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Romance Tumhare Liye... (Completed)

amita

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बाप रे ! आप की बायोग्राफी तो सच में फिल्मी स्टोरी जैसी है । पढ़कर ही लग रहा है कि आप ने कितना कष्ट भोगा होगा । आप के साथ साथ आपकी सहेली नैना की भी तो जान पर बन आई थी । उसे किडनैप कर लिया गया था और बड़ी मुश्किल से उनके चंगुल से भागी । अभी वो कहां और किस हालत में है , पता नहीं ।
लेकिन ये सारा प्लान नीलम के लिए किया गया था । इसका मतलब नीलम के दिवाने और भी थे । लेकिन क्या उन्हें पता नहीं कि नीलम का बाप एक दबंग और पावरफुल आदमी है । नैना का बाप भी तो कम नहीं है , वो भी एक रसूखदार व्यक्ति है फिर भी किसकी हिम्मत हो गई ऐसी वाहियात हरकत करने की ।
आप की स्टोरी में रोमांस के साथ साथ रोमांच भी आ गया है ।
अगले अपडेट का बेसब्री से इंतजार रहेगा नीलम जी ।
Bahut gehri soch wala vishleshan hai.
Manbhavan
 

amita

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First of all congrats for the new thread
All updates till now are going smoothly
And for the latest update
There're some doubts
Inke ghar se bhaagne se lekar ab tak chhipne mein kahin kisi apne ki hi toh koi saazish nahin na
Inka bhaagna aur Naina ka ghaayab hona koi connection toh nahin na is sab ke neeche
Yeh ladke kaun the?
Naina kahan gayi?
Aur kidnap kab aur kaise kiya gaya
Is sab saazish ke baare mein kabhi Neelam aur Nakul ko pata lag paayega ki nahin? Aur lagega toh kab aur kaise
Nice review
 

Dear Neelam

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First of all congrats for the new thread
All updates till now are going smoothly
And for the latest update
There're some doubts
Inke ghar se bhaagne se lekar ab tak chhipne mein kahin kisi apne ki hi toh koi saazish nahin na
Inka bhaagna aur Naina ka ghaayab hona koi connection toh nahin na is sab ke neeche
Yeh ladke kaun the?
Naina kahan gayi?
Aur kidnap kab aur kaise kiya gaya
Is sab saazish ke baare mein kabhi Neelam aur Nakul ko pata lag paayega ki nahin? Aur lagega toh kab aur kaise
Thank you so much for your valuable comment
Kisi apne ki saajish hai ya kisi dusre ki ye main bhi nahi janti thi.
Ye ladke kaun the update padh ke guess kar sajte hain aap.
Naina ko kisne and kaise kidnap kiya ye baad me bataaugi
Thanks once again
 

Dear Neelam

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Update - 15


Akhbaar me chhapi news ke chalte main aur nakul ab kamre me hi rahte the. Sach to ye tha ki is news ki vajah se ham dono bahut hi jyada udaas ho chuke the. Kuch bhi achha nahi lag raha tha. Uncle aunty ne bhale hi hame chinta na karne ko kah rahe the magar hakikat to ye thi ki chinta naam ki bala hamare andar se ja hi nahi rahi thi. Ham dono ka ab ek hi kaam rah gaya tha aur wo ye ki khaao piyo aur kamre me pade raho. Uncle ji ne hame shadi kar lene ka sujhaav diya tha magar abhi ki situation ke hisaab se kuch din iske liye intjar karna tha. Ham dono ek dusre se prem karte the aur ek din hame shadi karni hi thi magar chaahat ye thi ki hamari shadi hamare parents ki marji aur khushi se ho.

Aise hi teen din gujar gaye. Teesre din shaam ke teen baje ke kareeb deepak hamare yaha aaya. Main bathroom me kapde dho rahi thi jabki nakul aur deepak aapas me baate kar rahe the. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki deepak aaya hai kyo ki main bathroom me kapde dho rahi thi. Jab main kapde dho ke waapas kamre me aayi to nakul ne bataya ki deepak aaya tha aur do minute pahle hi yaha se gaya hai.

"Deepak kah raha tha ki agar hame yaha kisi tarah ka dar ho ya police ke dwara pakde jane ka khatra ho to wo hame waapas usi tarah bhesh badalwa kar mumbai le ja sakta hai." Nakul ne mujhse kaha.

"Kya rohan ne tumhe phone kiya tha iske liye." Maine puchha.
"Haa phone to kiya tha usne aur ye bhi puch raha tha ki akhbaar me hamare bare me khabar kaise chhapi hai. Maine to usse yahi kaha ki is bare me hame khud nahi pata tab usne bhi kaha ki shayad tumhare dad ne uske dad se khabar chhapwane ke liye kah gaye ho." Nakuk ne kaha.

"Fir aur kya kaha usne." Maine pucha.
"Mujhse puch raha tha ki agar koi problem ho to batao wo hame waapas bula lega. Uske flat me ham jab tak chaahe safety se rah sakte hain. Uski is baat par maine kaha ki abhi ham safe hi hain. Baar baar idhar se udhar aana jana achha nahi hai. Waise bhi ham uske upar bojh nahi banna chaahte. Meri is baat par wo kahne laga ki isme bojh jaisi kya baat hai. Wo to hame apna samajhta hai is liye agar ham par koi problem aayegi to wo hamari har tarah se help karega." Nakul ne kaha.

"Fir tumne kya kaha usse. Kya tumhe lagta hai ki hame waapas uske yaha jana chahiye." Maine puchha.
"Sach kahu to mera bilkul bhi waha jane ka man nahi hai neelam. Main maanta hu ki wo mere dost ka dost hai magar fir bhi main aisi situation me kisi ke upar bojh nahi banna chaahta. Waise bhi jis tarah ki situation ban gai hai usse hame har jagah khatra hi hai. Agar ham yaha se jayege to ho sakta hai ki is baar ham raaste me hi police dwara pakde jaye. Isse better yahi hai ki ham jaha hain wahi rahe. Yaha uncle aunty hain jo hamari problem ko samajhte hain aur hame uchit salaah bhi de rahe hain. Mujhe to un par yakeen hai ki agar kal ko ham par aisa koi khatra aata hai to wo hame safe kar lege. Jabki rohan ke yaha aisi koi baat nahi hai. Waha to bas khao piyo pade raho wala system hi rahega. Ham yaha is liye nahi aaye hain neelam balki apni ek alag duniya banane aaye hain. Uske liye hame khud kuch na kuch karna hoga." Nakul ne kaha.

"Tum bilkul thik kah rahe ho jaan. Mana ki mumbai me rohan ke flat me ham safe the aur waha har suvidha bhi thi magar uske alawa waha aisa kuch nahi tha jiski hame chaahat hai. Musibat me kisi dost ke yaha nahi rahna chahiye. Aaj ke wakt me door ka dost itni gahri dosti nibhaye to samajh lena chahiye ki uske pichhe koi na koi wajah jarur hogi. Main nahi jaanti ki wo vajah kya hogi magar itna samajhti hu ki koi na koi vajah jarur hogi. Is liye main bhi yahi kahugi ki hame ab yaha se kahi nahi jana hai. Agar hamari kismat me pakde jana hi likha hai to wo ho kar hi rahega. Fir chaahe ham jis jagah rahne chale jaye." Maine kaha.

"Sahi kaha tumne. Isi liye maine rohan ko waha aane ke liye mana kar diya hai. Maine usse saaf saaf kah diya hai ki ab jo hona hoga wo ham dekh lege. Maine usse itna jarur kah diya hai ki wo hamare bare me apne dad se ya tumhare dad se na bataye." Nakul ne kaha.

"Ye thik kah diya hai usse. Waise jab tumne use aane se mana kar diya to kya usne fir kuch nahi kaha." Maine pucha.
"Kaha tha. Bol raha tha ki mujhe usse kisi baat ke liye sankoch karne ki jarurat nahi hai aur na hi kisi baat se darne ki jarurat hai. Wo deepak ko bol dega to deepak hame puri safety ke sath mumbai bhej dega. Uski is baat par maine usse kaha ki nahi bhai ab ham yahi rahege." Nakul ne kaha.

"Thik kaha tumne aur shayad deepak usi ke kahne se yaha aaya tha." Maine kaha.
"Haa wo mujhe bol raha tha ki chinta karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Wo company me chhutti le lega aur hame usi tarah mumbai bhej dega magar maine use saaf mana kar diya hai. Mera khud man nahi hai neelam ki ab ham waha waapas jaye. Waha bhale hi safety thi aur har suvidha thi magar fir bhi aisa lagta tha jaise koi kaid ho jaha par ham band ho gaye hain aur apni marji se kahi aa ja nahi sakte." Nakul ne kaha.

"Chhodo is baat ko. Ham ab yaha se kahi nahi jayege balki yahi rahege. Ab jo kuch hoga use ham yahi rah kar jhelege. Waise kab tak hame yaha yu hi baithe rahna padega. Uncle ji hame bhala kab tak apne is kamre me muft me rahne dege. Matlab ki hame yaha ka kiraya dene ke liye koi na koi kaam to karna hi padega." Maine kaha.

"Maine is bare me uncle ji se baat ki hai. Unhone kaha hai ki kiraye ki chinta mat karo beta. Hame bhi pata hai ki tum log is wakt kis tarah ke halaat se gujar rahe ho is liye kiraye ki chinta na karo. Hame to tumse kiraya bhi nahi chahiye. Balki tum logo ke aane se hame khud ke liye hi ek sahara ho gaya hai. Ye ghar viraan sa ho gaya tha. Bachche apna apna pariwar le kar dusri jagah chale gaye. Unhe bhala is baat se kya lena dena ki unke budhe maa baap ko unse kya chahiye. Unhe to bas ab apna pariwar apne biwi bachche hi pyare hain. Tum logo ke aane se aisa lagne laga hai jaise is viraan se ghar me ek raunak aa gai hai. Is liye kisi baat ki chinta na karo. Sab thik ho jayega bas dhairya rakho." Nakul ne kaha.

"Agar aisa hai to fir thik hi hai hamare liye. Is duniya me aise log milna bhi mushkil hi hai. Ham bhi koshish karege ki hamari vajah se unhe koi taklif na ho." Maine kaha.

Kuch der baad main raat ke liye khana banane me lag gai. Jabki nakul uth kar niche uncle ji ke paas chala gaya. Is tension se bhare maahaul me ye baate hamare liye achhi hi thi. Mere man me is baat se raahat wali feeling aane lagi thi. Bas bhagwan se yahi vinti thi ki kisi din koi police wala hamari khoj me yaha na aa jaye. Ham to waise bhi filhaal baahar nikalne wale nahi the is liye kisi ki najar me aane ka sawaal hi nahi tha. Is sabke beech ek baat ki ashanka jarur thi ki nakul jab company me job ke liye gaya tha to us din company me logo ne use jarur dekha hoga. Is liye agar police waha pahuchti hai to log nakul ke bare me police ko bata sakte the ya fir news me chhapi khabar ke chalte bhi log nakul ke bare me police ko suchit kar sakte the. Mere man me isi baat ki ashanka thi aur iska dar bhi tha.

Raat me ham dono ne khana khaya aur fir sone ke liye bed par aa gaye. Nakul ne uncle ji ke sath hui baato ke bare me bataya aur fir ham kuch der me so gaye.

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Dad aur uncle mumbai se waapas ghar pahuch chuke the. Dono hi niraash the aur unhe dekh kar ghar wale bhi chitit aur pareshan ho gaye the. Sabse jyada meri mom ka bura haal tha. Ghar me dad se sabhi darte the magar jab dad khaali haath ghar pahuche to mom bifre huye andaaj me unse kahne lagi ki wo meri beti ko sath laye bina kaise mumbai se waapas aa gaye. Badi mushkil se mom ko sabne samhala. Dad mere na milne se bahut pareshan the. Iske pahle jab wo ghar se chale the tab unke andar gussa tha magar ab gussa to kam tha magar chinta aur pareshani jyada thi. Yahi haal udhar naina ke mom dad ka bhi tha.

Aisa nahi tha ki dad ko sirf apni ijjat ki hi chinta thi balki unhe meri bhi chinta thi. Wo apna pyar kabhi kisi ko dikhate nahi the magar iska matlab ye nahi tha ki wo apne bachcho se pyar nahi karte the. Ratan bhaiya ko hamesha daatte rahte the wo jabki main hamesha unka pyar aur sneh paati thi. Uske baad wakt badla aur meri life me nakul aa gaya. Nakul ke bare me pata chalte hi jaise sab kuch badal gaya. Ek hi jhatke me dad ka pyar gussa aur nafrat me badal gaya tha. Ghar me sabka yahi haal ho gaya tha.

Meri saheli naina ne mujhe bahut samjhaya tha magar ishk ka rog lag chuka tha aur wo fir kisi ki nahi sunta. Apne dilbar ke khilaaf bolne wala har shakhs jaise apna dushman ban jata hai. Jinhone janm diya aur jinhone apne pyar aur sneh se hame pala posha aur yaha tak ki jinhone hamari har khwaaish ek pal me puri ki wo sab dilbar ke aage feeke se pad jate hain. Aaj ye baate bhale hi main samajhti hu magar us wakt aisi baate dimaag me nahi aati thi. Tab to sirf ye lagta tha ki chaahe koi bhi keemat chukaani pade aur chaahe jisko chhod dena pade magar dil jise chaahta hai wo use mil jaye. Normal situation me kisi ka samjhana aur kisi ki achhi baate bhale hi bahut achhi lage magar jise kisi se prem ho jata hai uske liye sirf wo baate achhi lagti hain jo sirf uske anusaar ho ya jo baate uski pasand waali ho.

Ratan bhaiya har din mujhe message bhejte the aur mujhse baat karne ki koshish karte the magar yaha unka diya hua mobile phone switch off hi tha. Mujhe is tension me us mobile ka dhyaan hi nahi aata tha aur agar aata bhi tha to ye soch kar mobile ko on nahi karti thi ki kahi unke man me koi chaal na ho mujhe pakadne ki.

Kahte hain ki wakt se pahle kuch nahi milta aur na hi kuch hota hai. Ye sach baat hai. Wakt se pahle insaan ko uchit anuchit ki baate samajh me nahi aati ya shayad ham samajhna hi nahi chaahte magar jab wakt aata hai ya yu kahe ki hame thokar lagti hai tab hame ahsaas hota hai. Tab shayad hamare dimaag ke yantra chaalu hone lagte hain. Lekin tab tak shayad der ho chuki hoti hai. Insaan raaste me itna aage badh chuka hota hai ki wo waapas apne kadam nahi badha sakta. Kuch log badha bhi lete hain kyo ki wo himmat kar lete hain magar mere jaise log kadam waapas karne ki himmat nahi juta pate.

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Raat ka wakt tha.
Shahar ki abaadi se door sunsaan sadak ke kinaare ek moter sycle khadi thi aur usi moter sycle ke handle par helmet latka hua tha. Us moter sycle se do ya teen kadam ki doori par ek aadmi khada peshaab kar raha tha. Jis jagah par wo aadmi peshaab karne me busy tha us jagah se do teen kadam door hi ek pedh tha jiske peechhe koi chhupa hua tha. Andhera tha magar itna nahi ki das kadam ki doori par khada koi insaan najar na aaye.

Pedh ke peechhe chhupe huye byakti ki nigaah us aadmi par hi thi. Us aadmi ka side view pedh ki taraf tha. Thodi thodi der me sadak par koi na koi waahan aa hi jata tha jiski roshni waha par pad jati thi. Pedh ke peeche chhupe huye us byakti ne kuch pal socha uske baad wo chupke se pedh se baahar nikal kar us aadmi ki taraf badha. Do kadam ka hi faasla tha is liye peshaab kar rahe aadmi ko kuch bhi samajhne ka mauka na mila kyo ki tabhi uske mukh se cheekh nikal gai thi. Pedh ke peeche se aane wale byakti ke hath me mota sa danda tha jise usne us aadmi ke paas aate hi bina kuch bole uske sir par maar diya tha. Aadmi jor se cheekha aur fir apna sir pakad kar wahi gir gaya. Danda maarne wale byakti ne jhuk kar us aadmi ko dekha. Shayad dekh raha tha ki aadmi uske maarne se hosh me hai ya nahi.

Sadak par door se kisi waahan ke headlight ki roshni najar aai to us byakti ne dande ko jaldi se door feka aur fir us aadmi ke baaju me jor laga kar aage ki taraf dhakel diya jisse wo thodi dhalaan par ho gaya. Ab wo door se kisi ko najar nahi aa sakta tha is wakt. Us aadmi ko pare dhakelne ke baad wo byakti uski jagah par waise hi pose me khada ho gaya jaise ki peshaab kar raha ho. Thodi der me hi door se najar aata hua wo waahan gujar gaya. Waahan ke gujarte hi wo byakti jaldi se palta aur moter sycle ke paas aa gaya. Moter sycle me chaabhi lagi hui thi. Ye dekh kar usne jaldi se handle me se helmet nikaala aur use apne sir me laga liya. Fir moter sycle me kick maar kar usne moter sycle ko teji se aage badha diya.

Kuch door aane par saamne se ek aur waahan aata dikha jiski roshni us par padi. Roshni padte hi najar aaya ki us byakti ne jo helmet pahna tha uske andar se uske bade bade baal hawa me lahra rahe hain. Wo byakti koi ladki thi jiske badan par is wakt aise kapde the jo shayad usne kabhi nahi pahne the. Lambi chaudi sadak par uski moter sycle speed me daudi ja rahi thi. Kareeb das minute baad saamne police ka barrier dikha use. Kuch waahan bhi kataar me khade najar aaye use. Ye dekh kar usne moter sycle ko dhimi kar ke rok diya. Helmet ke andar uske maathe par pareshani dikhne lagi thi.
 
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