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[Xabhi]

11 ster fan ragish7357 Kingfisher... Aree kahan rah gaye teeno bulawa bheja fir bhi Aqsa ki fufi bane ho....

Are bhaya baki ka to pta nhi pr 3 din se Mai Allahabad me tha meri tabiyat khrab ho gyi hai bukhar utar hi nhi rha tha 2-3 test kraye or khasi bhi joro pr hai nind nhi aa rhi sar or ankh dard kr rhi thi pr Aaj rahat hai thoda Bahut to aa gya...
Or Vaise bhi aap bhulne vali chij thode ho...

 

[Xabhi]

Update:-67​

Somvar ki Khushnuma subah thi. Pahli class khatm hone ke baad sabhi canteen me mil rahe the. Aaj ek sath sabhi baithe huye the. Coffee pe Asif ke shadi ki charcha chal rahi thi.


Tabhi unki table ko Sagar join kiya.… "Vyas aane wale Sunday humara match hai. Final year vs third year."


Vyas, uski baat sun kar haami bhar diya aur sab ke sath baat karne laga. Sagar fir bich me unhe rokte... "Tum teeno se mujhe baat karni hai"…


Asif:- Haan kyun nahi, chalo chalte hai...


Ye teeno wahan se uth kar chale gaye. Wahan sirf Meera aur Sia thi. Dono hi baton me mashgul thi ki pichhe se Sagar ki girlfriend Kirti unki table par pahunch gayi.… "Ummid hai tumhe mera messasge kafi strongly mila hoga"… Aate hi Kirti ne Sia ko kuchh din pahle college mili dhamki yaad dilayi.


Sia uski baat ko ignore karti Meera se baat karna jari rakhi. Sia ka aisa rawaiyya dekh kar Kirti ka para chadh gaya. Apne dono hath jor se round table par patakti... "Tumse kuchh kah rahi hun"…


Meera:- Kyun thak rahi ho... Tumne strong message bhijwaya, Sia didi ko mil gaya. Baat khatm. Kuchh baat karni hai uss par...


Kirti:- Matlab akad ab bhi nahi gayi kya tumhari...


Meera uss ladki ko hairani se dekhti, kuchh kahne wali thi tabhi Sia usse rokti... "Jane do Kuku, lagta hai pareshan hai. Tum aaj aaogi na humare yahan Kuku"..


Meera:- Bilkul nahi, aaj humare yahan (Shashtri family me) hungama hai. Asif se party bhi to leni hai...


Sia:- Haan ye to bhul hi gayi... Lekin Asif kyun dega party, hum uske liye surprise party arrange karenge...


"Bahut akad hai tum me... Tera bhi akad maine sidha na kiya to mera naam bhi Kirti Nanda nahi..." Khud ko aise ignore kiye jane par Kirti gusse me laal hoti jor se kahne lagi...


Meera:- Thik hai naya naam ragister karwa lena... Chhod na bahini kis baat par gussa hai. Chill maro aur coffee piyo Kirti..


Sia:- Fufkaar to aise rahi hai jaise abhi dash legi... Chalo sabha khatm karte hain.


Meera:- Haan mujhe bhi jana hoga. Neerav hai nahi uske badle combined class ki poori jimmedari mere upar aa gayi hai...


Sia:- Haan wo jyada jaroori hai... Waise in teeno ki padhai kaisi chal rahi hai..


Meera:- Kafi mehnati student hai teeno. Home study par poora focus rahta hai. Kal unke yahan ke kautuhal mahol me bhi humne 2 ghante ke combined study ka waqt nikal liya tha... Thik hai Sia didi aap bhi jao, main bhi jati hun.


Dono Kirti ke samne se nikal gaye aur wo muh dekhti rah gayi. Gusse se uska poora chehra laal tha. Aisa lag raha tha hath me bandook hoti to abhi goli maar deti.


Idhar class me waise to sab alag-alag baith'te the, lekin iss baar Meera, Vyas ke sath baithi. Vyas, Meera ko ghurte chhote se paper par note likha... "Class me kya jaroori baat karni hai jo sath me baith gayi"..


Meera:- Yadi aaj rishta tay ho jata hai to main aur Sia didi ek surprise party plan kar rahi hain...


Vyas, Paper par smiley banate... "Good idea. Main sab ko bol dunga"..


Meera:- Sab kaun... Udhar se Aqsa hogi apne best friends ke sath. Idhar se aap tino bus...


Vyas:- Haan thik hai...


Meera:- Ok then done... Yahan se class over hone ke baad hum aaj ke combined study ka kaam khatm kar lenge aur fir Party schedule..


Vyas:- Haan lekin party kahan hogi...


Meera:- Wo Sia didi dekh legi…


Class me inki planning chal rahi thi. Idhar 10 baje subah Shastri ji ke ghar bada sa jamawada tha. Sab ne aaj kaam se chutti le rakhi thi. Pandit ji ek baar fir sab ko samjhate.… "Dekho Mujib bhaiya achhe admi hai. Ho sakta hai mann me ye khyal ho ki Jannat se shadi ke baad uska beta sudhar jaye isliye"…


Pandit ji bol hi rahe the ki bich me Asif ke thik samne ke ghar me rahne wale Nurul Hassan contractor baat ko kaat'te... "Bete ko sudharna hai to sidha jail me daal de. Har jail ke upar likha hota hai, sudhar grih"…


Mahroof:- Apna Nurul 5 baar jail gaya hai aur har baar sudhar kar hi aaya hai. Shukr kar Samina ka jisne nikaah ke liye haan kah di. Warna aaj bhi sudhar grih me hi rahta...


Alka:- Areee jahilon. Tum log mere bacche ka ghar basne doge ki nahi... Bhago sab yahan se... Ek dhang ka aadmi to le aate Pandit ji... Sab ke sab dimag se paidal hai...


Som:- Main kuchh kah sakta hun...


Alka:- Tu to baal katwa ke aa. Tujhe dekh kar darwaje se hi "naa" na kah de... Ek baat batao isse to yahan ke bare me koi idea bhi nahi, tab ye kaahe ja raha hai?


Som:- Main company ka owner hun aur apne sath kaam karne wale ka rishta tay karwane ja raha. Sab se majboot paksh to mera hi rahega.


Pandit ji:- Solah aane sacchi baat. Alka kya kahti ho ....


Alka:- Sun lo agar kisi bhi vajah se Mujib bhai ne rishte ke liye naa kah diy to dekh lena.…. Fir main apne dono beto ko bol dungi ladki ko utha laa, jo hoga dekha jayega ..


Pandit ji:- Tum shant ho jao. Som tum kuchh kah rahe the.


Som:- Wahan meeting me kisi ko kuchh bhi bolna ho, wo kaan me bol kar aap tak apni baat pahunchayega. Baat kewal aap karoge...


Pandit ji:- Nana... Baat to Masroof hi karega…


Masroof:- Mujhe kyun fasa rahe ho...


Pandit ji:- Zarina aaj wahan basi hui hai, wo tumhari nih-swarth bhavna ka natija hai Masroof. Uske dono bacche ke shadi ki baat to gardian ban kar tum hi karoge..


Alka:- Haan Masroof ye jimmedari to leni hi hogi. Waise bhi kaana-fusi wali baat hi to batani hai. Pandit ji sath me rahenge hi..


Iss chhote se sabha ke baad 4 log taiyar ho kar nikle. Masroof ne rishte ki baat ke liye ek badi si gadi ka intzam kiya tha. Mujib Khan ko raat me hi purv suchna mil gayi thi, kal 10.30 baje rishte ki baat karne aa rahe hain. Usne bhi Pandit ji ke prastav ka swagat kiya aur milne ke liye haan kah diya...


Apne samay par dono hi paksh aamne samne baithe. Chay pani ki vyavstha hui. In sab ke uprant Masroof bhai ek paan muh me dalte... "Haan to mujib sahab. Aapne humare ladke Asif ko dekha hai. Ladka doctor hai aur aap ki sab se chhoti beti Aqsa se uske nikaah ka prastav le kar aaye hain"…


Mujib Khan ka bada beta, Sarfaraj... "Asif ko to hum sab jante hain. Hume ladka pasand hai. Lekin ek prastav humara bhi hai. Darasal kayi dino se hum bhi Danish ke liye ladki dekh rahe the aur hume uske liye Jannat behad pasand hai. Jaise wo wahan sab ki laadli hai, yahan bhi hum sab usse beti ki tarah rakhenge. Uske har sukh suvidha ki jimmedari humari hogi."

"Humara uncha khandan hai. Paise ki koi kami nahi. Ladka engineer hai aur iss sal Saudia me job bhi karne ja raha. Humne socha hai iske Saudi jane se pahle ghar me bache dono bacchon ka nikah sath me kar de."


Masroof pandit ji ka muh dekhne laga. Pahle minute me hi ussi baat ki charcha ho gayi jiske bare me sab kayas laga rahe the. Iss matter ka jimma chunki Vyas ne liya tha aur uske liye Som ko bulaya gaya tha. Sabhi ki najar Som par. Som, Nurul ke kaan me kuchh kaha. Nurul ne pandit ji se aur pandit ji Masroof se...


Masroof:- Dekhiye khandan to hum sab ka hai aur yahan sabhi khandani log hi baithe hain. Abhi hum apne bacche Asif ka rishta le kar aaye hain, lekin aap ko agar apne bete Danish ke nikaah ki baat karni hai to hume yakin dilaeye ki wo Saudia me naukri karne ja raha hai...


Mujib Khan ka bada beta Sarfaraj…. "Ye kaisa behuda sawal hai. Hum aap ko har baat ke liye proof de??"..


Sarfaraj bol kar chup ho gaya. Pandit ji Masroof bhai ke kaan me kuchh kahne lage... Masroof pandit ji ko sun'ne ke baad.…


"Dekhiye aap ka bada ladka jo itna gusse me aa raha hai, kal ko humne Jannat ka nikaah karwa diya aur Danish ki naukri nahi lagi to kya Sarfaraj, Danish ke parivar kee poori jimmedari uthayega. Jaise hum Janant ko achhe school aur college me padha rahe hain, kya sarfaraj uske bacchon ko ussi standerd ki siksha de payega. Hume issi baat ka yakin dila de. Ye to jayaj baat hai na"…


Sarfarj, harbadate… "Main kyun uske parivar ki jimmedari uthaun?"…


Iska jawab to Masroof bhai ko pahle se rataya gaya tha bus confirmation ke liye ek baar Som ko usne dekha aur Som se sahmati jata di.…


"Dekhiye main sidhi baat karta hun. Danish se rishte ke liye hum kabhi haan nahi kahenge, kyunki poora samaj janta hai ki humari beti afsar ban'ne ki taiyari kar rahi. Garv se ek na ek baar to aapne bhi, kabhi na kabhi kaha hi hoga ki 10th aur 12th UP topper Jannat aur Nirali humare hi bacchi hai. To ek baar usse kyun na khul kar afsar ban'ne ki kosis karne diya jaye. Sarkari Naukri lene me kitni kathin taiyari karni padti hai ye baat to Mujib sahab hum sab se achha jante honge…"

"Rahi baat Danish ki to isme koi burai nahi hai yadi yahan aap kah dete hain ki humne rishte tay karne ke liye Danish ke naukri ki baat kah di thi. Wo kosis kar raha hai Saudia me naukri kee, shayad ho jaye"…


Mujib:- Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai. Maine khud 3-4 logon se baat ki hai. Mere khalu ka ladka wahin hai, pichhle 20 sal se. Usne kaha hai ki wo Danish ko apne sath liye jayega...


Masroof:- "Mera to khud ka bhai wahan hai. Mujh se kaha tha Saudia aa ja. Paise puchhe to bola yahan gadiyon ki marammat karni hai, 1000 Saudi Riyal aur kaam dekh kar paise badhayenge..."

"Master sahab (Mujib Khan) pahle ka duar alag tha jab Saudia kaam karne jane wale ki kami thi. Yahan se gaye aur maal chhap liye. Ab to American labour bhi wahan ke tel ke kuyen me kaam karte hain. 1000 Riyal ka guna bhag kar ke dekha, uss waqt 15-16 hazar hota tha. 2 guna salary bhi badh jati, jo ki kuchh salon me muskil tha to bhi 32 se 35 hazar hote. Itne paise ke liye kaun apne ghar parivar aur itni azadi se jine wali jagah ko chhod kar Saudia jaye. Aap bhi shayad issi baat ko soch rahe honge, isliye to Shadia me koi bhi naukri karne Danish ko nahi bheja. Kyun Danish yahi baat hai na?"


Danish chup kya bole. Ladki paksh wale sab ek dusre ka muh dekhne lage. Tabhi unke rishtedaron me se... "Haan to kahna kya chahte ho humara ladka nakara hai?"


Masroof:- Main to ye kah raha hun ki pahle uske kaam ki chinta karo. Bechara settle hua nahi aur aap sab uske nikah par jor diye hain. Som sir aap bataeye kya ye sahi hai..


Som:- Ab ye to aab sab ke aapas ki baat hai. Haan agar Danish ko job ki ikchha ho to abhi biodeta le aaye. Aqsa ki shadi ke sath Danish ki naukri bhi final kar lete hain…


Mujib hasrat bhari najron se dekhte... "Kya ye sambhav hai?"..


Som:- Bilkul sambhav hai. Lekin Saudia ek baar gaya to 5 sal baad lautne ka karar hoga.


Mujib:- Haan hume manjoor hai... Aap usko settle kar do bus. Fir to hum iska nikaah Saudia se lautne ke baad hi tay karenge…


Danish apne pita ko aankh dikhate… "Abba"…


Sarfaraj:- Bich me mat bol... Tu ja biodeta le kar aa. Pahle pet palna sikh fir nikaah ki sochna... Chal ja bio deta le aa..


Danish iss se pahle ki kuchh kahta, Mujib Khan ne kah diya... "Beti ke liye Asif jaisa ladka mila, aur uske sampark se mere bete ko job aur kya chahiye"…


Sarfaraz:- Abba itni jaldi kaise. Hum se to saboot maang liye the aur yahan to sirf baaten hi hui hai...


Som:- Der to aap sab kar rahe hain...


Aqsa ki fufi... "Haan to pahle Danish ki hi naukri ka kaam ho jane do"…


Som ke liye kaun si badi baat thi. Usne portal open kiya kuchh contact kiye aur apni ek team ko Saudia me service ke liye proposal de diya... Udhar se bhi "Ok" ka sandesh aa gaya... Som ek mail forward karte... "Danish ko 3500 Riyal mahine ki naukri mil gayi hai, lekin 3 din baad janaa hoga"…


Mujib:- Iske bahan kee nikaah tak to ruk jane do... Bhai hai wo..


Som:- Hmmm !!! To chaliye shadi ki date hi final karte hain. Aur ussi anusar Danish ka Saudia jana bhi tay kar denge...


Aqsa ki fufi... "Haan to hum Aqsa ka rishta Asif se 10 lakh rupye aur 10 tole sone mehr se tay karte hain"…


Masroof bhai chaunkte huye…. "Aqsa balik hai to wo apna mahr khud tay karegi"..


(Mahr ek prakar ki adaygi hai, jo dulha apni dulhan ko uske bhavishya ke liye deta hai. Nikaah ke waqt hi Mahr ki poori baat tay hoti hai jis par dono paksh ke likhit kararnama hota hai. For more details contact Google)


Fufi:- Balik hai lekin itni badi na hui ki usse in baton ki samjh hogi. Uske haq ki baat main kar rahi hun na..


Masroof:- Ye aapne kaise tay kiya hai. Aap ne ladke ki uchit haisiyat dekhe bina hi aise kaise tay kar sakti hain…


Fufi:- Azi humare yahan to sabhi ladkiyon ke mahr lagbhag itni hi tay hui hai. Kuchh apna bhi rutva hai ki nahi. Fir padhi likhi khubsoorat ladki hai. Kuchh humara bhi takaza hai...


Som, Nurul se... "Ye Mahr kya hota hai"..


Nurul:- Nikaah ke waqt ladki ko tay rashi di jati hai. Iss par kewal ussi ka haq hota hai... Bhavishya ko dhyan me rakhte..


Som:- Ye to achhi baat hai. Fir ye Masroof ji kyon kah rahe ladke ki uchit hasiyat na dekhi...


Nurul:- Aree ye len den ki baat aise hi hoti hai. Ye jaan bujh kar itna demand kar rahi hai, taki nikaah ke baad rukhsati me natak kare aur Asif se kayi tarah ke anubandh karwa sake. Mujhe to lagta hai iski fufi ye rishta hi nahi hone dena chahti…


Som:- Koi nahi, khinchatani mat karo.. Ladki ko hi denge na... Haan kah do...


Nurul:- Sab likhit kararnama banega aur Nikaah ke waqt sab pay karna hoga. Waise mohlat bhi le sakte hai..


Som:- Haan kaho, baki samjh lenge...


Fir se kaana fusi shuru ho gayi. Masroof ne ek baar sab ka chehra dekha… "Hmmm ! Thik hai hume 10 lakh rupya aur 10 tola sona mahr manjoor hai. Lekin humare barati ke swagat me koi kami nahi honi chahiye. Nikaah "Jashn Garden" se hogi aur sham ki davat bhi wahin. Aur apne beti damad ko dene ke liye kuchh to socha hoga"..


Fufi:- Hum to ladki wale hain kuchh humari bhi haisiyat dekho. Jshn garden me nikaah aur sham ki davat arrange karna hi bahut hai. Iss se aage hum kahan se karenge. Bus 50 baraati le aaeyega. Hum swagat me koi kami nahi chhodenge...


Masroof:- Abhi mahr ke waqt to unche khandan me rishte ki baat kar rahi thi. Ladke ki maang aayi to garib ho gaye. Aur 50 barati kis hisab se kah rahi… 300 to iske tea party gange hai. 50 to rishtedar ho jayenge. Fir college ke dost, poora mohalla samaj.. kam se kam 500 barati honge aur abhi tak to ye bataya hi nahi ki ladki aur ladke ko nikaah me kya dene wale ho. Humne mahr par to koi mol bhav nahi kiya…

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Wao Bhai mtlb kya hi kah du is update pr jitna bhi abhi haal hi ke dino me experience kiya hai vo sab hi chaap diya apne Lagta hai bs thode se sabd badal gye hai Chalo Accha hai.... Kisi ka to ghanta bja Jaisa asif bhai ne bola tha ...
Kirti ko lagta hai abhi tk pta nhi chla ki kya hua tha us din college me... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast Jabardast meri Sadi ke dino ki kuchh jhalkiya yaad dila di aapne Nainu bhaya maza aya padh kr...

 

[Xabhi]

Ab me or type nhi kr sakta jor se khashi aane lgi hai has has kr

 

[Kingfisher]

Xabhi 11 ster fan ragish7357 Kingfisher... Aree kahan rah gaye teeno bulawa bheja fir bhi Asqa ki fufi bane ho.

So sorry nainu Bhai Kuch Dino se bahut bussy ho gya hu esliye koi bhi stories nhi pad pata I don't no ki me kab free hounga per jab bhi free hounga tab story bhi padunga + review bhi dunga ...just abhi khabar Mili hai ki aap ki life ki humrahi mil gaii hai agar ye Satya hai to apko new journey ke liye dher sari badhaiya

 

[Kingfisher]

Are bhaya baki ka to pta nhi pr 3 din se Mai Allahabad me tha meri tabiyat khrab ho gyi hai bukhar utar hi nhi rha tha 2-3 test kraye or khasi bhi joro pr hai nind nhi aa rhi sar or ankh dard kr rhi thi pr Aaj rahat hai thoda Bahut to aa gya...
Or Vaise bhi aap bhulne vali chij thode ho...

Heyy brother ye me kya sun rha hu ki ek higher immunity vala banda bimar ho gya . Take care man seasonal flu Ka dour hai tabiyat Ka dhyan rkho or jaldi se jaldi treatment karvao . God se prey karunga ki aap jald se jald swasthya labh prapt kre

 

[Kingfisher]

dono hi update dilchasp aur dilkash tha sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

.... details Revo do to tab bhi muh fula lenge na do tab bhi muh fula lenge..

Ab writer sahab khud kaha hai. ab isme main kya kar sakti hun..

Unexpected

 

[Kingfisher]

: kanjush nain11ster sahab Bina apne readers ko bataye ya bulaye hi Shaadi kar li... ragish7357 11 ster fan Ankitarani Xabhi The king Kingfisher Anky@123 Mahi Maurya piyanuan rgcrazyboy THE FIGHTER

Jankar bahut Acha lga par thoda Bura bhi ...
Acha....nain Bhai signal se mingal hi gye ..
Bura ...Hume apni khushi me sharikh nhi Kiya are hum dur se Dekh Kar Khush ho jate ...vo Bolte hai na " apna time ayega ”

 

[Kingfisher]

कब, कहाँ, कैसे, किससे।।

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