Fantasy Un-Deikhi Muhabbat (2)

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Index​	Family Introduction​
Main Character Introduction in Detail​	Some Dialogue​

 

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Update--16​

Aadmi 2: Shb yeh bolney ki halat main hi nai hai pehley Sheir hua krta tha ab Chua(Rat) ho gya hai Hahahahahahahaha.

Aadmi 2 ki baat sun k wahan jo bhi tha who hans para un k samney Zanjeeron main zakda ek shaksh tha jis k lambey baal they aur darhi bhi jo k ab sufaid bhi honey lagey they us aadmi ki umer lagbag 40 se 45 saal thi.

Shaksh: Yeh tum bhi jantey ho k yeh Zanjeerein mujhey qaid nai rakh sakteen ager meri Family pe khatra na hota tou es waqt tum yun hans na rahey hotey tumhari Rooh ko es qadr tadpata k who Jahanum main janey k bhi qabil na hoti.

Aadmi: Rassi jal gai per akkad nai gai koi baat nai terey pass 2 saal hn us k baad tujhey teri family k pass pouncha dein gey Dafnaney k liey hahahahahahaha.

Gudiya: Chalo bhaiya bahir lawn main kheiltey hn bht din ho gaey aap k sath kheiley.

Aly: Chalo meri jaan aaj Cricket kheiltey hn.

Gudiya: Ok bhaiya mein bat ball le k aati hn.

Aly aur Gudiya lawn main kheilney lagey Aly ki batting aaye tou us sey ek shot lag gai aur ball bahir chala gya.

Gudiya: Bhaiya mein le k aati hn.

Gudiya bahir gai tou usey sadak k doosri side pe ek ladka khada dikha jo hath main pakdey mobile ko deikh raha tha.

Gudiya: Kia hua bhaiya.

Ladka: Pata nai kahan se ball aaye aur merey hath pe lagi aur Mobile neechay gir k toot gya.

Gudiya: Acha who ball yahan aaye thi kahan hai who ball mein aur merey bhaiya kheil rahey hn plzz batao na ball kahan hai abhi meri bari hai betting ki.

Us ladkey ko gussa aa gya yeh sun k us ka Mobile jo k kafi mehnga tha who toot gya tha us ne gussay se Gudiya ki traf deikha jis sey Gudiya dar gai us ki aankh main khouf k marey aansu aa gaey who ladka Gudiya ko thapper marney hi laga tha k wahan ek awaz gunj gai.

Awaz: Sochna bhi mat werna tera khandan yeh sochney pe majboor ho jaey ga k tu es duniya main aaya tha bhi ya nai.

Gudiya ne peechay ki traf deikha tou wahan us ka bhai khada tha who dour k us k pass gai Aly ne usey utha lia aur us k gaal pe kiss kia aur usey ander bheijh dia Gudiya ander chali gai aur Aly chal k us ladkey k pass gya.

Aly: Aaj tuk mein ne apney maa baap ko bhi ijazat nai di k who Gudiya ne unchi awaz main baat krein tu ne himmat bhi kr li usey thapper marney ki lagta hai teri jaan bht sasti hai jo merney ki itni jaldi hai tujhey.

Ladka: Mera Mobile toot gya hai jantey bhi ho kitna mehnga hai Salary main bacha bacha k yeh mobile lia tha mein ne.

Aly: (Gussay main chillatey huey) Tou us k liey bachi pe hath uthaye ga.

Aly ki dhaar se ek pal liey us Ladkey ki Rooh tuk kaanp gai Aly phone nikala aur Mueed ko call laga di.

Mueed: Haan bol Aly.

Aly: Ek kaam kr Iphone ka latest model dabba pack le k merey ghar aa jaldi.

Mueed: 15 min main aaya.

Aly: Aa raha hai tera phone lekin ek baat kaan khol k sun le aaj k baad tu mujhey yahan dikha tou waqiey hi es duniya se ghaib ho jaey ga.

Thodi deir main hi Mueed aa gya us ne Dabba Aly ko dia Aly ne usey us ladkey ko de dia who ladka dabba le k wahan se nikal gya Aly aur Mueed ghar main aa gaey hall main gaey tou Gudiya Ami se lipti hui thi aur thodi sehmi bhi hui thi Aly us k pass gya aur usey utha k galey se laga lia.

Aly: Kia hua meri jaan ko mein hn na kch nai ho ga aap ko.

Gudiya: Bhaiya who gandey bhaiya they who mujhey marney lagey they.

Aly: Nai meri jaan mein ne kaha na aap ko na tou koi dant sakta hai na hi koi maar sakta hai chup ho jao mein ne usey yahan se bheijh dia hai aap jao aur apney room main chocolate khao.

Gudiya: Theek hai bhaiya.

Ami: Kia hua tha beta yeh itna dari hui kiun thi.

Aly: Kch nai ami who hum Cricket kheil rahey they tou ball bahir gai jo k ek ladkey k hath main lagi aur mobile gir k toot gya Gudiya ball leney gai tou tou us ne Gudiya ko thapper marna chaha k mein pounch gya esi wajah se who thoda sehmi hui thi.

Mueed: Hmmmm tou tu ne usey janey dia.

Aly: Janey dia hai Maaf nai kia.

Ami: Kia matlab maaf nai kia yeh ek hadsa tha jo hua who bhi gussay main krney laga tha jo k nai krna chaiey tha ab tum kia kro gey.

Aly: Ami yeh baat aap bhi achi trhah janti hn k mein Gudiya ko duniya main sab se zyada pyaar krta hn mein ne aap ko aur baba ko bhi ijazat nai di us se unchi awaz main baat krney ko tou us ne tou phr bhi thapper marney ki himmat ki thi hisab tou ho ga aur bht bura ho ga.

Ami: Janey do beta.

Aly: Mein kon sa abhi kch kr raha hn ek haftey k baad mujhey Karachi jana hai 1 saal k liey.

Mueed: Hein? Kiun bhai yeh achanak Karachi ka program kiun ban gya.

Aly: Business related ja raha hn jo gadiyan mein bana raha hn un ko le janey k liey special container aur wahan warehouse k liey jagah aur us k ban janey tuk mein wapis nai aa sakta yeh sab bht costly hai es liey mujhey apni deikh raikh main hi krna ho ga.

Mueed: Theek hai mein bhi chalta hn.

Aly: Nai tu nai ja raha merey sath tu yaheen rahey ga aur Jhon ko bol dey Gudiya k sath 24 ghantey rahey jab mein yahan se chala jaun.

Ami: Gudiya janey de gi tujhey.

Aly: Us k liey bhi soch lia hai mein ne aap fiker na krein.

Ami: Acha who kal Rida aa rahi hai.

Aly: (shocked) Acha who London se kab aaye.

Ami: Kal hi aa gai thi MBA complete kr k aaye hai ab Bhaijan k Business main hath btaye gi.

Aly: Yeh tou bht achi baat hai kal kis time aaye gi yahan.

Ami: Sham ko.

Aly: Theek hai mein filhal abhi Mueed k sath ja raha hn bht zaroori kaam kal aaun ga raat ka khana aap kha lijeay ga hai Mueed do min ruk mein Gudiya ko bata k aaya.

Aly Gudiya ko bata k Mueed k sath nikal para apney ek Flat main yahan us ne Imran aur Jhon ko bhi bulwa lia tha charon hath main beer liey baatein krney lagey.

Mueed: Kia baat hai mein kab se deikh raha hn tu kisi soch main gum hai.

Aly: Apney Project ko le k soch raha hn 80% ho chuka hai lekin 20% jo reh gya hai who bht tung kr raha hai.

Imran: Kon sa Project.

Aly: Robot.

Mueed: Ooohhh tou Karachi 1 saal k liey ja raha humara kia ho ga bhai.

Imran: Hein? kiun bhai kiun ja raha hai Karachi 1 saal k liey.

Aly: Business k liey acha Jhon mein agley haftey ja raha hn tou 1 saal k liey tu Gudiya k sath rahey ga 24 ghantey usey koi bhi takleef nai honi chaiey.

Jhon: Done.

 

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Update posted
agla update Thursday ko

 

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Yeh gudiya bhi badi nat khat h bagair chocolate k nahi chalta or jab tak apne bhayya ko na dekh le chain nahi milta
Ab yeh kon si technology wali gaadi bana raha jo saal m sirf 2 launch hongi or uski qeemat bhi $30 million ki hogi baherhal dekhte h jab launch hogi tow kia dhamal machati h market m
Yeh kon sa banda h jo dunia ki sabse high tech jail m band h or usko 2 bande taane maare jaa rehe h
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai

Sukriya bhai

 

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Fantastic and marvelous
Kia baat hai dost bhut khub aur ala update hai path k sikh feel si aa gai hai lekin dost ap sa request hai please ap week aik hi update setu to kindly update ki length hi badha do yaara wo kia hai abi motion mai aty hi hai aur update khatam ho jata hai phir agle week tak lamba intezar karna padta hai and thanks alot dear for entertaining us....

Sukriya bhai
Haftey main 2 update deney ki ab koshish krta hn depend on my health kabhi bhi bigad sakti hai so deikhtey hn

 

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Fantastic update bhai

Thnx bhai

 

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No problem brother
Take your time

thnx bhai
Update posted

 

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Hey
Sir g kuch update do ajjj kia

Update posted

 

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Sir g
kia baat hai health kasi hai apki koi improvement huwi k nai

g bilkul filhal behter hai

 

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Ooh sorry about that
No problem Brother
Take your time
Ooper wale se Dua h magfirat farmaye AAMEEN

sukriya bhai

 

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Soo sad news dear
Chalo milte hain break k bad zindagi rahi to......

update posted