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Romance >>> Too Young !! Too Old (Completed) <<<

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Naina said:
Be it a simple routine or a simple or big incident in the story, nain11ster saheb enlivens it with the magic of his pen... He makes it so captivating and entertaining that even ordinary things become really extraordinary. ..

ahem.. ahem.. Haan to kuch baatacheet ho jaaye in kirdaaro ke sath...
1) khud ka ghar sambhala nahi gaya aur som chala dusro ke 48 ghar bachane :laugh: jao jaake pehle sadhna puchho ki wo kahe is tarah se gul khilati rahti hai :D

2) dusre ka ghar basane ke chakkar mein vyas aur asif ko bhi ghasit liya....
lekin iski andar chupi wo raaz ki baat kuch aur hi thi..kuch bhi karke by hook or crook vyas ko amir banana tha. . vyas ko amir banane ka ye maqsad, ye planning kyun? Kyunki Kal ko vyas aur sia ke rishte ko lekar sawal uthane ki naubat hi naa aaye.... wah kya chaal chali hai usne. taaki Naina baar baar wo sawal dohraye hi na... Lekin ye som ki galat dhaarana hai.... sawal to roj uthenge, har pal, har lamha uthenge.... just wait & watch..

3) har update mein kirdaar bach ek hi baat baar baar ratta maare.... iski shaadi usse karwao... uski Shaadi isse karwao.. kyun sir, kyun maidam, Desh ki abadi Kam thi kya jo aur badhani hai...

4)are re re... bekar baithe hai na dono asif aur vyas, isliye ye kaam karo itna paisa milega, wo kaam karo utna paisa milega.... mbbs aur study gayi tel lene :D
Kyun som sir yahi soch hai na ju ki....
Btw na koi rishtedaar ho ya na koi khas jaan pehchan wale.... to Kis aadhar par is tone mein, is tarike se order de rahe the un dono ko... kharidha hua bandhua mazdoor hai kya tera... jo is lehje se hukum chala rahe the :mad2:... . aainda agar is tarah se bhool kar bhi vyas ko order diya,,,, to kajal ka to pata nahi lekin Haan som tere sath kya hoga ye shayad writer sahab bhi na jaane....
door reh vyas aur uski family se, uske dosto se :mad2: usime teri bhalayi hai.. samajhe.. :mad:
warna game over dear som sir... :D

5) aur Lata Mishra... ek baat clear karna zara... tum logo ko dusro ke family matter mein ghusne ka itna shauk kahe hai... khud ka ghar aur family sambhalo na... kahe dusro ke privacy mein dhakhal dene jaate ho tum log.... door raho vyas aur usse jude har ek insaan se :mad:
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Aate hai hum writer sahab ki lekhni aur sameeksha ki taraf... :love:

Kehte hai khushi ke pal kuch der ke liye hote hai... aur dukh, Dard, pareshani ek baar aaye to jaise jaane ka naam hi nahi lete.......
jindagi ke har ek mod mein kayi aise lamhe aur pal aate hai.... ab ye aap par hai ki un khushi ke palon ko Kis tarah se enjoy kare..... aur un dukh dard pareshani se ghire un lamho mein kaise haalaton ka saamna kare....
jawab writer sahab ne bahot hi khubsurat tarike se de diya hai.....Jaise Khushi ke palon ko apno ke sath aur dosto ke sath milke bitana chahiye... kyunki isse khushi ghat ti nahi balki badhti hai.. aaj asif khush hai... lekin kya akele itna khush ho pata... jitni khushi Sabhi pariwar walo aur dosto ke sath mil rahi hai...
thik Waise hi dukh dard pareshani ke un lamhon mein bhi apno ke sath, apne sachhe dosto ke sath apne dukh dard ko baatna chahiye... chal rahe haalaton ko ke baare mein bhi vyakt karna chahiye... kyunki un lamho mein yahi log himmat denge un dukh aur dard se bahar nikalne mein.... aur sath hi sathik aur uttam salah bhi denge, jisse ki aise haalaton mein sahi faisla lene mein aasani ho... Sia apni maa ko yaad kar rahi thi... lekin ek aur maa uski paas hi to baithi thi.. isliye wo apni mom ke khayalo mein khoke zyada dukhi nahi ho rahi thi,, coz uski lata maa hai ushe laad pyar karne, uske chhoti chhoti khwahison ko puri karne, ushe sahara aur himmat dene, aur sabse badi baat unki gaud mein sar rakh saare gham bhoolne ke liye..
well..... in saari baaton ko prastut karne ka tarika, baatacheet ka hissa sab kuch bahot hi sundar tarike se pesh kiya gaya hai... kirdaaro ke bhavanao ke adhar par, unke kiye gaye vicharo aur karya ke aadhar par update ke hisson ko jis tarah se vargikit kiya hai wo padhne mein baakeyi adbhut aur dilchasp the.... khaskar ahmiyat dena aur understanding....
Everything was superb. Flow, Narration, Presentation.

Let's see.. what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
Meera purahit bhere r ju... ek dum se gayab se gayab ho gayi kahani se :peep:
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Ye itne sare khatarnak point the 1 to 4 ki mujhe Ram Lakahn movie ka 1,2 ka 4 aur 4, 2 ka 1 song yaad aane laga ... Aur shayad comment me bhi aate kirdaron ke sath naina maidam 1,2 ka 4 hi kar rahi thi... Kisi ko vishwas na ho to comment padh le...

Well thanks q lot for your so lovely apprised... Padh kar achha laga... Thankoooo soo much...
 
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welcome back sir
aur aate hi aapne kya shaandar update de hai
iss update me to som sir bahut se logo ke liye khushiyon ki saugat laye hai jaise 48 pariwaro ko unki jamin wapas dilana aur asif ke gahr ka renovation karwana
aur sabse badi khushi to som sir ne asif ko de di asif aur aqsa ke nikah ki baat chalakar
aab lagta hai jald hi story me shadi ka seen banne wala hai
lekin jaise har shadi me koi na koi roda lagane wala aata hai vaise hi iss story me bhi lagta hai
lekin yaha roda lagane wala koi aur nahi lagta hai aqsa ke abbu hi aisa karne wale hai apne bete danish ki shadi ki baat jannat se chalakar
khair aisa na ho iski jimme dari to vyas ne le hi li hai
jannat aur nirali ke dm banne ke sapno ko bhi lagta hai kai aankhe sanjoye baithi hai. haa aisa hota bhi sapne to aapke hi hote hai par unke poore hone me kai logo ka hath hota hai.
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ab aate hai sia aur vyas ke matter par
chalo kisi ko to pata chala ki sia aur vyas ek dusre se pyar karte hai
sia ka logic bhi acha tha vyas ko hi chunne ka aur yaha par bhai aur bahan ke atut riste ko dikhaya gaya hai
vaise bhi sia aur som to ek hi hai
update ke last me sia lata mishra se kuch puchne wali thi wo pata na lag saka
khair der sawer pata lag hi jana hai
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waiting for next sir
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Ji thankoooo sooo much miss nitya... By the way Nitya Menon is one of my favourite actress in South... Uske curli baal deewana bana de...

Thanks a lot for your beautiful revooo ... Der sawer sabhi kinare lag hi Jane hai.... Hum to bus kuchh logon ke journey ke saakshi banege... Hope u r enjoying the story and storyline....

Aur Sia ka sawal koi toofani nahi tha bus jaise hum casully apne maa ka sar khate hain bus Sia bhi wahi kar rahi thi...

Thanks again milte hain next update ke baad
 
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nain11ster said:
Ye itne sare khatarnak point the 1 to 4 ki mujhe Ram Lakahn movie ka 1,2 ka 4 aur 4, 2 ka 1 song yaad aane laga ... Aur shayad comment me bhi aate kirdaron ke sath naina maidam 1,2 ka 4 hi kar rahi thi... Kisi ko vishwas na ho to comment padh le...

Well thanks q lot for your so lovely apprised... Padh kar achha laga... Thankoooo soo much...
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Baaki ke revos pe reply kaha hai :bat:
rg ko bulau kya :bat:
 
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Ji thankoooo sooo much miss nitya... By the way Nitya Menon is one of my favourite actress in South... Uske curli baal deewana bana de...

Thanks a lot for your beautiful revooo ... Der sawer sabhi kinare lag hi Jane hai.... Hum to bus kuchh logon ke journey ke saakshi banege... Hope u r enjoying the story and storyline....

Aur Sia ka sawal koi toofani nahi tha bus jaise hum casully apne maa ka sar khate hain bus Sia bhi wahi kar rahi thi...

Thanks again milte hain next update ke baad
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acha laga sir jankar ki aapko mere revoo ache lage
thanks a lot
 
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