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[11 ster fan]

Haa....bilkul sahi baat hai...jeetne wale ko mai 1000laddu dungi...or jo harega wo mujhe 2000laddu dega...bolo 11ster ...manjur hai na...?

Manjur hai but isme ek condition hai ki is competition me kisi ek ko jitna hi hoga..kahi aisa na ho jaye dono log har Jaye aur aap ham dono se laddu le le...

 

[Ankitarani]

Super se upar har ek pehlu, har ek mod... aur sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills ankita ma'am

Thanks youu...

 

[Ankitarani]

बहुत बहुत बधाई आपको Ankitarani जी।

आपको USC 2021 में विजेता का तृतीय पुरस्कार दिया गया। हमको पहले से मालूम था कि आपको पुरस्कार तो जरूर प्राप्त होगा।

एक बार फिर से आपको बहुत बहुत बधाई।

Thank u mahi ji...

 

[park]

UPDATE 28


Rakshita ne khud ke sath sath sherni or shawak ko bhi fruit khilaye...or khane ke bad...whi gufa me apne mitra...shawak se baate krne lgi....gufa me the...to koi dar bhi nhi tha....ab andhera jaada bdhta gya...or sbkuch dikhna bnad hota gya.....rakshita ki bhi ankhe lg gyi....


Subah jab ankh khuli to to nanha shawak rakshita ke lie 2fal or liye betha tha...lag rha tha jaise intjaar kr rha ho uske jaagne ka...

Rakshita-are mitra....tum jaag gye...kaisi nind aayi...or tumhari matashree kaha hai...
Kuch der me use sherni bhi baahr se aati hui dikhai deti hai...rakshita fal khati hai...or un dono ko bhi khilati hai...
Or ant me apne ghar jaane ke lie taiyar ho jaati hai...

Rakshita-mitra...tum apna or apni matashree ka khyal rkhna....mai bhi apni matashree ke pas jaa rhi hu....
Rakshita shwak ko bahuut sara pyar krti hai...or sherni ko pranam krke wha se nikal jaati hai...

Gufa se nikalti hai to shawak uske pichhe hi aarha tha...
Rakshita-mitra...mere sath mt ao...apni mata ke pas rho...
Itna sunkar shwak fir se wapas mud jata hai...or ekbar fir se rakshita ko mudkr dekhne lgta hai...
Rakshita chal deti hai...
Shawak use tab tk dekhta rahta hai...jb tak rakshita uski njro se ojhal nhi ho jaati......




In baato ko kai saal beet gye....samaay bahut bdl chuka tha...rakshita ab us natkhat rakshita se ab smjhdar rakshita bn gyi thi...ab wo baat baat pr...sbko mrutyudand dene ki baat nhi kahti thi...wo samjh chuki thi ki mrityu kya hoti hai.....uske samne...uske pdos me kai logo ki mrityu hui thi.....

Rakshita ab kaafi had tak smjhdar or guni ho gyi thi...wo ab apna jaada samay...pujan karyo me bitati thi...lekin uska ek swabhav ab bhi nhi bdla tha...wo tha...raksha karne ka...wo ab bhi...kisi jeev matra ki raksha krne k lie bhi...hmesha aage rahti thi.....


Yha bhupad ke karyasthal...mtlb rajbhavan me...rajneeti charam seema pr thi...yha 2gut ban to pahle se hi bje hue the ...pandav or korvo ka...korvo ka disha nirdesh shakuni mama krte the... To udhar pandvo ke sath shree krishna the.....wha dharm tha...yha adharm tha...rajneeti charm seema tak pahuch chuki thi...yudhh ka agaaj to pahe hi ho chuka tha...lekin ab lgbhag yudh sambhav hi ho chuka tha...lekin abhi bhi kuch vidwan... Or hastinapur ka achha chahne wale...yudh ko taalne hi chahte the...prayaas kr rhe the...ki yudh na ho...

Pandvo ke vanvas ko lekar teji se bahas chhidi hui thi...yha pandvo ka kahna tha ki unhone vanvas pura kr liya hai...lekin duryodhan is baat ko manne ko taiyar nhi tha....uska bs yhi kahna tha ki agyatwas ke antim din me usme pandvo ko pahchan liya tha...islie unhone ab dobara se 12varsh ka vanvas or 13ve varsh ka agyatvas lena hoga....


Idhar...shakuni samajh chuke the...ki yudh to hokar rhega...lekin yudh me...jeet pandvo ki hogi...kyuki unki taraf swayam ishwar the...shakuni ka sapna tha...ki jo bhishm pitamah ne apne bharatvarsh ko snjokar rkha tha...us bharatvarsh ko wo kabhi khushhali me nhi dekh sakta.....usne bhrat vansh ka styanash krne ki kasam khayi thi...lekin shre krishna ne bich me aakr,bhaanji hi palat di thi....


Shakuni mama ka koi priy tha hi nhi...na to duryodhan se unhe prem tha.....or na apne bahnoi dhritrashtra se....use to bs bharat vansh ka naash krna tha....lekin ab shrikrishna ke aane se...unka dimak me koi shadyantra panap rha tha...koi aisa shadyantra...jiski kaat shree krishna ke paas bhi na ho...koi aise shadyantra ki hi talash me tha mama shakuni...lekin sbko ye pta tha ki inka shadyantra bs mahabharat kraane tak hi simit hai...lekin inke shadyantra ki antim seema kha hai...ye to swayam bhishm pitamah ki bhi samajh se pre tha.....

Mama shakuni apne kaksh me idhar udhar vichran kr rhe the...
"Ye vasudev krishna...mere har shadyantra ko palat deta hai....maine subahdra se duryodhan ke vivah ka shadyantra racha tha...kintu vasudev ne use bhi vifal kr diya...kintu kabtk vasudev...kabtak...tum ye mere shadyantro ko vifal kr skte ho...kintu mera antim shadyamtra...achuuk hoga...achuk.....bharat vansh ka naash..awashya hoga....awashya...tb kya kroge mere priya bhanje..."mama shakuni apne chehre pr ek kutil muskaan liye soch rhe the...ki tbhi unke kaksh me kisi ke agmn ka abhas hota hai....

"Pranam mama shree"

Shakuni-aao angraj karn....aao...aaj bhala is mama shree ko kaise smaran kiya....

Maharathi karn-ye sb kya hai mama shree...kya hme vasudev ki baat pr tanik bhi vichar nhi krna chahiye....

Mama shakuni-kaisa vichar angraj...kya tum nhi chahte ki mahabharat ho....kya tum nhi chahte ki... Tumhare shaurya ko ye samast sansar jaane.... Kya tum...swayam ko arjun se nirbal manne lge ho angraj....

Karn-mama shree....yadi aap maharani gandhari ke bhrata shree na hue hote...to mai...
Shakuni-shant angraj shant.....itna krodh yadi mujhpr kroge to...wha ranbhumi me kya kroge....uchit hoga yadi is krodh ki agni ko apne baano ke sath milaakr...ranbhumi me un vaano ki varsha arjun pr kro to...

Karan-mamashrre....arjun se mai shreshtha hu...ye pramaan dene k lie..mai sankdo logo ko mrityu ki shaiyaa pr nhi sulana chahta....mahatrthi kisi nirapradh logo ki mtiyyu shaiyaa pr apna shorya nhi dikhate...apituuu

Mama shakuni-maharathi whi bota hai...jiska ek matra laskshya...ranbhumi me shaurya dikhana hota hai....tumhare mitra duryodhan yudh ke paksh me hai...tum yadi yudh me vipash me ho to ye vidroh hua na angraj....

Karan-apse baat krna hi vyarth hai..mai swayam mitra duryodhan se vartalaap krta hu .....itna bolkar angraj karan wha se nikal jaate hai...



Bhuapd-mala...hme jaldi se putri chanda ka vivah kra dena chahiye...kyuki rakshita bhi ab vivah ke yogya ho gyi hai...
Mala-ha swami...kintu koi uchit var mile tab na...
Bhupad-mere mitra ne...ek yuvak btaya hai...2gao dur...chanda ke lie uttam rhega...or uske bad fir rakshita ka vivah......
Mala-kintu rakshita hai kaha......
Bhupad-hogi kahi...kisi pujan karya me ....



"Hey rakshita.....aj to tum bahut sundar lag rhi ho..." Dur se rakshita ko aate dekh...uski ekatra saheli...arushi bolti hai...

Rakshita-ohhh....kya ye tum satya bol rhi ho..kintu mujhe lgta hai ki tum uphas kr rhi ho..
Arushi-are...mai satya bol rhi ho....
Rakshita-achha thik hai...ab chalo...hme pushp laane hai na...


Arushi-are...ye laddu to rakh do na....inhe kaha liye ja rhi ho....
Rakshita-kya tum nhi jaanti sakhi...yha khel rhe bachhe... Laddu ko kha gye to...

Arushi-are kintu....
Rakshita-chlo bhi....
Rakshita ke hath me ek tokri...jisme use fool laane the...or ek hath me ek kapde me badhe laddu...jo puja me istemaal krne the...
Dono fool lene chal dete hai....

Achank rakshita ko ek kutta betha hu dikhai deta hai....
Ralshita-are...lgta hai ye swsthya nhi hai....
Arushi-rakshita chal na....
Rakshita-haa kintu tum ruko to....

Rakshita us kutte ke pas jati hai...or uske sar pr hath firaati hai...
Arushi-rakshita...yadi hme der ho gyi to...pandit ji hm pr krodh krenge....

Rakshita-haa ruko....
Rakshita-kyaa hua tumhe...mitra...utho na...kya tumhe bhuk lgi hai....
Rakshita-ise bhuk lgi hai arushi...
Arushi-are chal na...bhuk lgi hai to hm kya kre...

Rakahita kuch sochte hue-ye lo mitta...tum laddu khalo...
Rakshita kutte ke aage laddu rakh deti hai...

Arushi ki ankhe ft jaati hai ye dekhkar
Arushi-rakshita ye kya kr rhi ho...kya tum nhi jaanti...ye laddu ka ishwar ko bhog lgna tha...ot tum...ishwar krodh krege...

Rakshita-mene to khila diye...dekho...ye kha rha hai...
Rakshiya kutte ke srpr haath firaane lgti hai...

Arushi-rakshita...kya tumhe bhay nhi lgta...
Ralshita-kya tum jaanti ho mera nam...
Arushi-haa ha janti hu...sainkdo baar sun chuki hu...tumhara nam bhishm pitamah ne rkha hai...

Rakshita-or wo raksha krne ke lie rakha hai...
Arushi-haa....or islieye tum har pashu pakshiyo ko raksha krne lg jaati ho...jaanti hu tumhe kisi ki peda nhi dekhi jaati..ye bhi janti hu ki kai bar...tum swayak sankat me pd chuki hi...raksha krne k lie...

Rakshita-haa...kintu mai pitamah ke diye hue naam ka maan kaise na rkhu bhala...
Arushi-tum janti ho...tumhe ktni bar kutta kaat chuka hai...ek bar to tumhe saanp ne das liya tha...jb tum uske samne dudh ka katora rakh rahi thi ..jaane kaise kaise tumhara pran bchaye the kakasree ne....

Rakshita-ab tum kahogi...ki ek baar...ek chhota gaj(गज)(hathi) gaddhhe me gir gya tha...or mai uski raksha krne us gaddhhe me kud pdi thi...or us chhote gaj ke niche swayam hi dab ghi thi.....


Arushi-ek nhi...najane kitni hi kahaniya hai...kintu tum ho ki maanti hi nhi ho...

Rakahita-arushi...najane kyu...aisa prateet hota hai ki...ye pashu hi mera priwar hai...ITNA SAMAY MAI MANUSHYO KE SATH NHi BITAUNGI...JITNA IN PASHUO KE SATH BITAUNGI.....bahut apnapn lgta hai mujhe....aisa prateet hota hai...ki bhavishya me yhi mera sath denge...jb mujhse surya ka prakash mukh mod lega...tb jugnu apne praksh se mara margdarshan krega...jb mujhse kisi manushyo ki vaani nhi sunai degi tb mere kano me inhi pakshiya chahchahana sunai dega...jb mujhe meri mata kahaniya nhi sunayegi...tb kokila mujhe apne madhur sangeet se andandit kregi.....

Arushi-kaha kho gyi tum...bhul gyi...hme chalna bhi hai...
Rakshita-haa chalo...
Arushi-kaha chalo...laddu to tumne us kutte ko khila diye....
Rakshita-ishwar ko bhi prashad islie arpan kiya jata hai...taki chhote jeev jantu us prashad ko kha ske...ishwar khud kaha khate hai usko....

Arushi-hey ishwar...ye bhi na...anargalan bate krti rahti hai bs....
Dono saheliya mandir ki taraf chal deti hai.....
Mandir bahut se shradhhalu the...or kuchh hath jode wha khade the....

Pandit ji-are...kitni der lgadi putri...chalo ye shradhhaluo ko ye laddu prashad ke roop me do...kintu pahle inka bhog awashya lga dena...

Itna bolkar pandit ji dusri taraf chal dete hai...
Arushi-laddu to nhi hai...ab kaise prashad dogi sbko...

Ralshita kuch sochte hue-ye to hai na...
Rakshita foolo ki tokri ki taraf ishara krti hai...
Arushi-arthaat....
Ralshita-dekho...
Rakshita sharadhaluo ko fool dena shuru kr deti hai...bde ajeeb trh se dekhte hai.
Sb...lekin sb lekar bs chal dete hai...
Lekin ek mahashay bol hi
pdte hai...

"Putri...aj prashad me ye pushp..."
Rakshita or arushi soch me pd jaate hai ki ab kya bole...
Rakshita-wo...kaka...jb vishnu ji ko ladduo ka bhog lgaya to.....
"To....to kya"
Rakshita-to...ishwar sare laddu kha gye...

"Kyaa....esa to kabhi nhi hua"wo aadmi bolta hai...

Rakshita-ha kintu aaj ho gya...heheh...
"Mahima ishawar ki"itna bolkar wo aadmi fool liye chal deta hai...


Arushi-tumne achha usko bahka diya.....
Rakshita muskurati hui sbhi ko fool batne lgti hai....


"Hey vishnu ji..mujhse itna sahas nhi...ki mai...mai kathor tap krke...apko prasann kr sku...prabhu vishnu ....kripya mujhe ese hi darshan de.....maine apni ankhe band ki hui hai...jaise hi mai apni ankhe kholu...mujhe apke darshan hone chahiye ishwar.....kripya kr mujhe daeshan de...hey ishwar...mujhe darshan de...kripya mujhe darshan de ishwar...mai apni ankho khol rha hu....mai khol rha hu ishwar..."ek ladka khada ankhe bnad kiye hue...ishwar ke samne khada tha...or ishwar ko darshan dene ki baat bol rha tha...

Jaise hi ankhe kholi... ye kya...samne ishwar nhi...ek ldki thi...jiske hath me pushp the...
Rakshita-prashad....

Wo ladka prashad ko dekhta hai...prahsad ke nam pr fool the ..
Ladka-ye prashad kaha hai...ye to pushp hai...

Rakshita-laddu to vishnu ji kha gye...shradhhaluo ke lie yhi bche hai...kripya grahan kre....
Ldka-tum mithya bolti ho...mai to roj bhog lgata hu...hmare laddu to kabhi nhi kahye...

Rakshita-sachhe mn...or pavitra atma se se jis din prathna kroge na...ishwar swayam aakr tumhare hatho se bhojan krege....

Itne me hi pandit ji aajate hai achank...
Pandit-putri rakshita...ye mai...
Rakshita pandit ji ko dekhakr dar jaati hai...sochti hai ab kya kru...
Wo dekhti hai us ldke ke hath me ab bhi pushp the...jo dikh rhe the....

Ladka-aa...
Ldka "aap"bolne wala hota hai...lekin "aa"bolkar jaise hi uska muh khula hai...rakshjta ekdm uske hath ke niche apna hath rakhkr uske muh ki taraf dhakel deti hai...


Muh khula hone ki vajah se...2pushp jo hath me the...wo uske muh me chale jaate hai...
Us ladke ki ankhe fat jaati hai...bechara kuch bol hi nhi pata....

Pandit ji wha aakr-putri rakshita...shradhhaluo ko prashad dekar...jra yha thoda sfaai kr dena...mai abhi ghar ho aata hu...

Pandit jb chalne ko hote hai...ki us ldke ka muh kuch fula hua sa dekhte hai...
Pandit ji-kyu putra...prashad swadisht nhi hai kya...

Ladka to ankhe badi krke bs dekhta rahta hai idhar udhsr...
Rakshita-swadish hai ....abhi bahut shradhhaluo me bola....

Pandit-hare vishnu...hare raam...
Itna kahkr pandit ji chale jaate hai...

Wo ladka rakshita ki tafaf dekhta hai...
Rakshita apne gle pr hath lgakar use satakne ka ishara krti hai....

Wo ldka ekdm dono fool satak jaata hai...
Ldka-ye kya hai...tumne mujhe pushp khila diye...
Rakshita-ye ishwar ka prashad tha...ab apko ishwar ke darhan awashya honge...

Ladka khush hota hua-kya ye satya hai...
Rakahita-ha ye ekdm satya hai...ab tumhe ishwar ke darshan awashya ho jayege..wo bhi Bina kathor tap kiye...
Ladka muskurata hua wha se chala jata hai...

Arushi-tumne use bahka diya na...
"Hahaha..."dono saheliya hasne lgti hai...


"Yrrr usne kya kaha...ki ab darshan ho jayege...aise kaise ho sakte hai...usne bs pushp hi to khilaye...."us ldke ka ek dost usse chalta hua puchta hai...

"Pta nhi ...kintu...hm dekh to skte hai na..."

"Mujhe lgta hai usne tumse mithya bol diya...bhala ushwar ke darshan,kathor tap ke bina kise hue hai..."

"Arthaat...tum ye kahna chahte ho...ki mujhe ishwar ke darshan nhi honge..."

"Ab yadi tum meri bat pr krodh na kro to...satya bol sakta hu..."

"Haa bolo...nhi krunga krodh..."

"Tum thahre nikamme...koi karya nhi krte...tumhare mata pita ki tum aagya nhi mante... Kbhi ishwar ke samaksh diya tak nho jlaate...to ishwar tumhe darshsn kaise denge..."

"Tum mera uphaas kr rhe ho na...ye uchit nhi hai.."

"Hahaha....are chhama kro mitra...kintu ye satya to hai na...bina kathor tap kiye...bhala kaha kisi ko shree hari vishnu ke darshan hue hai..."

"Mujhe honge...tum dekhna...awashya honge..."



Rakshita ghar jati hai....jaha uski mata use dekhti hi uspr baras pdti hai.
Maala-kaha thi tum...tumhe gyat bhi hai ki tumhara ek ghar hai...us ghr me tumhare agraj,anuj hai...tumhare mata pita hai.....

Rakshita-matshree....mandir me thi...tum bahut vichlit hoti ho....
Mala-haa...balyakaal se hi tum hme vichlit krti aarhi ho...ab kaha jaa rhi ho...

Rakshita-matashree...mai van se fal lene jaa rhi hu...tum vuchlit mt hov maata shree...mai jald aajangi.....meri sakhiya bhi mere sath hai.....

Mala-rakshita....van me bahut pashu hote hai putri....
Rakahita-mata...pashu to mere mitra hai na....ap chintit mt hoiye....mai abhii aati hu...
Mala ek tokri uthakar apni 2saheliyo ke sath van me chali jaati hai....

Ye teeno van me pahuch jaate hai...
Rakshita-are arushi...tanik dhyan se...yha pashu bhi hote hai...
Arushi-are....pashu to tumhare mitra hai na...to kyu bhaybheet hoti ho...
Rakshita-sabhi pashu mitra nhi hai na...orrr abhi kuch pashu mujhse anbhigya hai.....

"Hahahaha..."reeno haste hue van se fal todne lgti hai...
Ye van gao ke pas hi tha..
Jada dur nhi tha...to inhe jaada dr bhi nhi tha...lekin...aafat to kahi bhi aa sakti hai......

Rakshita or dono saheli fal tod rhi thi...ki tabhi kuch janvro ke bhagne ki awaaj aati hai...jo chillakar bhag rhe the....

Teeno ye sunkar chaunk jaate hai...
Rakshita-kyaa...hua...ye vaani...kya hua in pashuo ko.....

Arushi-ishwar jaane...prr mujhe bahut hi bhay lag rha hai......
Itne me hi achank ek heeran rakshita ke paas bhaga hua aata hai...or ekdm pichhe se ek teer aaya...or us heeran ko aa lga...
Teeno ladkiya drke maare muh pr hath rakh leti hai.....
Teer lgnne se wo heern rakshita ke paas aa gira...

Rakshita khud ko smbhalti hai...or wo heeran jo niche gira hua tadap rha tha...uske pas beth jaati hai...rakshita rone jaisi ho jaati hai...
Rakshita-mitra.....ye kya hua...kisne kiya mitra...mai...ruko...tum hilna mt mitra...

Or rakshita himmt krke uska teer pakadkar kheech deti hai...
Lekin bahut jaada khun nikalne se wo heerna teer ke nikalte hi mr jaata hai...
Rakshita ki ankho me aansu aajate hai...
Ralshita-mitra utho.....mitra...tumhe ese mrityu nhi aasakti...utho mirta.....
Rakshita roti hui us mre hue heeran ko uthane ki koshish krti hai...

Arushi darti hui arushi ke kandhe pe hath rakhti hui-rakshita...chalo yha se...yha koi bde sankat ka abhas ho rha hai...chalo rakshita....


"Kon ho tum..."itne me kisi se awaaj aayi pichhe se...or jaise hi teeno ne awaj ka pichha kiya to...ek junglee sa aadmi...ajeeb kapde pahne or hath me dhanush baan liye khada tha...

Rakshiya-tum kon ho.....kya is mrugg ko tumne maara...

Junglee admi-haa...hmne ise ghayal kiya...
Rakshita-kya tumhare andar daya nhi ...kyu mara is chhote se pashu ko....yadi koi tumhe maar de...athwa tumhare putra ko maar de....


Jungleee-hey kanya...ye kya anargalan baate bole jaa rhi ho....is mrugg ko hmne maara hai...ise hme do....

Ralshita-nhi...mai nhi dungi...
Arushi-rakshita dede na...or chal...bahut bhay lg rha hai....

Ralshita roti hui-kaisi baate kr rhi ho tum...is nirdayi manushya ne isko maar diya...or tum...

Itne me 20,25log or us aadmi ke pichhe aajate hai...
Ab to rakshita ki dono saheliya buri trh ghabra gyi thi...
wo sbhi aadmi aakar us pahle wale junglee aadmi ke pichhe khade ho jaate hai...

Rakshita-dushto...tumne ye uchit nhi kiya....
Junglee admi ka srdar-jao..is kanya se bal purvak us mrug ko le aao...

Rakshita-nhi...mai nhi dungi....
Arushi-rakshita dedo...or chalo...
Dusri saheli-haa rakshita...jaldi chalo..ye mrug to mrityu ko praprt ho chuka hai...dedo ise...

Ralshita-nhi...mai nhi dungi...

Ek admi rakshita ki or badhe jaa rha tha...rakshita ab bhi bethi us heeran lo sahla rhi thi...

Or ab wo aadmi rakshita ke paas aajata hai....
Rakshita-nhiii...mai nhi dungi....
Wo aamdi rakshita se heeran ko chhinne lgta hai....
Rakshita ekdm pichhe ki taraf hatkar ek laat us aadmi ke seene me maarti hai...
Aadmi piche ki or jaa gira....

Ab to dono saheliyo ko kamp kampi chadh gyi thi.....

Sbhi jungle aadmi ka gusse ab satve aasman prr tha...

Jo aadmi rakshita ki laat lagkar gira tha... Wo khada hota hai.....
"Murkh kannya...ye dussahas...."
Itna bolkar wo admi rakshita ko bhaala fenk kar maarta hai....

"Aaaa.....mataaa..."rakshita or dono ldkiyo ki cheelh nikla gyi...or teeno ankhe band ke leti hai...

"Faaaayyyyyyyyy..."hawa ki speed se rakshita ke pichhe se ek teer aaya...or rakshita ko lgne se pahle bhale ko ,bich se cheerta hua..
Us aadmi ki ankh se paar nikal gya...or samne ped prr jaa gda....

"Aaaaahhhhhhhh...meri ankhhhhh....aaaaa...mujhe bchao....."wo aadmi ankh pr hath rakhte hue cheekh pda......

Sbhi jungle aaadmiyo ki ankhe fati rah gyi...or jb sbhi us ped ko dekhte hai...to wha teer ki nok pr...us aadmi ki ankh gadi hui thi...


Sbhi ki dekhakr kampkpi chhoot gyi...tni ajeeb teerandaji to unhone kbhi nhi dekhi rhi.....
Teer ki speed itni jada tej...ki bhaale ko cheera to thik...lekin ankh pr lgne ke bad...ankh sahit wo teer sr ke piche bhag se paar nikla...or ankh usi me gadi hui thi...

Rakshita or saheliyo ne ankhe band ki hui thi...cheekh sunnr pr unhone jb ankhe kholi to wo sb bhi hairan rah gye ...


Jungle aadmi ankhe faade rakhita ke pichhe dekhte hai....

Rakshita ke pichhe ek ped tha...wha se ek ekdm ek yuvak nikalkr aata hai...
Jisne muh pr ek kapda bandha tha...or hath me dhanush baan the....

"Kkon ho tumm...or hmse kya shatruta hai......."un jungleeyo ka srdar bolta hai....

"Mai...kon hu ye prashann nhi hai...prshann ye hai...ki apna samarthya...kanyao pr kyu dikha rhe ho...yadi itna samrthya hai...to mere samaksh khade ho jao...hai koi samathyawan....."


Jungleeo ka sardar-dhanurvidhya pr itna abhimaan....kadachit tumne...eklavya ka nam nhi suna...yadi suna hota ...to hmare samne samarthya ki baat na krte...

"Eklavya se bda dhanurdhar bhala kon ho sakta hai...mera pranam us eklavya ko...kintu tum log anarth kr rhe ho....anarth yadi swayam ishwar bhi kre...to mai unke samaksh bhi khada ho jaunga.....shree shree eklavya ke naam ke piche tum sbhi apni kayarta ko mt chhipao....ek kanya pr prahar krna....ye kaha ki veerta hai....or mujhe abhimaan nhi ...tanik bhi nhi.....mai dhanush ban hi nhi...mall yudh bhi naanta hu..

Itna bolkar wo ladka apne dhanush baan dharti pr daal deta hai.....

"Jao..."wo aadmi...apne aadmiyo ke jhund se ek aadmi ki taraf jaane ka ishara krta hai...
Or ek hattta khatta aadmi us ladke ki taarf bhagkr jaata hai...

"Yaaaaaaa....."chillata hu wo aadmi us ldke ki or bhagta hai...

Wo ladka thoda pichhe hat'ta hai...or uchhalta hua...or us aadmi ka sar pakadta hai...or bht jor ke sath hawa me se hi...dharti se de maarta hai.....

"Dhadaaam ki awaaaj aayi..."or wo admi 2tappe jaise kha gya dharti se lgte hi.....

Us ldke ki bahduri dekhkar sb chaunk jaate hai...

"AKaramann.."jor se wo junglee admiyo ka leader chillaata hai....
sbhi apna apna bhala fenkkar maarte hai...

Wo ladka ab thoda ghabra jaata hai...kyuki dhanush wo chhod chuka tha...or ek dm itne sare bhale maare gye...
Wo ldka niche bethkar apne dono hath apne sr pr rakh leta hai.......

"Faayee"ekdm ek or teer chalne ki awaaj aayi...

Rakshita or dono sahliyo hairan ho jati hai...or unke sath wo junglee log bhi...
Wo ladka ko jb koi bhala nhi lga...to usne upr dekha...to hairan rah gya wo bhi...kyuki uske sr pr...baano ki ek chhat bni hui thi...jiske upr bhale gire hue the...


Sbhi hairani se najar uthakr dekhte hai to samne se...swayam pitamah bhishm aarhe the...jinke hath me dhanush baan the...

Jaise hi wo samne aate hai...junglee sahit sbhi unko pranam krte hai...

Pitamah bhishm-kya ho rha hai ye sb...
Jungliyo ka sardar-pitamah...hm to pashuo ka shikar krke...apna bharan poshan krte hai...kintu ye kanya...achank bich me agyi...or hmne ise roka to ye yuvak...yudh krme pr utaaru ho gya...

Yuvak-pitamah...inhone is kanya pr akraman kiya....
Pitamah-hme koi prmaan dene ki awashyakra nhi hai...hm yhi the...or sb dekh rhe the...ki kaise in logo ne is kanya pr bhale se prahar kiya...or is yuvak ne...use bchaya...


Jungliyo ka srdar najar nichi kr leta hai.....
Pitamah-btao vanraaj.....dosh kiska hai....

"Pitamah...ye kanya ne hm pr prahar kiya..atahh..."
Pitamah-kya prahar kiya...or bhala ek sukomal kanya ke waar ka kaisa asar...tumne to uske praan hi lene ki thaan li thi...

"Pitamah...ye hme wo mrugg nhi de rhi thi..."
Rakshita-piyamah...inhe koi adhikar nhi kisi pashu ko maarne ka...kyu maara is mrug ko...ye dusht hai pitamah.....

Pitamah-putri...pratyek jeev ek dusre pr nirbhar hai...ye prakriti ka niyam hai...hm isme parivartan nhi kar skte....

Rakahiita-kar sakte hai pitmah...yadi ek singni ek fal kha sakti hai...to hm manush...fal khakar jeevit nhi rak sakte kya...

Pitamah-kya...singhni..phal...?
Ralshita-haa piyamah...mene balyakal me...ek shawal ko bchaya tha...uski maata ne mere hath se fal kahaya tha...to hm mnushya kyu nhi khaa sakte....jbki singhni to keval maans khati hai...hmare pas to fir bhi vikalp hai...

Pitamah kuch sochne lgte hai...
Pitamah-kahi tum rakshita to nhi ho.....
Rakshita-ha pitamah...mai rakhita hi hu...ye nam mujhe apne hi diya tha...

Pitamah ke chehre pr muskan aajati hai...
Pitamah-vanraaj...ye kanya yadi kisi bhi pashu ki raksha kre...to tum use nhi rokoge....ye hamra adesh hai...

"Jo aagya pitamah..."
Pitamah us yuvak ke pas jaate hai...
Pitamah-adbhut yuvak...tumhari veerta prashansniy hai.....kon ho tumm..

"Chhama kre pitamah...mai ye nhi bta skta ki mai kon hu...mai vivash hu..."

Pitamah-aisi kya vivashta....
"Chhama kre pitamah....ye bhi nhi bta sakta...".


Pitamah-kintu...jitne achhe tum yodhha ho...hme gyan hona chahiye ki tum kon ho..anyatha...tum rajya ke lie sankat bhi ban skte ho...

Wo yuvak hath jodkr-pitamah...is sampuran sansar me...ishwar ke atirikt kisi me itna samarthya nhi ...ki apke samaksh khada bhi ho sake...rajya ko sankat se bchane ke lie mai pratibaddh hu pitamam...rajya pr sankat mai kaise ban skra hu bhala...or apke rahte...is rajya pr kbhi koi sankat aa nhi sakta pitamah....

Pitamah-thik hai yuvak....kintu tumhara dhanyawd..tumne in kanyao ko bchaya...or vanaraaj...hm tumhe tumhare is apradh ka dand bhi de sakte hai....ek kanya pr shatra uthana...ghor apradh hai.....



"Chhama kre pitamah.....aisa nhi hoga ab kbhi..."
Pitamah-jao...or dhyan rkhna...

Wo yuvak bhi wha se chala jaata hai...or junglee log bhi...
Rakshita-dhanyawad pitamah......
Pitamah-rakshita...tum sadaiv sankat me kyu pdti rahti ho putri...

Rakshita-apne mera naam rakshita rakha hai na pitamah...islie...
Pitamah-to tumne...wo prn tod hi diya tha...or us shawak ko uski maata se milwa diya tha...

Rakshita pitamah ko saaree baat btatai hai...



Next update will come soon....

Nice and superb update...

 

[dhparikh]

UPDATE 28


Rakshita ne khud ke sath sath sherni or shawak ko bhi fruit khilaye...or khane ke bad...whi gufa me apne mitra...shawak se baate krne lgi....gufa me the...to koi dar bhi nhi tha....ab andhera jaada bdhta gya...or sbkuch dikhna bnad hota gya.....rakshita ki bhi ankhe lg gyi....


Subah jab ankh khuli to to nanha shawak rakshita ke lie 2fal or liye betha tha...lag rha tha jaise intjaar kr rha ho uske jaagne ka...

Rakshita-are mitra....tum jaag gye...kaisi nind aayi...or tumhari matashree kaha hai...
Kuch der me use sherni bhi baahr se aati hui dikhai deti hai...rakshita fal khati hai...or un dono ko bhi khilati hai...
Or ant me apne ghar jaane ke lie taiyar ho jaati hai...

Rakshita-mitra...tum apna or apni matashree ka khyal rkhna....mai bhi apni matashree ke pas jaa rhi hu....
Rakshita shwak ko bahuut sara pyar krti hai...or sherni ko pranam krke wha se nikal jaati hai...

Gufa se nikalti hai to shawak uske pichhe hi aarha tha...
Rakshita-mitra...mere sath mt ao...apni mata ke pas rho...
Itna sunkar shwak fir se wapas mud jata hai...or ekbar fir se rakshita ko mudkr dekhne lgta hai...
Rakshita chal deti hai...
Shawak use tab tk dekhta rahta hai...jb tak rakshita uski njro se ojhal nhi ho jaati......




In baato ko kai saal beet gye....samaay bahut bdl chuka tha...rakshita ab us natkhat rakshita se ab smjhdar rakshita bn gyi thi...ab wo baat baat pr...sbko mrutyudand dene ki baat nhi kahti thi...wo samjh chuki thi ki mrityu kya hoti hai.....uske samne...uske pdos me kai logo ki mrityu hui thi.....

Rakshita ab kaafi had tak smjhdar or guni ho gyi thi...wo ab apna jaada samay...pujan karyo me bitati thi...lekin uska ek swabhav ab bhi nhi bdla tha...wo tha...raksha karne ka...wo ab bhi...kisi jeev matra ki raksha krne k lie bhi...hmesha aage rahti thi.....


Yha bhupad ke karyasthal...mtlb rajbhavan me...rajneeti charam seema pr thi...yha 2gut ban to pahle se hi bje hue the ...pandav or korvo ka...korvo ka disha nirdesh shakuni mama krte the... To udhar pandvo ke sath shree krishna the.....wha dharm tha...yha adharm tha...rajneeti charm seema tak pahuch chuki thi...yudhh ka agaaj to pahe hi ho chuka tha...lekin ab lgbhag yudh sambhav hi ho chuka tha...lekin abhi bhi kuch vidwan... Or hastinapur ka achha chahne wale...yudh ko taalne hi chahte the...prayaas kr rhe the...ki yudh na ho...

Pandvo ke vanvas ko lekar teji se bahas chhidi hui thi...yha pandvo ka kahna tha ki unhone vanvas pura kr liya hai...lekin duryodhan is baat ko manne ko taiyar nhi tha....uska bs yhi kahna tha ki agyatwas ke antim din me usme pandvo ko pahchan liya tha...islie unhone ab dobara se 12varsh ka vanvas or 13ve varsh ka agyatvas lena hoga....


Idhar...shakuni samajh chuke the...ki yudh to hokar rhega...lekin yudh me...jeet pandvo ki hogi...kyuki unki taraf swayam ishwar the...shakuni ka sapna tha...ki jo bhishm pitamah ne apne bharatvarsh ko snjokar rkha tha...us bharatvarsh ko wo kabhi khushhali me nhi dekh sakta.....usne bhrat vansh ka styanash krne ki kasam khayi thi...lekin shre krishna ne bich me aakr,bhaanji hi palat di thi....


Shakuni mama ka koi priy tha hi nhi...na to duryodhan se unhe prem tha.....or na apne bahnoi dhritrashtra se....use to bs bharat vansh ka naash krna tha....lekin ab shrikrishna ke aane se...unka dimak me koi shadyantra panap rha tha...koi aisa shadyantra...jiski kaat shree krishna ke paas bhi na ho...koi aise shadyantra ki hi talash me tha mama shakuni...lekin sbko ye pta tha ki inka shadyantra bs mahabharat kraane tak hi simit hai...lekin inke shadyantra ki antim seema kha hai...ye to swayam bhishm pitamah ki bhi samajh se pre tha.....

Mama shakuni apne kaksh me idhar udhar vichran kr rhe the...
"Ye vasudev krishna...mere har shadyantra ko palat deta hai....maine subahdra se duryodhan ke vivah ka shadyantra racha tha...kintu vasudev ne use bhi vifal kr diya...kintu kabtk vasudev...kabtak...tum ye mere shadyantro ko vifal kr skte ho...kintu mera antim shadyamtra...achuuk hoga...achuk.....bharat vansh ka naash..awashya hoga....awashya...tb kya kroge mere priya bhanje..."mama shakuni apne chehre pr ek kutil muskaan liye soch rhe the...ki tbhi unke kaksh me kisi ke agmn ka abhas hota hai....

"Pranam mama shree"

Shakuni-aao angraj karn....aao...aaj bhala is mama shree ko kaise smaran kiya....

Maharathi karn-ye sb kya hai mama shree...kya hme vasudev ki baat pr tanik bhi vichar nhi krna chahiye....

Mama shakuni-kaisa vichar angraj...kya tum nhi chahte ki mahabharat ho....kya tum nhi chahte ki... Tumhare shaurya ko ye samast sansar jaane.... Kya tum...swayam ko arjun se nirbal manne lge ho angraj....

Karn-mama shree....yadi aap maharani gandhari ke bhrata shree na hue hote...to mai...
Shakuni-shant angraj shant.....itna krodh yadi mujhpr kroge to...wha ranbhumi me kya kroge....uchit hoga yadi is krodh ki agni ko apne baano ke sath milaakr...ranbhumi me un vaano ki varsha arjun pr kro to...

Karan-mamashrre....arjun se mai shreshtha hu...ye pramaan dene k lie..mai sankdo logo ko mrityu ki shaiyaa pr nhi sulana chahta....mahatrthi kisi nirapradh logo ki mtiyyu shaiyaa pr apna shorya nhi dikhate...apituuu

Mama shakuni-maharathi whi bota hai...jiska ek matra laskshya...ranbhumi me shaurya dikhana hota hai....tumhare mitra duryodhan yudh ke paksh me hai...tum yadi yudh me vipash me ho to ye vidroh hua na angraj....

Karan-apse baat krna hi vyarth hai..mai swayam mitra duryodhan se vartalaap krta hu .....itna bolkar angraj karan wha se nikal jaate hai...



Bhuapd-mala...hme jaldi se putri chanda ka vivah kra dena chahiye...kyuki rakshita bhi ab vivah ke yogya ho gyi hai...
Mala-ha swami...kintu koi uchit var mile tab na...
Bhupad-mere mitra ne...ek yuvak btaya hai...2gao dur...chanda ke lie uttam rhega...or uske bad fir rakshita ka vivah......
Mala-kintu rakshita hai kaha......
Bhupad-hogi kahi...kisi pujan karya me ....



"Hey rakshita.....aj to tum bahut sundar lag rhi ho..." Dur se rakshita ko aate dekh...uski ekatra saheli...arushi bolti hai...

Rakshita-ohhh....kya ye tum satya bol rhi ho..kintu mujhe lgta hai ki tum uphas kr rhi ho..
Arushi-are...mai satya bol rhi ho....
Rakshita-achha thik hai...ab chalo...hme pushp laane hai na...


Arushi-are...ye laddu to rakh do na....inhe kaha liye ja rhi ho....
Rakshita-kya tum nhi jaanti sakhi...yha khel rhe bachhe... Laddu ko kha gye to...

Arushi-are kintu....
Rakshita-chlo bhi....
Rakshita ke hath me ek tokri...jisme use fool laane the...or ek hath me ek kapde me badhe laddu...jo puja me istemaal krne the...
Dono fool lene chal dete hai....

Achank rakshita ko ek kutta betha hu dikhai deta hai....
Ralshita-are...lgta hai ye swsthya nhi hai....
Arushi-rakshita chal na....
Rakshita-haa kintu tum ruko to....

Rakshita us kutte ke pas jati hai...or uske sar pr hath firaati hai...
Arushi-rakshita...yadi hme der ho gyi to...pandit ji hm pr krodh krenge....

Rakshita-haa ruko....
Rakshita-kyaa hua tumhe...mitra...utho na...kya tumhe bhuk lgi hai....
Rakshita-ise bhuk lgi hai arushi...
Arushi-are chal na...bhuk lgi hai to hm kya kre...

Rakahita kuch sochte hue-ye lo mitta...tum laddu khalo...
Rakshita kutte ke aage laddu rakh deti hai...

Arushi ki ankhe ft jaati hai ye dekhkar
Arushi-rakshita ye kya kr rhi ho...kya tum nhi jaanti...ye laddu ka ishwar ko bhog lgna tha...ot tum...ishwar krodh krege...

Rakshita-mene to khila diye...dekho...ye kha rha hai...
Rakshiya kutte ke srpr haath firaane lgti hai...

Arushi-rakshita...kya tumhe bhay nhi lgta...
Ralshita-kya tum jaanti ho mera nam...
Arushi-haa ha janti hu...sainkdo baar sun chuki hu...tumhara nam bhishm pitamah ne rkha hai...

Rakshita-or wo raksha krne ke lie rakha hai...
Arushi-haa....or islieye tum har pashu pakshiyo ko raksha krne lg jaati ho...jaanti hu tumhe kisi ki peda nhi dekhi jaati..ye bhi janti hu ki kai bar...tum swayak sankat me pd chuki hi...raksha krne k lie...

Rakshita-haa...kintu mai pitamah ke diye hue naam ka maan kaise na rkhu bhala...
Arushi-tum janti ho...tumhe ktni bar kutta kaat chuka hai...ek bar to tumhe saanp ne das liya tha...jb tum uske samne dudh ka katora rakh rahi thi ..jaane kaise kaise tumhara pran bchaye the kakasree ne....

Rakshita-ab tum kahogi...ki ek baar...ek chhota gaj(गज)(hathi) gaddhhe me gir gya tha...or mai uski raksha krne us gaddhhe me kud pdi thi...or us chhote gaj ke niche swayam hi dab ghi thi.....


Arushi-ek nhi...najane kitni hi kahaniya hai...kintu tum ho ki maanti hi nhi ho...

Rakahita-arushi...najane kyu...aisa prateet hota hai ki...ye pashu hi mera priwar hai...ITNA SAMAY MAI MANUSHYO KE SATH NHi BITAUNGI...JITNA IN PASHUO KE SATH BITAUNGI.....bahut apnapn lgta hai mujhe....aisa prateet hota hai...ki bhavishya me yhi mera sath denge...jb mujhse surya ka prakash mukh mod lega...tb jugnu apne praksh se mara margdarshan krega...jb mujhse kisi manushyo ki vaani nhi sunai degi tb mere kano me inhi pakshiya chahchahana sunai dega...jb mujhe meri mata kahaniya nhi sunayegi...tb kokila mujhe apne madhur sangeet se andandit kregi.....

Arushi-kaha kho gyi tum...bhul gyi...hme chalna bhi hai...
Rakshita-haa chalo...
Arushi-kaha chalo...laddu to tumne us kutte ko khila diye....
Rakshita-ishwar ko bhi prashad islie arpan kiya jata hai...taki chhote jeev jantu us prashad ko kha ske...ishwar khud kaha khate hai usko....

Arushi-hey ishwar...ye bhi na...anargalan bate krti rahti hai bs....
Dono saheliya mandir ki taraf chal deti hai.....
Mandir bahut se shradhhalu the...or kuchh hath jode wha khade the....

Pandit ji-are...kitni der lgadi putri...chalo ye shradhhaluo ko ye laddu prashad ke roop me do...kintu pahle inka bhog awashya lga dena...

Itna bolkar pandit ji dusri taraf chal dete hai...
Arushi-laddu to nhi hai...ab kaise prashad dogi sbko...

Ralshita kuch sochte hue-ye to hai na...
Rakshita foolo ki tokri ki taraf ishara krti hai...
Arushi-arthaat....
Ralshita-dekho...
Rakshita sharadhaluo ko fool dena shuru kr deti hai...bde ajeeb trh se dekhte hai.
Sb...lekin sb lekar bs chal dete hai...
Lekin ek mahashay bol hi
pdte hai...

"Putri...aj prashad me ye pushp..."
Rakshita or arushi soch me pd jaate hai ki ab kya bole...
Rakshita-wo...kaka...jb vishnu ji ko ladduo ka bhog lgaya to.....
"To....to kya"
Rakshita-to...ishwar sare laddu kha gye...

"Kyaa....esa to kabhi nhi hua"wo aadmi bolta hai...

Rakshita-ha kintu aaj ho gya...heheh...
"Mahima ishawar ki"itna bolkar wo aadmi fool liye chal deta hai...


Arushi-tumne achha usko bahka diya.....
Rakshita muskurati hui sbhi ko fool batne lgti hai....


"Hey vishnu ji..mujhse itna sahas nhi...ki mai...mai kathor tap krke...apko prasann kr sku...prabhu vishnu ....kripya mujhe ese hi darshan de.....maine apni ankhe band ki hui hai...jaise hi mai apni ankhe kholu...mujhe apke darshan hone chahiye ishwar.....kripya kr mujhe daeshan de...hey ishwar...mujhe darshan de...kripya mujhe darshan de ishwar...mai apni ankho khol rha hu....mai khol rha hu ishwar..."ek ladka khada ankhe bnad kiye hue...ishwar ke samne khada tha...or ishwar ko darshan dene ki baat bol rha tha...

Jaise hi ankhe kholi... ye kya...samne ishwar nhi...ek ldki thi...jiske hath me pushp the...
Rakshita-prashad....

Wo ladka prashad ko dekhta hai...prahsad ke nam pr fool the ..
Ladka-ye prashad kaha hai...ye to pushp hai...

Rakshita-laddu to vishnu ji kha gye...shradhhaluo ke lie yhi bche hai...kripya grahan kre....
Ldka-tum mithya bolti ho...mai to roj bhog lgata hu...hmare laddu to kabhi nhi kahye...

Rakshita-sachhe mn...or pavitra atma se se jis din prathna kroge na...ishwar swayam aakr tumhare hatho se bhojan krege....

Itne me hi pandit ji aajate hai achank...
Pandit-putri rakshita...ye mai...
Rakshita pandit ji ko dekhakr dar jaati hai...sochti hai ab kya kru...
Wo dekhti hai us ldke ke hath me ab bhi pushp the...jo dikh rhe the....

Ladka-aa...
Ldka "aap"bolne wala hota hai...lekin "aa"bolkar jaise hi uska muh khula hai...rakshjta ekdm uske hath ke niche apna hath rakhkr uske muh ki taraf dhakel deti hai...


Muh khula hone ki vajah se...2pushp jo hath me the...wo uske muh me chale jaate hai...
Us ladke ki ankhe fat jaati hai...bechara kuch bol hi nhi pata....

Pandit ji wha aakr-putri rakshita...shradhhaluo ko prashad dekar...jra yha thoda sfaai kr dena...mai abhi ghar ho aata hu...

Pandit jb chalne ko hote hai...ki us ldke ka muh kuch fula hua sa dekhte hai...
Pandit ji-kyu putra...prashad swadisht nhi hai kya...

Ladka to ankhe badi krke bs dekhta rahta hai idhar udhsr...
Rakshita-swadish hai ....abhi bahut shradhhaluo me bola....

Pandit-hare vishnu...hare raam...
Itna kahkr pandit ji chale jaate hai...

Wo ladka rakshita ki tafaf dekhta hai...
Rakshita apne gle pr hath lgakar use satakne ka ishara krti hai....

Wo ldka ekdm dono fool satak jaata hai...
Ldka-ye kya hai...tumne mujhe pushp khila diye...
Rakshita-ye ishwar ka prashad tha...ab apko ishwar ke darhan awashya honge...

Ladka khush hota hua-kya ye satya hai...
Rakahita-ha ye ekdm satya hai...ab tumhe ishwar ke darshan awashya ho jayege..wo bhi Bina kathor tap kiye...
Ladka muskurata hua wha se chala jata hai...

Arushi-tumne use bahka diya na...
"Hahaha..."dono saheliya hasne lgti hai...


"Yrrr usne kya kaha...ki ab darshan ho jayege...aise kaise ho sakte hai...usne bs pushp hi to khilaye...."us ldke ka ek dost usse chalta hua puchta hai...

"Pta nhi ...kintu...hm dekh to skte hai na..."

"Mujhe lgta hai usne tumse mithya bol diya...bhala ushwar ke darshan,kathor tap ke bina kise hue hai..."

"Arthaat...tum ye kahna chahte ho...ki mujhe ishwar ke darshan nhi honge..."

"Ab yadi tum meri bat pr krodh na kro to...satya bol sakta hu..."

"Haa bolo...nhi krunga krodh..."

"Tum thahre nikamme...koi karya nhi krte...tumhare mata pita ki tum aagya nhi mante... Kbhi ishwar ke samaksh diya tak nho jlaate...to ishwar tumhe darshsn kaise denge..."

"Tum mera uphaas kr rhe ho na...ye uchit nhi hai.."

"Hahaha....are chhama kro mitra...kintu ye satya to hai na...bina kathor tap kiye...bhala kaha kisi ko shree hari vishnu ke darshan hue hai..."

"Mujhe honge...tum dekhna...awashya honge..."



Rakshita ghar jati hai....jaha uski mata use dekhti hi uspr baras pdti hai.
Maala-kaha thi tum...tumhe gyat bhi hai ki tumhara ek ghar hai...us ghr me tumhare agraj,anuj hai...tumhare mata pita hai.....

Rakshita-matshree....mandir me thi...tum bahut vichlit hoti ho....
Mala-haa...balyakaal se hi tum hme vichlit krti aarhi ho...ab kaha jaa rhi ho...

Rakshita-matashree...mai van se fal lene jaa rhi hu...tum vuchlit mt hov maata shree...mai jald aajangi.....meri sakhiya bhi mere sath hai.....

Mala-rakshita....van me bahut pashu hote hai putri....
Rakahita-mata...pashu to mere mitra hai na....ap chintit mt hoiye....mai abhii aati hu...
Mala ek tokri uthakar apni 2saheliyo ke sath van me chali jaati hai....

Ye teeno van me pahuch jaate hai...
Rakshita-are arushi...tanik dhyan se...yha pashu bhi hote hai...
Arushi-are....pashu to tumhare mitra hai na...to kyu bhaybheet hoti ho...
Rakshita-sabhi pashu mitra nhi hai na...orrr abhi kuch pashu mujhse anbhigya hai.....

"Hahahaha..."reeno haste hue van se fal todne lgti hai...
Ye van gao ke pas hi tha..
Jada dur nhi tha...to inhe jaada dr bhi nhi tha...lekin...aafat to kahi bhi aa sakti hai......

Rakshita or dono saheli fal tod rhi thi...ki tabhi kuch janvro ke bhagne ki awaaj aati hai...jo chillakar bhag rhe the....

Teeno ye sunkar chaunk jaate hai...
Rakshita-kyaa...hua...ye vaani...kya hua in pashuo ko.....

Arushi-ishwar jaane...prr mujhe bahut hi bhay lag rha hai......
Itne me hi achank ek heeran rakshita ke paas bhaga hua aata hai...or ekdm pichhe se ek teer aaya...or us heeran ko aa lga...
Teeno ladkiya drke maare muh pr hath rakh leti hai.....
Teer lgnne se wo heern rakshita ke paas aa gira...

Rakshita khud ko smbhalti hai...or wo heeran jo niche gira hua tadap rha tha...uske pas beth jaati hai...rakshita rone jaisi ho jaati hai...
Rakshita-mitra.....ye kya hua...kisne kiya mitra...mai...ruko...tum hilna mt mitra...

Or rakshita himmt krke uska teer pakadkar kheech deti hai...
Lekin bahut jaada khun nikalne se wo heerna teer ke nikalte hi mr jaata hai...
Rakshita ki ankho me aansu aajate hai...
Ralshita-mitra utho.....mitra...tumhe ese mrityu nhi aasakti...utho mirta.....
Rakshita roti hui us mre hue heeran ko uthane ki koshish krti hai...

Arushi darti hui arushi ke kandhe pe hath rakhti hui-rakshita...chalo yha se...yha koi bde sankat ka abhas ho rha hai...chalo rakshita....


"Kon ho tum..."itne me kisi se awaaj aayi pichhe se...or jaise hi teeno ne awaj ka pichha kiya to...ek junglee sa aadmi...ajeeb kapde pahne or hath me dhanush baan liye khada tha...

Rakshiya-tum kon ho.....kya is mrugg ko tumne maara...

Junglee admi-haa...hmne ise ghayal kiya...
Rakshita-kya tumhare andar daya nhi ...kyu mara is chhote se pashu ko....yadi koi tumhe maar de...athwa tumhare putra ko maar de....


Jungleee-hey kanya...ye kya anargalan baate bole jaa rhi ho....is mrugg ko hmne maara hai...ise hme do....

Ralshita-nhi...mai nhi dungi...
Arushi-rakshita dede na...or chal...bahut bhay lg rha hai....

Ralshita roti hui-kaisi baate kr rhi ho tum...is nirdayi manushya ne isko maar diya...or tum...

Itne me 20,25log or us aadmi ke pichhe aajate hai...
Ab to rakshita ki dono saheliya buri trh ghabra gyi thi...
wo sbhi aadmi aakar us pahle wale junglee aadmi ke pichhe khade ho jaate hai...

Rakshita-dushto...tumne ye uchit nhi kiya....
Junglee admi ka srdar-jao..is kanya se bal purvak us mrug ko le aao...

Rakshita-nhi...mai nhi dungi....
Arushi-rakshita dedo...or chalo...
Dusri saheli-haa rakshita...jaldi chalo..ye mrug to mrityu ko praprt ho chuka hai...dedo ise...

Ralshita-nhi...mai nhi dungi...

Ek admi rakshita ki or badhe jaa rha tha...rakshita ab bhi bethi us heeran lo sahla rhi thi...

Or ab wo aadmi rakshita ke paas aajata hai....
Rakshita-nhiii...mai nhi dungi....
Wo aamdi rakshita se heeran ko chhinne lgta hai....
Rakshita ekdm pichhe ki taraf hatkar ek laat us aadmi ke seene me maarti hai...
Aadmi piche ki or jaa gira....

Ab to dono saheliyo ko kamp kampi chadh gyi thi.....

Sbhi jungle aadmi ka gusse ab satve aasman prr tha...

Jo aadmi rakshita ki laat lagkar gira tha... Wo khada hota hai.....
"Murkh kannya...ye dussahas...."
Itna bolkar wo admi rakshita ko bhaala fenk kar maarta hai....

"Aaaa.....mataaa..."rakshita or dono ldkiyo ki cheelh nikla gyi...or teeno ankhe band ke leti hai...

"Faaaayyyyyyyyy..."hawa ki speed se rakshita ke pichhe se ek teer aaya...or rakshita ko lgne se pahle bhale ko ,bich se cheerta hua..
Us aadmi ki ankh se paar nikal gya...or samne ped prr jaa gda....

"Aaaaahhhhhhhh...meri ankhhhhh....aaaaa...mujhe bchao....."wo aadmi ankh pr hath rakhte hue cheekh pda......

Sbhi jungle aaadmiyo ki ankhe fati rah gyi...or jb sbhi us ped ko dekhte hai...to wha teer ki nok pr...us aadmi ki ankh gadi hui thi...


Sbhi ki dekhakr kampkpi chhoot gyi...tni ajeeb teerandaji to unhone kbhi nhi dekhi rhi.....
Teer ki speed itni jada tej...ki bhaale ko cheera to thik...lekin ankh pr lgne ke bad...ankh sahit wo teer sr ke piche bhag se paar nikla...or ankh usi me gadi hui thi...

Rakshita or saheliyo ne ankhe band ki hui thi...cheekh sunnr pr unhone jb ankhe kholi to wo sb bhi hairan rah gye ...


Jungle aadmi ankhe faade rakhita ke pichhe dekhte hai....

Rakshita ke pichhe ek ped tha...wha se ek ekdm ek yuvak nikalkr aata hai...
Jisne muh pr ek kapda bandha tha...or hath me dhanush baan the....

"Kkon ho tumm...or hmse kya shatruta hai......."un jungleeyo ka srdar bolta hai....

"Mai...kon hu ye prashann nhi hai...prshann ye hai...ki apna samarthya...kanyao pr kyu dikha rhe ho...yadi itna samrthya hai...to mere samaksh khade ho jao...hai koi samathyawan....."


Jungleeo ka sardar-dhanurvidhya pr itna abhimaan....kadachit tumne...eklavya ka nam nhi suna...yadi suna hota ...to hmare samne samarthya ki baat na krte...

"Eklavya se bda dhanurdhar bhala kon ho sakta hai...mera pranam us eklavya ko...kintu tum log anarth kr rhe ho....anarth yadi swayam ishwar bhi kre...to mai unke samaksh bhi khada ho jaunga.....shree shree eklavya ke naam ke piche tum sbhi apni kayarta ko mt chhipao....ek kanya pr prahar krna....ye kaha ki veerta hai....or mujhe abhimaan nhi ...tanik bhi nhi.....mai dhanush ban hi nhi...mall yudh bhi naanta hu..

Itna bolkar wo ladka apne dhanush baan dharti pr daal deta hai.....

"Jao..."wo aadmi...apne aadmiyo ke jhund se ek aadmi ki taraf jaane ka ishara krta hai...
Or ek hattta khatta aadmi us ladke ki taarf bhagkr jaata hai...

"Yaaaaaaa....."chillata hu wo aadmi us ldke ki or bhagta hai...

Wo ladka thoda pichhe hat'ta hai...or uchhalta hua...or us aadmi ka sar pakadta hai...or bht jor ke sath hawa me se hi...dharti se de maarta hai.....

"Dhadaaam ki awaaaj aayi..."or wo admi 2tappe jaise kha gya dharti se lgte hi.....

Us ldke ki bahduri dekhkar sb chaunk jaate hai...

"AKaramann.."jor se wo junglee admiyo ka leader chillaata hai....
sbhi apna apna bhala fenkkar maarte hai...

Wo ladka ab thoda ghabra jaata hai...kyuki dhanush wo chhod chuka tha...or ek dm itne sare bhale maare gye...
Wo ldka niche bethkar apne dono hath apne sr pr rakh leta hai.......

"Faayee"ekdm ek or teer chalne ki awaaj aayi...

Rakshita or dono sahliyo hairan ho jati hai...or unke sath wo junglee log bhi...
Wo ladka ko jb koi bhala nhi lga...to usne upr dekha...to hairan rah gya wo bhi...kyuki uske sr pr...baano ki ek chhat bni hui thi...jiske upr bhale gire hue the...


Sbhi hairani se najar uthakr dekhte hai to samne se...swayam pitamah bhishm aarhe the...jinke hath me dhanush baan the...

Jaise hi wo samne aate hai...junglee sahit sbhi unko pranam krte hai...

Pitamah bhishm-kya ho rha hai ye sb...
Jungliyo ka sardar-pitamah...hm to pashuo ka shikar krke...apna bharan poshan krte hai...kintu ye kanya...achank bich me agyi...or hmne ise roka to ye yuvak...yudh krme pr utaaru ho gya...

Yuvak-pitamah...inhone is kanya pr akraman kiya....
Pitamah-hme koi prmaan dene ki awashyakra nhi hai...hm yhi the...or sb dekh rhe the...ki kaise in logo ne is kanya pr bhale se prahar kiya...or is yuvak ne...use bchaya...


Jungliyo ka srdar najar nichi kr leta hai.....
Pitamah-btao vanraaj.....dosh kiska hai....

"Pitamah...ye kanya ne hm pr prahar kiya..atahh..."
Pitamah-kya prahar kiya...or bhala ek sukomal kanya ke waar ka kaisa asar...tumne to uske praan hi lene ki thaan li thi...

"Pitamah...ye hme wo mrugg nhi de rhi thi..."
Rakshita-piyamah...inhe koi adhikar nhi kisi pashu ko maarne ka...kyu maara is mrug ko...ye dusht hai pitamah.....

Pitamah-putri...pratyek jeev ek dusre pr nirbhar hai...ye prakriti ka niyam hai...hm isme parivartan nhi kar skte....

Rakahiita-kar sakte hai pitmah...yadi ek singni ek fal kha sakti hai...to hm manush...fal khakar jeevit nhi rak sakte kya...

Pitamah-kya...singhni..phal...?
Ralshita-haa piyamah...mene balyakal me...ek shawal ko bchaya tha...uski maata ne mere hath se fal kahaya tha...to hm mnushya kyu nhi khaa sakte....jbki singhni to keval maans khati hai...hmare pas to fir bhi vikalp hai...

Pitamah kuch sochne lgte hai...
Pitamah-kahi tum rakshita to nhi ho.....
Rakshita-ha pitamah...mai rakhita hi hu...ye nam mujhe apne hi diya tha...

Pitamah ke chehre pr muskan aajati hai...
Pitamah-vanraaj...ye kanya yadi kisi bhi pashu ki raksha kre...to tum use nhi rokoge....ye hamra adesh hai...

"Jo aagya pitamah..."
Pitamah us yuvak ke pas jaate hai...
Pitamah-adbhut yuvak...tumhari veerta prashansniy hai.....kon ho tumm..

"Chhama kre pitamah...mai ye nhi bta skta ki mai kon hu...mai vivash hu..."

Pitamah-aisi kya vivashta....
"Chhama kre pitamah....ye bhi nhi bta sakta...".


Pitamah-kintu...jitne achhe tum yodhha ho...hme gyan hona chahiye ki tum kon ho..anyatha...tum rajya ke lie sankat bhi ban skte ho...

Wo yuvak hath jodkr-pitamah...is sampuran sansar me...ishwar ke atirikt kisi me itna samarthya nhi ...ki apke samaksh khada bhi ho sake...rajya ko sankat se bchane ke lie mai pratibaddh hu pitamam...rajya pr sankat mai kaise ban skra hu bhala...or apke rahte...is rajya pr kbhi koi sankat aa nhi sakta pitamah....

Pitamah-thik hai yuvak....kintu tumhara dhanyawd..tumne in kanyao ko bchaya...or vanaraaj...hm tumhe tumhare is apradh ka dand bhi de sakte hai....ek kanya pr shatra uthana...ghor apradh hai.....



"Chhama kre pitamah.....aisa nhi hoga ab kbhi..."
Pitamah-jao...or dhyan rkhna...

Wo yuvak bhi wha se chala jaata hai...or junglee log bhi...
Rakshita-dhanyawad pitamah......
Pitamah-rakshita...tum sadaiv sankat me kyu pdti rahti ho putri...

Rakshita-apne mera naam rakshita rakha hai na pitamah...islie...
Pitamah-to tumne...wo prn tod hi diya tha...or us shawak ko uski maata se milwa diya tha...

Rakshita pitamah ko saaree baat btatai hai...



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[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Congratulations Ankitarani ❤
Main toh baazigar baan gaya.... Shayad main jeeta nahi... Par aap jaise kuch readers ke dilme jagah banali.... Sabse bari jeet yahi hai❤

Humari story Dosti aur Docomo agar logon ke dil mein jagah banale toh usse bariya kuch nahi

Yeh photo kyun diya samajh hi gaye hongey

बबन जी ! मैने भले ही आप की स्टोरी पर कमेंट नहीं किया हो पर लव वाला रियेक्सन पहले ही दे दिया था ।
मैने अंकिता मैम को कहा भी था कि बबन टाॅप थ्री में डिजर्व करता है । आप बहुत ही बेहतरीन राइटर है ।

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Thanks sir...thank you so much.

Wese mujhe pta tha meri story achhi thi...but ye top 3me aayegi...ye nhi socha tha...top 3rd kya...top 20me bhi ummeed nhi thi...
But ek baat btaye...is jeet ki sbse bdi vajah bhi ap ho...bcs api kahani se hi mujhe wo idea mila tha...so congrats too you also...
Or haar jeet kuch nhi hota.....bs be happy...
Or ha mai chahungi ki ap meri is kahani ko pdhe...islie nhi ki iske view bdhe...blki islie kyuki ap animal lover ho...or is story me hmari heroin bhi animal ke lie jaan dene ko taiyar ho jaati hai...animlas ka bht bda role hai isme...bs islie...ap Rudrathakur ji ke coments ke shuru ki 3,4 lines dekhiye(isi page pe)...smjh jyege.....

Anway...thanks for wish me...be happy always..

मुझे भी लगा था ये कहानी बबन भाई के स्टोरी से ही मोटिवेट होकर लिखी गई थी ।

 

[Baban]

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बबन जी ! मैने भले ही आप की स्टोरी पर कमेंट नहीं किया हो पर लव वाला रियेक्सन पहले ही दे दिया था ।
मैने अंकिता मैम को कहा भी था कि बबन टाॅप थ्री में डिजर्व करता है । आप बहुत ही बेहतरीन राइटर है ।

Thanks sanju ji❤...... Par koi baat nahi.. Aap sab ko itna pasand ayaa yahi bari baat hai. Log parkey lekhak ke barein mein kya sochtey hai yeh zaruri hai. Ap sab ke dil mein meri story Dosti ne chaap chora... Bus main jeet gaya.

Par just ek baat hai.. Maine judges ka review para mere story ke upar... Main chata hu aap sab bhi ekbar mere story ka judges review parkey dekhiye. Wahan mere story ke cons pe jo likha hai aapko kya lagta hai us barein mein... Kya woh puraa sahi hai? What u think?

Naina Ankitarani Moon Light and all

 

[Ankitarani]

Jada chit chat mt kro idhar ....tujhme rab dikhta h ka chit chat launge wha aajao...