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[Dev the lover]

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[Riky007]

भाई ये जनरल अपडेट्स है, जल्दी जल्दी देदो।

 

[Dev the lover]

भाई ये जनरल अपडेट्स है, जल्दी जल्दी देदो।

अपडेटस तैयार होते पर इमेज थोड़ा टाइम लेते है

 

[Dev the lover]

UPDATE 3

Character Names and Ages for the Gang Members

1. Viper (Gang Leader) - Age: 38
Viper is a sharp and experienced gang leader. He is practical and makes decisions based on logic rather than emotions. Despite his criminal activities, he has a strong moral compass, which leads him to save Dev.


2. Bittu (Right-hand Man) - Age: 30
Bittu is loyal to Viper and follows his orders without question. He is a quick thinker but often acts impulsively. He respects Viper’s judgment and supports him in making decisions.


3. Chhotu (Youngest Gang Member) - Age: 22
Chhotu is the youngest member of the gang. He is naive and often nervous in tense situations. His heart is softer than the others, which makes him question their criminal activities.


4. Jagga (The Muscle) - Age: 35
Jagga is the strongest member of the gang and is known for his brute strength. He doesn't talk much and prefers action over words, but he secretly has a compassionate side.


5. Ravi (The Driver) - Age: 28
Ravi is an expert driver and navigator. He ensures the gang’s safe movement through tricky terrains. He is calm under pressure and always ready to support the team.


6. Dr. Neelam (The Doctor) - Age: 40
Dr. Neelam is a skilled and compassionate doctor who is treating Dev. She is professional, focused on her patients, and goes above and beyond to help Dev recover physically and emotionally.
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Subah ka waqt tha. Hospital ke aas-paas ki hawa mein ek ajeeb sa sannata tha, jaise koi anjaani musibat wahin chhupi baithi ho. Ek halki dhund ne poore ilake ko dhak rakha tha, aur hospital ke upar mandra raha andhera jaise ek buri khabar ki dastak de raha ho. Aas-paas ke ped-paudhe hawa ke saath hil rahe the, lekin unki khamoshi mein bhi ek dar chhupa tha.

Viper aur uski gang ne Dev ko hospital ke andar bhijwaya tha, lekin unka mann kisi ajeeb se bechaini ka shikar tha. Viper ka chehra uski manzil tak pahuchne ki ek kaidi jaisi talaash ko chhupane ki koshish kar raha tha. Hospital ke reception par ek nurse ne Dev ke halat dekh kar turant ek stretcher bulwaya, aur use emergency ward ki taraf le jaaya gaya.
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Gang ke sabhi sadasya hospital ke ek kone mein chup kar baith gaye the. Unka mann ek ajeeb si halchal se bhara hua tha. Unhone hospital mein rukne ka faisla kiya, lekin unke chehre unki asli soch ko beyaan kar rahe the—yahaan rukna sirf ek chaal thi.

Viper ka chehra gambhir tha. Usne dheere se apni gang ki taraf dekha aur halki awaaz mein bola,
"Abhi yahan se bhaagna ek galti hogi. Agar hum ess ladke ko yahan chodkar chale gaye, toh kuch bhi ho sakta hai. Mujhe pata hai yeh risky hai, par yeh risk lena zaroori hai."

Bittu, jo hamesha Viper ka saath deta tha, lekin is baar uske chehre par thoda sa dar tha, bola,
"Boss, yeh hospital mujhe theek jagah nahi lagta. Yeh ek mamuli ladka hai, aur humne pehle kabhi kisi ke liye aise risk nahi liya. Kya yeh sahi hai?"

Viper ne Bittu ki baat suni, lekin uska chehra ek ajeeb sa gussa aur self-control dikha raha tha. Usne apne haath se Bittu ko chup rehne ka ishaara kiya aur uski aankhein ek pal ke liye hospital ke gate par tik gayi, jaise kisi anjaane khatre ko talash rahi ho. Phir usne apni awaaz mein ek thehrav laate hue kaha,
"Bittu, tum samajhte nahi ho. Hum yahan sirf kisi ki jaan bachane ke liye nahi ruk rahe. Yeh ladka kuch alag hai. Mujhe bhi poora nahi pata, par ek baat to tay hai—agar yeh yahan se gaya, toh hum sabke liye mushkil khadi ho sakti hai. Tum log bas apne kaam par dhyan do. Aur rahi baat risk ki, toh humne yeh kaam kabhi safe hone ke liye nahi kiya."

Viper ke shabdon ne gang ke logon ko shaant toh kar diya, lekin unki aankhon mein ek ajeeb si pareeksha ab bhi dikh rahi thi. Uske baad, unhone hospital ke aas-paas apni positions le li.

Ek banda reception ke kareeb khada tha, doosra emergency ward ke corridor ke paas, aur ek aur banda hospital ke gate ke baahar ki taraf nigrani kar raha tha. Hospital ki rakhwaali ab unka naya kaam ban chuka tha. Har kisi ka dhyan ek dusre ke signals par tha.

Hospital ke emergency room ke andar, Dev abhi bhi behosh tha, lekin uske chehre par ek ajeeb sa thehrav tha—jaise kuch bada hone waala ho. Uske aas-paas chalti medical machines ki beep aur doctor ki halki awaaz ne us room ko aur bhi suspenseful bana diya.

Bahar, Viper ek bench par baitha tha, cigarette jalane ki koshish kar raha tha. Uske chehre par thoda gussa, thoda soch, aur ek ajeeb si samasya ki parchaiyaan dikh rahi thi. Lekin ek baat pakki thi jo plan usne abhi tak nahi banaya tha, woh ab shuru hone waala tha.

Udhar

Hospital ke emergency room ka mahaul ek ajeeb si tanav bhari shanti se bhara hua tha. Dev ko stretcher par lete hue doctors aur nurses ne turant treatment shuru kar diya. Uska sharir zakhmon se bhara hua tha—kuch nayi chot, toh kuch purani. Uski saans ruk-ruk kar chal rahi thi, aur monitor ki beep bar-bar warning de rahi thi ki halat naazuk hai.

Doctor Neelam, jo us waqt duty par thi, ek experienced aur samajhdaar doctor thi. Lekin unke chehre par chinta ki lakeerein saaf dikh rahi thi. Unhone Dev ke report aur scan ki taraf dekha aur turant action lena shuru kiya.

Doctor Neelam (nurses se, jaldi-jaldi):
"Patient ka blood pressure unstable hai, aur heart rate kaafi slow ho raha hai. Humein turant CPR aur defibrillator ready karna hoga. Iska ek-ek second important hai."
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Unhone Dev ke chest par pads lagaye aur defibrillator charge kiya. Pehli shock ke baad bhi monitor par koi response nahi tha. Nurse ne halki si awaaz mein pucha,
"Doctor, iski saans ruk gayi kya?"

Doctor Neelam (thoda gusse aur tension mein):
"Ruk gayi toh wapas laana hoga. Yeh patient critical hai, par abhi haar nahi maanenge. 300 joules par charge karo!"

Doosri shock ke baad Dev ke monitor par ek halki si movement dikhi. Doctor ne saans li aur turant oxygen mask lagane ka order diya. Lekin jaise hi unhone Dev ki chest scan ki report dekhi, unka chehra aur serious ho gaya.

Doctor Neelam (apne aap se, dheere se):
"Iska heart... iske heart me ek genetic defect lagta hai. Yeh problem shayad pehle se thi, lekin injury ke stress ne isse aur bigaad diya hai. Agar kuch din aur tak ye detect nahi hota, toh ye iski maut ka karan ban sakta tha."

Tabhi, emergency room ke darwaze par Viper dikhai diya. Uska chehra ek ajeeb si sanjeedgi ke saath bhara tha. Usne dheere kadam se andar aakar doctor se baat ki.

Viper (dheere se, lekin authority ke saath):
"Doctor, ek baat yaad rakhna. Koi bhi galti nahi honi chahiye. Is aadmi ko zinda rakhna zaroori hai, chahe kuch bhi karna pade. Main chahata hoon yeh jaye nahi."

Doctor Neelam ne Viper ki taraf dekha. Uske shabdon mein ek command tha, lekin uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb si khauf aur urgency bhi thi.

Doctor Neelam (thoda tension mein, lekin professional):
"Main apna kaam kar rahi hoon. Lekin iska halat itni kharab hai ki agar yeh zinda bacha, toh iske andar kaafi secrets honge jo samajhna zaroori hoga."

Viper ne ek kadam aage badhte hue uski aankhon mein dekha,
"Secrets ka sawal baad mein uthana, abhi mujhe sirf yeh chahiye ki yeh insaan zinda rahe."

Doctor ne sir hila kar haan kar diya aur apni team ke saath Dev ke treatment mein lag gayi. Monitor ki beep ab thodi stable hone lagi thi, lekin heart ka genetic defect ab bhi ek ticking time bomb ki tarah tha. Viper emergency room ke ek kone mein khada tha, apne chehre par ek ajeeb sa samjhota aur confusion le kar.

Usne dheere se apne team ko signal diya jo hospital ke har kone par chhup kar rakhwali kar rahe the. Ek bande ne reception ka area sambhal rakha tha, doosre ne emergency ward ke corridor par nazar banayi hui thi, aur ek aur banda gate ke paas khada tha.

Viper ka chehra ek baar fir Dev ki taraf ghooma. Uske dimaag mein sirf ek baat chal rahi thi,
"Yeh aadmi agar zinda raha, toh yeh sirf meri wajah se hoga... aur agar nahi raha, toh woh bhi meri wajah se."

Viper ki aankhon ke saamne ek baar phir uski marati hui patni ka chehra aa gaya—ek chehra jo usne kabhi nahi bhula. Us waqt hospital ki machinery ki beep aur doctors ki awaaz bhi uske kaan tak nahi pahuch rahi thi. Uske zehan mein sirf uski patni ke aakhri shabdon ki goonj thi.
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Flashback​

Ek andheri raat thi, aur Viper apni patni, Kavya, ke paas hospital ke ICU mein khada tha. Kavya ki saans ruk-ruk kar chal rahi thi, aur uske zakhm itne gehre the ki doctors ne haath utha liya tha. Viper, jo duniya ke liye ek khatarnaak gangster tha, us raat ek bechara pati ban chuka tha. Uska chehra aansuon se geela tha, lekin apni patni ke saamne woh kamzor nahi dikhna chahta tha.

Kavya ne dheere se apni aadhi khuli aankhein uthakar Viper ki taraf dekha. Uski awaaz itni halki ho chuki thi ki Viper ko uske kareeb jakar baithna pada.

Kavya (dheere se, muskurane ki koshish karte hue):
"Viper... tumne mere liye bohot kuch kiya... par ek baat ka dukh hamesha rahega..."

Viper (uska haath zor se pakadte hue):
"Kya keh rahi ho, Kavya? Main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon tumhare liye. Bas tum yeh baatein mat karo... Tumhe kuch nahi hoga!"

Kavya (aasoon bhari aankhon se):
"Nahi, Viper... mera waqt khatam ho chuka hai. Main jaanti hoon ki tumne apne sab kuch laga diya mujhe bachaane ke liye. Par... ek baat ka gham hai... mere bhai ko tum bacha nahi paaye... Agar us din tum uske saath hote, toh shayad woh zinda hota."

Viper ke chehre par ek gham ka saaya chha gaya. Usne Kavya ke bhai ko ek gang war ke beech khoya tha. Us din woh unhe bachane ke liye der se pahucha tha. Yeh baat uske dil ke kone mein ek shool ki tarah chubti thi.

Kavya (thodi aur kamzor hoti hui):
"Lekin Viper... tum ek acche insaan ho. Main tumse bas ek waada maangti hoon. Agar kabhi tumhe kisi aise insaan ki zindagi bachane ka mauka mile, jo mere bhai ki tarah majboor ho, toh usse jaroor bachaana... Shayad isse tumhari woh purani galti dhul jaaye."

Viper (aasoon rokne ki koshish karte hue):
"Kavya, tum aisa mat bolo. Tumhare bina main kuch nahi hoon... Main waada karta hoon, par tum mujhe chodkar mat jao."

Kavya ek halki si muskaan ke saath uska haath dheere se chhod deti hai, aur uski saans ruk jaati hai. Viper ki duniya us raat khatam ho gayi thi. Usne Kavya ka aakhri waada toh maan liya tha, lekin usse kabhi uska palan karne ka mauka nahi mila... ab tak.

Present

Viper ka chehra ek ajeeb sa milan kar raha tha—ek taraf gham, doosri taraf ek bechaini. Dev hospital ke bed par zakhmon se bhara hua pada tha, aur uska dil kabhi bhi dhadakna band kar sakta tha. Lekin usse yeh lag raha tha ki Kavya ka waada yahan pura ho sakta hai.

Usne apne aadmi ko dheere se ishaara kiya aur doctor ke paas gaya.

Viper (doctor se, dabe hue lekin firm awaaz mein):
"Main chahta hoon ki yeh zinda rahe. Tumhe jo bhi karna ho, karo. Iska dil chahe kitna bhi kharaab kyun na ho, isse maarna mat."

Doctor ne uski taraf dekha, jaise woh samajh gaya ho ki baat sirf professional treatment ki nahi hai, balki insaniyat ki bhi hai.

Viper ne andar hi andar Kavya se ek baar phir waada kiya, "Main uska jaan bachane ki koshish karunga, Kavya. Is baar koi galti nahi hogi."

Aur woh wahin, door se, Dev ki halat dekhte hue khada raha, jaise uske dil ka ek bojh dheere-dheere halka ho raha ho.

"Aakhir insaan mein yehi toh hota hai," Viper ne apne aap se kaha, jaise woh Kavya ki aakhri baaton ko yaad kar raha ho. "Jinke seene mein dil ho, aur dil mein daya ho, woh apne diye waade aur vachan ke liye apna sab kuch daav par laga dete hain... marna bhi pasand karte hain."

Uska mann ek ajeeb si kasak aur halke sukoon se bhara hua tha. Dev ke zakhmon aur uske dil ki halat ko dekhte hue, uska mann usi waade ki taraf khinch raha tha jo Kavya ne apni aakhri saans mein usse liya tha.

Us moment mein, Viper ka woh roop saamne aaya jo shayad kisi ne kabhi dekha hi nahi tha—ek gangster ke peeche chhupa ek insaan, jiske andar ab bhi kuch achchai baaki thi. Jo apne vaade ke liye lad raha tha, chahe uska matlab uski apni jaan ke saath khelna hi kyun na ho.

Usne apne aadmi se kaha, "Yahan rakhwali karni hai. Kisi ko is aadmi tak pahuchne mat dena. Main chhupkar dekhunga ki doctor kya karte hain."

Viper ki aankhen hospital ke operation theater ke door par tiki thi, jaise woh apni Kavya ke liye uska waada pura karne ka intezaar kar raha ho. Uska ek hisaab tha—apni zindagi ke us ek adhure waade ko pura karna, jo usse insaaniyat ki taraf ek chhoti si umeed deta tha.

Aur yeh sach tha—jis insaan ke seene mein dil ho, aur dil mein daya ho, woh apne waade aur vachan ke liye apni zindagi bhi daav par lagane ke liye tayar ho jaata hai.

Achanak, hospital ke aas-paas kuch ajeeb sa shor sunayi dene lagta hai. Yeh awaaz thi, ek bhayankar aag ki, jo hospital ke bahar se aa rahi thi. Hospital ke dwaar par ek andhera sa cha gaya, aur ek bahut tez fire ki awaaz sunayi dene lagi. Saath hi, kuch ajeeb aur khatarnaak log hospital ke aas-paas dikhayi dene lage, unke chehre pe gussa aur badla lene ka daawa tha—yeh log kuch aur nahi, Viper ke enemies the, jo unhe maarne ke liye yahan aaye the.

Enemy Leader (apni team se, gussa mein): "Yeh hospital humare liye naya target hai. Inko maar dena zaroori hai. Viper aur uske gang ke log yahan chhupay hue hain. Hum is baar unko zinda nahi chhodenge."

Jab yeh baat sunayi di, hospital ka mahaul turant badal gaya. Hospital ke andar ek moment ke liye, sab kuch shant tha, lekin bahar ki taraf shor badh raha tha. Enemy team ne apna plan tayar kar liya tha. Hospital ke andar ghanti ki awaaz sunayi dene lagi, aur enemy log apne hathiyar nikaal rahe the.

Aur is waqt, Viper aur uski gang ko samajh aaya ki kuch galat ho sakta hai.

Viper (apni gang se, gussa ho kar): "Kya ho raha hai? Yeh sab kisne kar diya?"

Bittu (panic mein): "Boss, yeh log kaafi muskil mein hain. Inka target hum hain!"

Viper ki aankhon mein chamak thi, aur usne apne gang ko taiyar karte hue kaha, "Tum log apne guns nikaalo. Yeh koi aam jang nahi hai."

Hospital ka andar aur bahar ka mahaul ab ek alag rang mein rang gaya tha—ek taraf Viper aur uski gang taiyar ho rahi thi, toh doosri taraf enemy gang apni planning mein lag gayi thi.

Enemy Leader (aawaaz mein): "Yeh kamine Viper ko maarna zaroori hai!"
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Dono taraf ki team apne aakhri sangharsh ke liye tayar ho gayi thi. Sab apne haath mein hathiyar le kar ek dusre ko dekh rahe the, jaise yeh sirf ek jang nahi, balki unki zindagi ki aakhri jang ho. Aur isi beech, Dev ki zindagi ke raaz bhi dheere-dheere samne aane wale the. Viper aur uski gang ko ek bade test se guzarna tha, aur iss jang mein jeet ya haar, sab kuch badalne wala tha.​

 

[parkas]

UPDATE 2

Character Introduction:

1. Dev (Hero, 25 years old):
A seemingly useless individual, Dev has always struggled with basic tasks, earning him the label of "useless" from his family. Though always ignored and belittled, there's more to Dev than meets the eye.

2. Ananya (Chhoti Behen, 18 years old):
Dev's younger sister, Ananya, loves him dearly, and despite his flaws, she believes in him more than anyone else. She stands by him even when the whole world turns against him.


3. Sakshi (Badi Behen, 30 years old):
Dev’s elder sister, more pragmatic and often critical of him, seeing him as a burden. She struggles to understand him but cares for him in her own way.


4. Raghav (Papa, 50 years old):
Dev’s father, who has little faith in his son’s potential. His tough love often comes across as cold and indifferent.


5. Gita (Maa, 48 years old):
Dev’s mother, whose harsh words have always made Dev feel unwanted. She doesn’t believe in his worth and expresses her frustration openly.


6. Sudhir (Chacha, 45 years old):
Dev's uncle, who plays a key role in keeping the family in check. Though not particularly close to Dev, he follows orders without question.

7. Aarav (Cousin Brother, 20 years old):
A cousin who doesn’t see Dev as someone worth helping but is tied to the family’s affairs.


8. Isha (Cousin Sister, 22 years old):
Another cousin who, like Aarav, does not get along with Dev. Their relationship is strained and full of tension.


Subah ka Samay

Ananya subah apne palatial ghar ke garden ke andar morning walk karte hue ruki hui hai. Aas-paas well-maintained lawns, fountains, aur marble benches hain, lekin Ananya ka mann un sab sukh-sauvvidhaon mein nahi lagta. Woh ek bade French window ke paas khadi hokar apne bade bhai Dev ke baare mein soch rahi hai. Uske dil mein ek ajeeb sa khali pan hai.


Breakfast ka time hota hai. Dining table par imported crockery aur freshly brewed coffee ki khushboo hai. Gita, Ananya ki maa, ek elegant sari pehne, table ke head par bethi hain. Woh ek calm aur composed aurat lagti hain, lekin unke shabdon mein aksar thandak aur authority hoti hai.

Gita: "Ananya, agar tu Dev ke baare mein sochna band karegi, toh tera din zyada productive hoga. Uski fikar chhod de, aur apne academics pe dhyan de."

Ananya unki baat sun kar kuch nahi bolti, lekin uska chehra udaas ho jata hai. Uska breakfast untouched hai. Woh bina kuch khaaye uthi aur apne room mein chali gayi. Dressing table ke saamne khadi hokar apne uniform ka ek button lagate-lagate uski soch wapas Dev ki taraf chali jaati hai. "Bhai ab tak ghar wapas kyun nahi aaye?"

Ananya apni cycle nahi, apni sleek white car le kar school ke liye nikalti hai. Driver car chala raha hai, aur woh backseat mein bethi hai, apne backpack ko apne saamne rakhe, khidki se bahar dekh rahi hai. She’s lost in thought. Driver bhi samajh raha hai ki Ananya kuch disturbed hai, lekin kuch kehta nahi.

School ek elite institution hai, bade-bade lawns aur marble entry gates ke saath. Jaise hi Ananya apne doston Priya aur Ayush ke paas pahuchti hai, dono uske chehre ki udaasi dekh kar thoda tense ho jaate hain. Priya ek designer dress aur Ayush branded shoes pehne hue hain, lekin dono ke chehre pe apni dost ke liye genuine concern hai.



Priya: "Ananya, tu itni serious kyun lag rahi hai? Subah ka mood spoil kar diya kya kisi ne?"

Ayush (halki hasi ke saath): "Ya phir... kya tumhare Bhai ne phir se koi aise stunt maar diya jo front page news ban jaye?"

Ananya ka gussa ek dum se bharak uthta hai. Woh Ayush ki taraf gusse se dekhti hai.

Ananya: "Ayush, mazaak mat karna! Tumhe pata bhi hai main kitni worried hoon? Bhai ghar nahi aaye, aur tum log unka mazaak uda rahe ho!"

Priya beech-bachav karne ki koshish karti hai. Woh softly Ananya ka haath pakad kar bolti hai

Priya: "Ananya, Ayush bas casual baat kar raha tha. Relax kar na. Mujhe pata hai tu Dev Bhai ke baare mein pareshaan hai, lekin shayad woh kisi kaam ke liye busy hain. Chal, andar chalte hain, shayad tera mood better ho jaye."

Ayush bhi ab apologize karta hai.

Ayush: "Sorry yaar, Ananya. Main bas mazaak kar raha tha. Mujhe pata hai ki tu kitni attached hai apne Bhai ke saath. Tension mat le; sab theek hoga."

Ananya unki baat sun kar thoda relax hoti hai, lekin ab bhi uska mann kharaab hai. Woh unke saath classroom ki taraf chal padti hai.

Classroom mein teacher apna lecture de kar ja chuke hain, aur lunch break hone mein abhi thoda time baaki hai. Class ke saare students apni notebooks band karke apni baatein karne lagte hain. Ananya apni seat par akeli bethi hai, aur uska mann kahin aur chala jaata hai. Uske dimaag mein Dev ke saath bitaaye bachpan ke pal ghoomne lagte hain.

Usse yaad aata hai ek din, jab woh chhoti si thi, sirf 7 saal ki, aur Dev tab 14 ka tha. Dono ek baar park mein khel rahe the, aur Ananya ek jhule se gir kar zor se ro padi thi.

Flashback

Bachpan Ki Yaad

Ananya ke ghutne se khoon nikal raha tha, aur woh zameen par bethi zor-zor se ro rahi thi. Dev uske paas bhaag kar aaya aur uske paas jhuk kar bola

Dev: "Anu, rona band kar na. Dekh, agar tu roti rahegi, toh sab log yeh samjhenge ki tu darpok hai. Chal, main tujhe ek magic trick dikhata hoon."

Dev ne apni jeb se ek chhota sa coin nikala aur usse apne haath mein chhupa kar bola:
Dev: "Dekho, yeh coin ab gayab ho jayega."
Ananya, apne aansoon pochhte hue, uski taraf curious nazron se dekhne lagi. Dev ne coin ko haath mein ghuma kar kaise bhi karke apni shirt ke andar gira diya. Phir usne apni jeb se coin nikal kar bola:

Dev: "Tada! Magic!"

Ananya ke aansoon thode ruk gaye, aur uske chehre par ek chhoti si muskaan aa gayi. Lekin uska ghutna abhi bhi dukh raha tha. Dev usse aur hansane ke liye zameen par ek patthar utha kar bola:
Dev: "Dekho, yeh patthar tere dard ka asli culprit hai. Main ab isse saza doonga!"

Phir Dev ne patthar ko pakad kar pretend kiya ki woh usse zor-zor se daant raha hai:
Dev: "Tumne meri behen ko giraya? Ab tu dekh, main tujhe giraata hoon!"​

Yeh dekh kar Ananya hasne lagi. Dev ne phir uska haath pakad kar bola:
Dev: "Anu, tu ro mat. Agar tu muskuraayegi, toh dard khud-ba-khud bhaag jayega."

Ananya ki muskaan wapas aa gayi thi, aur Dev usse kandhe par utha kar ghar le gaya tha. Us din se lekar Ananya ko hamesha lagta tha ki Dev uska hero hai – chahe woh duniya ke liye kuch bhi ho, lekin Ananya ke liye woh sab kuch hai..

Dheere Dheere classes khatam hoti hai aur
Class ki ghanti bajti hai, aur lunch break shuru ho jata hai. Saare students apni desks chhod kar canteen ki taraf bhaag rahe hain. Kuch apne dosto ke saath lunch karne ke liye benches par baithte hain, toh kuch apne tiffins nikal kar wahi classroom mein hi kha rahe hain.

Ananya ab bhi apni jagah pe bethi hui hai, apne lunch box ko bag se nikal kar desk par rakh deti hai, lekin uska mann khane ka nahi hai. Woh ab bhi Dev ke baare mein soch rahi hai. Uski aankhon mein thodi udaasi hai, aur woh apne aas-paas ki chahal-pahal se bekoof hai.

Itne mein uske dono ache dost, Priya aur Ayush, uske paas aate hain. Priya ke haath mein uska tiffin hai, aur Ayush apne bag ko apne kandhe pe latkaye hue hamesha ki tarah masti ke mood mein hai.

Priya: "Anu, tu lunch nahi karegi? Subah se dekha hai tujhe, bilkul chup-chup si lag rahi hai. Sab theek hai na?"

Ayush (halki si hasi ke saath): "Haan, Ananya. Tera jo 'useless bhai' hai, woh kuch naya kar ke to nahi bhaag gaya?"

Priya ekdum Ayush ki taraf gusse se dekhti hai aur uska haath thoda sa maar kar bolti hai:
Priya: "Ayush, kabhi toh serious raha kar! Dekh nahi raha ki Ananya ka mood kharab hai?"

Ananya ek moment ke liye Ayush ki baat sun kar thoda khafa ho jati hai, lekin phir woh chup ho jati hai. Ayush uske badalte expressions ko dekh kar thoda samajh jata hai ki usne kuch galat keh diya.

Ayush (thoda sambhalte hue): "Sorry yaar, Ananya. Main mazaak kar raha tha. Kya hua hai? Tu tension mein lag rahi hai."

Ananya thoda hesitant hoti hai, lekin phir apne doston ko bata deti hai:
Ananya: "Bhai subah se ghar par nahi hai. Pata nahi kahan hai. Maa-papa ko koi parwaah hi nahi hai. Unhe lagta hai ki woh kuch kaam ka nahi hai, isliye unki missing hone ki bhi koi value nahi."

Priya uski baat sun kar thoda shocked hoti hai. Woh uska haath pakad kar softly bolti hai:
Priya: "Anu, tu tension mat le. Shayad woh kisi kaam ke liye bahar gaya ho aur wapas aa jayega."

Ananya: "Nahi Priya, mujhe lagta hai kuch galat hua hai. Bhai ki aadat hai bina bataaye ghar se bahar jaane ki, lekin is baar... is baar sab kuch alag lag raha hai."

Ayush bhi serious ho jata hai aur Ananya ke saamne ek stool kheench kar baith jata hai.

Ayush: "Dekho, main mazaak nahi kar raha, par kya tumne police ko report kiya? Agar tumhe sach mein kuch galat lag raha hai, toh action lena chahiye."

Ananya (thoda chidh kar): "Papa ne FIR file karwa di hai, lekin mujhe unki baaton pe bharosa nahi hai. Mujhe lagta hai woh kuch chhupa rahe hain."

Priya: "Aise mat soch, Anu. Tujhe khud kuch karna hoga. Chal, lunch ke baad hum teeno milkar plan karte hain ki kya karna chahiye."

Ayush usse distract karne ke liye uska tiffin khol leta hai.
Ayush: "Achha, ab yeh tension chod aur mujhe dekhne de ki tere lunch mein kya hai. Mujhe pata hai aunty tere tiffin mein aloo ke parathe deti hain."

Priya aur Ananya thoda sa hans padti hain, lekin Ananya ke chehre pe ek halka sa gham ab bhi hai.
Ananya: "Tum dono meri zindagi ke sabse ache dost ho. Mujhe nahi pata ki bhai ka kya hoga, lekin tum log ho to shayad main sambhal jaungi."

Priya uske kandhe pe haath rakhti hai aur muskurakar bolti hai:

Priya: "Tujhe toh pata hai, Anu. Hum hamesha tere saath hain."

Lunch break ke baaki samay mein woh teeno ek saath lunch karte hain, lekin Ananya ke dimaag mein Dev ki chinta ab bhi chhupi hui hai

Aise hi time kab katane laga koi nahi jaan paya aur dheere dheere raat ke andre ne asmaan ko dhak diyaa

Ek jungle ki ghana andhera bhari raat. Hawa mein ek ajeeb si gungunahat hai jo sirf khauf ko aur gehra banati hai. Jungle ke ek kone mein, kuch log ek jeep se utarte hain. Sabke haath mein hathiyar hain, aur unka chehra chehre pe khauf aur irade dono saaf dikh rahe hain.

Gang Leader (dheere aur theekhte hue):
"Yeh jagah sahi hai. Yeh do laashon ko yahan daba dete hain. Koi kabhi nahi milega. Jaldi karo, khudai shuru karo."

Teen aadmi apne haath mein belche aur phawda lekar zameen khodna shuru karte hain. Khudai karte-karte unmein se ek rukta hai aur ek ajeeb si cheez ko dekh kar dar jata hai.

Aadmi 1:
"Boss, yahan kuch hai... kuch ajeeb sa."

Gang Leader (apna hathiyar nikalte hue):
"Ajeeb kya? Dekhne do!"

Aur phir woh zameen se ek aadmi ka haath dikhai deta hai, jo puri tarah mitti mein lipta hua hai. Gang ke sab log ek pal ke liye dar jate hain.

Aadmi 2:
"Yeh toh laash lag rahi hai... lekin iski haalat dekh ke lagta hai ki yeh abhi abhi yahan dabai gayi hai."

Gang Leader:
"Chup raho! Laash hai toh kya hua? Zyada mat socho. Iska pura shareer bahar nikalo!"

Woh log phir se khodna shuru karte hain, aur dheere-dheere us aadmi ka pura shareer bahar aata hai. Woh Dev hai—zinda, lekin behosh aur zakhamon se bhara hua.

Aadmi 3 (shock mein):
"Boss! Yeh laash zinda hai!"

Gang Leader (apni aankhon par vishwas na karte hue):
"Kya bakwas kar raha hai tu? Kaise zinda ho sakta hai?"

Achanak Dev ki ungli hileti hai. Gang ke log peeche hat jaate hain.


Gang Leader (dheere se):
"Yeh kaise ho sakta hai? Isko toh maar diya gaya hoga!"

Dev ke aankh khul jate hain. Uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb si rage aur intensity hai. Jise woh dekhta hai, uska mann thartharane lagta hai. Uska chehra zakhmon se bhara hai, lekin uske andar ek nayi jaan aur ek alag si energy hai.

Dev (dheere, lekin khatarnaak awaaz mein):
"Kya tum log bhi mujhe dabane aaye ho? Ya phir tumhare hisse ka maidan khaali hai?"


Gang ke log ek pal ke liye bolti bandh ho jati hai. Gang Leader samajhne ki koshish karta hai, lekin Dev ek dum se uth kar ek aadmi ke hathiyar ko pakad leta hai.

Jungle mein khamoshi ke beech, Dev ki aankhon ki rage aur intensity ne gang ke logon ke hosh uda diye hain. Sab log ek pal ke liye ek doosre ki taraf dekhte hain, jaise samajh nahi paa rahe ho ki kya karna hai.

Gang Leader (dheere se):
"Yeh kaun hai? Iska yahan hone ka matlab kya hai?"

Dev, ab tak zakhmon se bhara hua aur kamzor hai, lekin uski aankhon ki energy ab bhi sab par bhaari pad rahi hai.

Dev (halke, lekin thake hue shabdon mein):
"Agar zinda hoon... toh iska matlab hai... mujhe dobara maarne ka irada toh tumhara nahi hai?"

Gang Leader (apne logon ko signal dete hue):
"Chup raho sab! Mujhe lagta hai, yeh zinda hai aur iski madad karna zaruri hai. Koi laash yahan zinda nahi hoti. Shayad iss aadmi ka kuch alag hi khel hai."

Gang ke log ek pal ke liye confusion mein hote hain, lekin boss ke signal ke baad woh Dev ke kareeb jaate hain aur usse uthane ki koshish karte hain.

Aadmi 1 (dar aur vishwas ke beech):
"Boss, yeh toh bilkul hi thak gaya hai. Shayad zyada waqt tak nahi bachega."

Gang Leader:
"Agar zinda hai, toh iska matlab hai isse upar waale ne bacha ke rakha hai. Jaldi karo! Gaadi lekar aao. Isko yahan aur nahi rehne dena."

Woh log Dev ko uthane lagte hain. Gang ka ek aadmi Dev ke haath se khun behte dekh kar apni shirt utar kar uske zakhmon par baandhne lagta hai.

Aadmi 2:
"Boss, yeh aadmi insaan lagta hai. Mujhe lagta hai iski madad karna chahiye. Shayad yeh kisi bade pareshani mein tha."

Gang Leader (gambhir lekin samajhdari ke saath):
"Haan, mujhe bhi yeh hi lagta hai. Hospital lekar chalo isse. Zinda reh gaya toh yeh aadmi humare kaam aa sakta hai, ya hume kuch raaz bata sakta hai."

Gang ke log Dev ko jeep mein bitha kar jungle ke raste se bahar nikalte hain. Jeep mein ek ajeeb si khamoshi chhayi hoti hai, lekin sabke chehre par confusion aur thoda sa afsos dikhai deta hai.

Dev (dheere, kamzor shabdon mein):
"Tum log... mujhe kyun bacha rahe ho? Shayad... mujhe yahin rehne dete toh behtar hota."

Gang Leader:
"Tumhe zinda rehne ka ek hi reason hoga. Shayad zindagi tumhare liye kuch aur plan kar rahi hai. Zyada mat socho, hum tumhe safe jagah le ja rahe hain."

Jeep ek chhoti si hospital ke paas rukti hai. Gang ke log Dev ko uthakar andar le jaate hain.

Doctor (suraksha ke saath):
"Yeh toh bohot buri halat mein hai. Zyada khun beh chuka hai. Tum log kaun ho?"



Gang Leader (jaldi se):
"Koi sawaal mat karo, bas iski jaan bacha lo. Paisa chahiye toh milega."

Doctor, gang ki baat samajhte hue, Dev ka ilaaj shuru kar deta hai. Dev ab tak behosh hai, lekin uska chehra ab bhi uske andar ki energy aur dard ko saaf dikhata hai.

Gang Leader (andar hi andar):
"Is aadmi ka zinda rehna zaruri hai. Shayad iska ek kissa shuru hone wala hai, jo ab tak hum samajh nahi paaye."

To be continued...​

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Dev the lover bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

 

[Dev the lover]

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Dev the lover bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

SHUKRIYA BHAI AGALA UPDATE BHI PADH LO DE DIYA POLL VOTE BHI KR DENA

 

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UPDATE 3

Character Names and Ages for the Gang Members

1. Viper (Gang Leader) - Age: 38
Viper is a sharp and experienced gang leader. He is practical and makes decisions based on logic rather than emotions. Despite his criminal activities, he has a strong moral compass, which leads him to save Dev.


2. Bittu (Right-hand Man) - Age: 30
Bittu is loyal to Viper and follows his orders without question. He is a quick thinker but often acts impulsively. He respects Viper’s judgment and supports him in making decisions.


3. Chhotu (Youngest Gang Member) - Age: 22
Chhotu is the youngest member of the gang. He is naive and often nervous in tense situations. His heart is softer than the others, which makes him question their criminal activities.


4. Jagga (The Muscle) - Age: 35
Jagga is the strongest member of the gang and is known for his brute strength. He doesn't talk much and prefers action over words, but he secretly has a compassionate side.


5. Ravi (The Driver) - Age: 28
Ravi is an expert driver and navigator. He ensures the gang’s safe movement through tricky terrains. He is calm under pressure and always ready to support the team.


6. Dr. Neelam (The Doctor) - Age: 40
Dr. Neelam is a skilled and compassionate doctor who is treating Dev. She is professional, focused on her patients, and goes above and beyond to help Dev recover physically and emotionally.
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Subah ka waqt tha. Hospital ke aas-paas ki hawa mein ek ajeeb sa sannata tha, jaise koi anjaani musibat wahin chhupi baithi ho. Ek halki dhund ne poore ilake ko dhak rakha tha, aur hospital ke upar mandra raha andhera jaise ek buri khabar ki dastak de raha ho. Aas-paas ke ped-paudhe hawa ke saath hil rahe the, lekin unki khamoshi mein bhi ek dar chhupa tha.

Viper aur uski gang ne Dev ko hospital ke andar bhijwaya tha, lekin unka mann kisi ajeeb se bechaini ka shikar tha. Viper ka chehra uski manzil tak pahuchne ki ek kaidi jaisi talaash ko chhupane ki koshish kar raha tha. Hospital ke reception par ek nurse ne Dev ke halat dekh kar turant ek stretcher bulwaya, aur use emergency ward ki taraf le jaaya gaya.
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Gang ke sabhi sadasya hospital ke ek kone mein chup kar baith gaye the. Unka mann ek ajeeb si halchal se bhara hua tha. Unhone hospital mein rukne ka faisla kiya, lekin unke chehre unki asli soch ko beyaan kar rahe the—yahaan rukna sirf ek chaal thi.

Viper ka chehra gambhir tha. Usne dheere se apni gang ki taraf dekha aur halki awaaz mein bola,
"Abhi yahan se bhaagna ek galti hogi. Agar hum ess ladke ko yahan chodkar chale gaye, toh kuch bhi ho sakta hai. Mujhe pata hai yeh risky hai, par yeh risk lena zaroori hai."

Bittu, jo hamesha Viper ka saath deta tha, lekin is baar uske chehre par thoda sa dar tha, bola,
"Boss, yeh hospital mujhe theek jagah nahi lagta. Yeh ek mamuli ladka hai, aur humne pehle kabhi kisi ke liye aise risk nahi liya. Kya yeh sahi hai?"

Viper ne Bittu ki baat suni, lekin uska chehra ek ajeeb sa gussa aur self-control dikha raha tha. Usne apne haath se Bittu ko chup rehne ka ishaara kiya aur uski aankhein ek pal ke liye hospital ke gate par tik gayi, jaise kisi anjaane khatre ko talash rahi ho. Phir usne apni awaaz mein ek thehrav laate hue kaha,
"Bittu, tum samajhte nahi ho. Hum yahan sirf kisi ki jaan bachane ke liye nahi ruk rahe. Yeh ladka kuch alag hai. Mujhe bhi poora nahi pata, par ek baat to tay hai—agar yeh yahan se gaya, toh hum sabke liye mushkil khadi ho sakti hai. Tum log bas apne kaam par dhyan do. Aur rahi baat risk ki, toh humne yeh kaam kabhi safe hone ke liye nahi kiya."

Viper ke shabdon ne gang ke logon ko shaant toh kar diya, lekin unki aankhon mein ek ajeeb si pareeksha ab bhi dikh rahi thi. Uske baad, unhone hospital ke aas-paas apni positions le li.

Ek banda reception ke kareeb khada tha, doosra emergency ward ke corridor ke paas, aur ek aur banda hospital ke gate ke baahar ki taraf nigrani kar raha tha. Hospital ki rakhwaali ab unka naya kaam ban chuka tha. Har kisi ka dhyan ek dusre ke signals par tha.

Hospital ke emergency room ke andar, Dev abhi bhi behosh tha, lekin uske chehre par ek ajeeb sa thehrav tha—jaise kuch bada hone waala ho. Uske aas-paas chalti medical machines ki beep aur doctor ki halki awaaz ne us room ko aur bhi suspenseful bana diya.

Bahar, Viper ek bench par baitha tha, cigarette jalane ki koshish kar raha tha. Uske chehre par thoda gussa, thoda soch, aur ek ajeeb si samasya ki parchaiyaan dikh rahi thi. Lekin ek baat pakki thi jo plan usne abhi tak nahi banaya tha, woh ab shuru hone waala tha.

Udhar

Hospital ke emergency room ka mahaul ek ajeeb si tanav bhari shanti se bhara hua tha. Dev ko stretcher par lete hue doctors aur nurses ne turant treatment shuru kar diya. Uska sharir zakhmon se bhara hua tha—kuch nayi chot, toh kuch purani. Uski saans ruk-ruk kar chal rahi thi, aur monitor ki beep bar-bar warning de rahi thi ki halat naazuk hai.

Doctor Neelam, jo us waqt duty par thi, ek experienced aur samajhdaar doctor thi. Lekin unke chehre par chinta ki lakeerein saaf dikh rahi thi. Unhone Dev ke report aur scan ki taraf dekha aur turant action lena shuru kiya.

Doctor Neelam (nurses se, jaldi-jaldi):
"Patient ka blood pressure unstable hai, aur heart rate kaafi slow ho raha hai. Humein turant CPR aur defibrillator ready karna hoga. Iska ek-ek second important hai."
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Unhone Dev ke chest par pads lagaye aur defibrillator charge kiya. Pehli shock ke baad bhi monitor par koi response nahi tha. Nurse ne halki si awaaz mein pucha,
"Doctor, iski saans ruk gayi kya?"

Doctor Neelam (thoda gusse aur tension mein):
"Ruk gayi toh wapas laana hoga. Yeh patient critical hai, par abhi haar nahi maanenge. 300 joules par charge karo!"

Doosri shock ke baad Dev ke monitor par ek halki si movement dikhi. Doctor ne saans li aur turant oxygen mask lagane ka order diya. Lekin jaise hi unhone Dev ki chest scan ki report dekhi, unka chehra aur serious ho gaya.

Doctor Neelam (apne aap se, dheere se):
"Iska heart... iske heart me ek genetic defect lagta hai. Yeh problem shayad pehle se thi, lekin injury ke stress ne isse aur bigaad diya hai. Agar kuch din aur tak ye detect nahi hota, toh ye iski maut ka karan ban sakta tha."

Tabhi, emergency room ke darwaze par Viper dikhai diya. Uska chehra ek ajeeb si sanjeedgi ke saath bhara tha. Usne dheere kadam se andar aakar doctor se baat ki.

Viper (dheere se, lekin authority ke saath):
"Doctor, ek baat yaad rakhna. Koi bhi galti nahi honi chahiye. Is aadmi ko zinda rakhna zaroori hai, chahe kuch bhi karna pade. Main chahata hoon yeh jaye nahi."

Doctor Neelam ne Viper ki taraf dekha. Uske shabdon mein ek command tha, lekin uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb si khauf aur urgency bhi thi.

Doctor Neelam (thoda tension mein, lekin professional):
"Main apna kaam kar rahi hoon. Lekin iska halat itni kharab hai ki agar yeh zinda bacha, toh iske andar kaafi secrets honge jo samajhna zaroori hoga."

Viper ne ek kadam aage badhte hue uski aankhon mein dekha,
"Secrets ka sawal baad mein uthana, abhi mujhe sirf yeh chahiye ki yeh insaan zinda rahe."

Doctor ne sir hila kar haan kar diya aur apni team ke saath Dev ke treatment mein lag gayi. Monitor ki beep ab thodi stable hone lagi thi, lekin heart ka genetic defect ab bhi ek ticking time bomb ki tarah tha. Viper emergency room ke ek kone mein khada tha, apne chehre par ek ajeeb sa samjhota aur confusion le kar.

Usne dheere se apne team ko signal diya jo hospital ke har kone par chhup kar rakhwali kar rahe the. Ek bande ne reception ka area sambhal rakha tha, doosre ne emergency ward ke corridor par nazar banayi hui thi, aur ek aur banda gate ke paas khada tha.

Viper ka chehra ek baar fir Dev ki taraf ghooma. Uske dimaag mein sirf ek baat chal rahi thi,
"Yeh aadmi agar zinda raha, toh yeh sirf meri wajah se hoga... aur agar nahi raha, toh woh bhi meri wajah se."

Viper ki aankhon ke saamne ek baar phir uski marati hui patni ka chehra aa gaya—ek chehra jo usne kabhi nahi bhula. Us waqt hospital ki machinery ki beep aur doctors ki awaaz bhi uske kaan tak nahi pahuch rahi thi. Uske zehan mein sirf uski patni ke aakhri shabdon ki goonj thi.
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Flashback​

Ek andheri raat thi, aur Viper apni patni, Kavya, ke paas hospital ke ICU mein khada tha. Kavya ki saans ruk-ruk kar chal rahi thi, aur uske zakhm itne gehre the ki doctors ne haath utha liya tha. Viper, jo duniya ke liye ek khatarnaak gangster tha, us raat ek bechara pati ban chuka tha. Uska chehra aansuon se geela tha, lekin apni patni ke saamne woh kamzor nahi dikhna chahta tha.

Kavya ne dheere se apni aadhi khuli aankhein uthakar Viper ki taraf dekha. Uski awaaz itni halki ho chuki thi ki Viper ko uske kareeb jakar baithna pada.

Kavya (dheere se, muskurane ki koshish karte hue):
"Viper... tumne mere liye bohot kuch kiya... par ek baat ka dukh hamesha rahega..."

Viper (uska haath zor se pakadte hue):
"Kya keh rahi ho, Kavya? Main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon tumhare liye. Bas tum yeh baatein mat karo... Tumhe kuch nahi hoga!"

Kavya (aasoon bhari aankhon se):
"Nahi, Viper... mera waqt khatam ho chuka hai. Main jaanti hoon ki tumne apne sab kuch laga diya mujhe bachaane ke liye. Par... ek baat ka gham hai... mere bhai ko tum bacha nahi paaye... Agar us din tum uske saath hote, toh shayad woh zinda hota."

Viper ke chehre par ek gham ka saaya chha gaya. Usne Kavya ke bhai ko ek gang war ke beech khoya tha. Us din woh unhe bachane ke liye der se pahucha tha. Yeh baat uske dil ke kone mein ek shool ki tarah chubti thi.

Kavya (thodi aur kamzor hoti hui):
"Lekin Viper... tum ek acche insaan ho. Main tumse bas ek waada maangti hoon. Agar kabhi tumhe kisi aise insaan ki zindagi bachane ka mauka mile, jo mere bhai ki tarah majboor ho, toh usse jaroor bachaana... Shayad isse tumhari woh purani galti dhul jaaye."

Viper (aasoon rokne ki koshish karte hue):
"Kavya, tum aisa mat bolo. Tumhare bina main kuch nahi hoon... Main waada karta hoon, par tum mujhe chodkar mat jao."

Kavya ek halki si muskaan ke saath uska haath dheere se chhod deti hai, aur uski saans ruk jaati hai. Viper ki duniya us raat khatam ho gayi thi. Usne Kavya ka aakhri waada toh maan liya tha, lekin usse kabhi uska palan karne ka mauka nahi mila... ab tak.

Present

Viper ka chehra ek ajeeb sa milan kar raha tha—ek taraf gham, doosri taraf ek bechaini. Dev hospital ke bed par zakhmon se bhara hua pada tha, aur uska dil kabhi bhi dhadakna band kar sakta tha. Lekin usse yeh lag raha tha ki Kavya ka waada yahan pura ho sakta hai.

Usne apne aadmi ko dheere se ishaara kiya aur doctor ke paas gaya.

Viper (doctor se, dabe hue lekin firm awaaz mein):
"Main chahta hoon ki yeh zinda rahe. Tumhe jo bhi karna ho, karo. Iska dil chahe kitna bhi kharaab kyun na ho, isse maarna mat."

Doctor ne uski taraf dekha, jaise woh samajh gaya ho ki baat sirf professional treatment ki nahi hai, balki insaniyat ki bhi hai.

Viper ne andar hi andar Kavya se ek baar phir waada kiya, "Main uska jaan bachane ki koshish karunga, Kavya. Is baar koi galti nahi hogi."

Aur woh wahin, door se, Dev ki halat dekhte hue khada raha, jaise uske dil ka ek bojh dheere-dheere halka ho raha ho.

"Aakhir insaan mein yehi toh hota hai," Viper ne apne aap se kaha, jaise woh Kavya ki aakhri baaton ko yaad kar raha ho. "Jinke seene mein dil ho, aur dil mein daya ho, woh apne diye waade aur vachan ke liye apna sab kuch daav par laga dete hain... marna bhi pasand karte hain."

Uska mann ek ajeeb si kasak aur halke sukoon se bhara hua tha. Dev ke zakhmon aur uske dil ki halat ko dekhte hue, uska mann usi waade ki taraf khinch raha tha jo Kavya ne apni aakhri saans mein usse liya tha.

Us moment mein, Viper ka woh roop saamne aaya jo shayad kisi ne kabhi dekha hi nahi tha—ek gangster ke peeche chhupa ek insaan, jiske andar ab bhi kuch achchai baaki thi. Jo apne vaade ke liye lad raha tha, chahe uska matlab uski apni jaan ke saath khelna hi kyun na ho.

Usne apne aadmi se kaha, "Yahan rakhwali karni hai. Kisi ko is aadmi tak pahuchne mat dena. Main chhupkar dekhunga ki doctor kya karte hain."

Viper ki aankhen hospital ke operation theater ke door par tiki thi, jaise woh apni Kavya ke liye uska waada pura karne ka intezaar kar raha ho. Uska ek hisaab tha—apni zindagi ke us ek adhure waade ko pura karna, jo usse insaaniyat ki taraf ek chhoti si umeed deta tha.

Aur yeh sach tha—jis insaan ke seene mein dil ho, aur dil mein daya ho, woh apne waade aur vachan ke liye apni zindagi bhi daav par lagane ke liye tayar ho jaata hai.

Achanak, hospital ke aas-paas kuch ajeeb sa shor sunayi dene lagta hai. Yeh awaaz thi, ek bhayankar aag ki, jo hospital ke bahar se aa rahi thi. Hospital ke dwaar par ek andhera sa cha gaya, aur ek bahut tez fire ki awaaz sunayi dene lagi. Saath hi, kuch ajeeb aur khatarnaak log hospital ke aas-paas dikhayi dene lage, unke chehre pe gussa aur badla lene ka daawa tha—yeh log kuch aur nahi, Viper ke enemies the, jo unhe maarne ke liye yahan aaye the.

Enemy Leader (apni team se, gussa mein): "Yeh hospital humare liye naya target hai. Inko maar dena zaroori hai. Viper aur uske gang ke log yahan chhupay hue hain. Hum is baar unko zinda nahi chhodenge."

Jab yeh baat sunayi di, hospital ka mahaul turant badal gaya. Hospital ke andar ek moment ke liye, sab kuch shant tha, lekin bahar ki taraf shor badh raha tha. Enemy team ne apna plan tayar kar liya tha. Hospital ke andar ghanti ki awaaz sunayi dene lagi, aur enemy log apne hathiyar nikaal rahe the.

Aur is waqt, Viper aur uski gang ko samajh aaya ki kuch galat ho sakta hai.

Viper (apni gang se, gussa ho kar): "Kya ho raha hai? Yeh sab kisne kar diya?"

Bittu (panic mein): "Boss, yeh log kaafi muskil mein hain. Inka target hum hain!"

Viper ki aankhon mein chamak thi, aur usne apne gang ko taiyar karte hue kaha, "Tum log apne guns nikaalo. Yeh koi aam jang nahi hai."

Hospital ka andar aur bahar ka mahaul ab ek alag rang mein rang gaya tha—ek taraf Viper aur uski gang taiyar ho rahi thi, toh doosri taraf enemy gang apni planning mein lag gayi thi.

Enemy Leader (aawaaz mein): "Yeh kamine Viper ko maarna zaroori hai!"
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Dono taraf ki team apne aakhri sangharsh ke liye tayar ho gayi thi. Sab apne haath mein hathiyar le kar ek dusre ko dekh rahe the, jaise yeh sirf ek jang nahi, balki unki zindagi ki aakhri jang ho. Aur isi beech, Dev ki zindagi ke raaz bhi dheere-dheere samne aane wale the. Viper aur uski gang ko ek bade test se guzarna tha, aur iss jang mein jeet ya haar, sab kuch badalne wala tha.​

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Dev the lover bhai....
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Fantastic update

 

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Update 4,5

 

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UPDATE 2

Character Introduction:

1. Dev (Hero, 25 years old):
A seemingly useless individual, Dev has always struggled with basic tasks, earning him the label of "useless" from his family. Though always ignored and belittled, there's more to Dev than meets the eye.

2. Ananya (Chhoti Behen, 18 years old):
Dev's younger sister, Ananya, loves him dearly, and despite his flaws, she believes in him more than anyone else. She stands by him even when the whole world turns against him.


3. Sakshi (Badi Behen, 30 years old):
Dev’s elder sister, more pragmatic and often critical of him, seeing him as a burden. She struggles to understand him but cares for him in her own way.


4. Raghav (Papa, 50 years old):
Dev’s father, who has little faith in his son’s potential. His tough love often comes across as cold and indifferent.


5. Gita (Maa, 48 years old):
Dev’s mother, whose harsh words have always made Dev feel unwanted. She doesn’t believe in his worth and expresses her frustration openly.


6. Sudhir (Chacha, 45 years old):
Dev's uncle, who plays a key role in keeping the family in check. Though not particularly close to Dev, he follows orders without question.

7. Aarav (Cousin Brother, 20 years old):
A cousin who doesn’t see Dev as someone worth helping but is tied to the family’s affairs.


8. Isha (Cousin Sister, 22 years old):
Another cousin who, like Aarav, does not get along with Dev. Their relationship is strained and full of tension.


Subah ka Samay

Ananya subah apne palatial ghar ke garden ke andar morning walk karte hue ruki hui hai. Aas-paas well-maintained lawns, fountains, aur marble benches hain, lekin Ananya ka mann un sab sukh-sauvvidhaon mein nahi lagta. Woh ek bade French window ke paas khadi hokar apne bade bhai Dev ke baare mein soch rahi hai. Uske dil mein ek ajeeb sa khali pan hai.


Breakfast ka time hota hai. Dining table par imported crockery aur freshly brewed coffee ki khushboo hai. Gita, Ananya ki maa, ek elegant sari pehne, table ke head par bethi hain. Woh ek calm aur composed aurat lagti hain, lekin unke shabdon mein aksar thandak aur authority hoti hai.

Gita: "Ananya, agar tu Dev ke baare mein sochna band karegi, toh tera din zyada productive hoga. Uski fikar chhod de, aur apne academics pe dhyan de."

Ananya unki baat sun kar kuch nahi bolti, lekin uska chehra udaas ho jata hai. Uska breakfast untouched hai. Woh bina kuch khaaye uthi aur apne room mein chali gayi. Dressing table ke saamne khadi hokar apne uniform ka ek button lagate-lagate uski soch wapas Dev ki taraf chali jaati hai. "Bhai ab tak ghar wapas kyun nahi aaye?"

Ananya apni cycle nahi, apni sleek white car le kar school ke liye nikalti hai. Driver car chala raha hai, aur woh backseat mein bethi hai, apne backpack ko apne saamne rakhe, khidki se bahar dekh rahi hai. She’s lost in thought. Driver bhi samajh raha hai ki Ananya kuch disturbed hai, lekin kuch kehta nahi.

School ek elite institution hai, bade-bade lawns aur marble entry gates ke saath. Jaise hi Ananya apne doston Priya aur Ayush ke paas pahuchti hai, dono uske chehre ki udaasi dekh kar thoda tense ho jaate hain. Priya ek designer dress aur Ayush branded shoes pehne hue hain, lekin dono ke chehre pe apni dost ke liye genuine concern hai.



Priya: "Ananya, tu itni serious kyun lag rahi hai? Subah ka mood spoil kar diya kya kisi ne?"

Ayush (halki hasi ke saath): "Ya phir... kya tumhare Bhai ne phir se koi aise stunt maar diya jo front page news ban jaye?"

Ananya ka gussa ek dum se bharak uthta hai. Woh Ayush ki taraf gusse se dekhti hai.

Ananya: "Ayush, mazaak mat karna! Tumhe pata bhi hai main kitni worried hoon? Bhai ghar nahi aaye, aur tum log unka mazaak uda rahe ho!"

Priya beech-bachav karne ki koshish karti hai. Woh softly Ananya ka haath pakad kar bolti hai

Priya: "Ananya, Ayush bas casual baat kar raha tha. Relax kar na. Mujhe pata hai tu Dev Bhai ke baare mein pareshaan hai, lekin shayad woh kisi kaam ke liye busy hain. Chal, andar chalte hain, shayad tera mood better ho jaye."

Ayush bhi ab apologize karta hai.

Ayush: "Sorry yaar, Ananya. Main bas mazaak kar raha tha. Mujhe pata hai ki tu kitni attached hai apne Bhai ke saath. Tension mat le; sab theek hoga."

Ananya unki baat sun kar thoda relax hoti hai, lekin ab bhi uska mann kharaab hai. Woh unke saath classroom ki taraf chal padti hai.

Classroom mein teacher apna lecture de kar ja chuke hain, aur lunch break hone mein abhi thoda time baaki hai. Class ke saare students apni notebooks band karke apni baatein karne lagte hain. Ananya apni seat par akeli bethi hai, aur uska mann kahin aur chala jaata hai. Uske dimaag mein Dev ke saath bitaaye bachpan ke pal ghoomne lagte hain.

Usse yaad aata hai ek din, jab woh chhoti si thi, sirf 7 saal ki, aur Dev tab 14 ka tha. Dono ek baar park mein khel rahe the, aur Ananya ek jhule se gir kar zor se ro padi thi.

Flashback

Bachpan Ki Yaad

Ananya ke ghutne se khoon nikal raha tha, aur woh zameen par bethi zor-zor se ro rahi thi. Dev uske paas bhaag kar aaya aur uske paas jhuk kar bola

Dev: "Anu, rona band kar na. Dekh, agar tu roti rahegi, toh sab log yeh samjhenge ki tu darpok hai. Chal, main tujhe ek magic trick dikhata hoon."

Dev ne apni jeb se ek chhota sa coin nikala aur usse apne haath mein chhupa kar bola:
Dev: "Dekho, yeh coin ab gayab ho jayega."
Ananya, apne aansoon pochhte hue, uski taraf curious nazron se dekhne lagi. Dev ne coin ko haath mein ghuma kar kaise bhi karke apni shirt ke andar gira diya. Phir usne apni jeb se coin nikal kar bola:

Dev: "Tada! Magic!"

Ananya ke aansoon thode ruk gaye, aur uske chehre par ek chhoti si muskaan aa gayi. Lekin uska ghutna abhi bhi dukh raha tha. Dev usse aur hansane ke liye zameen par ek patthar utha kar bola:
Dev: "Dekho, yeh patthar tere dard ka asli culprit hai. Main ab isse saza doonga!"

Phir Dev ne patthar ko pakad kar pretend kiya ki woh usse zor-zor se daant raha hai:
Dev: "Tumne meri behen ko giraya? Ab tu dekh, main tujhe giraata hoon!"​

Yeh dekh kar Ananya hasne lagi. Dev ne phir uska haath pakad kar bola:
Dev: "Anu, tu ro mat. Agar tu muskuraayegi, toh dard khud-ba-khud bhaag jayega."

Ananya ki muskaan wapas aa gayi thi, aur Dev usse kandhe par utha kar ghar le gaya tha. Us din se lekar Ananya ko hamesha lagta tha ki Dev uska hero hai – chahe woh duniya ke liye kuch bhi ho, lekin Ananya ke liye woh sab kuch hai..

Dheere Dheere classes khatam hoti hai aur
Class ki ghanti bajti hai, aur lunch break shuru ho jata hai. Saare students apni desks chhod kar canteen ki taraf bhaag rahe hain. Kuch apne dosto ke saath lunch karne ke liye benches par baithte hain, toh kuch apne tiffins nikal kar wahi classroom mein hi kha rahe hain.

Ananya ab bhi apni jagah pe bethi hui hai, apne lunch box ko bag se nikal kar desk par rakh deti hai, lekin uska mann khane ka nahi hai. Woh ab bhi Dev ke baare mein soch rahi hai. Uski aankhon mein thodi udaasi hai, aur woh apne aas-paas ki chahal-pahal se bekoof hai.

Itne mein uske dono ache dost, Priya aur Ayush, uske paas aate hain. Priya ke haath mein uska tiffin hai, aur Ayush apne bag ko apne kandhe pe latkaye hue hamesha ki tarah masti ke mood mein hai.

Priya: "Anu, tu lunch nahi karegi? Subah se dekha hai tujhe, bilkul chup-chup si lag rahi hai. Sab theek hai na?"

Ayush (halki si hasi ke saath): "Haan, Ananya. Tera jo 'useless bhai' hai, woh kuch naya kar ke to nahi bhaag gaya?"

Priya ekdum Ayush ki taraf gusse se dekhti hai aur uska haath thoda sa maar kar bolti hai:
Priya: "Ayush, kabhi toh serious raha kar! Dekh nahi raha ki Ananya ka mood kharab hai?"

Ananya ek moment ke liye Ayush ki baat sun kar thoda khafa ho jati hai, lekin phir woh chup ho jati hai. Ayush uske badalte expressions ko dekh kar thoda samajh jata hai ki usne kuch galat keh diya.

Ayush (thoda sambhalte hue): "Sorry yaar, Ananya. Main mazaak kar raha tha. Kya hua hai? Tu tension mein lag rahi hai."

Ananya thoda hesitant hoti hai, lekin phir apne doston ko bata deti hai:
Ananya: "Bhai subah se ghar par nahi hai. Pata nahi kahan hai. Maa-papa ko koi parwaah hi nahi hai. Unhe lagta hai ki woh kuch kaam ka nahi hai, isliye unki missing hone ki bhi koi value nahi."

Priya uski baat sun kar thoda shocked hoti hai. Woh uska haath pakad kar softly bolti hai:
Priya: "Anu, tu tension mat le. Shayad woh kisi kaam ke liye bahar gaya ho aur wapas aa jayega."

Ananya: "Nahi Priya, mujhe lagta hai kuch galat hua hai. Bhai ki aadat hai bina bataaye ghar se bahar jaane ki, lekin is baar... is baar sab kuch alag lag raha hai."

Ayush bhi serious ho jata hai aur Ananya ke saamne ek stool kheench kar baith jata hai.

Ayush: "Dekho, main mazaak nahi kar raha, par kya tumne police ko report kiya? Agar tumhe sach mein kuch galat lag raha hai, toh action lena chahiye."

Ananya (thoda chidh kar): "Papa ne FIR file karwa di hai, lekin mujhe unki baaton pe bharosa nahi hai. Mujhe lagta hai woh kuch chhupa rahe hain."

Priya: "Aise mat soch, Anu. Tujhe khud kuch karna hoga. Chal, lunch ke baad hum teeno milkar plan karte hain ki kya karna chahiye."

Ayush usse distract karne ke liye uska tiffin khol leta hai.
Ayush: "Achha, ab yeh tension chod aur mujhe dekhne de ki tere lunch mein kya hai. Mujhe pata hai aunty tere tiffin mein aloo ke parathe deti hain."

Priya aur Ananya thoda sa hans padti hain, lekin Ananya ke chehre pe ek halka sa gham ab bhi hai.
Ananya: "Tum dono meri zindagi ke sabse ache dost ho. Mujhe nahi pata ki bhai ka kya hoga, lekin tum log ho to shayad main sambhal jaungi."

Priya uske kandhe pe haath rakhti hai aur muskurakar bolti hai:

Priya: "Tujhe toh pata hai, Anu. Hum hamesha tere saath hain."

Lunch break ke baaki samay mein woh teeno ek saath lunch karte hain, lekin Ananya ke dimaag mein Dev ki chinta ab bhi chhupi hui hai

Aise hi time kab katane laga koi nahi jaan paya aur dheere dheere raat ke andre ne asmaan ko dhak diyaa

Ek jungle ki ghana andhera bhari raat. Hawa mein ek ajeeb si gungunahat hai jo sirf khauf ko aur gehra banati hai. Jungle ke ek kone mein, kuch log ek jeep se utarte hain. Sabke haath mein hathiyar hain, aur unka chehra chehre pe khauf aur irade dono saaf dikh rahe hain.

Gang Leader (dheere aur theekhte hue):
"Yeh jagah sahi hai. Yeh do laashon ko yahan daba dete hain. Koi kabhi nahi milega. Jaldi karo, khudai shuru karo."

Teen aadmi apne haath mein belche aur phawda lekar zameen khodna shuru karte hain. Khudai karte-karte unmein se ek rukta hai aur ek ajeeb si cheez ko dekh kar dar jata hai.

Aadmi 1:
"Boss, yahan kuch hai... kuch ajeeb sa."

Gang Leader (apna hathiyar nikalte hue):
"Ajeeb kya? Dekhne do!"

Aur phir woh zameen se ek aadmi ka haath dikhai deta hai, jo puri tarah mitti mein lipta hua hai. Gang ke sab log ek pal ke liye dar jate hain.

Aadmi 2:
"Yeh toh laash lag rahi hai... lekin iski haalat dekh ke lagta hai ki yeh abhi abhi yahan dabai gayi hai."

Gang Leader:
"Chup raho! Laash hai toh kya hua? Zyada mat socho. Iska pura shareer bahar nikalo!"

Woh log phir se khodna shuru karte hain, aur dheere-dheere us aadmi ka pura shareer bahar aata hai. Woh Dev hai—zinda, lekin behosh aur zakhamon se bhara hua.

Aadmi 3 (shock mein):
"Boss! Yeh laash zinda hai!"

Gang Leader (apni aankhon par vishwas na karte hue):
"Kya bakwas kar raha hai tu? Kaise zinda ho sakta hai?"

Achanak Dev ki ungli hileti hai. Gang ke log peeche hat jaate hain.


Gang Leader (dheere se):
"Yeh kaise ho sakta hai? Isko toh maar diya gaya hoga!"

Dev ke aankh khul jate hain. Uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb si rage aur intensity hai. Jise woh dekhta hai, uska mann thartharane lagta hai. Uska chehra zakhmon se bhara hai, lekin uske andar ek nayi jaan aur ek alag si energy hai.

Dev (dheere, lekin khatarnaak awaaz mein):
"Kya tum log bhi mujhe dabane aaye ho? Ya phir tumhare hisse ka maidan khaali hai?"


Gang ke log ek pal ke liye bolti bandh ho jati hai. Gang Leader samajhne ki koshish karta hai, lekin Dev ek dum se uth kar ek aadmi ke hathiyar ko pakad leta hai.

Jungle mein khamoshi ke beech, Dev ki aankhon ki rage aur intensity ne gang ke logon ke hosh uda diye hain. Sab log ek pal ke liye ek doosre ki taraf dekhte hain, jaise samajh nahi paa rahe ho ki kya karna hai.

Gang Leader (dheere se):
"Yeh kaun hai? Iska yahan hone ka matlab kya hai?"

Dev, ab tak zakhmon se bhara hua aur kamzor hai, lekin uski aankhon ki energy ab bhi sab par bhaari pad rahi hai.

Dev (halke, lekin thake hue shabdon mein):
"Agar zinda hoon... toh iska matlab hai... mujhe dobara maarne ka irada toh tumhara nahi hai?"

Gang Leader (apne logon ko signal dete hue):
"Chup raho sab! Mujhe lagta hai, yeh zinda hai aur iski madad karna zaruri hai. Koi laash yahan zinda nahi hoti. Shayad iss aadmi ka kuch alag hi khel hai."

Gang ke log ek pal ke liye confusion mein hote hain, lekin boss ke signal ke baad woh Dev ke kareeb jaate hain aur usse uthane ki koshish karte hain.

Aadmi 1 (dar aur vishwas ke beech):
"Boss, yeh toh bilkul hi thak gaya hai. Shayad zyada waqt tak nahi bachega."

Gang Leader:
"Agar zinda hai, toh iska matlab hai isse upar waale ne bacha ke rakha hai. Jaldi karo! Gaadi lekar aao. Isko yahan aur nahi rehne dena."

Woh log Dev ko uthane lagte hain. Gang ka ek aadmi Dev ke haath se khun behte dekh kar apni shirt utar kar uske zakhmon par baandhne lagta hai.

Aadmi 2:
"Boss, yeh aadmi insaan lagta hai. Mujhe lagta hai iski madad karna chahiye. Shayad yeh kisi bade pareshani mein tha."

Gang Leader (gambhir lekin samajhdari ke saath):
"Haan, mujhe bhi yeh hi lagta hai. Hospital lekar chalo isse. Zinda reh gaya toh yeh aadmi humare kaam aa sakta hai, ya hume kuch raaz bata sakta hai."

Gang ke log Dev ko jeep mein bitha kar jungle ke raste se bahar nikalte hain. Jeep mein ek ajeeb si khamoshi chhayi hoti hai, lekin sabke chehre par confusion aur thoda sa afsos dikhai deta hai.

Dev (dheere, kamzor shabdon mein):
"Tum log... mujhe kyun bacha rahe ho? Shayad... mujhe yahin rehne dete toh behtar hota."

Gang Leader:
"Tumhe zinda rehne ka ek hi reason hoga. Shayad zindagi tumhare liye kuch aur plan kar rahi hai. Zyada mat socho, hum tumhe safe jagah le ja rahe hain."

Jeep ek chhoti si hospital ke paas rukti hai. Gang ke log Dev ko uthakar andar le jaate hain.

Doctor (suraksha ke saath):
"Yeh toh bohot buri halat mein hai. Zyada khun beh chuka hai. Tum log kaun ho?"



Gang Leader (jaldi se):
"Koi sawaal mat karo, bas iski jaan bacha lo. Paisa chahiye toh milega."

Doctor, gang ki baat samajhte hue, Dev ka ilaaj shuru kar deta hai. Dev ab tak behosh hai, lekin uska chehra ab bhi uske andar ki energy aur dard ko saaf dikhata hai.

Gang Leader (andar hi andar):
"Is aadmi ka zinda rehna zaruri hai. Shayad iska ek kissa shuru hone wala hai, jo ab tak hum samajh nahi paaye."

To be continued...​

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