Romance Tumhare Liye... (Completed)

[Mr. Perfect]

Fantastic ending thi dear neelam ji. Bas ye janna rah gaya ki pune se aaye uncle aunty ji ka aage kya hua. Kya wo nakul ke sath hi rahe ya wo wapas pune chale gaye the_______

Last update posted friends.
Story end ho chuki hai. Maine jo socha tha uske hisab se story ka end likh diya hai. I hope ki aap sab ko end achha lage and now finally story finish ho gai hai. Maine nahi socha tha ki main itna kuch likh paaugi but aap sabki help se main likh paai. Thanks for your appreciations and lovely support. Thank you so much

 

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Update - 32 (Last Update)


Jab ham pune pahuche to raat ho chuki thi. Ashok uncle ke ghar me main saroj aunty aur divya se mili. Divya se meri mulakaat kafi time baad hui thi. Wo pahle se kafi badal gai thi. Bade shahar me rahne ki vajah se shayad. Saroj aunty ji ne mujhse meri sari kahani puchi to maine unhe sab bata diya. Nakul chup chaap baitha hua tha. Shayad wo is wakt sabke samne sharm ya jhijhak feel kar raha tha. Kafi der tak baate chalti rahi. Fir saroj aunty ke kahne par ham sabne ek sath hi khana khaya.

Maine ashok uncle se kaha tha ki ham un uncle aunty ji se raat me hi ja kar mil aayege. Fir subah ham sab yahi se wapas mumbai jayege. Kyo ki dusre din dad aur sanjay uncle dopahar tak mumbai pahuch jane wale the. Ashok uncle ne kaha thik hai. Khana khane ke baad main aur nakul ashok uncle ke sath unki car me baith kar uncle aunty ji se milne chal diye. Is baar naina bhi hamare sath hi thi. Uska kahna tha ki wo bhi dekhna chahti hai ki ham dono kis jagah par rah rahe the.

Kareeb bees minute baad ham sab waha pahuche. Raat ho chuki thi magar bade bade shahro me itna time koi jyada nahi mana jata. Ashok uncle ne car ka horn bajaya to aunty ji ne darwaja khola. Ham sab car se utar kar gate ke paas aa gaye. Mujhe aur nakul ko dekhte hi aunty ji ke murjhaye chehre par chamak aa gai. Unhone lapak kar mujhe apne gale se laga liya aur mere chehre ko apni hatheli me bhar kar mujhse puchne lagi ki mujhe un darindo ne koi nuksan to nahi pahuchaya na.

Ham logo ke pahuchne se aunty ji bahut khush ho gai thi. Wo ham sabko andar le gai aur uncle ji ko bhi awaaj de kar bataya ki ham log aaye hain. Uncle ji kamre se nikal kar hamare paas aaye aur hame dekhte hi wo bhi bahut khush ho gaye. Ashok uncle sath me the to chaay naaste ki baat hui jis par ashok uncle ne kaha ki ham sab kha pi kar hi aaye hain.

Main aur naina aunty ji ke sath unke kamre me chali gaye jabki ashok uncle aur nakul uncle ji ke paas hi baithe rahe. Aunty ji mujhse sab kuch puchne lagi to maine unhe wo sab bataya jo mere aur nakul ke sath mumbai me hua tha. Maine unhe naina ke bare me bhi bataya. Aunty ji hame sahi salamat dekh kar bahut khush thi aur fir unhone jabadasti mujhe apne hath ke banaye laddu khilane lagi. Uske baad maine khud hi kitchen me ja kar sabke liye chaay banaai aur fir sabko chaay di.

Maine naina ko upar wale maale par le ja kar wo kamra dikhaya jisme main aur nakul rahte the. Is wakt main aur naina hi the to naina mujhse majak me kahne lagi ki hamne yaha suhagrat to nahi mana li. Naina ki is baat par maine use bataya ki suhagrat to nahi par thoda bahut pyar jarur kiya tha hamne. Uske baad maine naina ko wo jagah bhi dikhaai jaha par nakul ne ham dono ke chhupne ke liye jameen me gaddha khoda tha. Naina us gaddhe ko dekh kar shocked thi. Fir maine use dhire se ye bhi bataya ki hamne is gaddhe me bhi chhup kar thoda bahut pyar kiya tha. Meri ye baat sun kar naina hasne lagi thi aur boli ki aisi situation kaun aise kaam karta hai to maine kaha ki ye sab nakul ke kahne par hua tha.

Uncle aunty ji ke yaha hame ek se dedh ghante ka time lag gaya. Uncle aunty ji to hame aane hi nahi de rahe the magar ashok uncle ne jab unhe bataya ki kal hame mumbai bhi jana hai kyo ki mere aur naina ke dad kal dopahar ko waha pahuch jayege. Uske baad wo wahi se hame ghar le jayege. Ashok uncle ke aisa kahne par uncle aunty ji ne hame jane ki permission di. Maine uncle aunty ji se kaha ki gaon me jab meri aur nakul ki shadi hogi to main aap dono ko aane ka invitation dugi aur tab aap dono ko hamare gaon aana hi padega. Meri is baat par uncle aunty ji me kaha ki ye bhi koi kahne ki baat hai. Ham apne bachcho ki shadi me jarur aayege.

Aunty ji ne jate time mujhe aur naina ko apne gale se laga kar pyar diya aur fir dukhi man se hame vida kiya. Main aur nakul kuch hi din to unke yaha rahe the magar in kuch dino me hi hamare bich ek aisa rishta ban gaya tha jisme waisa hi prem aur lagaav tha jaise sach much ke rishto me hota hai. Jab tak ham waha nahi the tab tak ham nahi jante the ki wo dono kis tarah se apna jiwan gujaarte the magar ab hame pata tha ki hamare chale jane ke baad wo fir se akele ho jayege. Unke apne bachche apne biwi bachcho ke sath dusre shahar me rahte the. Unhe ye nahi lagta tha ki unke budhe mata pita apni aulaad aur apne pote potiyo ke liye kitna taraste hoge.

Uncle aunty ji se vida le kar jab ham waha se chale to meri aakho me aashu the. Uncle aunty ji ki bhi aakhe nam thi. Uske baad ham sab car me baith kar ashok uncle ke ghar ki taraf chal pade. Sare raaste ham uncle aunty ji ke bare me hi baate karte rahe. Ghar aaye to raat kafi ho chuki thi. Khana to ham sab pahle hi kha chuke the is liye apne apne kamre me sone chale gaye. Nakul ko ashok uncle ne guest room me sone ke liye bhej diya tha aur main naina ke sath divya ke kamre me chali gai thi. Divya ka bed kafi bada tha is liye ham teeno usme araam se let gai thi. Der raat tak ham teeno duniya bhar ki baate karti rahi uske baad ham teeno so gaye.

Next morning break fast karne ke baad main nakul aur naina ashok uncle ke sath unki car me mumbai ke liye rawana ho gaye. Maine ratan bhaiya ko phone kar ke bata diya tha ki ham mumbai time se pahuch jayege. Unhone kaha ki wo dad ko mera number de dege taaki wo mujhse baat kar sake.

Baato baato me safar kat gaya tha aur ham mumbai pahuch gaye the. Mere man me dar tha ki jab dad se samna hoga tab kya hoga. Kaise main unko apna chehra dikha paaugi. Kya wo mujhe is sabke liye daatege. Mere jaisa haal naina aur nakul ka bhi tha. Nakul to kuch jyada hi ghabraya hua dikh raha tha magar ab saamna to karna hi tha. Is liye ab jo kuch bhi hoga uske liye hamne khud ko taiyar karna shuru kar diya tha.

Jaise hi ham mumbai pahuche to mere mobile par dad ka call aa gaya. Ratan bhaiya ne mujhe unka number de diya tha aur maine mobile ki ring tone ka valume bhi badha diya tha. Dad ka call aaya to meri dhadkane tej ho gai. Darte darte maine call uthaya to udhar se dad ne apni bhaari awaaj me mujhse pucha ki kaha par hain ham log. Dad ke puchne par maine apna mobile ashok uncle ko pakda diya aur unse kaha ki dad se baat kar ke bata dijiye ki ham log kaha par hain.

Ashok uncle ne dad se kafi der tak baat ki aur unhe kaha ki wo ham sabko le kar wahi aa rahe hain. Shayad dad ne ashok uncle ko bata diya tha ki unhe kaha aana hai. Ashok uncle ne dad ki bataai hui jagah par ham sabko le gaye. Jab ham waha pahuche to pata chala ki ham sab rohan ke ghar aa gaye the.

Dad ne mujhe dekha to unki aakho me aashu aa gaye aur unhone mujhe jaldi se apne gale laga liya. Main to dar rahi thi ki pata nahi dad kya kya kahege mujhe magar unhone to mujhe pyar se gale laga liya tha. Jab main unke gale lagi to mujhe bahut jyada rona aa gaya. Udhar yahi haal sanjay uncle ka bhi tha. Unhone bhi apni beti naina ko gale se laga liya tha. Kuch der baad dad ne mujhe khud se alag kiya aur wo sanjay uncle se mile.

Rohan ke dad ki car aa kar ruki. Jaise hi rohan ke dad car se utar kar dad ke paas aaye to dad ko dekh kar wo apne hath jod liye aur unse maafiya maagne lage.

"Mujhe nahi pata tha surendra ki mera beta itna gira hua hoga. Main to yahi samajhta tha ki mera beta padh likh kar ab business me mera hath batayega. Mere bete ne jo kiya uske liye main bahut sharminda hu. Tum mere bete ko jo saja dena chaho de sakte ho. Kaash ki mera koi beta hi na hota. Kam se kam aaj main apne bhai jaise dost ke saamne itna sharminda to na hota. Meri aulaad ne mujhe kahi ka nahi chhoda." Rohan ke dad ne kaha.

"Shukar mana ki hamari betiyo ko kuch nahi hua. Agar unhe jara si kharoch bhi aa jati to main tere saamne tere bete ko aisi maut deta ki tu pahchan bhi nahi pata ki wo tera beta hai. Mere bhi bachche hain magar unhone aisa koi kaam nahi kiya aaj tak jiski wajah se kisi masoom ladki ki jindagi hi barbaad ho jaye." Dad ne gusse me kaha to rohan ke dad sir nicha kiye khade rahe. Unki wife bhi andar se nikal kar baahar aa gai thi. Unhe bhi pata chal gaya tha ki unke bete ne kya gul khilaya tha. Unki haalat dekh kar lag raha tha jaise wo bahut roi ho.

"Ishwar jab aulad deta hai to maa baap ka farj banta hai ki unhe achhe sanskar de aur samay samay par ye bhi dekhte rahe ki aulaad sahi raaste par hai ya galat raaste par. Kiske liye bana raha hai ye dhan dhaulat. Tere sapoot ka to teri is daulat se bhet hi nahi bharta. Tabhi to aisa ghatiya kaam karta hai." Dad ne kaha.

"Tu sahi kah raha hai surendra. Sab meri hi galti hai. Maine hi kabhi ye nahi dekha ki mera beta kya karta hai. Main to isi bhram me tha ki wo jo bhi karta hai achha hi karta hai magar aaj jaan gaya hu ki wo kya karta raha hai. Main bahut sharminda hu dost. Man to karta hai ki police thane me ja kar pahle apne us nalayak bete ko goli maaru aur fir khud ko bhi goli maar lu." Rohan ke dad ne kaha.

Sanjay uncle aur ashok uncle ke samjhane par dad chup ho gaye the. Uske baad ham sab waha se chal diye. Main aur naina sahi salamat thi is liye dad aur sanjay uncle ne bhi rohan ke dad ko fir kuch nahi kaha. Waha se ham sab sanjay uncle ki car me chal diye the. Car me ham sab kisi tarah adjust kar ke baith gaye the. Raaste me ashok uncle se dad ne kaha ki kisi hotel me ja kar pahle wo fresh hona chahte hain. Uske baad shaam chaar baje ki train se ham sab ko le ke ghar jayege.

Dad ke kahne par ashok uncle wahi ke ek hotel me car ko roka. Car ruki to ham sab utre aur fir hotel ke andar chale gaye. Ashok uncle ne do kamre book kiye to ham sab upar aa gaye. Main naina nakul aur ashok uncle to fresh ho kar aur kha pi kar hi aaye the. Is liye ham ek kamre me chup chaap baithe rahe jabki dad aur sanjay uncle fresh hone chale gaye.

Main naina aur nakul ek hi kamre me the jabki dusre kamre me dad sanjay uncle aur ashok uncle the. Pata nahi unki aapas me kya baate hui. Uske baad dad ke kahne par ham teeno kamre se baahar aaye aur unke sath niche chal diye. Niche aa kar ham sabne thoda bahut khana khaya. Dad ashok uncle se pata nahi kya baate kar rahe the. Maine dekha tha ki ab tak unhone nakul se koi baat nahi ki thi. Ye dekh kar mere man me ajeeb ajeeb se khayaal aa rahe the.

Khana kha kar ham sab kamre me aa gaye. Dad ka kahna tha ki kuch der araam kar lo uske baad ham sab railway station ke liye niklege. Hamari train chaar baje ki thi is liye ham bees minute pahle hi hotel se nikal liye. Ashok uncle apni car me ham sab ko railway station le aaye. Dad aur ashok uncle ki ab aapas me kafi banne lagi thi. Dad to ashok uncle ko baar baar thanks kah rahe the ki unhone unki bachchiyo ke liye itna kuch kiya tha. Agar socha jaye to ye sab ashok uncle ki hi vajah se hua tha. Agar wo na hote to pata nahi hamara kya hota. Dad ke baar baar thanks kahne par ashok uncle bas yahi kah rahe the ki ye unka farj tha kyo ki wo hame apni hi beti maante the.

Train aai to sanjay uncle ne hame andar baithaya aur khud bhi hamare samne wali sheet par baith gaye. Dad ashok uncle ke sath baahar hi the aur baate kar rahe the. Jab train ne chalne ka horn bajaya to dad bhi ashok uncle se vida le kar andar aa gaye.

Andar aa kar dad bhi sanjay uncle ke bagal se baith gaye. Main aur naina unke samne wali sheet par baithi hui thi. Hamari sheet par bagal se ek aurat baithi hui thi. Nakul sanjay uncle ke bagal me chup chaap baitha hua tha. Wo shayad abhi bhi ghabraya hua tha ya shayad mere dad se dar raha tha. Main khud bhi ye soch kar man hi man dari hui thi ki dad shayad ab hamse is bare me baat karege ki ham dono ghar se kyo bhaag kar yaha aaye the. Train apni speed se daudti rahi aur fir dhire dhire shaam bhi ho gai. Dad ne mujhse ya nakul se ek baar bhi is silsile me koi baat nahi ki thi. Wo to bas sanjay uncle se hi duniya bhar ki baate karte rahe.

Raat me main aur naina upar ki dono sheeto par let kar so gai. Udhar dad sanjay uncle aur nakul bhi apni apni sheeto par so gaye. Sabse niche wali sheet par ek aurat let gai thi. Raat me badi gahri need aai thi aur subah kab hui iska pata hi nahi chala hame. Meri jab aakh khuli to dekha niche ki sheet par dad sanjay uncle aur nakul baithe huye the. Naina abhi bhi so rahi thi jabki uske niche wali sheet par wo aurat jag chuki thi aur ab baithi hui thi. Subah ho chuki thi aur shayad time bhi kafi ho chuka tha.

Dad ki najar mujh par padi to wo halke se muskuraye aur fir kaha ki bada jaldi aakh khul gai hamari princess ki. Unke is tarah kahne par mere hotho par bhi muskaan ubhar aai. Aaj kafi time baad dad ne mujhe itne pyar se princess kaha tha. Mere dil me thoda dard hua magar ye dard khushi wala tha. Mera man kiya ki main niche utar kar dad se lipat jaau magar fir maine apni is bhaavna ko daba liya aur fir apne kapdo ko adjust karne lagi. Kuch der me main niche aa gai aur fir maine naina ko bhi jaga diya.

Dad ne ham dono ko fresh hone ke liye kaha to ham dono ek ek kar ke fresh ho aaye. Fresh ho kar main aur naina us aurat ke sath hi baith gaye. Meri najar nakul par padi to dekha wo ab normal dikh raha tha. Jaise hi hamari najre mili to wo halke se muskuraya. Use muskurata dekh mere hotho par bhi muskan ubhar aai magar fir maine jaldi se dad ki taraf dekh kar usse najre hata li. Itna to main samajh gai thi ki jab main so rahi thi tab shayad dad ne usse koi baat ki thi jisse ab wo normal dikh raha tha aur mujhe dekh kar muskuraya bhi tha. Mere man me ye janne ki utsukta badh gai ki nakul ke normal hone ki vajah kya hai. Kya sach me dad ne usse baat ki thi. Agar haa to kya baat kiya tha unhone. Nakul mujhe dekh kar muskuraya tha iska to yahi matlab hua ki koi aisi baat thi jo ham dono ki khushi se judi hui thi. Waise ye to main janti thi ki dad hamari shadi ke liye maan gaye hain magar main ye soch ke thoda ghabraai hui thi ki dad agar hamse is sabke bare me kuch kahege to ham unhe kya jawaab de payege.

Main aur naina chup chaap hi baithe huye the. Dad aur sanjay uncle ke saamne kuch baat karne ki himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi aur yahi haal bechare nakul ka bhi tha. Wo bhi chup chaap hi baitha hua tha. Kisi tarah time gujra to ham apne shahar aa gaye. Train se ham sab utre aur fir station se baahar aa gaye. Dad ne shayad ghar me phone kar ke bata diya tha. Is liye ghar se ravendra uncle aur ratan bhaiya car le kar aa gaye the.

Ratan bhaiya ko dekhte hi mujhe wo sab kuch yaad aa gaya jo unhone mere liye kiya tha. Mujhe dekh kar unhone muskurate huye apni baahe faila di to main apna bag chhod kar bhaagte huye unke paas gai aur unse lipat gai. Meri aakho se aashu bahne lage the. Unhone mujhe rote dekha to wo bade pyar se mujhse na rone ke liye kahne lage.

"Ab to sab kuch thik ho gaya hai neel. Fir ab kyo ro rahi hai tu." Ratan bhaiya ne pyar se kaha.
"Mujhe rone dijiye bhaiya. Aap nahi jante ki main kab se is pal ka intjar kar rahi thi ki aap mujhe mil jaye aur main aapke gale lag jaau aur fir apne sabse achhe wale bhaiya se haath jod kar maafi maagu." Maine rote huye kaha to bhaiya ne mujhe alag kiya.

"Maafi kis baat ke liye neel." Bhaiya ne pucha.
"Aapko galat samajhne ke liye. Aapne meri bhalaai ke liye mujhe mobile diya tha aur main ye samajhti thi ki aapne mujhe wo mobile is liye diya tha taaki aap meri pal pal ki khabar rakh sake aur fir mauka dekh kar mujhe fasa sake. Kitna galat samajh rahi thi main aapko. Main bahut buri hu bhaiya. Mujhe maaf kar dijiye." Main rote huye fir se unke gale lag gai. Idhar sab koi mujhe aur ratan bhaiya ko hi dekhe ja rahe the magar koi kuch bol nahi raha tha.

"Tune us wakt agar mujhe galat samjha tha to kya galat tha neel. Us situation me koi bhi yahi samajhta. Anyway tu meri jaan se bhi pyari bahan hai. Tune kuch bhi galat na kiya hai aur na samjha hai. Ab chal chup ho ja. Dekh kitne sare log tujhe rote huye dekh rahe hain. Kya sochege ye log ki itni badi ho gai hai magar bachcho ki tarah roti hai." Ratan bhaiya ne mujhe alag kiya aur fir apne hatho se mere aashu pochhe. Dad ye dekh kar jaldi se palat gaye aur fir apni aakh ki nami ko sabse chhupa kar pochhte huye ravendra uncle wali car me baith gaye. Unke baithte hi sanjay uncle bhi usme baith gaye.

Main nakul aur naina ratan bhaiya ki car me baith gaye. Uske baad dono car aage piche gaon ki taraf chal padi. Ravendra uncle ki car aage aage ja rahi thi aur ham log unke pichhe chal rahe the. Raaste me ratan bhaiya ne nakul se baat cheet shuru ki. Wo nakul se bahut hi achhe se baat kar rahe the. Piche ki sheet par main aur naina baithi hui thi. Pure raaste ham log tarah tarah ki baate karte huye ja rahe the. Naina to sari baate aise badha chadha ke bata rahi thi ki ratan bhaiya jor jor se hasne lagte the. Hasi khushi ke maahaul me ham ye bhool hi gaye the ki ham kis tarah ki situation se nikal kar aaye the.

Aakhir ham sab ghar pahuche. Mom mujhe dekhte hi daud kar mere paas aai aur mujhe apne seene se laga liya. Udhar naina ki mom ne bhi apni beti naina ko apne seene se laga liya. Kuch der tak jaise bharat milaap hota raha. Sab khush the ki betiya sahi salamat ghar wapas aa gai hain. Kuch der baad sanjay uncle apni mrs ke sath naina ko le kar apne ghar chale gaye.

Nakul ke liye ek baar fir se situation ajeeb ho gai thi. Shayad use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kisi se kaise mile aur kaise unse baat kare. Ratan bhaiya kafi samajhdar the. Wo nakul ko apne sath apne kamre me le gaye aur usse kaha ki wo fresh ho kar araam kare.

Ghar ke sab log khush ho gaye the. Meri aunty ki ladki maya mujhe akela chhod hi nahi rahi thi. Wo meri laadli thi is liye maine use apne paas hi rakha. Fresh hone ke baad maine aur nakul ne sab ke sath thoda bahut khaya aur fir araam karne chale gaye.

Nakul ka apna ghar hamare ghar se thodi door tha. Dusre din wo apne ghar jana chahta tha magar ratan bhaiya ne use jane nahi diya. Unka kahna tha ki ab to wo is ghar ka hone wala damaad hai is liye isi ghar me rahe. Nakul ko ye baat achhi to lag rahi thi magar use is ghar me sabke bich rahne me ajeeb lag raha tha. Ratan bhaiya uski haalat samajhte the is liye wo use apne sath hi rakhte the. Kuch din aise hi gujar gaye.

Ghar me mom aur aunty mujhse meri kahani ke bare me thodi bahut baate karti aur fir mujhe samjhati ki ab ye sab bura sapna samajh kar bhool jaao. Udhar dad aur ravendra uncle meri aur nakul ki shadi ke liye pandit se koi achha muhoort nikalwa rahe the. Pandit ji ne do hapte baad ka muhoort nikala tha. Dad ne ghar me sabko is bare me bataya aur kaha ki neelam aur nakul ki shadi wo bade dhoom dhaam se karege.

Do hapte baad wo din aa hi gaya jab main dulhan bani aur nakul dulha bana. Uske baad bade dhoom dhaam se ham dono ki shadi hui. Aas paas jitne bhi gaon the sab hamari is shadi se khush bhi the aur hairaan bhi. Dad ke jaan pahchaan wale bahut the. Wo sab us din aaye the. Kuch log aise bhi the jo dad se ye kah rahe the ki ek anaath aur gareeb ladke se apni beti ki shadi kar ke unhone thik nahi kiya magar bahut se aise the jo dad ko shabashi de rahe the. Dad ko ab in baato se koi matlab nahi tha ki log kya kya kah rahe the. Unhe to bas is baat se matlab tha ki unki beti khush rahe.

Dad ne ashok uncle ko apni puri family ke sath shadi me aane ka invitation diya tha. Maine ashok uncle se baat kar ke unhe kaha tha ki wo uncle aunty ko bhi meri shadi ka invitation de aur unhe apne sath hi yaha le kar aaye. Shadi ke ek din pahle hi ashok uncle unhe apne sath le kar aa gaye the. Uncle aunty bahut khush the ki maine unhe apna maan kar bulaya tha. Ashok uncle ne dad se unke bare me bataya to dad ne unka bade achhe dhang se swagat kiya tha. Idhar Divya aur naina ne mujhe apne hatho se sajaya tha.

Shadi bade hi dhoom dhaam se hui aur fir meri vidaai ka wakt aaya. Ghar ki laadli beti ab apne piya ke ghar jane wali thi. Meri mom aur aunty mujhe rote huye vida kar rahi thi. Sara gaon hamare ghar me jaise ikattha ho gaya tha. Uncle aunty ji ke aane se ek achhi baat ye hui ki unhone rasm nibhane ke liye nakul ko apna beta bana liya tha. Nakul ki jid thi ki wo apne ghar me hi mujhe le kar jaye. Is liye ratan bhaiya ne uske ghar ki achhe se saaf safaai karwa di thi aur achhe se saja diya tha. Uncle aunty ji ne jarurat ki cheeje waha par rakhwa di thi.

Vida ho kar main apne piya ke sath apne sasuraal jane lagi. Apne dad ko main yahi samajhti thi ki wo bahut kathor hain magar jab main rote huye unse lipat gai to unki aakho se bhi aashu bah chale the. Mom aur aunty ki to haalat hi kharaab thi. Naina aur divya bhi ro rahi thi. Ratan bhaiya kahi dikh nahi rahe the. Main bhaiya bhaiya kah ke roye ja rahi thi. Jaise hi mujhe car me baithaya jane laga tabhi ek aadmi ratan bhaiya ko liye mere paas aaya. Ratan bhaiya ko dekhte hi main unse lipat gai. Wo mujhe apne gale se laga kar bachcho ki tarah rone lage the. Har taraf jaise cheekho pukaar macha hua tha.

Kisi tarah ratan bhaiya ne mujhe car me baithaya aur gate band kar diya. Jaise hi car chali to main aur jor jor se rone lagi. Meri mom aur aunty paas me hi thi wo mujhe samhaalne ke liye pakadne lagi. Gaon ki aurto ne mom aur aunty ko samjhaya bujhaya aur unhe mujhse door kiya. Uske baad car aage badh chali.

Main sasuraal pahuchi to waha ki kuch aurto ki help se aunty ji ne mera parchhan karwaya aur fir ghar me prawesh karwaya. Maine kabhi iski kalpna nahi ki thi ki ghar se vida hote time main itna rougi aur mere andar itni jyada bhavnaye umad aayegi. Ghar aai to baaki ki rasme hui aur fir raat me main kamre me suhaag sej par baithi nakul ka intjar karne lagi. Aaj hamare milan ki raat thi. Aaj hamare ek ho jane ki raat thi. Sirf itne ke liye hamare sath itna kuch ho chuka tha. Nakul jab kamre me aaya to mere dil ki dhadkane badh gai aur mujhe ghabrahat si hone lagi. Nakul mere paas aaya aur bed ke kinare par baith gaya.

"Apne is ghar me tumhe is roop me dekh kar aisa lag raha hai jaise main koi sapna dekh raha hu. Darta hu ki kahi aakh na khul jaye aur itna sundar sapna ek pal me kahi kho jaye." Nakul ne dhimi awaaj me ye kaha to maine najar utha kar uski taraf dekha.

"Aisa kabhi nahi hoga. Ham dono ye jo sapna dekh rahe hain na ye kisi bhi tarah se kho nahi sakta. Kyo ki chahe aakh band rahe ya khuli rahe fir bhi ye sapna dono surat me bana rahega." Maine kaha.
"Achha apna chaad sa chehra to dikhaao." Nakul ne kaha.
"Chehra dekhne ke liye neg ke roop me uski kimat chukani hogi tumhe." Maine muskura kar kaha.

"Ye kya baat hui." Nakul ne pucha.
"Pata nahi par mujhe yahi bataya gaya hai ki main apna chehra tumhe tabhi dikhaau jab tum muh dikhaai ka neg doge." Maine sharma kar kaha.
"Fir to problem ho gai yaar. Mere paas is wakt tumhe dene ke liye kuch bhi nahi hai." Nakul ne udaas ho ke kaha.

"To fir mera chehra dekhne ko nahi milega tumhe." Maine muskurate huye kaha nakul se.
"Aur to kuch nahi hai mere paas magar ek cheej hai. Agar tum kaho to usi ko de du tumhe." Nakul ne kaha.
"Kaun si cheej hai." Maine pucha.

"Vachan. Haa neelam mere paas vachan hai jo main tumhe de sakta hu. Main tumhe vachan deta hu ki life me chaahe jaisi bhi situation ban jaye magar main kabhi bhi tumhara bharosa nahi toduga aur na hi kabhi kisi dusri ladki ya aurat ke sath jismani sambandh banaauga." Nakul ne ye kaha to mujhe us par bahut jyada pyaar aa gaya aur main jhat se apna ghooghat nikaal kar usse lipat gai.

Ham dono ek ho chuke the. Dad ne nakul ko business karwa diya tha. Nakul ne kabhi unhe nirash nahi kiya balki apni mehnat aur lagan se business ko aur bhi bada kiya. Nakul ki imandari aur uski mehnat dekh kar dad khush the. Wo hamesha ye sochte ki achha hua jo unhone nakul ko thukraya nahi tha. Ek anaath ladke ke sath apni beti ki shadi kar ke kabhi unhe bura feel nahi hua balki aage chal kar wo nakul ko bhi ratan bhaiya ki tarah apna beta maanne lage the. Ratan bhaiya nakul ko apna jija kam dost jyada maante the. Meri shadi ke ek saal baad ratan bhaiya ki bhi shadi ho gai thi. Unki shadi jis ladki se hui thi wo meri dost aur ashok uncle ki beti divya thi. Meri shadi ke time hi dono ki najre chaar hui thi aur fir wo dono ek dusre ko pasand karne lage the. Kismat ko bhi yahi manjur tha is liye ashok uncle ne bhi ye rishta accept kar liya tha. Divya meri bhabhi ban kar ratan bhaiya ki life me aa gai thi.

*The End*

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I think story ko ab yahi par end kar dena chahiye. Fir bhi agar aap logo ke man me kuch ho to aap mujhe bata dijiye. Main try karugi ki aap jaisa chahe waisa likh saku. Thank you

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Greattt neelam ji. Such a mind blowing update and beautiful ending.

Greattt work neelam ji. Neelam ke dad ne rohan ke baap ko gusse me kafi kuch sunaya and fir wo ashok uncle ke sath sabko le kar chal diye. Neelam and nakul dar rahe the ki dad ab unse ka kahege but unhone kuch nahi kaha. Mumbai se apne ghar aaye to mom ne bhi neelam ko gale laga liya. Bachche chahe jaise bhi ho but parents unki har galti bhula dete hain and unhe pyar hi karte hain. Ratan jaisa bhai hona chahiye jisne apni bahan ki khushi ke liye bahut kuch kiya. Neelam ke mom dad ko shadi ke liye mana lena badi baat thi and ye ratan ne kiya. Ashok uncle ko kaise bhul sakte hain ham jisne apni beti ki saheliyo ke liye itna kuch kiya.

Naina ne ek ladki hote huye bhi bada kaam kiya. Khud to mujrimo ki kaid se nikli hi but usne neelam ko bachane ke liye bhi bahut kuch kiya. I think naina ka role sabse important tha story me bcoz wo nahi hoti to neelam and nakul rohan and party se bach hi nahi pate.

Neelam and nakul ke golden time bhi aaya jab dono ki shadi hui and pune wale uncle aunty ne nakul ko pana beta maan kar ghar pravesh karaya. Story me unko importance de kar achha kiya. By the way neel and nakul ki suhagraat ke sare scene skip kar diye aapne. Anyways ratan ko bhi neelam ki shadi me ek fayda hua. Use divya jaisi ladki mil gai and fir usse uski shadi bhi ho gai.

Neelam ke dad ne nakul ke liye business karwa diya and nakul ne apni mehnat se business ko badha liya. Neelam ke dad nakul ko apna ghar jamaai bana kar khush hain. Ek anaath ladka aaj ek ijjatdar aadmi ban gaya. Overall outstanding job and beautiful ending neelam ji and now will wait for your next story.

 

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Last update posted friends.
Story end ho chuki hai. Maine jo socha tha uske hisab se story ka end likh diya hai. I hope ki aap sab ko end achha lage and now finally story finish ho gai hai. Maine nahi socha tha ki main itna kuch likh paaugi but aap sabki help se main likh paai. Thanks for your appreciations and lovely support. Thank you so much

Beautiful ending with beautiful writing skills.

 

[Dear Neelam]

nice ending ..
sabkuch sahi ho gaya ..dad se milke rona aur ratan bhaiya se bhi ekdam emotional tha ..
apno se milna wo bhi itni badi musibat se bachke ek alag hi emotion paida karta hai ..
uncle aunty ne nakul ko beta banake uske saare shadi ki rasmo ko pura kiya ye sahi tha ..

aakhir me neelam aur nakul ki shadi ho gayi aur nakul ne jo vachan diya neg ke roop me wo ek pyar karnewala hi de sakta hai ..
divya bhi neelam ki bhabhi banke aa gayi ..neelam ki shadi me ratan aur divya ki aankhe char huyi thi ..

Thank you so much for your valuable feedback

 

[Dear Neelam]

waise uncle aunty nakul aur neelam ke saath hi rehte hai yaa nahi ..
par wo in dono ke saath hi rehte to unka akelapan aur sunapan bhi dur ho gaya hoga ..
musibat ke waqt sirf un dono ne saath diya ,khana diya ,,rent nahi liya isse unka pyar aur badappan dikhta hai ..

Shadi ke baad kuch din sath rahe the fir wo apne ghar pune wapas chale gaye the

 

[Dear Neelam]

so call karke police ko sab kuch bata diya... hope police wale jaldi se call trach karke wahan pahunch jaye neelam ko bachane..
idhar ek problem ko solved karne ki koshish kar hi rahi thi ki dusri problem suru.. ek dar ek chinta ki nakul kaha hai, kis haal mein hai..


aur nakul idhar in gundo ke kabze mein... aur bharosha karo aise logo pe.. ab pachtane ke sivaye koi rasta bhi nahi hai..

are yaar isko to maarne ke firak mein hai yeh log..
are koi vaishali ko bulao

great... ab bas jaldi se us flat par pahunch jaye... kya baat hai THE GREAT NAINA bhi aa rahi hai sath mein.. are naina aa rahi hai to fikar karne ki jarurat hi nahi.. wo sabki aisi ki taisi kar degi

ye achha kiya jo kundi laga ke.. ab itni asani se wo dono tharki jaldi andar nahi ghus payenge..
Hawww... neelam ki situation mein fanshi hai baat uski mom ko jaan gayi..
dekha.. chahe santan jitni bhi galti kyun na kar le par ek maa ki mamta kabhi kam nahi hoti..
aur neelam hai ki apni mom ko hi akeli chhod aayi bina ye soche ki unpe kya bitegi..
waise fikar not... uske dad bhi maaf kar denge... akhir beti hai unki... koi gair nahi




lo aa gaye kamine...
ab ghabrane se kya hoga...
electric shock wali planning par amal nahi kiya.. ab darna swavabik hai...
Khair kahani kaafi dilachasp mod pe aake ruki hai
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills neelam ji

Thank you so much for your valuable feedback

 

[Dear Neelam]

shayad neelam ji naraz hai .. kal, kal bolke revo revo abhi tak na dene par
(Sorry late revo ke liye)

Naraj kis liye. Aapke pas time nahi so no problem

 

[Dear Neelam]

are wo sab to thik hai par naina ko kahe biche baitha diya inlogo ne.. are ushe lead karne do..kyunki wo the great one hai


kaise nich khayalat ke log hai ye dono rohan aur Deepak ... are aise dhokhebaaz, dagabaaz, kamine logo ko to chullu bhar paani mein dub kar mar jana chahiye
are yaar un dono ki baatein kyun sun rahi neelam.. are koi bhari chij uthake un dono ke sar par maarke sar hi fod deni thi.. kissa khatam hamesha ke liye..
Btw chalo akhirkar himmat to dikhayi thodi bahot climax ke waqt..


bhagwan lakh lakh sukar hai ki police aur ashok uncle aur naina sahi samay par wahan aa gaye...
hmm.... to nakul ka bhi pata lag gaya.. chalo achha hai do bichhde premi phir se mil gaye.. isse zyada khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai



Yeh log pehle se bahot bure aur ghatiya the... chalo achha hua ki pakde gaye..

The great naina... naina k samne baki sab chai kam pani hai wo na hoti to neelam kya karti..




hmm... waise aaj bhi kayi aise log hai jo niswarth hoke logo ki madad karte hai chaahe jaan pehchaan kuch hi dino k kyun na ho jaise wo uncle aunty... yeh achha kiya inlogo jo unke ghar jane ka faisla kiya...
So.... ab sab kuch lag bhag thik ho chuka hai aur situation bhi... ...sibaye ek baat ko chhod ke... neelam ke dad nakul ko as a damad swikar karenge...
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

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Thank you so much for your valuable feedback

 

[Dear Neelam]

Kaafi emotional moments aaye par chaliye ant bhala to sab bhala...
pariwar ne nakul ko as a damad swikar kar liya...

shaadi bhi ho gayi... btw neelam aur nakul ne kaafi sangharh ki hai.. ab haatat hi aise the ki wo dono kya karte.. chalo koi na waqt waqt ki baat hai.. ant mein sabhi sah pariwar ke sanmati se dono ki shaadi ho gayi.. dono ek ho gaye..
sabse important baat ye ki neelam is baat k ehsaas hai ki mata pita chahe kuch keh de par mata pita se badhkar is duniya mein aur koi nahi.. aur bhai ho to ratan jaisa.. jo bhai hone ka farj purn roop se nibhaya... chahte to naraz ya gussa bhi ho sakte the lekin wo samaj gaye the ki neelam ki khushi kya hai aur kiske sath khush rahegi...
Baaki logo ne bhi bahot sahyog kiya undono ko..
Jaise pune wale uncle - aunty..
wohi ashok uncle aur unke gharwale, inhone bhi bahot help ki..
sach mein jis tarah inhone niswarth hoke madad ki usko ek salam...
Aur dost ho to great naina jaisi
Khair.... ye apbiti jise kahani roop mein aapne hamare samne pesh ki hai yeh sach mein dilchasp thi..
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills Dear Neelam ji

Thank you so much for your valuable feedback

 

[Dear Neelam]

are tanik thahriye..is story ko lekar ek apni aurr se abhi book's review baaki hai... baat baaki hai...Khair.. Kal tak wo review bhi clear kar deni hai..
Now ismile plz..

Story end ho gai isi se smile aa gai. Main khush hu ki maine ek story likhi aur use pura kar di.