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Romance >>> Too Young !! Too Old (Completed) <<<
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Update:-2
Subah ka waqt Nirbhay ka zym se shuru hota tha. Jab wah niche ke zym area me pahuncha tab wahan par bikhre saman ko dekh kar chillane laga. Ek home survent champa bhagti hui wahan pahunchi.
"Kya hua malik"
"Champa yahan kaun aaya tha"
"Wahi mehmaan jo kal raat aayi hain"
Nirbhay ek pal khamosh raha. Pahle charo ore ka jayja liya fir ghadi dekha. Subah ke 8 baj rahe the…. "Kitne baje aayi thi"
"Pata nahi malik, lekin 5.30 baje wo zym se nikal rahi thi"
"Hmmm !! Zym ke baad apne kamre me gayi kya"…
Dono baat kar hi rahe the, unhe pooja ghar se ghanti ki awaj sunai dene lagi. Abhay thodi hairan tha…. "Champa, Sia ke liye kuchh paka do, lagta hai uske din ki shoorwaat subah 4 baje ya uss se pahle ho jati hai"… Champa haan me sar hilati hui nikli.
Takriban 10 baje Nirbhay breakfast ke table par aaya tab pata chal ki Sia khud ke liye breakfast bana chuki thi. Pooja karne ke baad wo kha kar nikal gayi.
Raat ke 9 baje Sia hall me baith kar news dekh rahi thi. Nirbhay kaam se wapas laut raha tha. Sia ke samne baitha... "So how was the day"
"Briten se lauti hun iska ye matlab nahi ki Britisher ho gayi chachu"..
Nirbhay thoda hairani se dekhne laga. Sia tv ke sound kam karti... "Itne hairan kyon ho rahe. Main sochi ki aap ko ek naam se hi to pookarna hai. Aap ke hisab se hi pookar leti hun."
"Tum vicitr ho Sia"
"Nahi vichitr bilkul bhi nahi hun. Kewal log andaza hi galat laga lete hain. Isliye mai kisi se milne ke baad koi rai nahi banati, jab tak ki wo samjh me na aa jaye"
"Apna poora anubhav mujh par hi aajma rahi ho"
"Chhodiye isse. Meri jigyasa to iss waqt ye hai ki aap mere yahan rahne ke liye raaji kaise ho gaye. Som se to aapki dushmani hai na"
"Mujhe chachu aur apne.…"
Sia bich me hi Nirbhay ko rokti... "Humare bich wah rishta nahi jo aap banane ja rahe. Chhod dijiye usse"
"Ab isme vichitr nahi kahun to kya kahun. Khair haan Purusom se dushmani hai lekin jaise tum mujhe abhi vichitr lag rahi ho thik waisa hi hum dono ke bich ka rishta bhi hai. Isliye chhodo tum bhi explore mat karo"
"Thik hai chhod diya. Waise usse Purusom pukar rahe, sun leta to muh tod deta."
"Waqt-waqt ki baat hai. Lucknow kaisa laga"
"Sahar pasand aaya. Chakachaundh sahrikaran ke sath apne itihas ko samete. Chachu aapko aapatti na ho to maine apne liye ek cottage chun liya hai. Main wahin rahungi"
"Thik hai, tum Naresh ko bol dena, wo saaf safai ke sath sara kaam dekh lega. Chalo abhi dinner karte hain"…
"Ek shart par, main paying guest ke taur par rahungi aur mujhe kiraye me kuchh discount bhi chahiye"…
"Ab ye kya hai?"
"Apne-apne ethics"
"Haan to kuch ethics mere bhi hain. Main paise to nahi le sakta badle me tumhe kuchh karna ho to kar lena"
"Thik hai ye bhi sahi hai, chaliye khana khate hain"…
Dono khane ke table par the. Nirbhay ke liye champa khana serve kar rahi thi. Sia apna khana khud le rahi thi, upar se dono ke dishes alag-alag.
"Sia ye tum Som ke khane ki dishes kyon kha rahi ho. Yahan coock hai. Tumhe ye bhigoye chane aur mungfali dinner me lene ki jaroorat nahi hai"…. Ek vichitr sa khana jisme kewal chana, mung, kuchh mungfali, pista aur bhi kayi sare grains, kuchh dry fruits, thoda green salad aur dudh. Dobara se yah khana dekh'kar Nirbhay bole bina rah nahi paya..
"Kya karen shayad dono ko hi aise Khane ki aadat hai jo shayad jane wali nahi".
"Hmmm !!! Dono ek dusre ki parchhayi hi lagte ho. Ek dum vichitr. Kahan hai wo aaj kal"..
"Mujh se jyada to aapko pata hona chahiye ki kahan hoga"…
Nirbhay kahin gum hote.… "Pata nahi kahan hoga"
Scotland of India, Shilong ka sudoor ilaka. Mansoon ke mausam me yahan aane wale sailaniyon ki koi kami nahi rahti hai. Yah sunder si saji dharti jaise dulhan ho aur barshat uska sringaar... Yahan ki prakritik saundrya ka varnan mahaj chand shabdon me hona muskil.
Raat ka waqt aur sudoor jungle ka ilaaka tha. Barshat lagaatar ho rahi thi. Pass me hi bade se waterfall me pani girne ki awaj wahan ke khamosh vatavaran me gunj rahi thi. 4-5 rangers upar plastic baandh'kar badi si chhat banaye huye the. Niche aag jal rahi thi.
Thand badhi hui thi. Sabhi apne garam over coat me aag ke karib baithe huye the. Us jagah par bahut sare hi-fi aur kafi paise wale log bhi dikh rahe the. Charo ore poori raushni aur aag ka intazam kiya gaya tha.
Sabhi hi-fi log Mumbai ke kuchh businessman the. Underworld mafia wala look. Black overcoat, hat, sacaff, tim-tam aur duniya jahan ke tarah-tarah ke sajjo saman se kisi rutva wala hasti dikhane ki kosis kar rahe the. Aise har rutve wale log ki gode me ya pass me ek hot si ladki ya aurat thi. Unke chair ke thik pichhe, 2-3 trained ladke, apne full bodyguard look aur dress me mustaidi se khade the.
Un unche collor wale logon me se ek sabse uncha collar wala aadmi tha Sethi. Wahan ke sabhi rutve wale ussi ko sun rahe the aur sari baten ussi ke hisab se ho rahi thi. Uske gode me baith'kar ek kamsin ladki, uss adher se lagbhag 50-52 varshiya aadmi ko ek hath se mota cigaar to dusre hath se jaam pila rahi thi. Bich-bich me apne najuk honth ke sahad bhi chakha deti...
Uss aadmi ke dono hath itne sust the ki baar-baar niche chair ke hand rest par chale jate. Uske pados me ek sexy aurat baithi thi jiske chehre par hi likha tha... "Aaahhhh !!! Kab nichodoge"… Thand me apni bhadakte arman ko aur bhadkane ke liye, uss sabse unche collar wale aadmi ke sust hath ko utha'kar baar-baar apne aur use kamsin ladki ke sine par rakh'kar, uske hath ke upar apna hath dale dono ke stano ko dabva rahi thi...
Swag hote hain in bade-bade high-collor wale logon ke. Inko khud kuchh nahi karna padta hai. Khair, wo sabse high collor wala aadmi ne wahan baithe sarkari adhikariyon ke ore dekhte.… "Sogarappam kahan hai tumhara fighter. Usse sab bata to diya hai na"
Sograpaam un rangers ka boss, chilam ka ek lamba kas khinch bhi raha tha aur galfaron ke kinare se halka-halka dhuwan bhi nikal raha tha. Ek poora kas khincha. Aankhen uski laag aur madhosh si dikh rahi thi. Chehra thoda khincha sa lekin utna hi sukoon bhi...
Sogarappam:- Sethi ji apna fighter ayega lekin aap kise ladane wale ho, usse to bualao. Wo raat ke thik 12.30 baje pahunch jayega...
Sethi:- Usse call lagao...
Sograppam:- Sorry Sethi ji wo apne pass koi phone nahi rakhta. Kahta hai phone hack ho jata hai. Uski detail sabke pass hogi...
Sethi, thoda jigasavash.… "Karta kya hai tumhara ye fighter"….
Sogarappam:- Som naam hai uska sir. Usse Lancer kahte hain hum sab. Thoda mental hai aur kuch nahi karta hai Sethi ji.. Bus aaj yahan hai kal kahan ho kise pata...
Sethi:- Fir tumhe uske bare me kaise pata…
Sograppam:- Mansoon me dikh jata hai. Humare sath baithak lagata hai. Jab tak rahta hai apna bankar rahta hai aur jab gayab hota hai fir pata nahi pichhe chhodta... Na hi humne kabhi dhundha hai..
Sethi:- Kamal ka introduction hai, mere liye kaam karega kya???
Sograppam:- Freelancer hai, kaam samjh me aana chahiye kar dega.
Dono baat kar hi rahe the issi bich halki si aahat se ranger sachet huye aur turant apne weapons le'kar aahat ki disha me tainat. Sograppam apne sabhi sathi ko relax kahte huye Sethi ko ghadi dekhne kaha...
Thik 12.30 baje andheron se nikal kar uss raushni me uska chehra najar aaya... Som
Jataon wali baal, jiski kuchh ladiyan wahan ke shrad hawaon me lahra rahe the. Shant sa chehra aur bilkul nashili aankhen. Dekh kar hi mehsus ho jaye ki iska chehra kuchh kahta hai. Aakarshak chehra jo najar khinch le...
Som ko dekh kar wahan ka mahol kuchh palon ke liye khamosh ho gaya. Uski najar wahan ke poore mahol ka jayja le rahi thi. Aa'kar wo Sograppam ke karib baitha aur uske hath ka chilam le'kar poora dum bhadne laga...
Aankhen munde bilkul kho kar chilam khinchne me laga hua tha. Som jab chilam khinchna shuru kiya tab ruka hi nahi. Sethi ke sath baki sab apni aankhen badi kiye huye the…. "Khinch ye raha hai, dum mera ghutne laga"… Sethi apni ukhdi shwans se kaha.. Shayad Sethi kuchh jayad hi feel kar gaya tha khinchna.
Lekin Som yahan bhi kahan rukne wala tha. Wo to khinchta hi chala gaya. Jab usne chilam Sograppam ke ore badhayi, uske chehre ke upar charo ore dhuwan hi dhuwan tha. Ussi dhuwen ke bich se gambhir aur robdar aawaj aayi... "Sograppam kafi lambi party ko bitha rakha hai. Batao kis kaam ke liye sandesh chhoda tha"
Sograppam:- Ek fight karni hai...
Som hathon ke ishare se maal ke bare me puchhne laga. Sograppam ishare samjhte… "Dono fighters Sethi ji ke hi honge. Tum dono ko ladna hai, aur uss se haarna hai"… Som ne ek baar fir ishare me maal ke bare me puchha.…. Sograppam, Sethi ke ore dekhne laga.… "1 lakh rupya"
Sethi kee baat sun'kar Som wahan se uth gaya. Sograppam uska hath pakar kar niche bithya.… "Lencer kya hua deal pasand nahi aaya kya???"
Som ne koi jawab nahi diya. Sograppam ne ek baar fir Sethi ke ore dekha.… "2 lakh". Sethi ne bhav dugna kiya idhar se Som ki awaj aayi 25 lakh.
Sethi:- Pagal hai kya 25 lakh. Itne me to John Cena aur Roman Reigns haar jaye.
Som, uski baat sunkar kuchh nahi bola. Chup chap aaram se baitha. Pados se ek khali thali khiskaya. Apne pichhe tange bag se chilam nikal kar, plate me masala daal kar chilam banane laga...
Sethi ke baki sathi pak se gaye the… Kuchh kuchh aawajen unke aapas ke baat karne ki aane lagi. Fight to karwani hi thi, bus fighter badal diya gaya tha. Darasal Sethi ko apne bete ke profile ke liye ek fight organise karni thi…
Underground fighting, jiska promo Sethi ka beta kar aaya tha. Sethi ka ladka Amardeep Sethi urf "The Royal Sethi" yahan sirf aur sirf underground fighting ki live video banane aaya tha. 2 lakh wala bahar ka fighter nakki nahi hua. Sethi ne anth me apne hi bodyguard ko taiyar kiya. Pahle apne dono item ko side me aaram se bithaya baad me Royal Sethi ko bulava bheja...
Royal Sethi kale rang ka overcoat pahane huye tha. Hathon me patli pattiyan sarikhe ujla kapda lapete huye. Jaise hi wahan ke chhote se maidan me pahuncha, charo ore se heat blower ki badi-badi machine lag gayi aur bich me aa kar khada ho gaya Royal Sethi. Royal Sethi ke wahan khade hote hi Sograppam ko ishara mil gaya ki ab yahan sab live hone wala hai.
Sograppam aur uske sathi kuchh dur pichhe hat kar andhere me pahunche. Som wahin baitha apne chilam me masala bhad chuka tha. Idhar Som apna sutta khinchna shuru kiya aur udhar "Royal Sethi" ne apna overcoat utar diya.
ye Som jo hai wo Villian banega sayad....Ye Sia aur Som bhai bahen hai kya
naam ek jaise hai inke....These ganja lobers
ye pakka maar dega uss Sethi ke bete ko.....
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gaya wo Royal Sethipar ye Purusom to Pheonix hai....bahut bada fighter lagta hai ye to.....
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Kya karun Indrajeet bhai abhi kisi tarah 1 update nikal paun wahi bahut hai.... Kosis karunga ki ek extra update Sunday tak nikal sakun...
Thanks for your lovely review... Meera jaisi ek Gf ki to khwaish mujhe bhi thi
par kya karen jo baten kahaniyon aur filmon me dikhayi jati hai wo real life me utne hi rare hote hain.... Sath bane rahiye aur update ka maza lijiye
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Introducing Kappa Rawat aur uski bhi shadi karwaunga... Jahan tak sawal ke jawab ki baat hai to yessssss ab to sabki shadi karwa kar hi manuga...Ek Sawal ~ Kya khud ki sadi ho jane ke bad Som ki khushi dekhi na ja rahi jo bechare Som ki bhi Bali de dali...?
Well to ab Som ki secret sadi ko secret rakhane ki secret jimmedari Lata Mishra ki hai lagta hai is raaj ko raaj rakhane ke liye kaphi drama hone wala hai.
Yaar ye to bahut hi khatarnak GF hai sidha ped se hi lataka di.Lagta hai aaj Vyas mohabbat me kurban ho kar hi rahega.
Vyas bhi soch raha hoga ki mai kis Jangali Billi se pyar kar baitha.
Fantastic Update.
Really enjoyed it.
Hahaha... Dekhiye kurbani kya rang laati hai ... Vyas ke mazar par phool chadhane chale aana
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मिश्राइन ने अच्छा चेपा सोम को गाल लाल कर दिए यार और तो और अब वो मीरा से भी मिलेंगी ये दूसरा झटका है तो इसके लिए तो मिश्राइन सोम को पूरा लाल पीला कर देगी
और भाई व्यास का कुछ समझ नहीं आया था ठीक से की उसने क्यों वो सब बोला था उस दिनजिससे आज सिया उसको मरने तक पे उतारू है लेकिन भाई व्यास भी मुझे कोई कच्ची गोली नहीं लगता क्योंकि खानी के सुरुवात मे ही व्यास और उसके दोस्तों को एडमिशन के लिया करोडो की डील करते देखा था इसीलिए मैं यहाँ व्यास की बात से सहमत हु की उसकी जान इतनी सस्ती नहीं
Vyas to Vyas hai aur galatfehmi ki vajah kya thi wahi dikhane to ye scene aaya hai... Bus kuchh hi der me update aa jayega tab sari kahani clear ho jayegi... Baki ye secret shadi kya rang laati hai wo bhi dekh lete hain... Lekin jo bhi ho maza aana guaranted hai
Nahi monty bhai main khud hi itne dino baad aaya hun... Mujhe kisi ke bare me jankari nahi hai
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Kya innovation hai review ka... Waise ye dusri ladki khud apne hath se itna jor se chhati kyun daba rahi... Humse bol dete mere dono hath free hain
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Thankooo sooo much Nevil bhai.... Dekhiye dono bhai bahan... Som aur Sia ki mohabbat kya rang laati hai
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Hahahaha ... Yahich to Chintu bhai .... Tumne aisa kyun kiya... Main wo nahi thi.. falane ne aisa kiya... Chhodo itna clarification kaun de...
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