Romance Tumhaare Liye- Ek Prem Kahaani (Completed)

[Naik]

Namaskar Mitro Aur Pathko.

Main ek Chhoti si prem kahani prastut karne ja rahi hoon aap sab doston ke liye. Jisme bharpoor pyaar, nafrat, tyaag, ruthna, manana Sab kuchh milega. Meri is kahani me prem/pyaar ke sath thoda bahut Suspense aur thoda bahut Thriller bhi padhne ko milega.


Is Kahani Ka Naam Hai
TUMHAARE LIYE- EK PREM KAHAANI



Ye kahani Ananya Ji ki kahaani se prerit hai. Is kahani ke Sabhi Patr Aur ghatnaye kalpanik hain. sath hi sath is kahani me likhi gayi jagah bhi kalpanik hai, jinka kisi bhi vyakti ya ghanta se koi lana-dena nahi hai. Agar kahi bhi Is kahani ke patr ya ghanta ya sthan kisi vyakti vishesh ya sthan se mel khate hain to aap khud samajhdar hain ki aapko kya karna hai. Are mitro. Use ignore marna hai.


Kahani shuru karne se pahle Sabhi Mitro/Pathko se ek baat kahna chahti hoon ki Update dene ke liye wo mujhe force nahi karenge, kyonki jin pathkon ne meri pichhali Sabhi kahaniya padhi hain. Unhe pata hoga ki mere updates niyamit aate hain, haan yadi kabhi updates dene me vilamb hota hai to main pahale se hi suchit kar doongi aur yadi kisi karanavash agar main suchit na kar paun to aap sabhi samajh jaiyega ki main kisi ati aawashyak karya me busy hoon.


To mitro. Kahani shuru karte hain Aap sab ki Anumati ke baad.​

Sath Bane Rahiye..

for new thread Mahi ji

 

[Mahi Maurya]

कहानी की शुरुआत हो चुकी है मित्रों और पाठकों।।

अभी तो बस कहानी के कुछ अंश लिखे हैं और कल पात्र परिचय होगा। परसों से कहानी की औपचारिक शुरुआत होगी।

अभी कुछ अंश लिखे हैं कहानी के। उसे पढ़िए और अपने महत्त्वपूर्ण विचार भी व्यक्त कीजिए।।​

 

[Mahi Maurya]

for new thread Mahi ji

धन्यवाद आपका महोदय।।

 

[Jaguaar]

Kahani ke kuchh ansh (Saar Sankshipt)


Sarita JEEWAJ JYOTI HOSPITAL ke Operation Teater Ke parisar me pareshani ki halat mein yahan se waha chakkar kaat rahi thi. Uske Sharir par khaki rang ki Vardi thi aur chehare par Pasina Tha. Uski aankhhe Aanshuo se bhari hui thi. Pasine se uski khaki Vardi Bheegkar Uske jism se chipak gayi thi. Vardi par jagah jagah khoon laga huwa tha, Lekin use is baat ka hosh nahi tha. Wahi paas ki bench par 2 police wale aur bhi baithe huwe the. Jo Sarita ko Idhar Udhar Chakkar lagate huwe dekh rahe the. Wo kabhi kabhi Apni Hatheli Maslne lagti to kabhi kabhi Apni Mutthiyan bheej leti. Uske chehre ke bhav Har second badal raha tha. Paas baitha police wale se jab ye na dekha gaya to unme se ek ne Sarita se kaha.


Police 1- Madam Aap pareshan mat hoiye. Aapke bhaiya ko kuchh nahi hoga. Wo bilkul thik ho jayenge. Aap himmat se kaam lijie madam.

Sarita- Kaise Himmat se Kaam loon main haan kaise himmat se kaam loon. Main kaisi bahan hoon. Maine apne inhi hantho se apne bhaiya ko goli mari. Jis bhaai ke hantho me har saal rakhi bandhti thi, jiski salamti ki bhagwaan se duwa mangti thi. Usi bhaai ko maine apne inhi hanto se shoot kiya hai. Jis bhaai ko dhoondhne ke liye maine kya nahin kiya. jis bhaai se milne ke liye din-raat main thik se soyi nahin. usi bhaai ko maine apne inhin hanthon se goli mari hai. Main bahan kahlane layak nahi hoon. Bahan ke naam par kalank hoon main.


Itna kahkar Sarita ghutanon ke bal jameen mein baith gayi aur jor jor se rone lagi. Ye dekhkar ek police wala uske paas aaya aur uske kandhe par apna hath rakhkar kaha.


Police 2- Nahi madam. Aap aise mat roiye. Aap chup ho jaiye. Aapne kuchh galat nahi kiya. Aapne apna Farj nibhaya hai.

Sarita- Are aisa farj kis kaam ka Jisko nibhane ke liye mujhe apne haantho se apne jaan se pyaare bhaiya ko goli maarni padi. Dhikkaar hai mujhe apne aap par. Agar mere bhaiya ko kuchh ho gaya to main khud ko kabhi maaf nahin kar paungi. Mar jaungi main.


Tabhi hospital ke bahar ek auto aakar rukta hai us auto se Auto driver, ek mahila aur ek ladki utarkar bhaagti hui Hospilat me aati hai, Mahila ne aate hi Sarita ke gal par ek jhannatedar thappad mara aur rote huwe bolne lagi.


Mahila- Ye kya kiya Sarita tumne Ye kya kar diya. Mere bete ko maar diyaa tumne. Apne bhaai ko goli maar di tumne. Meri mamta ka khoon kar diya tumne. Meri Khokh ujaadane ki koshish ki hai tumne. Are wo mera beta hi nahin tera bhaai bhi hai. Aur tune apne bhaai ke upar hi goli chala diii. Agar mere bete ko kuchh ho gaya na Saritaa to main tujhee jeewan bhar maaf nahi karungii.

Auto Driver- Ye kya kah rahi hoo tum bhagyawaan. Tumhe to apni beti par garv hona chahiye ki wo kitni bahadur hai. itni kathinaiyon aur Pareshaniyon ke bawjood bhi wo apne Farz aur Sachhai ke raaste se nahi bhakti. Usne apne Farz aur rishte me farz ko ahamiyat di. Aur tum usko hi dosh de rahi ho. Ek baar pahle ye to jaan leti ki Sarita ne aisa kyon kiya. Mujhe Sarita ne phone karke pahle hi sab kuchh bata diya tha.

Mahila- Are aisi kaun si baat ho gayi jo isne mere bete ko goli maar di. Are wo iska bhai hai. Jiski yaad mein din raat roti rahti thi. Jisko kaha kaha nahin dhoondha hamne. Kam se kam ek baar ise apne bhaaii se baat to karni chahiye thi. Lekin nahin ab to ye inspector ban gai hai na to apne man ka hi karegi ye. Tumne bahut galat kiya hai Sarita. Main tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi.

Ladki- Ye kya bol rahi ho mummy. Aap didiya ko dekho. Inko dekhkar aapko lagta hai ki inhone Jaanbujhkar bhaiyaa par goli chalai hai, bhaiyaa ko jaan se marne ki koshish ki hai. Are Bhaiya ko sabse jyada pyaar didiya hi karti hain. Fir bhi aap aisa bol rahi hain. Are kuchh to majboori rahii hogii didiya ki. Mujhe apniii didiya par puraa bharoshaa hai. Didiya koi galat kaam karr hii nahii sakti.


Itna kahkar wo ladki jakar Sarita ke gale lag jati hai. Sarita apni bahan ke gale lagkar phoot phoot karr rone lagti hai. Tabhi Opration Teater ka darwaza khulta hai aur doctor bahar aate hain aur jo batein batate hain. Use sunkar sabhi rahat ki sans lete hain.


Doctor- Ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai. Mareej ko do goli lagi thi. Hamne dono goli nikal di hai aur ab mareej khatare se bahar hai. Abhi unhe injection de diya hai. To abhi wo aaram kar rahe hain. Neend se jaagne ke baad aap sab log unse mil sakte hain.


Itna kahkar doctor waha se chale jate hai. Sarita air uske gharwale bahar lagi bench par manish aur hatash hokar baith jate hain.


Sath Bane Rahiye.​

Superbb Updatee

Kahani ki starting hi aapne dhamakedar ki hai.

Sarita iss story mein ek inspector hai jo rishte aur farz ke beech mein farz ko jyaada aihmiyat deti hai. Aur shayad isi wajah se usko apne bhai ko goli maarni padhi.

Aakhir aisa kyaa hogya tha jiske wajah se Sarita ko apne bhai ko goli maarni padhi.

Sarita aur uski maa baar baar bol rahi thi jisko dhundhne ke liye woh kai raato se thik se soyi nhi thi iska kyaa matlab hua. Kyaa Sarita ka bhai khoo gaya tha yaa kisi ne uska kidnap karliya tha.

Par filhal Sarita ka bhai khatre se bahar hai aur abhi behosh hai.

Dekhte hai aage kyaa hota hai.

 

[Death Kiñg]

Kahani ke kuchh ansh (Saar Sankshipt)


Sarita JEEWAJ JYOTI HOSPITAL ke Operation Teater Ke parisar me pareshani ki halat mein yahan se waha chakkar kaat rahi thi. Uske Sharir par khaki rang ki Vardi thi aur chehare par Pasina Tha. Uski aankhhe Aanshuo se bhari hui thi. Pasine se uski khaki Vardi Bheegkar Uske jism se chipak gayi thi. Vardi par jagah jagah khoon laga huwa tha, Lekin use is baat ka hosh nahi tha. Wahi paas ki bench par 2 police wale aur bhi baithe huwe the. Jo Sarita ko Idhar Udhar Chakkar lagate huwe dekh rahe the. Wo kabhi kabhi Apni Hatheli Maslne lagti to kabhi kabhi Apni Mutthiyan bheej leti. Uske chehre ke bhav Har second badal raha tha. Paas baitha police wale se jab ye na dekha gaya to unme se ek ne Sarita se kaha.


Police 1- Madam Aap pareshan mat hoiye. Aapke bhaiya ko kuchh nahi hoga. Wo bilkul thik ho jayenge. Aap himmat se kaam lijie madam.

Sarita- Kaise Himmat se Kaam loon main haan kaise himmat se kaam loon. Main kaisi bahan hoon. Maine apne inhi hantho se apne bhaiya ko goli mari. Jis bhaai ke hantho me har saal rakhi bandhti thi, jiski salamti ki bhagwaan se duwa mangti thi. Usi bhaai ko maine apne inhi hanto se shoot kiya hai. Jis bhaai ko dhoondhne ke liye maine kya nahin kiya. jis bhaai se milne ke liye din-raat main thik se soyi nahin. usi bhaai ko maine apne inhin hanthon se goli mari hai. Main bahan kahlane layak nahi hoon. Bahan ke naam par kalank hoon main.


Itna kahkar Sarita ghutanon ke bal jameen mein baith gayi aur jor jor se rone lagi. Ye dekhkar ek police wala uske paas aaya aur uske kandhe par apna hath rakhkar kaha.


Police 2- Nahi madam. Aap aise mat roiye. Aap chup ho jaiye. Aapne kuchh galat nahi kiya. Aapne apna Farj nibhaya hai.

Sarita- Are aisa farj kis kaam ka Jisko nibhane ke liye mujhe apne haantho se apne jaan se pyaare bhaiya ko goli maarni padi. Dhikkaar hai mujhe apne aap par. Agar mere bhaiya ko kuchh ho gaya to main khud ko kabhi maaf nahin kar paungi. Mar jaungi main.


Tabhi hospital ke bahar ek auto aakar rukta hai us auto se Auto driver, ek mahila aur ek ladki utarkar bhaagti hui Hospilat me aati hai, Mahila ne aate hi Sarita ke gal par ek jhannatedar thappad mara aur rote huwe bolne lagi.


Mahila- Ye kya kiya Sarita tumne Ye kya kar diya. Mere bete ko maar diyaa tumne. Apne bhaai ko goli maar di tumne. Meri mamta ka khoon kar diya tumne. Meri Khokh ujaadane ki koshish ki hai tumne. Are wo mera beta hi nahin tera bhaai bhi hai. Aur tune apne bhaai ke upar hi goli chala diii. Agar mere bete ko kuchh ho gaya na Saritaa to main tujhee jeewan bhar maaf nahi karungii.

Auto Driver- Ye kya kah rahi hoo tum bhagyawaan. Tumhe to apni beti par garv hona chahiye ki wo kitni bahadur hai. itni kathinaiyon aur Pareshaniyon ke bawjood bhi wo apne Farz aur Sachhai ke raaste se nahi bhakti. Usne apne Farz aur rishte me farz ko ahamiyat di. Aur tum usko hi dosh de rahi ho. Ek baar pahle ye to jaan leti ki Sarita ne aisa kyon kiya. Mujhe Sarita ne phone karke pahle hi sab kuchh bata diya tha.

Mahila- Are aisi kaun si baat ho gayi jo isne mere bete ko goli maar di. Are wo iska bhai hai. Jiski yaad mein din raat roti rahti thi. Jisko kaha kaha nahin dhoondha hamne. Kam se kam ek baar ise apne bhaaii se baat to karni chahiye thi. Lekin nahin ab to ye inspector ban gai hai na to apne man ka hi karegi ye. Tumne bahut galat kiya hai Sarita. Main tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi.

Ladki- Ye kya bol rahi ho mummy. Aap didiya ko dekho. Inko dekhkar aapko lagta hai ki inhone Jaanbujhkar bhaiyaa par goli chalai hai, bhaiyaa ko jaan se marne ki koshish ki hai. Are Bhaiya ko sabse jyada pyaar didiya hi karti hain. Fir bhi aap aisa bol rahi hain. Are kuchh to majboori rahii hogii didiya ki. Mujhe apniii didiya par puraa bharoshaa hai. Didiya koi galat kaam karr hii nahii sakti.


Itna kahkar wo ladki jakar Sarita ke gale lag jati hai. Sarita apni bahan ke gale lagkar phoot phoot karr rone lagti hai. Tabhi Opration Teater ka darwaza khulta hai aur doctor bahar aate hain aur jo batein batate hain. Use sunkar sabhi rahat ki sans lete hain.


Doctor- Ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai. Mareej ko do goli lagi thi. Hamne dono goli nikal di hai aur ab mareej khatare se bahar hai. Abhi unhe injection de diya hai. To abhi wo aaram kar rahe hain. Neend se jaagne ke baad aap sab log unse mil sakte hain.


Itna kahkar doctor waha se chale jate hai. Sarita air uske gharwale bahar lagi bench par manish aur hatash hokar baith jate hain.


Sath Bane Rahiye.​

Sarita ek police Inspector hai jisne rishte aur farz je beech mein se farz ko chuna aur apne hi bhai par goli daag di... Inke father auto driver hain maybe... Aur jo OT mein jeevan ki jung lad raha tha maybe wahi hero hai - Nischal...

Kherr... Sarita kaafi samay se apne bhai ko khoj rahi thi... Bachpan mein bichhad gaya tha kya?? Ya fir kidnap ho gaya tha... Jo bhi ho dekhna interesting rahega ki aesa kya hua ke Sarita ko apne hi bhai par goli chalani padi...

Nice start to the story... Waiting for next update...

 

[Naik]

Kahani ke kuchh ansh (Saar Sankshipt)


Sarita JEEWAJ JYOTI HOSPITAL ke Operation Teater Ke parisar me pareshani ki halat mein yahan se waha chakkar kaat rahi thi. Uske Sharir par khaki rang ki Vardi thi aur chehare par Pasina Tha. Uski aankhhe Aanshuo se bhari hui thi. Pasine se uski khaki Vardi Bheegkar Uske jism se chipak gayi thi. Vardi par jagah jagah khoon laga huwa tha, Lekin use is baat ka hosh nahi tha. Wahi paas ki bench par 2 police wale aur bhi baithe huwe the. Jo Sarita ko Idhar Udhar Chakkar lagate huwe dekh rahe the. Wo kabhi kabhi Apni Hatheli Maslne lagti to kabhi kabhi Apni Mutthiyan bheej leti. Uske chehre ke bhav Har second badal raha tha. Paas baitha police wale se jab ye na dekha gaya to unme se ek ne Sarita se kaha.


Police 1- Madam Aap pareshan mat hoiye. Aapke bhaiya ko kuchh nahi hoga. Wo bilkul thik ho jayenge. Aap himmat se kaam lijie madam.

Sarita- Kaise Himmat se Kaam loon main haan kaise himmat se kaam loon. Main kaisi bahan hoon. Maine apne inhi hantho se apne bhaiya ko goli mari. Jis bhaai ke hantho me har saal rakhi bandhti thi, jiski salamti ki bhagwaan se duwa mangti thi. Usi bhaai ko maine apne inhi hanto se shoot kiya hai. Jis bhaai ko dhoondhne ke liye maine kya nahin kiya. jis bhaai se milne ke liye din-raat main thik se soyi nahin. usi bhaai ko maine apne inhin hanthon se goli mari hai. Main bahan kahlane layak nahi hoon. Bahan ke naam par kalank hoon main.


Itna kahkar Sarita ghutanon ke bal jameen mein baith gayi aur jor jor se rone lagi. Ye dekhkar ek police wala uske paas aaya aur uske kandhe par apna hath rakhkar kaha.


Police 2- Nahi madam. Aap aise mat roiye. Aap chup ho jaiye. Aapne kuchh galat nahi kiya. Aapne apna Farj nibhaya hai.

Sarita- Are aisa farj kis kaam ka Jisko nibhane ke liye mujhe apne haantho se apne jaan se pyaare bhaiya ko goli maarni padi. Dhikkaar hai mujhe apne aap par. Agar mere bhaiya ko kuchh ho gaya to main khud ko kabhi maaf nahin kar paungi. Mar jaungi main.


Tabhi hospital ke bahar ek auto aakar rukta hai us auto se Auto driver, ek mahila aur ek ladki utarkar bhaagti hui Hospilat me aati hai, Mahila ne aate hi Sarita ke gal par ek jhannatedar thappad mara aur rote huwe bolne lagi.


Mahila- Ye kya kiya Sarita tumne Ye kya kar diya. Mere bete ko maar diyaa tumne. Apne bhaai ko goli maar di tumne. Meri mamta ka khoon kar diya tumne. Meri Khokh ujaadane ki koshish ki hai tumne. Are wo mera beta hi nahin tera bhaai bhi hai. Aur tune apne bhaai ke upar hi goli chala diii. Agar mere bete ko kuchh ho gaya na Saritaa to main tujhee jeewan bhar maaf nahi karungii.

Auto Driver- Ye kya kah rahi hoo tum bhagyawaan. Tumhe to apni beti par garv hona chahiye ki wo kitni bahadur hai. itni kathinaiyon aur Pareshaniyon ke bawjood bhi wo apne Farz aur Sachhai ke raaste se nahi bhakti. Usne apne Farz aur rishte me farz ko ahamiyat di. Aur tum usko hi dosh de rahi ho. Ek baar pahle ye to jaan leti ki Sarita ne aisa kyon kiya. Mujhe Sarita ne phone karke pahle hi sab kuchh bata diya tha.

Mahila- Are aisi kaun si baat ho gayi jo isne mere bete ko goli maar di. Are wo iska bhai hai. Jiski yaad mein din raat roti rahti thi. Jisko kaha kaha nahin dhoondha hamne. Kam se kam ek baar ise apne bhaaii se baat to karni chahiye thi. Lekin nahin ab to ye inspector ban gai hai na to apne man ka hi karegi ye. Tumne bahut galat kiya hai Sarita. Main tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi.

Ladki- Ye kya bol rahi ho mummy. Aap didiya ko dekho. Inko dekhkar aapko lagta hai ki inhone Jaanbujhkar bhaiyaa par goli chalai hai, bhaiyaa ko jaan se marne ki koshish ki hai. Are Bhaiya ko sabse jyada pyaar didiya hi karti hain. Fir bhi aap aisa bol rahi hain. Are kuchh to majboori rahii hogii didiya ki. Mujhe apniii didiya par puraa bharoshaa hai. Didiya koi galat kaam karr hii nahii sakti.


Itna kahkar wo ladki jakar Sarita ke gale lag jati hai. Sarita apni bahan ke gale lagkar phoot phoot karr rone lagti hai. Tabhi Opration Teater ka darwaza khulta hai aur doctor bahar aate hain aur jo batein batate hain. Use sunkar sabhi rahat ki sans lete hain.


Doctor- Ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai. Mareej ko do goli lagi thi. Hamne dono goli nikal di hai aur ab mareej khatare se bahar hai. Abhi unhe injection de diya hai. To abhi wo aaram kar rahe hain. Neend se jaagne ke baad aap sab log unse mil sakte hain.


Itna kahkar doctor waha se chale jate hai. Sarita air uske gharwale bahar lagi bench par manish aur hatash hokar baith jate hain.


Sath Bane Rahiye.​

Aisi kia mazboori thi ki bahen ko apns bhai pe hi goli chalani padi or woh bhai per jiski parso se talash thi
Shuruwat tow suspense ke saath huwi h
Dekhte h aage kia khulasa hota h
Behtareen shaandaar shuruwat Mahi ji

 

[Lucky..]

Kahani ke kuchh ansh (Saar Sankshipt)


Sarita JEEWAJ JYOTI HOSPITAL ke Operation Teater Ke parisar me pareshani ki halat mein yahan se waha chakkar kaat rahi thi. Uske Sharir par khaki rang ki Vardi thi aur chehare par Pasina Tha. Uski aankhhe Aanshuo se bhari hui thi. Pasine se uski khaki Vardi Bheegkar Uske jism se chipak gayi thi. Vardi par jagah jagah khoon laga huwa tha, Lekin use is baat ka hosh nahi tha. Wahi paas ki bench par 2 police wale aur bhi baithe huwe the. Jo Sarita ko Idhar Udhar Chakkar lagate huwe dekh rahe the. Wo kabhi kabhi Apni Hatheli Maslne lagti to kabhi kabhi Apni Mutthiyan bheej leti. Uske chehre ke bhav Har second badal raha tha. Paas baitha police wale se jab ye na dekha gaya to unme se ek ne Sarita se kaha.


Police 1- Madam Aap pareshan mat hoiye. Aapke bhaiya ko kuchh nahi hoga. Wo bilkul thik ho jayenge. Aap himmat se kaam lijie madam.

Sarita- Kaise Himmat se Kaam loon main haan kaise himmat se kaam loon. Main kaisi bahan hoon. Maine apne inhi hantho se apne bhaiya ko goli mari. Jis bhaai ke hantho me har saal rakhi bandhti thi, jiski salamti ki bhagwaan se duwa mangti thi. Usi bhaai ko maine apne inhi hanto se shoot kiya hai. Jis bhaai ko dhoondhne ke liye maine kya nahin kiya. jis bhaai se milne ke liye din-raat main thik se soyi nahin. usi bhaai ko maine apne inhin hanthon se goli mari hai. Main bahan kahlane layak nahi hoon. Bahan ke naam par kalank hoon main.


Itna kahkar Sarita ghutanon ke bal jameen mein baith gayi aur jor jor se rone lagi. Ye dekhkar ek police wala uske paas aaya aur uske kandhe par apna hath rakhkar kaha.


Police 2- Nahi madam. Aap aise mat roiye. Aap chup ho jaiye. Aapne kuchh galat nahi kiya. Aapne apna Farj nibhaya hai.

Sarita- Are aisa farj kis kaam ka Jisko nibhane ke liye mujhe apne haantho se apne jaan se pyaare bhaiya ko goli maarni padi. Dhikkaar hai mujhe apne aap par. Agar mere bhaiya ko kuchh ho gaya to main khud ko kabhi maaf nahin kar paungi. Mar jaungi main.


Tabhi hospital ke bahar ek auto aakar rukta hai us auto se Auto driver, ek mahila aur ek ladki utarkar bhaagti hui Hospilat me aati hai, Mahila ne aate hi Sarita ke gal par ek jhannatedar thappad mara aur rote huwe bolne lagi.


Mahila- Ye kya kiya Sarita tumne Ye kya kar diya. Mere bete ko maar diyaa tumne. Apne bhaai ko goli maar di tumne. Meri mamta ka khoon kar diya tumne. Meri Khokh ujaadane ki koshish ki hai tumne. Are wo mera beta hi nahin tera bhaai bhi hai. Aur tune apne bhaai ke upar hi goli chala diii. Agar mere bete ko kuchh ho gaya na Saritaa to main tujhee jeewan bhar maaf nahi karungii.

Auto Driver- Ye kya kah rahi hoo tum bhagyawaan. Tumhe to apni beti par garv hona chahiye ki wo kitni bahadur hai. itni kathinaiyon aur Pareshaniyon ke bawjood bhi wo apne Farz aur Sachhai ke raaste se nahi bhakti. Usne apne Farz aur rishte me farz ko ahamiyat di. Aur tum usko hi dosh de rahi ho. Ek baar pahle ye to jaan leti ki Sarita ne aisa kyon kiya. Mujhe Sarita ne phone karke pahle hi sab kuchh bata diya tha.

Mahila- Are aisi kaun si baat ho gayi jo isne mere bete ko goli maar di. Are wo iska bhai hai. Jiski yaad mein din raat roti rahti thi. Jisko kaha kaha nahin dhoondha hamne. Kam se kam ek baar ise apne bhaaii se baat to karni chahiye thi. Lekin nahin ab to ye inspector ban gai hai na to apne man ka hi karegi ye. Tumne bahut galat kiya hai Sarita. Main tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi.

Ladki- Ye kya bol rahi ho mummy. Aap didiya ko dekho. Inko dekhkar aapko lagta hai ki inhone Jaanbujhkar bhaiyaa par goli chalai hai, bhaiyaa ko jaan se marne ki koshish ki hai. Are Bhaiya ko sabse jyada pyaar didiya hi karti hain. Fir bhi aap aisa bol rahi hain. Are kuchh to majboori rahii hogii didiya ki. Mujhe apniii didiya par puraa bharoshaa hai. Didiya koi galat kaam karr hii nahii sakti.


Itna kahkar wo ladki jakar Sarita ke gale lag jati hai. Sarita apni bahan ke gale lagkar phoot phoot karr rone lagti hai. Tabhi Opration Teater ka darwaza khulta hai aur doctor bahar aate hain aur jo batein batate hain. Use sunkar sabhi rahat ki sans lete hain.


Doctor- Ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai. Mareej ko do goli lagi thi. Hamne dono goli nikal di hai aur ab mareej khatare se bahar hai. Abhi unhe injection de diya hai. To abhi wo aaram kar rahe hain. Neend se jaagne ke baad aap sab log unse mil sakte hain.


Itna kahkar doctor waha se chale jate hai. Sarita air uske gharwale bahar lagi bench par manish aur hatash hokar baith jate hain.


Sath Bane Rahiye.​

kahani ki sharuvat bahot hi badhiya hue hai..

sarita ek police inspector hai or usne apne hi bhai ko goli mari hai.. lagta hai uska bhai ko kisi ne kidnap kar ke kuch galat kamo me laga diya hoga or savita ko jab mila hoga to dono ka amna samna hua hoga or sarita ne apne farz ko nibhate hue goli chala di..

khair ab sarita ka bhai khatre se bahar hai jald hi hosh aa jayega..

nice update

 

[Naina]

Kahani ke kuchh ansh (Saar Sankshipt)


Sarita JEEWAJ JYOTI HOSPITAL ke Operation Teater Ke parisar me pareshani ki halat mein yahan se waha chakkar kaat rahi thi. Uske Sharir par khaki rang ki Vardi thi aur chehare par Pasina Tha. Uski aankhhe Aanshuo se bhari hui thi. Pasine se uski khaki Vardi Bheegkar Uske jism se chipak gayi thi. Vardi par jagah jagah khoon laga huwa tha, Lekin use is baat ka hosh nahi tha. Wahi paas ki bench par 2 police wale aur bhi baithe huwe the. Jo Sarita ko Idhar Udhar Chakkar lagate huwe dekh rahe the. Wo kabhi kabhi Apni Hatheli Maslne lagti to kabhi kabhi Apni Mutthiyan bheej leti. Uske chehre ke bhav Har second badal raha tha. Paas baitha police wale se jab ye na dekha gaya to unme se ek ne Sarita se kaha.


Police 1- Madam Aap pareshan mat hoiye. Aapke bhaiya ko kuchh nahi hoga. Wo bilkul thik ho jayenge. Aap himmat se kaam lijie madam.

Sarita- Kaise Himmat se Kaam loon main haan kaise himmat se kaam loon. Main kaisi bahan hoon. Maine apne inhi hantho se apne bhaiya ko goli mari. Jis bhaai ke hantho me har saal rakhi bandhti thi, jiski salamti ki bhagwaan se duwa mangti thi. Usi bhaai ko maine apne inhi hanto se shoot kiya hai. Jis bhaai ko dhoondhne ke liye maine kya nahin kiya. jis bhaai se milne ke liye din-raat main thik se soyi nahin. usi bhaai ko maine apne inhin hanthon se goli mari hai. Main bahan kahlane layak nahi hoon. Bahan ke naam par kalank hoon main.


Itna kahkar Sarita ghutanon ke bal jameen mein baith gayi aur jor jor se rone lagi. Ye dekhkar ek police wala uske paas aaya aur uske kandhe par apna hath rakhkar kaha.


Police 2- Nahi madam. Aap aise mat roiye. Aap chup ho jaiye. Aapne kuchh galat nahi kiya. Aapne apna Farj nibhaya hai.

Sarita- Are aisa farj kis kaam ka Jisko nibhane ke liye mujhe apne haantho se apne jaan se pyaare bhaiya ko goli maarni padi. Dhikkaar hai mujhe apne aap par. Agar mere bhaiya ko kuchh ho gaya to main khud ko kabhi maaf nahin kar paungi. Mar jaungi main.


Tabhi hospital ke bahar ek auto aakar rukta hai us auto se Auto driver, ek mahila aur ek ladki utarkar bhaagti hui Hospilat me aati hai, Mahila ne aate hi Sarita ke gal par ek jhannatedar thappad mara aur rote huwe bolne lagi.


Mahila- Ye kya kiya Sarita tumne Ye kya kar diya. Mere bete ko maar diyaa tumne. Apne bhaai ko goli maar di tumne. Meri mamta ka khoon kar diya tumne. Meri Khokh ujaadane ki koshish ki hai tumne. Are wo mera beta hi nahin tera bhaai bhi hai. Aur tune apne bhaai ke upar hi goli chala diii. Agar mere bete ko kuchh ho gaya na Saritaa to main tujhee jeewan bhar maaf nahi karungii.

Auto Driver- Ye kya kah rahi hoo tum bhagyawaan. Tumhe to apni beti par garv hona chahiye ki wo kitni bahadur hai. itni kathinaiyon aur Pareshaniyon ke bawjood bhi wo apne Farz aur Sachhai ke raaste se nahi bhakti. Usne apne Farz aur rishte me farz ko ahamiyat di. Aur tum usko hi dosh de rahi ho. Ek baar pahle ye to jaan leti ki Sarita ne aisa kyon kiya. Mujhe Sarita ne phone karke pahle hi sab kuchh bata diya tha.

Mahila- Are aisi kaun si baat ho gayi jo isne mere bete ko goli maar di. Are wo iska bhai hai. Jiski yaad mein din raat roti rahti thi. Jisko kaha kaha nahin dhoondha hamne. Kam se kam ek baar ise apne bhaaii se baat to karni chahiye thi. Lekin nahin ab to ye inspector ban gai hai na to apne man ka hi karegi ye. Tumne bahut galat kiya hai Sarita. Main tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi.

Ladki- Ye kya bol rahi ho mummy. Aap didiya ko dekho. Inko dekhkar aapko lagta hai ki inhone Jaanbujhkar bhaiyaa par goli chalai hai, bhaiyaa ko jaan se marne ki koshish ki hai. Are Bhaiya ko sabse jyada pyaar didiya hi karti hain. Fir bhi aap aisa bol rahi hain. Are kuchh to majboori rahii hogii didiya ki. Mujhe apniii didiya par puraa bharoshaa hai. Didiya koi galat kaam karr hii nahii sakti.


Itna kahkar wo ladki jakar Sarita ke gale lag jati hai. Sarita apni bahan ke gale lagkar phoot phoot karr rone lagti hai. Tabhi Opration Teater ka darwaza khulta hai aur doctor bahar aate hain aur jo batein batate hain. Use sunkar sabhi rahat ki sans lete hain.


Doctor- Ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai. Mareej ko do goli lagi thi. Hamne dono goli nikal di hai aur ab mareej khatare se bahar hai. Abhi unhe injection de diya hai. To abhi wo aaram kar rahe hain. Neend se jaagne ke baad aap sab log unse mil sakte hain.


Itna kahkar doctor waha se chale jate hai. Sarita air uske gharwale bahar lagi bench par manish aur hatash hokar baith jate hain.


Sath Bane Rahiye.​

to ye kuch jhalkiyaan hai kahani ki.... bahot hi ghambhir aur hriday vidaarak mahol bana hai kahani ki suruwati daud mein hi......jaha ek bahan bawli si OT ke saamne is kadar ghum rahi thi jaise ushe hosh hi na.... ro ro ke haalat bigad li kyunki usne farz ke chalte apne hi bhai pe goli chala di.... wo bhai jo kahi kho gaya tha lekin jab mila to usipe goli chalani padi farz ke khatir.. ye kaisa vidambana hai sarita ke liye jaha ek taraf farz aur dusri taraf uska bhai, dono mein se ek ko chunna tha...
aur jo aarop laga rahi thi uski maa us par... ki wo apne hi bhai ko maut di hai... apni maa dwara boli gayi wo kadwi baatein sun ke to jaise uska dil chid hi gaya hoga....
waise baaki sabhi ko ehsaas tha ki Sarita ne jo kiya kahi na kahi sahi hi kiya hai hai....
Lekin sarita ki mom bhi kya kare....jo bhi ho ek maa ka dil hai.....khoya hua beta mila bhi lekin is haalat mein....ek hi kokh janam leke ek ne Dusre ki jaan le li, ek maa ke liye isse badi peeda kya ho sakti hai.....mana ki Sarita farz nibha rahi thi lekin ek maa ka pehla farz hota apne bachho ki khushi aur suraksha....ab apne bete ko is haalat dekh uski mamta to Sarita ke khilaaf hi bolegi.. kyunki abhi unke bete ke liye koi dushman hai to wo khud unki beti hi hai...
Khair.... khushi ki baat ye hai ki Sarita ka bhai ab khatre se bahar hai....
puri family ko ye khabar dubte huye ke liye tinke sahara jaisa hi sukun diya hai..
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Ek jaruri baat . ....
Agar goli khane wala nischal nikla to .... baaki kirdaaro ke sath kya hoga....
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well....
Nayi kahani.... naye mod, naye pehlu.... ek freshness... waise freshness ki jagah yaha to dukh ke badal ghire hai story characters ke upar...
. shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan....har shabd ek alag kahani bayaan kar raha tha..family, farz ,emotions, tragedy ka mila jhula mahol ke sath suru huyi ye kahani jaane kitne mod se gujre....

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

Superbb Updatee

Kahani ki starting hi aapne dhamakedar ki hai.

Sarita iss story mein ek inspector hai jo rishte aur farz ke beech mein farz ko jyaada aihmiyat deti hai. Aur shayad isi wajah se usko apne bhai ko goli maarni padhi.

Aakhir aisa kyaa hogya tha jiske wajah se Sarita ko apne bhai ko goli maarni padhi.

Sarita aur uski maa baar baar bol rahi thi jisko dhundhne ke liye woh kai raato se thik se soyi nhi thi iska kyaa matlab hua. Kyaa Sarita ka bhai khoo gaya tha yaa kisi ne uska kidnap karliya tha.

Par filhal Sarita ka bhai khatre se bahar hai aur abhi behosh hai.

Dekhte hai aage kyaa hota hai.

Superb revo

 

[Naina]

Aisi kia mazboori thi ki bahen ko apns bhai pe hi goli chalani padi or woh bhai per jiski parso se talash thi
Shuruwat tow suspense ke saath huwi h
Dekhte h aage kia khulasa hota h
Behtareen shaandaar shuruwat Mahi ji

revo...