Romance Three Girls of My Life

[Naina]

“pee-peep… pee-peep… abey sunayi nahi deta kya… horn de raha hu, kab se…. pee-peep…pee-peep…”

lol ×100
are yaar ye guru veda bhedo par hi chilla raha hai ki sunayi nahi deta kya ..
Ab wo bechare bhed.. wo kya samjhe ki kya samjhana chahta hai ye insaan muh se peep peep awaaze nikal ke
wo bhed be like
" Aawaz Do Hamko, Hum Kho Gaye
Kab Neend Se Jaage, Kab So Gaye
Mar Jayeenge Hum Agar Door Tumse Ho Gaye "

 

[Kingfisher]

Update...4

Usne ye kaha toh bade shant tarike se tha… par uska response inta depressing aur disapproving tha ki mano, wo kah rahi ho ki… uski nazro me main gir gaya hu… usne mujh jaisa gira hua insaan aaj tak nahi dekha aur aaj ke baad wo meri chhaya tak dekhna pasand nahi karti aur yadi uska bas chale toh abhi ke abhi mujhe fansi lagwa de... Vagerah-vagerah...

“aisa kya bol diya maine… pata nahi, shayad main hee chutiya hu… Ved sahi bol raha tha…”is tarah Niv ke sath main bhi deperess hone laga… infact, main khud apni nazar me ab gir chuka tha….

Atharva jaisi imagination sayad hi koi karta ho kya picture bnata hai apne mann me par jo bhi bnata hai vo sach ho hi jati hai vaise muje laagta hai ye jabse paida hua hai tabse eske piche rahu ketu flaana dhinkana sab lage hue the
Ab batao good morning good evening good afternoon ye bhi koi hint hota hai

Vha bhai kya soch hai pehla banda hai jisne etni mehnat se l love you bola or khud ki njar me gir gya sayad esne future dekh liya hoga

Atharva…. Get out…”

Ye mila baba ji ka thullu

Atharva, please get the hell out of here…. And never talk to me in this life…”

Eske liye ye bhi kam hi tha jo esne harkwte ki Google se achi achi galiya search karke deni chahiye thi ....par par fir bhi ye nhi sudhrne vala hai chutiyapanti es rag rag me basi hai jo hamesha ubal mar kar bahar ko ati hai or fir lagte hai eske loude jo lagte aa rhe hai jiska ye hakdar bhi hai par hai dil ka Sacha ...kya mene shi kha ....ye k

is ghatna ke baad mujhe pel ke khush hona chahiye tha, pure shahar me dhindhora pitwaana chahiye tha... ya fir pure desh me. mujhe khushi se nanga naach karna chahiye tha par haqiqat bilkul iske ulat thi.. main had se jyada

aadat hai ki jab bhi mujhe koyi chiz buri ya kharab lagti hai toh main use dusari feelings

Ha ye shi hai vaise kisi gam se nahar nikalne ke liye apne aap ko kisi kam me Etna bussy kali ki uski yad hi na aye
dukhi aur us se bhi jyada udas tha
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Dhol to ved pitega apne dost ki barbadi me vaise naga nachana ha shi tha ....sayad aisa karne se eske sar par rahu ketu ka asar kam ho jaye

first time pyar aur second time ikrar... aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai.... maa kasam. line ladkiya bhi deti hai aur fir jab main dene lagta hu toh

Great esi soch ke chalte ye 28 sal ka hokar bhi abhi tak randwa matla kunwara hai eska dimag jitna chalna chahiye usse bhi kai guna chalta hai khaskar ladkiyon ke mamle me agar aise hi chalta tha

maine soch liya hai… ek-ek ke upar case karunga… harassment ka. Sali, pahle line dengi

Va bete tu bda havvy driver nikala ladkiyo ke samne juban to eski khilti nhi or dekho bate shekhchilli ki vaise ye khud se hi backchodi achi kar leta hai jaisa eska name hai gun uske ulte hai esme pta nhi writer shab me ky soch kar eska name atharva rakha ....par kuch bhi gupta mja bahut aya ....kabhi kabhi to es par etni dua ati hai ki land se anshu nikal ate hai akhir ek enshan kitni bar chutiyapanti kar sakta hai ..

abey lawde.... kholegaaaaaaa gate… ya suicide kar liya….” aur tab mujhe samajh aaya ki aawaz tv ke gate se nahi balki mere gate se aa rahi thi… matlab mere room ke gate se.

“Ved….”darwaja kholte hue maine kaha…

“mutth maar raha tha kya be… Nivedita Rani ko sochkar...? Yaa fir Tera doorbell kharab hai …?”

“tune hee toh last time ukhada tha, daru peeke…”

“kya Manager banoge lawda… le pakad”Duvel ka pura ek peti beer mujhe pakdate hue Ved bola “abey tere baju me kya maal rahti hai be… aaj dekha main... jab tu gate nahi khol raha tha toh, wo bahar aayi thi… use dekh kar main muskuraya aur mujhe dekh kar wo muskurate hue stupid boli.... abey pakad na jaldi, mutna hai mujhe…. 2 botal main pahle see hee maar chuka hu…”

Bhagvan aise dost kisi ko na de bhale hi sake badle ek Junglee kutta dede vaise ab tak ek bat to clear vo chuki hai. Ki atharva ki bigadne me ved ka hath hai or ved ko bigadne me atharva ka hath hai

Vaise ved ne khi kha mutth ke bare bare me agar aaj niv saki kutte ki tarah jalil baijatti karke na nikalti to off course ye yhi kam karta vaise ek chor ko har admi chor hi lagta hai
Mene pehle bhi bola ki ye apas me ek dusre ko bigad rahe hai bc etni daru kon pota hai be ..
Tharki sala ladki dekhi ke uske sath bache tak piada karne ki soch dalta par afsos natija samne ...

interesting… aage kya hua… ab maja aayega”

Ese kehte hai ek acha Sacha dost khud ki to marva li dusre ko bhi puch rha hai teri bhi ache se mri na
Mc duniya ki sari galiyan es ved ko de do to vo bhi eske liye kam hi hogi apni chutiyapanti ka bakhan aise kar rha jaise ollampic me gold jit ke aya ho ...vaise pehle bar atharva ne koi gyan ki bat ki
...ki humari shadi arrange marriage hogi par mujhe nhi lagta ki vo bhi hogi ..

Vaise esne daru ke bare me ache se PhD kar rakhi hai lagta hai hagne ke bad gand bhi daru se hi dhota hoga .... satvagun sampann ved shab kya soch hai niv or uski gf ke gar bahar jake mutt visarjan enki aise harkate dekh kar lagta hai enki jindagi me laawde lagne abhi baki hai jise abhi to suruat hue hai
Vaise atharva kis par reasearch karna chahta hai. Vaise kitni bhi koshish kar lo jo galti ye karta aa rha hai age bhi kaareg esse bhi jyada karega ...or Esme sath dega ye gandu ved

Kamal ka update tha Yug Purush sir hum to apke kayal ho gye pure din ki fastration es ek Update ne gayab kardi

Milte hai kal update number ...5 ke sath
Good night

 

[mashish]

Update-64​

“red light area me hota hai na…”Ved ke kandhe me apna hath rakhte hue Ranjan bola

“lawde… waha toh mujhe hee payment karna pad jayega aur sperm donation me payment karna nahi balki lena hota hai…”

“ek clinic me hota hai shayad…”dimag par jor daalte hue abki maine kaha “ ek kurkure ka packet milega tujhe… yani 5 rs. Karega...?”

Ranjan: 5 rs me toh 5 baar kar dega Ved… waise ye wala bf dekha ki nahi…


Aur ab Riya Rose ko puri tarah bhoolkar hum teeno wahi ground me khade khade mute karke wo bf dekhne me magan ho gaye. Ye sochkar ki Riya Rose aayegi nahi toh jayegi kaha... After all, i was the most eligible boyfriend at that time.


Ved: ye dekh kaise ye african is gori laundiya ke gand me lund daalkar 360° ghoom jaa raha hai…. A.B. Devillers ke mafiq. waise double bed me ghoom-ghoom kar chodne ka maja bahut aata hoga... Hai naa.. aur apna lakshya kaise sadhna hai , is video me achi tarah bataya gaya hai , is African ke dwara… chodte samay ek baar bhi lund bahar nahi nikala chut se… Arharva, tu bhi aisi body bana le… tere ko pornhub ka actor banna tha na…?”

“body toh bana lunga lekin is african type bada lund kaise launga...?”

Ved: dil ki baat bol raha hai ladka… waise steel ka lund lagwa le… Madhu, Mini operation karke laga bhi dengi….

Ranjan: dekh bhatti... Surgeon mil gayi hai. Baaki steel main laa dunga… jodne ke liye welder ko bhi bula lenge operation theatre me… fir teri life set hai…

“apna kismet kharab hai… jis tarah bf me African laundo ki demand rahti hai… us hisab se Africa me paida hona magta hai agle janam me”

Ranjan: tumko kabhi Africa pasand hai, hollywood dekh ke America bhi pasand aata hai… kisi ko india bhi pasand hai ki nahi…?”

"mere ko Pakistan…. Waha mast-mast maal hai…” waha se jaate hue Ved bola “atyant bakchodi pelte ho be tum dono… main jaa raha class me… Mira ko dekh ke mann hee mann me muthiaunga…. Kal Mira ki gand maarne ka imagine karke teen baar mutth maara hoon... Abhi tak lund dard de raha hai.. Kya mast gadrayi tight gand hai Mira ki mere imagination me.. Ekdum laal gand..... "


Ved ke jaane ke baad main aur Ranjan kuch der aur R.O. ke paas wali bench par baithe aur idhar-udhar ki bakchodi pelte rahe. . Maine Sanjana ke bare me puchha ki un dono ka matter kaha tak pahucha…. Jise Ranjan ne haskar taal diya, yaani maamla kuch had tak aage jaroor badha hai.. Thoda jalan toh hua seene me par fir मित्रता परमो धर्म: sidhhant ka pratipadak hone ke kaaran mujhe ab ye sehna tha... Shayad sari umra bhar... Ranjan ne hanskar Sanjana wale topic ko taal diya aur topic Riya ki taraf mod diya…


“apni kismat hee gandu hai… samaja nahi aa raha ki Riya ke upar gussa hoyu, ya use manau….? Ek kaam karta hu sanki ho jata hu…. Dimag bhrast kar deti hai ye ladkiya… achchhi khasi meri zindagi gujar rahi thi , lekin fir school me Riya aayi…. Riya se pyar ka izhaar karu ya ignore karu… kya -kya nahi kiya tha main usko patane ke liye...? "

"Disappointed..?"

"Yep... And the worst thing is i dont even know the meaning of disappointment... Yet i am."

".when you work hard for something and expect too much but at the end don't get it... You feel sad... Right..??"

"Of course "

"Well, that's the disoppointment... Mate. It Happenend with my whole life... Happening now... But Now i'm used to it.. It feels bad, hurts so much... But now i know how to handle it... And Bhatti, Always Remember one thing, no matter how fucked up your life becomes... Life is not about being sad , mad or fad over someone or something. Make the most of it because no one knows what will happen next, so………. have fun….”aankh maarte hue Ranjan bola

“cool… ”

“ Riya Rose ki tension mat le... Main uske tujhse patne ki guarantee toh nahi le sakta.. Kyunki ye decision use khud lena hai.. Lekin mere rahte hue tere aalawa school ka koyi aur launda use pata le.. Aisa hargij nahi hoga. Zindagi ki thodi bahut samajh bai , isliye jab bhi koyi confusion ho ya problem ho.. toh mere paas aa jana… We're Bonded. chal ab first period khatm hone wala hai aur school ke baad Big-Bang me chay tu pilayega…”

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“pee-peep….. pee-peep…… pee-peep”

“lawda tere ko daura-vaura padta hai kya be.... Ab kyun chilla raha hai….”peechhe baithe-baithe maine Ved ko ek mukka mara

“abey saamne dekh bhediyo ka jhund aa raha hai , toh door se hee side kar raha hu…”
Maine apni gardan tedhi karke peechhe se saamne ki oor dekha…

“use bhed bolte hai be periodologist, bhediya nahi aur side karna hai toh horn maarna … muh se kya pee-peep kar raha hai, gandu…”

“pee-peep… pee-peep…”Meri baat ka Ved par koyi asar nahi hua aur wo horn bajane ke bajay muh se horn deta raha….

“pee-peep… pee-peep… abey sunayi nahi deta kya… horn de raha hu, kab se…. pee-peep…pee-peep…”

“you do realize that you’re 27 years old… ?”

“sattaish ka kya sattar ka bhi ho jaunga toh aise hee muh se horn dunga…. Tu apna kaam kar…”

“kaam hee toh kar raha tha, lekin tere pee-peep ne mujhe disturb kar diya… aadha ghanta aur hai, Rewa pahuchne me…”

“sabse pahle kaha jayega…. Ranjan ka dhaba…? Main toh bolta hu wahi chalte hai…”

“Big-Bang….. school bhi dekh lenge… waise ghar toh main sirf 2 saal se nahi gaya par aaj jab jaa raha hu toh aisa lag raha hai jaise sadiya beet gayi ho…”


P. S. Update short lag sakta hai.. Wo next chapter.. Next update se shuru karna hee behtar samjha maine... Baaki reviews short nahi hone chahiye.....

nice update

 

[Kingfisher]

frustrate ho gaya tha ki mujhe ab janna hee tha ki… main aisa kya galat karta hu, jo ladkiya aise

Hhaaa ab ye avengers Endgame ki tarah time travel bhi karega par vapas present me aa payega ya nhi

main tharki hu…? Bilkul nahi.. Unhe abuse karta hu…? Hell, no… main toh cigarette tak nahi peeta….. dhokha…? Never… Jis ladki ko main present time dil de raha hota hu, us samay use chhodkar is brahamand ki kisi aur ladki ke baare me sochta tak nahi. toh fir kisi aur se raas rachane ki baat toh bahut door ki baat hai…. Badsurat bhi nahi hu… aur naa hee mota, patla, naata ya kala hoon... Aur toh aur is

Ahuhh ahuhh ab to eski halat par rona aa rha hai apni safai khud hi pesh kar rha muje lagta hai jo ye sawal apne aaap se puch rha hai agar yhi swal ved se puch to ....haa kya jo Esme buraiyan nhi hai vo bhi btA dega

pata nahi..... shayad main hee chutia hu

Pehli bar eske muhh se sach jan kar dil khush ho gya par es line me ye sayad word koi match nhi kar rha ese hta dena chahiye

Atharva , yar thoda gadi rok na…. mutaash lagi hai…”main bas flashback me pahuchne hee wala tha ki Ved mujhe pakadkar wapas vartman me laya….

Dikh di apni chutiyapanti. Abe lounde jab jyada piyega to mutash to lagegi hi na par ye bhi kya kre ....koi bhi chahkar bhi control nhi kar sakta esi

kaun sa raasta…?”

“ek app hai , Grinder… tu use karta hai kya…”

“abhi toh pahli baar uska naam suna hai… download karunga baad me…”

“gay logo ka hai bas wo app…”

“gay wale se apna kya hoga… lesbian wala bata koyi…”maine kaha

“homosexual app hai, ladka aata hoga toh ladki bhi aati hee hogi naa… soch-soch”

“bas-bas… pura plan samajh gaya main… apan lesbian ban jayenge”

Ease jahir hota hai ki en dono ka flashback kitna bhayankar hoga ab ved ka dimag eske sar .me nhi balki eske l...d me hai tharki khi ka ..vaise ek bat manani padgie bande me knowledge kut kut ke bhra hai
Dono two in one hai

fir iske baad jo bhi ladki humare radar me aayegi, un sabko chodenge…”

Bas yhi baki reh gya tha ...par planning ke mamle me bhai eska koi jawab nhi ek dum chindi planning karta hi me to eska fan.....na na. Ganta fan hu es backlol ka pancho Update me dimag kadhi karke rakh diya

Riya Rose: The Second Girl of My life !

Niv ne bas eske pichhade me bas ek lat hi mari thi par muje lagta hai ye eska pochvada hi saf kardehi ......par par eska pochvada to present me moujud hai to fir ye kya karegi lats see

2009

Bs esi ki ummid kar raha tha vaise kuch jyada hi piche chle gye ho

aur badh jaati thi jab exams karib hote… especially jinka roll number exam hall me mere ya Ved ke aas-paas hota. sunne me ajeeb lagega par ab kya kare... sach yahi tha.

Hhaà bhai ye jyada nhi bahut jyada ho gya jaisi enki filhall office me post hai to muje lagta hai ki ye study .me kitne intelligent the ajeeb to bhai lag hi rha hhaaa jhantu khi ke

mera matlab, unke college me bhi maal thi, fir wo kyun humare school ki ladkiyo par nazar

Kyo ki tumne hi bataa ki tumhere es sanskar velly me bla ki khubsurat rajkumariyan hai hhaà

pichhwada aur dahina par tika kar khada tha… fisal kar neeche girne se baal –baal

Jai bhai tumhari lila aparmpar hai najro se to pehle hi gira hua tha ab vastav me bhi girega bhag bhosdike

kya ladki hai be… hairstyle dekh… pahle saamne ke baal ko ekdum peechhe kiya aur fir jo baal peechhe kiya hai usko aakhiri me do part me equally divide… katayi zehar lag rahi hai… scale se naap-naap ke apna baal set karti hai kya”neeche girne ka jo dar ek pal ke liye mere andar samaya tha , dusare pal khud ko sahi-salamat dekh rafoo-chakkar ho

Mahan gyani ladka ab lag raha hai ki bande me kitna gyan bhra hua hai hairstyles pe hi etni achi pratikriya di to fir baki ka soch soch kar pura sharir jhanjhana rha hai vaise kya ye dono science stream ke bande hai kya

tujhe bhi achchi lagi kya…”

“tujhe bhi… ka kya matlab… tujhe bhi… ?”

“bilkul… bahut dino baad aisa tanaka maal aaya hai, ekdum fresh….”

“par pahle main try marunga…”

“aisa kyun…? Mere lund me kaante lage hai kya…”

“mera naam kya hai…”

“Atharva…”

“aur tera naam kya hai…”

“Ved…”

“hum dono ke naam ko ek sath jode toh kya banta hai…”

“Atharva-Ved…”

“toh pahle kiska naam aayega...?”

“Atharva… yani tera…”

“toh pahle kaun try marega…

Agar aise dost ho to dushman ki kya jarurat hai vaise kya phylosohy jhadi hai atharva ne ved jaise chutiye ko or chutiya bna diya

background me ek maal de dunga na… tujhe. tension kyun le raha hai...”

Vaise ye bar bar mal mal bol rahe hai khi ye heroin drugs coakin ganja vagerha ka estemal to nhi karte na

Ved, mere bhai… maan ja … earphone dunga apna naya wala…”

“aur…”

“bf waali puri DVDs bhi…”

“aur kya dega…”

“aur kya hai mere paas….”

“tere ghar ke bagiche me is bar jab angoor lagenge toh… pahle main pet bhar ke khaunga…”

“done….”

“aur kya dega….”

“ab toh sirf mera lund hee bacha hai… lena hai toh bol….”.

“thik hai.. ro mat…. ye le…” apna tie nikal kar mujhe dete hue Ved bola “waise bhi main uspe try nahi marne wala tha… use dekhkar hee mujhe andar se feel ho raha hai ki is ladki ko nahi patana chahiye…. chutiya ban gaya tu… wo toh tujhse samaan lene ke liye main aisa bola.. ”

Bhai bs kar yar has has kar mera l..d dard karne laga hai madarchod gand khoon ke anshu ro rhi hai
Vaise nhi patana chahiye thaa to kyo us bechare ki lene ke tula hua tha

wooohh.. How lucky i am. How lucky is she.

Girega muh ke bal girega age ke charo dant tutenge Fir aisa dikhega

fir hoga ye ki… teachers mobile jabt kar lete

Esse bda harami mene aaj tak nhi dekha par eski planning ka to me kayal ho gya aise to ye alia bhatt ko bhi line me l sakta hai

“I’m Riya…. Riya Rose….”apna hath meri taraf badhate hue Riya boli

“I’m Atharva…Atharrrvva….”

Maann me laddu phuta .... Vaise Etna loudly bola sala halkat par koi na start es well but end is not well I think

abey deal hui thi na humari… fir tu kyun aaya…”ek kohni Ved ke pet me maarkar maine dabi aawaz me kaha aur fir Riya ki taraf dekh kar muskurane laga…

“wo jo ek shirt humne kal dukan me dekhi thi, jo hum dono ko pasand aayi thi… use tu nahi lega… use main lunga. Par paise tu dega. Wo kya hai ki yadi dono same shirt le lenge toh log bolenge ki buy 1, get 1 me liye hai…

Bhagvan aise dost Dushman Ko bhi na de haad kar di esne to muje nhi lagta ki ye etne se santusht ho jayega khi aisa na ho ki atharva ki sari jaydad apne nam karva ke or jaise atharva ke lakshan dikh rhe vo hiiii hiii karte hue uske nam kar bhi dega sala gandu dub mar

ok… Riya..”waha se jaate hue Ved bola “ aur isse bach ke rahna, character bahut kharab hai is ladke ka… yakin naa aaye toh kisi bhi ladki se puch lena school me… watch out”

Ved teri ma ki ankh bed mc tha hai or rehega agar ye atharva ke sath raha name sachi keh rha ese 1800 s ki ladki bhi nhi pategi gand pe ek kas ke lat maro o

zindagi bhar isi school me padha hu… yaha

Or paida bhi yhi hua hu mundan sanskar bhi thi hua hai or to or khata pita hugta mutash sab yhi karta hai or kuch

jisse agal-bagal ... aage-peechhe... saamne se peechhe jaane waale, peechhe se saamne aane waale., meri aawaz sun jaha the wahi ek pal ke liye ruk gaye.... aur fir agle hee pal mann hee mann mujhe chutiya kahkar aapne-apne raaste aage badh gaye.

Sab maro eski gand ...sarkari hai sabka sath sabka Vikas

Speechless mindfresh dimag ka bharta banane wala update pad kar gand or ......ha ha saab kuch lal ho gya

UPDATE ..6 ka murder night ko

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Update - 29

Bhai only laugh for this update.. ise jada kuch nahi tha... mujhe laga tha sirf ved hi le sakta hai lekin mira ne jo li hai maa kasam maza aa gaya aur apne uspar apni writing se chaar chand laga diye, atharva ka har baat par taunt dena.. matalb ki sachi dosti aur timing ka pehlu ho aap... sahi mein mira ne dho dala pura ka pura uppr se lekar niche ved ke dick tak Uske baad bulla sir ki wapsi aur atharva ka bachna... matlab itni jaldi.. chitti the robot ka concept apne hi to nahi diya tha, maar kar fir wapis, vo kursi ka hilne wala scene matlab aise anokhe anokhe avtar aap hi laa sakte ho bhai.. its is awesome... mazaa gaya sahi mein yaar... aap ki kahani padte waqt aisa lagta hai jeevan hai to yahi hai... reality se dur aur fir bhi uske pass..

Update - 30

Are bhaibhai bhai bhai.... Hahahaa... Otorhinoalaryngologist Ye kahan se aya pehle to ye batao... meaning to hoga par mene aisa word nahi suna aise word sirf medicial mein hote hain jahan tak meri samajh hai... Bhai adha update gazab hasne wala tha lekin baad mein VED sir aye... sahi mein jo gyan bantta hai unhone gazab..... ise kehte hain brain with dick... Maza aa gaya bhai.. full to comedy tha.. lekin sanjana ka naam lene par kahani ulti na padh jaye..ho sakta hai sanjana ko acha na lage... na jane kaise... kahan se kahan tak soch lete ho aap... mein to riya rose ke reaction ka wait kar raha tha par vo apne skip maar dia aur collection ab 5000 se jada ka hone wala hai.. dekhte hain kya hoga aaagee.....



Gurudev Bhai... yar tussi sahi mein great ho... kahe ved ne hai par vichar to legendary insan ke hai

Update - 31

Absolute legendary bhai... Kahani ab ek alag hi level par aa chuki hai... GYANI BHAI at its best... sach mein bhai.. Yahan se jo apne kahani ke twist aur turn planing dalni chalu ki hai na... isne kahani ko, pichle sare update padna safal ho raha hai kyun ki nayi jaan si daal di .... kahani mein reality ke sath maze dogune ho chuke hai ab. Bahut hi sahi ... matlab umda... ved bhale hi hans raha ho lekin sahi udai ladki ne... aur apna kaam karke nikal gayi.... maza aa gaya bhai Guptaji ke liye jo pilan banaya hai ved ne akhir dosti ki chaap chhod raha hai...

Donation ke naam par to log lakhon luta dete hain... ye trick sabse satik aurpurana hai.... naam nahi le sakta warna politcal abuse ka bomb fod denge humpar.. aap samajh hi jao.. khair bhai apratim.. mazedar... bemisaal... dhaamalll... mazaaaa aa gaya....

Update - 32

Plan... Plan... Plan...Matlab pitne se bachne ke liye rambaad ilaz.. Guptaji ke pas apne shastra hai to Atharva ke pas Veshastra hai... Mazedar plan tha bhai, par mujhe nhi malum ki result kya hoga, hona to sahi chahie lekin ye apki kahani hai to mein nahi keh sakta ki result actually mein perfect hoga ya nahi..



Mene daru hi socha tha bhai.... sanskari bacha hun mein

Mujhe laga tha pehle sanjana ki bari ayegi lekin ayi riya... aur fir apne ek alag hi tone set kiya, matlab pehli baar mein kisi kahani ki love story itni different pad raha hun isliye bhai hats off to ur soch... matlab ye sochna hi apne aap mein bahut badi bat hai likhne ke baad to aap use aur chaar chand laga dete ho.. Matlab it was too great.. and unique as well.. Atharva ka girna.. fir riya ki painting kharab hona aur fir uski mayusi.. sab kuch... bhai sach mein har line aisi thi jaise lag raha tha ki banda kya sochta hai yaar.. maza dila deta hai... Kahani ab vakai apne har piche update ko piche chhod kar alag hi tone set karti jaa rahi hai.. Time to time sath nahi chal paa raha lekin bahut jaldi aa jaunga bhai... padne baithta hu to uthne ka dil nahi karta untill unless koi majburi aa jaye... Bhai tussi awesome ho....

Update - 33

Are bhai kahan le jaa rahe ho kahani ko? Isme bhi confuse kar-ke maar dalne ka irada hai kya? Abhi tak sab sahi chal raha tha lekin end mein atte atte confusa gaya itna jda coincidence? Kya gadbad ghotala kar rahe ho... abhi tak kahani padte hue dimag shant tha lekin iske baad dimag uthalfutal ho gaya hai... Maa kasam starting ka ATHARVA wala dard apun ko ARMAAN mafik laga par end mein atte atte side role wali ladki ne to dimag palti ka rdiya jis tarah atharva ka hua usi tarah kuch kuch mera bhi ho gaya bhai.. kya hai ye.. kya karna chahte ho aap...

Mene pichle kuch reply mein kaha tha ki hero hero hai nahi.. side role milne wala hai use, uspar apne is update mein bhi dala... kuch na kuch to jhol hai re baba bhai aap bahut jada jhol karne wale ho... Ye update shayad kahani ka turning point ho sakta hai kyun ki VARUN ka nam pehle bhi aya mene uspar kuch nahi kaha lekin ab dubara aya aur VARUN = ARUN ye dimagi ghotala ATMAKAMI mein padh chuka hun... isliye aur jada sar chakra raha hai... bhai kuch to jhol hai ATMAKAMI ka end abhi tak mere jehen mein hai kyun ki vo kahani jab bhi yaad karta hu muh se bas yahi nikalta hai wah bhai.. matlab wah.. kaise koi banda itna acha soch kar use itni perfectly execute kar sakta hai... kahin is baar bhi aisa to nahi?

Update - 34

Bhai... Mjhe laga tha ek pal ke liye gaya jaffer, maara ye chutiya... aur apne suspense mein daal diya ki ankhein khule dekh raha hai.. pata nahi bhai kya likh rahe ho aur aap heart mein hamare jhatke diye jaa rahe ho.. itne to palang par nahi dete honge launde laundiyu ko jitna aap hamare dil mein de rahe ho
Maza aa gaya, pehle fight aur fir guptaji ka syllabus khatam karne ka andazz... same aisi hi ek teacher hua karti thi hamari life mein par mujhe yaad nahi ki vo college tha ya fir school lekin usne bhi pura ka pura syllabus asie hi udaya tha... pr is update ki shuruwat jitni jandar hui thi use kahin jada jandar end tha update ka... matlab APne sabhi ke dimag ke parkache uda diye, ved atharva ke sath hum sabhi padne walon ke... guptaji ko maan gaya mein aaj.. he is full dude bhai.. gupta ji ko salaam...



Bhai kamal hi kar diya ye to... Matlab guptaji jaisa talented nahi dekha mene... ab ye launda hoshiyari mein jo pilega vo alag... apratim bhai..... masterclass bande ho aap.. next time koi aur word dhundna padega apke liye ....

Update - 35

Sweeet.... is the only word after reading this update bhai. Madhu wala scene funny tha aur jo side launde the vo jada bol gaye par ye side role the isliye mein inko avoid karta hun par jis chiz ne mere chehre par muskan layi vo akhri ka scene tha. Sanjana wala... matlab bhai dil dhak-dhak kar diya apne i don't know how.. kaise aap manage karte ho itna behtarin soch pana it was beatutiful bhai.... Atharva looks alike hi ai armaan ka... lekin thoda sa difference hai armaan was more agressive baki atharva is not lekin dono hi apne dil ki baat na batate na batana chahte... Sanjana was about to kiss and atharva stopped her... Tabhi dumb kaha... matlab ise pyara scene nahi ho sakta ... aap har baar itne ache se kuch unique tarika kahan se le atte ho... Sach kahun bhai agar apki kahani ek reality hoti hai jisme mein jee raha hota to sach mein kabhi marne ka dil nahi karta.... It is the best feeling when i thought of your world... Awesome... King of Virtual-Actual-Reality

Update - 36

Ye madhu behen kyun bolti hai re itna tu... Bhai kahan se utha laye ho ise? Itna bolne wali ladkiyan hoti hai bilkul hoti hai lekin mere se kabhi nahi takrai acha hua nahi takrai varna main to galiya bhar deta abhi tak ise.. man hi man chehre par nahi.. warna bur man jati hai ladkiyan bahut jald. Aur shikayat bahut karti hai.. pata nahi kya chul rehti hai inhe... Kher bhai update mein mere ko maa wala masti dekh kar bada maza aya, bachpan yaad aa gaya... mein bhi aise hi karta tha aur dant khata tha... Bhai gazab sama bandh diya hai apne.. Ladka riya ke piche aur ladke ke piche sanjana bas samajh nhi paa raha ki vo jagfar ke sath kyun hai... haye ye ladke kab samjhenge Bhai gazab likh rahe ho.... mazaa aaa gaya... ab agla jaa rela hun padne...

Update - 37

Bhai..... Ek hi dil mera ... kitni baar jetoge re baba... 36 baar to is kahani mein hi jeet chuke hoo baki alag... ab ye 37 va.... Matlab maza aa gaya bhai... Pehle jis baat ne mera dil jeeta vo tha Madhu ka atharva ko ward no batana.. matlab yaar itna uniquely aap kaise soch kar kaam kar dete ho.. itni chalu ladki.. matlab agar mujhe aise koi bolta to mein yahi manta ki vo gol gappe le rahi hai aur ap bhi aise hi likh dete ho ki bande ko hint bhi na lage ki aisa kuch hoga... matlab jordar ... Uske baad ka scene to matlab... maza hi aa gaya... choclate wala scene, riya ki mom wala scene ek number ka tha bhai... matlab maza aa gaya.. mere pas jada words nahi bach hain likhne ko lekin ... is update jo apka screenplay tha ... vo ek dum top notch.. jaise akhri mein atharva bhag gaya ek dum se... matlab vo to mindblowing tha bhai yahi apka swag hai aur ye chizen apke alawa koi soch kar likh nahi sakta jo aap kar lete ho.. Mujhe riya ke recation par tajub nahi hua kyun ki mujhe lag raha tha vo maan jayegi yun ki ladkiyu ko yahi chahie bas... Rahi baat end ki to bhai hansa tni zor se ki maa bhi kehti meri tjhe kya ho gaya be pagal ho gaya hai kya Bhai mazaa aa gayaa..... u are the great writer bhai

Update - 38

Bhai nag hai yar ye bandi... kasam se.. lekin maa kasam hansi nah ruk rahi.. kaun se jungle se laye ho ise Par bhai maa kasam vo riya aur atharva wala scene is like a dream.. mujhe laga kahin ye sapna nikla to hero gaya lekin apne sahi kaha tha is baar kahani alag hai kyun ki atharva armaan se alag hai, isliye ab mein kahani mein ye atkale nahi lagaunga kyun ki iske sath kuch kuch ache ki umeed hai vaise pata hai ki kuch hona nahi hai par fir bhi.. acha lag rela hai padhte hue.. Uppar se jo realistic writing ka jadu bikharte ho aap vo apne aap mein ek style hai. Atharva ka reaction hum jase laundon ke jaise hi tha bilkul same... kuch bhi bdha chada kar nahi bilkul sateek perfect execution tha.. jhun-jhuni hona.. aur hath pakadne par to bilkul dil dhak dhak ho jana it was too perfect.. Mujhe laga tha kuch baat cheet hogi par dono chup jada rahenge lekin nahi.. yahan to apne kuch aur lana tha.. ab kahin kuch yahan ho na jaye ki kahin atharva ki sari pillaning befil ho jaye... Bhai apratim.... execution.. apratim kahani...

Update - 39

Mixx feel update tha... teen bhag mein ... pehla bhag madhu ne jo le li bhai... ye side role ne to Atharva ko arthi par laitane jaisa kaam kar diya, do minute aur rukta to na jane kya hota... but most importantly jo mujhe is update mein rochak laga vo tha riya ka vo expression tha jab usne kaha kya.. kaha.. tha... aisa.. matlab is expression ke baad har ladke ko dead sure ho jana chahie ki ladki ko jealousy hai aur jahan jealousy hoti hai wahan kuch na kuch hota hai.. uske baad bio wale par na puchne ke piche jo chupa gussa thaa ur ant mein atte atte madhu ne jo pyar dikhaya uske baad to khel khatam... aap ek tune ke sath likhte ho jo har line by line judta chala jata hai.... Aur agar mein is update ke higlight chunun to do chaar the..

Pehla madhu ko jo apne gali di hai na bhai... matlab salam hai... kisi din galiyun ka lesson dena jarur... kaam ayega.... chut bikhar kar tukdon mein bikhar jaye... Kabhi kabhi armaan jaisi jhalak launde mein aa hi jati hai...

Then uske baad maa par choti si tipadi di aur ye hakikat hai agar maa ko kuch pata ho vaise to use sab pata hota hai kaise ye aaj tak samajh nahi aya to vo apna gyan de hi deti hai aur bar bar deti rehti hai... Par badia laga aur bhai sanjana ki maa ki jo halat dikhai apne.. us reality ko hum feel kar sakte hain.. Mrityu ki antim sach hai.. bilkul sahi baat hai... That was a touching part... aap kahani ko itni barriki aur behtarin tarike se likh rahe ho ki jahan apne jada pyar bhi nahi dikhaya aur fir bhi itne feeling de rahe ho kahani mein ki lalo chapo wali love story ki jarurt hi nahi padh rahi...

Third phase end.. do hi line thi usme lekin jis baat se atharva ne end kiya... vo ek number ka dialog diya bhai.. maza aa gayaa....

Update - 40

Hot choclate.... Tabse mein soch raha tha ki is chapter ka ant kaisa hoga.. Kya chapter ka naam riya walle scene par tha laga tha wahin hoga.. lekin is update ne meri vo confusion dur kar di.. aur ek chiz jo mein kehna chahunga vo ye hai ki Gyani bhai.. aap sun sun kar bore ho gaye hoge lekin mein keh keh kar nahi hua... Aap kahani nahi bana rahe ho.. aap ek feeling de rahe ho humlogon ko aur ye dikha rahe ho ki aap jo sochte ho wahan tak hum kyun nahi soch paate.. Hot choclate is the most common chapter name you have given to any chapter in ur story.. but uske piche jo ek beautiful kahani apne likhi hai na uski feeling bilkul alag hai...

Last time mujhe sanjana par gussa aya ki usne aisa kyun kaha lekin ab laga ki ladki ke man mein kya hai... Atharva is not similar to armaan but he is shit as armaan in love.. Aap kahani mein vo meaning dete ho jo shayad apke har chapter/parts ko perfectly define karta hai.. ki apne ispar likhna chaha... ye samjhana cha aur actually mein wahi likha aur wahi samjha gaya... Bahut muskil hota hai ki jo writer samjhana cha raha ho vo samajh aa jaye.. wo feeling understand karna hi mushkil hota hai isliye kehte hain ki samjhane wale ki galti hoti hai, samjhne wale ki nahi aur apke case mein aap vo kami kabhi chhodte hi nahi...

It is the best end of this chapter aur mein ise jada kuch keh nahi paa raha hu... Apne jis andaaaz mein likha hai.. jo jahan hona chahie apne uska roop badal kar ek alag aur behtar andar de diya jo ki apne aap mein hi bemissaal hai... Mein apki har kahani ko yaad rakhta aya hun.. aur ye kahani mjhe hamesha isliye yaad rahegi kyun ki is kahani mein ek aisi love story hai.. jo sab kuch theek hone ke baad bhi adhuri hai.. I don''t know or can't predict the end but ... ye kahani bhi ab ek jagah le legi life mein... yakeen mano aap.. Mein apne future mein agar bache hue mere to apki 8th semester se lekar Atamkami aur 3 girls of my life jarur padwaunga... Absolutely... amazing bhai...

Update - 41

Garib gang se mujhe laga tha ki kuch ladai hone wali hai.. par asal mein ladai to competition ki nikli jo ki kahani ka ek hot topic ban baitha hai... acha hai school mein aise competition dekhna aur padne mein bada maza ata hai aur apko bolne ki jarurat nahi hai ki aapne use likhna kaise hai... gaaand faad har bar ki tarah Pehle mujhe laga tha ki competition skip karoge aap lekin ab to aisa hype bana diya na bhai apne... ab mujhe pura competition padne ko mile mein to bas yahi chahta hun... Maza aya jis tarah apne shot-cut mein sab samjha diya aur bio wallon ka kissa sunaya vo itna uchal rahe hain bol do bina physics ke bio nahi ho sakti to itna uchale na... kyun ki agar physics nahi hoti to gravity ka pata nahi chalta aur gravity ka pata nahi hota to bio walle karname kaise hote... friction ke bare mein kahan se malum hota Khair principal aur school staff bas izzat ke piche mare rehte hain ye katai sach baat hai... har schul student ke sath hota tha mere sath bhi ho chuka hai..ye nahi kar sakata ise mat lo fir jhantein jala di thi mene sabki Abhi to ranjan pilayega ya nahi pata nahi lekin jo excitment mein lakar apne kahani ko roka is update mein katai.. jo roz padh rahe honge unse intezar kaise hua hoga pata nahi.. mujhse to hota nahi bhai... ultimate bemisaal har baar ki tarah...

Update - 42

Bhai yahan to apne khel hi badal dala...pehle do sawal ka jawab na dene par main samajh gaya ki yahi hona tha lekin baad ke do sawalon ka jawab dene par hila dala re ranjan ne.. don't judge the book by its cover.. ye dialog apne adhe update mein kya satik baithaya hai... Ye teacher logon ko guru kaha jata tha ek waqt par fir ye sab badal gaye.. aaj kal adhe se jada ka yahi haal hai, kuch to ache hote hain hamare tym bhi the par ye bachon ke chattu aur favorite banane walle kaise hote hain apne uch koti ka varnan dete hue hume ye samjha diya... Matlab itna reality de dalte ho aap kahani mein ki sala lagta hi nahi mein kahin padh raha hun aisa lag raha hai mein sala isi skul mein padh raha hun aur meri knowledge mein hi hai ye sb... Apratim se bhi uppar bhai... Bio wali teacher bahut chalu hai.. jaffar kuch pakka deta hai inhe ye salle uske piche pagal hai... aur bhai bilkul na rkhna mini ko aisa attitude lekar zindagi mein itni badi thokar khayegi na ye... Bhai bada hi interesting update tha.... atharva kya kehne wala hai ye apne is update ke akhri mein chhod diya.. par har line ke baad aisa lag rah tha ki sala update nahi likh rahe ho aap.. ek incident likh rahe ho vo bhi ek dum real life se juda.. maza hi aa gaya is update ko padne ke baad... ye wala chapter mujhe lag raha hai aisa hi hai.... bhai.. hatts off to your writing and again kya soch soch kar likhte ho aap... gazab...

Update - 43

Kisi mahan vyakti ne kaha hai ki abhmaan sabse bada hota hai...aur apne ek dum sahi tarah se is rambanndh ka istemal karte hue saxena ji ke dimag mein goal kar diya Lekin mein bazooka ka intezar kar raha tha par vo aya hi nahi... uske pehle mini aa gayi aur jaise apne may i come in ka vishleshad diya na bhai sahi mein hanste hanste baithe baithe lait gaya mein... ahahahaha....



Bhai... gazab... gazab.... Ye best vishleshad tha andar ki permission ko dikhane ka...

Fir uske baad jaffar to side role ka gunda hai.. vo mere ko ek dum third class villian lag raha tha par jab aaj usne atharva ko samjhaya use proof ho gaya... Matlab aapne ye sabit kara hi diya.. ladka indirectly dhamki de rela hai hero ko par bhool gaya hi vo hero nahi hai fir bhi abhi hero hi hai.. to baja dega... Bhai gazab aap kahani ko itne amazing tarike se modte ho idhar se udhar.. matlab har baar excitment si bani rhti hai ki ab kya hoga.. ab kya hoga.. yar ye apki writing hi hai.. jo aisa kar sakti hai... kamal ho bhai.. bemisaal...

Update - 44

Ye school walli intensitty.... aur ladkiun ko lekar gunda-gardi.. ladka ladki ki possivness.. ye sala...drama rehta hai skul mein.. apunich baki side role ki tarah spectator ban kar rehta tha apne tym par lekin bhai apne intensity full on set kar rakhi hai.. ye to mein samajh gaya tha ki vo atharva ke pas lakar hi sanjana ko khada karega par apne intensity aisi banai ki kya ho raha hai ye nahi lag raha.. jaffar chipkata to nahi chanta sanjana ko varna pakkka ladki hath se jati aur vo launda jab tk lega nahi tb tak raipta dega nahi

Par kuch highlights hai is update ke jispar tavzo dena chahunga



Agar koi mujhe aise maths sikhata to maa kasam... sikh hi jata... Bahut hi umda... line thi bhai



Are bhai bhai bhai maa kasam.... hansa hansa kar ye admi kisi din maar dalega mujh jaise halke dil walle insan ko

Bhai dialouge bazzi mein apka koi jawab nahi aur na hi apke aage koi hai aur na aapke piche.. aap itni aage ho ki sala line mein lagne wala abhi tak line wali jagah mein pahuncha hi nahi hai... Always be a legend sir...

Update - 45

Gyani bhai.... Outstanding... Marvellous.. Standing Ovation... for this story.... and specially for this update.. Ye update abhi tak ka ki kahani ka sabse tod update tha.. bhai.. kya nahi tha isme? Sab kuch... chutiape se lekar sanjana ki bevkufi se lekar uski samjhdari sab kuch ek hi set.. mein all done... Bhai mein apki jitni tarif karun utni shayad kam padh jaye... Bhai... Mindblow kar diya apne.. sahi mein.. Kahan se shuru karu aur kahan par khatam karun kuch samajh nahi aaa raha... Jahan sanjana ko ek jhakte mein bevkud dikhaya ki vo gali kha kar bhi jafar ke piche thi jo ladkiyan aksar karti hai aur dusri uski samjhdari jo vo atharva ka plan samajh gayi thi.. matlab sab kuch aisa tha mano pre-planned ho aur fir baad mein kiya dhakama... Mira wala... usne to bhai parkache uda diye dimag ke.. Maths ki goti gottte tod kar honi thi is baat par aisa laga jaise sala ye kya hua ? aisa khatarnak twist mrela apne bhai.. kasam... se Atmkami ke twist ki yaad aa gayi.. sala har time ek banda itne alag style se kaise twist de dala hai aur vo bhi baton baton mein.. na hi koi planning na koi plotting... Bas action... ek jhatke mein.. kaam tamam....

Atharva ne jo planning ki thi vo sirf wahi janta tha aur jis andaz mein apne likha na bhai that shows you are the DECEPTION KING... EK taraf atharva ko pareshan dikhaya ye lage ki ye sab bas flow ka hissa hai lekin baad mein hum sab ko deception ke andhere mein fenk kar gate band kar diya aur khud lage aap nachne... :dance: Bhai ... it was absolute ... world class writing....

Chapter ka naam the garib gang.. start aisi hui ki competiion par hogi aur mei wahi umeed lagaye baitha tha... lekin apne to mere level ko aise toda jise akal ek baar fir ayi ki aapke level tak to soch nahi sakte... trio ka matlab ye climax scene tha jise khud Atharva ne banaya aur ved, ranjan ko involve kar liya, aisa master minded bande ko ved aur ranjan ke idea ki kya jarurat? Kya vo un dono ke sath bhi to deception deception nahi khel raha.... Bhai sach mein is logic ko batane ke liye mere pas shabad kam padh jaye... lekin aapki is kahani mein jhatke kam nahi padh rahe...

Gyani bhai so far the best DECEPTION of this story.. first time apne is kahani mein decieve kiya hai is tarah se hume aur ye akhri nahi hai mujhe malum hai.... Thank you so much for this awesome writing guruji...

Update - 46

Are bhai... bhai.. bhai... bhai.. bhai... isee aage kya bolna hai kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha.. Apki narration bhai top notch hai yaar... sahi mein.. matlab ek line padte hue dusri line mein kya ho jaye yahi chiz koi anuman nahi laga sakta.. Is update mein itne highlight the ki ek ek ko quote bhi nahi kar sakta...

Sabse pehle to vo ganna bhai maan gaye apko.. what a remix you have given to the amazing song.... ek engineeer hi aisa kar sakta hai.. Itna badiya apne tune ke sath lyrics banaya tha na bhai sahi mein mera dil kar raha tha apko khade hokar salute karun... par kiya nahi

Uske baad Ved ki ek aur sad story lekin vo sad nahi thi balki aisa likha na apne sahi mein maza aa gaya... sanajana aur riya ki entry par atharva ka palatna ki vo dukhi hai aur uske baad jab use malum hua ki painting ki baat hai to usne fir ved ko sach bhi bata dia ye choti choti chiz aap hi soch kar likhte ho bas... mene kahin pada hi nahi aisa aur na hi socha hai.. It was marvellous bhai.. matlab aap aisi stories par apne badshaahat hassil kar rakhi hai... maza aa gaya aur end mein jo fansaya aur bich mein jo time travel likh kar sirf ek baat kahi vo to main highlight tha update ka.. ise badia aur behtarin kuch nahi ho sakta aur na hi hoga jo mein ab padh raha hun aisa har baar kehta hun aur ap har baar kuch le atte ho Ab kya karu.. jo padta hu sala lagta hai ise acha kya hoga aap use beat kar dete ho kya kre banda fir kahan jakar sochee...

Awesome se bhi uppar tha bhai... maza aa gayaa....

Update - 47

Ab mein thak gaya hun bhai ek hi baat keh keh kar.. kahan se laun nayi baat :banghead2: Bhai matalab itna satik kaise likh sakteho? Starting se lekar end tak ek dum satik kahin kuch jada nahi kahin kuch kam nahi koi altu faltu ka roz chapata nahi bas satik ek dum sidhi baat aur kya dhoya hai atharva ko...maza aa gaya bhale hi vo ved ki taraf se ho ya fir sanjana ki taraf se... Itna sahi apne ved ki taraf se dialouge dilwaya hai ki pure update ka meaning de diya ki ved ne kyun sath nahi dia... Vo atharva se chahta tha ki choose kare jo ki usne kiya... Ye baat to mujhe pehle se hi malum hai ki atharva chutiya hai aur usne sanjana ke hint nahi samjhe islye vo jafar ke pass gayi aur abhi tak atharva nahi samajh paya khair uski galti nahi us tym koi nahi samjhta until unless ladki khud se na bole aur ladki khud se kaha bolti hai ye to fact hai

Gyani bhai it was purely a gold of a update... matlab maza aa gaya.. mere pas samay kam hai lekin ruka nahi jaa raha aur yahan tak padh baitha kyun ki ek ke baad ek aise update aa rahe hain jo chhodne ka man nahi kar rah.... na jane kaise... kaise real time par log wait kr gaye sala mujhse to hota hi nahi... thodi khushi bhi hai is baat ki ek sath padne ko mil raha hai Par bhai... sach mein aapne to kamal hi kar diya is kahani mein... 8 semester ke baad agar skul/college life ke uppar koi kahani likhi gayi ya yaad rakhi jayegi to wo yahi hogi.. kyun ki iske aas pass bhi is genre mein koi kahani nahi hai ... a legend is writing legendary story aagin

Update - 48

Shoorveer Gyani bhaii boooyeahhh wala moment gazab ka tha. Pehle chidana aur uske baad riya ka same usi tarah se karna.. Matlab sab kuch bada natural tha.. aur hasne wala scene padh kar ais laga jaise hamare sath bhi reality mein bhi hua tha.. isliye... maza doguna ho gaya... Is update mein jada kuch kehne ko nahi kyun ki ye build up update tha do chizon ka ek ... competition dusra riya ke uppar atharva ka chatta pyar... ab to aage dekhna hai ki shoorveer ko dhakne ke baad kya hota hai agle update mein... Gazab gyani bhai.. fully reality touch hai kahani mein...

Update - 49

Matlab end tak atte atte atharva ne pure scene ki gaand mein baal daal diye bhai... Bich bich mein jo apne punches dale vo to awesome the. Yani short mein kahun to purre update mein kahani padte hue ek smile thi chehre par... ye jo school life ki sasti wali nok jhok hoti hai na.. sasti isliye kyun ki paise nahi hote... to usme apna hi anand hta tha.. aaj hazaron khrch kar lo to bhi sukun nahi, man ko shanti nahi milti... par jis tarah se apne dialog aur explanation di hai.. fir decieve kiya hai.. jo aap puri kahani mein karte aa rahe ho... mujhe ab aisa surity hone lagi hai kyun ki har jagah deiceve kar de raha hai atharva ... hum padne walo ko bhi.. Death note yaad aa jati hai.. jab vo banda decieve par decieve karta raha tha... Bahut baddia... update tha bhai.. Riya ka character bahut hi umda likha hai apne. Aksar khubsurat ladkiyun ki kahaniya alag hoti hai.. par aisi simplicity koi likh nahi pata... with attitude.... bahut khub gyani bhai.. bahut khub...

Update - 50

OOoo bhaiii.... kya update thaa ma kasamm... laugh: Starting mein riya se indirectly uske... dikhane ki mang aur fir... gaal khinchne wala... Bhai gazab ka scene create karte ho aur gazab ka atharva ko funny dikhaya hai... matlab ki gazab ka funny dikhaya hai... aur baad mein jo Apsara ki kahani jodi hai aur ved ke sath jo bhi discussion hua.. ma kasam hansi na ruki...



Bhai.. kya likha tha ye... sahi mein hans hans kar ankh se pani nikal gaya Bhai.. sometimes samajh nahi ata ki ved jada funny hai ya atharva... sala... ek number tha bhai half century wala update..Chhuhiya gaon.. bc... kya naam hai... Apsara wali kahani to ek number thi Mere ko bas soch soch kar update ki hansi hi aa rahi hai Ek number ka update tha gyani bhai

Update - 51

Bhai kahan se latte ho i mean kahan se... :rofflol: Galiyan banane walle insan aap hi to nahi the jinhone purv samajh mein janam lekar galiyun ka nirman kiya

Is update mein pehli baar hua ki kahani present se past aur wapis present mein ayi aur traffic mein fnsi reh gayi.. katai bura lagta hai aisa traffic par kher.. aisa pehli baar hua jisme traffic ke bare mein batate hue atharva ne riya ki painting ke bare mein bata dia ab ranjan sanjana ko bata dega aur khallas dono ki painting ek jaisi.. atharva gaya yaha? aisa mjhe lagta hai kyun ki past mein bas yahi scene aya tha to iske hone ke pure chanace hai.. uske baad bhai jo scooty wali ladki ke sath hua... waise hona to nahi chahie in rel life lekin padh kar hansi nahi ruki... ma kasam.. itni badmash.. launde vo bhi is tarah chedne wale kam hi milte hai... itna bakhubi likhela hai apne ki mein kya hi bataun.. maza aa gaya bhai.... ek behatrin update tha.. aur ek bathrin end tha... is chapter ka...

Update - 52

I feel sad for Riya.. If she is real... or what atharva is thinking... is all real.. than i feel bad for riya.. vo ek bichari side line mein ban kar reh jayegi... she is started liking atharva par hum laundo ko to bas apna josh dikhta hai Behatrin update tha.. bhai.. apne kewal atharva ko hi nahi balki hume bhi vo feel karaya jo sanjana, atharva aur riya feel kar rahe the.. ek taraf sanjana ke liye bura dusra atharva ki confusion aur tisri taraf riya... Itne satik realistic emotions diye hai na apne jo meko feel kara diya... bahut hi umda update tha... a mixture of feeling se bhara ....

Update - 53

I am still in doubt... ye sala karan naik ki dikatwa kya hai.. uski sali jo marzi kare.. kahin sala vo apni sali ko adhi ghar wali to nahi banana cha raha Ho sakta hai bilkul ho sakta hai... Sanjana ki maa ka ilaz kara raha hai vo samajh ata hai par uske badle sanjana par itne julam? to apni biwi par kitna karta hoga.. bechari vo sexy kapdon mein school bhi nahi aa sakti.. Par bhai jo aap school life likh rahe ho ek gazab likh rahe ho... matlab mein wahin hu usi skul mein.. bas mil nahi sakta kisi se... kash aisi koi machine hoti jo fantasy mein bhi ghusa de sakti thi hume.. maza aa jata.. Kya kya soch leta hun mein bhi.. Par kahani ki main baat... ye atharva ne ek dum shai kiya tha jaffar ka naam dekar uski thukai karane wala... par ab sanjana ko nahi malum chalna chahie ab uski tayari dekhte hai kaise kiye ho.. Aur iske alawa ek chiz aaur.. jo mujhe yahan achi nahi lagi.. chochlate kyun chinni bhai... ladkiyun ke maal par hath daal lo par unki chochlate par nahi.. atharva ko iski sza jarur milegi bhai..

GAzab aparatim likh rahe ho gyani bhai aap... pata nahi kahani kahan jaa rahi hai kyun jaa rahi hai... ky hoga... aage.. kuch nahi malum.. par past mein bahut kuch hona baki hai jisme dard feel hoga i am sure of it.. atharva bhool gaya hai.. par aap hume nahi bhoolne doge... Esha wala kissa aaj bhi yaad hai meko.. sala bada ajeeb lagta ha.. Aage padta hun... bhai

Update - 54

main tum logon jaisa nahi.. Atharva Dev hu.. sometimes.. is insan se bhi ARMAAN jaisi hi feeling ati hi apun ko... launda wahi banta jaa raha hai.. bas thoda naram hai.. ladkiyu ke mamle mein.. warna sanjana ki bezati kar chuka hota.. ya riya ki.. ke na ek ki to bezatti ho hi jatti... sorry bolte hi khel khallas ho gaya tha.. ladka to pehle decieve karne gaya tha. sanjana ne fir bhi pakad liya.. akhir aisi galti kaise kar gaya launda apna... ab sanjana ka karegi re iska... bada hi jhol wala aur emotional wala update tha.... sanjana ki pareshani uske pyar ko darsha rhi thi lekin kya jafar sahi hai itna pyar karne layak hai? ladkiyun ko akal hi nahi ayegi kabhi is bare mein Bahut sahi ek dum true feeling chaap rele ho gyani bhai aap... matlab ladkiyun ko is tarah likhna apne aap men difficult hai apne to harkatein bhi unki usi tarah utar di.. chote-chote expression tak unke bilkul waisich hi utare hai apne... tussi great ho pajji....

Update - 55

bhaiii do shock the.. pehla apka past future wala scenario maa kasam uppar se nikal gaya.. do baar pada aur sochne samjhne ki kosish karne laga ki akhir ye kehna kya chahte hai.. fir mene aur dimag lagaya aur tab samajh aya ki jane do aage samajh aya to aya warna... jitna aya use kaam chala lenge vaise bhi bahut kuch hai sochne ko is kahani mei dusra shock apun ko tab laga jab karun naik ko yun hi chhod diya gaya.. i mean bina kisi tal mol gali galoz.... i mean what the phackk... ise badla lena banta hai bhai.. ye jabaran side villan ban rela hai... bina matlab ke.. role bhi nahi hai itna to iska acha jitna ye ban raha hai FIr mene socha chalo isi bahane iska sanjana se karar kuch kam hoga aur fir apne agli 3 line mein ye sabit kar diya.. sanjana ko uda hi dala bhale hi ignore kar dala lekin apunich ko malum hai sanjana hi true lob hai aur uski wajah se apna hero riya ka dil todega.. aur riya bechari ... sanjana bhi na milegi aur riya bhi.. Ved ki baat sunni chahie re.. bilkul sunni chahie thi... Atharva pachateyega... khair uske baad apne riya ki entry ki aur choclate wala scene dikha kar ye dikha diya lattu dono jagah ghum raha hai.. Matlab bhai world class writing ka silsila chal raha hai is baar.... Mixed with all the feelings.. a best melo drama ho raha hai idhar.. uske uppar se apke likhne ka istyle vo to laa mein jawab hi alag hai... Gyani bhai jis tarah se aap is baar kahani ko likh rahe ho i think ye abhi tak ki first hai apki jahan apne romance plus bakchodi ka itna behtarin namuna pesh kiya hai.. varna apka romance to ESHA jaisa hota hai Gazab.. maza dila dia.. one more to go

Update - 56

Mere pas no words... Riya and atharva... park ka scene.. hasti riya... confused atharva... aur sanjana ka jikr jo usne khud se kaha ki sanjana hoti to samajh jati.. khalas.. khel khatam tata babye. Riya ka chapter to athrva ne wahin khatam kar dia... and i was like ok.... riya gayi to sanjana kaise ayegi.. ye doubt ranjan se clear karwa diya apne... matlab uski khushi dekh kar mujhe samajh jana chahie tha lekin jab tak apne likha nahi yakeen nahi hua.. ab ranjan aur atharva ke bich kuch na ho jaye? ho sakta hai shayad.... shayad nahi.. shayad karan naik ko peetne ke liye ranjan aage aa jaye... Anything is paasible in ur istory bhai... main to bas itna hi kahunga ki jis taraike se aap kahani ko aage badha rahe ho.. use laga hi nahi ki kahani 56 update tak pahunch chuki hai... and still where we are riya, sanjana atharva kya hoga teeno ke bich hume ye nahi mila and still i am feeling... like ... kya likh raha hai bhai.. matlab dil khush ho jata hai.. samajh nahi ata ki har update ke baad kya likhun? Kya bolu ki yaar is update ke andar ye chiz behad khas thi.. ye chiz behad umda tha.... kya likh rahe ho bhai.. kahani ko ek dum mast romantic suspense mein bana kar chhod diya hai apne...

Abhi tak mujhe lag raha tha kahani mein wahich romance ka the end hga.. lekin main ye ab manne ko tayar hi nahi hu ki koi simple the end hga.. mujhe lagta hai... ye kahani ka the end bada hi khatarnak hone wala hai... Bhai.. gazab... gyani bhai gazab...


Thats the reply textbook i have maintained.. Aage ki kahani ka alag se bana kar chapega...

ये रिवर्स कैसे हो गया हरिया भाई ! बाद वाले अपडेट्स का रेभो पहले और पहले वाले का बाद में ।

 

[Naina]

ये रिवर्स कैसे हो गया हरिया भाई ! बाद वाले अपडेट्स का रेभो पहले और पहले वाले का बाद में ।

I blame behaya shruti

 

[harshit1890]

ये रिवर्स कैसे हो गया हरिया भाई ! बाद वाले अपडेट्स का रेभो पहले और पहले वाले का बाद में ।

Mene abhi tak 56 ka padehla na Vo jabse kahani padne baitha tha dubara 29 se to reply dene mein dikat ho rahi thi har update ke baad to document bana dia fir rakh kar chep diya

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Hhaaa ab ye avengers Endgame ki tarah time travel bhi karega par vapas present me aa payega ya nhi

Ahuhh ahuhh ab to eski halat par rona aa rha hai apni safai khud hi pesh kar rha muje lagta hai jo ye sawal apne aaap se puch rha hai agar yhi swal ved se puch to ....haa kya jo Esme buraiyan nhi hai vo bhi btA dega

Pehli bar eske muhh se sach jan kar dil khush ho gya par es line me ye sayad word koi match nhi kar rha ese hta dena chahiye

Dikh di apni chutiyapanti. Abe lounde jab jyada piyega to mutash to lagegi hi na par ye bhi kya kre ....koi bhi chahkar bhi control nhi kar sakta esi

Ease jahir hota hai ki en dono ka flashback kitna bhayankar hoga ab ved ka dimag eske sar .me nhi balki eske l...d me hai tharki khi ka ..vaise ek bat manani padgie bande me knowledge kut kut ke bhra hai
Dono two in one hai

Bas yhi baki reh gya tha ...par planning ke mamle me bhai eska koi jawab nhi ek dum chindi planning karta hi me to eska fan.....na na. Ganta fan hu es backlol ka pancho Update me dimag kadhi karke rakh diya

Niv ne bas eske pichhade me bas ek lat hi mari thi par muje lagta hai ye eska pochvada hi saf kardehi ......par par eska pochvada to present me moujud hai to fir ye kya karegi lats see

Bs esi ki ummid kar raha tha vaise kuch jyada hi piche chle gye ho

Hhaà bhai ye jyada nhi bahut jyada ho gya jaisi enki filhall office me post hai to muje lagta hai ki ye study .me kitne intelligent the ajeeb to bhai lag hi rha hhaaa jhantu khi ke

Kyo ki tumne hi bataa ki tumhere es sanskar velly me bla ki khubsurat rajkumariyan hai hhaà

Jai bhai tumhari lila aparmpar hai najro se to pehle hi gira hua tha ab vastav me bhi girega bhag bhosdike

Mahan gyani ladka ab lag raha hai ki bande me kitna gyan bhra hua hai hairstyles pe hi etni achi pratikriya di to fir baki ka soch soch kar pura sharir jhanjhana rha hai vaise kya ye dono science stream ke bande hai kya

Agar aise dost ho to dushman ki kya jarurat hai vaise kya phylosohy jhadi hai atharva ne ved jaise chutiye ko or chutiya bna diya

Vaise ye bar bar mal mal bol rahe hai khi ye heroin drugs coakin ganja vagerha ka estemal to nhi karte na

Bhai bs kar yar has has kar mera l..d dard karne laga hai madarchod gand khoon ke anshu ro rhi hai
Vaise nhi patana chahiye thaa to kyo us bechare ki lene ke tula hua tha

Girega muh ke bal girega age ke charo dant tutenge Fir aisa dikhega

Esse bda harami mene aaj tak nhi dekha par eski planning ka to me kayal ho gya aise to ye alia bhatt ko bhi line me l sakta hai

Very nice. This is sports man spirit.

 

[Naina]

Mene abhi tak 56 ka padehla na Vo jabse kahani padne baitha tha dubara 29 se to reply dene mein dikat ho rahi thi har update ke baad to document bana dia fir rakh kar chep diya

I blame behaya megha

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Tomorrow is not promised us so let us take today and make the most of it.
बिति बातों को याद करके क्यों रोना ! और आने वाला कल क्या ले कर आएगा , कौन जानता है ! इसलिए क्यों न हम वर्तमान को ही खूबसूरत बनाएं ।
रंजन अपने छोटी सी उम्र में बहुत कुछ देख चुका है । दुःख सुख , अपमान , लोगों की तिरस्कृत नजरें बहुत कुछ सहा है उसने । ऐसे में उससे अथर्व को कुछ सीख मिले तो अच्छी ही बात है न !

दो साल बाद दोनों अपने होम टाउन रीवा जा रहे हैं । उनकी फिलिंग को वो अच्छे से समझ सकता है जो लम्बे अंतराल के बाद अपने घर गया हो । बहुत कुछ बदला बदला सा महसूस होता है । पुरानी यादें भावुक कर देती है । परिवारों से मिलना , स्कूल कालेज के प्राचार्य और दोस्तों से मिलना , उन गलियों और सड़कों से गुजरना जिन पर गुजरे हुए सालों बीत गए हों , पड़ोसियों से मिलना , भुली बिसरी यादों को याद करना सब कुछ , सब कुछ इमोशनल कर देता है ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट ज्ञानी भाई ।