Romance Tumhare Liye... (Completed)

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[Dear Neelam]

superb update

Thank you so much

 

[Dear Neelam]

Greattt dear neelam ji. Such a mind blowing update and your writing skill.

Matlab wo rohan hi tha. Ab ye baat clear ho gai. I mean usi ne in dono ko deepak ke sath pune bheja tha and fir news paper me inki news chhapwa kar inka raasta block karwaya. And ab wo chahta hai ki ye dono waapas mumbai aaye and uske flat me rahe. Jarur iske pichhe uska koi ghatiya maksad hoga. But ye achha hua ki neelam and nakul ne yaha aane se inkaar kar diya. Isse rohan ki chaal uski gaand me ghus gai. In dono ke na aane se wo jarur tilmilayega and then wo kuch galat karega. Uncle aunty achhe log hain jo in dono ko apne paas hi rahne ki salaah de rahe hain. Mujhe lagta hai ki neelam and nakul ko inke paas hi rahna chahiye.

Mom ko apni beti ka dukh hai jo ki hoga hi. Puri family me neelam ke na milne se pareshani badhi hui hai. Udhar naina ki family bhi tension me hai. Ratan baar baar neelam se baat karne ke liye use massege and call karta hai but neelam mobile switch off kar rakha hai. Ratan ka character confusion wala hai. I mean wo sach me neelam ka bhala chaahta hai ya wo bhi game khel raha hai.

Ye motersycle wali ladki naina hi hogi. Jin logo ne use kaid kiya hua tha unki kaid se faraar ho gai thi to possible hai ki wo ab unse kahi door bhaag jana chaahti hogi. Waise jis tarah se usne us aadmi ko maar kar uski bike haasil ki hai wo shocking laga. Ek gaav ki ladki itni safaai se kisi ko maarti hai and fir bike le kar nikal jati hai. Kya use bike chalana aata tha ye bada sawaal hai. Sawaal to ye bhi hai ki wo itni raat me ja kaha rahi hai. Aage police ki naka bandi hai and checking ho rahi hai jise dekh kar wo pareshan ho gai hai. Anyways dekhte hain in situation se wo kaise nikalti hai.

Overall update was amazing neelam ji and now let's see what happens next. Keep it up.

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Yes wo naina hi hai

 

[Dear Neelam]

Nice and excellent update....

Thank you so much

 

[Dear Neelam]

nice update ..dono ne mumbai na jaane ka faisla sahi liya ..
aur helmet wali naina ho sakti hai par police ko dekhkar darr kyu rahi hai ?? agar police ko sab bata diya to usko ghar to bhej hi denge ya uske pariwar se contact karenge jisse wo safe ho jayegi ..

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Police se darne ka koi reason hoga ji

 

[Dear Neelam]

Awesome update dear neelam ji....

Achhe din jaise bhi the achhe hi the magar ab lagta hai ki bure din sach me aayege. Halaaki uncle aunty ki kripa abhi bhi love birfs par hai, ab agar ye log bhi bad-kismati se shaatir nikal aaye to samjho beda gark ho gaya....

Rohan kahi ladkiyo ka business to nahi karta.??
Uske teen lafange dost uske liye ladkiya dhudh ke laate hain aur yaha rohan unki smagling karta hoga, warna neelam aur naina ke sath aisa karne ki bhala kya vajah ho sakti hai.? Deepak bhi isme mila hua hai aur rohan ke ishare par wo kaam karta hai. Usne nakul ko waapas mumbai bhrjne ke liye zor diya magar shukar hai ki nakul ne samajhdaari se kaam liya aur use mana kar diya....

Ye moter sycle me jane wali ladki naina hi lagti hai magar jjis safaayi se isne us aadmi ko thoka aur uski bike apne kabje me li thi usse sawaal khada hota hai ki kya naina aisi harkat kar sakti hai.? Dusri baat ye ki bike se wo ja kaha rahi hai.? Kya use pata hai ki use kidnap karne wale kaun the.? Khair kissa ab interesting hota ja raha hai. Naina bhi kisi chakkar me lagti hai....​

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naina kaha ja rahi hai jaldi pata chalega and naina kya kar sakti hai iska jawab ye hai ki wo school college me aksar sports me hissa leti thi and ncc me bhi rahi hai

 

[Dear Neelam]

Shandar story hai aur mast starting ki hai dear neelam ji aapne_____
Story ke first update me hi stpry ki heroine neelam apne lover nakul ke sath bhaag jati hai. Ye baat kuch achhi nahi lagi kyo ki is tarah mata pita ko thukra kar use nahi jana chahiye tha. Kya mata pita ka barso ka pyar koi ahmiyat nahi rakhta______
Jis din neelam apne lover ke sath bhaagi usi din se uski dost naina bhi gayab hai. Uske baad se ab tak naina ke bare me story me kuch nahi bataya gaya. To sawaal uthta hai ki kaha gayab ho gai naina aur ab kis haal me hogi. Uske sath bura to nahi huwa_______
Ghar se bhaag kar dono by train mumbai aa gaye jaha par rohan naam ka dost dono ko apne flat me le jata hai. Ye sare dost achhe hain ki dhokhebaaj shayad baad me pata chale. Yaha par neelam aur nakul ke bich kuch romance bhi hota hai. Udhar ghar me neelam ke is tarah bhaag jane se ghar wale tension me hain jo ki hona hi tha. Ab aage in dono bhagodo ke sath kya kya hoga ye dekhne ke liye aage padhta hu aur apna review bhi duga. By the way your writing style is awesome. Keep writing and posting_______

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Pyar me andhi thi us wakt main. So ye sab ho gaya tha but fir baad me jab kuch thokar lagi to samajh aaya ki maine galti ki thi ya sahi kiya tha. Anyway thanks again

 

[Dear Neelam]

Shandar story hai dear neelam ji aur usse bhi achha lekhan hai. Har baat ko bariki se likhna achha laga. Laga hi nahi ki pahli baar likh rahi hain aap______
Story ke 11 update padh daale maine. Gajab ka likha hai aapne. Kafi interesting lagi ye story. Story ki heroine neelam apne premi nakul ke sath raato raat ghar se bhaag jati hai. Usse pahle neelam ki friend naina ne use samjhaya bhi tha lekin wo na maani aur bhaag hi gai nakul ke sath. Idhar nakul ke kuch dosto ne in dono ka mumbai jane ka intjam kar diya. Railway station me neelam ka bhai ratan apni bahan se milne aata hai aur ek achhe bhai hone ka farj nibhata hai aur ek mobile bhi gift karta hai use. Neelam ne apne bhai se milan wali baat nakul se chhupaye rakha. Lagta hai ki use kisi baat ka dar tha ya fir shak tha. Kher mumbai pahuche to waha inhe rohan milta hai jo nakul ke dosto ka dost tha. Rohan dono ko apne flat le kar jata hai aur kahta hai yaha safety raho jab tak koi kaam nahi mil jata. Kahani aage badhti hai aur ek twist aata hai. Twist ye aaya ki neelam ke father naina ke father ke sath gaon se yaha mumbai me rohan ke ghar neelam ki talaash me aa jate hain. Rohan ne bataya ki neelam ke dad aur uske dad dost dost hain. Yaha se rohan in dono ko batata rahta hai ki neelam ki talash ke liye neelam ke dad yaha kya kar rahe hain. Neelam ke dad ke aane ki vajah se problem khadi ho jati hai aur wo dono rohan ke hi flat me chhupe rahte hain magar neelam ko kisi na kisi din pakde jane ka dar satata hai. Ek din story me ek twist aur aya ki neelam ke dad ne police ko inhe dhudhne ke liye report likhwa di. Neelam aur nakul dono aapas me ray maramarsh karte hain aur fir rohan se batate hain ki unhe yaha se kisi dusri jagah bhejwa de. Rohan dono ki baat maan kar dono ko pune bhejwa deta hai apne ek dost deepak ke jariye. Pune me dono deepak ke sath rahne ke liye jagah khojte hain aur aakhir unhe thikana mil jata hai________

Yaha tak ki story padhi maine. Sach me kafi interesting lagi kahani lekin kuh doubt bhi hain. Wo ye ki aaj ke time me itne achhe dost kaha milte hain. Koi kisi ke liye itna kuch kaise kar sakta hai. Jarur in dosto ke man me kuch to hoga. Police inki khoj me pune bhi to ja sakti hai. Matlab ki in dono ko chain nahi milne wala abhi. Isse to accha yahi tha ki ye dono bhaag kar aate hi nahi. Neelam ko is tarah apne parents ko chhod kar nahi aana tha lekin ishk me andhe ko kaun samjhaye. Dekhta hu aage aur kis chakkar me faste hain ye dono_________

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Aapke doubts clear ho jayege aage. Keep reading

 

[Dear Neelam]

Behad hi shandar update the dear neelam ji_______
Neelam aur nakul jab ghar se bhaage the tab kya ye socha hoga ki aage chal kar unki life kaise jhand ho jayegi. Waise ye to socha hi hoga ki pyar ki raah me muskile bahut hain lekin is tarah ki muskile hogi sayad hi socha raha ho. Jo bhi ho ab jab bhaag kar yaha aaye hi to ab jo kuch unke sath hoga use to jhelna hi padega_______

Ye rohan to khiladi nikla. Lag to raha tha ki kuch to jhol hai warna aaj ke jamane me itni gahri dosti kaun karta hai kisi ke sath. Kamaal ka gamer nikla ye. Pahle to dono ka bharosa jita aur help karte huye dono ko pune bheja. Uske baad news me khabar chhapwa di taaki un dono ke samne koi raasta na bache aur wo yahi soche ki rohan ke alawa dusra koi unki help nahi kar sakega. Ye soch kar wo waapas mumbai aane ki baat deepak se karege lekin aisa huwa nahi. Kyo ki makan maalik unhe achhe wale mil gaye the aur is haal me un dono ki help kar rahe the. Deepak ne ye sari baat rohan se batai hogi tab usne khud hi deepak ko unke paas bheja. Deepak ne apni taraf se kosis to ki magar dono mumbai aane ke liye raaji nahi huye. Mere khayal se ye un dono ne achha faisla kiya tha lekin sochne wali baat hai ki kya rohan ab chup baithega. Aakhir uske man me to kuch aur hi hai inke liye________
Puri kahani me naina ko hide rakha gaya tha magar ab ja ke naina ka pata chala. Is rohan ne use bhi kaid karwa rakha tha agar uski achi kismat jo wo mauke pe chauka maarte huye unki kaid se faraar ho gai. Pedh ke pichhe jo kala saya tha wo hi naina thi. Kya kamaal ka stunt marte huye us aadmi se bike hathiyaya aur ab nikal gai lekin wo ja kaha rahi hai. Samne police ki checking hote dekh wo pareshan ho gai hai. Dekhte hain ab kya hota hai aage_________

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