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Update 47 The New Penfriend - Navina​

Abhi ne pichle 2 Mahinon se kissi bhi penfriends ko reply nahin kiya tha. sabke 2 ya teen repeat letter aa chuke the. To ek subha ko Abhi ne sabko reply karne ko socha aur baith kar sabko sorry kaha aur replies likh kar post kiya.

Abhi har roz ek newspaper kharidta tha bina miss kiye. Aur uss din jab post office se sabke letters post karke wapas ghar aya to papers padh raha tha ke penfriends corner mein kuch nayi ladkiyon ke naam dekha, unn mein do local ladkiyon ko likha Abhi ne. unn mein se ek east ki rehne wali thi, Ruhi ke ghar se 10 kilometres door. Ladki ka naam tha Namita aur ek ka Naam tha Nausheen jo desh ki north se thi. Donon ko ek ek introduction wala letter post kiya Abhi ne. Of course, wo sirf English mein khat likhta tha.

Normally within a week replies aa jaate the hamesha aur Nausheen ke taraf se reply agaya tha 4 din baad magar Namita ke taraf se koyi jawaab nahin aya.

Teen hafte guzar gaye aur Nausheen aur Abhi ki dosti ho gayi, 3 hafton mein 10 se ziada letters aa chuke the Abhi ke paas Nausheen ke taraf se. Magar Namita ka koyi reply nahin aya to Abhi samajh gaya ke Namita ko bahot saare ladkon ke khat aaye honge iss liye ussko apne passand ki saathi mil gayi hogi, to ussne Namita ko ignore kiya.

Magar 2 din baad Abhi ko ek khat mila jissko kissi Navina ne likha tha. Abhi ko heyraani hui ke yeh kaun hai, issko to nahin likha tha main ne…..

English mein likha gaya tha khat, khubsurat handwriting thi, aur uss mein likha tha ke wo Namita ki behen hai, Namita ko bahot saare khat aaye hein iss liye wo Abhi se dosti karna chahti hai. Abhi ne ussko reply kiya.

2 din baad usski reply agayi. Abhi ne phir reply kiya phir 2 din baad usski reply agayi….. jabse Abhi penfriendship karta tha yeh pehli baar aisa hua tha ke do din ke baad koyi ussko reply post kar deti thi….

Abhi ne uss se aur jaankaari jaana chaha ke kaise ussne Namita ki jagah ussko reply kiya aur kia Namita naraaz nahin hui? To Navina ne reply mein yah kaha,

“In fact, we quarrelled over your letter. That is why you got a response after several weeks. Namita is my little sister, I am a year older than her. She had got over 60 letters. We used to share reading and we make fun of the way of writing of the boys. Some do not even know how to write a letter, they write nonsense. So, we were rejecting most of them, the letters were going in the dustbin which Namita would never reply to, and those she liked were kept. And your letter came in my hand, I read it, was impressed by your language and beauty of writing and expressing yourself. When we finished with all, I told her I will reply to this one. She objected and wanted to read your letter, but I refused to give it to her, but she got furious and snatched your letter from me. She read your letter and told me,

“You keep the best for you and all garbages comes to me, why you did not show me this one? He has written to me not to you, so I will reply him!”

Then I turned my face with her and we went to sleep. I so much wanted to correspond with you, that I wished you were my penfriend. I thought the next day she had replied you, I did not know she had not replied. After a week I found your letter on my table. I asked her why that letter was on my table and she told me,

“tum ussko likhne wali thi nah to likho!”

I told her no I will not, keep her penfriends for herself. So, three weeks neither she replied you nor I and finally I decided to write to you. This is how we are now penfriends….. I use to share the reading of your letters with her and she jealously says,

“kitna achcha likhta hai yeh, isski English kitni achchi hai, kitna acha express karta hai, yeh aaj mera penfriend hota nah!”

And I thought she will take back your letters at that moment…. But she did not so we remain friends. Abhi I love your way of writing, your English is so good and you write beautifully that I wish I could read from you every day.”

Abhi ne jab yeh sab padha Navina ke khat mein to agle din ussko express delivery send kiya jo ussi din Navina ko mili aur Navina ne bhi Abhi ko express delivery send kiya jo dusre din Abhi ko mila aur yeh sislsila jaari raha donon ke beech. Ek dusre ko har roz donon letters likhte, aur express post karte, matlab har roz bina miss kiye donon ko ek dusre ke taraf se khat milte….. ek dusre ko har roz khat ka intezaar rehta….. sirf Weekends mein khat nahin aate the Monday se Friday tak har roz ek letter milte donon ko…..

Aur dhire dhire 2/3 pages ke badle 10 se 15 pages ke letter aane jaane lage ek dusre ko… aur iss tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ke baare mein bata diya Navina ko aur apne diaries ki baat kiye letter mein Abhi ne Navina se… to Navina ne unn diaries ko padhne ki khwahish ki….

Donon ne ek dusre ko apne photos bhi send kiye…. To Abhi ne Navina se milne ki farmaayish kiya, Navina ne agree kiya aur donon pehli baar mile ussi sheher mein jahan Ruhi ki chachi ki super market tha.

Aur milne ke baad Abhi ne Navina ko wo diaries diye jo ussne Ruhi ko diya tha….

Navina Ruhi se bhi chhoti thi kad mein aur Ruhi jitna khubsurat nahin thi. Magar Navina ki khubsurti usske dil ke andar thi aur usski dimaagh ke andar thi…… Navina ek graduated teacher thi, English padhaati thi college mein. Aur issi liye jab Navina Abhi ke letter padhti thi to ek bhi English mistake nahin dikhta tha ussko is vajah se Navina impress hui thi Abhi ke letter writing se.

Jiss din donon pehli baar mile the to sirf 45 mins ek saath the, ek café mein gaye, baithe, thodi der baat kiye, Abhi ne ussko diaries diye aur donon wapas apne apne ghar chale gaye ek dusre ko weise hi express letter send karne ki promise karte hue.

Navina ne jab Abhi ke donon diaries padhe to wo bahot royi. Der ghante mein sab kuch padh liya Navina ne. Abhi ke diaries padhne ke baad Navina samajh gayi ke Abhi ek true lover hai aur Navina ko aisa hi koyi pyar karne wala chahiye tha…. Navina ko Abhi se pyar ho gaya. Navina ne Abhi ko turant likha aur keh diya ke complete diaries padh liya ussne aur bahot royi, aur apni opinion likha Abhi ko ussne….. magar nahin kaha ke ussko Abhi se pyar ho gaya… to agle hafte phir se milne ka plan banaya donon ne kyuke Navina ko Abhi ke diaries wapas karne the…. To donon agle weekend ko phir mile ussi sheher mein. Ussi café mein.

Navina bahot achchi thi, had se ziada achchi. Nek, narm dil, pyar aur araam se baat karne wali, aur uss mein khaas baat yeh thi ke wo bahot dhyaan se sunti thi. Shaayd teacher thi iss liye ussko sunna aata tha. bahot caring thi aur loving bhi. Abhi ussko dost manta tha, magar kyunke Ruhi ki dairies ko Navina ne full padh liya tha to Navina ko Abhi ke baare mein sab kuch pata chal chuka tha ke wo kaisa hai, kitna emotional hai, kitna ghussa hai, etc…. Abhi ki character, personality sab ka pata chal gaya tha Navina ko…. Abhi ne apni diary mein ek jagah last pages mein Ruhi se alag hone aur diary wapas milne ke baad, jab Abhi ne shave kar liya tha tab yeh likha tha diary mein:

Tu hai harjaayi to apna bhi yehi taur sahi

Tu nahin aur sahi, aur nahin, aur sahi

Badi lambi hai zameen

Milenge laakh haseen

Iss zamaane mein sanam

Tu akela hi nahin

Yahan par Navina ne niche likha tha “YOU ARE RIGHT ABHI”

Ye ghar wapas ghar jaane ke baad Abhi ne dekha tha, kyunke Navina ne ek khat haath mein diya tha Abhi ko jiss din donon mile the, post karne ke bajae kyunke weekend tha to ek dusre ko haath mein khat diye the donon ne aur uss khat mein Navina ne likh diya tha ke kiss kiss page par ussne apne comment likhe hue hein, iss tarah se Abhi ki dairy mein kayi jagahon par Navina ke handwriting paaye gaye….. Navina ke baad Abhi ne kabhi bhi life mein kissi aur ko wo diaries nahin diye….. kyunke Navina Abhi ki wife ban gayi 2 saal baad. Magar Abhi ki wife banne se pehle 2 saalon mein bahot kuch hua. Wo agle update mein pata chalega.

To be continued……

are bidu ye kia ho gaya? Aisa kyun kab kaise kia hua??!!
Waise update faadu hai, mast hai magar jhatka jabardast laga....
Ruhi ka kia hua?
Abhi uss se mila kia?
Abhi ki business??
Waise ye Namita aur Navina k bich ka takraar Abhi k chithi k liye majedaar tha.... jisdko shayas wife banna tha saali ban gayi
Ok to kal se dekhte hein bich ke do saal mein aisa kia ho gaya

 

[Jaggu]

ye to jabardast twist agaya ishtroy mein
jhakaaaaas

 

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Update 47 The New Penfriend - Navina​

Abhi ne pichle 2 Mahinon se kissi bhi penfriends ko reply nahin kiya tha. sabke 2 ya teen repeat letter aa chuke the. To ek subha ko Abhi ne sabko reply karne ko socha aur baith kar sabko sorry kaha aur replies likh kar post kiya.

Abhi har roz ek newspaper kharidta tha bina miss kiye. Aur uss din jab post office se sabke letters post karke wapas ghar aya to papers padh raha tha ke penfriends corner mein kuch nayi ladkiyon ke naam dekha, unn mein do local ladkiyon ko likha Abhi ne. unn mein se ek east ki rehne wali thi, Ruhi ke ghar se 10 kilometres door. Ladki ka naam tha Namita aur ek ka Naam tha Nausheen jo desh ki north se thi. Donon ko ek ek introduction wala letter post kiya Abhi ne. Of course, wo sirf English mein khat likhta tha.

Normally within a week replies aa jaate the hamesha aur Nausheen ke taraf se reply agaya tha 4 din baad magar Namita ke taraf se koyi jawaab nahin aya.

Teen hafte guzar gaye aur Nausheen aur Abhi ki dosti ho gayi, 3 hafton mein 10 se ziada letters aa chuke the Abhi ke paas Nausheen ke taraf se. Magar Namita ka koyi reply nahin aya to Abhi samajh gaya ke Namita ko bahot saare ladkon ke khat aaye honge iss liye ussko apne passand ki saathi mil gayi hogi, to ussne Namita ko ignore kiya.

Magar 2 din baad Abhi ko ek khat mila jissko kissi Navina ne likha tha. Abhi ko heyraani hui ke yeh kaun hai, issko to nahin likha tha main ne…..

English mein likha gaya tha khat, khubsurat handwriting thi, aur uss mein likha tha ke wo Namita ki behen hai, Namita ko bahot saare khat aaye hein iss liye wo Abhi se dosti karna chahti hai. Abhi ne ussko reply kiya.

2 din baad usski reply agayi. Abhi ne phir reply kiya phir 2 din baad usski reply agayi….. jabse Abhi penfriendship karta tha yeh pehli baar aisa hua tha ke do din ke baad koyi ussko reply post kar deti thi….

Abhi ne uss se aur jaankaari jaana chaha ke kaise ussne Namita ki jagah ussko reply kiya aur kia Namita naraaz nahin hui? To Navina ne reply mein yah kaha,

“In fact, we quarrelled over your letter. That is why you got a response after several weeks. Namita is my little sister, I am a year older than her. She had got over 60 letters. We used to share reading and we make fun of the way of writing of the boys. Some do not even know how to write a letter, they write nonsense. So, we were rejecting most of them, the letters were going in the dustbin which Namita would never reply to, and those she liked were kept. And your letter came in my hand, I read it, was impressed by your language and beauty of writing and expressing yourself. When we finished with all, I told her I will reply to this one. She objected and wanted to read your letter, but I refused to give it to her, but she got furious and snatched your letter from me. She read your letter and told me,

“You keep the best for you and all garbages comes to me, why you did not show me this one? He has written to me not to you, so I will reply him!”

Then I turned my face with her and we went to sleep. I so much wanted to correspond with you, that I wished you were my penfriend. I thought the next day she had replied you, I did not know she had not replied. After a week I found your letter on my table. I asked her why that letter was on my table and she told me,

“tum ussko likhne wali thi nah to likho!”

I told her no I will not, keep her penfriends for herself. So, three weeks neither she replied you nor I and finally I decided to write to you. This is how we are now penfriends….. I use to share the reading of your letters with her and she jealously says,

“kitna achcha likhta hai yeh, isski English kitni achchi hai, kitna acha express karta hai, yeh aaj mera penfriend hota nah!”

And I thought she will take back your letters at that moment…. But she did not so we remain friends. Abhi I love your way of writing, your English is so good and you write beautifully that I wish I could read from you every day.”

Abhi ne jab yeh sab padha Navina ke khat mein to agle din ussko express delivery send kiya jo ussi din Navina ko mili aur Navina ne bhi Abhi ko express delivery send kiya jo dusre din Abhi ko mila aur yeh sislsila jaari raha donon ke beech. Ek dusre ko har roz donon letters likhte, aur express post karte, matlab har roz bina miss kiye donon ko ek dusre ke taraf se khat milte….. ek dusre ko har roz khat ka intezaar rehta….. sirf Weekends mein khat nahin aate the Monday se Friday tak har roz ek letter milte donon ko…..

Aur dhire dhire 2/3 pages ke badle 10 se 15 pages ke letter aane jaane lage ek dusre ko… aur iss tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ke baare mein bata diya Navina ko aur apne diaries ki baat kiye letter mein Abhi ne Navina se… to Navina ne unn diaries ko padhne ki khwahish ki….

Donon ne ek dusre ko apne photos bhi send kiye…. To Abhi ne Navina se milne ki farmaayish kiya, Navina ne agree kiya aur donon pehli baar mile ussi sheher mein jahan Ruhi ki chachi ki super market tha.

Aur milne ke baad Abhi ne Navina ko wo diaries diye jo ussne Ruhi ko diya tha….

Navina Ruhi se bhi chhoti thi kad mein aur Ruhi jitna khubsurat nahin thi. Magar Navina ki khubsurti usske dil ke andar thi aur usski dimaagh ke andar thi…… Navina ek graduated teacher thi, English padhaati thi college mein. Aur issi liye jab Navina Abhi ke letter padhti thi to ek bhi English mistake nahin dikhta tha ussko is vajah se Navina impress hui thi Abhi ke letter writing se.

Jiss din donon pehli baar mile the to sirf 45 mins ek saath the, ek café mein gaye, baithe, thodi der baat kiye, Abhi ne ussko diaries diye aur donon wapas apne apne ghar chale gaye ek dusre ko weise hi express letter send karne ki promise karte hue.

Navina ne jab Abhi ke donon diaries padhe to wo bahot royi. Der ghante mein sab kuch padh liya Navina ne. Abhi ke diaries padhne ke baad Navina samajh gayi ke Abhi ek true lover hai aur Navina ko aisa hi koyi pyar karne wala chahiye tha…. Navina ko Abhi se pyar ho gaya. Navina ne Abhi ko turant likha aur keh diya ke complete diaries padh liya ussne aur bahot royi, aur apni opinion likha Abhi ko ussne….. magar nahin kaha ke ussko Abhi se pyar ho gaya… to agle hafte phir se milne ka plan banaya donon ne kyuke Navina ko Abhi ke diaries wapas karne the…. To donon agle weekend ko phir mile ussi sheher mein. Ussi café mein.

Navina bahot achchi thi, had se ziada achchi. Nek, narm dil, pyar aur araam se baat karne wali, aur uss mein khaas baat yeh thi ke wo bahot dhyaan se sunti thi. Shaayd teacher thi iss liye ussko sunna aata tha. bahot caring thi aur loving bhi. Abhi ussko dost manta tha, magar kyunke Ruhi ki dairies ko Navina ne full padh liya tha to Navina ko Abhi ke baare mein sab kuch pata chal chuka tha ke wo kaisa hai, kitna emotional hai, kitna ghussa hai, etc…. Abhi ki character, personality sab ka pata chal gaya tha Navina ko…. Abhi ne apni diary mein ek jagah last pages mein Ruhi se alag hone aur diary wapas milne ke baad, jab Abhi ne shave kar liya tha tab yeh likha tha diary mein:

Tu hai harjaayi to apna bhi yehi taur sahi

Tu nahin aur sahi, aur nahin, aur sahi

Badi lambi hai zameen

Milenge laakh haseen

Iss zamaane mein sanam

Tu akela hi nahin

Yahan par Navina ne niche likha tha “YOU ARE RIGHT ABHI”

Ye ghar wapas ghar jaane ke baad Abhi ne dekha tha, kyunke Navina ne ek khat haath mein diya tha Abhi ko jiss din donon mile the, post karne ke bajae kyunke weekend tha to ek dusre ko haath mein khat diye the donon ne aur uss khat mein Navina ne likh diya tha ke kiss kiss page par ussne apne comment likhe hue hein, iss tarah se Abhi ki dairy mein kayi jagahon par Navina ke handwriting paaye gaye….. Navina ke baad Abhi ne kabhi bhi life mein kissi aur ko wo diaries nahin diye….. kyunke Navina Abhi ki wife ban gayi 2 saal baad. Magar Abhi ki wife banne se pehle 2 saalon mein bahot kuch hua. Wo agle update mein pata chalega.

To be continued……

bhai update ne jhatka jaroor diya magar bhai behtareen update tha yeh
one of the best updates of this story
jhakaas twist aur jabardast update bhai
#mujhe behad passand aya.
chalo 2 saal skip kiya aap ne magar kal to bataoge aap ne kaha ke beech mein kia kaise hua, to yeh bahut shaandaar aur jabardast update laga mujhe

 

[Savi]

 

[Savi]

Update 47 The New Penfriend - Navina​

Abhi ne pichle 2 Mahinon se kissi bhi penfriends ko reply nahin kiya tha. sabke 2 ya teen repeat letter aa chuke the. To ek subha ko Abhi ne sabko reply karne ko socha aur baith kar sabko sorry kaha aur replies likh kar post kiya.

Abhi har roz ek newspaper kharidta tha bina miss kiye. Aur uss din jab post office se sabke letters post karke wapas ghar aya to papers padh raha tha ke penfriends corner mein kuch nayi ladkiyon ke naam dekha, unn mein do local ladkiyon ko likha Abhi ne. unn mein se ek east ki rehne wali thi, Ruhi ke ghar se 10 kilometres door. Ladki ka naam tha Namita aur ek ka Naam tha Nausheen jo desh ki north se thi. Donon ko ek ek introduction wala letter post kiya Abhi ne. Of course, wo sirf English mein khat likhta tha.

Normally within a week replies aa jaate the hamesha aur Nausheen ke taraf se reply agaya tha 4 din baad magar Namita ke taraf se koyi jawaab nahin aya.

Teen hafte guzar gaye aur Nausheen aur Abhi ki dosti ho gayi, 3 hafton mein 10 se ziada letters aa chuke the Abhi ke paas Nausheen ke taraf se. Magar Namita ka koyi reply nahin aya to Abhi samajh gaya ke Namita ko bahot saare ladkon ke khat aaye honge iss liye ussko apne passand ki saathi mil gayi hogi, to ussne Namita ko ignore kiya.

Magar 2 din baad Abhi ko ek khat mila jissko kissi Navina ne likha tha. Abhi ko heyraani hui ke yeh kaun hai, issko to nahin likha tha main ne…..

English mein likha gaya tha khat, khubsurat handwriting thi, aur uss mein likha tha ke wo Namita ki behen hai, Namita ko bahot saare khat aaye hein iss liye wo Abhi se dosti karna chahti hai. Abhi ne ussko reply kiya.

2 din baad usski reply agayi. Abhi ne phir reply kiya phir 2 din baad usski reply agayi….. jabse Abhi penfriendship karta tha yeh pehli baar aisa hua tha ke do din ke baad koyi ussko reply post kar deti thi….

Abhi ne uss se aur jaankaari jaana chaha ke kaise ussne Namita ki jagah ussko reply kiya aur kia Namita naraaz nahin hui? To Navina ne reply mein yah kaha,

“In fact, we quarrelled over your letter. That is why you got a response after several weeks. Namita is my little sister, I am a year older than her. She had got over 60 letters. We used to share reading and we make fun of the way of writing of the boys. Some do not even know how to write a letter, they write nonsense. So, we were rejecting most of them, the letters were going in the dustbin which Namita would never reply to, and those she liked were kept. And your letter came in my hand, I read it, was impressed by your language and beauty of writing and expressing yourself. When we finished with all, I told her I will reply to this one. She objected and wanted to read your letter, but I refused to give it to her, but she got furious and snatched your letter from me. She read your letter and told me,

“You keep the best for you and all garbages comes to me, why you did not show me this one? He has written to me not to you, so I will reply him!”

Then I turned my face with her and we went to sleep. I so much wanted to correspond with you, that I wished you were my penfriend. I thought the next day she had replied you, I did not know she had not replied. After a week I found your letter on my table. I asked her why that letter was on my table and she told me,

“tum ussko likhne wali thi nah to likho!”

I told her no I will not, keep her penfriends for herself. So, three weeks neither she replied you nor I and finally I decided to write to you. This is how we are now penfriends….. I use to share the reading of your letters with her and she jealously says,

“kitna achcha likhta hai yeh, isski English kitni achchi hai, kitna acha express karta hai, yeh aaj mera penfriend hota nah!”

And I thought she will take back your letters at that moment…. But she did not so we remain friends. Abhi I love your way of writing, your English is so good and you write beautifully that I wish I could read from you every day.”

Abhi ne jab yeh sab padha Navina ke khat mein to agle din ussko express delivery send kiya jo ussi din Navina ko mili aur Navina ne bhi Abhi ko express delivery send kiya jo dusre din Abhi ko mila aur yeh sislsila jaari raha donon ke beech. Ek dusre ko har roz donon letters likhte, aur express post karte, matlab har roz bina miss kiye donon ko ek dusre ke taraf se khat milte….. ek dusre ko har roz khat ka intezaar rehta….. sirf Weekends mein khat nahin aate the Monday se Friday tak har roz ek letter milte donon ko…..

Aur dhire dhire 2/3 pages ke badle 10 se 15 pages ke letter aane jaane lage ek dusre ko… aur iss tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ke baare mein bata diya Navina ko aur apne diaries ki baat kiye letter mein Abhi ne Navina se… to Navina ne unn diaries ko padhne ki khwahish ki….

Donon ne ek dusre ko apne photos bhi send kiye…. To Abhi ne Navina se milne ki farmaayish kiya, Navina ne agree kiya aur donon pehli baar mile ussi sheher mein jahan Ruhi ki chachi ki super market tha.

Aur milne ke baad Abhi ne Navina ko wo diaries diye jo ussne Ruhi ko diya tha….

Navina Ruhi se bhi chhoti thi kad mein aur Ruhi jitna khubsurat nahin thi. Magar Navina ki khubsurti usske dil ke andar thi aur usski dimaagh ke andar thi…… Navina ek graduated teacher thi, English padhaati thi college mein. Aur issi liye jab Navina Abhi ke letter padhti thi to ek bhi English mistake nahin dikhta tha ussko is vajah se Navina impress hui thi Abhi ke letter writing se.

Jiss din donon pehli baar mile the to sirf 45 mins ek saath the, ek café mein gaye, baithe, thodi der baat kiye, Abhi ne ussko diaries diye aur donon wapas apne apne ghar chale gaye ek dusre ko weise hi express letter send karne ki promise karte hue.

Navina ne jab Abhi ke donon diaries padhe to wo bahot royi. Der ghante mein sab kuch padh liya Navina ne. Abhi ke diaries padhne ke baad Navina samajh gayi ke Abhi ek true lover hai aur Navina ko aisa hi koyi pyar karne wala chahiye tha…. Navina ko Abhi se pyar ho gaya. Navina ne Abhi ko turant likha aur keh diya ke complete diaries padh liya ussne aur bahot royi, aur apni opinion likha Abhi ko ussne….. magar nahin kaha ke ussko Abhi se pyar ho gaya… to agle hafte phir se milne ka plan banaya donon ne kyuke Navina ko Abhi ke diaries wapas karne the…. To donon agle weekend ko phir mile ussi sheher mein. Ussi café mein.

Navina bahot achchi thi, had se ziada achchi. Nek, narm dil, pyar aur araam se baat karne wali, aur uss mein khaas baat yeh thi ke wo bahot dhyaan se sunti thi. Shaayd teacher thi iss liye ussko sunna aata tha. bahot caring thi aur loving bhi. Abhi ussko dost manta tha, magar kyunke Ruhi ki dairies ko Navina ne full padh liya tha to Navina ko Abhi ke baare mein sab kuch pata chal chuka tha ke wo kaisa hai, kitna emotional hai, kitna ghussa hai, etc…. Abhi ki character, personality sab ka pata chal gaya tha Navina ko…. Abhi ne apni diary mein ek jagah last pages mein Ruhi se alag hone aur diary wapas milne ke baad, jab Abhi ne shave kar liya tha tab yeh likha tha diary mein:

Tu hai harjaayi to apna bhi yehi taur sahi

Tu nahin aur sahi, aur nahin, aur sahi

Badi lambi hai zameen

Milenge laakh haseen

Iss zamaane mein sanam

Tu akela hi nahin

Yahan par Navina ne niche likha tha “YOU ARE RIGHT ABHI”

Ye ghar wapas ghar jaane ke baad Abhi ne dekha tha, kyunke Navina ne ek khat haath mein diya tha Abhi ko jiss din donon mile the, post karne ke bajae kyunke weekend tha to ek dusre ko haath mein khat diye the donon ne aur uss khat mein Navina ne likh diya tha ke kiss kiss page par ussne apne comment likhe hue hein, iss tarah se Abhi ki dairy mein kayi jagahon par Navina ke handwriting paaye gaye….. Navina ke baad Abhi ne kabhi bhi life mein kissi aur ko wo diaries nahin diye….. kyunke Navina Abhi ki wife ban gayi 2 saal baad. Magar Abhi ki wife banne se pehle 2 saalon mein bahot kuch hua. Wo agle update mein pata chalega.

To be continued……

Bahut bada shocking update hai magar bahut achi update.
Aap ne kaha hai ke kal k update me pata chalega ke kaise ye sab ho gaya, matlab aap ne do saal aage wale baat bata diye, ab kal se wapas do saal piche dekhenge. Sahi hai boss.
Namita aut Navina ke bich ki ladaayi Abhi ki letter ko lekar majedaar tha.
Mujhe wo bahut passand aaya. Main khud kuch aise situation se gujri hoon apni badi behen ke saath ek ladke ki photo ko lekar
Yahan choti behen ne badi behen ko green light de diya Abhi ko likhne k liye aur badi behen wife ban gayi aur wo sali
Bahut majedar update hau Casi ji Bahut passand aya mujhe.

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[Nagarjun]

Superb update
Wonderful and pleasant twist

 

[Rowdywa]

Update 47 The New Penfriend - Navina​

Abhi ne pichle 2 Mahinon se kissi bhi penfriends ko reply nahin kiya tha. sabke 2 ya teen repeat letter aa chuke the. To ek subha ko Abhi ne sabko reply karne ko socha aur baith kar sabko sorry kaha aur replies likh kar post kiya.

Abhi har roz ek newspaper kharidta tha bina miss kiye. Aur uss din jab post office se sabke letters post karke wapas ghar aya to papers padh raha tha ke penfriends corner mein kuch nayi ladkiyon ke naam dekha, unn mein do local ladkiyon ko likha Abhi ne. unn mein se ek east ki rehne wali thi, Ruhi ke ghar se 10 kilometres door. Ladki ka naam tha Namita aur ek ka Naam tha Nausheen jo desh ki north se thi. Donon ko ek ek introduction wala letter post kiya Abhi ne. Of course, wo sirf English mein khat likhta tha.

Normally within a week replies aa jaate the hamesha aur Nausheen ke taraf se reply agaya tha 4 din baad magar Namita ke taraf se koyi jawaab nahin aya.

Teen hafte guzar gaye aur Nausheen aur Abhi ki dosti ho gayi, 3 hafton mein 10 se ziada letters aa chuke the Abhi ke paas Nausheen ke taraf se. Magar Namita ka koyi reply nahin aya to Abhi samajh gaya ke Namita ko bahot saare ladkon ke khat aaye honge iss liye ussko apne passand ki saathi mil gayi hogi, to ussne Namita ko ignore kiya.

Magar 2 din baad Abhi ko ek khat mila jissko kissi Navina ne likha tha. Abhi ko heyraani hui ke yeh kaun hai, issko to nahin likha tha main ne…..

English mein likha gaya tha khat, khubsurat handwriting thi, aur uss mein likha tha ke wo Namita ki behen hai, Namita ko bahot saare khat aaye hein iss liye wo Abhi se dosti karna chahti hai. Abhi ne ussko reply kiya.

2 din baad usski reply agayi. Abhi ne phir reply kiya phir 2 din baad usski reply agayi….. jabse Abhi penfriendship karta tha yeh pehli baar aisa hua tha ke do din ke baad koyi ussko reply post kar deti thi….

Abhi ne uss se aur jaankaari jaana chaha ke kaise ussne Namita ki jagah ussko reply kiya aur kia Namita naraaz nahin hui? To Navina ne reply mein yah kaha,

“In fact, we quarrelled over your letter. That is why you got a response after several weeks. Namita is my little sister, I am a year older than her. She had got over 60 letters. We used to share reading and we make fun of the way of writing of the boys. Some do not even know how to write a letter, they write nonsense. So, we were rejecting most of them, the letters were going in the dustbin which Namita would never reply to, and those she liked were kept. And your letter came in my hand, I read it, was impressed by your language and beauty of writing and expressing yourself. When we finished with all, I told her I will reply to this one. She objected and wanted to read your letter, but I refused to give it to her, but she got furious and snatched your letter from me. She read your letter and told me,

“You keep the best for you and all garbages comes to me, why you did not show me this one? He has written to me not to you, so I will reply him!”

Then I turned my face with her and we went to sleep. I so much wanted to correspond with you, that I wished you were my penfriend. I thought the next day she had replied you, I did not know she had not replied. After a week I found your letter on my table. I asked her why that letter was on my table and she told me,

“tum ussko likhne wali thi nah to likho!”

I told her no I will not, keep her penfriends for herself. So, three weeks neither she replied you nor I and finally I decided to write to you. This is how we are now penfriends….. I use to share the reading of your letters with her and she jealously says,

“kitna achcha likhta hai yeh, isski English kitni achchi hai, kitna acha express karta hai, yeh aaj mera penfriend hota nah!”

And I thought she will take back your letters at that moment…. But she did not so we remain friends. Abhi I love your way of writing, your English is so good and you write beautifully that I wish I could read from you every day.”

Abhi ne jab yeh sab padha Navina ke khat mein to agle din ussko express delivery send kiya jo ussi din Navina ko mili aur Navina ne bhi Abhi ko express delivery send kiya jo dusre din Abhi ko mila aur yeh sislsila jaari raha donon ke beech. Ek dusre ko har roz donon letters likhte, aur express post karte, matlab har roz bina miss kiye donon ko ek dusre ke taraf se khat milte….. ek dusre ko har roz khat ka intezaar rehta….. sirf Weekends mein khat nahin aate the Monday se Friday tak har roz ek letter milte donon ko…..

Aur dhire dhire 2/3 pages ke badle 10 se 15 pages ke letter aane jaane lage ek dusre ko… aur iss tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ke baare mein bata diya Navina ko aur apne diaries ki baat kiye letter mein Abhi ne Navina se… to Navina ne unn diaries ko padhne ki khwahish ki….

Donon ne ek dusre ko apne photos bhi send kiye…. To Abhi ne Navina se milne ki farmaayish kiya, Navina ne agree kiya aur donon pehli baar mile ussi sheher mein jahan Ruhi ki chachi ki super market tha.

Aur milne ke baad Abhi ne Navina ko wo diaries diye jo ussne Ruhi ko diya tha….

Navina Ruhi se bhi chhoti thi kad mein aur Ruhi jitna khubsurat nahin thi. Magar Navina ki khubsurti usske dil ke andar thi aur usski dimaagh ke andar thi…… Navina ek graduated teacher thi, English padhaati thi college mein. Aur issi liye jab Navina Abhi ke letter padhti thi to ek bhi English mistake nahin dikhta tha ussko is vajah se Navina impress hui thi Abhi ke letter writing se.

Jiss din donon pehli baar mile the to sirf 45 mins ek saath the, ek café mein gaye, baithe, thodi der baat kiye, Abhi ne ussko diaries diye aur donon wapas apne apne ghar chale gaye ek dusre ko weise hi express letter send karne ki promise karte hue.

Navina ne jab Abhi ke donon diaries padhe to wo bahot royi. Der ghante mein sab kuch padh liya Navina ne. Abhi ke diaries padhne ke baad Navina samajh gayi ke Abhi ek true lover hai aur Navina ko aisa hi koyi pyar karne wala chahiye tha…. Navina ko Abhi se pyar ho gaya. Navina ne Abhi ko turant likha aur keh diya ke complete diaries padh liya ussne aur bahot royi, aur apni opinion likha Abhi ko ussne….. magar nahin kaha ke ussko Abhi se pyar ho gaya… to agle hafte phir se milne ka plan banaya donon ne kyuke Navina ko Abhi ke diaries wapas karne the…. To donon agle weekend ko phir mile ussi sheher mein. Ussi café mein.

Navina bahot achchi thi, had se ziada achchi. Nek, narm dil, pyar aur araam se baat karne wali, aur uss mein khaas baat yeh thi ke wo bahot dhyaan se sunti thi. Shaayd teacher thi iss liye ussko sunna aata tha. bahot caring thi aur loving bhi. Abhi ussko dost manta tha, magar kyunke Ruhi ki dairies ko Navina ne full padh liya tha to Navina ko Abhi ke baare mein sab kuch pata chal chuka tha ke wo kaisa hai, kitna emotional hai, kitna ghussa hai, etc…. Abhi ki character, personality sab ka pata chal gaya tha Navina ko…. Abhi ne apni diary mein ek jagah last pages mein Ruhi se alag hone aur diary wapas milne ke baad, jab Abhi ne shave kar liya tha tab yeh likha tha diary mein:

Tu hai harjaayi to apna bhi yehi taur sahi

Tu nahin aur sahi, aur nahin, aur sahi

Badi lambi hai zameen

Milenge laakh haseen

Iss zamaane mein sanam

Tu akela hi nahin

Yahan par Navina ne niche likha tha “YOU ARE RIGHT ABHI”

Ye ghar wapas ghar jaane ke baad Abhi ne dekha tha, kyunke Navina ne ek khat haath mein diya tha Abhi ko jiss din donon mile the, post karne ke bajae kyunke weekend tha to ek dusre ko haath mein khat diye the donon ne aur uss khat mein Navina ne likh diya tha ke kiss kiss page par ussne apne comment likhe hue hein, iss tarah se Abhi ki dairy mein kayi jagahon par Navina ke handwriting paaye gaye….. Navina ke baad Abhi ne kabhi bhi life mein kissi aur ko wo diaries nahin diye….. kyunke Navina Abhi ki wife ban gayi 2 saal baad. Magar Abhi ki wife banne se pehle 2 saalon mein bahot kuch hua. Wo agle update mein pata chalega.

To be continued……

Amazing, unexpexted, shocking, these are how I qualify this update.
Super twist as well.
Had never thought this will take such a drastic turn all of a sudden. Its like a twister which came without giving any sign. A cyclone which came without warning, a huge wave which came without a roar.
You really surprised us with this update casi bro.
Lets talk about the update now. You must have a danm good reason to tell the last part which happened within 2 years as you said in the next update we will know.
Well intro of Navina was spectacular with her sis Namita.
Abhi wrote to Namita and her elder sis sat witj her to chose among 60 letters she received from several boys.
They were making fun of the boys who wrote nonsence and were putting those letters innthe dustbin. But then the elder sister read a letter which took her attention as it was written in good English and Since Navina, the elder sister was an English teacher liked the letter and the sender and decided to reply him herdelf. But Namita did not like it as the letter was addressed to her not to Navina so she wanted to reply the sender.
Both sisters had a quarell over that and none replied to Abhi for three weeks.
On Abhi's side since he did not get a response from Namita he gave up expecting any reply from her as he understood that she have already got her liked penfriend.
And finally Navina writes to Abhi and rhe correspondence started.
They started writing so fast to each othet that Abhi told her everything about Ruhi and told her about the diaries which Navina wanted to read.
And they met. The diaries of Ruhi were given to Navina. She read, cried, felt the pain of Abhi, discovered that he was the one she had been waiting for......
And they got married after 2 years.
Happy ending.
Beautiful story indeed....... But where is Ruhi? What about the garage and loan Abhi needed?
All this will be told tomorrow.
Thanks for this twisting update mate.
Was really interesting though.

 

[Jaggu]

Update 5 The First Day of Work​

Raat ko Abhi thik se so nahin paaya. Sirf uss ladki ko sochta raha, sapne mein ussko dekha bhi jab bhi zara si aankh lagi to. Ussko jaldi tha wahan wapas jaane ki aur wahan kaam shuru karne ki. Sochta raha kaam karega ya din bhar uss ladki ko dekhta rahega. Kia ladki ghar par rahegi har roz? Kia wo college jaati hogi? Ya kahin koyi kaam karti hogi? Yeh sab soch raha tha Abhi aur khud ko tassalli dete hue kaha ke agar kahin bhi jaati hogi subha aur shaam ko ek dusre ko dekh to payenge…. Abhi sochne laga ki wo uss se baat kar paega? Kaise baat shuru karega? Kia kahega uss se? Aur agar ladki ne baat nahin kiya to? Agar ussne Abhi ko jawaab nahin diya to? Thoda sharmilee type lagi thi uss waqt, to kia Abhi ke saamne aaegi bhi? Yeh sab sochta raha Abhi raat bhar. Apni diary mein bahot kuch likha. Diary one day page tha ussne 5 pages likh diya, matlab agle 4 din ke pages bhi bhar diye aaj ki events ko likh kar, to socha ek naya thick cover ka copy book kharidna hoga sirf inn dinon ko likhne ke liye, jab tak wo wahan kaam karega, uss copy book mein sirf wahan ke events ko likhega.

Subha mamool se bahot pehle uth gaya Abhi aur tayyaar hokar nikla kaam par jaane ke liye. Bus se safar karna tha, ghar se 40 kms ki doorie par thi wo jagah jahan Mehboob ka ghar tha. kaam karne ke liye puarane kapde ek bag mein liya hua tha, aur ek dusre bag mein kaam karne wale kuch auzaar the, aur of course khana bhi tha ek bag mein.

Subha 6.30 ko uss jagah ko reach hua abhi, Saeed bhai aur baaki ke 2 workers bhi aaye thik usske piche.

Bus stop se utar kar marammat karne wale bus tak pahunchne mein koyi 5 minat lagta tha, aur jab uss aangan mein daakhil hua abhi to usski nazar seedhe uss kitchen wale stairs par pahunche, bus par nahin. Chalte waqt bus tak reach hone ke liye abhi ki nazrein idhar udhar dekhta gaya, right mein jo ghar hai matlab jiss ghar mein wo ladki rehti hai, uss ghar ka saamne wale hisse ko ghaur se dekha abhi ne, jo pehla tap tha wahan dekha phir nazron ko uss taraf kiya jahan tap number 2 tha aur ek washing stone bhi tha uss dusre nal ke paas. Aur akhir mein uss jagah pahuncha jahan washroom tha. Aur ab wo washroom to direct uss kitchen ke opposite tha jahan kal Ruhi nazar ayi thi, uss washroom se kitchen ke andar nazar araha tha. Abhi ne ghaur se andar dekha. Koyi bhi nahin tha. Abhi ne sochna shuru kiya ke kal issi kitchen mein wo ladki paka rahi thi jiss waqt usski maa ussko awaaz de rahi thi……. Abhi ne ek vision kiya jo flashback ki tarah usske aankhon ke saamne aaye….

Ussne dekha ke ussi neeli dress mein ladki apni stove ke paas karhaayi mein kuch pakaa rahi hai aur Abhi ussko dekh rahi hai phir Abhi uss se ishaare se baat kar raha hai…..

Vision khatam hone ke baad Abhi ne socha kia aisa kabhi hoga bhi? Kia yeh mumkin hai? 4 se 6 mahinon tak yahin kaam karna hai kuch to baat aaguey badhegi zaroor….. Ek ajeeb si feeling ho raha tha abhi ko, uss kitchen ke andar dekhte hue, soch raha tha jaise usski maa pakaati hai kitchen mein weise hi ladki bhi kal paka rahi thi, ussko pakana ata hai, kia kabi kuch paka kar khilaegi Abhi ko? Wo sochne laga Abhi, usske haath ka paka hua kaisa lagega? Swadisht hoga? Abhi ussko kitchen stove ke paas dekhna chahta tha, ussko pakaate hue dekhna chahta tha, usska dil kar raha tha ke wo ladki wahan aaye aur Abhi usske paas jaakar ussko piche se jakre aur uss se pyar kare…. Aise feelings aa rahe the abhi ke dil mein kapde change karte waqt… ye sab sochte hue Abhi ne apne kapde badle, kaam karne wala purana kapda pehna aur baaki ke logon ne bhi wohi kiya aur sab bus ke paas ekatha hue. Saeed bhai ne Abhi se pucha,

“kaise start karna hai?!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“sabse pehle Mehboob bhai se kaho, ek lamba hose chahiye bus ko dhona hai pehle tab todna hai, saare sade hue tin, loha, shisha, andar ke tute hue seats sab nikaalna hai, bus ko sirf chasis mein dikhna hai ab….”

Wohi kiya gaya…. Oonchi awaaz mein sab baat kar rahe the, ke yeh karo, wahan paani dalo, aisa karo, veisa karo, yahan mat aao, wahan jao etc….

Abhi baar baar uss ghar ke taraf dekhe jaa raha tha kaam karte hue, soch raha tha kia wo abhi tak so rahi hogi? Ussko dekhne ka bada mann tha abhi ko, magar wo bilkool nazar nahin arahi thi. Kia wo kaam par chali gayi hogi? Kia college gayi hogi? Ya university ki student hogi? Usski maa kayi baar nazar aayi. Mehboob bhi kayi baar aaye, sabse baat kiye, Mehboob ki biwi, Rahima bhi aayi, chai dene aayi sabko phir wapas chali bhi gayi magar wo ladki nahin dikhi thi Abhi ko din ke barah bajne ko tha. Bus ko nanga kar diya gaya tha, sirf bus ki chasis nazar arahe the apne 6 wheels par.

Lunch time aya to a
Abhi gaya apne bag se khana lene ke liye washroom ke paas bag taanga hua tha jiss mein usske khaane ke chizein the; wahan jaate waqt bhi Abhi uss kitchen mein jhaanka aur ladki ki maa nazar aayi bartan maanjte hue sink ke paas, to jhat se abhi ne nazar hatta liya…. Bus ke andar baith kar sab khaane chale. Khaate waqt bhi Abhi baar baar uss ghar ek taraf dekh raha tha…. aur achanak ussne uss ladki ko Mehboob ke ghar se nikal kar apni kitchen ke taraf jaate hue dekha, aaj ek laal dress mein thi, baal khule hue the, ek nazar ussne bus ke taraf dekha aur apni kitchen mein chali gayi…. Abhi ne khud ko kossa ke kyun ussne ladki ko uss waqt nahin dekha jiss waqt wo apni kitchen se nikal kar Mehboob ke ghar Rahima se milne gayi thi… pata nahin kitne time se wo Mehboob ki biwi se baat kar rahi thi aur Abhi ko kuch pata hi nahin chala…..

Khaane ke baad sab main road par gaye tehelte hue cigarette kharidne. 45 mins ka lunch break liye the sabne. Yeh normal tha kahin bhi kaam karte to 45 mins lete the sab.

Jab cigarette pite hue wapas daakhil hue uss aangan mein to Abhi ne laal dress wali ladki ko ussi kitchen ki stairs par dekha jahan kal usski maa khadi thi. Magar main road se jiss jagah par wo khadi thi kaafi door tha to Abhi ko wo door dikhi aur Abhi chahta tha ke jab wo bus ke paas aaye to wo wahin khadi rahe taake ussko paas se dekh sake, magar jaise jaise weh log bus ke karib hote gaye ladki wapas apne kitchen mein chali gayi. Abhi shuru mein bahot khush hua ussko wahan khadi dekh kar, wo bus ko hi dekh rahi thi, aur ek baar raaste par dekha Abhi ke taraf, magar jab a
Abhi usski cousin ke ghar ke paas reach hua to Ruhi wapas ghuss gayi. Tab Abhi udaas hogaya aur pray karta raha ke wo wapas stairs par aaye.

Kaam shuru hua, ab saare puraane tin ko nikala jaa raha tha bus se, sade hue lohe ko kata jaa raha tha, hatode aur baaki auzaar se. bahot shor ho rahe the thaak thok, thik thaak ke awaazein bahot sunaayi de rahe the aur a
Abhi ne socha kia pata ke ladki thoda sone gayi hogi to nahin so paaegi unn logon ke shor karne ki vajah se…. do pahar mein bahot saare log thoda sote hein khaane ke baad, jab a
Abhi ghar par rehta tha to yeh usski aadat thi, to ussne socha shayad wo ladki aur usski maa ke bhi weise aadat ho….

Karib 3 baje muhalle ke bahot saare log aaye dekhne Abhi aur team ko kaam karte hue, khaas kar school ke bache log. Unn mein se ek ladka Ruii ka chota bhai tha jo 10th mein tha. wo to abhi ke bilkool paas aake khada ho gaya aur baat karne laga. Abhi ne pucha ke kaun hai kidhar rehta hai kia karta hai vaghaira aur jab ladke ne kaha ke wahin rehta hai to Abhi ko pata chala ke uss ladki ka chota bhai hai. Usska naam pucha tab ahbi ko Khushi hui kyunke ussko pata chala ke yeh Ruhi bhi hindu hi hai kyunke bhai ka naam Mahesh tha. phir Abhi ne pucha ke Mehboob ko chacha kehte hein sab to ussne socha ke Mehboob usske pita ka bhai hai to Mahesh ne kaha,

“hum Mehboob chacha ko ‘chacha’ iss liye bulaate hein kyunke mummy ne kaha ussko weisa bulaane ke liye”

Aur ek baar Ruhi stair par aayi Mahesh ko bulaane ke liye aur yun kaha bus ke taraf Mahesh ko dekhte hue,

“hey Mahesh chai nahin piyega kia? Main ne serve kar diya aakar pile mujhe sab saaf karna hai jaldi aah nah!”

Jiss waqt Ruhi wo sab keh rahi thi Abhi usski chehre mein dekh raha tha, aur Ruhi ne Mahesh ko dekhte hue wo sab kaha tha magar ek do baar usski nazrein Abhi par bhi gayi…. Abhi ne bahot achi tarah se usski nazron ko follow kiya tha.

Abhi ko behad passand aya usska uss tarah se usske taraf dekhna. Usski nazron mein ek komalta dikha Abhi ko, usski awaaz kitni mithi thi, usski muskurahat jaan lewa laga Abhi ko, usski awaaz aur ziada sunne ko mann kiya Abhi ko to ussne Mahesh se kaha,

“chai pine ke baad wapas ana thoda baatein karenge.”

Mahesh ne kaha,

“haan wapas ata hoon, mujhe dekhna hai tum log kaise issko bus banaate ho!”

Shaam ko 4 baje to aur kuch log aagaye aangan mein. Log bhade hue the uss jagah. Kabhi kissi ne bus ko bante hue nahin dekha tha, magar abhi to bus ko ujara jaa raha tha, nanga kiya jaa raha tha…. aas paas ke log jo apne apne kaam se wapas agaye the chale aaye the Mehboob ke bus ko dekhne ke liye… aur tab tak bus ko almost nanga kiya jaa chuka tha…. jab bus aya tha to kuch aisa dikh raha tha aangan mein kal



Jangal mein tha to aisa tha

Aur ab sab tor phor ke baad shaam ko 4 baje bus sirf chasis par tha aur yeh dikh raha tha

Ab iss par frame banaya jaega din ba din kaam hoga bus ki frame weld karne ke baad alliminium sheets rivets se chipana hoga, sheets ko measurement se kaatna padega etc….

Shaam ke karib paanch baje jab washroom jaana tha sabko to ek baar aur Ruhi ki maa stairs par dikhi aur usski awaaz yun aayi,

“Ruhi aa dekh nah bus kaise bilkool khali ho gayi hai…”

Abhi ne socha ussko ab jaldi se washroom jaana chahiye aur udhar se wo Ruhi ko kitchen mein dekh paega. To jaldi se wo nikla….. usske kapde bilkool maile ho gaye the, chehre par bhi jagah jagah par gandh lage hue the, khud ko wash karna tha wo nahin chahta tha ke Ruhi ussko weisa dekhe…..

Abhi weise handsome ladka tha, gora rang, 6.2 feet/1m85 ooncha, kayi log ussko ‘lambu’ bhi bulaate the; usska ek strong personality tha, jaldi se log usske dost ban jaate the aur wo ek centre of attraction tha khud mein hi, log usske taraf nazar karte hi the kissi tarah se bhi, usski oochaayi ki vajah se kuch log ussko dekhte the to kuch log usski personality ki vajah se, to baat yeh hui ke Ruhi ki maa Abhi ko hi dekh rahi thi jab wo washroom ke taraf jaane lage to aur iss se pehle ke wo washroom pahunchta khud Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se kuch kaha…. Kuch log jawaan 22 saal ke ladke se baat karna passand karte hein, kabhi tang khinchaayi karte hein to kabhi umar wale log jawaan logon se buss baat iss liye karte hein ke dekhein wo jawaan kitna kaabil hai….. aur kuch log khud ko jawaanon se dosti karne ke liye baatein karte hein, aur kuch log to jawaanon se akarshit hokar hi baat karte hein….

Abhi ko rukna pada ussko jawaab dene ke liye aur kitchen ke andar se Ruhi Abhi ke chehre mein ek muskaan se dekh rahi thi ke usski maa uss se baat kar rahi hai….

Abhi to khud ko saaf suthra karke Ruhi ke saamne pesh hona chahta tha magar usski maa ne Abhi ko ussi haalat mein rok liya to Abhi ko acha nahin laga magar kaise mana karta uss aurat ne baat kiya to jawaab to dena tha iss liye majbooran ussko rukna pada aur Ruhi ki maa ne muskuraate hue pucha tha,

“kitne dinon mein bus ban jaega?!”

Abhi ne bhi muskuraate hue jawaab diya magar Ruhi ko dekhte hue usski maa ko nahin,

“bahot bada kaam hai yeh, shuruwaat se sab kuch karna padega wo bhi haath se, koyi bhi garage wala machine nahin hai to ziada din lagenge!”

Andar se Ruhi muskuraate hue Abhi ko dekh rahi thi, usski haath mein ek plate tha jissko wo kitchen ki table par rakhne jaa rahi thi magar Abhi ko ruk kar sunne lagi thi, aur abhi ne note kiya ke uss waqt Ruhi ke baal khule hue nahin the, balke bandhe the, kuch iss tarah se ke usski kaandhe par koyi dekhe to lagta tha ke usski baal kaandhe tak katte hue hein, behad khubsurat dikh rahi thi, shayad thoda makeup kiya hua tha ya cream powder lagaayi thi uss waqt Ruhi ne….. Abhi ne socha ke khud kitna ganda dikh raha hai, maile kapde, maila chehra, baal bikhre hue, aur Ruhi ek princess dikh rahi thi…. Abhi ko jaldi tha washroom jaane ki, to ussne kaha,

“Wait main wash karke wapas aata hoon aur aap ko samjhaunga ke kitne kaam hai.

Aur wo chala gaya khud ko saaf karne magar wahan Saeed aur baaki ke do log uss se pehle wash kar rahe the to Abhi ko wait karna pada tab tak wo kitchen mein dekhta raha, aur Ruhi bhi baar baar usske taraf dekh rahi thi apne kitchen ke kaam karte hue…..

To be continued….. (2600 words)

Bahut khubsurat update.
Donon ke aankh micholi start ho gayi hai.
Abhi soch raha hai Ruhi kabhi usske liye kuch paka k khillaegi kabhi.
Dekhte hein.