Romance >>> Too Young !! Too Old (Completed) <<<

[nain11ster]

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Update 88 (A & B) is posted on 537.. Must give your valuable feedback...

End Of The Chepter:-1 is posted on 542...

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[nain11ster]

Ye hai na Aaj mix veg bani hai ... Nahi lagta h pav bhaji ban gayi hai .... Itna bhayanak ulza diya hai ki samaz na aa rha kon kya aur kyu ker rha hai. .. wese ye writer ki speciality bhi hai unke har kahani me aese scenes dekhne ko mil hi jate hai .....makdi ke jal jesa ye ulza hua update bada hi mast tha jaha har koi apni kahani bana rha hai .... Main focus kamra no 211 hai jaha Naya itihas rache Jane ki rup Rekha banai ja rhi hai ..
Waiting for next

Hahahaha ... Thankoooo sooo much... Bus aap sab ko aise scenes achhe lagte hain isliye dimag me aise scene aa hi jata hai... Baki aaj purn bhoj hai... Khali rayta nahi padosa jayega... Dekhiye kamra number 211 ka raaj ... Bus aa raha hai...

 

[nain11ster]

Mind blowing update tha sir. Mujhe laga yahan kisi tarah ka clarification ayega aur sab thik ho jayega. Jaisa ki har kahani me hota hai. Lekin aapne to yahan poora jal hi bana diya. Koi kisi ki sun he nahi raha sab apni dhun me lage hai. Waise reality bhi yahi hai aaj kal sunta kaun hai sab to apni sunate hai. Ab dekhne me maza aayega ki kamra number 211 me kya hota hai. I am excited. Ho sake to kal ek update din me dijiyega. Next part me kya hoga dekhne ke liye excited hun.

Hahahaha.... Ab kya hai na madam ji rayta itna faila tha ki clarification yahan par shayad boating ho jata... Chalte update me aaram se sab niptate hain .. baki dekhiye raaj open hone wala hai...

 

[nain11ster]

Mishra ji ke armaan to kuchh jyada hi lage hai apane Bete se. Bas jhatkon aur kutai ka intezar hai jiski koi kami na rahegi.

Hahahaha ... Jald hi jald hi bahut kuch dekhne ko milega bus aap bhi aise hi roj roj dikh jaya karo Chintu babu

 

[nain11ster]

Soche to the DJ rakhde fir humko bhi apne gali ke DJ Chetan vala feel hota

Hahahaha.... Achha gali me ek DJ Chetan bhi hai... Tab to har program owesome hota hoga .. koi karyakarm ho utha laye chetan Dj

 

[nain11ster]

मज़ा आगया नैन भाई इतना रायता वो भी एक साथ साला हर कोई अपना रायता समेटने में लगा है सोम के पुरे परिवार को पता चल चूका है की सोम की शादी मीरा से हो चुकी है शिवाय मिश्रा जी के और मिश्राजी का भी अलग रायता है सोम और निराली की शादी को लेके अब तो और भी ज्यादा रायता फैलने वाला है

Hahaha monty bhai confusion hi confusion hai... Bus dekhiye clarification kab tak aata hai..

 

[nain11ster]

me bhi soch me pad gaya tha ,,par naam ko lekar hi sab chhap diya ..

Ho gaya ... Kabhi kabhi hum bhi confuse rahte hain

 

[nain11ster]

majedar update ..shastri nagar wale aaye hai ye sochkar ki wo som ko dekh lenge aur mishra ji se shadi ki baat pakki ho jayegi par unko jhatke pe jhatka lag raha hai ,vyas asif ko kisi ladki ke saath dekhkar sab hairan ho gaye the .
vyas ne maamla sambhalne ki koshish ki par kar nahi paya wo to achcha hua ki mishra ji aa gaye .
mishra ji ne lata ji ko shadi ki baat bata di aur apne hi khushiyo me goom hai ,jabki lata ji ye soch ke pareshan hai ki som ki shadi ho gayi ye baat kaise bataye .

waise ye sab rayta meera ne hi failaya hai ,koi planning nahi ,
sia aur vyas ka alag hi lafda hai jisme 2 team ko saamne lana tha .aur sabki badkismati ki ek hi hotel me aa gaye sab ..

ab vyas aur sia pyar ke geet gaane ke liye kamre me jaa rahe hai aur waha koi aur bhi milega to kya hoga ..

Hahaha... To aap bhi confusion ke maze le rahe... Chaliye kuch confusion ko aaj clarification de dete hain aur kuch ko kal par chhodte hain... Dekhiye ab kamra number 9-211 ka raaj

 

[nain11ster]

aise hi ,timepass ,,naam ko lekar ..
me to jyada naam yaad nahi rakhta ..

Shayad uss din mere sath bhi yahi hua tha..

 

[nain11ster]

Jannathedaar update bhai
Golmaal hai bhai sab golmaal hai
Seedhe raste pe ye tedhi chaal hai
Golmaal hai bhai sab golmaal hai

Ab kamra no. Taiyar hai ek aur rahshyodghatan ke liye Jahan chal pade dono premi kachche gadhe per baidhkar ish raiyte rupy darya ko paar karne per unhe kya pata ye Prem agan unhe beech raah me hi dubo degi aur sarober ho jaayenge bharpur raiyto se aur dah jaayenge Panditji aur Mishraji ke sapne.

Hahaha .. kya aap antre me likhe hai Nevil bhai... Main to kayal ho gaya iss antre ke.... Baki pesh hai rayta ka dariya part-3 ... Jahan kuch rayte samete jayega to kuch baad par chhod diya jayega...

 

[nitya.ji]

Ji bilkul Lata Mishra ko bata dena chahiye lekin kabhi kabhi apni ki khushi dekh'kar hum poora hichak jate hain... Baki aapne mujh'par vishwas rakha hai to wo vishwas tootne nahi denge...

Hahaha... Nitya ji mere update ka size 1800 se 2000 words hain... Lekin aaj kal itne me adjust nahi ho pa raha update ka ideal end isliye abhi 2400 se lekar 3300 tak word type karne padte hain... Update ke size par na jaye... 1800 words ke baad mujhe jahan bhi ek achhi end dikhti hai rok deta hun... Baki Sia aur Vyas ke bare me abhi kuch nahi... Wo jab aap abhi chhapne wala update ko padh lengi tab baat karte hain..

acha lagta hai sir jb aap yu personally he review evan normal comment pr bhi reply krte hai
kyoki sir sirf story hi nhi writer ka behaviour bhi writer ko bada banata hai
thanks