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Fantasy The Warriors

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update 3(rohan's rage)

recap :

sakshi ke kahne par rohan aur uske dost ghumne jate hai aur uske baad restaurant me lunch ke liye jate hai jaha sakshi ka panga kuch lafange ladko se ho jata hai........

aage :

chikh sunkeJaise hi wo teeno (rohan , maichel , robby ankit call attend karne gatya tha )Jaise hi wo teeno piche palat ke dekhte hai….

Sakshi apne left hath se apna right shoulder pakdi hui thi…
Aur tap tap khun gir raha tha uske shoulder se woe k taraf dekh rahi thi gusse se..
sam aur tory dari huyi thi....

ye sab aakhir hua kaise janne ke liye chalte hai thoda piche..


flashback :------



jab sakshi un ladko ko maar ke aa gayi thi tab udhar un dono ko jo unke do dost bache the uthate hai tab.......
wo leader bolta hai
leader ‎: sali mujhe maar ke gayi hai na aaj beech bajar me uski ijat utarunga phir use tadpa tadpa ke mardunga phir uske baad uski khandan ki arthi uthegi...janti nahi hai kisse panga liya hai usne.
ye bolke wo kisiko phone lagata hai..
leader : hello
udhar se: ha boliye ronit bhai...
leader(ronit) : sun be ladko ko leke aaja R&S restaurant me....
udhar se : thik hai bhai...
phir phone cut jaata hai.
ronit apne ek dost se
ronit : jabe dekh ke aa wo kha gayi agar abhi yahi pe hogi to aake batana aur nikal gayi hogi to jaake picha kar .....
ladka 1 : ji bhai...
phir wo ladka jake dekh ke aata hai (us samay waha se rohan aur wo dono uthke counter ki taraf ja raahe the aur table par bas tino ladkiya baithi hui thi ) aur aake bolta hai
ladka 1 : bhai wo abhi yahi hai aur uske sath do ladkiya aur hai...
ye sun ke ronit haste hue kahta hai..
ronit : wah aaj to ek pe do maal free me milega.....
tabhi waha par wo ladka aa jata hai jisse wo phone pe baat kar raha tha aur uske piche piche 14 ladke aur aate hai ...
pahle se ye 5 jan the ab 15 ladke aur kul mila ke 20 ladke...
ronit : chalo re aaj iski maa chod denge...
phir wo sab aagaye jaha sakshi baithi huyi thi ...
ronit(ek ladke se) : jaao re gate band kar do ko bhi bahar na jane paye...
aur wo (ronit) khud ek chaku leke chal parta hai sakshi ke taraf ..
aur jaise hi uske pass pahuch ke hamla karne wala hota hai sakshi ko table pe rakhe kanch ke glass me uska reflection dikh jata hai jab tak wo samajh pati tab tak ronit chaku se hamla kar chuka tha lekin sakshi jaldi se ek second se bhi jaldi move hui aur apna hath samne la diya jis wajah se uske right shoulder me cut lag gaya.
aur ye dekh ke sam(samantha) dar ke mare chila di.....


flashback khatam.........

ab...
.

Rohan jab udhar dekhta hai jidhar sakshi dekh rahi thi to use sab samjh aa jata hai....
tab tak ronit phir se hamla karta hai par is baar sakshi ready thi ronit jaise hi uspe hamla karta hai sakshi jhuk ke use ek front sweep marti hai aur ronit dhadam se niche girne wala hota hai par uske bagal wala ladka 1 use bacha leta hai....
isi bich jab sakshi ka sara dhyan ronit par hota hai tabhi pich se ek ladka uspe hamla kar deta hai....



kaad....(kuch tutne ki aawaj aati hai )



aaah........ aaah..................... aaah................




pure restaurant me ek dardnaak chikh gunj jati hai.......



wo ladka jo hamla karne wala tha wo jor jor se chikh raha tha uska haath latak raha tha ye dekh ke sab log jo restaurant me the wo pahle se dare hue the ab aur dar gaye....



to hua yu ki (jaise hi wo ladka chaku leke sakshi ke taraf rohan ne dekh liya aur jaldi bhaga us taraf jaise hi us ladke ne hamla kiya usi samay rohan ne uska haath pakad ke use elbow ko pakar ke tod diya.)
jise dekh ke ronit shock ho gaya aur dar bhi gaya phir baad me socha ki uske pass itne bande hai koi uska kya kar lega. apne aap pe kaabu pake wo bolta hai

ronit : abe sale ab tu kon hai ... jaldi se nikal jaa yaha se jayada hero mat ban .....

rohan kuch nhi bola aur jaake sakshi ka ghaav dekhne laga (uska dimag abhi bahut satka hua tha).
rohan ke ghusse ko sakshi janti thi isliye wo dar bhi rahi thi wo paancho bhi jante the ab kya hone wala hai.....
jab ronit ne dekha ki uske baat ka koi prabhav rohan par nahi pada to use gusse ane laga...

ronit (ek ladke se) : sun re is chikne ko yaha se hatao nhi hate to kharcha pani de dena..

wo ladka jab jake rohan ko khich ke le jane lagta hai usi me us ke haath se sakshi ka hath jaha pe cut tha waha lag jata hai.....

aur sakshi ki halki chikh nikal jati hai.....(lo ho gaya satyanash)..

sakshi ke chikh nikalte ke sath hi rohan ka mind aur satak gaya aur wo waha par chaku ko ush ladkr kr hatheli ke aar paar kar deta hai jab tak ladka kuch samajhta usse pahle hi rohan wo chaku nikal ke us ladke ka pura ka pura haath hi chir deta hai.....
aur isi ke sath us ladke ki bahut khatarnak chikh nikali...

ye scene dekh ke sab ki aankhe bahar aa gayi

rohan aram se chair pe baith jata hai aur sakshi se
rohan: gudiya jaldi batao ye sab kaise hua
tabhi ronit ke gang ka ladka jo ki thoda lamba aur tagda tha wo bola(usne socha mai boxing aur karate champion hu ye mera kya bigar lega)
ladka : oye gudiya ke gudde mai batata hu kya hua tha apne jo ronit bhai hai inohne teri gudiya ko haweli pe bulaya tha kyunki ...............
ah..... ah.... ah.....

dhadam

mmm.,............ mmm........ mmm.............

wo ladka ise aage bol hi nahi paaya kunki jibh kat ke niche giri hui thi use kuch der laga pahle samajhne ke liye phir to gala phaar ke chilane laga abhi 1 sec bhi nhi hua tha ki usko ek laat para aur ja ke takrya sidha diwal se aur uske muh me se khun nikalne laga ..... aur bechara kuch bol hi nahi para tha gu gu gu ka awaz nikal raha tha bas uske muh se....
us ladke ki aisi halat dekh ke ab restaurant me sab ki saase ruk gayi ....
ronit and gang ki gaand phat ke haath me aa gayi thi...

rohan : (bina puche taang arane ka yahi anjam hota hai...) jab tak mai na bolu kisi ke muh se chu tak ki awaj nahi nikalni chahiye.. gudiya bolo kaise hua...
sakshi sab batana suru karti hai ....

ye sab dekh ke ronit bolta hai apne dosto se
ronit : dekho jo jo akele hamla karne jaa raha hai wo use thok de raha hai isliye hame ek sath milke hamla karna hoaga uspar jaise hi mai ishara du hamla kar dena uspar..
sabko ronit ki baat sahi lagti hai .
sab apne apne hatiyar jo jo wo laye the pakar ke ronit ke ishare ka wait karne lagte hai....
rohan jo ab tak sakshi ki saari bate sun raha tha use sunke uska gussa pura limit cross kar chuka tha aur kabhi bhi phat sakta tha usse ronit bolta hai .....

ronit : sale bada apne ko tismar khan samajh raha tha ab kaise bachega..
maro sale ko

ye bol ke sab rohan ke taraf bhagte hai

uske baad

dim.... dam ..... dhadam ...... khach .... doom ... booom.... aisi awaje aati hai


2 minute later :

sab ladke jo rohan par hamla karne aaye the sab idhar udhar gire pare the ...

sab ka kuch na kuch ya to toota tha ya kata fata tha....

pure restaurant me aatank ka mahual tha .....

ronit bhauchaka se ye sab dekh raha tha..

dar ke maare uske pair kaap rahe the wo bhagna chah raha tha par bhag nahi pa raha tha...

dhire dhire rohan uske tarafe badhne lagta hai...

ab ronit ki aur phat gayi

wo bolne laga

ronit : de.. de.. dekh tu aage mat aa tu janta nahi hai mera baap .......... dhaap

ye mahasaye bhi jamin par dhul chatne lage.......

tabhi ankit bolta hai rohan se
ankit : bhai hame doctor ke pass chalna chaiye... sakshi ki paati karwani hogi naa

ye sun ke rohan ankit ko chabhi dete hue gadi nikalne ko bolta hai....

aur kisi ko phone kar ke kuch kahta hai....

5 minute me ek ambulance aati hai usme se kuch log utarte hai aur sab ladko ko usme daal ke nikal jaate hai.....

restaurant me jitne log the sab jaldi se waha se 9+ 2 = 11 ho jate hai.........


ye log waha se doctor ke pass jake sakshi ke treatment ke baad ghar ke liye nikal jaate hai raaste bhar koi kuch nhi bolta.

ghar pahuch ke ye log jaise hi enter hote hai..............................................................
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aaj ke liye itna hi.............

to be continued


sayonara

next update : - 24/01/22
Nice updates
 

Luffy

Well-Known Member
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update 3(rohan's rage)

recap :

sakshi ke kahne par rohan aur uske dost ghumne jate hai aur uske baad restaurant me lunch ke liye jate hai jaha sakshi ka panga kuch lafange ladko se ho jata hai........

aage :

chikh sunkeJaise hi wo teeno (rohan , maichel , robby ankit call attend karne gatya tha )Jaise hi wo teeno piche palat ke dekhte hai….

Sakshi apne left hath se apna right shoulder pakdi hui thi…
Aur tap tap khun gir raha tha uske shoulder se woe k taraf dekh rahi thi gusse se..
sam aur tory dari huyi thi....

ye sab aakhir hua kaise janne ke liye chalte hai thoda piche..


flashback :------



jab sakshi un ladko ko maar ke aa gayi thi tab udhar un dono ko jo unke do dost bache the uthate hai tab.......
wo leader bolta hai
leader ‎: sali mujhe maar ke gayi hai na aaj beech bajar me uski ijat utarunga phir use tadpa tadpa ke mardunga phir uske baad uski khandan ki arthi uthegi...janti nahi hai kisse panga liya hai usne.
ye bolke wo kisiko phone lagata hai..
leader : hello
udhar se: ha boliye ronit bhai...
leader(ronit) : sun be ladko ko leke aaja R&S restaurant me....
udhar se : thik hai bhai...
phir phone cut jaata hai.
ronit apne ek dost se
ronit : jabe dekh ke aa wo kha gayi agar abhi yahi pe hogi to aake batana aur nikal gayi hogi to jaake picha kar .....
ladka 1 : ji bhai...
phir wo ladka jake dekh ke aata hai (us samay waha se rohan aur wo dono uthke counter ki taraf ja raahe the aur table par bas tino ladkiya baithi hui thi ) aur aake bolta hai
ladka 1 : bhai wo abhi yahi hai aur uske sath do ladkiya aur hai...
ye sun ke ronit haste hue kahta hai..
ronit : wah aaj to ek pe do maal free me milega.....
tabhi waha par wo ladka aa jata hai jisse wo phone pe baat kar raha tha aur uske piche piche 14 ladke aur aate hai ...
pahle se ye 5 jan the ab 15 ladke aur kul mila ke 20 ladke...
ronit : chalo re aaj iski maa chod denge...
phir wo sab aagaye jaha sakshi baithi huyi thi ...
ronit(ek ladke se) : jaao re gate band kar do ko bhi bahar na jane paye...
aur wo (ronit) khud ek chaku leke chal parta hai sakshi ke taraf ..
aur jaise hi uske pass pahuch ke hamla karne wala hota hai sakshi ko table pe rakhe kanch ke glass me uska reflection dikh jata hai jab tak wo samajh pati tab tak ronit chaku se hamla kar chuka tha lekin sakshi jaldi se ek second se bhi jaldi move hui aur apna hath samne la diya jis wajah se uske right shoulder me cut lag gaya.
aur ye dekh ke sam(samantha) dar ke mare chila di.....


flashback khatam.........

ab...
.

Rohan jab udhar dekhta hai jidhar sakshi dekh rahi thi to use sab samjh aa jata hai....
tab tak ronit phir se hamla karta hai par is baar sakshi ready thi ronit jaise hi uspe hamla karta hai sakshi jhuk ke use ek front sweep marti hai aur ronit dhadam se niche girne wala hota hai par uske bagal wala ladka 1 use bacha leta hai....
isi bich jab sakshi ka sara dhyan ronit par hota hai tabhi pich se ek ladka uspe hamla kar deta hai....



kaad....(kuch tutne ki aawaj aati hai )



aaah........ aaah..................... aaah................




pure restaurant me ek dardnaak chikh gunj jati hai.......



wo ladka jo hamla karne wala tha wo jor jor se chikh raha tha uska haath latak raha tha ye dekh ke sab log jo restaurant me the wo pahle se dare hue the ab aur dar gaye....



to hua yu ki (jaise hi wo ladka chaku leke sakshi ke taraf rohan ne dekh liya aur jaldi bhaga us taraf jaise hi us ladke ne hamla kiya usi samay rohan ne uska haath pakad ke use elbow ko pakar ke tod diya.)
jise dekh ke ronit shock ho gaya aur dar bhi gaya phir baad me socha ki uske pass itne bande hai koi uska kya kar lega. apne aap pe kaabu pake wo bolta hai

ronit : abe sale ab tu kon hai ... jaldi se nikal jaa yaha se jayada hero mat ban .....

rohan kuch nhi bola aur jaake sakshi ka ghaav dekhne laga (uska dimag abhi bahut satka hua tha).
rohan ke ghusse ko sakshi janti thi isliye wo dar bhi rahi thi wo paancho bhi jante the ab kya hone wala hai.....
jab ronit ne dekha ki uske baat ka koi prabhav rohan par nahi pada to use gusse ane laga...

ronit (ek ladke se) : sun re is chikne ko yaha se hatao nhi hate to kharcha pani de dena..

wo ladka jab jake rohan ko khich ke le jane lagta hai usi me us ke haath se sakshi ka hath jaha pe cut tha waha lag jata hai.....

aur sakshi ki halki chikh nikal jati hai.....(lo ho gaya satyanash)..

sakshi ke chikh nikalte ke sath hi rohan ka mind aur satak gaya aur wo waha par chaku ko ush ladkr kr hatheli ke aar paar kar deta hai jab tak ladka kuch samajhta usse pahle hi rohan wo chaku nikal ke us ladke ka pura ka pura haath hi chir deta hai.....
aur isi ke sath us ladke ki bahut khatarnak chikh nikali...

ye scene dekh ke sab ki aankhe bahar aa gayi

rohan aram se chair pe baith jata hai aur sakshi se
rohan: gudiya jaldi batao ye sab kaise hua
tabhi ronit ke gang ka ladka jo ki thoda lamba aur tagda tha wo bola(usne socha mai boxing aur karate champion hu ye mera kya bigar lega)
ladka : oye gudiya ke gudde mai batata hu kya hua tha apne jo ronit bhai hai inohne teri gudiya ko haweli pe bulaya tha kyunki ...............
ah..... ah.... ah.....

dhadam

mmm.,............ mmm........ mmm.............

wo ladka ise aage bol hi nahi paaya kunki jibh kat ke niche giri hui thi use kuch der laga pahle samajhne ke liye phir to gala phaar ke chilane laga abhi 1 sec bhi nhi hua tha ki usko ek laat para aur ja ke takrya sidha diwal se aur uske muh me se khun nikalne laga ..... aur bechara kuch bol hi nahi para tha gu gu gu ka awaz nikal raha tha bas uske muh se....
us ladke ki aisi halat dekh ke ab restaurant me sab ki saase ruk gayi ....
ronit and gang ki gaand phat ke haath me aa gayi thi...

rohan : (bina puche taang arane ka yahi anjam hota hai...) jab tak mai na bolu kisi ke muh se chu tak ki awaj nahi nikalni chahiye.. gudiya bolo kaise hua...
sakshi sab batana suru karti hai ....

ye sab dekh ke ronit bolta hai apne dosto se
ronit : dekho jo jo akele hamla karne jaa raha hai wo use thok de raha hai isliye hame ek sath milke hamla karna hoaga uspar jaise hi mai ishara du hamla kar dena uspar..
sabko ronit ki baat sahi lagti hai .
sab apne apne hatiyar jo jo wo laye the pakar ke ronit ke ishare ka wait karne lagte hai....
rohan jo ab tak sakshi ki saari bate sun raha tha use sunke uska gussa pura limit cross kar chuka tha aur kabhi bhi phat sakta tha usse ronit bolta hai .....

ronit : sale bada apne ko tismar khan samajh raha tha ab kaise bachega..
maro sale ko

ye bol ke sab rohan ke taraf bhagte hai

uske baad

dim.... dam ..... dhadam ...... khach .... doom ... booom.... aisi awaje aati hai


2 minute later :

sab ladke jo rohan par hamla karne aaye the sab idhar udhar gire pare the ...

sab ka kuch na kuch ya to toota tha ya kata fata tha....

pure restaurant me aatank ka mahual tha .....

ronit bhauchaka se ye sab dekh raha tha..

dar ke maare uske pair kaap rahe the wo bhagna chah raha tha par bhag nahi pa raha tha...

dhire dhire rohan uske tarafe badhne lagta hai...

ab ronit ki aur phat gayi

wo bolne laga

ronit : de.. de.. dekh tu aage mat aa tu janta nahi hai mera baap .......... dhaap

ye mahasaye bhi jamin par dhul chatne lage.......

tabhi ankit bolta hai rohan se
ankit : bhai hame doctor ke pass chalna chaiye... sakshi ki paati karwani hogi naa

ye sun ke rohan ankit ko chabhi dete hue gadi nikalne ko bolta hai....

aur kisi ko phone kar ke kuch kahta hai....

5 minute me ek ambulance aati hai usme se kuch log utarte hai aur sab ladko ko usme daal ke nikal jaate hai.....

restaurant me jitne log the sab jaldi se waha se 9+ 2 = 11 ho jate hai.........


ye log waha se doctor ke pass jake sakshi ke treatment ke baad ghar ke liye nikal jaate hai raaste bhar koi kuch nhi bolta.

ghar pahuch ke ye log jaise hi enter hote hai..............................................................
.

.

.
.
.
.
.

.
.
aaj ke liye itna hi.............

to be continued


sayonara

next update : - 24/01/22
Awesome update
 

Jaguaar

Well-Known Member
17,679
60,999
244
update 3(rohan's rage)

recap :

sakshi ke kahne par rohan aur uske dost ghumne jate hai aur uske baad restaurant me lunch ke liye jate hai jaha sakshi ka panga kuch lafange ladko se ho jata hai........

aage :

chikh sunkeJaise hi wo teeno (rohan , maichel , robby ankit call attend karne gatya tha )Jaise hi wo teeno piche palat ke dekhte hai….

Sakshi apne left hath se apna right shoulder pakdi hui thi…
Aur tap tap khun gir raha tha uske shoulder se woe k taraf dekh rahi thi gusse se..
sam aur tory dari huyi thi....

ye sab aakhir hua kaise janne ke liye chalte hai thoda piche..


flashback :------



jab sakshi un ladko ko maar ke aa gayi thi tab udhar un dono ko jo unke do dost bache the uthate hai tab.......
wo leader bolta hai
leader ‎: sali mujhe maar ke gayi hai na aaj beech bajar me uski ijat utarunga phir use tadpa tadpa ke mardunga phir uske baad uski khandan ki arthi uthegi...janti nahi hai kisse panga liya hai usne.
ye bolke wo kisiko phone lagata hai..
leader : hello
udhar se: ha boliye ronit bhai...
leader(ronit) : sun be ladko ko leke aaja R&S restaurant me....
udhar se : thik hai bhai...
phir phone cut jaata hai.
ronit apne ek dost se
ronit : jabe dekh ke aa wo kha gayi agar abhi yahi pe hogi to aake batana aur nikal gayi hogi to jaake picha kar .....
ladka 1 : ji bhai...
phir wo ladka jake dekh ke aata hai (us samay waha se rohan aur wo dono uthke counter ki taraf ja raahe the aur table par bas tino ladkiya baithi hui thi ) aur aake bolta hai
ladka 1 : bhai wo abhi yahi hai aur uske sath do ladkiya aur hai...
ye sun ke ronit haste hue kahta hai..
ronit : wah aaj to ek pe do maal free me milega.....
tabhi waha par wo ladka aa jata hai jisse wo phone pe baat kar raha tha aur uske piche piche 14 ladke aur aate hai ...
pahle se ye 5 jan the ab 15 ladke aur kul mila ke 20 ladke...
ronit : chalo re aaj iski maa chod denge...
phir wo sab aagaye jaha sakshi baithi huyi thi ...
ronit(ek ladke se) : jaao re gate band kar do ko bhi bahar na jane paye...
aur wo (ronit) khud ek chaku leke chal parta hai sakshi ke taraf ..
aur jaise hi uske pass pahuch ke hamla karne wala hota hai sakshi ko table pe rakhe kanch ke glass me uska reflection dikh jata hai jab tak wo samajh pati tab tak ronit chaku se hamla kar chuka tha lekin sakshi jaldi se ek second se bhi jaldi move hui aur apna hath samne la diya jis wajah se uske right shoulder me cut lag gaya.
aur ye dekh ke sam(samantha) dar ke mare chila di.....


flashback khatam.........

ab...
.

Rohan jab udhar dekhta hai jidhar sakshi dekh rahi thi to use sab samjh aa jata hai....
tab tak ronit phir se hamla karta hai par is baar sakshi ready thi ronit jaise hi uspe hamla karta hai sakshi jhuk ke use ek front sweep marti hai aur ronit dhadam se niche girne wala hota hai par uske bagal wala ladka 1 use bacha leta hai....
isi bich jab sakshi ka sara dhyan ronit par hota hai tabhi pich se ek ladka uspe hamla kar deta hai....



kaad....(kuch tutne ki aawaj aati hai )



aaah........ aaah..................... aaah................




pure restaurant me ek dardnaak chikh gunj jati hai.......



wo ladka jo hamla karne wala tha wo jor jor se chikh raha tha uska haath latak raha tha ye dekh ke sab log jo restaurant me the wo pahle se dare hue the ab aur dar gaye....



to hua yu ki (jaise hi wo ladka chaku leke sakshi ke taraf rohan ne dekh liya aur jaldi bhaga us taraf jaise hi us ladke ne hamla kiya usi samay rohan ne uska haath pakad ke use elbow ko pakar ke tod diya.)
jise dekh ke ronit shock ho gaya aur dar bhi gaya phir baad me socha ki uske pass itne bande hai koi uska kya kar lega. apne aap pe kaabu pake wo bolta hai

ronit : abe sale ab tu kon hai ... jaldi se nikal jaa yaha se jayada hero mat ban .....

rohan kuch nhi bola aur jaake sakshi ka ghaav dekhne laga (uska dimag abhi bahut satka hua tha).
rohan ke ghusse ko sakshi janti thi isliye wo dar bhi rahi thi wo paancho bhi jante the ab kya hone wala hai.....
jab ronit ne dekha ki uske baat ka koi prabhav rohan par nahi pada to use gusse ane laga...

ronit (ek ladke se) : sun re is chikne ko yaha se hatao nhi hate to kharcha pani de dena..

wo ladka jab jake rohan ko khich ke le jane lagta hai usi me us ke haath se sakshi ka hath jaha pe cut tha waha lag jata hai.....

aur sakshi ki halki chikh nikal jati hai.....(lo ho gaya satyanash)..

sakshi ke chikh nikalte ke sath hi rohan ka mind aur satak gaya aur wo waha par chaku ko ush ladkr kr hatheli ke aar paar kar deta hai jab tak ladka kuch samajhta usse pahle hi rohan wo chaku nikal ke us ladke ka pura ka pura haath hi chir deta hai.....
aur isi ke sath us ladke ki bahut khatarnak chikh nikali...

ye scene dekh ke sab ki aankhe bahar aa gayi

rohan aram se chair pe baith jata hai aur sakshi se
rohan: gudiya jaldi batao ye sab kaise hua
tabhi ronit ke gang ka ladka jo ki thoda lamba aur tagda tha wo bola(usne socha mai boxing aur karate champion hu ye mera kya bigar lega)
ladka : oye gudiya ke gudde mai batata hu kya hua tha apne jo ronit bhai hai inohne teri gudiya ko haweli pe bulaya tha kyunki ...............
ah..... ah.... ah.....

dhadam

mmm.,............ mmm........ mmm.............

wo ladka ise aage bol hi nahi paaya kunki jibh kat ke niche giri hui thi use kuch der laga pahle samajhne ke liye phir to gala phaar ke chilane laga abhi 1 sec bhi nhi hua tha ki usko ek laat para aur ja ke takrya sidha diwal se aur uske muh me se khun nikalne laga ..... aur bechara kuch bol hi nahi para tha gu gu gu ka awaz nikal raha tha bas uske muh se....
us ladke ki aisi halat dekh ke ab restaurant me sab ki saase ruk gayi ....
ronit and gang ki gaand phat ke haath me aa gayi thi...

rohan : (bina puche taang arane ka yahi anjam hota hai...) jab tak mai na bolu kisi ke muh se chu tak ki awaj nahi nikalni chahiye.. gudiya bolo kaise hua...
sakshi sab batana suru karti hai ....

ye sab dekh ke ronit bolta hai apne dosto se
ronit : dekho jo jo akele hamla karne jaa raha hai wo use thok de raha hai isliye hame ek sath milke hamla karna hoaga uspar jaise hi mai ishara du hamla kar dena uspar..
sabko ronit ki baat sahi lagti hai .
sab apne apne hatiyar jo jo wo laye the pakar ke ronit ke ishare ka wait karne lagte hai....
rohan jo ab tak sakshi ki saari bate sun raha tha use sunke uska gussa pura limit cross kar chuka tha aur kabhi bhi phat sakta tha usse ronit bolta hai .....

ronit : sale bada apne ko tismar khan samajh raha tha ab kaise bachega..
maro sale ko

ye bol ke sab rohan ke taraf bhagte hai

uske baad

dim.... dam ..... dhadam ...... khach .... doom ... booom.... aisi awaje aati hai


2 minute later :

sab ladke jo rohan par hamla karne aaye the sab idhar udhar gire pare the ...

sab ka kuch na kuch ya to toota tha ya kata fata tha....

pure restaurant me aatank ka mahual tha .....

ronit bhauchaka se ye sab dekh raha tha..

dar ke maare uske pair kaap rahe the wo bhagna chah raha tha par bhag nahi pa raha tha...

dhire dhire rohan uske tarafe badhne lagta hai...

ab ronit ki aur phat gayi

wo bolne laga

ronit : de.. de.. dekh tu aage mat aa tu janta nahi hai mera baap .......... dhaap

ye mahasaye bhi jamin par dhul chatne lage.......

tabhi ankit bolta hai rohan se
ankit : bhai hame doctor ke pass chalna chaiye... sakshi ki paati karwani hogi naa

ye sun ke rohan ankit ko chabhi dete hue gadi nikalne ko bolta hai....

aur kisi ko phone kar ke kuch kahta hai....

5 minute me ek ambulance aati hai usme se kuch log utarte hai aur sab ladko ko usme daal ke nikal jaate hai.....

restaurant me jitne log the sab jaldi se waha se 9+ 2 = 11 ho jate hai.........


ye log waha se doctor ke pass jake sakshi ke treatment ke baad ghar ke liye nikal jaate hai raaste bhar koi kuch nhi bolta.

ghar pahuch ke ye log jaise hi enter hote hai..............................................................
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aaj ke liye itna hi.............

to be continued


sayonara

next update : - 24/01/22
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ashish_1982_in

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update 3(rohan's rage)

recap :

sakshi ke kahne par rohan aur uske dost ghumne jate hai aur uske baad restaurant me lunch ke liye jate hai jaha sakshi ka panga kuch lafange ladko se ho jata hai........

aage :

chikh sunkeJaise hi wo teeno (rohan , maichel , robby ankit call attend karne gatya tha )Jaise hi wo teeno piche palat ke dekhte hai….

Sakshi apne left hath se apna right shoulder pakdi hui thi…
Aur tap tap khun gir raha tha uske shoulder se woe k taraf dekh rahi thi gusse se..
sam aur tory dari huyi thi....

ye sab aakhir hua kaise janne ke liye chalte hai thoda piche..


flashback :------



jab sakshi un ladko ko maar ke aa gayi thi tab udhar un dono ko jo unke do dost bache the uthate hai tab.......
wo leader bolta hai
leader ‎: sali mujhe maar ke gayi hai na aaj beech bajar me uski ijat utarunga phir use tadpa tadpa ke mardunga phir uske baad uski khandan ki arthi uthegi...janti nahi hai kisse panga liya hai usne.
ye bolke wo kisiko phone lagata hai..
leader : hello
udhar se: ha boliye ronit bhai...
leader(ronit) : sun be ladko ko leke aaja R&S restaurant me....
udhar se : thik hai bhai...
phir phone cut jaata hai.
ronit apne ek dost se
ronit : jabe dekh ke aa wo kha gayi agar abhi yahi pe hogi to aake batana aur nikal gayi hogi to jaake picha kar .....
ladka 1 : ji bhai...
phir wo ladka jake dekh ke aata hai (us samay waha se rohan aur wo dono uthke counter ki taraf ja raahe the aur table par bas tino ladkiya baithi hui thi ) aur aake bolta hai
ladka 1 : bhai wo abhi yahi hai aur uske sath do ladkiya aur hai...
ye sun ke ronit haste hue kahta hai..
ronit : wah aaj to ek pe do maal free me milega.....
tabhi waha par wo ladka aa jata hai jisse wo phone pe baat kar raha tha aur uske piche piche 14 ladke aur aate hai ...
pahle se ye 5 jan the ab 15 ladke aur kul mila ke 20 ladke...
ronit : chalo re aaj iski maa chod denge...
phir wo sab aagaye jaha sakshi baithi huyi thi ...
ronit(ek ladke se) : jaao re gate band kar do ko bhi bahar na jane paye...
aur wo (ronit) khud ek chaku leke chal parta hai sakshi ke taraf ..
aur jaise hi uske pass pahuch ke hamla karne wala hota hai sakshi ko table pe rakhe kanch ke glass me uska reflection dikh jata hai jab tak wo samajh pati tab tak ronit chaku se hamla kar chuka tha lekin sakshi jaldi se ek second se bhi jaldi move hui aur apna hath samne la diya jis wajah se uske right shoulder me cut lag gaya.
aur ye dekh ke sam(samantha) dar ke mare chila di.....


flashback khatam.........

ab...
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Rohan jab udhar dekhta hai jidhar sakshi dekh rahi thi to use sab samjh aa jata hai....
tab tak ronit phir se hamla karta hai par is baar sakshi ready thi ronit jaise hi uspe hamla karta hai sakshi jhuk ke use ek front sweep marti hai aur ronit dhadam se niche girne wala hota hai par uske bagal wala ladka 1 use bacha leta hai....
isi bich jab sakshi ka sara dhyan ronit par hota hai tabhi pich se ek ladka uspe hamla kar deta hai....



kaad....(kuch tutne ki aawaj aati hai )



aaah........ aaah..................... aaah................




pure restaurant me ek dardnaak chikh gunj jati hai.......



wo ladka jo hamla karne wala tha wo jor jor se chikh raha tha uska haath latak raha tha ye dekh ke sab log jo restaurant me the wo pahle se dare hue the ab aur dar gaye....



to hua yu ki (jaise hi wo ladka chaku leke sakshi ke taraf rohan ne dekh liya aur jaldi bhaga us taraf jaise hi us ladke ne hamla kiya usi samay rohan ne uska haath pakad ke use elbow ko pakar ke tod diya.)
jise dekh ke ronit shock ho gaya aur dar bhi gaya phir baad me socha ki uske pass itne bande hai koi uska kya kar lega. apne aap pe kaabu pake wo bolta hai

ronit : abe sale ab tu kon hai ... jaldi se nikal jaa yaha se jayada hero mat ban .....

rohan kuch nhi bola aur jaake sakshi ka ghaav dekhne laga (uska dimag abhi bahut satka hua tha).
rohan ke ghusse ko sakshi janti thi isliye wo dar bhi rahi thi wo paancho bhi jante the ab kya hone wala hai.....
jab ronit ne dekha ki uske baat ka koi prabhav rohan par nahi pada to use gusse ane laga...

ronit (ek ladke se) : sun re is chikne ko yaha se hatao nhi hate to kharcha pani de dena..

wo ladka jab jake rohan ko khich ke le jane lagta hai usi me us ke haath se sakshi ka hath jaha pe cut tha waha lag jata hai.....

aur sakshi ki halki chikh nikal jati hai.....(lo ho gaya satyanash)..

sakshi ke chikh nikalte ke sath hi rohan ka mind aur satak gaya aur wo waha par chaku ko ush ladkr kr hatheli ke aar paar kar deta hai jab tak ladka kuch samajhta usse pahle hi rohan wo chaku nikal ke us ladke ka pura ka pura haath hi chir deta hai.....
aur isi ke sath us ladke ki bahut khatarnak chikh nikali...

ye scene dekh ke sab ki aankhe bahar aa gayi

rohan aram se chair pe baith jata hai aur sakshi se
rohan: gudiya jaldi batao ye sab kaise hua
tabhi ronit ke gang ka ladka jo ki thoda lamba aur tagda tha wo bola(usne socha mai boxing aur karate champion hu ye mera kya bigar lega)
ladka : oye gudiya ke gudde mai batata hu kya hua tha apne jo ronit bhai hai inohne teri gudiya ko haweli pe bulaya tha kyunki ...............
ah..... ah.... ah.....

dhadam

mmm.,............ mmm........ mmm.............

wo ladka ise aage bol hi nahi paaya kunki jibh kat ke niche giri hui thi use kuch der laga pahle samajhne ke liye phir to gala phaar ke chilane laga abhi 1 sec bhi nhi hua tha ki usko ek laat para aur ja ke takrya sidha diwal se aur uske muh me se khun nikalne laga ..... aur bechara kuch bol hi nahi para tha gu gu gu ka awaz nikal raha tha bas uske muh se....
us ladke ki aisi halat dekh ke ab restaurant me sab ki saase ruk gayi ....
ronit and gang ki gaand phat ke haath me aa gayi thi...

rohan : (bina puche taang arane ka yahi anjam hota hai...) jab tak mai na bolu kisi ke muh se chu tak ki awaj nahi nikalni chahiye.. gudiya bolo kaise hua...
sakshi sab batana suru karti hai ....

ye sab dekh ke ronit bolta hai apne dosto se
ronit : dekho jo jo akele hamla karne jaa raha hai wo use thok de raha hai isliye hame ek sath milke hamla karna hoaga uspar jaise hi mai ishara du hamla kar dena uspar..
sabko ronit ki baat sahi lagti hai .
sab apne apne hatiyar jo jo wo laye the pakar ke ronit ke ishare ka wait karne lagte hai....
rohan jo ab tak sakshi ki saari bate sun raha tha use sunke uska gussa pura limit cross kar chuka tha aur kabhi bhi phat sakta tha usse ronit bolta hai .....

ronit : sale bada apne ko tismar khan samajh raha tha ab kaise bachega..
maro sale ko

ye bol ke sab rohan ke taraf bhagte hai

uske baad

dim.... dam ..... dhadam ...... khach .... doom ... booom.... aisi awaje aati hai


2 minute later :

sab ladke jo rohan par hamla karne aaye the sab idhar udhar gire pare the ...

sab ka kuch na kuch ya to toota tha ya kata fata tha....

pure restaurant me aatank ka mahual tha .....

ronit bhauchaka se ye sab dekh raha tha..

dar ke maare uske pair kaap rahe the wo bhagna chah raha tha par bhag nahi pa raha tha...

dhire dhire rohan uske tarafe badhne lagta hai...

ab ronit ki aur phat gayi

wo bolne laga

ronit : de.. de.. dekh tu aage mat aa tu janta nahi hai mera baap .......... dhaap

ye mahasaye bhi jamin par dhul chatne lage.......

tabhi ankit bolta hai rohan se
ankit : bhai hame doctor ke pass chalna chaiye... sakshi ki paati karwani hogi naa

ye sun ke rohan ankit ko chabhi dete hue gadi nikalne ko bolta hai....

aur kisi ko phone kar ke kuch kahta hai....

5 minute me ek ambulance aati hai usme se kuch log utarte hai aur sab ladko ko usme daal ke nikal jaate hai.....

restaurant me jitne log the sab jaldi se waha se 9+ 2 = 11 ho jate hai.........


ye log waha se doctor ke pass jake sakshi ke treatment ke baad ghar ke liye nikal jaate hai raaste bhar koi kuch nhi bolta.

ghar pahuch ke ye log jaise hi enter hote hai..............................................................
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.

.
.
.
.
.

.
.
aaj ke liye itna hi.............

to be continued


sayonara

next update : - 24/01/22
fantastic update bhai
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

Well-Known Member
6,406
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218
update 3(rohan's rage)

recap :

sakshi ke kahne par rohan aur uske dost ghumne jate hai aur uske baad restaurant me lunch ke liye jate hai jaha sakshi ka panga kuch lafange ladko se ho jata hai........

aage :

chikh sunkeJaise hi wo teeno (rohan , maichel , robby ankit call attend karne gatya tha )Jaise hi wo teeno piche palat ke dekhte hai….

Sakshi apne left hath se apna right shoulder pakdi hui thi…
Aur tap tap khun gir raha tha uske shoulder se woe k taraf dekh rahi thi gusse se..
sam aur tory dari huyi thi....

ye sab aakhir hua kaise janne ke liye chalte hai thoda piche..


flashback :------



jab sakshi un ladko ko maar ke aa gayi thi tab udhar un dono ko jo unke do dost bache the uthate hai tab.......
wo leader bolta hai
leader ‎: sali mujhe maar ke gayi hai na aaj beech bajar me uski ijat utarunga phir use tadpa tadpa ke mardunga phir uske baad uski khandan ki arthi uthegi...janti nahi hai kisse panga liya hai usne.
ye bolke wo kisiko phone lagata hai..
leader : hello
udhar se: ha boliye ronit bhai...
leader(ronit) : sun be ladko ko leke aaja R&S restaurant me....
udhar se : thik hai bhai...
phir phone cut jaata hai.
ronit apne ek dost se
ronit : jabe dekh ke aa wo kha gayi agar abhi yahi pe hogi to aake batana aur nikal gayi hogi to jaake picha kar .....
ladka 1 : ji bhai...
phir wo ladka jake dekh ke aata hai (us samay waha se rohan aur wo dono uthke counter ki taraf ja raahe the aur table par bas tino ladkiya baithi hui thi ) aur aake bolta hai
ladka 1 : bhai wo abhi yahi hai aur uske sath do ladkiya aur hai...
ye sun ke ronit haste hue kahta hai..
ronit : wah aaj to ek pe do maal free me milega.....
tabhi waha par wo ladka aa jata hai jisse wo phone pe baat kar raha tha aur uske piche piche 14 ladke aur aate hai ...
pahle se ye 5 jan the ab 15 ladke aur kul mila ke 20 ladke...
ronit : chalo re aaj iski maa chod denge...
phir wo sab aagaye jaha sakshi baithi huyi thi ...
ronit(ek ladke se) : jaao re gate band kar do ko bhi bahar na jane paye...
aur wo (ronit) khud ek chaku leke chal parta hai sakshi ke taraf ..
aur jaise hi uske pass pahuch ke hamla karne wala hota hai sakshi ko table pe rakhe kanch ke glass me uska reflection dikh jata hai jab tak wo samajh pati tab tak ronit chaku se hamla kar chuka tha lekin sakshi jaldi se ek second se bhi jaldi move hui aur apna hath samne la diya jis wajah se uske right shoulder me cut lag gaya.
aur ye dekh ke sam(samantha) dar ke mare chila di.....


flashback khatam.........

ab...
.

Rohan jab udhar dekhta hai jidhar sakshi dekh rahi thi to use sab samjh aa jata hai....
tab tak ronit phir se hamla karta hai par is baar sakshi ready thi ronit jaise hi uspe hamla karta hai sakshi jhuk ke use ek front sweep marti hai aur ronit dhadam se niche girne wala hota hai par uske bagal wala ladka 1 use bacha leta hai....
isi bich jab sakshi ka sara dhyan ronit par hota hai tabhi pich se ek ladka uspe hamla kar deta hai....



kaad....(kuch tutne ki aawaj aati hai )



aaah........ aaah..................... aaah................




pure restaurant me ek dardnaak chikh gunj jati hai.......



wo ladka jo hamla karne wala tha wo jor jor se chikh raha tha uska haath latak raha tha ye dekh ke sab log jo restaurant me the wo pahle se dare hue the ab aur dar gaye....



to hua yu ki (jaise hi wo ladka chaku leke sakshi ke taraf rohan ne dekh liya aur jaldi bhaga us taraf jaise hi us ladke ne hamla kiya usi samay rohan ne uska haath pakad ke use elbow ko pakar ke tod diya.)
jise dekh ke ronit shock ho gaya aur dar bhi gaya phir baad me socha ki uske pass itne bande hai koi uska kya kar lega. apne aap pe kaabu pake wo bolta hai

ronit : abe sale ab tu kon hai ... jaldi se nikal jaa yaha se jayada hero mat ban .....

rohan kuch nhi bola aur jaake sakshi ka ghaav dekhne laga (uska dimag abhi bahut satka hua tha).
rohan ke ghusse ko sakshi janti thi isliye wo dar bhi rahi thi wo paancho bhi jante the ab kya hone wala hai.....
jab ronit ne dekha ki uske baat ka koi prabhav rohan par nahi pada to use gusse ane laga...

ronit (ek ladke se) : sun re is chikne ko yaha se hatao nhi hate to kharcha pani de dena..

wo ladka jab jake rohan ko khich ke le jane lagta hai usi me us ke haath se sakshi ka hath jaha pe cut tha waha lag jata hai.....

aur sakshi ki halki chikh nikal jati hai.....(lo ho gaya satyanash)..

sakshi ke chikh nikalte ke sath hi rohan ka mind aur satak gaya aur wo waha par chaku ko ush ladkr kr hatheli ke aar paar kar deta hai jab tak ladka kuch samajhta usse pahle hi rohan wo chaku nikal ke us ladke ka pura ka pura haath hi chir deta hai.....
aur isi ke sath us ladke ki bahut khatarnak chikh nikali...

ye scene dekh ke sab ki aankhe bahar aa gayi

rohan aram se chair pe baith jata hai aur sakshi se
rohan: gudiya jaldi batao ye sab kaise hua
tabhi ronit ke gang ka ladka jo ki thoda lamba aur tagda tha wo bola(usne socha mai boxing aur karate champion hu ye mera kya bigar lega)
ladka : oye gudiya ke gudde mai batata hu kya hua tha apne jo ronit bhai hai inohne teri gudiya ko haweli pe bulaya tha kyunki ...............
ah..... ah.... ah.....

dhadam

mmm.,............ mmm........ mmm.............

wo ladka ise aage bol hi nahi paaya kunki jibh kat ke niche giri hui thi use kuch der laga pahle samajhne ke liye phir to gala phaar ke chilane laga abhi 1 sec bhi nhi hua tha ki usko ek laat para aur ja ke takrya sidha diwal se aur uske muh me se khun nikalne laga ..... aur bechara kuch bol hi nahi para tha gu gu gu ka awaz nikal raha tha bas uske muh se....
us ladke ki aisi halat dekh ke ab restaurant me sab ki saase ruk gayi ....
ronit and gang ki gaand phat ke haath me aa gayi thi...

rohan : (bina puche taang arane ka yahi anjam hota hai...) jab tak mai na bolu kisi ke muh se chu tak ki awaj nahi nikalni chahiye.. gudiya bolo kaise hua...
sakshi sab batana suru karti hai ....

ye sab dekh ke ronit bolta hai apne dosto se
ronit : dekho jo jo akele hamla karne jaa raha hai wo use thok de raha hai isliye hame ek sath milke hamla karna hoaga uspar jaise hi mai ishara du hamla kar dena uspar..
sabko ronit ki baat sahi lagti hai .
sab apne apne hatiyar jo jo wo laye the pakar ke ronit ke ishare ka wait karne lagte hai....
rohan jo ab tak sakshi ki saari bate sun raha tha use sunke uska gussa pura limit cross kar chuka tha aur kabhi bhi phat sakta tha usse ronit bolta hai .....

ronit : sale bada apne ko tismar khan samajh raha tha ab kaise bachega..
maro sale ko

ye bol ke sab rohan ke taraf bhagte hai

uske baad

dim.... dam ..... dhadam ...... khach .... doom ... booom.... aisi awaje aati hai


2 minute later :

sab ladke jo rohan par hamla karne aaye the sab idhar udhar gire pare the ...

sab ka kuch na kuch ya to toota tha ya kata fata tha....

pure restaurant me aatank ka mahual tha .....

ronit bhauchaka se ye sab dekh raha tha..

dar ke maare uske pair kaap rahe the wo bhagna chah raha tha par bhag nahi pa raha tha...

dhire dhire rohan uske tarafe badhne lagta hai...

ab ronit ki aur phat gayi

wo bolne laga

ronit : de.. de.. dekh tu aage mat aa tu janta nahi hai mera baap .......... dhaap

ye mahasaye bhi jamin par dhul chatne lage.......

tabhi ankit bolta hai rohan se
ankit : bhai hame doctor ke pass chalna chaiye... sakshi ki paati karwani hogi naa

ye sun ke rohan ankit ko chabhi dete hue gadi nikalne ko bolta hai....

aur kisi ko phone kar ke kuch kahta hai....

5 minute me ek ambulance aati hai usme se kuch log utarte hai aur sab ladko ko usme daal ke nikal jaate hai.....

restaurant me jitne log the sab jaldi se waha se 9+ 2 = 11 ho jate hai.........


ye log waha se doctor ke pass jake sakshi ke treatment ke baad ghar ke liye nikal jaate hai raaste bhar koi kuch nhi bolta.

ghar pahuch ke ye log jaise hi enter hote hai..............................................................
.

.

.
.
.
.
.

.
.
aaj ke liye itna hi.............

to be continued


sayonara

next update : - 24/01/22
Awesome update
 
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