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Fantasy Uday-Ek anokha SuperHero

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Brijesh

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Update 12
Uday 12

ab tak aap ne padha natu urf Doctor pallav gupt dwar s 4th dimension m pahuchata hai jaha use baba bhabutnaath use uske bare m batate hai aur baki ke dimension ke bare m bhe aur divy shaktiyo aur mahashaktiyo ke bare m bhe ab age..

divyashakti ya mahaashaktiyaan kya karatee hai isase hamen koee matalab nahin hona chaahie. hamaare lie mahatv ka prashn yah hai kee hamaara nirmaan kyon hoona hai aur hamaare jeevan ka uddeshy kya hai. agar hamaare karm unnat hai to ant mein hamen moksh milega aur hamaara visarjan divyashakti mein hoga ham useeka ek bhaag honge.

pallav ne poochha kee theek hai ab yah bataiye kee hamaara nirmaan kaise hoona aur ham kaun hai ?

kaaphee prashn hai tumhaare maname chalo ek ek karake bataata hoon. baaba bhabhootanaath bole

hamaara nirmaan chhathe parimaan mein rahanevaalee mahaashaktio ne kiya hai paachave parimaan stith kudaratee tatvon ka aur krtrim tatvon ka upayog kiya hai. mera nirmaan vibhooti mein dharatee kee shakti daalakar kiya hai, kamalanaath ka nirmaan kamal ke dal mein poorn phoolo kee sugandheedaar shakti ko milaakar kiya, kadambanaath ka nirmaan kadamb ke vrksh tane aur any vrkshon kee shakti ko milaakar kiya, narendranaath ka nirmaan hastidant mein any kuchh jeevo kee shaktiya daalakar kiya, bhavendranaath ka nirmaan nrty ke bhaav se kiya, sapteshvaranaath ka nirmaan saat alag alag shaktio ko ekatr karake kiya, dholakanaath ka nirmaan dholak kee taal se kiya gaya, aseemanaath ka nirmaan saagar kee shakti se kiya aur tumhaara nirmaan soory kee kiran se kiya gaya. ham daso divyapurush alag alag shaktio ke maalik hai, tum jo teesare parimaan mein sammohan vidya mein praveen the usaka kaaran yah tha kee tum ek divyapurush the us vaqt kee shiksha aur deeksha, jo kee tumhaare shareer ke saath nahin aatma ke saath judee hai.

main khud ka parivartan mitatee ya vibhooti mein kar sakata hoon dharatee se shakti kheench sakata hoon jab tak main jameen par khada hoon koee mere se mukaabala nahin kar sakata., kamalanaath ka raaj poorn kusumasrshti par chalata hai vah kisee bhee phool ko sugandheedaar, durgandheedaar ya praanabhakshee phool mein kar sakate hai. kadambanaath ka raaj vrkshon par chalata hai vo vrkshon se shakti kheench bhee sakate hai ya unake paas se koee bhee kaam kara sakate hai. indranaath bijalee ke svaamee hai vo kabhee bhee aasamaan mein bijalee utpann karake kisee ko bhee bhasm kar sakate hai, narendranaath ka raaj praanee jagat par, sapteshvaranaath saat alag alag shaktio ke maalik hai, bhavendranaath har kala mein praveen hai nrty sangeet ke gyaata hai, dholak naath alag alag vaady bajane mein maahir hai unaka naad brahmaand mein goonjata hai.

aseemanaath ka raaj paanee par chalata hai agar vo jal mein hai to aisa koee nahin jo unhen hara de. tumhaara nirmaan soory kee kiranon se hua hai isalie tumhaara raaj aasamaan mein chalata hai tum prakaash kee gati se kahee bhee ja sakate ho.

yah to mainnne mukhy shaktio kee baat kahee baaki hamen har alag kalao, har shastr chalane kee shiksha hamen teen hajaar varsh tak dee gaee hai paachave parimaan mein. aur yah jo bhee varsh bata raha hoon vah teesare parimaan ke hisaab se varana paachave parimaan ke hisaab se hamen teen ya chaar saal kee shiksha dee gaee.

pallav ne kaha kee mere mein to aisee koee shakti nahin hai to bhabhootanaath bole kee jab tumhaara pravesh tumhaare mool shareer mein hoga to aa jaegee jo kee paachave parimaan mein hai vah jaana mushki hai isalie main yahaan par ek mushkil kaary sampann kar raha hoon aasha hai main tumhaar pravesh tumhaare mool shareer mein jald hee kara doo.

pallav ne poochha ki ham itane shaktishaalee the to yah sab kaise hua ?

To be continued....
 

Naina

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narrations aur language ki pakad kaafi majbut hain... great story line with awesome writing skill......
Har update ke sath interesting hoti ja rahin hain kahani..... keep it up brijesh ji :applause: :applause:
 
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Brijesh

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Update 13
Uday 13

bhabhutnath baba ne dr.pallav urf natu ko uske aur baki ke divya purso ke bare m batya satth hee satth unki shaktiyo ke bare m bhe aur natu ka sarir 5th dimension m hai . Phir natu puchta hai hum itne shaktishali the phir intna kamjor kaise ho gaye ab age...


bhabhootanaathajee ne aage bataaya unakee aankhe svapnil ho gayee thee. vo bole mahaashakti ne jaise ham 10 divyapurushon ka nirmaan kiya vaise hee kaaleeshakti ne 10 paapee purushon ka nirmaan kiya tha.

is vajah se kudarat ka santulan bana hua tha unaka kaam teesare parimaan mein paap phailaana aur hamaara kaam puny ko badhaava dekar satulan banaana tha is vajah se shakti ka santulan bana hua tha aur duniya ka sanchaalan sahee se ho raha tha aur alikhit niyam tha kee ham ek doosare ko nuksaan to pahuchaayenge lekin jaan se nahin marenge. hamane ek sookshm roop se yoddhaon ke shareer mein rahakar hajaaron yuddh kiye hai. ek raavan naam ka raksh sanskrti ka raaja tha usake shareer mein kaaleeshakti ne khud pravesh kiya tab mahaashakti ne raam naam ke raaja ke shareer mein pravesh kiya aur use haraaya tha aur ham divyapurushon ne unhen madad kee thee. ye yuddh kaaphee mashahoor hai itihaas mein. ek aur yuddh mein mainne bheem naamake yoddha ke shareer mein aur tumane arjun naam ke yoddha ke shareer mein pravesh kiya aur baaki divyapurushon ne alag alag yoddhaon mein pravesh karake kaalee shakti ko haraaya tha, jise mahaabhaarat ka yuddh kaha jaata hai.

us vaqt mahaashakti ne shastr ko na uthaane ka praan liya tha lekin unakee salaah ke hisaab se chalane kee vajah se ham jeet gae the. aisa nahin hai ke teesare parimaan mein hamane sirph yuddh kiye hain. hamane bhaktiras ko bhee badhaava diya. kabhee sant banakar kabhee guru banakar upadesh die aur logon ko sahee raah dikhaee hai.

museebat tab shuroo huee jab paapee purushon ne niyam todakar aseemanaath ko bhrasht kiya aur usake man mein karm kee jagah shaktishaalee banaane ke laalasa jagaee aur usane apanee ichchha poorn karane ke lie taimoor naam ke vyakti ke shareer mein pravesh kiya jab vo usame saphal nahin hua to usane nepoliyan naamakee vyakti ke shareer mein pravesh kiya aur phir hitalar naamakee vyakti ke shareer mein pravesh kiya.

kahee bhee use hamane use saphal hone nahin diya lekin shakti ka santulan bigad gaya hamane har jagah unhen paraast kiya. jab use laga kee vah hamen hara nahin paayega to usane chhathe parimaan mein jaakar hamaare naash ke lie hathiyaar laane ka nirnay liya jisake lie usane kaaleeshakti kee pooja shuroo kar dee, jisase usakee shakti hamase kaaphee badh gayee. hamaare saath nirmaan kiya gaya ek divyapurush hee hamaara hee dushman tha. kaaleeshaktio ne hamen paraast karane ke lie use shastr bhee die.

aur phir shuroo huee hamaaree andaroonee ladaee. ham teesare parimaan mein the aur vah ek desh hai viyatanaam jaha ham the us vaqt aseemanaath ne ghaat karake hamaare saath bhaayon ko paanchaven parimaan mein kaid kar liya jo kee mahaashakti ke bade niyam kee avahelana thee. isase krodhit hokar mahaashakti ne use teesare parimaan mein phenk diya aur usako chauthe aur paanchaven parimaan ne pravesh nishiddh kar diya. aseemanaath ne isake javaab mein tum jis shareer mein the us shareer ko nasht kar diya aur hamaare jaane ke samay se pahale ye hone kee vajah se mainne na chaahate hue bhee mahaashakti na niyam todakar tumhaaree aatma ka pravesh ek pavitr shareer ke garbh mein kiya jisaka naam nirmala tha aur jab samayaseema pooree huee to main paanchaven parimaan mein laut gaya lekin niyam todane kee saja mujhe bhee milee mujhe chauthe parimaan mein jaana pada

To be continued...
 
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