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Update:-72
Sia teji se pahunchi. Apne gale me bandhi chain ko khol'kar usse patla rassi banayi. Kafi teji ke sath wo bench par chadh gayi aur jaise hi wo bench se kudi... Rassi ke ek sire se Vyas ka gala bandh chuka tha aur dusra sira teji se ped ke ek moti sakha ke upar se dusri taraf.…
Sia daudti hui aayi. Bench par chadi aur jab wo bench par se kud rahi thi Vyas jamin se 1 fit upar. Vyas apne dono hath se gale ki rassi pakde tha aur Neerav teji dikhate huye sidha Vyas ka paun pakad'kar uski jaan bachane ki kosis me jut gaya.…
Vyas uss patle taar ki rassi se latka hua tha. Sia thik uske pichhe khadi wire ko khinch rahi thi aur Neerav, Vyas ka paun pakde, Sia ko chhodne kah raha tha.
Sia wire ko aur bhi jyada takat se khinchti.… "Neeru chhod iss chhachundar ko. Aaj isse maar'kar jail chali hi jaungi"…
"Ukhuuuuu... Ukhuuuuu.… Ukhuuuuu"… Vyas ke khansne ki awaj aane lagi. Subah jogging karne aaye log inki awaj sun'kar bhid lagane lage. Kuch log to video tak banane lage the. Tabhi sity bajati police wahan pahunchi aur Sia ko kisi tarah hataya.
Police station ka drishya... Ek bench par Sia, Neerav aur Vyas baithe huye the. Kuch policewale aa rahe the kuch policewale ja rahe the aur ye teeno khamosh baithe.… "Sia woooo"… Vyas apna gala pakad'kar kuch kahna chaha lekin uski awaj sunte hi... "Chup ho jao warna main yahan rakhi kisi bhi rifle ki goli sidha tumhare bad'bole muh me fire kar dungi"…
Neerav:- Vyas sir aisa kya kar diya jo Sia didi khun ki pyasi dayan ho gayi...
Neerav ki baat sun'kar Vyas hasne laga aur Sia usse kha jane wali najron se ghurne lagi…. "Tum teeno ka kya matter hai aur tum ladki (Sia) public place par aise murder kyun kar rahi thi"…
Vyas:- Sir wo murder nahi tha… Gymnastics practice…
Police:- Haan wo tere gale par laga nishan dikh raha hai...
Ek lady constable.… "Sir ladki ke sath "use & throw" ka mamla to nahi"…
Sia:- Will you please shut up... Kuch bhi bakwas kar rahi ho...
Police:- Ae ladki tu kahin ki gundi hai kya... Case file karo re iss par...
Case file to ho hi jati lekin tabhi wahan par shirkat karte huye ADG vigilance J.P.Jatav sir padhare. Bole to apne Neerav ke papa. Itne high rank police officer aur uske aage-pichhe ka tam-jham dekh'kar hi wo thanedar ghabra gaya... J.P aate hi.. "Yahan ka incharge kaun hai"…
Thana incharge had'badi me apni topi lagate.… "Sir main... Main hun yahan ka incharge"…
J.P:- Tino me se kisi par case file to nahi kiye...
Thana Incharge:- Sir wo abhi tak mamla hi samjhne ki kosis kar rahe hain ki iss ladki (Sia) ne aakhir iss ladke (Vyas) ko maarne ki kosis kyun ki hogi...
J.P:- Areee wo maarti nahi bus thoda bahut hansi mazak chal raha tha...
Sia:- Uncle wo Neeru na hota na tab ye baat kahte...
Vyas:- Haan samjho koi nahi hai... Jo ji me aaye kar ke dikhao Sia. Kaho to kisi stamp paper par apni sehmati de dun...
Sia:- Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni, samjhe tum... J.P uncle ya to ye ladka yahin arrest rahega ya main... Aap faisla kar lo...
J.P:- Main Mishra ji aur Shashtri ji ko phone kar deta hun. Wahi yahan aa'kar faisla karenge... Chalo Neerav... Officers dono ek sath yahan se jaana chahen to thik, warna dono ko bitha kar rakhna aur mujhe bus ek call kar dena...
Ab bhala babuji ko koi bulane ki baat kare fir kaahe ka ego. Jaise hi J.P nikle uske pichhe hi ye dono bhi nikal liye... Sia Police station se nikal'kar auto ke liye raste par khadi hui aur thik uske pass aa'kar Vyas bhi khada ho gaya... Vyas itne karib aa'kar khada hua ki Sia aur Vyas ke haanth chipak rahe the. Sia thodi khisak kar samne dekhne lagi. Vyas bhi thoda khisak kar samne dekhne laga... Sia fir thoda khiski, Vyas bhi thoda khiska.…
Dono khiskte-khisakte 2 meter dur chale gaye. Tabhi ek auto unke pass aa'kar ruki. Sia uske ander baithne ko hui, uss se pahle hi Vyas baith gaya... Sia, Vyas ko dekh'kar apni bhauhen (eyebrows) sikod'kar usse ghurne lagi... "Bhaiya ye auto maine rukwayi thi, usse kahiye niche utarne..."
Vyas:- Sia tum bhi aa jao... Main bilkul bura nahi manuga...
Auto wala:- Kya hai bhai maine auto madam ke liye roki thi...
Sia:- Koi nahi bhaiya aap jao dusri auto aa gayi hai...
Uss auto wale se baat kar'ke Sia jaise hi dusre auto me baithne lagi.… Apne sir par hath maarti... "Ab ye kise bitha liye bhaiya"…
Dusra auto wala... "Madam ye sir to aapke sath hi hai na"…
Sia:- Ji nahi ye aage wale auto me baitha tha, isliye main aapko rukne boli... Khair aap jao main ussi auto me chali jaungi...
Sia itna bol'kar dusre auto wale ke pass se hati aur wapas se ussi auto me baith'te... "Bhaiya chalo jaldi"…. Chunki Sia ko pata tha Vyas fir se wahi harkat karega isliye Sia wapas jaane ka natak kar'ke dobara se dusre auto me baith gayi...
Vyas bechara pahle wale auto me aa'kar baitha aur apne najron ke samne se dusra auto jate dekh raha tha…. "Ae bhai pichhe le uss auto ke"…
Auto wala apni auto start kar'ke geet gun'gunate aage badha... Vyas ki najron se Sia ka auto dur hota ja raha tha... "Bhai tej chal le. Wo auto dur hoti ja rahi hai"..
Auto wala:- Je koi film ki shooting na ho rahi ki auto wale ko bolo aur wo pichha karne lage... Kya samjhe bhaiyye...
Vyas:- Diye tujhe 500 rupye chal ab..
Auto wala:- Bhara alag se lunga...
Vyas:- Haan thik hai... Ab chalega ya bakchodi karega...
Auto wala:- Dhairya kyun kho rahe ho ye lo udd chali apni dhanno...
Right-left machhli cut maarte auto wala thik Sia ke auto ke parellel le aaya. Ab dono auto sath-sath chal rahi thi. Jaise hi Vyas ka auto thik samne aa'kar laga.… Sia apne auto wale se.… "Kya kar rahe ho, wo ladka acid liye ghum raha hai. Jaan pyari hai to bhagao auto..."
Auto wala:- Kya sach me madam...
Sia:- Gadhe ho kya? Thane me ussi ki complaint to karne gayi thi...
Auto wala:- Hey bhagwan aaj subah-subah ye kaun si sawari utha li maine.…
Auto wala apni baat kahte huye sadak kinare apni auto khadi kar diya… Sia apne mathe par hath rakhti… "Kya ho gaya?"
Auto wala:- Nahi chahiye mujhe bhade ke paise aur nahi chahiye aisi sawari.. madam aap utar lo... Ya uss ladke ko acid fekna hoga to aaram se pichhe ki seat par fek kar jayega…
"Fattu kahin ke".. kahti hui Sia uss auto se utar kar usse kiraye ke paise thama dee. Wo auto to chali gayi lekin Vyas ka auto samne hi khada tha. Sia kuch der idhar udhar dekhi aur fir paidal hi aage chalne lagi... Uske kadam se kadam mila'kar auto bhi uske sath dhire-dhire chalne lagi...
"Ye lagta hai aaj pitega mujhse"... Sia khud se kahti hui hath dikha'kar uss auto ko roki aur aaram se baith gayi... Vyas ek kinare to Sia dusre kinare baithi thi. Sia poore gusse me bilkul samne najar dali thi. Vyas rah-rah kar Sia ke ore mudta, lekin gusse wala bhishan roop dekh'kar samne dekhne lagta...
Kisi tarah himmat juta'kar Vyas thoda-thoda kar'ke Sia ke najdik aane laga. Vyas apne mission me poora safal bhi raha. Wah Sia se matr inch bhar ki duri par tha. Kisi tarah se himmat juta'kar Vyas ne jaise hi Sia ke kandhe par hath rakha... Ek jordar awaj hui.. Sia ek ghusa Vyas ke naak par maar chuki thi..
"Aaawwwww... Pagal, Jungli... Naak tod di mera"…. Vyas apne naak par rumal lagate huye kahne laga...
Sia:- Shashtri mera para chadha hua hai, behtar hoga tum mujhse dur hi raho... Sirf tumhari vajah se main 2 raton se nind ki goli le'kar so rahi hun...
Auto wala:- Bhaiya kahan chhodna hai...
Sia:- Ghar tak...
Vyas:- Nahi bhai tum "all day dining" resturant le lo...
Sia:- Vyas abhi to tum mujh se dur hi raho aur auto wale ko bolo sidha ghar chhode...
Vyas:- Bus 10 minute de do. Sirf utna hi waqt maang raha hun…
Sia iske baad kuch nahi boli, chup-chap Vyas ke sath chal di. Takriban 15 minute baad dono ek resturant ke bahar khade the jiski service subah ke 6.30 baje se shuru ho jati thi… Vyas isharon me chup-chap Sia ko apne sath chalne kaha...
Kuch hi der me dono wahan khade the jahan cctv ki screen lagi hui thi… Vyas, Sia ko screen ke ore ishara karte... "Udhar dekho"…
Sia cctv ke live footage ko dekhti.… "Iss se tumhare paap na dhulenge Shashtri. Isme kuch naya hai, jo main nahi janti"…
Vyas:- Sherlock's ki nani tum sab pahle se janti ho, main ye maanta hun. Main ye bhi maanta hun ki main ek bahut hi ghatiya actor hun, isliye uss raat ke liye maafi maangta hun. Ab dil ko tasalli mil gayi ho to samne dekho...
Sia, Vyas ki baat sun'ne ke baad ander se thoda khush hoti.… "Haan thik hai samajh gayi... Ab jab resturant aa hi gaye hain to hum breakfast sath me lenge. Kuch order kar do"…
Vyas lunch order karne laga aur idhar Sia cctv footage ko dekh rahi thi... "Sahi kaha hai kisi ne ego bahut badi chij hoti hai. Dekh rahe ho Vyas"…
Vyas:- Haan dekh raha hun... Waise mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki in bacchon ke gange ke sath-sath tum wo cabin wale high-class logon ko bhi dekh rahi...
Sia:- Vyas tum bhi udhar najar diye raho… agar mera andaza galat nahi to kuch aise log tumhe jaroor mil jayenge jinhe tum jante hoge...
Vyas:- Khati bhi raho aur screen bhi dekhti raho...
Sia:- Ye itni subah aaloo ke parathe kaun mangwata hai...
Vyas:- Kyun tasty nahi hai kya... O teri ye Noor Mirja, Manohar Lal Joshi aur Amit Upadhyay yahan kya kar rahe?... Aur ye Kirti Nanda wale group me Meera ka bhai kya kar raha hai...
Sia:- Aaram se dekhte jao... Vyas wo.. wo jo paper hai Manohar Lal Joshi ke hath me, kya camera uss par zoom ho sakta hai...
Vyas:- Poochta hun... Shyam (cctv opretor) wo paper par focus kar sakte ho kya?..
Wah cctv opretor paper par jitna zoom ho sakta tha kiya aur sabke screenshot bhi leta chala gaya... Takriban aadhe ghante tak Sia aur Vyas ne wahan chal rahe tamashe ko dekha... Jahan restaurant ke ek cabin me Kirti Nanda aur Sagar Chaturvedi ke sath Riaz, Meera ka bhai Jignesh, Sagar Chaturvedi ki bahan Mala, Ms kar raha Roopak, aur bhi kayi sare log the.
Wahin dusri cabin me Kumar Company ke chairman Jay Kumar ka bahnoi aur Kirti ke pita Amol Nanda tha. Usske sath Kumar Company ke education investment group ka CEO Mukul Mukherjee, sath me UGC ke bada adhikari S.B.Khare the. Jinse milne Vyas ko admission dilane wala wo broker Noor Mirja, uske sath Sia ke university ke mukhya prabandhak Manohar Lal Joshi aur uske sath University chancellor Amit Upadhyay pahuncha tha.
Kirti ke sath baki students ka hona to samjh me aa raha tha. Lekin uske pichhe aane se in logon se bhi mulakat ho jayegi ye to kabhi sapne me na to Sia aur na hi Vyas ne socha tha. Lekin itni high profile meeting ke baad ek bodyguard cctv operator ke pass bhi pahuncha aur wahan ke hard disc se meeting ki sari footage gayab karwa diya. Haan lekin delete hone se pahle hi kayi sare footage Sia aur Vyas pendrive me le chuke the...
Dono wapas laute. Sia aur Vyas dono Sia jahan rahti thi, ussi ke pass wale society ke park me baithe the… Vyas, Sia ka hath thamte.… "Ab galti ho gayi Sia. Mera gala bhi ghont di aur naak bhi tod di ab to please maaf kar do"…
Sia:- Haan haan main to ek waqt par 4 ladke ghumati hun na. Tumhare sath dhoka kar rahi hun..
Vyas:- Haan ye achha hai... Pahle khud hi kaho ki kuchh aisa karna jis'se Riaz ko yakin ho jaye ki wo hum dono ke bich phoot dal chuka hai aur jab main wo karne ki kosis karun to tum mujh par aise atyachar karo…
Sia:- Kamine kahin ke... Main ignore karne kahi thi. Naa ki mere bare me ulta sidha bol'kar yakin dilane... Aur jis waqt tumne apni ghatiya baat boli, wahan to Riaz tha bhi nahi...
Vyas:- Impact baby impact… Main yadi waisa nahi kahta, tab tum itna naturally gusse aur dukh ka expression kahan se de pati…
Sia:- You know Vyas, mujhe to ab bhi yakin nahi ki tumne wahan bus drama kiya tha. Mujhe to lagta hai tum khud me itne insecure feel karte ho ki apni ander ki bhadas nikali hai...
Vyas:- Kyun itni ukhdi ho. Tum 2 raat se nind ki goli le rahi aur main to soya hi nahi... Poori raat tumhe hi msg karte rahta tha...
Sia:- Khoob samajhti hun main... Mujhe miss kar rahe the ya raat bhar uss Huma se chatting…
Vyas:- Had hai !!!! Ab ye Huma kahan se aa gayi...
Sia:- Wahin party se aa gayi. Kamar me hath daal'kar jab uska love parposal accept kar rahe the, wahan se aayi Huma...
Vyas:- Areee had hai... Wo sab drama tha Sia. Chaho to mera phone check kar sakti ho...
Sia:- Mujhe kya pata tumne sare saboot mita diye ho...
Vyas:- Haan mita diye. Ban rahe hain Huam ke sath mere naye sambandh. Bus khush... Matlab kahin kisi jagah presence of mind ki thodi kami kya ho gayi, kuch achha karne ke chakkar me galat ho gayi. Galti ho gayi to maafi bhi to maang raha. Ander se kitna guilt feel ho raha hai... Lekin tum ho ki bus chadhe hi ja rahi... Meri tadap, meri bhavna nahi dikh rahi hai tumhe...
Vyas gusse me apni baat kah'kar wahan se uth gaya. Jaise hi wah ek kadam aage badhaya, Sia uska hath thamti.… "Sorry.."
Vyas:- Chhodo mujhe... Abhi kuch hi der me wapas tum par mata aa jayegi...
Sia:- Sorry Sweeto... Kya kahun main... Har kisi ki baaten bardast ho jati hai... Lekin jinhe chaho unke kahe shabd jyada hi chubh jate hain... Ab gussa chhodo bhi...
Vyas:- Aise kaise gussa shant ho jayega... Pyar 2 logon ke bich hota hai isliye mujhe khud se jyada tumhari feeling ki chinta thi.. lekin..
Sia khadi ho'kar Vyas ke gale lag gayi. Vyas ke bahon me sukoon sa mehsus karne lagi. Vyas ek pal ke liye to apne dono hath khade kiye tha lekin priyasi jab gale lag jaye tab kahan khud ko rok sakte hain.. Pyar to khud-v-khud umar hi aata hai... Vyas, Sia ko apne bahon me bhadte... "Thoda berukhi chalta hai lekin itna jyada berukhi jaan le leti hai Sia"..
Sia:- Sorry Sweeto. Bus kuch pal bahon me kho jane do, fir aaram se maafi maang lungi lekin abhi thoda sukoon le lene do.
Kitni tadape ho jaise dono. Gale lag'kar kahndhe par sir tikana kitna sukoon de raha tha koi inse puchhe... Dono sari baton ko bhul'kar bus ek duje ke gale lage rahe.…
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Kaise ho Leon... And thankooo so much for your helarious comment... Romance hai na yahan refta hi jyada padna hai... Dekhte rahiye abhi to shurwat ho rahi hai...dono update majedar the ..som aur meera ne chupke shadi kar li aur suhagraat bhi mana li .
ye anu aur mithilesh to pura ghar apne liye istemal kar rahe the.. som ke kamre ko bhi nahi chhoda .
lata ji ko shadi ki baat bata di jisse thappad bhi khana pada som ko .
sia ne kuch jyada hi gussa dikha diya jo vyas ko sidha faansi hi dene chali gayi..agar vyas marr gaya to kya hoga
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pahle baap ke gale pe chakku laga diya....uske baad uski beti se apne dost ki shadi karane ki baat karta hai
Inn sab ka intro mast tha.....
Hahahaha... Log aksar kahte hain ... Kahani ka intro mast hota hai mera... Uske baad ka pata nahi
... ye Som jo hai wo Villian banega sayad....
Ye Sia aur Som bhai bahen hai kya
These ganja lobersye pakka maar dega uss Sethi ke bete ko.....
Haan Sia & Som brothers n sisters hain ... Baki aage ki kahani to poora detail hai hi ...
Yep bahut bada fighter to hai ... Aage abhi kayo raaj hai.. padhte rahi aur aise hi batate rahigaya wo Royal Sethi
par ye Purusom to Pheonix hai....bahut bada fighter lagta hai ye to.....
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itne din baad update aaya to kuch naam bhul gaya tha isliye dono update padh liye
..purani baate bhul gaya tha par ab bahut kuch yaad aa raha hai bas kuch baate chhodke jaise sia aur vyas ka jhagda kyu hua ..
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Sia aur Vyas ka jhagda hua ye to maine likha tha... Lekin kyun hua wo to maine ab tak kisi ko bataya hi nahi to yaad kaise aayega pahle e bataeye...itne din baad update aaya to kuch naam bhul gaya tha isliye dono update padh liye
purani baate bhul gaya tha par ab bahut kuch yaad aa raha hai bas kuch baate chhodke jaise sia aur vyas ka jhagda kyu hua ..
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pichhali baate yaad nahi ,,kamse kam 4 month to ho gaye kahani ko padhe huye aisa mujhe lagta hai ..
aur ab me busy rehta hu to kuch padhne ka time bhi nahi milta to dobara padhna bahut dur ki baat hai
..waise dhire dhire sab yaad aa jayega jab kahani pe update aayenge .
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