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Incest Uljhan

Riyaa

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great writer :lol:
main to abhi likhna seekh bhi nahi paya hun tabhi to adhuri story rakhi hui hai, socha kuch tha likhte hue kuch aur hi likh gaya aur fas gaya bavandar mein :shy:
That's the quality of a Great Writers, who won't boast of their work rather would remain humble like you.

One story doesn't depict your true character.
You are no doubt a Great Writer
 
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Riyaa

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jokes apart, pal pal ki bhavnaon ki chitran jis tarha se kar rahi ho, vo ek bade writer ki pehcan deta hai , umeed hai isi tarha apni is kahani ko mukam tak le jaaogi :love:
Thanks so much for appreciating once again.
However I am always a learner and would try to incorporate the constructive criticism and true suggestions
 

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# 36
Dimagh: apani Uljhan se nikalo aur apane aap ko ek taraf taiyar karo
Dil: Jaise bahut aasan hai na

Dimagh: yeh baat tu sahi hai ki aasan koi bhi rasta nahin hai lekin jo bhi rasta chunno, soch samajhkar taki aage dikkat na ho
Dil: ek tu mujhe murkh kehti ho aur fir kehti ho ki soch samajh kar karun. Agar yeh bhi mujhe karna hai tu fir tum kya karogi. Tum hi socho samjho aur seedhe seedhe batao ki main kya karun?

Dimagh: agar mujhse pucchegi tu main yahi Kanhungi ki kucch baaton ko waqt par chhod do aur jaisa chal raha hai vaisa chalne do
Dil: bahut samajhdaar ho, mujhe kehti ho ki soch samajhkar ek taraf ho jao aur jab tumse pucch rahi hun tu waqt par chhod rahi ho

Dimagh: Samjhdaar hun tabhi tu tumhe har waqt bachati hun. Abhi ke liye itna hi ki jaisa chal raha hai vo chalne do
Dil: Agar fir se chumban ka kehne lage tu

Dimagh: tu kar lena
Dil: (fir se dhadhkan badh gayi) tum tu mujhe fansa hi dogi

Dimagh: bol tu aise rahi jaise tujhe maza nahin aayega
Dil: (sharam se lala ho gayi) pata nahin

Dimagh: Matlab karna to tu chhati hai lekin sharmati hai
Dil: tu na mujhse maar khayegi

Abhi aur koi baat hoti usse pehle hi Ravi usko dhundta hua vanha aa panhucha
Ravi: Tum yanha khadi ho aur main tumhe pata nahin kanha kanha dhundta fir raha hun
Rajni: (Ravi ko dekhkar uski bolti hi band ho gayi) Vo .. vo ...vo ..main thak gayi thi tu yanha ruk gayi

Ravi: thak gayi ho tu vapis chalte hain Tajmahal fir kabh dekh lenge.
Rajni: Nahin nahin, manzil par aakar vapis kyoun Jana. Ab theek lag raha hai, Tajmahal aayen hain tu dekh kar hi jayenge

Fir donon Tajmahal ki taraf chal pade. Ravi samajh chuka tha ki Rajni uski baat se sharma gayi hai aur usne soch liya tha ki abhi vo aisa kuchh nahin karega.

Donon chupchap chalte hue man me kai vicharon ko lekar chal rahe the aur donon ke hath aapas me takra rahe the. Donon ke man me dusre ke hath ko pakadne ki chahat badhti ja rahi thi lekin jhijhak ke karan aisa nahin kar pa rahe the.

Aaspaas ke romantic mahaul ko dekhte hue donon ke man me ye vichar aa raha tha ki jab sath sath chal rahe hain tu kam se kam hath tu pakad hi sakte hain. Issi udhedhbun me chalte hue un donon ke hathon ki sabse chhoti ungali ne aapas me ek dusre ko pakad liya. Abhi bhi donon ke beech koi baat nahin ho rahi thi. Thodhi dur aur chalne par un donon ke hathon ki ragad ki vajah se donon ne ek dusre ke hathon ko halke dabav se pakad liya ya yunh kahe ki ek dusre ke hath ko dur jane nahi dena chahte the.

Fir vo waqt aaya jab anayas hi donon ke hathon ki ungaliyon ne aapas me mudkar dusre ke hath ki ungaliyon me apani jagah banani shuru kar di. Ant me donon ne ek dusre ke hath ko ungaliyon ki madad se aapas me jakad liya aur hatheliyon se accha dabav bhi banane lage. Donon hi dabav badhakar yeh jatana chah rahe the ki vo donon ab sath sath hain.

Jab donon ki hatheliyon ne ek dusre ke hathon ko jakad liya tu un donon ke hathon ki pakad se uttpan hui garmi se donon ke man me tarange umadane lagi. Ye umange un donon ke man me assem aakarshan ki shuruaat ya dusre shabdon me kanhe ki pyaar ke beej ke futne ka sandesh de rahe the. Halanki donon me abhi bhi chhupi chayi hui thi lekin hathon se ek dusre ko apane pyaar ki sehmati de rahe the.

Jhijhak aur sharam ne donon ko juban se bhale hi baat karne se roka hua tha lekin sharirik aakarshan bina bole hi badhta ja raha tha. Donon ke bich ki duri nirantar Kam hoti ja rahi thi, jisse un donon ke hath jo aapas me mile hue the usse unki bajuon ke bich ki duri bhi kam hoti ja rahi thi.

Kucch palon ke baad un donon ki bajuon ka pehle nichle hisse ke bich ki duri shunya hui aur fir vo waqt bhi aaya jab donon ki bajuon ne ek dusre ko puri tarah se saparsh kar liya. Jab aisa hua tu donon ke dil ke taron ne ek sangeet chhed diya jisse donon prafullit ho gaye.

Ussi waqt donon hi ek dusre ki taraf mude aur unki nazron ne ek dusre ki aankhon mein dekha tu unme ek dusre ke liye chahat ka aabhas hua. Rajni ki aankhein yeh jyada der bardasht nahin kar payi aur sharam se jhuk gayi

 

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Ussi waqt donon hi ek dusre ki taraf mude aur unki nazron ne ek dusre ki aankhon mein dekha tu unme ek dusre ke liye chahat ka aabhas hua. Rajni ki aankhein yeh jyada der bardasht nahin kar payi aur sharam se jhuk gayi

Ravi tu usse dekhe hi ja raha tha aur jaise hi uski nazre ne Rajni ke jhukhe hue chehre ka peecha kiya tu uski nazron ne Rajni ke bina dupatte ke gale ke darshan kiye. Usse Rajni ke urojon ka upari bhagh dikhai diya jo uske man me romanch bharne ke liye kafi tha. Uska man tu kar raha tha ki vo thodi der aur iss nazare ka aanand uthaye lekin usse Rajni ki narazgi ki bhi chinta thi, isliye na chahte hue bhi apani nazron ko vanha se hata liya.

Ravi ne apani nazre tu hata li lekin apane vicharon me Rajni ke urojon ki khubsurti ko apani aankhon mein basane ki koshish karke aanandit ho raha tha. Tabhi vo Tajmahal ki seediyon par panhuch gaye aur andar jakar Tajmahal ki khubsurti ko dekhkar bahar aa gaye.

Tajmahal ke charo kono par bade bade Burj bane hue the aur vanha par kafi khuli jagah thi. Kai couples vanha par ek dusre se pyaar karte nazar aaye jisse dekhkar vo donon man hi man thodhi der pehle hue vakaye ko yaad karke hans rahe the.

Jab vanha se vapis aa rahe the tu ek photographer unn ke peeche pad gaya aur kehne laga 'sahab bahut acchi photo banaunga aur vo aapko hamesha yaadgar rahegi'

Ravi ne usko kafi mana Kiya lekin vo nahin mana tu vo donon vanha bageeche me chale gaye aur photo ke liye paas paas khade ho gaye. Tab photographer ne unnhe kaha'sahab paas paas aaiye tab aap donon ki photo acchi aayegi'

Donon uski baat sunkar thodha paas tu aaye lekin photographer ne unhe aur paas aane ke liye kaha tu vo jhijhakne lage Photographer: sahab aap sharmana chhodiye aur Madam ke bilkul paas aakar unke kandhe par hath rahiye jisse acchi photo banegi.
Ravi: Nahin aise hi kheench lo

Photographer un ke paas aakar album me kai pose dikakar 'sahab aap konsa roj roj yanha aane wale hain, inn palon ko camere me acchi yaadon ke rup me kaid kariye' Fir vo Rajni ko samjhane laga 'Madam aap hi Sir ko kahiye na ye moments fir jindagi me nahin aayenge'

Donon ne ek dusre ki taraf dekhkar ek muk swikriti de di. Ravi ne jaise hi Rajni ke banye kandhe par apana danya hath rakha tu donon ke man me jhurjhuri si paida hui. Ravi pehle bhi uske kandhe par apana hath rakh chuka tha lekin aaj kucch alag hi lag raha tha. Shayad pehli baar un donon ke man me ankurit sharirik aakarshan ne unhe utejit kar diya. Tabhi

Photographer: Madam aap thodha sa Sir ki taraf mudkar apane ek hath ko Sir ki chhati par rakh dijiye
Ravi: aise hi kheench lo

Photographer: Sir aise tu kheench li hai, lekin vo pose bahut hi accha rahega.
Rajni vanhi khade khade apane danyi taraf ghumne lagi. Aisa karne se uske danye uroj ne Ravi ki banyi taraf ki chhati se ragad khani shuru ki aur vo itna mud gayi ki Rajni ke urojon ke bich ki line Ravi ke banyi taraf ko saparsh kar rahi thi. Uska danya uroj banyi taraf kamar ki taraf aur danya uroj Ravi ki chhati se aa laga. Yeh ek bahut hi utejak pose tha. Donon ke man me bahut hi utejit karne vale vichar janam le rahe the ki tabhi Rajni ka banya hath Ravi ki chhati se aa takraya aur Rajni ne apani hatheli puri ki puri uski chhati par tika di. Itna hi nahin usne anguthe aur ek ungali ki madad se Ravi ki shirt ke button ko pakad liya.

Ravi ke man me utejana ka sanchar hone laga. Rajni bhi kanha peeche rehti. Uske sath tu yeh pehli baar ho raha tha. Uske dil ki dhadkan kai guna badh chuki thi, jisse uske urojon ne upar neeche hokar Ravi ki chhati par kehar dhaya hua tha. Ravi ke liye apane aap ko niyantran me rakhna mushkil ho raha tha. Rajni ke man me bhi kai utejak vicharon ka janam ho raha tha jo usse sharam aur haya ke bandhan ko todne ke liye mazbur kar rahe the, lekin vo ek sanskari ladki hone ke karan apane manobhavo ko apane chehre par na lane ke liye kadi mehnat kar rahi thi.

Photographer: Madam aap apani nazron ko upar uthakar Sir ki aankhon mein dekhiye

Rajni ne jab apani nazre uthakar Ravi ki aankhon mein dekha tu usse pehli baar Ravi ki aankhon mein apane liye assem pyaar dikhai diya. Pehle tu usse laga ki shayad usse dhokha hua hai, lekin un aankhon ki gehrai me jhankne se usse pyaar ki gehrai nazar aane lagi, jisse usse khushi, utejna, sharam, sankoch aur dar ki milijuli anubhuti hui aur vo un aankhon ka samna na kar payi aur apani palkon ko jhuka liya. Tabhi

Photographer: Madam aap please apani aankhein kholiye

Rajni ne aisa hi kuya aur photo click ho gayi. Vo donon hatne hi wale the ki
Photographer: Sir ab aap Madam ki kamar ko apane danye hath se pakdiye.
Ravi: yaar ab bas bhi karo.

Photographer: bas Sir do teen pose aur bas

Ravi ne Rajni ki aankhon me dekha jisne muk swikriti de di. Ravi ne apane danye hath se Rajni ki kamar ko jaise hi pakda tu donon ko ek current sa laga. Donon ek dusre ki aankhon me dekhne lage tu unhe ek baar fir se pyaar dikhai dene laga. Hairani ki baat yeh thi ki iss baar Ravi ne bhi Rajni ki aankhon mein vaisa hi pyaar dekha. Vo acchambhit aur prafullit mehsus kar raha tha. Jaise hi click hua tu

Photographer: Sir aur Madam, ab aap donon ek dusre ko banhon me lekar ek dusre ki aankhon mein dekhiye

Pata nahi kya hua ki donon ne iss baar bina kisi baat ya virodh ke ek dusre ko apani banhon me le liya aur aisa karte hi Rajni ke urojon ne Ravi ki chhati ka purn rup se sparash kiya aur aankhon me pyaar ki jwala prajavalit hone lagi.

Photographer: Sir agar bura na Lage tu aap Madam ko kiss bhi kar de

Ravi: nahin nahin ye theek nahin hai. Ab bas karo aur jaldi se photos de do


 
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