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update 2(RESULT OF ROHAN)

recap:



rohan ke ghar uske dost aate hai aur wo unse milta hai aur unke saath chala jata hai , college.




aage..............



rohan and friends pahochte hai clg.

college ka naam : -- santa maria london college.(ye london ka top most college haii......)

wo sab college pahoch ke car park kar ke chal parte hai college compound me.(yaha ek baat bata dun rohan ko show off karne ka aadat nhi hai. isliye wo apne kapre aur car aur baki jaruri cheez ek upper middle class ke hissab se hi kahridta hai. )




rohan aur uske dost log jaake notice board par result check karte hai aur sakshi alag jaake apna result check karti hai kyunki wo dusre standard(12 std.) me padhti thi . jab rohan aur uske dost result dekhte hai to waha par sare bache ka result tha bas unka chor ke jo fail the. ye dekh ke in logo ki fat jati hai(samajh rahe ho na ) . sam(samantha) aur tory to rone rone jaise ho jate hai ,(ankit fir se dhyan se result dekhta hai aur wo dekhta hai ki result ke top me #11(matlab jo niche se leke 11 no. par aya hai college me wahi tak tha) tak hi tha ye baat use ajib lagi. ) tabhi ankit ki najar niche likhe note par jati hai .




important note: congratulations to all of you for your result and those students whose name is not is the result either they are failed or they are in the list of top 10 students.. those students results will be announced in auditorium and they will be honoured .so all students kindly come to the auditorium.




ye dekh ke ankit ke aankho me chamak ajati hai aur wo hasne lagta hai.ye dekh ke charo gusse se use dekhte hai, aur robby kahta hai




robby : ham yaha par parshan ho rahe hai aur tu has raha hai .




maichel : lagta hai ise sadma lag gaya hai.




sab uske ha me ha milate hai. insab me rohan chup tha aur wo kuch soch raha tha use itna to usse wiswas tha ki wo fail nhi ho ga magar wo bhi thoda pareshan tha.




tabhi ankit bolta hai : are tum log pahle result chart ke niche wala notice padho ye padh ke to mai has hi raha hu ye na ho ki tum log nachne lago.

uski baat sunke sab note padhte hai ye padh ke to charo kushi se sach me nachne lage (o bale o bale sawa sawa) rohan une shant karwata hai tab jaake ye shant hote hai aur sab ek dusre ke gale milte hai khushi se. tabhi..........

rohan : are hame gudiya (sakshi) ko bhi batana padega nhi to wo bohot pareshan ho jayige wo pahle se hi dari hui thi

rohan ki baat manke sab sakshi ke taraf chal dete hai

jab wo sakshi ke pass pahuche to wo ek kone me baith ke aankho me se mote mote aansu nikal rahi rhi.rohan piche se uske kandhe par haath rakhta hai. wo palat ke jab apne bhai ko dekhti hai to uske sabr ka bandh tut jata hai aur wo uske gale lagke rone lag jati hai.jaise taise sab use chup karwate hai.

tab sakshi (sisakte hue): bhai dekho maine kaha tha na mai fail ho jaungi mera to result me naam hi nahi hai.
ankit (haste hue) : dekha rohan mai kahta tha na ye bilkul bewkoof larki hai.thik se pura notice padha bhi nah aur baith ke ganga jamuna baha rahi hai.

sakshi use gusse se ghurti hai par jab wo uske last wale sentence ka mtlb samajhne ki koshish karti hai to use ek aasha ki kiran dikhti hai. wo jhat se rohan ke taraf dekhti hai wo use notice board ke niche wale section ki taaraf ishara karta hai.

wo jhat se bhag ke jati hai or jab use padhti hai to uska dil garden garden ho jata hai .uske dil me jaise ful khil jata hai.
wo turant rohan ke gale lag jati hai.rohan bhi use baho me bhar leta hai.
tabhi announcement hota hai aur inhe auditorium me jane ko kaha jata hai...


auditorium me.::::::::

auditorium pura bhada hua tha student se . rohan aur uske dost ek jagah jake chair par baith jate hai..
aur ab suru hota hai toppers ka name ANNOUNCE HONA.

PAHLE 11 STD ke top 10 ka naam btaya jata hai.
phir 12 std ka jisme sakshi 1st(top) {with 98 %} aati hai.
phir yaise hi sare toppers ke naam annonce hote jata hai..
ab aati hai bari inke claas (bussiness mangement) ki inke top 10 students ka naam btaya jata hai.

#10. chris byers
#9. steve rogers
#8. robby kene
#7. maichel diaz
#6. tory nichols
#5. samantha larusso
#4. robert nolan
#3. ankit **************************** (98.4%)
#2. tony stark (no offense for marvel fans.) (98.7%)
or jinhone 1st position achieve kiya hai wo hai none other than mr. rohan thakur.or inhone naki is college balki britrain ke har college ke baacho se jayda score kiya hai aur apne pichle saal ke record ko bhi break kiya hai(97.5%)

#1. rohan thakur (98.9%) (apna hero kisi(tony stark)* se kam he ke.)
in sab bacho ne hamare clg ka naam roshan kiya .give them a big hand of applause.
fir award ceremony chalti hai, aur ye log ghar ke liye nikal jate hai....

jab rohan aur uske dost rohan ke ghar pahuchte hai.to ye ek dum shock ho jate hai.kyunki waha uske ghar pe media ne dhawa bol diya tha, pura chilam chili macha ke rakh diya tha.jab ye ghar ke gate ke pass pahuche to media ka dhyan inki taraf gaya to inlogoke ke taraf aane lage . tabhi inke guards ne inko cover kar liya aur guards k piche se nikal ke aaye mr ram ke security head .


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intro 3

mr vijay singh (security head of thakur family & personal bodyguard of ram thakur or inke school friend bhi hai.) he is damn good intelligent and he is black belt in martial art.(bole to ek dum jhakas)
ye ek orphanage me pale bare phir jab ye 18 saal ke hue aur orphanage se nikle to ram ne apne yaha appoint kar liya.


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wo rohan ke pass aaye to rohan ne unse pucha
roahn : vijay uncle ye ho kya raha hai.
vijay : beta ye log tumahra interview lene aaye hi tumne top kiya hai na isliye.

30 minutes before.....

jab rohan ka result announce hua to media walo ko pata chal gaya aur pahuch gaye uske ghar aur karne lage live telecast..
idhar ram or jyoti ko bhi pata chal gaya jyoti ne turant ram ko call lagaya .

joti : apne news dekha jaldi aa jaiye.media wale ghar ke bahar hai aur aaj to khushi ka din hai hamare bacho ne top kiya hai.
rohan : ha mai car me baith gaya hu .wo driver ko ishara karte hai chalne ke liye. aur ek haat bahar nikal ke kuch sign dete hai aur unke aage piche 10 gadiya chalne lagti hai.


now............................

ab ram ghar pahucte hai to media wale inke piche pad jate hai to guards inhe cover karne lagte hai to wo apne guards ko rok ke ek reporter ko aane dete hai.
wo reporter aake ho jata hai suru.s
repoter : jaisa ki aap dekh sakte hai hm abhi khare hai mr rohan thakur ke ghar ke samne aur ye hai inke pita joki ek top business man hai... to mr ram kesa lag raha hai aaj apke bete ne top karke apka naam roshan kiya hai aur hamare sutro se ye bhi khabar mila hai ki apki beti ne bhi 12 board me top kiya hai.
aap kya kuch kahna chahte hai iske baare me..aur pls hame mr rohan aur apki beti ka interview lene dijiye..

ram : mai bohot hi proud feel kar rha hu ki mere bacho ne mera naam roshan kiya hai aur mere diye hue sanskaro ka ache se palan kiya hai . aur agar apko interview lena hi hai to kal maine apne bete or beti ke top aur unke bday ki khushi me party di hai to apko jo sawal karne hai wo kar lijiyega pls excuse me..ye bolke wo rohan ke pass chale jate hai.

rohan ye sab dekh raha tha wo jhat se jake apne papa ke gale lag jata hai aur sakshi bhi doud ke aati hai aur dono ke gale lag jati hai.phir kuch der baad ye alag ho jate hai aur ghar ki taraf chal dete hai ghar ke gate pe jyoti arti ki thali liye kahdi thi wo sabki aarti utarti hai. ye sab ghar ke aandar aate hai aur rohan aur sakshi jaake apne maa ke gale lag jate hai..... fir kuch der baad ye log lunch kake baat karte hai aur rohan ke dost kal party me aane ka bol ke chale jate hai. phir kuch khaas nhi hota hai raat ka dinner kake so jate hai .....

agli subah


rohan uthta hai fresh hota hai phir jata hai gym me gym ke baad jake sakshi ko uthata hai.
phir ye log niche jake break fast karte hai ... tabhi sakshi rohan se bolti hai


sakshi : bhai kyun na ham ghumne chale

rohan kuch sochta hai phir bolta hai

rohan : thik hai gudiya.
phir rohan apne dosto ko phone kata hai aur aaj ke plan ke baare me batata hai sab khush ho jate hai ghumne jane ke liye.
phir rohan sabko unke ghar se pick kar leta hai phir ye log pahle zoo jate hai..
uske baad movie dekhte hai phir jate hai ek resturant me....
restaurant kaa naam R&S RESTAURANT (yr resturant ram ka hi hai.) ye ek high class restaurant hai......
ye log jake resaturant me baithe hai aur waiter ko bolke order likhwate hai.. jab tak order aat hai tab tak ye baat karte hai tabhi sakshi sabko excuse karke chal jati hai washroom jab wo washroom ke taraf ja rahi thi to kuch lafange ladke girl's toilet ke bahar kuch ladke aati jati ladkio pe galat comments kar rahe the sakshi inhe ignore karke jane lagti hai to ek ladka bolta hai apne leader se

ladka 1 : bhai dekho kya rapchik maal aa rahi hai..
leader: udhar dekhta hai.
uske annkho me is wakt hawas saaf saaf dikh raha tha.
wo sakshi ke pass aata hai aur bolta hai
leader : ye chamiya idhar aa
sakshi : idhar udhar dekhti hai
ladka 2: bhai dekho aap is laundiya ko bula rahe ho aur ye idhar udhar dekh rahi hai.ye ladki idhar aa
ye sunke sakshi unke pass aati hai.
laska 3 : bhai ye to ek dum kadak maal hai.
leader: sahi bola re isko pakdo aur le chalo aaj iske maje lenge
ye sunke sakshi ka dimag ki ata maji shatakli ho gayi aur
aur us leader ko aur us ladke ko ek rakh ke deti hai..jisse unhe din me taare dikh jate hi(aakhir sakshi bhi to martial art champion thi.)
sakshi : sale nali ke kire teri himmat kaise hui mujhse aaise bolne ki.
ladka 1 : teri itni himmat tu ne bhai ko maara ye bolke usko marne wala hota hai to saksha ghum ke uske piche jati hai aur usko ek hammer kick marti hai aur wo ladka charo khane chit.
ab sirf do bache hue the ye dekhke wo bolne lage
ladka 4 : did hame chod do hamne apko kuch nhi bola. pls
sakshi unko aise hi chor ke chali aati hai aur aake apne dosto ke pass baith jati hai.. tab tak inka order aa gay tha aur ye khana enjoy karne lafte hai...phir rohan , robby , maichel jaate hai bill pay karne tabhi inhe piche se chikhne ki awaj aati hai aur jaise hi palat te hai



note : hero pahle se hi invincible nhi rahe ga uska power level dhide dhide to nhi lekin level by level badhega(iska ek reason hai)..................................

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to be continued........

sayonara........
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Tow Rohan or shakshi n apne apne class m top kerke apne maa baap ka naam rashon kia
Mast maza sikhaya shakshi n lafango ko
Dekhte h ab yeh cheekh kiski thi
Badhiya shaandaar
 

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UPDATE 1 (Rohan and his friends.)

place - London
Thakur villa.


STORY start karne se pahle aayie jaan lete hai thakur villa akkhir hai kaisa uska scenary kaisa hai.

[description :- ek bada sa unique design wala main gate joki bhawayata ka pratik hai, uske upar likha huwa hai thakur villa.usse andar jane ke baad ek rasta jo ki villa tak jata hai. uske dono taraf bahut hi sundar garden hai jiske bich me dono taraf ek bada sa fountain hai. fir uske baad aata hai villa joki do floor ka bana huwa hai.uski sundarta ko dekh ke koi bhi use aise dekhne lage jaise ladke ladkio ko dekhte hai :laugh:.villa ke andar first floor par bich me dining hall hai jaha pe bada sa dining table hai.dining hall ke dono taraf se sidhiyan second floor tak jaati hai.hall ke left side me bada sa kitchen hai ,fir uske bagal me drawing room.hall ke aage do room hai aur ek store room hai.hall ke right side me do kamre hai, ek ram thakur aur jyoti thakur ka hai ek ram ka study room hai. second floor do hisso me bata huwa hai ek hisse me chat bana huwa hai jisme swimming pool bhi hai dosre hisse ke left side me ek room hai joki apen dashing hero ka hai aur aage wale area ka pehla room apne hero ki pyari si jaan (bahan) ka hai in dono ka room baht bada hai , aur second room me gym bana huwa hai. second floor ke right wale hisse me ek guest room aur do khali room hai. villa ke piche bahut bada field hai jaha ye log kabhi kbahi khelte hai jaise (cricket , badminton , football etc. ) , villa ke bagal me servant quarter bhi tha .ye tha pure villa aur uske aaspas ka description]

Ab start karte hai story.

time : 5:00 a.m.

tring... tring.... tring..... alarm bajta hai aur
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ek ladka utha hai angrai lete huwe aur aankh ek bar band karke phir kholta hai fir utha hai aur jake khidki kholta hai tab hame uske handsome mukhde ke darshan hote hai ek dum smart and sweet se face.jab smile karta hai to jo dimple dikhata hai uske kya kahne. (lekin kahte hai na dikhta hu bade sweet and swami type ka magar hu bade harami type ka.) khair wo to apko aage pata chal hi jayega in ke bade me.wo uthke jata hai fresh hone uske baad jake gym me apni t-shirt utarta hai tab iski body dikhti hai ( ek dum fit and sakht body aur 6 pack abs , khatarnak triceps aur biceps ). t shirt utarne ke baad pahle yoga karta hai phir lag jata hAI apne body ko aur sakht banane me. ek ghante ke baad ye apna kam khatam karke jata hai apne kamre ke bagal wale kamre jaha ek cute si larki apne sapno me khoi hui thi wo muskurate huwe uske pass jake usko gaal pe kiss karke uthata hai.

ladka - siksha betu chalo uth jao subah ho gayi hai.

ladki kasmaste hue apni aank kholti hai aur apne samne wale shaks ko dekh ke

ladki : good morning bhai.

ladki : good morning meri pyari angel. chalo jaldi se utho jake fresh ho jao.hame college bhi to chalna hai apna result lene.

ye sunke wo ladki

ladki : omg! bhai aaj humara result hai.mai to bhul hi gayi thi. he bhagwan ji please mai pass ho jaun.

ladka: ye kya bol rahi ho betu tumhe to pure college me top aana hai.

ladki: bhai top to aap karoge jaise har saal karte aarahe ho ............top.

ladka: ye kya betu tum to aise bol rahi ho jaise tum har saal fail ho jati ho. tum bhi to top hi karti ho.

ladki : lekin bhai phir bhi dar to lagta hai.

ladka : are daro mat mai janta hu tum top hi karogi. aacha ye sab chodo jao naha ke aao tab tak mai tumhara aur apna room thik kar deta hoo aur mai bhi naha leta hoon. tum naha ke jaldi aana mere room me. phir hum dono saath me niche chale ge.

ladki : ok bhai.

ab ladka uska room thik karke apne room me jake apna room thik karta hai , aur nahane chala jata hai jab nahe ke aata hai to dekhta hai wo ladki uske bed pe baithi hui hoti hai.

ladka : betu ruko mai kapde pahan kar aata hun.

ladki : thik hai.

phir wo kapde pehan ke aata hai.
usne ek jeans ek shirt aur upad se denim jacket pahna huwa tha.

ladka: chalo betu.

phir dono sidhiyo se niche ate hai us samay time ho raha tha 6:30 a.m.

jaise hi ye sidhiyo se niche aate hai unheek aadmi baitha news paper padh raha tha unko dekh ke kahta hai

aadmi : good morning rohan good morning siksha.

dono : muskurake good morning dad.

{to aaiye jaan lete hai ye tino kon kon hai

ladka hai Rohan thakur , ladki hai Siksha thakur , inke dad hai Mr Ram thakur.}

mr ram thakur : acha ek baat batao ye chamatkar kaise hogaya.

siksha : kaisa chamatkar dad.


ram thakur : are aaj hamari gudiya itni jaldi uth gayi ye to chamatkar hi hua na.

ye sunke to rohasne laga. wahi siksha muh fulake gusse se kahti hai

siksha : dad

tabhi jyoti thakur kitchen se hall me aati hui kahti hai, jinhone ye saree baate sun li thi.

jyoti thakur :(jhute gusse se) aap kehna kya chahte hai ki meri beti roj late se uthti hai.

ram thakur : (sakpakate hue) nhi nhi mere kahne ka matlab hai aaj thodi jaldi uth gayi hai.. kyun rohan

rohan : ab isme mai kya bolun.

ram thakur : wah beta.

rohan : (baat badalte hue) wo sab choryie mom dad aap logo ko pata hai na ki aaj mera aur gudiya ka result hai.

dono : haa bata.

rohan : to aap dono hame aashirwad dijiye ki hum do no ka aacha %age aaye.

siksha: ha dad app to jante hai ki bhaiya hamesha first aate hai, bas aap dono mujhe itna aashirwad dijiye ki mai pass ho jaun.

jyoti thakur: are nahi gudiya tum bhi first jarur aaogi ye hum dono ka aasdhirwad hai

ye bolke dono un dono ke sar pe haath rakhte hai.
aur ye dono jhuk ke unke pair choote hai.

(ab yaah se kahani hero narrate karega.aur jab jab naarration bdlega mai uske upar title me likh dunga aise;)


hero:---(narration)

fir mai , skisha aur dad baat karne lag jate hai aur mom breakfast taiyar karne lag jati hai.(ghar me khana yahi banati thi naaki servants ye log ghar ka baaki kaam dekhte the.)

tab tak time 7:30 am ho jaya hai.

fir ham baith ke break fast karte hai.
dad ko 8 baje office (london wali company) jana tha to wo jake taaiyar hone lagte hai aur
hame 8:30 me college jana tha to ham aur siksha college ke baare me baat karne lag jate hai.

abhi 10 minute hi huwa tha ki gate ka bell bajta hai aur ek servant jake darwaja kholta hai.

aur gate se padharti hai hero ki friend mandli.(yaha mai baata du ki siksha abhi 19 yrs ki hai aur college me hai 11 standard me.)


ab time hai hero ki mandli ke introduction ka.



intro time(2)


ankit aggarwal (ye Indian hai apne family ke sath yaha rahta hai iske papa london ke jaane mane business man hai. Ye lono ke top 3 bussines man me gine hane jate hai. ) ye rohan ka jigri hai .ye apne dosto ke liye jaan de bhi sakta hai aur le bhi sakta hai .



maichel diaz (ye martial art champion hai.)


Samantha larrusoo

Robby keene

Tori Nichols

(ye charo London ke hi resident hai . inke pita bhi london ke jane mane bussines man hai).ye sab bhi rohan ke paake dost hai. In charo ka story me jayda role nhi hai.




Rohan ke sare dosst padne me intelligent hai .

jaise hi maine unhe DEKHA mai turant khada ho gaya aur ankit jaldi se aake mere gale lag gaya aur bola.


ankit : mere bhai kaesa hai tu.
mai : thik hu tu kesa ahi.
mujhe alag karke tu mujhse itne dino se nahi milne aya to kaisa hounga.mera poora mood kaharab thA pura hafta.

mai: chal thik hai ab to tu khush hai na.

tabhi maichel ye dekho ise to dikh hi nhi raha hai ki hm bhi yahi hai yaar ye dono apne me magan hai (inhe hindi bolna maine hi sikhaya hai kyunki mai 5 saal ki umar se londo me raha raha hu aur ye pacho mere bachapan ke dost hai isliye maine inhe hindi saikhaya.)

tabhi mai unki taraf dekh ke
mai : aisi baat nhi hai yaar aao aao tum log bhi aa jao
phir mai sabke gale laga
tabhi siksha : wah wah abhi aplog bahiya ko kah rahe the ki ye apne me magan hai aur khud mare taraf dekha bhi nhi akele bhai se baat kiyr jaa rahe ho.

tabhi ankit : oo to tum bhi yahi par ho mujhe laga ki yaha pe koi nhi hai you know na tum kitni patli aur choti ho.

siksha: you .....
bhaiya ise bol do mai ise kuch nhi bol rahi iska mtlb ye kuch bhi bol dega aur tum se kon bol raha hai mai to maichel , tori , samantha , robby ko bol rahi thi.
phir kya dono apne muh sr tir , bhale , talear aur na jane kon kon se hatiyar chalane lage ye dekh ke mai,

mai : tum dono phir mat suru ho jao.
agar tum dono ko yahi karna hai to karte raho hum log chale clg .

mai un charo se : chalo tum log inhe larne do jab dekho larte rehte hai .

dono : nhi bhai hm log nhi larenge chalo college.
phir hm log bahar gaye
robi aur tori ek car me, mai aur siksha aur deepak ek car me(deepak apna car laya tha magar yahi chod ke hamari car me baith gaya.) , smantha aur miguel ek car me.
hm baith ke chal pade clg....
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sayonara.......

to be continued




nice update bhai
 
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ashish_1982_in

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update 2(RESULT OF ROHAN)

recap:



rohan ke ghar uske dost aate hai aur wo unse milta hai aur unke saath chala jata hai , college.




aage..............



rohan and friends pahochte hai clg.

college ka naam : -- santa maria london college.(ye london ka top most college haii......)

wo sab college pahoch ke car park kar ke chal parte hai college compound me.(yaha ek baat bata dun rohan ko show off karne ka aadat nhi hai. isliye wo apne kapre aur car aur baki jaruri cheez ek upper middle class ke hissab se hi kahridta hai. )




rohan aur uske dost log jaake notice board par result check karte hai aur sakshi alag jaake apna result check karti hai kyunki wo dusre standard(12 std.) me padhti thi . jab rohan aur uske dost result dekhte hai to waha par sare bache ka result tha bas unka chor ke jo fail the. ye dekh ke in logo ki fat jati hai(samajh rahe ho na ) . sam(samantha) aur tory to rone rone jaise ho jate hai ,(ankit fir se dhyan se result dekhta hai aur wo dekhta hai ki result ke top me #11(matlab jo niche se leke 11 no. par aya hai college me wahi tak tha) tak hi tha ye baat use ajib lagi. ) tabhi ankit ki najar niche likhe note par jati hai .




important note: congratulations to all of you for your result and those students whose name is not is the result either they are failed or they are in the list of top 10 students.. those students results will be announced in auditorium and they will be honoured .so all students kindly come to the auditorium.




ye dekh ke ankit ke aankho me chamak ajati hai aur wo hasne lagta hai.ye dekh ke charo gusse se use dekhte hai, aur robby kahta hai




robby : ham yaha par parshan ho rahe hai aur tu has raha hai .




maichel : lagta hai ise sadma lag gaya hai.




sab uske ha me ha milate hai. insab me rohan chup tha aur wo kuch soch raha tha use itna to usse wiswas tha ki wo fail nhi ho ga magar wo bhi thoda pareshan tha.




tabhi ankit bolta hai : are tum log pahle result chart ke niche wala notice padho ye padh ke to mai has hi raha hu ye na ho ki tum log nachne lago.

uski baat sunke sab note padhte hai ye padh ke to charo kushi se sach me nachne lage (o bale o bale sawa sawa) rohan une shant karwata hai tab jaake ye shant hote hai aur sab ek dusre ke gale milte hai khushi se. tabhi..........

rohan : are hame gudiya (sakshi) ko bhi batana padega nhi to wo bohot pareshan ho jayige wo pahle se hi dari hui thi

rohan ki baat manke sab sakshi ke taraf chal dete hai

jab wo sakshi ke pass pahuche to wo ek kone me baith ke aankho me se mote mote aansu nikal rahi rhi.rohan piche se uske kandhe par haath rakhta hai. wo palat ke jab apne bhai ko dekhti hai to uske sabr ka bandh tut jata hai aur wo uske gale lagke rone lag jati hai.jaise taise sab use chup karwate hai.

tab sakshi (sisakte hue): bhai dekho maine kaha tha na mai fail ho jaungi mera to result me naam hi nahi hai.
ankit (haste hue) : dekha rohan mai kahta tha na ye bilkul bewkoof larki hai.thik se pura notice padha bhi nah aur baith ke ganga jamuna baha rahi hai.

sakshi use gusse se ghurti hai par jab wo uske last wale sentence ka mtlb samajhne ki koshish karti hai to use ek aasha ki kiran dikhti hai. wo jhat se rohan ke taraf dekhti hai wo use notice board ke niche wale section ki taaraf ishara karta hai.

wo jhat se bhag ke jati hai or jab use padhti hai to uska dil garden garden ho jata hai .uske dil me jaise ful khil jata hai.
wo turant rohan ke gale lag jati hai.rohan bhi use baho me bhar leta hai.
tabhi announcement hota hai aur inhe auditorium me jane ko kaha jata hai...


auditorium me.::::::::

auditorium pura bhada hua tha student se . rohan aur uske dost ek jagah jake chair par baith jate hai..
aur ab suru hota hai toppers ka name ANNOUNCE HONA.

PAHLE 11 STD ke top 10 ka naam btaya jata hai.
phir 12 std ka jisme sakshi 1st(top) {with 98 %} aati hai.
phir yaise hi sare toppers ke naam annonce hote jata hai..
ab aati hai bari inke claas (bussiness mangement) ki inke top 10 students ka naam btaya jata hai.

#10. chris byers
#9. steve rogers
#8. robby kene
#7. maichel diaz
#6. tory nichols
#5. samantha larusso
#4. robert nolan
#3. ankit **************************** (98.4%)
#2. tony stark (no offense for marvel fans.) (98.7%)
or jinhone 1st position achieve kiya hai wo hai none other than mr. rohan thakur.or inhone naki is college balki britrain ke har college ke baacho se jayda score kiya hai aur apne pichle saal ke record ko bhi break kiya hai(97.5%)

#1. rohan thakur (98.9%) (apna hero kisi(tony stark)* se kam he ke.)
in sab bacho ne hamare clg ka naam roshan kiya .give them a big hand of applause.
fir award ceremony chalti hai, aur ye log ghar ke liye nikal jate hai....

jab rohan aur uske dost rohan ke ghar pahuchte hai.to ye ek dum shock ho jate hai.kyunki waha uske ghar pe media ne dhawa bol diya tha, pura chilam chili macha ke rakh diya tha.jab ye ghar ke gate ke pass pahuche to media ka dhyan inki taraf gaya to inlogoke ke taraf aane lage . tabhi inke guards ne inko cover kar liya aur guards k piche se nikal ke aaye mr ram ke security head .


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intro 3

mr vijay singh (security head of thakur family & personal bodyguard of ram thakur or inke school friend bhi hai.) he is damn good intelligent and he is black belt in martial art.(bole to ek dum jhakas)
ye ek orphanage me pale bare phir jab ye 18 saal ke hue aur orphanage se nikle to ram ne apne yaha appoint kar liya.


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wo rohan ke pass aaye to rohan ne unse pucha
roahn : vijay uncle ye ho kya raha hai.
vijay : beta ye log tumahra interview lene aaye hi tumne top kiya hai na isliye.

30 minutes before.....

jab rohan ka result announce hua to media walo ko pata chal gaya aur pahuch gaye uske ghar aur karne lage live telecast..
idhar ram or jyoti ko bhi pata chal gaya jyoti ne turant ram ko call lagaya .

joti : apne news dekha jaldi aa jaiye.media wale ghar ke bahar hai aur aaj to khushi ka din hai hamare bacho ne top kiya hai.
rohan : ha mai car me baith gaya hu .wo driver ko ishara karte hai chalne ke liye. aur ek haat bahar nikal ke kuch sign dete hai aur unke aage piche 10 gadiya chalne lagti hai.


now............................

ab ram ghar pahucte hai to media wale inke piche pad jate hai to guards inhe cover karne lagte hai to wo apne guards ko rok ke ek reporter ko aane dete hai.
wo reporter aake ho jata hai suru.s
repoter : jaisa ki aap dekh sakte hai hm abhi khare hai mr rohan thakur ke ghar ke samne aur ye hai inke pita joki ek top business man hai... to mr ram kesa lag raha hai aaj apke bete ne top karke apka naam roshan kiya hai aur hamare sutro se ye bhi khabar mila hai ki apki beti ne bhi 12 board me top kiya hai.
aap kya kuch kahna chahte hai iske baare me..aur pls hame mr rohan aur apki beti ka interview lene dijiye..

ram : mai bohot hi proud feel kar rha hu ki mere bacho ne mera naam roshan kiya hai aur mere diye hue sanskaro ka ache se palan kiya hai . aur agar apko interview lena hi hai to kal maine apne bete or beti ke top aur unke bday ki khushi me party di hai to apko jo sawal karne hai wo kar lijiyega pls excuse me..ye bolke wo rohan ke pass chale jate hai.

rohan ye sab dekh raha tha wo jhat se jake apne papa ke gale lag jata hai aur sakshi bhi doud ke aati hai aur dono ke gale lag jati hai.phir kuch der baad ye alag ho jate hai aur ghar ki taraf chal dete hai ghar ke gate pe jyoti arti ki thali liye kahdi thi wo sabki aarti utarti hai. ye sab ghar ke aandar aate hai aur rohan aur sakshi jaake apne maa ke gale lag jate hai..... fir kuch der baad ye log lunch kake baat karte hai aur rohan ke dost kal party me aane ka bol ke chale jate hai. phir kuch khaas nhi hota hai raat ka dinner kake so jate hai .....

agli subah


rohan uthta hai fresh hota hai phir jata hai gym me gym ke baad jake sakshi ko uthata hai.
phir ye log niche jake break fast karte hai ... tabhi sakshi rohan se bolti hai


sakshi : bhai kyun na ham ghumne chale

rohan kuch sochta hai phir bolta hai

rohan : thik hai gudiya.
phir rohan apne dosto ko phone kata hai aur aaj ke plan ke baare me batata hai sab khush ho jate hai ghumne jane ke liye.
phir rohan sabko unke ghar se pick kar leta hai phir ye log pahle zoo jate hai..
uske baad movie dekhte hai phir jate hai ek resturant me....
restaurant kaa naam R&S RESTAURANT (yr resturant ram ka hi hai.) ye ek high class restaurant hai......
ye log jake resaturant me baithe hai aur waiter ko bolke order likhwate hai.. jab tak order aat hai tab tak ye baat karte hai tabhi sakshi sabko excuse karke chal jati hai washroom jab wo washroom ke taraf ja rahi thi to kuch lafange ladke girl's toilet ke bahar kuch ladke aati jati ladkio pe galat comments kar rahe the sakshi inhe ignore karke jane lagti hai to ek ladka bolta hai apne leader se

ladka 1 : bhai dekho kya rapchik maal aa rahi hai..
leader: udhar dekhta hai.
uske annkho me is wakt hawas saaf saaf dikh raha tha.
wo sakshi ke pass aata hai aur bolta hai
leader : ye chamiya idhar aa
sakshi : idhar udhar dekhti hai
ladka 2: bhai dekho aap is laundiya ko bula rahe ho aur ye idhar udhar dekh rahi hai.ye ladki idhar aa
ye sunke sakshi unke pass aati hai.
laska 3 : bhai ye to ek dum kadak maal hai.
leader: sahi bola re isko pakdo aur le chalo aaj iske maje lenge
ye sunke sakshi ka dimag ki ata maji shatakli ho gayi aur
aur us leader ko aur us ladke ko ek rakh ke deti hai..jisse unhe din me taare dikh jate hi(aakhir sakshi bhi to martial art champion thi.)
sakshi : sale nali ke kire teri himmat kaise hui mujhse aaise bolne ki.
ladka 1 : teri itni himmat tu ne bhai ko maara ye bolke usko marne wala hota hai to saksha ghum ke uske piche jati hai aur usko ek hammer kick marti hai aur wo ladka charo khane chit.
ab sirf do bache hue the ye dekhke wo bolne lage
ladka 4 : did hame chod do hamne apko kuch nhi bola. pls
sakshi unko aise hi chor ke chali aati hai aur aake apne dosto ke pass baith jati hai.. tab tak inka order aa gay tha aur ye khana enjoy karne lafte hai...phir rohan , robby , maichel jaate hai bill pay karne tabhi inhe piche se chikhne ki awaj aati hai aur jaise hi palat te hai



note : hero pahle se hi invincible nhi rahe ga uska power level dhide dhide to nhi lekin level by level badhega(iska ek reason hai)..................................

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to be continued........

sayonara........
superb fantastic update bhai
 
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update 3(rohan's rage)

recap :

sakshi ke kahne par rohan aur uske dost ghumne jate hai aur uske baad restaurant me lunch ke liye jate hai jaha sakshi ka panga kuch lafange ladko se ho jata hai........

aage :

chikh sunkeJaise hi wo teeno (rohan , maichel , robby ankit call attend karne gatya tha )Jaise hi wo teeno piche palat ke dekhte hai….

Sakshi apne left hath se apna right shoulder pakdi hui thi…
Aur tap tap khun gir raha tha uske shoulder se woe k taraf dekh rahi thi gusse se..
sam aur tory dari huyi thi....

ye sab aakhir hua kaise janne ke liye chalte hai thoda piche..


flashback :------



jab sakshi un ladko ko maar ke aa gayi thi tab udhar un dono ko jo unke do dost bache the uthate hai tab.......
wo leader bolta hai
leader ‎: sali mujhe maar ke gayi hai na aaj beech bajar me uski ijat utarunga phir use tadpa tadpa ke mardunga phir uske baad uski khandan ki arthi uthegi...janti nahi hai kisse panga liya hai usne.
ye bolke wo kisiko phone lagata hai..
leader : hello
udhar se: ha boliye ronit bhai...
leader(ronit) : sun be ladko ko leke aaja R&S restaurant me....
udhar se : thik hai bhai...
phir phone cut jaata hai.
ronit apne ek dost se
ronit : jabe dekh ke aa wo kha gayi agar abhi yahi pe hogi to aake batana aur nikal gayi hogi to jaake picha kar .....
ladka 1 : ji bhai...
phir wo ladka jake dekh ke aata hai (us samay waha se rohan aur wo dono uthke counter ki taraf ja raahe the aur table par bas tino ladkiya baithi hui thi ) aur aake bolta hai
ladka 1 : bhai wo abhi yahi hai aur uske sath do ladkiya aur hai...
ye sun ke ronit haste hue kahta hai..
ronit : wah aaj to ek pe do maal free me milega.....
tabhi waha par wo ladka aa jata hai jisse wo phone pe baat kar raha tha aur uske piche piche 14 ladke aur aate hai ...
pahle se ye 5 jan the ab 15 ladke aur kul mila ke 20 ladke...
ronit : chalo re aaj iski maa chod denge...
phir wo sab aagaye jaha sakshi baithi huyi thi ...
ronit(ek ladke se) : jaao re gate band kar do ko bhi bahar na jane paye...
aur wo (ronit) khud ek chaku leke chal parta hai sakshi ke taraf ..
aur jaise hi uske pass pahuch ke hamla karne wala hota hai sakshi ko table pe rakhe kanch ke glass me uska reflection dikh jata hai jab tak wo samajh pati tab tak ronit chaku se hamla kar chuka tha lekin sakshi jaldi se ek second se bhi jaldi move hui aur apna hath samne la diya jis wajah se uske right shoulder me cut lag gaya.
aur ye dekh ke sam(samantha) dar ke mare chila di.....


flashback khatam.........

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Rohan jab udhar dekhta hai jidhar sakshi dekh rahi thi to use sab samjh aa jata hai....
tab tak ronit phir se hamla karta hai par is baar sakshi ready thi ronit jaise hi uspe hamla karta hai sakshi jhuk ke use ek front sweep marti hai aur ronit dhadam se niche girne wala hota hai par uske bagal wala ladka 1 use bacha leta hai....
isi bich jab sakshi ka sara dhyan ronit par hota hai tabhi pich se ek ladka uspe hamla kar deta hai....



kaad....(kuch tutne ki aawaj aati hai )



aaah........ aaah..................... aaah................




pure restaurant me ek dardnaak chikh gunj jati hai.......



wo ladka jo hamla karne wala tha wo jor jor se chikh raha tha uska haath latak raha tha ye dekh ke sab log jo restaurant me the wo pahle se dare hue the ab aur dar gaye....



to hua yu ki (jaise hi wo ladka chaku leke sakshi ke taraf rohan ne dekh liya aur jaldi bhaga us taraf jaise hi us ladke ne hamla kiya usi samay rohan ne uska haath pakad ke use elbow ko pakar ke tod diya.)
jise dekh ke ronit shock ho gaya aur dar bhi gaya phir baad me socha ki uske pass itne bande hai koi uska kya kar lega. apne aap pe kaabu pake wo bolta hai

ronit : abe sale ab tu kon hai ... jaldi se nikal jaa yaha se jayada hero mat ban .....

rohan kuch nhi bola aur jaake sakshi ka ghaav dekhne laga (uska dimag abhi bahut satka hua tha).
rohan ke ghusse ko sakshi janti thi isliye wo dar bhi rahi thi wo paancho bhi jante the ab kya hone wala hai.....
jab ronit ne dekha ki uske baat ka koi prabhav rohan par nahi pada to use gusse ane laga...

ronit (ek ladke se) : sun re is chikne ko yaha se hatao nhi hate to kharcha pani de dena..

wo ladka jab jake rohan ko khich ke le jane lagta hai usi me us ke haath se sakshi ka hath jaha pe cut tha waha lag jata hai.....

aur sakshi ki halki chikh nikal jati hai.....(lo ho gaya satyanash)..

sakshi ke chikh nikalte ke sath hi rohan ka mind aur satak gaya aur wo waha par chaku ko ush ladkr kr hatheli ke aar paar kar deta hai jab tak ladka kuch samajhta usse pahle hi rohan wo chaku nikal ke us ladke ka pura ka pura haath hi chir deta hai.....
aur isi ke sath us ladke ki bahut khatarnak chikh nikali...

ye scene dekh ke sab ki aankhe bahar aa gayi

rohan aram se chair pe baith jata hai aur sakshi se
rohan: gudiya jaldi batao ye sab kaise hua
tabhi ronit ke gang ka ladka jo ki thoda lamba aur tagda tha wo bola(usne socha mai boxing aur karate champion hu ye mera kya bigar lega)
ladka : oye gudiya ke gudde mai batata hu kya hua tha apne jo ronit bhai hai inohne teri gudiya ko haweli pe bulaya tha kyunki ...............
ah..... ah.... ah.....

dhadam

mmm.,............ mmm........ mmm.............

wo ladka ise aage bol hi nahi paaya kunki jibh kat ke niche giri hui thi use kuch der laga pahle samajhne ke liye phir to gala phaar ke chilane laga abhi 1 sec bhi nhi hua tha ki usko ek laat para aur ja ke takrya sidha diwal se aur uske muh me se khun nikalne laga ..... aur bechara kuch bol hi nahi para tha gu gu gu ka awaz nikal raha tha bas uske muh se....
us ladke ki aisi halat dekh ke ab restaurant me sab ki saase ruk gayi ....
ronit and gang ki gaand phat ke haath me aa gayi thi...

rohan : (bina puche taang arane ka yahi anjam hota hai...) jab tak mai na bolu kisi ke muh se chu tak ki awaj nahi nikalni chahiye.. gudiya bolo kaise hua...
sakshi sab batana suru karti hai ....

ye sab dekh ke ronit bolta hai apne dosto se
ronit : dekho jo jo akele hamla karne jaa raha hai wo use thok de raha hai isliye hame ek sath milke hamla karna hoaga uspar jaise hi mai ishara du hamla kar dena uspar..
sabko ronit ki baat sahi lagti hai .
sab apne apne hatiyar jo jo wo laye the pakar ke ronit ke ishare ka wait karne lagte hai....
rohan jo ab tak sakshi ki saari bate sun raha tha use sunke uska gussa pura limit cross kar chuka tha aur kabhi bhi phat sakta tha usse ronit bolta hai .....

ronit : sale bada apne ko tismar khan samajh raha tha ab kaise bachega..
maro sale ko

ye bol ke sab rohan ke taraf bhagte hai

uske baad

dim.... dam ..... dhadam ...... khach .... doom ... booom.... aisi awaje aati hai


2 minute later :

sab ladke jo rohan par hamla karne aaye the sab idhar udhar gire pare the ...

sab ka kuch na kuch ya to toota tha ya kata fata tha....

pure restaurant me aatank ka mahual tha .....

ronit bhauchaka se ye sab dekh raha tha..

dar ke maare uske pair kaap rahe the wo bhagna chah raha tha par bhag nahi pa raha tha...

dhire dhire rohan uske tarafe badhne lagta hai...

ab ronit ki aur phat gayi

wo bolne laga

ronit : de.. de.. dekh tu aage mat aa tu janta nahi hai mera baap .......... dhaap

ye mahasaye bhi jamin par dhul chatne lage.......

tabhi ankit bolta hai rohan se
ankit : bhai hame doctor ke pass chalna chaiye... sakshi ki paati karwani hogi naa

ye sun ke rohan ankit ko chabhi dete hue gadi nikalne ko bolta hai....

aur kisi ko phone kar ke kuch kahta hai....

5 minute me ek ambulance aati hai usme se kuch log utarte hai aur sab ladko ko usme daal ke nikal jaate hai.....

restaurant me jitne log the sab jaldi se waha se 9+ 2 = 11 ho jate hai.........


ye log waha se doctor ke pass jake sakshi ke treatment ke baad ghar ke liye nikal jaate hai raaste bhar koi kuch nhi bolta.

ghar pahuch ke ye log jaise hi enter hote hai..............................................................
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aaj ke liye itna hi.............

to be continued


sayonara

next update : - 24/01/22
 
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