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Brijesh

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Uday 14

pallavan poochha aapane kaha tha kee mujhase kuchh galatee ho gaee thee vo kya thee ?

bhabhootanaath ne aage bataaya ham divyapurush hai aur hamaara kaam mahaashakti ke aadesh ko maanana aur unake kaary ko anjaam dena hai . ham apane karm se bandhe hai aur hamen panchendriyon ko kaaboo karane kee taaleem dee gaee hai vo bhee 300 saal tak . hamen kisee bhee haal mein bahakane kee ijaajat nahin hai lekin vietanaam mein tum ek stree kee taraph aakarshit hue the aur sambandh banaaya jisase tumhaaree taakat ka hraas hua isee vajah se aseemanaath tumhaare shareer ka naash kar paaya . lekin tumhaaree vaasana adhooree na rah jaaye isalie mainne tumhaare saath us stree ka bhee punarjanm kartavy jo kee niyamo kee gambheer avahelana thee isalie mujhe saja huee lekin jab tum mujhe milo tab tumhaaree koee vaasana baaki na rahe ye sochakar mainne yah kaam kiya tha.

pallav ne poochha kee abhee aseemanaath kaha hai ? aur teesare parimaan mein baaba katankanaath mile the vo kaun the ? baaba ne bataaya kee aseemanaath abhee teesare parimaan mein hai aur vah vah aseemaanand naam se jaana jaata hai aur abhee vah chauthe parimaan mein pravesh karane ka maarg dhoondh raha hai aur vo bhee kaalee saadhana ke maadhyam se . vah kaalee shaktio ko bali chadhakar prasann kar raha hai aur agar vah chauthe parimaan mein pahunch gaya to usakee shakti phir se badh jaegee isalie use rokana jaruree hai .

chauthe parimaan mein pravesh karane ke saat maarg hai ek to vah hai jis raste se tum aaye ho vah se karkavakra ke rekha jaatee hai, doosara dvaar kaashee mein, teesara dvaar Germany naamak desh mein chauth dvaar Brajil naamak desh mein, paanchava Australia , chhatha Yuganda aur saatava America naamak desh mein hai. vaise yah sab naam abhee ke hisaab se bata raha hu vaise in desho ke naam pahale kuchh alag the . ek aur praveshadvaar dvaar hai jo kee mahaashaktio ke kaaboo nahin hai jise raaja raavan ne banaaya tha usane chauthe parimaan mein pravesh kar liya tha aur yahaan kee pavitr jheel ka paanee piya tha jisakee vajah se usakee taakat aneko guna badh gaee thee usane paachave parimaan mein pravesh karane kee lie ek dvaar banaana shuroo kar diya tha lekin isase pahale hamane use teesare parimaan mein vaapas panhucha diya tha . aseemanaath ka iraada raavan dvaara nirmit dvaar se chauthe parimaan mein pravesh karana aur usane adhoora rakha hua paachave praveshadvaar nirmaan kaary poorn karana hai aur hamaara kaary hai mahaashakti ko prasann karake paachave parimaan mein pravesh karake tumhaara mool shareer paana, apane baaki saat divyapurushoko chhudaana aur aseemanaath ko rokana .

pallav ko abhee bhee vishvaas nahin ho raha tha kee yah sab saty hai use lag raha tha kee ya to ye sapana hai ya koee maaya .

bhabhatanaath ne kaha kee maee tamhaaree aankhon mein avishvaas dekh raha hu .

tum thoda bhojan karo aur aaram karo abhi tumhara sharir chaturth pariman ka aadi nahi hua hai . kal se tumhari talim shuru hogi , manme shanka mat rakho mujh par vishwas karo . pallv uthkar apani kutir ki tarf gaya useke nicalte hi bhbhutanath ke chehare par muskarahat a gai vo man hi man bole is bar shayad mera karya purn ho .


to be continue.......
 

ashish_1982_in

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Uday 14

pallavan poochha aapane kaha tha kee mujhase kuchh galatee ho gaee thee vo kya thee ?

bhabhootanaath ne aage bataaya ham divyapurush hai aur hamaara kaam mahaashakti ke aadesh ko maanana aur unake kaary ko anjaam dena hai . ham apane karm se bandhe hai aur hamen panchendriyon ko kaaboo karane kee taaleem dee gaee hai vo bhee 300 saal tak . hamen kisee bhee haal mein bahakane kee ijaajat nahin hai lekin vietanaam mein tum ek stree kee taraph aakarshit hue the aur sambandh banaaya jisase tumhaaree taakat ka hraas hua isee vajah se aseemanaath tumhaare shareer ka naash kar paaya . lekin tumhaaree vaasana adhooree na rah jaaye isalie mainne tumhaare saath us stree ka bhee punarjanm kartavy jo kee niyamo kee gambheer avahelana thee isalie mujhe saja huee lekin jab tum mujhe milo tab tumhaaree koee vaasana baaki na rahe ye sochakar mainne yah kaam kiya tha.

pallav ne poochha kee abhee aseemanaath kaha hai ? aur teesare parimaan mein baaba katankanaath mile the vo kaun the ? baaba ne bataaya kee aseemanaath abhee teesare parimaan mein hai aur vah vah aseemaanand naam se jaana jaata hai aur abhee vah chauthe parimaan mein pravesh karane ka maarg dhoondh raha hai aur vo bhee kaalee saadhana ke maadhyam se . vah kaalee shaktio ko bali chadhakar prasann kar raha hai aur agar vah chauthe parimaan mein pahunch gaya to usakee shakti phir se badh jaegee isalie use rokana jaruree hai .

chauthe parimaan mein pravesh karane ke saat maarg hai ek to vah hai jis raste se tum aaye ho vah se karkavakra ke rekha jaatee hai, doosara dvaar kaashee mein, teesara dvaar Germany naamak desh mein chauth dvaar Brajil naamak desh mein, paanchava Australia , chhatha Yuganda aur saatava America naamak desh mein hai. vaise yah sab naam abhee ke hisaab se bata raha hu vaise in desho ke naam pahale kuchh alag the . ek aur praveshadvaar dvaar hai jo kee mahaashaktio ke kaaboo nahin hai jise raaja raavan ne banaaya tha usane chauthe parimaan mein pravesh kar liya tha aur yahaan kee pavitr jheel ka paanee piya tha jisakee vajah se usakee taakat aneko guna badh gaee thee usane paachave parimaan mein pravesh karane kee lie ek dvaar banaana shuroo kar diya tha lekin isase pahale hamane use teesare parimaan mein vaapas panhucha diya tha . aseemanaath ka iraada raavan dvaara nirmit dvaar se chauthe parimaan mein pravesh karana aur usane adhoora rakha hua paachave praveshadvaar nirmaan kaary poorn karana hai aur hamaara kaary hai mahaashakti ko prasann karake paachave parimaan mein pravesh karake tumhaara mool shareer paana, apane baaki saat divyapurushoko chhudaana aur aseemanaath ko rokana .

pallav ko abhee bhee vishvaas nahin ho raha tha kee yah sab saty hai use lag raha tha kee ya to ye sapana hai ya koee maaya .


bhabhatanaath ne kaha kee maee tamhaaree aankhon mein avishvaas dekh raha hu .

tum thoda bhojan karo aur aaram karo abhi tumhara sharir chaturth pariman ka aadi nahi hua hai . kal se tumhari talim shuru hogi , manme shanka mat rakho mujh par vishwas karo . pallv uthkar apani kutir ki tarf gaya useke nicalte hi bhbhutanath ke chehare par muskarahat a gai vo man hi man bole is bar shayad mera karya purn ho .


to be continue.......
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Hello Everyone :hello:
We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC)..

Jaisa ki aap sabko maalum hai abhi pichle hafte he humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time Pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit chat thread toh pehle se he Hind section mein khulla hai.

Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna suru kar shaktey hain or woh thread 21st February takk open rahega Iss dauraan aap apni story daal shaktey hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna suru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Koi bhi issue ho toh aap kissi bhi staff member ko Message kar shaktey hain..

Rules Check karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread.

Contest k regarding Chit chat karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Chit Chat Thread.

Regards :Xforum Staff.

 

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Uday-Ek anokha SuperHero bro continue your story or give permission to other to start your story​

 
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