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Yug Purush

सादा जीवन, तुच्छ विचार
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I don’t know how many of you are still active here, but I’m going to complete this story.
The hardest part of restarting and finishing any story is revision...at least for me. But now I’ve done that. So there’s a 90% chance I’ll actually complete it.
I’m not giving false hope. It’s just hope… because I always come back 😎 even if it takes 4–5 years and I finish what I started.
Let’s see what happens this time.
 
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Chapter 1 padh liya :reading: , ese self control karna padta hai ki sare ke sare updates aaj hi padh lu. Lekin time ka bhi dekhna padta hai. Bahut sahi laga aur aapki writing ki taarifo ke pull to pehle se hi bandhe hue hai to kya hi taarif karu. Maza aa gaya. Abhi sari ex ko visit karega aur sabka badla lega apna atharva. Dekhte hai konsi point pe konse angle se galti kari hai bhai ne. Ladka intelligent to hai ki apne bite hue kal ko reflect karke apni galtiyo se sikhna chahta hai. Aur wo paanch minute wait wala scene to gajab hi tha.
 

Aakash.

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Ved did no good by mocking that girl, who speaks or talks like this, I did not like it. :sigh: The idea of Ved fails, that's my wish. And whatever money came in the collection, he will give all the money to Sanjana or there is some other plan. :D
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

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Arre bhau kya mast peki jabardast likh rahe ho, bole to jhakass, fadoo ekdum rapchik ki mafik update diyla ho...
Jo kami sala school me rahgayi wo sab yahi per ho rahi aisa lag raha.... Ekdum sala dil se dimag se ya kahi se bhi soch kar likh rahe hoge per sala hamare pure jdilodimag me bas gaya he... Bole to pichle pure sarre update ek sath pad ke phir dubara padke bhi sala pet nhi bharta bhai.... Aur in sarre update padkar jo khusi mili he sala sabdo me baya nhi kar sakte.... Sala her-ek charachter apne aap me best he, bole toh bc apne is tarah se sabko place kiya he koyi banda itni si bhi kami nhi likal sakta..... Me sala kabhi kabhi ye bhi sochta hu ki bhai aap itna sara maal-masala ke sath high rated story kaise likh leto....I was literally iamazed with your writing skill man and not from know but from when I just read your 1st story Arman from that time I got fascinated with your skilll.... I am blessed to read your story man....
Cholo chodo sala ye sab, story pe aata he thoda... Waise toh bolne ke liya sabd nhi he phir bhi apun ko kuch bolna paddega....Waise dekha jai toh Ved babu ko lagta he jaldi hi Mira ki lene ko milenge(sathme gand sughne ko)
“waise 10th me toh Mira ke peechhe tu bhi pada tha na… abhi yaad aaya… fir wo Jafar se set ho gayi thi… lawde, Ved”

“10th me Mira achchhi thi…”apni ungaliyo se V symbol banate hue Ved ne apna dahina hath upar uthaya…..

“haan , bahut achi thi... jo hath tu abhi upar uthaya hai naa.. wo wala hath wo pura andar le leti thi… jhaat . usi samay se chodri thi, bhai”main bhi sofe se sarkte hue neeche farsh me unke baaju me jaa pahucha….
Jis tarah se mira ki baat chal rahi jaldi hi wo din jaldi aaye eishi meri duwa he..... Aaage apne Gyani bhau ke upar he sab....
Waise bhai daru pike ke log kand bahot ache karte aur un kando ko dur darshak ban ke dekhna us per toh aur bhi sonne pe suhag....Aur sala ye Bhatti ( waise meri Principle ka bhi naam Bhatacharya tha bc, isliye sala ye naam se hi ango me sala chitiya dodne lagti he, isliye aage bhi Atharva ke sath jo bhi bura ho toh mujhse sahn bhuti lene ki apeksha na karee, apn to dil se chahenga sala Bhatti bur chatte ache se lage bc...Apko pata nhi bhai kis kis type ke Bhatacharya Principle ne atyachar kiye he hum per) Bhatti daru peekar mast saltaya Karan Naik ko.... Dekhte he aage aur kya kya kand hote....
Waise bhai Suynena Mam ke bhi thode bahot karname suru kar dijiye kabtak hum jaise Reader ko tadpayonge.... ab to sala softcorner bhi ban jaeinga Artharva ke liye, sala 20000 rs jo chanda kar ke de raha he.... Per lawda bhai apne kya dhasu plan likala chanda mang ke paisa kcollect karne ka...Waise bhi Bhatti apna sab ka favreite epar se Rajan ka hath kanda sala sabse paise likal liye...
Waise kuch bhi bolo Apke comic writing ki dad deni padegi.... Aise on the spot answer dena matlab bc harek ki bas baat nhi he...ye Sala Bhatti kese taw me bol deta he..... agar ye kala kisi bhi bande ko aagayi toh sala aage jakar kese kam likal na he ye ache aa jaienga....
Wiase bhai last me jo apne jo londiya layi he...ha wahi Arts wali pata he apan Arts walo ki ijat nhi karte Fir bhi londiya maal waal hogi Atharva Ved ke bich me bethkar Quiz me participate kara do....Aur londi kya question pucha tha last me....
mere papa brahman, bhai kashtriya, main vaishya aur mera beta shudra… ye kaise hoga ye batao…”
ha sala sawal kafi acha que tha aur apun ko nhi pata iska jawab waise bhi history kamjor apun ki.... Per apun ko pata he AtharVed ke pass jawab hoga, dekhte he kya milta he....
Chalo bhai hogaye, itna likhne me hi gand phat gayi bc....
Thanks.... Keep Writting.....
 
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Chapter-6: Clash of the Canvas

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“party de raha hai na….”Park se nikal kar jab hum ghar ke liye taiyar hue toh Ved bola…

“party...? party kisliye…”

“maal pata liya… party nahi dega…”

“pati kaha hai abhi, abhi toh sirf baat hui hai…”

“toh pat jayegi….. kya bolta hai, Ranjan…?... Ranjan… Ranjan… kis-se laga hua hai be phone me…”

“wo aaj dhabe ka samaan khatm ho gaya toh usi ki list dekh riya tha , kaun-kaun sa samaan lana hai…”

“fb me…?”

“wo toh aise hee Sanjana ko friend request bhej raha tha…. khair chhod, Kya bol raha tha tu…”mobile apne jeb me daalte hue Ranjan bola… “ party… haan party toh dena chahiye….”

“paisa nahi hai abhi aur Sanjana se bhi baat-chit band hai, warna teen-char sau toh wahi se jugad ho jata”

“sale bhikhari….”

“mere dhabe chalo… paise baad me de dena, jab bhi mann ho…”Ranjan bola “aur botal ka bhi jugad ho jayega, yadi chahoge toh…”

“botal matlab…”maine puchha…

“botal matlab daru be… itna lodu kaise ho sakta hai tu…”Ved ne jawab diya

“daru nahi peena , kadwa lagta hai…”

“thik hai fir…. Sirf khayenge…” driving seat me koodkar baith-te hue Ved bola… “come on, fellas… load ho jao…”

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Hum teeno Ranjan ke dhabe pahuche, jaha Ranjan ke papa daru peekar tunn the par hume dekhte hee humara aadar-satkar kiya… humne jab unhe hath jodkar Namaste kiya toh wo bhi hath jodkar Namaste karne lage… jispar main aur Ved flat ho gaye…. matlab kya sanskari baap tha Ranjan ka… khud chalkar humare liye andar do takhat lagwaya aur 4-5 item ka order de mara…. Log faltu me badnaam karke rakhe hai, Ranjan ke baap ko.

“wo ladka kaun hai be… jaana pahchana lag raha hai…”ek chair kheechte hue maine ek ladke ki taraf ishara kiya… main aur Ved wahi baithe aur Ranjan waha se bahar chala gaya....

“abey wo wahi government school wala ladka hai na… Joshi, jise last year Jafar ne pela tha... jab isne Mira ko chhed diya tha toh… bhool gaya kya…? Itna bada kaand hua tha… wo toh compromise karwaya gaya, iske aur Jafar ke beech warna Government school ke ladke Sanskar Valley ke har launde ko pelne ke liye taiyar the….”

“ toh bhatti, future me kya karne ka socha hai….”Ranjan hum dono ki plate me roti rakhte hue puchha

“Engineering… ab math liya hai toh karna hee padega…”Maine kaha..

“mera bhi same answer…”roti , shahi paneer me dubote hue Ved bola… “tera kya plan hai… bio, liya hai… doctor banega kya, lawda”

“doctor banna , apne bas ka nahi hai… apan toh simple pharmacy karunga aur fir medical dukan kholunga… mast aaram ki zindagi… idhar dhabe ka bhi kaam dekh lunga, udhar medical store ka bhi…”

“haan … ye sahi hai… fir jab bhi hume josh wali goli chahiye hogi toh isi ke dukan se lenge… kyun Atharva…?”

“aur condoms bhi… par mera ek sawal hai”

“hat lawda…”

“tu chup bsdk… tere se kaun puchh raha hai, main toh Ranjan se baat kar raha hu…. toh Ranjan, tune ye sab kyun kiya… matlab main aur Ved tere, utne achchhe dost bhi nahi hai par fir bhi tune Riya ke bare me hume bataya ki wo park me hai aur fir yaha itni door dhabe me free ka khana khilane bhi le aaya… kyun…?”

“aur kisi ko main School me jaanta bhi nahi shayad, isliye… ya tum dono ke aalawa… koyi aur kabhi mujhse dost ki tarah baat bhi nahi kiya... shayad isliye. ye hasi majak jo tum dono karte ho… mujhe ye pata hai… kyunki main shuru se tum logo ke sath padha hu… pure school me sirf hum teeno hee hai, jo shuru se padh rahe hai… tu, main , Ved…. We’re bonded with each other, with this land... hum study ya fir job ke liye chahe kahi bhi chale jaye , kuch bhi kar le, is jagah se hamesha jude rahenge…. Ek din hume lautkar wapas yaha aana hee padega… apni khushi se ya fir majboori me aur fir se life naye sire se shuru karni hogi…. I know it, I’ve felt it…. This is the land of white tigers aur White tigers sirf yahi khush rah sakte hai…. Isliye future me kahi bhi raho, jab bhi kabhi dil dukhi ho toh bejhijhak yaha aana… fir main bhi yahi milunga... ”

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Ek wo din tha aur ek aaj ka din hai… usi din se main aur Ved khud ko White Tigers manne lage the, fark sirf itna tha ki hum dono zindagi ke safar me is baat ko kahi bahut peechhe chhod aaye the… us shahar ko bhi aur un yaadon ko bhi. hum dono us din Ranjan ki baat ko haste-khelte majak me le gaye the par aaj jab andheri raat me bike chalate hue main apne school ke bare me soch raha tha, tab mujhe ye yaad aaya aur mujhe realize hua ki…. Mujhe yaha bahut pahle hee aa jana chahiye tha. Ranjan ki us din kahi hui har ek baat aaj sach saabit ho rahi thi…. Khair us din dhabe me bhar-pet khana khane ke baad jab main glass me paani bharkar bahar hath dhone ek kinare pahucha toh… Ranjan ke papa waha pahuch gaye…

“Beta, khana kaisa laga…”

“arey uncle hum log Ranjan ke dost hai, yadi kharab bhi rahega toh kharab nahi bolenge… aap toh humse aise bartaav kar rahe hai, jaise hum ladke wale ho aur aap ladki wale… aur khana, mind blowing tha, itna kha liya hai ki do din tak ghar me khana hee nahi khaunga…”

“arey wo baat nahi hai beta, wo Ranjan zindagi me pahli baar kisi ko apne sath yaha laya hai… mujhe maloom hai ki Ranjan aur meri kya image hai school me… aur use koyi kyun apne ghar kisi party ya function me nahi bulata… isliye… yadi us-se dosti na bhi ho toh bas dikhawa kar lena… iske baad wo college chala jayega toh , shayad waha uske dost ban jaye… jinhe usse baat karne me beizzati mahsoos naa ho”

“bas itni si baat….”main peeche palat kar jor se chillaya “Ved chal na yar, ab kya aadhi raat ko jayega….”

“bas-bas aaya …”khane ki speed tej karte hue Ved ghuti hui aawaz me bola

“aur tu Ranjan… kal school ke baad mere ghar aa jana , Modern Warfare 2 khelenge… full action.. maja aayega…”

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“bsdk, bola tha subah chalte hai… ab toh badhiya kisi laundiya ki tarah mujhse chipak kar baitha hai aur idhar thandi me meri aisi ki taisi ho rahi hai…”Jab humne Bhopal se bypass road pakda toh main bola…

“sunayi nahi diya, kuch bol raha kya…”

“kuch nahi… bas puch raha tha ki apne whatsapp group se do logo ko tune remove kyun kiya tha 2 din pahle…”

“jisko rahna hai rahe, par group ki garima, pratishtha aur anushasan me koyi aanch nahi aani chahiye…”

“Garima aur Pratishtha maal hai kya…?”

“Atharva, kitna chodra ho gaya hai tu aajkal, pahle bahut sharif tha…. BC ab dekho….”

“hold tight…”accelerator badhate hue maine kaha….

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Us din Ranjan ke dhabe me usko next day ka invite dekar main aur Ved ghar ke liye nikle…

“naa be, Ranjan ko bula liya apne ghar… ghar wale kya bolenge…”return me Ved ne ye sawal daga...

“ghar walo ko nahi batayenge ki uska naam Ranjan hai… ya fir uska baap kaun hai… simple… sabke gharwalo ko sirf naam pata hai, dekha thodi hai kisi ne”

“wow… good…”

“hold tight”accelerator badhate hue maine kaha…
Yaha pe kon galat sangat me pada hai patah nahi chal raha hai....
Atharv-ved ranjan ke galat sangat me , na ranjan in dono ke galat sangat me..
Ranjan aur uska baap insaan aach6e hai but market me unka naam kharaph hai .
Aage dekhte hai kya hota hai
 

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“mom ko admit kiya hai na waha…”

“kab….? Ek minute… teri mom yaha kab aayi, wo hospital kab gayi… unhe hua kya hai aur....”

“dialysis ke liye admit hai aur seedhe gaanv se hospital le jaya gaye hai unhe…”

“sorry, yar… mujhe pata nahi tha… hospital chale…?”

“nahi.. Di aur jiju wahi hai…”

“tere jiju bhi yaha hai… ? wo yaha kab aaye…? kya mujhe kuch bhi nahi pata...?”

“arey dumb-dumb , mom ko leke jiju seedhe gaanv se hospital me admit kiye hai…. Tu itna bewkoof kaise hai…”

“pata nahi… ho jata hai kabhi-kabhi”

“badhiya…”

“toh main chalu..”painting roll karke maine kaha

“bye… bye…”

“waise ek aur baat, Ranjan ne tujhe friend request bheji hai… accept kar le…”

“kyun…”

“ Main, Ved and Ranjan… we’re all bonded with each other, with this place… hum chahe kahi bhi chale jaye, ek din yaha aana hee padega. Wo kya hai ki... ye land of white tigers hai na aur hum teeno school me shuru se the… toh … matlab samajh rahi hai na tu…. Nahi….? Ranjan ne toh badhiya samjhaya tha... dhabe me…”

“Bye, Atharva…”

“Bye… ” hath se revolver banakar Sanjana par goli chala kar maine kaha…..

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Apne ghar ki taraf aate hue maine apna mobile nikala aur Riya ko “Hi Rosie…” wala messege bheja aur fir mobile wapas jeb me daalkar Sanjana ne mujhe abhi jo bataya tha, wo sochte hue apne ghar ki taraf badha… Sanjana ki maa ko end stage kidney failure tha, matlab usually jab kidney 85-90 % apna kaam karna band kar deti hai, isliye ab uski maa ko dialysis ke liye Sanjay Gandhi Hospital me admit kiya gaya tha… Sanjana ki maa ko BP ki bhi problem thi shayad, if memory serves me right. jo ki unki condition ko aur worse bana raha tha… ye sab fact mujhe us samay nahi maloom tha aur shayad Sanjana ko bhi nahi.. us din toh bilkul bhi nahi. par ye bahut achchhi khabar thi ki Sunayana mam ki shadi ho chuki thi, warna unke ghar me Sunayana aur Sanjana ke aalwa unki maa ka khayal rakhne wala koyi nahi tha.

Karan Naik… Sunayana mam ka husband. us-se main aaj tak nahi mila tha… par mujhe pakka yakin tha ki wo hospital ke bade-bade bill bharne me puri tarah saksham hai. Ye situation mere liye bhi bilkul unjheleble thi… kyunki ab main aisi situation me Sanjana se paise nahi maang sakta tha….



“Rosie….? Hmm…”Riya ne reply kiya….

“mujhe toh laga tha ki tum request bhejna hee bhool gayi…”maine next reply kiya

“request maine park me tumse milne ke aadhe ghante baad hee bhej di thi, tumne hee accept karne me itna time laga diya…. Park ke baad kaha gaye the...?”

“yahaaaa… 2 point…”

“ ?????”

Jawab me maine Riya ko ek link bheja….

“wow… Atharva, who made this painting….”

“A Girl Friend…”

“girlfriend… hmmm… cool”

“not girlfriend… dhyan se dekho… girl friend… not girlfriend”

“aur is picture me jo ladki hai, wo wahi Girl Friend hai… right…? Sanjana Naik….?”

“oohh... that was quick…. How long have you been stalking me…?”

“half an hour, I guess…. Just saw your profile…. There is a pic in your timeline, which is as same as this painting…”

“khana khaya…”

Chutiya…. Ye kya send kar diya… khana khaya… bsdk… nahi khayi hogi toh kya tu bana ke khilayega.. ye maine kyun send kiya…? Arey yar… jab bhi mera koyi kaam hone wala rahta hai… koyi na koyi aisi harqat main kar hee deta… pata nahi kyun… Mera khana khane wala messege send ho chuka tha aur lagta hai, Riya wo messege dekhkar khana khane chali gayi thi. Kyunki usne koyi reply nahi diya tha…

“Rosie..???”

“Rosie…cozy…”maine fir ek messege kiya aur reply ab bhi wahi raha… matlab no reply…

Jiske baad maine thoda aur intezaar kiya aur fir mobile jeb me daalkar waha se chal pada… actually daud pada... pata nahi kyun..? bas mann kiya aur main daud pada.



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“chal paani peeke aate hai…”agle din school me maine Ved se kaha…

Lunch ho chuka tha aur wo class me Mira ko dekhkar kal park wali ghatna yaad kar raha tha ki kaise Mira chipak-chipak kar un char ladko ke sath photo khichwa rahi thi… main sure hoon ki wo us kaliye ki jagah khud ko imagine karke Mira se chipak raha tha. Ved ko is baat par gussa aata tha ki, uske class ka maal koyi dusari class wala kaise hazam kar sakta hai… pahle 11th me Jafar aur fir ab jab Jafar se breakup ho gaya toh uske dost….

“bas kar be… ab mutth hee mar dega kya…”Ved ki gardan Mira ki taraf se ghumakar dusari taraf karte hue maine kaha….

“ye bhi lawda alag hee chirand hai… pahle Jafar se chudwayi aur ab jab Jafar ne mutth ki tarah ise apni zindagi se visarjit kar diya toh lawda usi ke dosto ke sath chipak-chipak kar ghumti hai… kutti, kameeni, harjayi, ladchatt...”

“oye, sun meri baat… it’s her choice…”

“arey lawde ka choice… dayi na chod du main aisi choice ka… kabhi hume bhi mauka de… humse bhi baat kare, hum bhi uske apne hai, gair thode hee hai…”

“toh baat kar jakar us-se… wo toh sabko leti hai, sabka leti hai…”

“alag hee antique piece hai ye bhi… Jafar se breakup ke baad toh ise us-se nafrat honi chahiye thi… sala idhar isko chodta raha aur udhar Sanjana ko set karta raha aur jab Sanjana set ho gayi toh isko chhod diya… tabhi se Sanjana ke upar khunnaya hua hu main… maine kaha bhi tha , use bataya bhi tha Jafar ki history ke bare me… fir bhi…. Ladkiyo ka bhi kamaal hai, bc… aur fir breakup ke baad All Men are dogs , kahte firti hai…. par khud chutiya thi ye nahi bolegi. Main nazar me dosh Jafar ka nahi hai balki Mira aur Sanjana ka hai. waise bhi Apne Yug Pusush ka dialogue hai ek... ki... chutiya banana buri baat nahi hai, chutiya banna... ye buri baat hai”

“waise mujhe maloom hai…”maine topic Yug Purush se wapas Mira ki taraf moda

“kya maloom hai…”

“yahi ki Mira, Jafar ke dosto ke sath kyun ghumti hai…”Mira ki taraf dekhte hue maine kaha

“kyun…?”

“ab dekh Jafar kaisa bhi raha ho, par Mira full flat thi uspar… jaan deti thi, lawda… isiliye jhaadi-jhunjhati me kahi bhi chudne ke liye taiyar ho jati thi… breakup ke baad usne socha ki Jafar ko jealous feel karayegi, isliye usne Jafar ke dosto par line maarna shuru kiya … aur ladko ko toh jaanta hee hai, jaha chut dikhe , uski oor khiche jaate hai… chut ki gravitation se bahar hee nahi nikal pate… same Jafar ke dosto ke sath bhi hua, Mira ke chakkar me Jafar se door ho gaye aur idhar Mira ko koyi hosh hee nahi hai ki wo kya kar rahi hai... aur jise ye sab pata hai, jaise ki mujhe aut tujhe.. hum dono kuch kar nahi rahe. Kuch kar bhi nahi sakte...”
Yeh jafar to playboy nikla, pant shirt ki tarah ladki change kar raha hai.
Ladkiya hamesha aise ladko ko hi pasand karti hai..
Matlab yeh silky sanjana atharva ko gha bhi nahi dali aur jafar se set ho gayi...
Kamal hai yaar
 

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Riya ka number lekar main wapas apne class ki taraf chala… ki mujhe achanak yaad aaya ki bottle toh maine Madhu se liya hee nahi aur Riya se baat karne ke chakkar me paani bhi nahi piya... jabki pyaas mujhe shuru se hee lagi thi, jab main daudte hue R.O. ke paas aaya tha... isliye mujhe aadhe raaste se fir wapas lautna pada… ye mat soch lena ki main dobara Riya ko dekhna chahta tha isliye lauta....

“kya hua.. fir se pyaas lag gayi kya…”mujhe wapas aata dekh Riya puchhi…

“ab tum ho hee itni hot ki body ka pura paani evaporate ho jata hai… toh main kya karu…”Riya se ye kahkar maine Madhu ki taraf dekha “kyun re Madhu, teri dusaro ki paani botal chori karne ki aadat abhi tak nahi gayi… chotti…”

“kuch bhi mat bol… bhatti…”Mujhe chidhate hue Madhu boli…

“bhatti… lol.. isko Bhatti , bolte ho tumlog… like daru bhatti wala bhatti… ? oh god…”apna seena pakad ke haste hue Riya boli aur main ek pal ke liye uske seene ke ubharo ko dekhne laga... par fir turant apni nazar waha se hata li... kya pata bura maan jaaye, waise bhi bura manne ka adhikar bhi hai ise , waise bhi apne Yug Purush ka dialogue bhi hai ek ki.... bura wahi manta hai, jiske paas...... :innocent:

“tujhse toh main baad me niptunga... chotti, Madhu…”Madhu ke hath se apna bottle kheench kar main bola aur waha se wapas class ki taaraf chal diya…. Waise bhi lunch khatm ho chuka tha aur 5-10 minute me ab teacher bhi aane hee wale the…

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Riya ke mann me maine Sanjana se canvas war ka beej bo diya tha, bas ek baar wo beej paudhe me badal jaye, fir mere dono hatho me laddoo… bole toh ek hath me Riya Rose toh dusare hath me Silky Sanjana... fir inme se chahe baad me koyi ek laddu mere hath se gir bhi jaaye toh koyi gam nahi . bahut din se intezaar kar raha tha main Riya jaisi ladki ke School aane ka… jiske liye mere andar sach me feelings ho , warna Sanjana turant samajh jaati ki main bas timepass kar raha hoon aur kuch nahi.... un dono ko bhidwa kar un dono ko main apne prati pagal karna chahta tha… taaki at the end, dono me se koyi ek bhi mere sath rahe toh apni life set…

ab dono mere liye pagal ho jayegi, ek-dusare se jalengi… ek –dusare se ladayi karengi…. Ek dusare ka Baal kheechte hue bus stand me mere liye ladegi... wo bhi sabke saamne. Cat fight… yayayyyyyyyyyyyy……

Iske baad kitna naam hoga, Mera... ladkiya geeli ho jayengi mere bare me sirf sunkar hee. Wo apne beech wali ungali ka naam tak Atharva rakh lengi aur fir de bhaka-bhak.... andar-baahar... andar-baahar.... ek baat toh manna padega , kya dimag paaya hai maine.

“kyun be… kya bola tha… lunch time tune…”seedhi se main upar wale floor me pahucha hee tha ki Jafar ne ekdum se mera collar pakda aur collar pakad kar peechhe deewar se sata diya…

Lunch khatm ho chuka tha, sab class ke andar hee the. Par Jafar apni bio class ke baahar mera intezaar kar raha hoga, iski mujhe bhanak tak nahi thi aur naa hee mujhe koyi mauka diya , kyunki seedhiyo ke baad daayi oor first class 12th bio ki hee thi aur wahi apne class ke baahar seedhiyo ke paas wo meri taak me tha wo bhi apne kuch dosto ke sath....

“tu pagal hai kya…”

“kya bola tha lunch me... abey hat naa be.... beee.... beyy ?”

“flashback me jaa... maine kaha tha ki... arey hat na yar..... naa ki abey hat naa be.. oh sorry, tere paas toh flashback me jaane ki ability hee nahi hai...”

“ abey tune... Sanjana ka mobile tod diya , mujhe lunch me saamne se hatne ke liye bol diya…. Guys ,bahut udd raha hai ye aajkal, baitha du kya…”

“L-O-L…lol…”Jafar ka hath apne collar se hatate hue maine kaha “abey, mujhe apne in dosto ki tarah chutiya samajh ke rakha hai kya… jo tu mera collar pakdega, ek dialogue maarega aur main hath jodkar tujhse maafi magunga”

Jafar ka hath collar se hatane ke baad main uske kandhe par hath rakhkar bola

“jitni teri umra nahi hai na… utne saal se main is school me padh raha hu… aur inko sath me leke aaya hai tu…. Inko… jo 10th ke final exams me jab main inke class me fasa toh , toh main inhe cheating karwa du… iske liye ye mera lund tak chusne tak ke liye taiyar ho gaye the…. Abhi bhi yadi inhe pata ho ki final exams me physics, chemistry me main inke class me fasunga toh meri jagah ye tujhe hee pel denge...”

“Jafar… dekh kya raha hai, maar de ek mukka is chutiye ke muh me…”

Ye sunte hee Jafar ne apna hanth bandha aur use aisa karte dekh maine bhi.... bhale hee pit jaun , in teeno se... par iska thobda toh main bhi bigaad ke hee rahunga.

“aur Bhatti, naye dost bana liye tune toh…”Ranjan achanak se waha aa pahucha aur meri taraf dekh kar bola “any help..”

“Ranjan … tu is rada me mat pad… aur bio ka hoke tu , Math wale ka sath kyun de raha hai…”

“ ummm….because… I do not like you. Kamal hain, mujhe toh ye pata hee nahi tha. on the spot , tujhse nafrat ho gayi mujhse. Isliye, chhod Bhatti ko…”Jafar ki gardan pakad kar peechhe kheechte hue Ranjan bola

“arey chhod naa Ranjan… ye sab…. hota rahta hai…”apna collar thik karke , tie adjust karte hue main bola “ main handle kar leta.... waise…”

“kabhi bhi, kisi se bhi.... ladayi ho toh jyada time waste mat karna… seedhe pelke khisak lena, kyunki baad me launde wo bhi bula sakta hai aur tu bhi… aur mostly fir compromise pe mamla salat jata hai, isliye on the spot , jo karna hai kar lena… kyunki baad me mauka nahi milta….”

“Okay…wokay…”waha se apne class ki taraf jaate hue maine Ranjan ko hath dikhaya...

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“kya hua… Rose se kya baat kar raha tha…”

“yeeeeee baat kar raha tha… 2 point….”class me Ved par apna dusara point chadha kar main bola “ Number le liya… aur Sanjana ke khilaf bhadka bhi diya…”

“tu lawde... jab bhi… jo bhi sochta hai… shuru me bahut achchha lagta hai sunne me… par fir aakhir me laad tu hee chaat leta hai… isliye jyada mat soch aur simply pata Riya ko yadi serious hai toh… jyada script mat bana ki next time milunga toh kya kahunga, kya puchhunga, kaise puchhunga... kaise approach karunga… samjha”

“jo-jo tu bol raha hai… usko likh leta hu copy me… aur fir waise hee karunga. Bsdk... hoshiyari pel raha hai… waise, Jafar aaj mujhse ladne ke liye taiyar tha…”

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Atharva aur jafar ka cold war shuru hogaya, yeh to hona hi tha pehle se hi iska mohal ban raha tha. Yeh ranjan ka character mujhe mast laga..
Atharva jo sanjana aur riya ke beech jo cold war shuru karna chahta hai uska kya hoga dekhte hai?
 

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“arey sir, aaj iska birthday hai….”Gupta ji aur mere beech tana-tani bhaanp kar Ved turant bola...

“mera birthday…? Birthday… achchha haan… haan sir, aaj mera birthday hai…”Gupta ji ke pair ki taraf hath badhate hue maine kaha…. “aur sir aaj aap hotel wale ko paise mat dijiyega… bill hum pay kar denge…”
“arey aisa kyun kar rahe ho… koyi jaroorat nahi hai…”turant Gupta ji apne tevar badalte hue thode shant man se bole... ab unka ye tevar mere birthday ka sunkar badla ya fir unka bill main pay karunga... ye sunkar... is bare me main aaj tak suspence me hoon.

“aaj mera birthday hai... sir aur aap hee ekmatra aise teacher hai, jo tab se is school me hai, jab se main hoon… aapke saamne hee pale-badhe hum log. Aapke dar aur maar ke kaaran hee toh Sanskar Valley me ab bhi Sanskar hai. warna hum bhi Government school ke ladko ki tarah bus stand me ladkiyo ke peechhe ghoom rahe hote, sitiya-baji kar rahe hote... aap inspiration ho sir, humare liye…. Hai school ke itihaas me aapke aalawa koyi dusara teacher… jo bina book ko hath lagaye, pura subject padha de… kyun , Ved ... hai koyi aisa... bol... Ved...? Bol bhai.... abey bolegaaaa....”

“nahiiiiiiiiiii.....”apna hath upar uthate hue Ved cheekha aur Gupta ji ko salute kiya “jai hind , Sir...”

“thik hai.. thik hai… ab jao yaha se…”

“Jai Hind, sir….”Ved ki dekha-dekhi maine bhi Gupta ji ko salute kiya

“ye sir aapke liye....”apne jeb se do naye pen nikal kar mujhe dete hue Ved bola “ Atharva , ye toh tu sir ko dena hee bhool gaya... sir ko gift karne ke liye hee toh kharida tha tu kal...”

“arey haan.. achchha hua.. tune yaad dila diya... warna sir kahte ki rukhe-sukhe aashirwad le liya....”Gupta ji ko daant dikhate hue maine kaha jiske baad unhone bhi mujhe daant dikhaye.... I mean, pen lete hue muskura diye... Ved ne pen kab kharid lliya...?

“isme laal pen toh hai hee nahi...”dono pen ko jeb me rakhte hue Gupta ji ka bas itna bolna hee tha ki ... main waha se turant bhaga, dukan se 5 waala ek red pen liya aur turant Gupta ji ke paas pahuchkar bhet swaroop unhe diya...

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“kya lagta hai… Gupta maan gaya hoga…”wapas school ki taraf aate hue Ranjan ne mujhse puchha…

“ye toh ab class me pata chalega… Ved , tu pen kab kharid liya tha be...…?”

“Mira se manga ... jab tu pure school me bheekh maang raha tha toh... pahle toh wo dene se mana kar di, lekin jaisi hee usko apna pura plan sunaya toh turant de di wo pen. kasam se, ab main Sunayana mam se pyar karta hoon, warna ... usich time Mira ko I Fuck you kah deta.... mast ladki hai yar, choda nahi rahi bas... :verysad:

“choda toh rahi hai... par tere se nahi :D”ye ek aisi line thi.. jo mere aur Ranjan ke muh se ek sath nikli... jise sun Ved ki ek pal ke liye gand fat gayi ki kahi El Dorado wali raat ki tarah hum dono fir se toh uski nahi maarne waale aur sach kahu toh ye vichar tha bhi mera.... Ranjan ka pata nahi

“tu paise de... itna mast-mast idea diya hu...” topic turant Mira se change karte hue Ved ne bhikhariyo ki tarah apne hath failaye

“sala , consulting fees lekar hee maanega … lagta hai… par abhi bhi ek problem hai… wo Karan Naik, pelega mujhe… aur yadi us-se bachne ke liye ghar me bata diya toh ghar wale bhi pelenge aur defend karne ke liye kuch hai bhi nahi mere paas … kya bolunga ki… raat me daru ke nashe me akeli Sanjana se milne jaa raha tha to Karan Naik ne mujhe roka aur fir maine patthar utha kar use maar diya… ? mahtarichod, bitiyachod, burchatta, bursungha jaisi gaali bhi di... wo alag. waise kya dum laga kar maara tha saale ko… ab bhi dard de raha hoga usko… yadi ye baat ghar me pata chali toh mommy toh danda lekar pichhwada toh laal karegi hee, baapu bhi apni rum ke khatam hone ke gum me ulta maarega... Ved , tu mere friends ranking me no.1 sthan par hai... iska bhi kuch jugaad bata ”

“Karan Naik wala problem se nikalne ka idea hai mere paas… par main sure nahi hu ki ye work karega ya nahi…”Ranjan kuch sochte hue bola

“idea bata..”main khushi se puchha

“par main sure nahi hu…”

“bata toh… work main aur Ved karwa lenge…”

“wo tujhe na pakde isliye kisi dusare ko pakadwa de…. Samjha..?”

“kya samjha…? thoda explain kar… ek toh wo history ka question daag kar gayi hai, usko bhi samajhna hai abhi... aur tu ab samjha… samjha kar raha hai… seedhe-seedhe bol…”

Jiske baad Ranjan ne mujhe samjhaya ki mujhe kya samajhna chahiye… jise sunkar main samajh gaya ki shayad Karan Naik ko apne raaste se hatane ka Ranjan ka ye idea kaam kar sakta hai… khair wo baad ki baat thi.. abhi ek aur problem thi aur wo thi Riya Rose…. Us-se bhi toh baat karni thi… waise use samajh jaana chahiye ki, main ek ladka hu aur ek ladke ki kuch sharirik jaroorate hoti hai… jaise ki............................................... daru. tum logo ne sex samjha naa..? ashleel, sanskarless people :yuck:

Anyway.... toh use samajh jaana chahiye ki, main ek ladka hu aur ek ladke ki kuch sharirik jaroorate hoti hai… jaise ki daru. jise ladke ko pura karna hota hai aur kabhi-kabhi isme ladka bahak bhi jaata hai… ise normally lena chahiye… lekin wo toh is samay apna gaal fulaye, gubbare ki tarah… school ke garden me baithi hui thi, jaha lunch time me aksar jhaant barabar launde-laundiya kuda-fandi karte the, jhula-vula jhoolte hue khela karte the. Riya Rose se milne main bhi wahi jaa pahucha…. Ved , Riya Rose ke liye bhi ek alag plan bana raha tha... lekin maine use rok diya aur wapas class bhej diya... kyunki Riya Rose meri territory thi aur yadi yaha bhi main haar gaya yaa mujhe Ved ki jaroorat hui toh.... fir laanat hai mujhpe

Door se Riya ko dekh kar mujhe laga tha ki wo garden me aise hee apna samay kaatne ke liye baithi hogi, par fir jaise-jaise main uske najdeek jata gaya mujhe abhas hua ki wo koyi painting bana rahi thi aur usi style me ghaas ke upar baithi hui thi, jis style me us din park me baithi hui thi, jab mera pair pipe me fas gaya tha aur main uske saamne gira tha… aur us din ki tarah main aaj bhi uske peechhe khada tha… mujhe kahna toh nahi chahiye, par peechhe se Riya ko dekh ke mera mann machal utha aur tan bhi _/\_

“kya bolu… ? hiiii…? Nahi, seedhe pair pakad kar peechhe ghaseet leta hu isko aur maafi maang leta hu… nahi, is-se ghanghor beizzati hogi, ye sahi nahi rahega…. Direct I love you ,bol du kya.. ? par Ved toh bol raha tha ki ladkiya, I love you ka jawab hamesha naa me hee deti hai,... toh fir kya bolu…? Is-se science quiz me participte karne ka puchhta hoon … ye sahi rahega...”

“nahi yar, nahi karegi… ye toh painting wale me jaayegi… fir kya puchhu…??????”

“yeeee puchh… -1 point…”khud se khud pe point chadhate hue main mann hee mann me bola ... -1... –Ve sign isliye, kyunki ... Vigyan ki bhasa me bolu toh yaha gravity ke against main dusaro par nahi balki khud par point chadha raha tha aur yadi hindi bhasha me explain karu.. toh yaha Karta bhi main tha, Karak bhi main tha aur karm bhi main hee tha....

“ek kaam karta hu, is-se aaj ki tarikh puchh leta hu… nahi yar… fir”

“fir lawda puchhu kyaaaaaa…..” mann hee mann main chillaya… kash mere paas bhi 2.0 hota

Jiske baad main peechhe muda aur apna dahina hath saamne karke khud ko Riya ki taraf dhakela… iske baad, jaise main us din park me Riya ke bagal me gira tha, waise aaj bhi yaha garden me gira… jaise us din Riya mujhe dekhkar bhauchakki rah gayi thi , waise aaj bhi thi… par us din se kam… kyunki aaj wo shocked kam, gussa jyada thi… kyunki…. Kyunki… girte waqt maine uske hath ko anjaane hee dhakka de diya tha, jis-se uski painting bigad gayi....

“TUU…..mmmm.... tummm”itna bolkar Riya ruk gayi aur fir apne bayi hatheli ko baandhkar , daant peesate hue dheere-dheere boli “CONTROL… RIYA..… just ignore him….”

“... aise.. kaise... ignore...”

Riya apni band mutthi, apne sar me dheere-dheere markar control… control bolne lagi aur jab bahut der tak wo aise hee karte rahi, I mean apne sar ko apni band mutthi se sahlati rahi toh mujhse dekha nahi gaya aur main bola…

“sar dard de raha hai kya…? Kamal hai, daru maine pi… hangover tumhe ho gaya… waise aaj tum paani peene nahi gayi , R.O. ke paas… :love: main kabse wahi line me laga hua tumhara intezaar kar raha tha , taaki tumko line me naa lagna pade...”

Maine kahaa... Main toh bas kisi tarah conversation shuru karna chahta tha, par wo mujhe ab aise dekhne lagi jaise wo Sanjana ho aur uske naam pe donation lene ke baad maine paise use diye hee na ho… ekdum cold blooded… andar bahut kuch tha, lekin chehra ekdum shant… gambhir… fir usne apni painting ki taraf dekha… aur jab usne apni painting ko dekha toh , maine bhi dekha…

“ise main ek hafte se bana rahi thi…”wo shant swar me bas itna boli…

Uski painting ke beecho-beech black colour phail gaya tha... jo ki mere neeche girne ke karan uske hath me dhakka lagne ki vazah se hua tha…. Main toh soch raha tha ki us din park ke mafiq neeche girkar style me use, heeyyy Rosie bolunga aur wo mujhe … how funny… bolkar haste hue maaf kar degi aur gale laga legi… par aisa hua nahi… mera plan bhi perfect tha, execution bhi perfect tha… lekin result nahi.... Ved ko hee plan banane dena chahiye tha. ye sab mere sath hee kyun hota hai...

Pata nahi, shayad main hee chutiya hoon......


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मेरे हिसाब से गुप्ता जी मान जाएंगे... आखिर बापस से लाल पेन के लिए जो कहा...

करन नैक से कैसे बचें... ये तो आगे ही पता लगेगा...

रिया को मनाने के चक्कर मे उसकी पेंटिंग खराब करदी...
ये तो कंगाली में आटा गीला बाली बात हो गयी :roflol:

बढ़िया अपडेट as एजुअल... :yourock:
 
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