehre par ek chhoti si muskaan aa gayi. Lekin uska ghutna abhi bhi dukh raha tha. Dev usse aur hansane ke liye zameen par ek patthar utha kar bola:
Dev: "Dekho, yeh patthar tere dard ka asli culprit hai. Main ab isse saza doonga!"
Phir Dev ne patthar ko pakad kar pretend kiya ki woh usse zor-zor se daant raha hai:
Dev: "Tumne meri behen ko giraya? Ab tu dekh, main tujhe giraata hoon!"
Yeh dekh kar Ananya hasne lagi. Dev ne phir uska haath pakad kar bola:
Dev: "Anu, tu ro mat. Agar tu muskuraayegi, toh dard khud-ba-khud bhaag jayega."
Ananya ki muskaan wapas aa gayi thi, aur Dev usse kandhe par utha kar ghar le gaya tha. Us din se lekar Ananya ko hamesha lagta tha ki Dev uska hero hai – chahe woh duniya ke liye kuch bhi ho, lekin Ananya ke liye woh sab kuch hai..
Dheere Dheere classes khatam hoti hai aur
Class ki ghanti bajti hai, aur lunch break shuru ho jata hai. Saare students apni desks chhod kar canteen ki taraf bhaag rahe hain. Kuch apne dosto ke saath lunch karne ke liye benches par baithte hain, toh kuch apne tiffins nikal kar wahi classroom mein hi kha rahe hain.
Ananya ab bhi apni jagah pe bethi hui hai, apne lunch box ko bag se nikal kar desk par rakh deti hai, lekin uska mann khane ka nahi hai. Woh ab bhi Dev ke baare mein soch rahi hai. Uski aankhon mein thodi udaasi hai, aur woh apne aas-paas ki chahal-pahal se bekoof hai.
Itne mein uske dono ache dost, Priya aur Ayush, uske paas aate hain. Priya ke haath mein uska tiffin hai, aur Ayush apne bag ko apne kandhe pe latkaye hue hamesha ki tarah masti ke mood mein hai.
Priya: "Anu, tu lunch nahi karegi? Subah se dekha hai tujhe, bilkul chup-chup si lag rahi hai. Sab theek hai na?"
Ayush (halki si hasi ke saath): "Haan, Ananya. Tera jo 'useless bhai' hai, woh kuch naya kar ke to nahi bhaag gaya?"
Priya ekdum Ayush ki taraf gusse se dekhti hai aur uska haath thoda sa maar kar bolti hai:
Priya: "Ayush, kabhi toh serious raha kar! Dekh nahi raha ki Ananya ka mood kharab hai?"
Ananya ek moment ke liye Ayush ki baat sun kar thoda khafa ho jati hai, lekin phir woh chup ho jati hai. Ayush uske badalte expressions ko dekh kar thoda samajh jata hai ki usne kuch galat keh diya.
Ayush (thoda sambhalte hue): "Sorry yaar, Ananya. Main mazaak kar raha tha. Kya hua hai? Tu tension mein lag rahi hai."
Ananya thoda hesitant hoti hai, lekin phir apne doston ko bata deti hai:
Ananya: "Bhai subah se ghar par nahi hai. Pata nahi kahan hai. Maa-papa ko koi parwaah hi nahi hai. Unhe lagta hai ki woh kuch kaam ka nahi hai, isliye unki missing hone ki bhi koi value nahi."
Priya uski baat sun kar thoda shocked hoti hai. Woh uska haath pakad kar softly bolti hai:
Priya: "Anu, tu tension mat le. Shayad woh kisi kaam ke liye bahar gaya ho aur wapas aa jayega."
Ananya: "Nahi Priya, mujhe lagta hai kuch galat hua hai. Bhai ki aadat hai bina bataaye ghar se bahar jaane ki, lekin is baar... is baar sab kuch alag lag raha hai."
Ayush bhi serious ho jata hai aur Ananya ke saamne ek stool kheench kar baith jata hai.
Ayush: "Dekho, main mazaak nahi kar raha, par kya tumne police ko report kiya? Agar tumhe sach mein kuch galat lag raha hai, toh action lena chahiye."
Ananya (thoda chidh kar): "Papa ne FIR file karwa di hai, lekin mujhe unki baaton pe bharosa nahi hai. Mujhe lagta hai woh kuch chhupa rahe hain."
Priya: "Aise mat soch, Anu. Tujhe khud kuch karna hoga. Chal, lunch ke baad hum teeno milkar plan karte hain ki kya karna chahiye."
Ayush usse distract karne ke liye uska tiffin khol leta hai.
Ayush: "Achha, ab yeh tension chod aur mujhe dekhne de ki tere lunch mein kya hai. Mujhe pata hai aunty tere tiffin mein aloo ke parathe deti hain."
Priya aur Ananya thoda sa hans padti hain, lekin Ananya ke chehre pe ek halka sa gham ab bhi hai.
Ananya: "Tum dono meri zindagi ke sabse ache dost ho. Mujhe nahi pata ki bhai ka kya hoga, lekin tum log ho to shayad main sambhal jaungi."
Priya uske kandhe pe haath rakhti hai aur muskurakar bolti hai:
Priya: "Tujhe toh pata hai, Anu. Hum hamesha tere saath hain."
Lunch break ke baaki samay mein woh teeno ek saath lunch karte hain, lekin Ananya ke dimaag mein Dev ki chinta ab bhi chhupi hui hai
Aise hi time kab katane laga koi nahi jaan paya aur dheere dheere raat ke andre ne asmaan ko dhak diyaa
Ek jungle ki ghana andhera bhari raat. Hawa mein ek ajeeb si gungunahat hai jo sirf khauf ko aur gehra banati hai. Jungle ke ek kone mein, kuch log ek jeep se utarte hain. Sabke haath mein hathiyar hain, aur unka chehra chehre pe khauf aur irade dono saaf dikh rahe hain.
Gang Leader (dheere aur theekhte hue):
"Yeh jagah sahi hai. Yeh do laashon ko yahan daba dete hain. Koi kabhi nahi milega. Jaldi karo, khudai shuru karo."
Teen aadmi apne haath mein belche aur phawda lekar zameen khodna shuru karte hain. Khudai karte-karte unmein se ek rukta hai aur ek ajeeb si cheez ko dekh kar dar jata hai.
Aadmi 1:
"Boss, yahan kuch hai... kuch ajeeb sa."
Gang Leader (apna hathiyar nikalte hue):
"Ajeeb kya? Dekhne do!"
Aur phir woh zameen se ek aadmi ka haath dikhai deta hai, jo puri tarah mitti mein lipta hua hai. Gang ke sab log ek pal ke liye dar jate hain.
Aadmi 2:
"Yeh toh laash lag rahi hai... lekin iski haalat dekh ke lagta hai ki yeh abhi abhi yahan dabai gayi hai."
Gang Leader:
"Chup raho! Laash hai toh kya hua? Zyada mat socho. Iska pura shareer bahar nikalo!"
Woh log phir se khodna shuru karte hain, aur dheere-dheere us aadmi ka pura shareer bahar aata hai. Woh Dev hai—zinda, lekin behosh aur zakhamon se bhara hua.
Aadmi 3 (shock mein):
"Boss! Yeh laash zinda hai!"
Gang Leader (apni aankhon par vishwas na karte hue):
"Kya bakwas kar raha hai tu? Kaise zinda ho sakta hai?"
Achanak Dev ki ungli hileti hai. Gang ke log peeche hat jaate hain.
Gang Leader (dheere se):
"Yeh kaise ho sakta hai? Isko toh maar diya gaya hoga!"
Dev ke aankh khul jate hain. Uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb si rage aur intensity hai. Jise woh dekhta hai, uska mann thartharane lagta hai. Uska chehra zakhmon se bhara hai, lekin uske andar ek nayi jaan aur ek alag si energy hai.
Dev (dheere, lekin khatarnaak awaaz mein):
"Kya tum log bhi mujhe dabane aaye ho? Ya phir tumhare hisse ka maidan khaali hai?"
Gang ke log ek pal ke liye bolti bandh ho jati hai. Gang Leader samajhne ki koshish karta hai, lekin Dev ek dum se uth kar ek aadmi ke hathiyar ko pakad leta hai.
Jungle mein khamoshi ke beech, Dev ki aankhon ki rage aur intensity ne gang ke logon ke hosh uda diye hain. Sab log ek pal ke liye ek doosre ki taraf dekhte hain, jaise samajh nahi paa rahe ho ki kya karna hai.
Gang Leader (dheere se):
"Yeh kaun hai? Iska yahan hone ka matlab kya hai?"
Dev, ab tak zakhmon se bhara hua aur kamzor hai, lekin uski aankhon ki energy ab bhi sab par bhaari pad rahi hai.
Dev (halke, lekin thake hue shabdon mein):
"Agar zinda hoon... toh iska matlab hai... mujhe dobara maarne ka irada toh tumhara nahi hai?"
Gang Leader (apne logon ko signal dete hue):
"Chup raho sab! Mujhe lagta hai, yeh zinda hai aur iski madad karna zaruri hai. Koi laash yahan zinda nahi hoti. Shayad iss aadmi ka kuch alag hi khel hai."
Gang ke log ek pal ke liye confusion mein hote hain, lekin boss ke signal ke baad woh Dev ke kareeb jaate hain aur usse uthane ki koshish karte hain.
Aadmi 1 (dar aur vishwas ke beech):
"Boss, yeh toh bilkul hi thak gaya hai. Shayad zyada waqt tak nahi bachega."
Gang Leader:
"Agar zinda hai, toh iska matlab hai isse upar waale ne bacha ke rakha hai. Jaldi karo! Gaadi lekar aao. Isko yahan aur nahi rehne dena."
Woh log Dev ko uthane lagte hain. Gang ka ek aadmi Dev ke haath se khun behte dekh kar apni shirt utar kar uske zakhmon par baandhne lagta hai.
Aadmi 2:
"Boss, yeh aadmi insaan lagta hai. Mujhe lagta hai iski madad karna chahiye. Shayad yeh kisi bade pareshani mein tha."
Gang Leader (gambhir lekin samajhdari ke saath):
"Haan, mujhe bhi yeh hi lagta hai. Hospital lekar chalo isse. Zinda reh gaya toh yeh aadmi humare kaam aa sakta hai, ya hume kuch raaz bata sakta hai."
Gang ke log Dev ko jeep mein bitha kar jungle ke raste se bahar nikalte hain. Jeep mein ek ajeeb si khamoshi chhayi hoti hai, lekin sabke chehre par confusion aur thoda sa afsos dikhai deta hai.
Dev (dheere, kamzor shabdon mein):
"Tum log... mujhe kyun bacha rahe ho? Shayad... mujhe yahin rehne dete toh behtar hota."
Gang Leader:
"Tumhe zinda rehne ka ek hi reason hoga. Shayad zindagi tumhare liye kuch aur plan kar rahi hai. Zyada mat socho, hum tumhe safe jagah le ja rahe hain."
Jeep ek chhoti si hospital ke paas rukti hai. Gang ke log Dev ko uthakar andar le jaate hain.
Doctor (suraksha ke saath):
"Yeh toh bohot buri halat mein hai. Zyada khun beh chuka hai. Tum log kaun ho?"
Gang Leader (jaldi se):
"Koi sawaal mat karo, bas iski jaan bacha lo. Paisa chahiye toh milega."
Doctor, gang ki baat samajhte hue, Dev ka ilaaj shuru kar deta hai. Dev ab tak behosh hai, lekin uska chehra ab bhi uske andar ki energy aur dard ko saaf dikhata hai.
Gang Leader (andar hi andar):
"Is aadmi ka zinda rehna zaruri hai. Shayad iska ek kissa shuru hone wala hai, jo ab tak hum samajh nahi paaye."
To be continued...
Mujhe to bas Ananya ko dekhna hai jab usko apne baap aur badi bahen ki sachhi ke baare me pata chalega ki uske ki baap aur bahen ne uske bhai ko maar ker jameen me gaad diya tha ,