Fantasy UNCAGED ( BEWARE THE BEAST WITHIN)

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Characters Of Story​

Hero of story

Mouriya Rajput

Real Mother & Father of hero

INDRAJEET and NILOFER

Mouriya's Step mother and step father Step sister

VIJAY RAJPUT
KANCHAN RAJPUT
GOURI RAJPUT

Hero's pack name or Vijay pack name and details

NIGHT WARRIOR

Vijay is Alpha of pack

Kanchan is Luna of pack

Sandeep singh is Zeta of pack

Suraj chowhan is Gamma of pack

NIGHT WARRIOR PACK & MOON LIGHT PACK are allies

Information of MOON LIGHT PACK

Rajat Chandel is Alpha of pack

Rinku chandel is Luna of pack

Shivam chandel is son of Rajat and Rinku

Enemy pack details

Pack name :-Bloodhound pack

Bloodhound pack details

Digvijay singh is Alpha of the pack

Devendra Nanchhe is Zeta of pack

Niraj Rana is Gamma of pack

White Rose pack & Moon light pack are Allies

White Rose pack information

Alpha:-Arjun Jadeja
Luna:- Aanchal Jadeja

Arjun or Aanchal ka beta

Vishnu Jadeja

THE BLACK WOLVES PACK ALPHA NAME :- MUKHTAR ANSARI THA.

ZETA:- YUSUF MEMON

GAMMA:-ALMAAS MEMON

YUSUF OR ALMAAS DONO BHAI HE.

THE RAINBOW PACK ALPHA NAME:-SHASHVAT PAL

ZETA:-MAYANK PAL

GAMMA:-GOURANG PAL
TINO BHAI HE.

 

[BlooDBath175]

Osm update wahla

Thanks Wahla

 

[Rohit1988]

Update please

 

[BlooDBath175]

Update please

Bhai main aaj Gaon ja raha hu shadi mein to 12 ya 13 tarikh tak koi update nahi de paaunga

 

[BlooDBath175]

Bhai agar vaha time mila to update likhta rahunga aur 13 tarikh bad ek sath sab update post Karunga...... sorry bhai log

 

[AK 24]

Update:-4


{The beginning-1}



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Rat ka time tha or ek aadmi or aurat jungle me chhupe huye the ped ke pichhe.Aurat pregnant thi or uski saans bhi sahi nahi chal rahi thi.Fir bhi aadmi usko khada karta he sahara deke or Vo aadmi or aurat phir se bhaag ne lagte he or unki speed bhi achhi bas aurat ko saans lene me dhikkat ho rahi thi.Thoda or aage pohchhe to Werewolf ki territory start ho gayi thi iska matlab aadmi or aurat safe the q ki Aadmi The original Werewolf tha to vo ek ped ko dekh vahi baith gaye.Aurat wahi baithe baithe apne khayalo me kho gayi.



Unke pichhe takriban 30 Vampires lage the unko dhudhne ke liye.Vo aurat bhi Vampire hi thi (The Original Vampire ki beti thi) Matlab jab vo choti thi tab uske Ghar walo ko mar Diya gaya tha or usko Vishwas dilaya gaya ki uske maata or pita ko marne wale Werewolf the.

Jab usse The Original Vampires main se kisi ne usko dekha to usko apni beti ke roop me adopt kar liya.Baki ko bhi bol diya ki jab tak vo insaan rehna chahti he tab tak vo rahegi koi bhi usko Transform nahi karega agar aisa kiya ya phir koi bhi uske paas bhi gaya to main usko mere hatho se maarunga.

Vo badi hoti gayi or vo jab 24 saal ki hui to usne Vampire banne ka nirnay liya.Usko vampire khud The original Vampire ne banaya tha.

Vo aurat apni soch se bahar nikali or aadmi ki taraf dekha jo khun se sanna huaa tha.Us aadmi ko dekh uske aankh me aansu aa gaye.

Jab aadmi ne uski taraf dekha to wo bola

Aadmi:-NILU(NILOFAR) ab hum safe he Tujhe kuch nahi hoga himmat mat haar q ki Jo tere pet me bachha he uski vajah se tumhe abhi tak poison ka asar nahi huaa.

Aurat(Nilu):- mujhe pata he par ye poison mujhe ander hi ander khokhla kar raha he INDRA(INDRAJEET) or mujhe ye dard bhi bardasht nahi ho raha he.Agar hamre bachhe ka sawal na hota to main khud Suriya ki kirano ko gale laga leti or issi vaayu me mil jaati main.

Aadmi(INDRA):- Aisi baate apne dimag me mat laao nilu.Hum sath rahe to sab mumkin he or ye bat tum bhi achhe se jaanti ho.

Indra ki baat sun nilu ne haa me sar hila diya.

Indra:- chalo aage jaake rehne(chupane) ke liye kuch dhundhate he.

uski baat sun nilu ne haa me sar hilaa diya.Dono khade hoke chale gaye jungle ke or ander.

vahi dusri taraf jo unhe dhudh rahe the. Vo apne sughne ki shamta se unka picha karte huye Werewolf ki territory par aa pohchhe or us aadmi Ki ghandh baki Werewolf se mil gaye isliye vo ho gaye confused.unmese ek Vampire ne bola jo leader tha unka.

Leader:- Chalo vapas ander to hum ja nahi sakte isliye Majesty ko bol denge ki humne unko maar diya he or jab unki laash leke aa rahe the tab Werewolf ne humpe humla kar diya or humare 70 aadmi mare gaye.samje tum sab agar jaan piyari heto yahi bol na.

Sab ne yes My lord karke apni sehmati dikhayi vo vaapas jaane lage Majesty ke paas........................................

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Brilliant update with awesome writing Skills

To Ye hai Hero ke maa- baap ek Original Werewolf aur doosri Original ke dwara turn huyi Vampire to apna Hero kya hoga "Hybrid"
Khair wo to pata lag hi jaayega aage. Ye picha karne wale Vampire bade chutiya hai kaam adhura chod ke hi chale gaye. Aur apne Leader ya King jo bhi hai usey jhoot bolenge. aise Minions kisi ke ho to uska to ho liya koi kaam

Khair dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.

 

[AK 24]

Update:-5

{The beginning-2}



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Vampires leader ke paas Juth bolne ke siwa koi rasta hi nahi tha q ki agar vo juth nai bolta to The Original Vampire usko maar dete isliye bechara 'Marta kiya na Karta' wali situation me tha.

Jab wo log Majesty ke pass pohchhe to pehle juke unke saamne or phir Jab Majesty maise kisi ne unko bol ne ka ishara kiya to Vampire leader bola unse

Leader:- Majesty hum unko maarne me kamiyab huye par jab unki laashe leke aane wale the Tab Werewolf ne hamare pe humla kiya q ki hum Unki territory Me chale gaye the.Aapne hi kaha tha ki kuch bhi ho jaaye Dono ko maar ke mere saamne Lana isliye humne unki territory ko laand diya tha unke pichhe pichhe jaake.

Hamare 70 bhai uss humle me sahid ho gaye Majesty agar aap order de to main bhi hamare kuch bhai ke sath milke Badla le sakta hu.


Majesty unki bat sun khush huye or Majesty maise ek khada huaa apni chair se or usse bola

Majesty M1:- nahi abhi hum unse ladna nahi chahte par jab waqt aayega to hum tumhe jarur mouka denge or aaj se Tum Sab ko The Old Vampires ke liye kam karna hoga.

UskI bat sun Leader Khush ho gaya q ki Ab unhe ek achhi position or Sath hi sath khun bhi milega pine.

Leader:- shukriya Majesty

bol ke vo khada hoke vaha se nikal gaya or bahar jo group tha unke sath The Original Vampires ke mahel se bahar nikal gaya.Thodi dur jaake usne sab ko khush khabri di or unke leader ki baat sun sab kush ho gaye or Chale gaye The Old Vampires ke pass.



Vahi dusri taraf

Indra or Nilu jungle ke ander chalte huye ja rahe the to unko samne ki Taraf ek tuta huaa chota sa lakde ka makan(cabin) type dikhta he unko.

Ek room jitna bhi bada nahi tha makan phir bhi usko dekh Indra or Nilu khush ho jaate he(ab se makan ko cabin likhunga). uss cabin ko check karne lagte he or jab sab check karne ke baad Indra or Nilu cabin ka tuta huaa darwaja khol ke ander ek kone me baith jate he.

Nilu aaram karne lagti he q ki abhi us zaher ki wajah se usko Dard bohat ho raha tha or ye baat Indra bhi mehsus karta he q ki aakhir Vo dono ek dusre ke soulmates Jo the.

Indra nilu ka hath pakad ke usko apni Ghod me leta deta he or uske sar me( balo me) ungliya fer ne lagta he or dono aise hi so jaate he.

Jab subah hoti he to vo dekhta he ki dhup cabin ke ander aa rahi thi.uske jagne se nilu bhi jag jaati he.

Indra usko jagte dekh kehta he

Indra:- Tum aaram Karo main kuch tuti huyi lakdiya leke aata hu taaki dhup ander na aa sake.

Nilu:- Thik he par sambhal ke q ki Vo log abhi bhi hume dhundh rahe honge.

Indra:- ha pata he mujhe tum apni fiqar karo q ki main tumhe itne dard me nahi dekh sakta.

Uski bat sun Nilu muskura deti he or Indra vaha se chala jata he lakdiya ek Katha karne.

Vo jungle main ghum kar lakdiya ek Katha karta he or usko leke bhag ne lagta he q ki usko uske dil me ek ajib si bechaini ho rahi thi.

Jab vo cabin ke pass hota he or smell lene ki koshish karta he par usko kisi ki bhi smell nahi aati.Vo jab cabin ke bahar pohcha to usne ek Katha ki hui lakdi niche gira di or cabin ka tuta huya darwaja usne khola or jab saamne dekha to uske pairo tale Jamin khisak gayi..........................................

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Ye Vampires ke Majesty bhi aise hi maan liya bina kisi saboot ke. Khair Jo Hero ki mother ke ander Zeher hai wo kaafi khatarnak lagta hai aur kya Vampire dhoop mein Ring wagarh pehen ke nahi nikal sakte kya ab dekhte hai hero ki maa ke sath kya hua hai jo Indra ke pairo se jameen nikal gayi

 

[AK 24]

Update:-6

{Born Of Hero}




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Jaise hi Indra cabin ke ander gaya to usne dekha ki Nilu Mar chuki thi or uske hoth,nasen(Veins) hare rang ki hone lagi thi.

ye dekh vo niche gir pada apne ghutno pe or ek baar sadme me chala gaya or Uski aankhon me aansu aane lage or vo fut fut ke rone laga par jaise hi usko khayal aaya apne bete ka to usne apne hath ko dekh apni ungliyon ke nakhun badha diye or Nilu ke pet ko chira or ander hath daal ke apne bachhe ko nikala or usko dekha to vo ladka tha.

Usko dekh vo usko dekhta hi reh gaya q ki uss bachhe ka chehra hi utna dilkash tha ki koi hota to vo uske chehre me kho jata.

Indra ne uske bete ke sine me halka sa Nishan banaya to usme khun bhi nikala jisse uska beta rone laga par thodi hi der me vo ghav bhar gaya or uske bete ne Rona bhi bandh kar diya par vo Nishan reh gaya uske sine me sada ke liye.

Indra ne apne bete ko Nilofar ki baho me rakha ek bar phir usko utha ke usko apni maa ka chehra dikhaya aakhri bar or uske kaam me kuch bola par Bolte bolte uski aankho me aansu aa gaye.

Indra ne apne aansu saaf kiye or Fir kuch bola jisse Indra ki aankhe NiLi padne lagi matlab vo Werewolf ke roop me aane wala tha par usne apne aap ko kaabu kiya or apne bete ko side me rakh Indra nilu ko uthake bahar dhoop me aaya or Nilu uske hath me hi Rakh banke Vayu me mil gayi.

Nilu ka ek locket (chain) niche gir gaye the usko Indra ne uthaya or apne hath me leke vo cabin me gaya.Vo locket apne bete ko dene pehnane wala tha par usne kuch socha or vo locket apni jeb me rakh diya.Indra apne bete ko leke apne khas dost ke bete ki territory ki chal diya q ki ek vahi strong pack tha jo uske bete ko bacha sakta tha us pack ka naam [NIGHT WARRIOR] naam tha or unki Allies(achhi dosti thi dono pack ke bich me Family the aisa bhi keh sakte the) [MOON LIGHT] pack the.Dono pack strong the.

Indra Night warriors ki territory pe pocha to 2 Werewolf bhaag ke aaye or usko rok liya to Indra bola

Indra:- Alpha ko kaho ki Indrajeet aaya he

INdra ki baat sun un mese ek Werewolf bhaag ke gaya apne Alpha ke pass or apne Alpha ko sab bataya to Alpha bhi Indra ko milne chala gaya.

Indra or Alpha ek dusre se gale mile or Alpha usko apne ghar leke Gaya or Alpha ki wife Luna bhi aa gayi vaha or uske sath uski ek beti bhi thi.

Indra ne dono ko sab bataya apne halat ke baare me or Nilofar ke baare me bhi jisse sun un dono ki aankhon me aansu aa gaye q ki sab ne suna tha The Original Vampire or The Original Werewolf ke pyaar ke baare me par kisiko naam ke baare me nahi kisi ne undono ko dekha tha par unki pyaar ki daastan sab ko pata thi.

Sab batane ke baad Indra ne apne gale mese ek locket utar ke diya or Nilofar ka bhi locket diya Alpha ko fir unse Vida leke Indra chala gaya.

INdrajeet kaha gaya kese gaya kisi ko kuch nahi pata tha.

Yaha Alpha or uski biwi khush the ek or bachhe ko paake.Alpha ne vo dono locket apni biwi ko diye sahi jagah rakhne ko take sahi samay aane par iss bachhe ko de sake.




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Brilliant update with awesome writing Skills
Chalo Hero ka janam to hua lekin maa mar gayi lekin iska baap to surgeon nikal, matlab hath daal ke bacha nikal liya. Aur itni jaldi apne bache ko kisi ke paas chod ke bhi chala gaya.
Bhai story badi hi fast pace mein likh rahe ho, matlab sidha 4th gear mein
Thoda break lagao nahi to characters se relate nahi kar paayenge

 

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Update 25 posted bhai

 

[AK 24]

Well, update kaafi chote they to maine socha ek baar mein hi saare update padh ke review deta hu
Story ka Concept kaafi acha hai, aur story ka Character building thoda sa kayi jagah pe kam hai jaise Gouri ka ek dum se khunkhaar ho jaana? Iska koi reason nahi mila humey aur Gouri ko ek dum se Alpha banne pe baaki werewolf ne ye nahi pucha ki Maurya ko Alpha kyu nahi banaya. Kayi aisi baate hai jinka reason humey nahi mila lekin uske bawjood story ek number hai. Aapne Story kaafi fast pace mein likhi hai kisi bullet train ki tarah naa to humey maurya ki training dekhne ko mili. Aapne jaldi hi uska bada kar diya. Naa uski kisi dost (shivam) ke sath bonding dikhi. Khair usko chod ke Apne Hero ke baare mein aur sab kuch sahi hai. Lekin jab Maurya ne gauri ko apne human form mein rok liya to janta ne sawal kyu nahi uthaye?
Khair nikita ke thukrane pe wo apna ghar chod gaya kuch banne ke liye aur nikita ek dum randi type ladki nikli
Dono groups mein war suru hona aur Maurya ki dramatic entery 4 saal ke gap ke baad aur uska khud ko True ALpha batana. Mast tha.
Lekin aapne hamara kaat diya jab humey laga ki chalo Hero ki powers dekhne ko milegi to aapne flashback start kar diya
Waise ab dekhte hai ki Hero ko apne true alpha hone ka kaise pata laga aur usne kaise apna pack banaya.
Waise aapne bataya tha ki Omega wo hote hai jinka koi pack nahi hota aur 33 Omega ka ek sath rehna wo kisi Pack ke barabar hi hai fir wo khud ko Omega kyu kehte hai

By the Way, Brilliant Update with Awesome writing Skills
Bas yahi story thoda detail mein likhte to aur maja aata, jaise Immortal pack kaise allies bane, gauri aur vishnu ka soulmate banna , inki dheere-dheere najdikiya badhna ye sab detail mein hota to aur maja aa jata.

Khair jo bhi hai ab sahi hai, aur humey apne questions ke answer chahiye writer sahab ek ek ke.

 

[Groot 1]

Update:-25 ​

Flashback~1

{4 years Ago} ​

Jab main ghar se nikala tab mere Mann mein ek hi baat chal rahi thi aur vo thi kiya main ye sahi kar raha hu Josh josh mein to nikal gaya tha main par ab kya……kyon ki pehli baar main Apne territory se bahar nikala tha aise to main jungle mein kai baar gaya tha apne Werewolf form(Jo ki pura Werewolf bhi nahi tha.It was Half human and half werewolf) ko azad karne ke liye na ki Ghar se bhaag ne ke liye.



Mujhe apni Territory se nikale huye kafi waqt ho chala tha aur abhi bhi mujhe sar chupane ko koi Aasara nahi mila tha.


Main thak bhi gaya tha pata nahi kitni der se bhaag raha tha aur abhi bhi main Jungle ke bicho bich tha.


Manzil to bohat dur thi par thake haare hone ki wajah se main ek ped ke paas jaake vahi raat guzar ne ka faisla kiya.

Ped ke niche bag pe sar rakh ke let gaya aur yadon mein kho Gaya.

Kat ti nahi sard raat


Ye Raat Meri Raat


Dhalti nahi zard raat


Raat Judai ki Raat


Ye Raat Meri Raat


Yadon wali baraat


Kat ti nahi Udaas-Raat


Ye Raat Meri Raat


Asr-e-nau-Raat


Ye Raat Meri Raat


Sard-O-Siyan-Raat


Raat Judai ki Raat


Ye Raat Meri Raat


Roz-E-Hijr Raat


Ye Raat Meri Raat


Roz-E-Azal Raat


Raat Judai ki Raat


Roz-E-Gam ki Raat


Ye Raat Meri Raat


Roz-E-Sakht ki Raat


Ye Raat meri Raat


Tanhaiyon wali Raat


Ab se meri


Raat-ba-Raat

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Khud Ko samjhaa-bujhaa ke so gaya.

Subah panchhiyon ke Chahekne se Meri aankho ki nind Khuli to khud ko ped ke niche paaya to ek pal ke liye main hairan bhi hua par phir mere zehan mein kal ki Yaadein ubhar aayi.


Mujhe pata tha ki ab sab mujhe dhund ne nikal gaye honge isliye khud waqt na zaya karte huye Kuch pal wahi thahar ne ke baad Main nikala apni manzil ko aur.


Mujhe bhaag te huye kafi waqt ho chala tha to mujhe ek lakde ka chota sa room bana hua dikha jo tuta huaa tha.Main uss room mein gaya to mujhe dil-e-sakoon mehsus huaa aur na chah kar bhi main vahi ruka kuch pal uske baad main badh chala.


Bhagte huye main jungle se bahar aa gaya to Suraj ki dhoop se mujhe andaza ho gaya tha ki dupar ho chuki hai. Jungle se bahar aate hi maine sadak dekhi to main sadak kinare chal ne laga chalte chalte waqt bhi chalta gaya aur main naye shehar pe ja ruka. Duper se shaam ho gayi thi aur kal Raat se kuch khaya Piya nahi tha mujhe aas thi ek aasare ki par ab woh bhi nazar nahi aa rahi thi mujhe isliye koi achhi si jagah dekh vahi bag rakh ke so gaya main.

Aas Hogi na Aasara Hoga


Aane wale dinon me kya Hoga


Aasman bhar gaya parindon se


Jab Ped koi hara gira hoga


Kitna Dushwaar tha Safar uska


Wo Sar-E-Shaam So gaya Hoga ​

Subah kisi ne mujhe uthaya tab meri aankh khuli aur Jab maine samne dekha to ek aadmi(mere se 8 10 saal bada tha shayad) tha par main uski Smell (Werewolf ki hoti hai) usse jaan gaya ki vo werewolf hai aur usne bhi mujhe meri Smell se pehchan liya tha ki main bhi werewolf hi hu.


Aadmi:- Tu kon se pack se he aur Akela kyu Ghum raha he ye shehar hai yaha werewolf ka Akela ghum na matlab mout ko daawat dena samje.


Maine haa main sar hilaya aur bola


Main:-Samaj gaya….main yahan naya aaya hu mera koi pack nahi hai Omega hu aur Jis pack ke sath tha main vaha se bhaag nikala.


Aadmi:- Hum bhi Omegas ka ek chota sa Group hai agar Tum chaho to tum hamare sath reh sakto ho.


Main:- Meri liye ye shehar naya hai aur mujhe naye aasare ki talash bhi hai to aap ke sath chalne mein mujhe koi aapatti nahi.

Naya hai Shehar Naye Aasare talash karu


Kho chuka hu main ab kahan talash karu


Bikhar gaya hu main ab Motiyon ki tarah


Sametu to kaise sametu khud ko pehle ki tarah


Naya hai Shehar Naye Aasare talash karu


Naye hai log Nayi pehchaan talash karu


Khwabon ke sahare bohat din jiya hu main


Shayad isliye aaj tanha rahe gaya hu main


Kho Chuka hu main Ab kahan talash karu


Naya hai Shehar Naye Aasare talash karu ​

Hum chalte chalte baat kar rahe the to aadmi ne mujhe mera naam pucha


Main:- Mouriya Rajput naam hai mera aur aap ka


Aadmi:-Mera naam Kashyap Sangma hai.


Main:- Sangma ye bhala kaisi Surname hai.


Kashyap:- Ab tum Meghalaya mein ho to tumhe yahi surname milegi.


Main:- Mujhe bhi pata hai ki main Meghalaya mein hu(Sahi mein mujhe pata nahi tha ki main Meghalaya mein hoon kyunki kabhi pack ki territory se bahar bhi nahi gaya tha) par mere Purane wale pack mein koi aisi surname ka nahi tha isliye pucha bura laga ho to maaf karna Kashyap bhai.


Kashyap:- mujhe bura nahi laga tumhe Kyun aisi surname nahi mili main bata ta hu kyunki sab Bahar ke Raajy ke werewolf aur Vampires sab Meghalaya,Aasam,Nagaland, Manipur, Tripura, Mizoram aur Arunachal Pradesh aa gaye hai. Yaha aane ke pichhe do karan hai ek yaha Thand aur Jungle ilaka hai. Dusra yaha surya-ast jaldi hota hai.


Main:- In hi do karan vash Werewolves or Vampires yaha aa gaye hai.Jungle aur thand isse acha mahol kaha milega Werewolves ko.Raat jaldi hoti hai isliye Vampires ke liye bhi sahi jagah hai ye.


Hum chalte chalte Ek bade se ghar ke paas aa pohche to Kashyap bhai bole


Kashyap:- Yahi hai hamara chota basera jisko hum Omegas Ghar bolte hai aur pack bolte hai( pack wali line usne haste huye boli thi matlab usko bhi dukh tha Omega hone ka)


Main:- Ghar wakai bahut bada hai.


Kashyap:- Log bhi to jyada hai Tumhe milake ke hum 35 log hai is ghar mein rehne wale.


Main Kashyap bhai ki baat sun chok gaya kyunki baki ke 33 logo ka naam kaise yaad rakhunga main(story likhane mein bhi problem hogi na)

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Update:-25
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