Fantasy UNCAGED ( BEWARE THE BEAST WITHIN)

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Characters Of Story​

Hero of story

Mouriya Rajput

Real Mother & Father of hero

INDRAJEET and NILOFER

Mouriya's Step mother and step father Step sister

VIJAY RAJPUT
KANCHAN RAJPUT
GOURI RAJPUT

Hero's pack name or Vijay pack name and details

NIGHT WARRIOR

Vijay is Alpha of pack

Kanchan is Luna of pack

Sandeep singh is Zeta of pack

Suraj chowhan is Gamma of pack

NIGHT WARRIOR PACK & MOON LIGHT PACK are allies

Information of MOON LIGHT PACK

Rajat Chandel is Alpha of pack

Rinku chandel is Luna of pack

Shivam chandel is son of Rajat and Rinku

Enemy pack details

Pack name :-Bloodhound pack

Bloodhound pack details

Digvijay singh is Alpha of the pack

Devendra Nanchhe is Zeta of pack

Niraj Rana is Gamma of pack

White Rose pack & Moon light pack are Allies

White Rose pack information

Alpha:-Arjun Jadeja
Luna:- Aanchal Jadeja

Arjun or Aanchal ka beta

Vishnu Jadeja

THE BLACK WOLVES PACK ALPHA NAME :- MUKHTAR ANSARI THA.

ZETA:- YUSUF MEMON

GAMMA:-ALMAAS MEMON

YUSUF OR ALMAAS DONO BHAI HE.

THE RAINBOW PACK ALPHA NAME:-SHASHVAT PAL

ZETA:-MAYANK PAL

GAMMA:-GOURANG PAL
TINO BHAI HE.

 

[DeepHeart💘]

Bhai g koi ymmed hai kya update ki

 

[Akdu Insan]

Alag hi hutiyapa hai

Pehle sunday to sunday ka waada kiya
Fir bahana mara 12 ya 13 tareekh ke aaj 15 tareekh hai aur sunday bhi guzar ek aur

Khair kya kar sakte hai jab mods hi kisi ko nahi bolte agar inho ne incomplete stories pe ban ka niyam ya fir fine lagaya hota to acha tha ulta yeh log to badhawa dete hai ki hume kya writer ki marzi

 

[BlooDBath175]

Brilliant update with awesome writing Skills

To Ye hai Hero ke maa- baap ek Original Werewolf aur doosri Original ke dwara turn huyi Vampire to apna Hero kya hoga "Hybrid"
Khair wo to pata lag hi jaayega aage. Ye picha karne wale Vampire bade chutiya hai kaam adhura chod ke hi chale gaye. Aur apne Leader ya King jo bhi hai usey jhoot bolenge. aise Minions kisi ke ho to uska to ho liya koi kaam

Khair dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.

Kaam adhura isliye choda kyunki aage ki territory Werewolfs ki thi

Brilliant update with awesome writing Skills

Ye Vampires ke Majesty bhi aise hi maan liya bina kisi saboot ke. Khair Jo Hero ki mother ke ander Zeher hai wo kaafi khatarnak lagta hai aur kya Vampire dhoop mein Ring wagarh pehen ke nahi nikal sakte kya ab dekhte hai hero ki maa ke sath kya hua hai jo Indra ke pairo se jameen nikal gayi

Majesty bole to bhai 'The original Vampires'

Rings ki baat kare to Abhi vampires itne devloped na huye bhai

 

[BlooDBath175]

Brilliant update with awesome writing Skills
Chalo Hero ka janam to hua lekin maa mar gayi lekin iska baap to surgeon nikal, matlab hath daal ke bacha nikal liya. Aur itni jaldi apne bache ko kisi ke paas chod ke bhi chala gaya.
Bhai story badi hi fast pace mein likh rahe ho, matlab sidha 4th gear mein
Thoda break lagao nahi to characters se relate nahi kar paayenge

Hero ko dusre ke paas kyu choda uska bhi aage pata chal jayega

bhai bhagani padti hai starting mein agar randi rona kar diya to bhai readers bore ho jate hai

Thanks dude

 

[BlooDBath175]

Well, update kaafi chote they to maine socha ek baar mein hi saare update padh ke review deta hu
Story ka Concept kaafi acha hai, aur story ka Character building thoda sa kayi jagah pe kam hai jaise Gouri ka ek dum se khunkhaar ho jaana? Iska koi reason nahi mila humey aur Gouri ko ek dum se Alpha banne pe baaki werewolf ne ye nahi pucha ki Maurya ko Alpha kyu nahi banaya.

THanks bhai.
(1) character ke liye sorry Kyunki mujhe bhi pata hai ki story ki starting weak hoti hai meri.

(2)Gouri ka ek dum khunkhaar ho jane ka reason hai ki vo alpha ki ladki hai and Mouriya ko pehle se hi intrest nahi tha ladai vagera mein so she has to stand up for her pack

(3)logo ne isliye question nahi kiya kyunki story ke starting mein hi Vijay(Gouri ka baap) ne chacha ka ladka bataya tha MOURIYA ko...bahar wala kyu alpha banega jab already alpha ki ladki hai aur 'khunkhaar' bhi hai

 

[BlooDBath175]

Lekin jab Maurya ne gauri ko apne human form mein rok liya to janta ne sawal kyu nahi uthaye?

Bcuz tab main reason tha us ladki ne Mouriya ko Reject kiya tha as a mate aur vo sab se upar chiz hai werewolf mein

 

[BlooDBath175]

Khair nikita ke thukrane pe wo apna ghar chod gaya kuch banne ke liye aur nikita ek dum randi type ladki nikli
Dono groups mein war suru hona aur Maurya ki dramatic entery 4 saal ke gap ke baad aur uska khud ko True ALpha batana. Mast tha.
Lekin aapne hamara kaat diya jab humey laga ki chalo Hero ki powers dekhne ko milegi to aapne flashback start kar diya
Waise ab dekhte hai ki Hero ko apne true alpha hone ka kaise pata laga aur usne kaise apna pack banaya.
Waise aapne bataya tha ki Omega wo hote hai jinka koi pack nahi hota aur 33 Omega ka ek sath rehna wo kisi Pack ke barabar hi hai fir wo khud ko Omega kyu kehte hai

By the Way, Brilliant Update with Awesome writing Skills
Bas yahi story thoda detail mein likhte to aur maja aata, jaise Immortal pack kaise allies bane, gauri aur vishnu ka soulmate banna , inki dheere-dheere najdikiya badhna ye sab detail mein hota to aur maja aa jata.

Khair jo bhi hai ab sahi hai, aur humey apne questions ke answer chahiye writer sahab ek ek ke.

Kyunki omegas ko alpha chahiye pack banane ke liye aur har koi alpha ban jata to phir Alphas ki baad aa jati....

Gouri aur Vishnu ka relationship dikhata to us mein hi 4 5 update waste ho jaate aur main focus hero pe hai

Immortal pack kaise allies bane uska jikar issi flashback mein hoga.

Night warrior aur Moon light pack ka bhi flashback hai....

Mouriya ke baap ne Mouriya ko chod jane ke baad kya kya kiya uska bhi flashback hoga ye sab chote chote flashback honge aur sab ek ek kar ke sambe aayenge....isse readers ko bhi samaj ne mein aasani hogi...


thanks for the review mate...

agar aise reviews tu de ta hai bhai to meri 2 aur story hai unko bhi padhke reviews de de

(1) King (Road Full Of Blood)

(2) Nation Of Dead (Zombie Apocalypse)

 

[BlooDBath175]

Amazing updates

Thanks Groot

 

[BlooDBath175]

Bloodbath bhai update yaar aj jaldi dena mauriya ki fight dhekni h
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Aj sunday h
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Is week mein update dene ka try karunga

 

[BlooDBath175]

Ab dhekhne mai maza ayega ki mauriya ne apna pack kaise banaya starting mai he band kashayap sahi mil gaya h
Nice update....

Thanks bhai...keep supporting

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Sab behtareen update te.intezaar nxt update ka

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