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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Update 46 Abhi Got back The Diaries & He Does Things

Kayi dinon se Sunil, Tony aur baaki ke log Abhi se apne daadhi shave karne ko kehte rahe the, sab uss se kehte ke wo clean shaven kitna handsome dikhta hai aur wo daadhi uss par bilkool suit nahin karta dangerous look banta tha usske uss daadhi se…. magar Abhi ne shave nahin kiya 6 mahine ho chuke the.

Dusre din Saeed ko jana tha Mehboob se milne kissi kaam se to Abhi ne ussko kaha ke usska parcel lekar ajaye Mehboob se. Saeed ne kaha thik hai aur chala gaya.

Saeed ke jaane ke baad Sunil ne Abhi se pucha,

“kia tu ekaat doston ke saath Ruhi ko utha nahin sakta sach mein jaise Rahima ne kaha?”

Abhi ne muskuraate hue jawaab diya,

“Sunil bhai, mujhe kissi ki bhi zaroorat nahin Ruhi ko uthaane ke liye, ek to bahot halki hai wo kayi baar utha chuka hoon ussko…. Aur mujhe koyi nahin chahiye agar ussko usske ghar se uthana pade to. Main akele kaafi hoon ussko utha ke ek taxi mein bithane ke liye…. Din mein agar kabhi wahan jaun to wo aur usski ma akeli rehti hai ghar mein, agar koyi mard hoga bhi to uss ghar ka koyi mard mere mukable khada nahin ho sakta, koyi mujhko rok hi nahin paega, mera ek laat ya ek mukka kafi hoga unn teenon ko niche leytaane ke liye….. Magar bhai main weisa karna nahin chahta, main chahta hoon ke Ruhi khud mere paas aaye…. Main chahta hoon Ruhi mujhe wo taaqat dikhaaye, wo mujhko prove kare ke wo mujhko pyar karti hai aur uss mein wo himmat hai mere paas aane ke liye…..”

Sunil: “Bhai Ruhi mein wo taaqat nahin hai, wo kamseen hai, wo aisa nahin kar paegi”

Abhi: “pata hai bhai…. Jiss din main Rahima ko diaries dene gaya tha, ussi din, main Ruhi ko usske maa aur baap ke saamne Ruhi ke ghar mein ghuss kar apne saath leja sakta tha…. aur bhai ek baat bataun? Rahima ne aisa kyun kaha bata?”

Sunil: “kyun? Kyun kaha?!”

Abhi: “Bhai tumne bataya ke wo bhaag gayi thi Mehboob ko chorr kar nah? To Ruhi ke family ke saamne Rahima ki naak kat gayi thi uss waqt thik hai, ab Rahima chahti hai ke Ruhi ki maa aur usski family ke naak katte iss liye wo chahti hai ke main weisa karun…. Unnki aapas ki ranjishein hai bhai main usske liye to yeh sab nahin karne wala…..”

Sunil:”are haan yaar main ne aisa nahin socha tha, tu sahi keh raha hai….”

Sunil ne yeh bhi kaha tab,

“Aur haan kal batana bhool gaya tha tujhe ke Rahima ne yeh bhi kaha tha ke Ruhi ke dada ji ne kaha tha ke kyun itne dinon tak Ruhi aur Abhi ko ek dusre se ghulne milne diya gaya tha, kyun donon ko chhup chhup kar milne deti thi usski maa, aur ab kyun inkaar kar rahi hai, donon ke shaadi kar deni chahiye….”

Abhi: “mujhe pata hai ussko koyi eitraz nahin tha, jiss din mujhe Manoj ne ghar se nikalne ko kaha tha ussi din budhe ne meri shadi Ruhi se karwane ke liye kaha tha, main ne suna tha jab main nikal raha tha wahan se….”

Sunil: “Yaar Ruhi ki maa ko tera kaam passand nahin aur wo samajhti hai yeh kaam permanent nahin hai aur aise kaam se tu ek pura jiwan nahin bita paega, biwi bache nahin paal paega, ussko bade post wale damaad chahiye shayad, ussko paise wala damaad chahiye Ruhi ke liye, main to yehi samjha, Rahima ne bhi yehi kaha tha, aur sach mein Ruhi ki maa aisi hi hai, laalchi hai paison ki aur Ruhi ko bi shaayad weisa hi bana rahi hai ussko bade bade sapne dikhati hogi, ussko amir aadmi se shaadi karne ko kehti hai Rahima ne bataya tha…. Aur mere saath bhi to wohi kiya tha nah unn logon ne bhai!!”

Abhi thodi der soch mein dooba raha phir Sunil se kaha,

“Main kuch aisa karke dikhaunga ke Ruhi ki maa aur Ruhi pachtaegi ek din, tu dekh lena, tu bhi dekhega Sunil…. Main kuch banke dikhaunga unn logon ko!”

Sunil:”kia karega tu Abhi?”

Abhi: “Waqt aane par dekh lena Sunil, abhi kuch nahin bata sakta main tujhe….”

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Koyi ek ghante baad Saeed aya to dhapadaate hue Abhi gaya usske paas apne diaries lene magar saeed ne kaha,

“Nahin diya Mehboob ne mujhe. Ussne kaha wo khud tumko lautaane aega kyunke uskso tujh se kuch baatein kehni hai… wo ekaat din mein aega idhar tujhse milne tab dega tujhko tere diaries!”

Aur kuch der baad Saeed ne bhi Abhi se baat kiya aur kaha ke Ruhi ki maa ek buri aurat hai ussko bilkool trust nahin kiya jaa sakta. Yeh saeed ne iss liye kaha kyunke jab wo Mehboob se milne gaya tha to Ruhi ki maa ne uss se kuch baat kiye the ke Saeed ko kehna para ke wo bharose karne layak aurat nahin hai.

To Abhi ne pucha kia ussne Ruhi ko bhi dekha wahan.

Saeed ne kaha haan wo bhi apni maa ke saath hi thi.

Aur usske pita ke baare mein pucha to sunil ne kaha ke wo January mein hi wapas S.Arabia chala gaya.

Tab Abhi ne kaha,

“Sala sab ne kaha tha kitna achcha insaan hai; madarchod jhuta hai mujhse kaha tha ke apni beti ko saath lekar jayega!”

Aur Sunil ne phir se kaha,

“Abhi ab jaa shave karle ab, kyun usske liye daadhi chorra hai tumne? Devdaas jaisa look bana rakha hai, jab usske gharwale sab khilaaf hai to bhool ja usse aur kal main tumko clean shaven dekhna chahta hoon!”

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Aur kuch dinon baad, uss jagah par kaam ka last din tha, aur Mehboob ka bus ruka jahan Abhi aur team kaam kar rahe the. Abhi kissi kaam mein busy tha ussne nahin dekha, to tony ne kaha,

“hey Abhi dekh Mehboob ki bus……”

Mehbob driving wheel pr baitha raha aur Reza bus se utar ka aya Abhi ko bulaane. Jab Abhi gaya bus ke paas….. pehle to Abhi bus ko chaaron taraf dekhne laga, uss bus mein Ruhi ki bahot saare yaadein jude hue the Abhi ke liye…. Abhi ka dil zoron se dhadka, uss bus ko dekh kar…. Abhi buss ke andar ghussa, Mehbob uss se baat karta raha magar Abhi bus ke andar uss hisse mein gaya jahan se wo Ruhi ko apne khidki ya washing stone ke paas dekha karta tha aur udhar se Ruhi ussko jeeb se chidhata tha….. bus ke uss hisse mein Abhi ko ek sukoon sa haasil hua, aur baahar dekha to aisa mehsoos hua ke baahar Ruhi dikhegi ussko…. Magar koyi nahin tha….. tab Abhi ne khud se kaha, ‘sab kuch badal gaya hai, ab yeh bus wo nahin raha, sab badal gaye hein, mujhe bhi badal jaana chahiye ab….’

Mehboob se mila usske baad aur Mehboob ne ussko wo grey envelope dete hue kaha,

“Abhi tu yeh mere ghar chorr aya tha, tumhare amaanat wapas kar raha hoon tujhe…”

Abhi ne bina Mehboob ke chehre mein dekhe hue pucha,

“Ruhi ne padha isse? Ye Ruhi ke liye tha!”

Mehboob ne kaha,

“Abhi agar tujhko Ruhi ko kuch dena hai to tum usske ghar jao, ussko do? Mere ghar kyun gaye aur meri wife ko kyun diya tumne? Tujhe pata hai isske liye donon families mein kitne problems hue Abhi? Bachon jaisa kaam mat kiya karo Abhi, yeh bilkool sahi nahin hai. Aayinda agar kuch udhar dena ho to jao main tumko wahan jaane se mana nahin kar raha, jab chaho jao, Ruhi se milo. Ye wo jaane aur usske parents mujhe koyi lena dena nahin hai, magar usski chizon ko mere ghar par mat chorrna phir kabhi… iss baar lauta raha hoon agli baar jala ke raakh kar dunga….!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Bolna mujhe bhi ata hai Mehboob, agar bolna shuru kiya to tere paas bolne ke liye kuch nahin bachega, start karega aur accelator dabayega…..”

Mehboob: “Are wah ek to chori upar se seena zori! Abhi tu agar chahe to mere ghar bhi aa sakta hai, mere ghar tu aaye to mujhse milne, rahima se milne ya Farzinah se milne to thik hai, ek lagao ho gayi hai main samajhta hoon, Farzina aur Rahima donon tumko passand karte hein okay thik hai unn se milo mujhe koyi aapatti nahin, magar Ruhi ki koyi bhi chiz unn logon ke paas nahin chorrne ka…. Umeed hai ke tum samajh gaye….”

Abhi: “nahin baat khatam ab kabhi bhi kuch bhi nahin chorrna kissi ke paas, aur uss aagan mein jana hi nahin kabhi mujhe ab jaa tu befikar reh nahin aunga ab kabhi bhi udhar, jaa, chorr diya uss gali ko main ne hamesha ke liye!”

Mehboob chala gaya….. Abhi envelope lekar andar gaya jiss bus mein kaam kar raha tha uss mein, jaldi se envelope se diaries nikala, do diaries the 200 pages ke, matlab 400 pages ka likha hua tha Abhi ne…. Abhi jaldi jaldi pannon ko ulath pulath karke dhundne laga kahin Ruhi ne kuch likha hoga… magar kuch nahin dikha….. aur HAAN ABHI KHUSH HUA KE RUHI NE PERFUME RAKH LIYE THE…. SIRF RAHIMA KO PATA THA KE EK GIFT THA JO RUHI NE APNE JEB MEIN RAKHA THA…. KISSI KO USSKE BAARE MEIN NAHIN PATA THA, MATLAB RUHI NE ABHI KA DIYA HUA PERFUME APNE PAAS HI RAKHA….!

Abhi bahut kush hua kyunke Ruhi ne usski di hui ek tohfa to apne paas rakha! Wo “Soir De Paris” “Bourgeois” wala bahot mehnga perfume…. Abhi pir khayaalon mein kho gaya sochte hue jiss din ko Ruhi ne pucha tha uss se ke kia perfume use karte ho aap kitni achi smell arahi hai….. tabhi Abhi ne ussko kaha tha ke ek din wo usske liye wo perfume kharidega…. Aur wo kharid liya Abhi ne aur de bhi diya Ruhi ko….. Abhi yeh bhi sochne laga ke jiss waqt Ruhi ne wo perfume liya hoga, sungha hoga to uss se Ruhi ko Abhi ki yaad zaroor aayi hogi… usskko yaad aya hoga kiss din ko Abhi ne uss se kaha tha ke wo usske liye wo perfume kharidega….. matlab udhar Ruhi bhi Abhi ko ab, tab tak sochegi jab tak uss perfume ko use karegi….. Abhi iss baat se bahot khush tha.

Uss din ghar wapas jaane ke baad Abhi ne phir se diaries ke har ek panne ko ghuma kar dhunda ke kahin Ruhi ne kuch likha to nahin hoga… magar ussko kuch nahin mila…. Aur Abhi ne apni daily diary mein ab likha kiss date ko usko Ruhi ko di hui diaries wapas mili….

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Kuch din baad Abhi phir gaya milne Samioullah broker se. aur uss se ussne bade board of director ka pata liya aur uss se milne gaya….. Abhi apne saath tamaam unn buss ki photos legaya dikhaane ke liye.

Director se mila aur samjhaya ke wo us company ko reopen karwana chahta hai, ussko experience hai aur wo company ko chala paega.

Director ne itna jawaan ladke ko itna door ki sochne ke liye badhaiyan diye aur kaha ke kum se kum half crore hona chahiye usske paas start karne ke liye, ussko aadha crore deposit karna hoga tab wo usske haq mein baat karega executive members se.

Abhi ne samjhaya ke usske paas utna paisa nahin hai aur director se hi kaha ussko raasta dikhaane ke liye ke ussko kia karna chahiye aur kaise ussko half core mil sakta hai.

Director ne kaha ke bank se loan lena padega, bank ussko half crore de dega jissko wo 15 saal ke andar repay karega kiston mein…

Abhi ne director se saare raaste puche ke kia kia karna padega kahan kahaan haat laat maarna hoga uss sapne ko pura karne ke liye…

Director Abhi ke madad karne ke liye tayyaar tha iss liye ke wo Director young entrepreneurs ko promote karta tha, to ek well established business man ko uss company ko chalaane ke bajae Director Abhi ko promote karna ziada passand karta kyunke Abhi naya tha, naya josh, naya khoon aur aage badhne ki chaah dekha tha Director ne Abhi mein….

Last wala raasta tha ke apne baap ki zammen ko bank mein mortgage karna padega tab half crore bank dega company ko start karne ke liye….

Ab Abhi wahan se ghar gaya….. ussko pata nahin tha ke usska baap samjhega bhi aur zameen ko mortgage karne ke liye tayyaar hoga bhi ya nahin…..

Apne baap se baat karne se pehle Abhi ne Naina se kaha,

“Naina tu chahti hai ke main Ruhi ko bhool jaun?”

Naina: “bilkool wohi chahti hoon bhai, kia karna usska, goli maaro nah bhai!”

Abhi: “aur tu chahti hai ke main shave karun?!”

Naina khush hote hue, Abhi ke chehre mein hansste hue dekhte hue kaha,

“chhee bilkool acha nahin lagta yeh daadhi tum par bhai, shave kakro nah, 5th Januray ke baad shave nahin kiye ho!”

Aur Abhi gaya aine ke saamne, shaving foam lagaya aur shave karne ke baad Naina ke saamne aya…..

Naina Khushi se jhoom uthi aur zor se thumke lagaate hue kaha,

“Mera bhai thik ho gaya ab lag raha hai mera bhai, normal pehle ki tarah….. woohoo!!!

Kia abhi ne sach mein Ruhi ko dil se nikaal diya? Ya sirf apne ghawalon ke liye, doston ke liye normal dikhne ke liye aisa kar raha tha? kia sach mein wo apne dil se Ruhi ko mita paega? Yeh waqt bataega ek din.

To be continued…. (2305 words)
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Very good update.....
Well written and described.....

Now time for details.....

Ye baat to sahi hai....Ruhi kaafi halki hai....OR chhoti bhi kisi bachchi ki tarah.....height ke hisaab se....

Abhi ka mukabla Ruhi ke pariwar ka koi nahi kar sakta....OR itni himmat or taakat Abhi mai bhi hai ki wo khidki iss kaam ko pura kar le.....lekin.....lekin....
Kar kiske liye le.....kya Ruhi iske liye raazi hogi....kya wo abhi ke saath aana chahegi....kya usme itni himmat hogi....Obviously not.....

Jo ladki apne lover ko iss tarah zaleel hote dekh kar....sun kar bhi wajah nahi aayi....OR apne maa baap ke ak bar kahne se give up kar de.....wo kya ghar se Abhi ke saath aane ki himmat dikhaaye gi....

Ab agar isi baat ko Ruhi ki magar se dekha jaaye.....to aaj tak jo bhi hua hai....Ruhi apne maa baap ke kahne ke hisaab se hee chali hai.....unki baat maan kar Abhi se dur bhi ho gayi.....sab kuch unke hisaab se kar rahi hai.....
Wo ladki kaise apne maa baap ko chhod kar Abhi ke saath chali aaye.....jabki use dhyaan he ko agar aisa kadam usne uthaya to uske maa baap ki izzat kharaab hogi....OR naam bhi....

Rahima ke liye Abhi ki soch sahi hai.....lekin ak hadd tak Rahima bhi sahi hai...

Abhi ne aakhir than hee liya ki wo kuch ban kar dikhaaye ga.....ki jab Ruhi ki maa use dekhegi to use apne faisla par dukh ho....

Saeed ne kaha ki Ruhi ki maa ak galat aurat hai.....uska vishwas nahi kiya jaa sakta.....thik he.....
Lekin uska khud ka kya....kya wo khud vishwas ke kaabil hai....God knows....


Pahle ye hee bus abhi ke Ruhi se milne ka jariya thi....uski kaafi saari yaade judi hai iss bus se or bus ke har hisse se....

Abhi ka bus ki khidki se bahar dekhne waala scene kaafi jyada achcha tha....
Koi ummid na hote hue ummid karna....dimaag sach jaanta hai....lekin maanta nahi....


Yanha mahboob ki baat sahi thi....Rahima ke jariye books Ruhi ko dena....ye chij Abhi ke liye sahi thi lekin Ruhi ke ghar waalo ke liye nahi upar se rahima ka past.....Jo ki iss baat ko or bhi suspicious banaya hai.....
Dono families me problem to honi hee thi....

Abhi ka counter or us par mahboob ka reply bhi thik tha....

Finally Abhi ne decide kar liya ki ab kabhi bhi wo uss gali me nahi jaayega....Abhi ke iss faisle par ak gana yaad aa gaya....
Aapne bhi jarur suna hoga....

Teri Galiyon Mein Na Rakhenge Kadam Aaj Ke Baad
Tere Milne Ko Na Ayenge Sanam Aaj Ke Baad
Teri Galiyon Me
Tu Mera Milna Tu Mera Milna
Samaj Lena Ik Sapna Tha
Tujko Ab Mil Hi Gaya Jo Tera Apna Tha
Hum Ko Duniya Mein Samaj Na Na Sanam Aaj Ke Baad
Teri Galiyon Me Na Rakhenge Kadam
Ghirke Ayegi Ghataein Phirse Sawam Ki
Tum Toh Bahon Mein Rahogi Apne Sajan Ki
Galey Hum Ghum Ko Lagayenge Sanam Aaj Ke Baad
Teri Galiyon Mein Na Rakhenge Kadam


Ruhi jab pura padh hee nahi paayi thi to massage kaise bhejti....diary mai....

Ha lekin Ruhi ko perfume dene ki wishing to puri ho gayi Abhi ki.....


Director se mila kar Abhi ne apne liye saari possibilities jaan li hai....director ko bhi Abhi me ak junooni ladka dikh raha hai....Jo kuch bhi kar sakta hai....OR final raasta zameen hai....lekin kya father raazi hoga....
Kyoki wo akele Abhi ki nahi uske sabhi bhai bahano ka bhi hai....OR phir jameen se unhe income bhi hoti hai....
OR sabse badi baat loan amount kaafi bada hai....to Abhi ko kaafi pareshani hogi father ko manane mai.....

Abhi badal gaya hai...lekin kya sach mai....ha wo sach mai badal gaya hai....lekin usme ye badlaav tab hee dikhaai dega jab wo kaam me laga hoga ya logo ke saath hoga....

Akele mai wo bilkul pahle jaisa sochega feel karega.....ak line Abhi ke liye.....

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मेरी आँख बन्‍द थी जब तलक,
वह नजर में नूरे-जमाल था
खुली आँख तो न ख़बर रही,
कि वह ख़्वाब था कि ख़याल था

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Naina ki lines Abhi ko clean shave dekh kar....kaafi achchi thi.....ye naina ke andar chhupi ak masoom bachchi ko dikhaate hai.....

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai
Anyways...
Very good update
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Update 47 The New Penfriend - Navina

Abhi ne pichle 2 Mahinon se kissi bhi penfriends ko reply nahin kiya tha. sabke 2 ya teen repeat letter aa chuke the. To ek subha ko Abhi ne sabko reply karne ko socha aur baith kar sabko sorry kaha aur replies likh kar post kiya.

Abhi har roz ek newspaper kharidta tha bina miss kiye. Aur uss din jab post office se sabke letters post karke wapas ghar aya to papers padh raha tha ke penfriends corner mein kuch nayi ladkiyon ke naam dekha, unn mein do local ladkiyon ko likha Abhi ne. unn mein se ek east ki rehne wali thi, Ruhi ke ghar se 10 kilometres door. Ladki ka naam tha Namita aur ek ka Naam tha Nausheen jo desh ki north se thi. Donon ko ek ek introduction wala letter post kiya Abhi ne. Of course, wo sirf English mein khat likhta tha.

Normally within a week replies aa jaate the hamesha aur Nausheen ke taraf se reply agaya tha 4 din baad magar Namita ke taraf se koyi jawaab nahin aya.

Teen hafte guzar gaye aur Nausheen aur Abhi ki dosti ho gayi, 3 hafton mein 10 se ziada letters aa chuke the Abhi ke paas Nausheen ke taraf se. Magar Namita ka koyi reply nahin aya to Abhi samajh gaya ke Namita ko bahot saare ladkon ke khat aaye honge iss liye ussko apne passand ki saathi mil gayi hogi, to ussne Namita ko ignore kiya.

Magar 2 din baad Abhi ko ek khat mila jissko kissi Navina ne likha tha. Abhi ko heyraani hui ke yeh kaun hai, issko to nahin likha tha main ne…..

English mein likha gaya tha khat, khubsurat handwriting thi, aur uss mein likha tha ke wo Namita ki behen hai, Namita ko bahot saare khat aaye hein iss liye wo Abhi se dosti karna chahti hai. Abhi ne ussko reply kiya.

2 din baad usski reply agayi. Abhi ne phir reply kiya phir 2 din baad usski reply agayi….. jabse Abhi penfriendship karta tha yeh pehli baar aisa hua tha ke do din ke baad koyi ussko reply post kar deti thi….

Abhi ne uss se aur jaankaari jaana chaha ke kaise ussne Namita ki jagah ussko reply kiya aur kia Namita naraaz nahin hui? To Navina ne reply mein yah kaha,

“In fact, we quarrelled over your letter. That is why you got a response after several weeks. Namita is my little sister, I am a year older than her. She had got over 60 letters. We used to share reading and we make fun of the way of writing of the boys. Some do not even know how to write a letter, they write nonsense. So, we were rejecting most of them, the letters were going in the dustbin which Namita would never reply to, and those she liked were kept. And your letter came in my hand, I read it, was impressed by your language and beauty of writing and expressing yourself. When we finished with all, I told her I will reply to this one. She objected and wanted to read your letter, but I refused to give it to her, but she got furious and snatched your letter from me. She read your letter and told me,

“You keep the best for you and all garbage comes to me, why you did not show me this one? He has written to me not to you, so I will reply him!”

Then I turned my face with her and we went to sleep. I so much wanted to correspond with you, that I wished you were my penfriend. I thought the next day she had replied you, I did not know she had not reply. After a week I found your letter on my table. I asked her why that letter was on my table and she told me,

“tum ussko likhne wali thi nah to likho!”

I told her no I will not, keep her penfriends for herself. So, three weeks neither she replied you nor I and finally I decided to write to you. This is how we are now penfriends….. I use to share the reading of your letter with her and she jealously say,

“kitna achcha likhta hai yeh, isski English kitni achchi hai, kitna acha express karta hai, yeh aaj mera penfriend hota nah!”

And I thought she will take back your letters at that moment…. But she did not so we remain friends. Abhi I love your way of writing, your English is so good and you write beautifully that I wish I could read from you every day.”

Abhi ne jab yeh sab padha Navina ke khat mein to agle din ussko express delivery send kiya jo ussi din Navina ko mili aur Navina ne bhi Abhi ko express delivery send kiya jo dusre din Abhi ko mila aur yeh sislsila jaari raha donon ke beech. Ek dusre ko har roz donon letters likhte, aur express post karte, matlab har roz bina miss kiye donon ko ek dusre ke taraf se khat milte….. ek dusre ko har roz khat ka intezaar rehta….. sirf Weekends mein khat nahin aate the Monday se Friday tak har roz ek letter milte donon ko…..

Aur dhire dhire 2/3 pages ke badle 10 se 15 pages ke letter aane jaane lage ek dusre ko… aur iss tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ke baare mein bata diya Navina ko aur uss diaries ki baat kiye letter mein Abhi ne Navina se… to Navina ne unn diaries ko padhne ki khwahish ki….

Donon ne ek dusre ko apne photos bhi send kiye…. To Abhi ne Navina se milne ki farmaayish kiya, Navina ne agree kiya aur donon pehli baar mile ussi sheher mein jahan Ruhi ki chachi ki super market tha.

Aur milne ke baad Abhi ne Navina ko wo diaries diye jo ussne Ruhi ko diya tha….

Navina Ruhi se bhi chhoti thi kad mein aur Ruhi jitna khubsurat nahin thi. Magar Navina ki khubsurti usske dil ke andar thi aur usski dimaagh ke andar thi…… Navina ek graduated teacher thi, English padhaati thi college mein. Aur issi liye jab Navina Abhi ke letter padhti thi to ek bhi English mistake nahin dikhta tha ussko is vajah se Navina impress hui thi Abhi ke letter writing se.

Jiss din donon pehli baar mile the to sirf 45 mins ek saath the, ek café mein gaye, baithe, thodi der baat kiye, Abhi ne ussko diaries diye aur donon wapas apne apne ghar chale gaye ek dusre ko weise hi express letter send karne ki promise karte hue.

Navina ne jab Abhi ke donon diaries padhe to wo bahot royi. Der ghante mein sab kuch padh liya Navina ne. Abhi ke diaries padhne ke baad Navina samajh gayi ke Abhi ek true lover hai aur Navina ko aisa hi koyi pyar karne wala chahiye tha…. Navina ko Abhi se pyar ho gaya. Navina ne Abhi ko turant likha aur keh diya ke complete diaries padh liya ussne aur bahot royi, aur apni opinion likha Abhi ko ussne….. magar nahin kaha ke ussko Abhi se pyar ho gaya… to agle hafte phir se milne ka plan banaya donon ne kyuke Navina ko Abhi ke diaries wapas karne the…. To donon agle weekend ko phir mile ussi sheher mein. Ussi café mein.

Navina bahot achchi thi, had se ziada achchi. Nek, narm dil, pyar aur araam se baat karne wali, aur uss mein khaas baat yeh thi ke wo bahot dhyaan se sunti thi. Shaayd teacher thi iss liye ussko sunna aata tha. bahot caring thi aur loving bhi. Abhi ussko dost manta tha, magar kyunke Ruhi ki dairies ko Navina ne full padh liya tha to Navina ko Abhi ke baare mein sab kuch pata chal chuka tha ke wo kaisa hai, kitna emotional hai, kitna ghussa hai, etc…. Abhi ki character, personality sab ka pata chal gaya tha Navina ko…. Abhi ne apni diary mein ek jagah last pages mein Ruhi se alag hone aur diary wapas milne ke baad, jab Abhi ne shave kar liya tha tab yeh likha tha diary mein:

Tu hai harjaayi to apna bhi yehi taur sahi

Tu nahin aur sahi, aur nahin, aur sahi

Badi lambi hai zameen

Milenge laakh haseen

Iss zamaane mein sanam

Tu akela hi nahin

Yahan par Navina ne niche likha tha
“YOU ARE RIGHT ABHI”

Ye ghar wapas ghar jaane ke baad Abhi ne dekha tha, kyunke Navina ne ek khat haath mein diya tha Abhi ko jiss din donon mile the, post karne ke bajae kyunke weekend tha to ek dusre ko haath mein khat diye the donon ne aur uss khat mein Navina ne likh diya tha ke kiss kiss page par ussne apne comment likhe hue hein, iss tarah se Abhi ki dairy mein kayi jagahon par Navina ke handwriting paaye gaye….. Navina ke baad Abhi ne kabhi bhi life mein kissi aur ko wo diaries nahin diye….. kyunke Navina Abhi ki wife ban gayi 2 saal baad. Magar Abhi ki wife banne se pehle 2 saalon mein bahot kuch hua. Wo agle update mein pata chalega.

To be continued……
Fantastic update
 

Chinturocky

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Ye kya kar diya,
Agar abhi ka pyar sachchha tha to Ruhi ka pyar bhi jhuta nahi tha,
Please Aisa mat Karo, Abhi aur ruhi ko milwa do.
Kam se kam ruhi ke Saath bhi insaf hona chahiye, usake family ke gunaho ki saja Ruhi ko nahi milana chahiye.
Dekhate hai agale update me ke in 2 saalon me Aisa kya hua.
 

PK@yadav

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A common language brought Navina and Abhi together to tie their knot. Abhi found Navina better than Ruhi except her beauty and height means Navina and abhi having same kind of nature..
It was a very shocking update Casi bhai but what had happened in between the year that we wanted to know.
Excellent update bro..
What about Ruhi?
Is she still unmarried?
What about abhi professional career?
Ww wanted to know about that..
 

kamdev99008

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:applause: abhi tak ke updates me sabse achha laga mujhe...........

true love not attraction.................
dono ne ek dusre ko samjha, pasand kiya aur pyar hua............

actually hum pyar use mante hain jise hum chahte hain.................
lekin hamara pyar wo hai............................
jo hamein chahta hai

namita ko likhe khat se navina ne use jana.............
ruhi ki yadein jo diary mein likhi thi usse navina ne use samajha
mulakaton se pasand kiya
aur pyar ho gaya

lekin abhi.............. wo abhi samajhne ki had tak pahuncha aur pasand karne laga hai
pyar ke liye abhi uska dil tayyar nahin hua hai............
ruhi ke experience ki wajah se

ab agar ruhi ki baat karein to wo ek akarshan tha .........attraction
kyonki ruhi ne chahe jitni bhi intimacy dikhai
lekin jo samarpan........dedication pyar mein hona chahiye..........wo nahin tha
wo har faisle ke liye apne pariwar aur mainly apni maa par depend thi..........
she never taken any step............at her own
evrything was going on under supervision of her mother
except her earlier sex................jaisa usne bataya ki uske gharwalon ko nahin pata ki wo virgin nahin hai
wo apne parivar se chhupaakar sex kar sakti thi.......... lekin pyar aur shadi ke liye gharwalon ko oppose karke step nahin le saki.............. yehi uske pyar ki asliyat samne lata hai

dekhte hain .............in 2 salon me kya hua
 
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Update 47 The New Penfriend - Navina

Abhi ne pichle 2 Mahinon se kissi bhi penfriends ko reply nahin kiya tha. sabke 2 ya teen repeat letter aa chuke the. To ek subha ko Abhi ne sabko reply karne ko socha aur baith kar sabko sorry kaha aur replies likh kar post kiya.

Abhi har roz ek newspaper kharidta tha bina miss kiye. Aur uss din jab post office se sabke letters post karke wapas ghar aya to papers padh raha tha ke penfriends corner mein kuch nayi ladkiyon ke naam dekha, unn mein do local ladkiyon ko likha Abhi ne. unn mein se ek east ki rehne wali thi, Ruhi ke ghar se 10 kilometres door. Ladki ka naam tha Namita aur ek ka Naam tha Nausheen jo desh ki north se thi. Donon ko ek ek introduction wala letter post kiya Abhi ne. Of course, wo sirf English mein khat likhta tha.

Normally within a week replies aa jaate the hamesha aur Nausheen ke taraf se reply agaya tha 4 din baad magar Namita ke taraf se koyi jawaab nahin aya.

Teen hafte guzar gaye aur Nausheen aur Abhi ki dosti ho gayi, 3 hafton mein 10 se ziada letters aa chuke the Abhi ke paas Nausheen ke taraf se. Magar Namita ka koyi reply nahin aya to Abhi samajh gaya ke Namita ko bahot saare ladkon ke khat aaye honge iss liye ussko apne passand ki saathi mil gayi hogi, to ussne Namita ko ignore kiya.

Magar 2 din baad Abhi ko ek khat mila jissko kissi Navina ne likha tha. Abhi ko heyraani hui ke yeh kaun hai, issko to nahin likha tha main ne…..

English mein likha gaya tha khat, khubsurat handwriting thi, aur uss mein likha tha ke wo Namita ki behen hai, Namita ko bahot saare khat aaye hein iss liye wo Abhi se dosti karna chahti hai. Abhi ne ussko reply kiya.

2 din baad usski reply agayi. Abhi ne phir reply kiya phir 2 din baad usski reply agayi….. jabse Abhi penfriendship karta tha yeh pehli baar aisa hua tha ke do din ke baad koyi ussko reply post kar deti thi….

Abhi ne uss se aur jaankaari jaana chaha ke kaise ussne Namita ki jagah ussko reply kiya aur kia Namita naraaz nahin hui? To Navina ne reply mein yah kaha,

“In fact, we quarrelled over your letter. That is why you got a response after several weeks. Namita is my little sister, I am a year older than her. She had got over 60 letters. We used to share reading and we make fun of the way of writing of the boys. Some do not even know how to write a letter, they write nonsense. So, we were rejecting most of them, the letters were going in the dustbin which Namita would never reply to, and those she liked were kept. And your letter came in my hand, I read it, was impressed by your language and beauty of writing and expressing yourself. When we finished with all, I told her I will reply to this one. She objected and wanted to read your letter, but I refused to give it to her, but she got furious and snatched your letter from me. She read your letter and told me,

“You keep the best for you and all garbage comes to me, why you did not show me this one? He has written to me not to you, so I will reply him!”

Then I turned my face with her and we went to sleep. I so much wanted to correspond with you, that I wished you were my penfriend. I thought the next day she had replied you, I did not know she had not reply. After a week I found your letter on my table. I asked her why that letter was on my table and she told me,

“tum ussko likhne wali thi nah to likho!”

I told her no I will not, keep her penfriends for herself. So, three weeks neither she replied you nor I and finally I decided to write to you. This is how we are now penfriends….. I use to share the reading of your letter with her and she jealously say,

“kitna achcha likhta hai yeh, isski English kitni achchi hai, kitna acha express karta hai, yeh aaj mera penfriend hota nah!”

And I thought she will take back your letters at that moment…. But she did not so we remain friends. Abhi I love your way of writing, your English is so good and you write beautifully that I wish I could read from you every day.”

Abhi ne jab yeh sab padha Navina ke khat mein to agle din ussko express delivery send kiya jo ussi din Navina ko mili aur Navina ne bhi Abhi ko express delivery send kiya jo dusre din Abhi ko mila aur yeh sislsila jaari raha donon ke beech. Ek dusre ko har roz donon letters likhte, aur express post karte, matlab har roz bina miss kiye donon ko ek dusre ke taraf se khat milte….. ek dusre ko har roz khat ka intezaar rehta….. sirf Weekends mein khat nahin aate the Monday se Friday tak har roz ek letter milte donon ko…..

Aur dhire dhire 2/3 pages ke badle 10 se 15 pages ke letter aane jaane lage ek dusre ko… aur iss tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ke baare mein bata diya Navina ko aur uss diaries ki baat kiye letter mein Abhi ne Navina se… to Navina ne unn diaries ko padhne ki khwahish ki….

Donon ne ek dusre ko apne photos bhi send kiye…. To Abhi ne Navina se milne ki farmaayish kiya, Navina ne agree kiya aur donon pehli baar mile ussi sheher mein jahan Ruhi ki chachi ki super market tha.

Aur milne ke baad Abhi ne Navina ko wo diaries diye jo ussne Ruhi ko diya tha….

Navina Ruhi se bhi chhoti thi kad mein aur Ruhi jitna khubsurat nahin thi. Magar Navina ki khubsurti usske dil ke andar thi aur usski dimaagh ke andar thi…… Navina ek graduated teacher thi, English padhaati thi college mein. Aur issi liye jab Navina Abhi ke letter padhti thi to ek bhi English mistake nahin dikhta tha ussko is vajah se Navina impress hui thi Abhi ke letter writing se.

Jiss din donon pehli baar mile the to sirf 45 mins ek saath the, ek café mein gaye, baithe, thodi der baat kiye, Abhi ne ussko diaries diye aur donon wapas apne apne ghar chale gaye ek dusre ko weise hi express letter send karne ki promise karte hue.

Navina ne jab Abhi ke donon diaries padhe to wo bahot royi. Der ghante mein sab kuch padh liya Navina ne. Abhi ke diaries padhne ke baad Navina samajh gayi ke Abhi ek true lover hai aur Navina ko aisa hi koyi pyar karne wala chahiye tha…. Navina ko Abhi se pyar ho gaya. Navina ne Abhi ko turant likha aur keh diya ke complete diaries padh liya ussne aur bahot royi, aur apni opinion likha Abhi ko ussne….. magar nahin kaha ke ussko Abhi se pyar ho gaya… to agle hafte phir se milne ka plan banaya donon ne kyuke Navina ko Abhi ke diaries wapas karne the…. To donon agle weekend ko phir mile ussi sheher mein. Ussi café mein.

Navina bahot achchi thi, had se ziada achchi. Nek, narm dil, pyar aur araam se baat karne wali, aur uss mein khaas baat yeh thi ke wo bahot dhyaan se sunti thi. Shaayd teacher thi iss liye ussko sunna aata tha. bahot caring thi aur loving bhi. Abhi ussko dost manta tha, magar kyunke Ruhi ki dairies ko Navina ne full padh liya tha to Navina ko Abhi ke baare mein sab kuch pata chal chuka tha ke wo kaisa hai, kitna emotional hai, kitna ghussa hai, etc…. Abhi ki character, personality sab ka pata chal gaya tha Navina ko…. Abhi ne apni diary mein ek jagah last pages mein Ruhi se alag hone aur diary wapas milne ke baad, jab Abhi ne shave kar liya tha tab yeh likha tha diary mein:

Tu hai harjaayi to apna bhi yehi taur sahi

Tu nahin aur sahi, aur nahin, aur sahi

Badi lambi hai zameen

Milenge laakh haseen

Iss zamaane mein sanam

Tu akela hi nahin

Yahan par Navina ne niche likha tha
“YOU ARE RIGHT ABHI”

Ye ghar wapas ghar jaane ke baad Abhi ne dekha tha, kyunke Navina ne ek khat haath mein diya tha Abhi ko jiss din donon mile the, post karne ke bajae kyunke weekend tha to ek dusre ko haath mein khat diye the donon ne aur uss khat mein Navina ne likh diya tha ke kiss kiss page par ussne apne comment likhe hue hein, iss tarah se Abhi ki dairy mein kayi jagahon par Navina ke handwriting paaye gaye….. Navina ke baad Abhi ne kabhi bhi life mein kissi aur ko wo diaries nahin diye….. kyunke Navina Abhi ki wife ban gayi 2 saal baad. Magar Abhi ki wife banne se pehle 2 saalon mein bahot kuch hua. Wo agle update mein pata chalega.

To be continued……

Casi bhai kia likhte ho aap. Main ne iss update ko 4 baar padha.
Ek bahut hi SHOCKING update hai magar mujhe itna passand aya ye update ke mujhe lag raha hai ye iss kahani ki ab tak ki BEST update hai.
Aap ki likhne ka tarika sabse hatt ke hein. Aap kaise, kiss tarah se kahani ko kahan mod dete ho kabhi samajh mein nahin ata magar hum jaise chhote readers ko do ya teen baar padhne ke baad hamare chote dimag me baat ghussti hai :laugh:
Kia idea mila aap ko achanak se hamein bataane ko ke Abhi aur Navina husband wife ban gaye the..... aaj hi Navina ko introduce kiya ek penfriend ki tarah, aur update ke end mein ussko Abhi ki wife declare kar diya..... dimag hilla diya aap ne Casi bhai.
Kia especial update hai ye.....
Diaries ko use kiya aap ne sirf te bataane ke liye ke isske baad aaj tak Abhi ne wo diaries kissi ko nahin diya padhne ke liye kyun k 2 saal baad Navina Abhi ki wife ban gayi thi.
Wah casi bhai wah.
Mujhe se sad takdeer ka khel lagta hai....

Socho to, khat Namita ko likha reply Navina ne kiya.... wo bhi donon behnon me ladaayi hui. 3 hafton tak kissi ne reply nahin kiya aur aakhir mein Navina ne reply kiya aur wo Abhi ki wife ban gayi. Pakka agar Namita ne reply kiya hota to wo Abhi ki wife kabhi nahin banti kyunke takdeer mein ussko saali hi banna likha tha.
Kia update hai bhai.
Jhakaaas , faaaddduuuu update.
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