Fantasy UNCAGED ( BEWARE THE BEAST WITHIN)

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Characters Of Story​

Hero of story

Mouriya Rajput

Real Mother & Father of hero

INDRAJEET and NILOFER

Mouriya's Step mother and step father Step sister

VIJAY RAJPUT
KANCHAN RAJPUT
GOURI RAJPUT

Hero's pack name or Vijay pack name and details

NIGHT WARRIOR

Vijay is Alpha of pack

Kanchan is Luna of pack

Sandeep singh is Zeta of pack

Suraj chowhan is Gamma of pack

NIGHT WARRIOR PACK & MOON LIGHT PACK are allies

Information of MOON LIGHT PACK

Rajat Chandel is Alpha of pack

Rinku chandel is Luna of pack

Shivam chandel is son of Rajat and Rinku

Enemy pack details

Pack name :-Bloodhound pack

Bloodhound pack details

Digvijay singh is Alpha of the pack

Devendra Nanchhe is Zeta of pack

Niraj Rana is Gamma of pack

White Rose pack & Moon light pack are Allies

White Rose pack information

Alpha:-Arjun Jadeja
Luna:- Aanchal Jadeja

Arjun or Aanchal ka beta

Vishnu Jadeja

THE BLACK WOLVES PACK ALPHA NAME :- MUKHTAR ANSARI THA.

ZETA:- YUSUF MEMON

GAMMA:-ALMAAS MEMON

YUSUF OR ALMAAS DONO BHAI HE.

THE RAINBOW PACK ALPHA NAME:-SHASHVAT PAL

ZETA:-MAYANK PAL

GAMMA:-GOURANG PAL
TINO BHAI HE.

 

[BlooDBath175]

To asfak or faijan ne apna room mou ke sath sajha kiya hai ye log lakdi ki milo me kaam karte hai, badhiya hai mou ab kuchh dost bnayega apne Vahi vo 2 ladke jinhe mou ke yha hone se problem hai Lagta hai vo apne din bhul gye hai ki unhe bhi aise hi ek din yha is ghar me laya gya tha or ab jb kisi or ko laya gya to unki jhanthe sulag rhi hai dekhte hai kya future me ye koi musibat khadi karte hai mou ke liye... Sandar update bhai jabarjast superb sayri ka tadka jaykedar tha bhai...
Notification kyo nhi aaya tha mere me updated posted ka

Shayad notification mein problem hai mere bhi kabhi kabhi notification nahi aate.....thanks bhai review dene ke liye

 

[Though_Guy]

Next Update Kab Tak Aayega Sir Ji

 

[Lovekillsyou]

Update:-4


{The beginning-1}



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Rat ka time tha or ek aadmi or aurat jungle me chhupe huye the ped ke pichhe.Aurat pregnant thi or uski saans bhi sahi nahi chal rahi thi.Fir bhi aadmi usko khada karta he sahara deke or Vo aadmi or aurat phir se bhaag ne lagte he or unki speed bhi achhi bas aurat ko saans lene me dhikkat ho rahi thi.Thoda or aage pohchhe to Werewolf ki territory start ho gayi thi iska matlab aadmi or aurat safe the q ki Aadmi The original Werewolf tha to vo ek ped ko dekh vahi baith gaye.Aurat wahi baithe baithe apne khayalo me kho gayi.



Unke pichhe takriban 30 Vampires lage the unko dhudhne ke liye.Vo aurat bhi Vampire hi thi (The Original Vampire ki beti thi) Matlab jab vo choti thi tab uske Ghar walo ko mar Diya gaya tha or usko Vishwas dilaya gaya ki uske maata or pita ko marne wale Werewolf the.

Jab usse The Original Vampires main se kisi ne usko dekha to usko apni beti ke roop me adopt kar liya.Baki ko bhi bol diya ki jab tak vo insaan rehna chahti he tab tak vo rahegi koi bhi usko Transform nahi karega agar aisa kiya ya phir koi bhi uske paas bhi gaya to main usko mere hatho se maarunga.

Vo badi hoti gayi or vo jab 24 saal ki hui to usne Vampire banne ka nirnay liya.Usko vampire khud The original Vampire ne banaya tha.

Vo aurat apni soch se bahar nikali or aadmi ki taraf dekha jo khun se sanna huaa tha.Us aadmi ko dekh uske aankh me aansu aa gaye.

Jab aadmi ne uski taraf dekha to wo bola

Aadmi:-NILU(NILOFAR) ab hum safe he Tujhe kuch nahi hoga himmat mat haar q ki Jo tere pet me bachha he uski vajah se tumhe abhi tak poison ka asar nahi huaa.

Aurat(Nilu):- mujhe pata he par ye poison mujhe ander hi ander khokhla kar raha he INDRA(INDRAJEET) or mujhe ye dard bhi bardasht nahi ho raha he.Agar hamre bachhe ka sawal na hota to main khud Suriya ki kirano ko gale laga leti or issi vaayu me mil jaati main.

Aadmi(INDRA):- Aisi baate apne dimag me mat laao nilu.Hum sath rahe to sab mumkin he or ye bat tum bhi achhe se jaanti ho.

Indra ki baat sun nilu ne haa me sar hila diya.

Indra:- chalo aage jaake rehne(chupane) ke liye kuch dhundhate he.

uski baat sun nilu ne haa me sar hilaa diya.Dono khade hoke chale gaye jungle ke or ander.

vahi dusri taraf jo unhe dhudh rahe the. Vo apne sughne ki shamta se unka picha karte huye Werewolf ki territory par aa pohchhe or us aadmi Ki ghandh baki Werewolf se mil gaye isliye vo ho gaye confused.unmese ek Vampire ne bola jo leader tha unka.

Leader:- Chalo vapas ander to hum ja nahi sakte isliye Majesty ko bol denge ki humne unko maar diya he or jab unki laash leke aa rahe the tab Werewolf ne humpe humla kar diya or humare 70 aadmi mare gaye.samje tum sab agar jaan piyari heto yahi bol na.

Sab ne yes My lord karke apni sehmati dikhayi vo vaapas jaane lage Majesty ke paas........................................

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Kahani to achhi h par itna chhota update kon deta h bhai

 

[Lovekillsyou]

KILL THEM BEFORE THEY GROW

I agree with that.

 

[Lovekillsyou]

Update:-19




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Vijay sab ke sath centre me aake bolna shuru kiya

Vijay:- Aap sab apna kimti waqt nikal ke aaye mere is chote se jashan me shamil hone uske liye main aapka aabhari hu or main mere pariwar or mere pack ke sadasya aap sab ka teh-dil-se swagat karte he.

Ye bol vijay ruka or vo apne sabdo ko tol mol ke or soch samaj ke bol raha tha fir kuch shan baad vijay fir bola

Vijay:- Maine aap sab ko iss jashan me isliye bulaya he Taki main mere pack ka naya Alpha Ghoshit kar saku or Rajat bhi yaha isliye hi aaya he taki hum dono apne packs ke naye Alpha ghoshit kar sake q ki bhale hi hamare pack alag alag he par hum dost se bhi bhadh kar sirf issi ke liye hi humne aap ko nahi bulaya he Dusra karan bhi he vo baad me.

Vijay itna hi bola tha to ek ladki bhid se bahar aa rahi thi or bhid ke aage jaake khadi ho gayi vo ek tak Mouriya ko dekh rahi thi or Mouriya bhi usko hi dekh raha tha.

Baki sab iss Anjan the.

Vijay ne Rajat ki or dekha to Rajat uska ishara samaj gaya or Rajat bola

Rajat:- MAIN Alpha of MOON LIGHT PACK ka ye Ghoshit karta hu ki mera Beta SHIVAM ab se NAYA ALPHA ho ga MOON LIGHT PACK ka.

Rajat ke chup hote hi Rajat ke packs or vijay ke packs ke members ne jor se taliya bajani shuru kardi or unke piche unke allies pack wale bhi taliya bajane lage.

Isse Shivam josh me aa gaya or apne werewolf form me transfer huaa or hawl kiya phir vaha se vijay ke ghar ke ander jaake human form me aake dusre kapde pahan ke vo vapis centre me aa gaya Rajat Vijay kanchan gouri rinku vishnu or mouriya ke paas.

SHivam ke vapas aate he vijay ne bol na shuru kiya

Vijay:- MAIN Alpha of NIGHT WARRIOR PACK ka ye Ghoshit karta hu ki Meri beti GOURI ab se LUNA ALPHA hogi NIGHT WARRIORS PACK ki.

Sab vijay ki baat sun jor jor se taliya bajane lage.

Vijay ne apna hath upar kar unko sath hone ka ishara kiya or bola

Vijay:-Dusri khush khabri ye he ki Meri beti Gouri or Anchal ka beta Vishnu Dono hi Soulmate he or unhone ek dusro ko bhi mark kar liya he.

Ab to jaane sab pagal ho gaye the q ki Soulmate milna itni choti umar me or mark kar dena ak dusro ko bohat badi baat hoti he.kaiyo ko to sari jindagi soulmate nahi mil pata or kisi ko milta he to dono mese koi ek ko reject kar deta he isliye.

Jo ladki bhid se aage aake khadi ho gayi thi vo vijay ki taraf badhi or unke paas jake vo bhid ki taraf mudi or boli

Ladki:- MAIN NIKITA LUNA ALPHA OF THE KILLER WOLVES PACK reject MOURIYA OF NIGHT WARRIORS PACK as MY SOULMATE in fornt of ALL WEREWOLF.

USke ek ek sabd sun mouriya ka dil chhali ho raha tha par uske chehre pe sirf muskaan thi or vo ek dam shant khada tha sab ke bich or sab usko hi dekh rahe the hairat se ki reject ho jane ke baad bhi vo shant or apne hothon pe muskaan liye khada tha.

Nikita jab bol ke mudi Mouriya ki taraf tab uske chehre pe hasi thi par jaise hi usne mouriya ko dekha to uski hasi gaayab ho gayi thi.

Usne socha tha ki vo Mouriya ko sab ke samne zalil karegi to Mouriya apna aapa khoke kuch na kuch to galat karega hi jisse Nikita unke allies ko unke viruddh kar sake.

Par aisa kuch nai huaa ulta mouriya muskura raha tha.Mouriya ki muskaan ne usse or gussa dila diya to nikita ne sab ke samne Mouriya ko thappad mar diya.

Bas yahi usne galti kardi thi q ki Gouri jo uske shabdo se gussa thi or khud ko jaise taise control kare huye thi par jaise hi nikita ne mouriya ko thappad mara to Gouri control na kar saki or turat apne wolf form me aake vo nikita pe japat padi.

Par Gouri ko uske wolf form me hi mouriya ne usko hawa me hi pakad liya or Gouri ko niche rakh uske wolf form ke chehre ko pakad ke apni taraf ghumaya or apne dono hatho uske sar ko pakada or apna sar naa me hila ke mouriya ne Gouri ke wolf form ke sar ko chum liya.

Gouri jaise hi insaan roop me aane lagi to muriya ne turat apna shirt nikal ke gouri ko dhak diya or kanchan ki tarf dekha to kanchan ne kuch jawab ji nahi diya ulta vo to shock me thi ye dekh mouriya jor se bola

mouriya:- maa Ji Ji ko ghar ke jaao

kanchan uski aawaj sun hosh me aayi Gouri ko leke ghar me chali gayi.

Mouriya vapas khada ho gaya or usne najar ghumayi to sab abhi bhi usko hi dekh rahe the shock ke mare q ki usne insaan ke form me Gouri ko werewolf form me pakada tha or itni takat or furti yaha hi nahi baki sare werewolf prajati main bhi nahi thi.

Mouriya ye dekh bola sabko

Mouriya:- Ab samay he jashan ka moj or masti ka khub gaao khud nacho or khub piyo....

Uski baat sun sab josh me chillaye or nachne or gaane lage.

Mouriya nikita ko ignor karte huye apne papa or Rajat uncle shivam or Vishnu ko bola

Mouriya:- chalo ab aap sab yahi khade raho ge kiya nachna gaana nahi he kiya.

Vijay hosh me aate huye bola

Vijay:-chalo to phir or tu aaj sharab piyega ya nahi.

Mouriya:- yaaak thu aisi ghatiya chiz aap sab ko hi Mubarak or agar galti se pi liya to maa kamre me bandh karke mujhe maregi isliye main chala juice pine

Mouriya ye bol vaha se nikal ke jaha juice tha uske taraf chala gaya.Vaha jaake Baith gaya or aaram se juice pine laga or apni najare ghumane laga charo taraf q ki sab sharab pike nach or gaa rahe the.

Gouri or kanchan uske paas aa gayi to mouriya unko dekh khada ho gaya.

Kanchan boli mouriya se

Kanchan:-Tum itne shaant kaise he reject hone ke baad bhi agar koi dusra tumhari jagah hota to sadme me chala jata or kamjor dil ka to mar jata abhi tak.

Mouriya:-usse reject ho jane ke baad mujhe dukh to huaa or dard bhi huaa par ab kiya kar sakte he hum.usko main force karke accept to nahi karwa sakta na.

Gouri:- Tu sirf ek baar bol de MoU main usko tere samne juka dungi or tujhe accept karwa lungi agar nahi kiya to vahi faad ke rakh dundi main.

Mouriya:- are ji ji jaane dona jab uski hi intrest nahi he mere me to main kiyu usme intrest lu.

kanchan:- chal ab aaja hamare sath or party enjoy kar yaha akela bor ho jayega tu.

Mouriya:- chaliye maa or jiji.

kuch ghante baad Ek ek kar Guest nikal ne lage or nikita bhi nikal gayi par vo pure jashan me sirf mouriya ko hi dekh rahi thi.Jate jate usko hi dekh rahi thi or soch rahi thi ki itna sab kuch ho ja ne ke baad bhi na vo gussa huaa or na hi usne kuch galat kiya jisse uska plan fail ho gaya tha ulta uska plan uspe hi bhari pad gaya tha.


Mouriya ne ek baar bhi uske taraf nahi dekha tha q ki ab mouriya ko usse kuch lena dena hi nahi tha.

Jab jashan khatam huaa to sirf moon light or night warrior pack wale hi reh gaye the.Vo bhi apne apne ghar jaane lage to Vijay kanchan Rajat Rinku shivam gouri vishnu or mouriya sab ghar ki taraf nikal gaye.

Sab Ghar pe aate hi apne room me chale gaye or so gaye sab q ki thak bhi gaye the.

Par un sab me mouriya shamil nahi tha uske aankho me nind bilkul bhi nahi thi.kafi der apne bed pe lete rehne ke baad mouriya utha or ek chota sa beg liya or usme kapade daal ke room ke darwaje ki kadi khol di or vo apne room ko khidki ke paas aaya or vaha se chhalag laga di or nikal gaya territory ke bahar chup te chupate.

Mouriya ko ab khud ki Pehchan banani thi.usko ab khud ka pack banana tha.Us ko ab kuch karke dikhana tha.Vo reject huaa usse use koi fark nahi pada tha ha dard huaa tha or abhi bhi tha dil me.

Ab vo kuch banke hi lotega ye vaada usne khudse kiya tha or mann makam karke nikala tha vo apne naye manzil ki taraf........................................





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This is strange ladki ne aate hi reject kar diya. Writer sahab it's feels like kuch context missing h

 

[Lovekillsyou]

Waiting for next

 

[Voldimort]

Writer sahab update de do yar. Itne achy story likh ker kiu sab kharab ker rahy ho. Agar plan nahe hae aagy update dene ka toh band ker do . Itne achy story likh ker ap saare kharab ker rahy go. Same goes to apke zombie waly story.

 

[Lovekillsyou]

Writer sahab update de do yar. Itne achy story likh ker kiu sab kharab ker rahy ho. Agar plan nahe hae aagy update dene ka toh band ker do . Itne achy story likh ker ap saare kharab ker rahy go. Same goes to apke zombie waly story.

Suruwaat me hi writer ne bol diya tha iske kam hi update ayenge

 

[Akdu Insan]

Suruwaat me hi writer ne bol diya tha iske kam hi update ayenge

Kam ka theak hai but kam aur update na dene me bohat farak hai

Vaada karkd mukar gya writer is se acha mods lock hi laga de story ko

 

[AK 24]

Writer sahab update de do yar. Itne achy story likh ker kiu sab kharab ker rahy ho. Agar plan nahe hae aagy update dene ka toh band ker do . Itne achy story likh ker ap saare kharab ker rahy go. Same goes to apke zombie waly story.

Suruwaat me hi writer ne bol diya tha iske kam hi update ayenge

Kam ka theak hai but kam aur update na dene me bohat farak hai

Vaada karkd mukar gya writer is se acha mods lock hi laga de story ko

Writer bhag gaya