Fantasy Un-Deikhi Muhabbat (2)

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Index​	Family Introduction​
Main Character Introduction in Detail​	Some Dialogue​

 

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Baba: Jaldi se uper aa koi tujh se milna chahta hai urgent hai.

Mein: G mein abhi aaya Baba.

Baba: Who aa gya mera Beta.

Mein: G Baba kis liey bulaya aap ne.

Baba: Beta yeh tum se urgent milna chahtey hn.

Mein: G kahiey kia kaam hai mujh se.

Aadmi: Beta mera naam Shahid hai meri Beti ki jaan khatrey main hai abhi bhi who shadeed zakhmi hai mein usey badi muskil se ***** Gaun se bacha k laya hn plz uski jaan bacha lo sirf wohi hai meri es duniya main aur koi nai hai ager usey kch ho gya tou mein akela kia krun ga.

Mein: Aap befiker rahein kahan hai aap ki beti.

Aadmi: G usey mein esi hospital main lay k aaya hn us ka ilaj chal raha hai yahan mein ne aap k baba ko deikha tou umeed jagi k aap meri madad zaroor krein gey.

Mein: Aap befiker rahein mein deikhta hn ab Imran.

Imran: Haan Aly.

Mein: En k sath ja en ki Beti ki condition deikh us ko theek kr mujhey kisi bhi keemat pe who theek chaiey kiun k wohi bata sakti hai k us k sath kia hua hai kch bhi kr lekin who mujhey sahi salamat chaiey.

Imran: Theek hai mein deikhta hn.

Mein: Aap Imran k sath jaiey mein yaheen hn es Hospital main koi hatyaar k sath nai ghus sakta aur ager aap ko koi dikhey bhi jis pe aap ko shak ho tou aap yaheen aa jaiey ga mein yaheen aap ko milun ga.

Aadmi: Tumhara bht bht sukriya beta.

Imran aur who Aadmi chala gya Imran ne jatey hi us Ladki ki condition deikhi tou who Shocked ho gya kiun k us ladki ki condition bht hi buri thi Imran ne jaldi se usey Operation thetor main shift kia aur mujhey call ki.

Mein: Haan bol.

Imran: Bht buri condition hai mujhey nai lagta yeh bachey gi lekin phr bhi mein puri koshish krta hn kisi ne bht hi berehmi se mara hai isey mein ne OT main shift kr dia hai mein bhi ja raha hn doctors k sath deikhtey hn kia hota hai.

Mein: Imran mujhey who zinda aur sahi salamat chaiey.

Imran: Meri puri koshish rahey gi Baqi Uper waley k hath main hai.

Phone cut ho gya mein Rida k pass chala gya jo abhi bhi Maryum se baatein kr rahi thi mein us k pass ja k beith gya.

Maryum: Baba aap kahan chaley gaey they.

Mein: Mein kisi kaam se gya tha meri jaan aap batao Mammi se baatein ho gaen.

Maryum: Abhi kahan abhi bht sari baatein krni hn.

Mein: Meri Jaan mammi ko aram bhi tou krney do deikho who beemar hn aur aap un k uper beithi hui ho.

Rida: Nai koi baat nai mein theek hn.

Mein: Rida abhi tumhara operate hona hai us k liey Doctors aa rahey hn tumhey rest ki zaroorat hai jab theek ho jao gi tou jitni marzi baatein krna mein nai rokun ga.

Rida: G theek hai.

Mein: Chalo beta aap aao merey sath bahir.

Mein ne Maryum ko uthaya aur bahir le aaya Gudiya ne aagey barh k Maryum ko mujh se le lia tabhi Jhon merey pass aaya.

Jhon: Bhai who Sierra aur Azalia aa gai hn.

Mein: Bulao unhey yahan.

Sierra+Azalia: Good to see u Master.

Mein: Hmmm Kesi ho dono.

Sierra+Azalia: We are good Master.

Mein: Gudiya aur Rida ki security deikhni hai tum dono ne abhi tum dono Gudiya k sath ghar jao aram kro kal se tum apney kaam pe lag jana Gudiya aap Maryum ko sath le jao theek hai.

Gudiya: G bhaiya.

Who charon chaley gaey us k baad kch 2 ghantey k baad Imran ki call aaye us ne mujhey ICU ward main bulwaya mein wahan chala gya.

Mein: Haan kia hua.

Imran: Hum ne apni traf se puri koshish ki hai treetment ho chuka hai blood lost tha who bhi de dia hai lekin abhi behosh hai kab hosh aaye kch keh nai saktey kiun k bht buri trhah se mara gya hai isey bahir aur androoni chotein bht zyada theen.

Mein: Theek hai tu ne itna sab kia who bht hai ab bas jaldi se hosh aa jaey.

Mein ne ja k ek jhalak Ladki ko deikha tou shocked ho gya waqiey hi bht buri trhah se mara gya tha us k Muh sooja hua tha mathey pe stiches lagey they honth phat gaey they gaal neeley perh gaey they aur purey chehrey aur gerdan pe jagah maar ki wajah se laal hua para tha.

Mein: (Aadmi se) Aap yaheen beitho jesay hi hosh aaye tou aap usey merey barey main btana kiun k ager mein us k pass raha tou shaid who darey aur us ki wajah se us ki halat aur khraab na ho jaey es liey aap yahan es k pass beitho us k hosh main aaney k baad usey merey barey main btao phr mujhey bulana mein aa jaun ga mera dost bahir hi ho ga aap usey mujhey call krney ko kehna theek hai.

Aadmi: Theek hai beta.

Mein ne Jhon ko wahan shoda aur rida k pass chala gya kiun k us ka bhi operate hona tha Doctors ki team pounchney wali thi koi 30 min k baad Jhon ki call aaye k Ladki ko hosh aa gya hai us k walid ne mujhey bulwaya hai mein ICU main gya yahan who aadmi apni beti se kch keh raha tha jab us aadmi ki nazer mujh pe gai tou us ne mujhey apney pass bulwaya.

Mein: Bataiey aap k sath yeh sab kya, kiun aur kis ne kia hai mein aap se wada krta hn mein us ki who halat kr doon ga k Who mout mangey ga lekin usey mout miley gi nai boliey kia hua hai aap k sath.

Ladki: (muskil se boltey huey) G mera naam Neelum hai mein Govt Teacher hn 2 Mahiney pehley mera Transfer Gujranwala k gaun Pehlwanpura main hua tha mein wahan chali gai lekin wahan k halat bht badter they wahan ek Gundey ka Raaj tha naam hai uska Ch. Waleed who Kabza Mafia chalata hai Jis School main gai us Zameen pe bhi us ka Kabza tha mein ne us k khilaaf awaz uthayee tou us ne merey baba ko jaan se maar dalney ki dhamki di.

(Rotey huey) Who Darinda hai bhai Subhah Nastey main who Beqassor logon ka khoon krta hai Dupeher ko khaney main un logon k Bachon ko maar dalta hai jo us k khilaaf jatey hn aur raat ko who Ladkion ka Rape krta hai mera us ne rape kia aur mujhey jaan se mar dalna chaha lekin mein kisi trhah us se bach gai pata nai kesay lekin mein bach gai shaid aap tuk pounchney k liey hi Uper waley ne meri jaan bachayee hai Plzz bhai usey jaan se maar dalo es sey pehley aur logon ki Zindagi berbaad ho.

 

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(Rotey huey) Who Darinda hai bhai Subhah Nastey main who Beqassor logon ka khoon krta hai Dupeher ko khaney main un logon k Bachon ko maar dalta hai jo us k khilaaf jatey hn aur raat ko who Ladkion ka Rape krta hai mera us ne rape kia aur mujhey jaan se mar dalna chaha lekin mein kisi trhah us se bach gai pata nai kesay lekin mein bach gai shaid aap tuk pounchney k liey hi Uper waley ne meri jaan bachayee hai Plzz bhai usey jaan se maar dalo es sey pehley aur logon ki Zindagi berbaad ho.

Mein: (gussay main) Jhonnnnn.

Jhon: G bhai.

Mein: Mujhey who kisi bhi haal main chahiey lekin zinda mujhey nai maloom tum yeh sab kesay krtey ho lekin mujhey who chahiey usey bachaney k liey koi bhi beech main aaye maar dalo chahey police wala ho Politician ho ya us ki ghar ki aurtein sab ko maar dalo kehna Djævel ka Kehar brasney wala hai Is that Clear.

Jhon: G bhai Subhah tuk who aap k pass ho ga.

Mein: Abhi niklo.

Jhon: G bhai.

Mein: Aap befiker rahein us ko saza aesi miley gi k Puri Duniya k Logon ki Rooh us ki Halat deikh k Kanpein geen aap aram kro kal subhah miltey hn.

Mein bahir aa gya aur Rida k room ki traf gya es beech kisi ko phone milaya mein ne.

Mein: Gujranwala ka ek Gaun hai Pehlwanpura us ka koi Gunda hai Ch. Waleed mujhey us ki ek ek detail agley ek ghantey main chahiey.

Aadmi: Ho jaey ga.

Doctors ki Team aa gai thi sath main Imran bhi tha hum ek room main gaey wahan Imran ne Rida ka Back X-Ray dikhaya yahan Goli ne Damage kia tha Doctron ne barey ghour se deikha aur aapas main discuss kia.

Doctor: Hum ne sab bareeki se deikha hai aur es ka ek hi point nikalta hai Spinal Cord ka ek aesa hissa damage hua hai jis ki wajah se Patient sari Zindagi ab nai uth sakey ga who Bed pe Laita hi rahey ga.

Mein: Mein Janta hn yeh baat Imran ne bhi mujhey yehi btaya hai mein ne aap ko esi baat pe discuss krney k liey bulaya hai drasal mein ek Roboticists hn yeni k mein Robot se related aur Program se related Scientist hn jan Imran ne mujhey btaya tou mein ne Spinal Cord ka wohi hissa bnaya hai aap ek baar deikh lein ager aap ko lagey k yeh fit ho sakta hai tou Operation shuru krtey hn ager nai tou phr hum es main ab kia hi kr saktey hn.

Doctor: Okay aap dikhaiey.

Mein ne Imran ko who Box laney ko kaha jo mein ne usey dia tha Imran Box le aaya mein ne usey khol k Doctor ki team k aagey kr dia ek Doctor ne usey bahir nikala aur baqi sab usey bareeki se deikhney lagey aur sab heran they k ek ajeed se material se hu bahu wohi hissa Spinal Cord ka bana hua tha jo k damage ho chuka tha aur unho ne yeh bhi note kia k who hissa easily adjust bhi ho jaey ga aur Future main Problem bhi nai krey ga.

Doctor: My God mein yeh kehna chahun ga Mr Aly k aap ne yeh bana k humein heran tou kia hi hai sath main Medical Science main ek nayee invention bhi di hai This is Brilliant hum Operation k liey tyaar hn next 1 ghantey main hum operation krtey hn Mr Imran aap Tyaari krwaen hum ready hotey hn.

Imran: G Sir aap ready hoon mein tyaari krwata hn.

Mein wahan se Rida k pass gya aur us k pass beith k us ka hath pakad lia.

Rida: Kia hua aap bht khush lag rahey hn.

Mein: Tum bht jald theek ho jao gi meri jaan Doctor ki team aa gai hai aur un ka kehna hai k who Operation k zariey tumhey theek kr dein gey tum phr se chalney lago gi mein esi liey bht khush hn.

Mein ne aagey berh k Rida ka matha chuma ekin Rida ne mujhey pakad lia aur merey honthon pe aur purey chehrey pe chumney lagi.

Mein: Bas bas pehley theek ho lo phr khub Pyaar krein gey abhi tumhey OT main le jaya jaey ga tumhara Operation hai aur kafi time lagey ga es main tum bas itna jaan lo k mein hamesha tumharey sath hn tumhey kch nai honey doon ga theek hai.

Rida: G Jaan mujhey aap pe pura bharosa hai.

Mein bahir aaya tou mujhey call aaye jisey mein ne Ch.Waleed ka Bio Data nikalney ko kaha tha us ne jo baatein batayeen mein Shocked ho gya us k baad mein ne Jhon ko call ki.

Mein: Jhon wapis aa ja mein khud usey leney jaun ga wahan tumhara aur tumhari team k liey khatra ho sakta hai mein usey deikh loon ga tu wapis aa aur Hospiatl pe Helicopter mangwa jaldi.

Jhon: G bhai mein usey bheijta hn.

Mein: Theek hai tu yaheen Hospital main aa Rida ka Operation shuru ho chuka hai tu Hospital aa k sambhal.

Jhon: G bhai.

Mein: (unchi awaz main) Darco Army get Ready…….

Mein wahan se uper tarace pe aaya yahan Helicopter land tha mein us main beitha aur wahan nikala aur Gujranwala main pouncha wahan se mein ek hotel main gya room book kia mujhey ek msg aaya jis main likha tha We are Ready…….. mein us Hotel se nikla neechay hi meri gadi park thi us main beitha aur nikal para Phelwanpura wahan pounch k mein gadi se bahir nikla.

Mein: (kisi aadmi se) Yeh Ch. Waleed kahan miley ga.

Us aadmi ne mujhey uper se neechay tuk deikha who phr mujhey ghoorney laga.

Aadmi: Yahan pehley tou nai deikha tumhey.

Mein: Mein us se milney aaya hn kaam k silsiley main.

Aadmi: Yeh seedha jao gey aagey se seedhey hath us ki Khothi hai.

Mein: G Sukriya.

Mein wahan se nikla aur Waleed ki kothi k bahir ja k khada ho gya kothi Laal rang ki thi aur bht hi bari thi Logon k khoon se rangi us kothi ko mein ghoorey ja raha tha k ek aadmi merey pass aaya.

Aadmi: Kia hai bey yun kahey Ghoorey ja raha.

Mein: Mein es Kothi k liey Mout ban k aaya hn ja k bol Waleed ko.

Aadmi: (mera color pakad k) Kia bey kia bola teri itni himmat k tu.

Abhi who aagey kch bakta mein ne ek pounch us ki gerden pe mara us ki gerden ki haddi toot gai aur who waheen neechay gir gya us ka girna tha k ek Aadmi chillaya.

Aadmi: Kon hai bey tu kia leney aaya hai yahan aur kiun mara isey janta nai kahan khada hai Boti bhi nai miley gi terey ghar walon ko.

Mein: Bhokna band kr aur Waleed ko bula merey pass zyada time nai hai.

 

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Aadmi: Kon hai bey tu kia leney aaya hai yahan aur kiun mara isey janta nai kahan khada hai Boti bhi nai miley gi terey ghar walon ko.

Mein: Bhokna band kr aur Waleed ko bula merey pass zyada time nai hai.

Aadmi: Maloom bhi hai kis jagah khada hai yahan pe rozana derzan k hisab se Janazey nikaltey hn aur tu Mout ko hi Dawat de raha hai aey Haris bndey akatthey kr esi merney ka kch zyada hi showk hai.

Haris ne koi bell bjayee jis sey wahan kch hi minton main kreeb 200 se zyada bndey jama ho gaey lekin who aadmi shocked tha k Mein itney bndey deikh k bhi nai dara aur lagatar usey hi ghoorey ja raha tha yeh baat usey Gussa dila rahi thi.

Aadmi: Bht charbi hai terey ander abhi batata hn tujhey aey khatam kro isey.

Tabhi 2 bndon ne mujhey pe hamla kr dia who merey pass pounchay hi they k merey peron main gir gaey aur un k sir se khoon nikalney laga yeh deikh k who aadmi aur zyada shocked ho gya who aankhein phadey apney bndon ko zameen pe laitey huey deikhey ja raha tha.

Mein: Mein ne kaha na merey pass time nai hai mujhey wapis jana hai (cheikh k) Waleed ko bula.

Aadmi: Aey suno sab ek sath waar kro es pe bachney na paey.

Wahan mojud sab ne mujhey pe ek sath humla kr dia lekin hua wohi jo merey pass aata ja raha tha who girta ja raha tha lekin jo mujh tk pounch gaey mein ne apni back se talwar nikali aur within min sab k galey un k dhar se alag kr diey merey kaprey aur Talwar khoon se rang gaey they who Aadmi muh phadey mujhey deikh raha tha aur hulka sa kanp bhi raha tha us k chehrey pe aaya Pasina bata raha tha k us ki Phatti pari hai.

Aadmi: (ghar main bhagtey huey) Bhai yahan pe kisi ne humla kr dia hai Bhai.

Waleed: Kia hua chotey kiun chilla raha hai.

Aadmi: Bhai bahir koi aaya hai us ne humarey sarey aadmion ko maar dia hai bhai bht khaternaak hai bhai mujhey bht darr lag raha hai bhai.

Waleed: (gussay main) Kon hai who aur tu ne mujhey pehley kiun nai btaya jab who humerey aadmion ko maar raha tha.

Aadmi: Bhai us ne kch hi minton main humarey aadmi maar diey bulaney ka time hi nai mila.

Waleed: Kia bakwaas kr raha hai ( bahir jatey huey) aesa kesay ho sakta hai kon hai who Sala jo Mout k muh main aaya hai.

Waleed jesay hi bahir aaya ek pal k liey bahir ka mahol deikh k who bhi ghabra gya lekin zahir nai honey dia aur gussa main mujhey deikhney laga.

Waleed: Kon hai tu aur yahan kiun aaya hai merey bandon ko kiun mara Zindagi pyaari nai kia.

Mein: Mein teri mout ban k aaya hn pata chala hai tu yahan k logon ko mazey k liey marta rehta hai tou socha terey deedar kr liey jaen.

Waleed: Chutya samjha hai kia bol kis ne bheija hai tujhey yahan.

Mein: Yahan ek Gov Teacher thi Neelum us ne mujh se madad mangi mein ne haan kr di ab tujhey us k hath Saza deney k liey leney aaya hn.

Neelum ka naam suntey hi Waleed ki aankhein bari ho gaen us ne apney bhai ki traf deikha tou who bhi heran tha k Neelum abhi Zinda kesay hai.

Waleed: (apney bhai se gussay main) Mein ne tujhey usey marney ko kaha tha na mara kiun nai who zinda kesay hai bol.

Aadmi: Bhai aap ne mazey kr liey tou mujhey bhi Mazey krney they es liey mein ne bhi us k sath kia aur usey maar k us k ghar k aagey pheinkh dia lekin mujhey nai pata tha k who bach jaey gi.

Waleed: Bewaqoof ab kia faida who bach gai na pata nai kahan kahan us ne merey barey main baka ho ga.

Un ki baatein sun k mera Gussa berhta ja raha tha mein ek pal main hi us Aadmi k pass pounch gya aur usey le k apni jagah pe aa gya Waleed ko kch pata hi nai chala k kia hua hai usey sirf ek hawa ka jhonka hi mehsoos hua lekin jab us ne meri traf deikha tou us k hath pair kanpney lagey.

Waleed: Deikh merey bhai ko shod de werna acha nai ho ga shod de usey.

Mein: Bht showk hai tum dono ko Aurton ki izzat lutney ka tumhari Mout duniya walon k liey misal ban k reh jaey gi.

Mein ne apni talwar back main rakhi aur us aadmi k dono hath pakad liey aur us ki aankhon main deikhney laga who aadmi darr se kanpey ja raha tha.

Aadmi: Mujhey shod de tu jo kahey ga mein krney ko tyaar hn pesay chahiey who bhi milein gey lekin mujhey shod dey.

Mein: Tujhey shod doon tujhey shod dia tou mein apney aap ko kabhi maaf nai kr poun ga aur Djævel maaf nai mout deta hai apney bhai ko Alvida keh de.

Mein ne us aadmi k pait pe zor daar laat mari who udta hua peesay janey laga lekin us k kandhon se khoon k fuwarey nikal rahey they us k hath merey hathon main reh gaey they mein ne us k hath pheinkhey aur talwar doobara hathon main le k jump laga k us k pass gya aur who abhi hawa main hi tha k us ka gala udta hua Waleed k pairon k pass ja k gira yeh bas kch hi sec main hua tha.

Waleed: (chillatey huey) Munnnnaaaaaaa.

Tabhi mein us k pass pounch gya us ne apni gun nikal k mujhey marna chaha lekin mein ne us k us hath pe talwar chala di aur us ka hath cut k door ja gira Waleed dard k marey chillaney laga who ghutnon k bal beith gya mein us k pass ja k khada ho gya.

Waleed: Yeh tu ne acha nai kia merey bhai ko maar dia tu ne mein tujhey zinda nai shodun ga.

Mein: Tu zinda raha tou kch kr paey ga tujhey bhi aesi mout de sakta hn lekin tujhey marney ka haq sirf Neelum ka hai.

Mein ne us k sir pe waar kia who behosh ho gya mein ne usey ek injection lagaya aur us k hath pe kapra bandha yahan se khoon nikal raha tha takeh mazeed khoon na nikley.

Mein: Guards.

Guard: Yes sir.

Mein: Isey le ja k Helicopter main rakho mein aa raha hn.

Guard: Yes sir.

Mein wahan se kisi Masjid main gya wahan ja k Aelaan krwaya k Waleed uska bhai aur us k bandey marey ja chukey hn ab who ek dum Free hn ab unhey darney ki zaroorat nai hai yeh sab aelaan krwa k mein Helicopter ki traf janey laga rastey main log miley aur mera Sukriya ada kr rahey they kch tou rotey huey Dua de rahey they mein wahan se Helicopter main beith k wapis aa gya Hospital ki shatt pe land kia Waleed ko nikala Imran wahan mojud tha us ka staff Strecher pe Waleed ko le k chala gya mein aa gya OT k pass yahan Operation abhi bhi chal raha tha mein wahan se Neelum k pass gya jo k jagi hui thi.

Mein: Mein Waleed ko le ayaa hn us k bhai ko maar dia us k sarey aadmi maar diey Waleed ko hosh aa jaey us k baad tum apna badla lena us sey tub tuk aram kr lo.

Neelum: Aap ka bht bht sukriya Bhai.

Neelum's Father: Aap ka sukriya beta mujhey pura yakeen tha k tum humari madad zaroor kro gey.

 

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Update--16​

Aadmi 2: Shb yeh bolney ki halat main hi nai hai pehley Sheir hua krta tha ab Chua(Rat) ho gya hai Hahahahahahahaha.

Aadmi 2 ki baat sun k wahan jo bhi tha who hans para un k samney Zanjeeron main zakda ek shaksh tha jis k lambey baal they aur darhi bhi jo k ab sufaid bhi honey lagey they us aadmi ki umer lagbag 40 se 45 saal thi.

Shaksh: Yeh tum bhi jantey ho k yeh Zanjeerein mujhey qaid nai rakh sakteen ager meri Family pe khatra na hota tou es waqt tum yun hans na rahey hotey tumhari Rooh ko es qadr tadpata k who Jahanum main janey k bhi qabil na hoti.

Aadmi: Rassi jal gai per akkad nai gai koi baat nai terey pass 2 saal hn us k baad tujhey teri family k pass pouncha dein gey Dafnaney k liey hahahahahahaha.

Gudiya: Chalo bhaiya bahir lawn main kheiltey hn bht din ho gaey aap k sath kheiley.

Aly: Chalo meri jaan aaj Cricket kheiltey hn.

Gudiya: Ok bhaiya mein bat ball le k aati hn.

Aly aur Gudiya lawn main kheilney lagey Aly ki batting aaye tou us sey ek shot lag gai aur ball bahir chala gya.

Gudiya: Bhaiya mein le k aati hn.

Gudiya bahir gai tou usey sadak k doosri side pe ek ladka khada dikha jo hath main pakdey mobile ko deikh raha tha.

Gudiya: Kia hua bhaiya.

Ladka: Pata nai kahan se ball aaye aur merey hath pe lagi aur Mobile neechay gir k toot gya.

Gudiya: Acha who ball yahan aaye thi kahan hai who ball mein aur merey bhaiya kheil rahey hn plzz batao na ball kahan hai abhi meri bari hai betting ki.

Us ladkey ko gussa aa gya yeh sun k us ka Mobile jo k kafi mehnga tha who toot gya tha us ne gussay se Gudiya ki traf deikha jis sey Gudiya dar gai us ki aankh main khouf k marey aansu aa gaey who ladka Gudiya ko thapper marney hi laga tha k wahan ek awaz gunj gai.

Awaz: Sochna bhi mat werna tera khandan yeh sochney pe majboor ho jaey ga k tu es duniya main aaya tha bhi ya nai.

Gudiya ne peechay ki traf deikha tou wahan us ka bhai khada tha who dour k us k pass gai Aly ne usey utha lia aur us k gaal pe kiss kia aur usey ander bheijh dia Gudiya ander chali gai aur Aly chal k us ladkey k pass gya.

Aly: Aaj tuk mein ne apney maa baap ko bhi ijazat nai di k who Gudiya ne unchi awaz main baat krein tu ne himmat bhi kr li usey thapper marney ki lagta hai teri jaan bht sasti hai jo merney ki itni jaldi hai tujhey.

Ladka: Mera Mobile toot gya hai jantey bhi ho kitna mehnga hai Salary main bacha bacha k yeh mobile lia tha mein ne.

Aly: (Gussay main chillatey huey) Tou us k liey bachi pe hath uthaye ga.

Aly ki dhaar se ek pal liey us Ladkey ki Rooh tuk kaanp gai Aly phone nikala aur Mueed ko call laga di.

Mueed: Haan bol Aly.

Aly: Ek kaam kr Iphone ka latest model dabba pack le k merey ghar aa jaldi.

Mueed: 15 min main aaya.

Aly: Aa raha hai tera phone lekin ek baat kaan khol k sun le aaj k baad tu mujhey yahan dikha tou waqiey hi es duniya se ghaib ho jaey ga.

Thodi deir main hi Mueed aa gya us ne Dabba Aly ko dia Aly ne usey us ladkey ko de dia who ladka dabba le k wahan se nikal gya Aly aur Mueed ghar main aa gaey hall main gaey tou Gudiya Ami se lipti hui thi aur thodi sehmi bhi hui thi Aly us k pass gya aur usey utha k galey se laga lia.

Aly: Kia hua meri jaan ko mein hn na kch nai ho ga aap ko.

Gudiya: Bhaiya who gandey bhaiya they who mujhey marney lagey they.

Aly: Nai meri jaan mein ne kaha na aap ko na tou koi dant sakta hai na hi koi maar sakta hai chup ho jao mein ne usey yahan se bheijh dia hai aap jao aur apney room main chocolate khao.

Gudiya: Theek hai bhaiya.

Ami: Kia hua tha beta yeh itna dari hui kiun thi.

Aly: Kch nai ami who hum Cricket kheil rahey they tou ball bahir gai jo k ek ladkey k hath main lagi aur mobile gir k toot gya Gudiya ball leney gai tou tou us ne Gudiya ko thapper marna chaha k mein pounch gya esi wajah se who thoda sehmi hui thi.

Mueed: Hmmmm tou tu ne usey janey dia.

Aly: Janey dia hai Maaf nai kia.

Ami: Kia matlab maaf nai kia yeh ek hadsa tha jo hua who bhi gussay main krney laga tha jo k nai krna chaiey tha ab tum kia kro gey.

Aly: Ami yeh baat aap bhi achi trhah janti hn k mein Gudiya ko duniya main sab se zyada pyaar krta hn mein ne aap ko aur baba ko bhi ijazat nai di us se unchi awaz main baat krney ko tou us ne tou phr bhi thapper marney ki himmat ki thi hisab tou ho ga aur bht bura ho ga.

Ami: Janey do beta.

Aly: Mein kon sa abhi kch kr raha hn ek haftey k baad mujhey Karachi jana hai 1 saal k liey.

Mueed: Hein? Kiun bhai yeh achanak Karachi ka program kiun ban gya.

Aly: Business related ja raha hn jo gadiyan mein bana raha hn un ko le janey k liey special container aur wahan warehouse k liey jagah aur us k ban janey tuk mein wapis nai aa sakta yeh sab bht costly hai es liey mujhey apni deikh raikh main hi krna ho ga.

Mueed: Theek hai mein bhi chalta hn.

Aly: Nai tu nai ja raha merey sath tu yaheen rahey ga aur Jhon ko bol dey Gudiya k sath 24 ghantey rahey jab mein yahan se chala jaun.

Ami: Gudiya janey de gi tujhey.

Aly: Us k liey bhi soch lia hai mein ne aap fiker na krein.

Ami: Acha who kal Rida aa rahi hai.

Aly: (shocked) Acha who London se kab aaye.

Ami: Kal hi aa gai thi MBA complete kr k aaye hai ab Bhaijan k Business main hath btaye gi.

Aly: Yeh tou bht achi baat hai kal kis time aaye gi yahan.

Ami: Sham ko.

Aly: Theek hai mein filhal abhi Mueed k sath ja raha hn bht zaroori kaam kal aaun ga raat ka khana aap kha lijeay ga hai Mueed do min ruk mein Gudiya ko bata k aaya.

Aly Gudiya ko bata k Mueed k sath nikal para apney ek Flat main yahan us ne Imran aur Jhon ko bhi bulwa lia tha charon hath main beer liey baatein krney lagey.

Mueed: Kia baat hai mein kab se deikh raha hn tu kisi soch main gum hai.

Aly: Apney Project ko le k soch raha hn 80% ho chuka hai lekin 20% jo reh gya hai who bht tung kr raha hai.

Imran: Kon sa Project.

Aly: Robot.

Mueed: Ooohhh tou Karachi 1 saal k liey ja raha humara kia ho ga bhai.

Imran: Hein? kiun bhai kiun ja raha hai Karachi 1 saal k liey.

Aly: Business k liey acha Jhon mein agley haftey ja raha hn tou 1 saal k liey tu Gudiya k sath rahey ga 24 ghantey usey koi bhi takleef nai honi chaiey.

Jhon: Done.

Bahot khoob shaandar update bhai
Woh ladka k saath kia kerne wala h Aly

 

[Naik]

Update--17​

Aly: Business k liey acha Jhon mein agley haftey ja raha hn tou 1 saal k liey tu Gudiya k sath rahey ga 24 ghantey usey koi bhi takleef nai honi chaiey.

Jhon: Done.

Rida: Phupho kia haal hn aap k.

Ami: Mein theek hn meri bachi tum sunao kesa raha London main.

Rida: Bht hi acha raha phupho acha yeh btaen k humari Gudiya kahan hai aur Aly.

Ami: Gudiya apney room main hai usey bulati hn aur Aly bahir hai aata hi ho ga Gudiya deikho kon aaya hai.

Gudiya: (room se nikaltey huey) Kon aaya hai Ami are Aapi aap.

Gudiya Rida k pass gai tou Rida ne usey utha k Godi main bitha lia aur us k gaal pe kiss kia.

Rida: Kesi hai humari Gudiya.

Gudiya: Mein theek hn Aapi.

Rida: Mein aap k liey London se khub sari Chocolate lai hn.

Gudiya: (Rida ko galey laga k) Arey waah Aapi aap bht achi hn.

Awaz: Kiun aesa kia ho gya bhai.

Jab sab ne Awaz yahan se aaye wahan deikha tou wahan Aly tha Aly bhi chaltey huey sofey pe ja k beith gya.

Aly: Rida kesi ho tumhari Perhayee kesi rahi London main.

Rida: Bht achi.

Aly: Tou ab Mamu ka business sambhalney ja rahi ho.

Rida: Not Now abhi mujhey thoda bht Experience chaiey.

Aly: Okay.

Ami: Tou aesa kro Rida beti Aly Karachi ja raha hai 1 saal k liey es k sath chali jao seekho kesay kaam hota hai kesay Business kia jata hai.

Rida: Haan yeh sahi rahey ga.

Aly: Nai Rida mein wahan Warehouse banwaney ja raha hn aur us k liey jagah bhi deikhni hai kch special Container bnwaney hn kch meeting hn meri wahan tum sahi tareekey se nai seekh pao gi.

Rida: Mujhey kis trhah se seekhna mein janti hn mein tumharey sath ja rahi hn matlab ja rahi hn mein abhi Baba se baat krti hn.

Aly: Theek hai persu mein nikal raha hn Mamu se ijazat mill gai tou aa jana.

Rida: Theek hai acha Phupho mein chalti hn Baba se bhi puchna hai aur tyari bhi krni hai.

Ami: Theek hai beti.

Aurat: Kia kaha tum ne abhi tou aayee ho London se phr ek saal k liey jana hai Karachi kiun.

Rida: Ami mein Business seekhna chahti hn Experience miley ga tou hi mein apna business sambhal poun gi na.

Mamu: Tou Umer se seekh lo who bhi acha Businessman hai Karachi janey ki kia zaroorat hai.

Rida: Baba Business koi ek kamrey main beith k seekhney wali cheez nai hai us k liey bahir nikalna perta hai experience krna perta hai Logon se milna perta hai tub ja k Business ka experience milta hai plz janey dein na.

Mamu: Theek hai tum chali jana.

Rida: Ohhh thnx u baba.

Mami: Apna khyaal rakhna.

Rida: Uski fiker na krein ami mein rakh loon gi.

Aly: Rida tum yahan aram kro mein aata hn.

Rida: Kahan ja rahey ho Aram ki zaroorat tou tumhey bhi hai kal krna jo bhi kaam hai.

Aly: Mein bas 1 ghantey main aa jaun ga zaroori kaam hai.

Rida: Ek baat batao yeh Karachi main tumhara bangla kahan se aaya es sey pehley bhi aa chukey ho kia.

Aly: Nai yeh Bangla mera nai hai merey dost ka hai usi se lia hai rehney k liey who waheen merey pass hota hai yahan uski Family rehti thi usey bhi apney pass us ne bula lia hai es liey.

Rida: Ohhh theek hai jaldi aana.

Aly nikal gya apney kaam pe aur jo zaroori kaam they us ney nipta diey kal meeting rakhi thi esi main usko 1.5 ghanta lag gya who rastey main hi tha k usey Rida ka phone aa gya.

Rida: Kahan ho aly kitni deir laga di hai tum ne.

Aly: Mein bas rastey main hi hoon bas pounchney wala hn.

Rida: Theek hai.

Aly Bangley pe pounchney hi wala tha k us ka phone phr se ring kia es baar us ki maami k phone tha Aly ne Call pick ki.

Aly: G khaiey Mami g.

Mami: Beta kheriat se pounch gaey na tum wahan.

Aly: G Kheriat se pounch gaey they hum Rida Ghar main hi aram kr rahi hai mein zara bahir nikala tha kisi kaam k silsiley main abhi ghar hi ja raha hn.

Mami: Theek hai beta Rida ka khyaal rakhna abhi London se aaye thi aur abhi hi Karachi tumharey sath nikal gai Achi trhah se us sey mili bhi nai mein.

Aly: Aap befiker rahein uska achey se khyaal rakhun ga acha mami ek min rukiey ga mein zara door bell baja loon.

Mami: Theek hai Beta.

Aly ne ghar ki bell bajayee aur thodi deir main hi door khul gya Rida samney khari thi us ne Rasta dia tou Aly ander aa gya Aly ander ki traf ja hi raha tha k peechay se Rida bol pari.

Rida: Aly mujhey tum se zaroori baat krni hai.

Aly: Haan bolo.

Rida: I love u.

Bahot badhiya shaandar
Yeh kia tha direct I love you

 

[Naik]

Update--18​

Rida: Aly mujhey tum se zaroori baat krni hai.

Aly: Haan bolo.

Rida: I love u.

Aly: Yeh kia bakwaas kr rahi ho tum (phone kaan se laga k) Mein aap se baad main baat krta hn.

Rida: I love u aur aaj se nai pichley 5 saal se kehna chahti thi lekin keh nai pai London chali gai jab wapis aaye tou irada kr lia k mein tumhey I love u bol k rahun gi pata chala tum Karachi ja rahey ho kisi Business k chaltey tou mujhey moqa mill gya mein ne socha tumhey I love u bhi bol doon gi aur tumharey sath akeley time bhi spend kr loon gi.

Aly: Deikho Rida mera Maqsad bht bada hai mein en kaamon main apna maqsad berbaad nai krna chahta na mein ne Muhabbat k barey main socha hai na hi Shadi k barey main merey bht se dushman hn kab koi kahan kesay maar de nai maloom mujhey behter hai yeh sab bhool jao.

Rida: Bhool jaun aur who bhi tumhey? Aesa tou meri zindagi main nai ho ga haan Mar k zaroor bhool jaun tumhey lekin who bhi muskil lagta hai mujhey.

Aly: Bakwaas band kro tum kal wapis ja rahi ho yahan rahi tou mera dimagh kharaab krti raho gi mein kisi Zaroori kaam se yahan aaya hn.

Rida: Ager tum ne mujhey yahan se bheija na Aly tou mera Janaza hi yahan se jaey ga aur yeh dhamki nai hai mein sach main khud ko khatam kr loon gi.

Aly ko Rida ki baat pe gussa aa gya who apney room main chala gya aur room main idher se udher tehlney laga k us ka phone baja deikha tou Mami ka phone tha Aly ne pick kia.

Aly: G Mami g.

Mami: Kia hua beta yeh Rida kia keh rahi thi tumhey.

Aly: I love u bola hai us ne mein ne manah kia tou marney ki dhamki de rahi hai ab aap hi bataen kia krna hai es ka bht samjhaya lekin nai mani.

Mami: Deikho beta ekloti aulaad hai meri tum achey se samjhana samjh jaey gi plz aesa kch bhi na ho mein mein usey kho doon.

Aly: Aesa kch nai ho ga Mami g subhah deikhta hn samjhata hn usey aap fiker na krein.

Mami: Theek hai beta apna aur us ka khyaal rakhna.

Aly enhi baaton ko sochta hua deir se soya Subhah jab utha tou Shocked hua us k bed pe Rida usey Cuddle kiey soyee hui thi Aly ne ek sec bhi nai lagaya aur uth khada hua jis se Rida ki neend bhi khul gai us ne Aly ki traf deikh tou ek pal k liey who darr gai kiun k Aly gussay main usey deikh raha tha aur us ki aankhein full on Laal theen.

Aly: (Gussay main) Yeh kia harkat hai haan sharam nai aati tumhey.

Rida: (himmat krtey huey) Nai aati Sharam mujhey Pyaar krti hn mein tum se es main sharam kesi kiun nai tum samjh rahey k mein ek pal bhi tumharey bagheir ab nai reh paun gi.

Aly: Deikho Rida yeh sab yaheen rok do werna tumhara khoon ho jaey ga merey hathon.

Rida: Merna tou wesay bhi mein ne hai hi jab tum nai milo gey tou tou tum hi mujhey apney hathon se maar do.

Aly: Shut up just Shut the Fuck up.

Aly washroom gya tyaar hua kaprey pehney aur nikal gya kisi kaam se abhi usey Warehouse k liey jagah deikhney jana tha ek Property Dealer se us ki baat ho chuki thi.

P.D: G Aly shb yeh hai who jagah jesi aap ko chaiey thi aur location bhi jesi aap ne batayee thi.

Aly: Hmmmm theek hai kitney main beich raha hai es ka maalik.

P.D: Yahan ek Marla 6 laakh ka hai us hisaab se yeh jagah 20 Caror ki banti hai un ki Demand bhi itni hi hai.

Aly: Theek hai aap paper ready kijeay kal paper k sath Payment bhi transfer ho jaey gi.

P.D: Paper ready hn unho ne kaha tha ager maan gaey tou unhey le aaye ga.

Aly: Theek hai chalo phr kal se yahan kaam shuru ho jaey ga.

P.D aur Aly chal diey koi 2 ghantey baad ek bangley k samney yeh rukey P.D ne bell bajayee guard ne gate khola aur dono ander chaley gaey hall main Sofey pe beith gaey kch deir k baad ek bajurg aur teen ladkey hall main aaye aur sofey pe beith gaey.

Aly: Ohhh Tou who zameen governer shb ki hai.

P.D: G.

Aly: Theek hai mujhey tou Zameen se matlab hai paper mangwayee sign kijeay mein Payment transfer krta hn.

Governer: Pehley payment transfer ho gi phr paper pe sign hn gey.

Aly: Hahahahahaha yeh Bewaqoof kisi aur ko bnana mujhey nai zameen beichni hai tou pehley paper pe sign hn gey phr payment transfer ho gi.

Ladka: (Aly pe gun point kr k) Suna nai baba ne kia kaha pehley Payment transfer ho gi chal jaldi se kr.

Aly: Garam khoon I like it abhi krta hn (Phone mila k) Hello haan PM shb mein Aly bol raha hn (Speaker on kr k) Mein ne es liey phone kia hai k mein Business k chaltey Karachi aaya tha aur yahan Warehouse k liey Zameen deikhi jo aap k Sindh k Governer ki hai un k ghar aaya mein ne kaha Paper sign kr dijeay mein payment kr deta hn lekin who pehley Transfer krney ko bol rahey hn aur ab us k betey ne mujh pe Gun taan rakhi hai aesay haramzadon ko Governer bana rakha hai tu ne (chillatey huey) Jo Djævel pe Gun tanein gey.

PM: (huklatey huey) Aly deikho meri baat suno mein usey samjhata hn.

Aly: Ab samjhaney ko kch nai rakha ek tou marey ga Gov ki BV mar chuki hai lekin us k bachon ki BV hn tou PM shb nayee Governer ka intezaam kr lena yeh nai bachney wala.

Aly ne phone sofey pe pheinkh k us ladkey se gun cheen li aur Governer ki traf us ka muh kr dia yeh deikh k Governer aur us k teenon betey darr gaey.

Governer: Maaf kr do mujhey nai maloom tha k tum Djævel ho werna yeh sab mein nai krta maaf kr do aainda kabhi nai krun ga aesa oye ja paper le k aa mein sign krney ko tyaar hn mujhey payment bhi nai chaiey aap free main le lo lekin mujhey mat maro.

Aly: Najaney kitno logon ko es trhah berbaad kia hai tu ne arbon kamayee Logon ko berbaad krtey huey Yahan mein Business k chaltey hi aaya tha sath main tujhey khatam krney bhi janta hai kiun kiun k tu ne merey Dost k Mamu ko barbaad kia tha jis wajah se un ki jaan chali gai Zinda tou nai shodun ga tujhey.

Ladka: Ager tu ne goli chalayee tou tu bhi yahan se zinda nai ja paey ga.

Aly: Acha who kesay.

Ladka: Bahir 20 k kareeb guard hn sab tujhey bhun dalein gey.

Aly: Murdey kabhi kch nai kr saktey mein ne kaha na isey marney k iradey se hi aaya tha tou bahir ka intezaam bhi kr chuka tha pehley hi sab marey gaey hn ab tery baap ki bari hai.

Bahot khoob shaandar update
Rida tow maan me ko hi tayyar nahi or Aly usse bhi badh ker nahi tayyar
Tow Governor sahab ka namber aa gaya bahot loot lia sabko chutia banaker