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Fantasy Un-Deikhi Muhabbat (2)

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Main Character Introduction in Detail
Some Dialogue
 
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Sir Gee
What's up dear
When will restart this thread
sorry for late
As I mention before my dadijan passed away then My Mother face Burn incident that why it take too long
 

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Hello sir Gee
How long to start again?
sorry for late
As I mention before my dadijan passed away then My Mother face Burn incident that why it take too long
 

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Khuda unko Jannat Naseeb Karen koi baat nahin brother take your time
Aameen
 

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Update--26

Mein: Na aesa sochna bhi mat k tum merey kabil nai rahi ho jesay hi Umer ko mein marun ga us waqt se tum meri BV bano gi Tum, Mein aur humari Beti ek sath rahein gi lekin us sey pehley tumhara Operation hai who ho jaey lekin abhi tum Maryum se mill lo who bhi apni Maa se milney ko betaab hai.

Gudiya: Maryum aap k baba bula rahey hn chalo merey sath.

Maryum: Oh no mujhey aap k sath Park main jana tha.

Gudiya: Koi baat nai hum kal chaley jaen gey ab chalo.

Maryum: Kia hua baba aap ne mujhey kiun bulwaya aap ko pata hai mujhey aur Salman (Habiba ka beta) ko Phupho Park le ja rahi theen kitna maza aana tha mujhey lekin aap ne sab cancel krwa dia.

Mein: (Maryum ko goad main utha k kiss krtey huey) Meri Jaan aap kal Park chali jana lekin abhi important kaam hai mein ne aap se kaha tha na k mein aap ki Mamma ko dhoondh raha hn tou aap ki Mamma mill gai hn yeh deikho yeh hn aap ki Mamma.

Maryum ne jab apney pass bed pe kisi ko laitey paya aur usey pata chala k yeh us ki Ami hn tou who khush ho gai who Meri goad se kood k bed pe gai aur Rida k uper lait gai Maryum ki umer 2 saal kuch mahiney hi thi jis wajah se Rida ko kch farq nai para ulta who khush ho gai us ne apni beti ko apney seeney se lagaya us k sir pe lagatar chumney lagi.

Maryum: Mamma aap kahan chali gai theen pata hai Baba ne aap ko kitna dhoonda hai ab mein aap ko kaheen nai janey doon gi.

Rida: (Aankhon se aansu nikaltey huey) Haan meri jaan mein bhi ab aap ko kaheen shod k nai jaun gi.

Rida ne Maryum ko thoda uper kia aur us ka chehra pakad k lagatar chumney lagi sath hi Maryum bhi apni maa chehra chumney lagi sab yeh manzer deikh rahey they Mein wahan se utha aur bahir janey laga mein kuch waqt akela Maa beti ko dena chahta tha es liey baqion ko bhi bahir bulwa lia.

Mein: Jhon.

Jhon: G bhai.

Mein: Gudiya aur Rida k liey Security ka bandobast kr mujhey aaj hi Sierra aur Azalea yahan chahiey.

Jhon: Abhi bulata hn bhai.

Mein wahan se janey laga tou Mami aur Ami merey samney aa gaen Ami ne mujhey galey se laga lia aur roney lageen mein bhi un se galey mila Ami alag hueen.

Mami: Beta tum se kch baat krni hai.

Mein: G kahiey.

Mami: Beta Mein janti hn k Tum un ko le k es waqt bht gussay main ho aur mein yeh bhi manti hn k unho ne gunah kia hai lekin beta ek aakhri baar un ko maaf kr do mein un ko samjhaun gi who dobaara tumhari zindagi main dakhal nai dein gey.

Mein: Mein apna aur Ami ka tou Maaf kr doon ga lekin Rida us k sath jo kch hua hai us ka kya? Rape hua hai uska Ager who usey Umer k sath na bheijtey tou yeh sab nai hota who bhi us Rape k braber hissey dar hn Sorry Mami g mein Maaf nai kr sakta lekin haan aap k liey un ko asaan mout de sakta hn jis ka mera koi Irada tou nai tha lekin aap ki wajah se Mout un ko Aasaan hi miley gi.

Ami: Beta ek baar aur soch le.

Mein: Ami mein ne kaha na k mein apna aur aap ka zulm tou maaf kr doon lekin ek Rape jesa Gunah Maaf nai kr sakta who jis position pe hn who nai badalney waley phr se koi na koi Nuqsaan zaroor pounchaen gey ab tou Rida bhi un ki Dushman hai kiun k usi ki wajah se who ab es halat main hn ager mein Maaf kr bhi doon tou who phr se Rida ko nuqsaan pounchaen gey es liey mein keh raha hn Mami g ab aap Rida k sath reh k us ko Hosla dein.

Yeh keh k mein wahan se nikal gya aur Mueed aur Jhon ko bulwaya aur nikal gya basement main yahan Mamu, Umer, Arsalan, Sarfraz aur Sufyan ko khada rakh k bandh rakha tha un k hath uper ki traf bandhey they her traf andhera tha lekin un pe uper se light focus thi.

Umer: Koi hai kiun humein yahan bandh rakha hai koi tou samney aao.

Arsalan: Deikho mein ab bhi keh raha hn Police mujhey dhoondh rahi ho gi ager mein unhey yahan mill gya tou tum nai bacho gey humein shod do janey do humein.

Lekin koi Faida nai koi nai samney aaya jis wajah se yeh chup ho gaey kch deir k baad enhey ek awaz sunayee di.

Awaz: Haan tou kesa lag raha hai ab.

Mamu: Kon hai yahan aur Aly kahan hai mujhey us sey baat krni hai.

Awaz: Baatein tou hoti rahein gi us sey pehley mein kch sunana chahta hn aaj se 20 saal pehley ek Colony k ek ghar main aag lag gai thi ek Ladka apney doston k sath Ground main kheil raha tha tou shour sun k sab wahan chaley gaey deikha tou ek ghar main aag lagi hai aur ek aurat cheikh rahi thi k us ki beti ander hai koi usey bachaney ko ready nai tha sab bas tamasha deikh rahey they phr usi Ladkey ne himmat ki jo k us waqt sirf 5 saal ka tha who bhaga aur ghar k ander ghus gya.

Us 5 saal ladkey ki yeh herkat deikh k sab k muh khulley k khulley reh gaey jo usey jantey they unho ne us k baap ko call kr k bata dia aur who Ladka ek jaltey huey ghar main ghus k us bachi ko dhoondney laga dhoondtey dhoondtey usey ek kamrey se roney ki awaz aaye who us room main gya yahan ek bachi koney main beithi sehmi si rou rahi thi who Ladka us k pass gya aur usko utha k le janey laga.

Ladkey ko maloom hua k Bachi deikh nai sakti lekin Aag ki Tapish se who Sehem gai thi aur ek koney main beith gai thi werna Aankhein hoteen tou Ghar se nikalney ki koshish krti who Ladka aag se bachtey huey us ladki ko Bahir le aaya yahan Bheed akatthi hui pari thi us Ladkey ka baap bhi aa chuka tha Bachi ko deikh k us ki Maa us k pass bhagi aur usey utha k seeney se laga k roney lagi aur us Ladkey ka sukriya Ada krney lagi.

Lekin us Ladkey ki halat kch theek nai thi kiun k us ka aadha Chehra Jal gya tha us k baap ne jab yeh deikha tou usey Foran Hospital le gya yahan us ka ilaaz hua lekin jo damage hona tha who ho chuka tha aadha chehra jal chuka tha ab us Ladkey ko usi Chehrey k sath sari umer guzarni thi.

Umer: Yeh sab tum humein kiun bata rahey ho es ka hum se kia lena dena hai.

Awaz: Bht kch lena dena hai janna chaho gey k who Ladka kon hai wesay tum usey achey se jantey ho.

Mamu: Kon hai who.

Tabhi un Panchon ko andherey main ek chehra nazer aaya jo k aadha jala hua tha lekin es trhah achanak samney aaney se aur thoda derawna lag raha tha Andheirey main k Un Panchon ki Cheikh nikal gai jis ki wajah se us Jaley huey Chehrey pe Muskurahat aa gai.

Mamu: (Dertey huey) Kon ho tum.

Awaz: Aap tou achi trhah se jantey ho mujhey.

Mamu: Nai mein tumhey nai janta batao kon ho tum aur yahan kia kr rahey ho.

Awaz: Mein aap ka Bhanja Aly hn Mama g.
 
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Sorry for late Update kch deir main
 

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Mamu: Nai mein tumhey nai janta batao kon ho tum aur yahan kia kr rahey ho.

Awaz: Mein aap ka Bhanja Aly hn Mama g.

Mamu: Yeh kia bakwaas hai us ka chehra tou acha bhala hai.

Mein: Who nakli chehra hai Mama g yeh mera Asli Chehra hai ab yeh chehra le k tou bahir nai ja sakta na es liey bahiri duniya k liey who chehra bnaya hai mein ne.

Mamu: Tou es ka yehi matlab hai k tu ne Rida ko dhoka dia hai ager who tera yeh chehra deikh le tou kon tujh se pyaar karey ga tou phr tu kis haq se humein Saza de raha hai

Mein: Haan yeh baat aap ki sach hoti ager mein ne Rida ko sach na btaya hota jis din us ne apney pyaar ka izhaar kia tha us k agley din hi mein ne usey apna asli chehra dikha dia tha us k bawezood us ne mujh se muh nai moda aur yehi baat uski mujhey pasand aaye thi so baatein bht ho gaen ab time aa gya saza deney ka Mama g aap ko end main saza miley gi mein chahta tou tha k aap ko bhi dardnaak mout doon lekin aap ki begum ki wajah se aasan mout aap k liey Teh ki hai lekin us sey pehley aap enki ki saza deikh lo k en k sath mein kia krney wala hn.

Mamu: Tum aesa kch bhi nai kro gey aur humein yahan se janey do.

Mein: Yahan se aap sab ki lash hi jaey gi Mama g Zinda tou tou janey se rahey jo Herkat ki hai aap ne us pe mein maafi nai deta Meri Maa ne bhi kaha k aakhri baar maaf kr doon aap ko lekin nai lekin haan maafi es soorat main hai k aap ko Aasan mout doon ga aur ab chup kr k baqion ko merta hua deikho.

Arsalan: Aly mujhey janey do merey ghaib honey pe ab tuk hangama mach gya ho ga aur police mujhey purey Seher main dhoondh rahi ho gi es liey mein keh raha hn k mujhey janey do werna bht pachtaao gey.

Mein: Abey yaar yeh nai manney wala Jhon es ki yeh ghalat Fehmi tou door kr.

Jhon: G bhai.

Jhon ne apney Mobile pe Live News Channel lagaya aur who Arsalan k samney kr dia Mobile main deikh k Arsalan ki aankhein badi ho gaen aur who heirat se mobile main deikhney laga jis main Neya CM Oath le raha tha Jhon ne mobile band kia aur apni jagah pe ja k khada ho gya.

Arsalan: Nai yeh nai ho sakta who merey sath aesa kesay kr saktey hn mujhey dhoondney ki bjaye Neya CM hi bana dia.

Mein: Yeh meri ek choti si Power hai mein kisi ko bhi badal sakta hn chahey who kisi bhi Position pe ho usey mein ek pal main badal sakta hn tu kia cheez hai tu abhi sabar kr jo tu ne Habiba ki Zindagi berbaad kia hai us ka Badla mein tujh se loon ga lekin us sey Pehley Umer ki Saza banti hai kiun k us ka Gunhah tum sab se bada hai.

Yeh keh k mein Umer ki traf muda jo Gussay main meri traf deikh raha tha mein us k samney ja k khada ho gya jo lagatar mujhey ghoorey ja raha tha.

Mein: Jhon es k khandan ko uthaney ka kaha tha mein ne.

Jhon: Bhai who yeh Mulk shod gaey hn.

Jhon ne es baat pe meri traf muskura k deikha ulta mein bhi uski traf muskura k deikhney laga jis sey who thoda confuse ho gya.

Mein: Kis Mulk main gaey hn.

Jhon: UK.

Mein ne Mobile nikala aur call milayee call speaker pe rakhi jo k kch hi sec main receive hui samney waley ne call uthatey hi salam kia.

Awaz: Salam bhai kesay yaad kia aap ne mujhey.

Mein: W. Salam ek chota sa kaam hai.

Awaz: G bolo bhai.

Mein: Mera dost tujhey ek Family ki detail bheijey ga who ek do din main hi wahan shift hui hai us Family ki jitni bhi Female hn un ko acha ghar achi Nokri achi Education achi Health treatment milni chaiey lekin jitney bhi Male hn un ko agli flight main hi Wapis bheijh.

Awaz: Theek hai bhai aap detail bheijo 2 ghantey main hi kaam ho jaey ga.

Mein: Flight apney jet pe bheijeen private aur time Detail bheijh dein.

Awaz: Theek hai bhai ho jaey ga.

Mein: Jhon usey detail bheijh de.

Jhon: G bhai.

Mein Umer ki traf muda jo k Heirat se mujhey deikh raha tha mein us k pass gya aur us ki gerdan ko pakad lia.

Mein: Kia socha tha tu ne k tu Apni Family ko mujh se bacha le ga Female ko tou hath nai lagaun ga kiun k mein terey jesa gandi nali ka keera nai hn magar terey Khandan k her Mard ko Hijda bana k shodun ga bht showk hai na tujhey Rape krney ka na janey kitni Ladkion ki Zindagi berbaad ki tu ne kitno ko jaan se maar dia jinho ne terey khilaaf awaz uthayee aaj terey sath bhi wesa hi ho ga Jhon.

Jhon: G bhai.

Mein: Who aa gya jisey bulwaya tha mein ne.

Jhon: G bhai.

Mein: Le k aa us ko.

Tabhi wahan ek Nigro aata aur Merey samney jhuk jata hai 5 jo bandhey huey they us Nigro ko wahan deikh k heran they aur Shocked bhi they merey samney jhukney pe.

Nigro: Yes my Lord.

Mein: (Umer ki traf ishara kr k) He is a Rapist and u know what u have to do.

Nigro: I Know my Lord.

Hospital main sab Rida k room k bahir they Baba bhi wahan mojud they k un k samney ek aadmi aaya Baba us Anjaan Aadmi ko deikh k heran ho gaey k who un k samney kiun aaya hai.

Baba: G Kon hn aap.

Aadmi: Mein bht hi badi Musibat main hn kia Djævel aap ka beta hai.

Baba: G mera beta hai aap btaiey kia Masla hai aap ka.

Aadmi: G un ko yahan bula dein mein sab batata hn plz zara jaldi kijeay meri Beti ki jaan khatrey main hai.

Baba: G aap preshan na hn mein usey abhi bulata hn (Mujhey phone mila k) Aly.

Mein: G Baba Hukam.

Baba: Jaldi se uper aa koi tujh se milna chahta hai urgent hai.

Mein: G mein abhi aaya Baba.
 
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