Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Fantastic update

thanks very much sona dear

 

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Abhi soch raha hai ki ye sab band kar dena chahiye... Sahi soch raha hai ek POV se.... Lekin khud hi majboor hai apne dil ke kaaran... Wo chahte huye bhi Shweta se mile bina nahin rah paayega...

Aur Shweta ki "Kisi se Badla lene" waali baat ne mera ye sochna aur bhi majboot kar diya hai ki jis "Bade" raaj ke baare mein main soch raha hun.... Wo jaldi hi khulega....

hmmmm sahi kaha bhai wo din door nahin ab jabke raaz khulega

 

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Nice Update....

thanks very much sunil bhai

 

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Bahut shaadaar likha hai casi bhai. Bahut hi behtareen tarike se aap ne kaafi gehraayi mein doob ke likha hai lagta hai. Khaas kar wo parts jahan aap ne raat aur raat ki tanhaayi mein jo armaan jaagte hein aur dil p kia gujarta hai wo kamaal ka laga bhai wah hats off casi bhai....
Navina se bhi keh diya Abhi ne ke Shweta se mila
Saeed ko usski jhoot ki saja khub mila saale ko.....
Abhi ko chain mila ke Ruhi weisi nahin hai weise Abhi ko pehle se yakeen tha ke Ruhi uss se wo baat nahin chhupati agar sach hoti to
Aakhir aap ne jo Abhi ke liye likha k usske andar ki feel hone laga tha Shweta ko soch kar usski jism aur badan ki uss khaas Ruhi wali khushbhoo ko soch kar ke uss se raha nah gaya aur chala gaya uss se dobara milne....
Wahan jo hua so hua magar bhai aap to erotics likhne mein sabke BOSS ho thoda sa erotic Abhi aur Shweta ke bich to banta tha bhai
Anyways, chalo Abhi ne fir se kaha ke sab rokna chahiye magar isse rokna itna asaan to nahin.....
Shweta ne kissi se badla lene wali baat kaha.... magar kiss se???!!!
Waiting for the next bhai
Kahani jabardast hone laga hai ab

is khushurat review aur appreciation ke liye tehe dil se dhanyawaad nayan bhai

 

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Woooooowww
Very good and brilliant update....
Beautifully presented and we'll written....

Baat kare details ki to.....
Abhi sahi soch raha hai.....Saeed ki baat kuch had tak sahi ho sakti hai lekin us par pura yakeen nahi kiya jaa sakta.....

Phir mahboob bhi aisi bewakoofi nahi karega ki jis ladki ke saath....usne aisa kiya hai.....us ladki ka lover uske ghar mai kaam kar raha hai....OR wo bhi uski maa ke saamne....
OR jab ki wo saeed ko pura believe nahi kar sakta.....agar galati se bhi saeed Abhi ko bata deta......chalo ak baar ke liye maan lete hai normally nahi batata.....
Lekin agar jaise ak bar dono mai jhagda hua tha....waise agar dubara hota or jhagda badhta....tab saeed jarur iss baat ko open karta....OR wo bhi sabke saamne.....
Agar aisa hota to Abhi uss samay saeed or mahboob ke liye kaal ban jata...
Mujhe nahi lagta ki Mahboob aisi koi bewakoofi karega....lekin phir bhi saeed ki baat sirf kuch had tak hee sahi hai....

Mahboob ke saamne bhi Ruhi baat to kam hee karti thi....lekin aisa nahi hai ki bilkul hee nahi karti thi....

Baat rahi age difference ki to.....ha ye baat alag hai ki shaadi ke liye age matter karti hai.....lekin physical relationship ke liye kabhi bhi age matter nahi karti.....
Ak old age or ak teen ke bich bhi physical relation ho sakta hai....OR bachche or adult ke bich bhi.....
But isme ye confirm he ki aise relationship jo hote hai.....usme maximum illegitimate hee hote hai.....

Abhi ko apne pyar par bharosa hai.....achchi baat hai....OR har koi karta hai.....jaisa ki maine pahle bhi kaha hai....ki jis ke saath ham iss tarah ke relationship me hote hai....
Hamara mann.....dil ya dimaag khud hee uske liye kuch bhi galat sochne ki izazat nahi deta.....

Ha bhale hee der se lekin ak din jarur pata chalega.....Abhi ko....


Baat kare films or gaanon ki......
To ha ye sach he ki uss samay ke gaane evergreen hai....OR Rakhenge.....warna aaj kal to ya to remix ya phir recreation hee chal raha hai......
Lagta hai ki reality or khud ka original creation......ye sab chije aaj kal ke singers bhul hee gaye hai.....
OR inn jaise copy paste waale logo ko or upar chadhaane mai sabse bada haath hai media ka.....KYOKI MEDIA WAALO KA KOI ZAMEER TO HOTA NAHI HAI....

Har bar news mai ye hee chij dikhaai jaati hai....YE KARENGE ISS GAANE KO RECREAT......ISS MOVIE KA REMAKE.....

MERA INN LOGON SE KAHNA HAI KI.....KYO BHAI.....KYA PURAANE GAANE YA ORIGINAL FILM ACHCHI NAHI THI.....
JO USE RECREAT KAR RAHE HO....REMAKE KAR RAHE HO.....

I just hate copy paste.....people.....films......stories.....etc....

Ha to ham baat kar rahe the unn gaano ki.....
Ha bahut se gaane hote hai.....Jo ki hamaare feelings ke saath juda jaate hai.....even jo gaane aapne bataaye wo iss forum par lagbhag sabhi logo ke pasandida honge....

OR ye gaane kisi na kisi tarah har pyar karne waale ke saath......uske dil ke saath relate hote hai.....us gaane mai koi na koi aisi line aa hee jaati hai jo ki aapki situation se match karti hai.....
OR phir uss gaane mai hero heroine ko hone waala dard phir hame apna lagne lagta hai....

OR 90s ke hee kyo.....ye baat to hai ki aaj bhi kai gaane aise bante hai.....halanki bahut kam bante hai.....
Lekin bante hai....Jo Lambe samay tak yaad kiye ja sake.....
Jaise ki haal hee mai maine kuch gaane sune the jo ki kaafi achcha tha.....
Jaisi ki.....
AK DIL HAI.....AK JAAN HAI....
THODI JAGAH.....
OR
TUJHE KITNA CHAHE AUR HUM....

Gaane hamaare andar chuki feelings ko zinda rakhne ka kaam karte hai...


Abhi ka karobaar badh hogaya hai....OR isme use Japanese or government ka bhi saath mila hai good......

Finally Abhi ko real Ruhi mill hee gayi.....lekin is situation ke baare mai to maine pahle hee bataaya tha.....
Ab ye waali Ruhi Abhi ke liye koi maarne nahi rakhti.....jaisa ki ye dono Abhi normally hee mile hai...
OR jyadatar formal batchit hee hui hai.....

Ab agar Abhi ke liye koi matter karta hai to wo hai Ruhi Nunhuck.....OR koi nahi.....

Confirm college mai milne waali Shweta hee hai.. next update mai pata chal jaayega....

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai.....
Anyways
Very good update
Thanks.....

iss khubsurat aur detailed review ke liye tehe dil se aap ka dhayawaad Vikram bhai

 

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Woooooowww
Very good and brilliant update....
Beautifully presented and we'll written....

Baat kare details ki to.....
Abhi sahi soch raha hai.....Saeed ki baat kuch had tak sahi ho sakti hai lekin us par pura yakeen nahi kiya jaa sakta.....

Phir mahboob bhi aisi bewakoofi nahi karega ki jis ladki ke saath....usne aisa kiya hai.....us ladki ka lover uske ghar mai kaam kar raha hai....OR wo bhi uski maa ke saamne....
OR jab ki wo saeed ko pura believe nahi kar sakta.....agar galati se bhi saeed Abhi ko bata deta......chalo ak baar ke liye maan lete hai normally nahi batata.....
Lekin agar jaise ak bar dono mai jhagda hua tha....waise agar dubara hota or jhagda badhta....tab saeed jarur iss baat ko open karta....OR wo bhi sabke saamne.....
Agar aisa hota to Abhi uss samay saeed or mahboob ke liye kaal ban jata...
Mujhe nahi lagta ki Mahboob aisi koi bewakoofi karega....lekin phir bhi saeed ki baat sirf kuch had tak hee sahi hai....

Mahboob ke saamne bhi Ruhi baat to kam hee karti thi....lekin aisa nahi hai ki bilkul hee nahi karti thi....

Baat rahi age difference ki to.....ha ye baat alag hai ki shaadi ke liye age matter karti hai.....lekin physical relationship ke liye kabhi bhi age matter nahi karti.....
Ak old age or ak teen ke bich bhi physical relation ho sakta hai....OR bachche or adult ke bich bhi.....
But isme ye confirm he ki aise relationship jo hote hai.....usme maximum illegitimate hee hote hai.....

Abhi ko apne pyar par bharosa hai.....achchi baat hai....OR har koi karta hai.....jaisa ki maine pahle bhi kaha hai....ki jis ke saath ham iss tarah ke relationship me hote hai....
Hamara mann.....dil ya dimaag khud hee uske liye kuch bhi galat sochne ki izazat nahi deta.....

Ha bhale hee der se lekin ak din jarur pata chalega.....Abhi ko....


Baat kare films or gaanon ki......
To ha ye sach he ki uss samay ke gaane evergreen hai....OR Rakhenge.....warna aaj kal to ya to remix ya phir recreation hee chal raha hai......
Lagta hai ki reality or khud ka original creation......ye sab chije aaj kal ke singers bhul hee gaye hai.....
OR inn jaise copy paste waale logo ko or upar chadhaane mai sabse bada haath hai media ka.....KYOKI MEDIA WAALO KA KOI ZAMEER TO HOTA NAHI HAI....

Har bar news mai ye hee chij dikhaai jaati hai....YE KARENGE ISS GAANE KO RECREAT......ISS MOVIE KA REMAKE.....

MERA INN LOGON SE KAHNA HAI KI.....KYO BHAI.....KYA PURAANE GAANE YA ORIGINAL FILM ACHCHI NAHI THI.....
JO USE RECREAT KAR RAHE HO....REMAKE KAR RAHE HO.....

I just hate copy paste.....people.....films......stories.....etc....

Ha to ham baat kar rahe the unn gaano ki.....
Ha bahut se gaane hote hai.....Jo ki hamaare feelings ke saath juda jaate hai.....even jo gaane aapne bataaye wo iss forum par lagbhag sabhi logo ke pasandida honge....

OR ye gaane kisi na kisi tarah har pyar karne waale ke saath......uske dil ke saath relate hote hai.....us gaane mai koi na koi aisi line aa hee jaati hai jo ki aapki situation se match karti hai.....
OR phir uss gaane mai hero heroine ko hone waala dard phir hame apna lagne lagta hai....

OR 90s ke hee kyo.....ye baat to hai ki aaj bhi kai gaane aise bante hai.....halanki bahut kam bante hai.....
Lekin bante hai....Jo Lambe samay tak yaad kiye ja sake.....
Jaise ki haal hee mai maine kuch gaane sune the jo ki kaafi achcha tha.....
Jaisi ki.....
AK DIL HAI.....AK JAAN HAI....
THODI JAGAH.....
OR
TUJHE KITNA CHAHE AUR HUM....

Gaane hamaare andar chuki feelings ko zinda rakhne ka kaam karte hai...


Abhi ka karobaar badh hogaya hai....OR isme use Japanese or government ka bhi saath mila hai good......

Finally Abhi ko real Ruhi mill hee gayi.....lekin is situation ke baare mai to maine pahle hee bataaya tha.....
Ab ye waali Ruhi Abhi ke liye koi maarne nahi rakhti.....jaisa ki ye dono Abhi normally hee mile hai...
OR jyadatar formal batchit hee hui hai.....

Ab agar Abhi ke liye koi matter karta hai to wo hai Ruhi Nunhuck.....OR koi nahi.....

Confirm college mai milne waali Shweta hee hai.. next update mai pata chal jaayega....

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai.....
Anyways
Very good update
Thanks.....

iss khubsurat aur detailed review ke liye tehe dil se aap ka dhayawaad Vikram bhai

 

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Shaandaar, lajawab, BEHTAREEN update Casi bhai.
Kahani me doob kar likha hai aap ne lagta hai.
Itni gehraayi se kaun likhta hai bhai wah.
Saeed ko apne kiye ki saja mili sala paralysed ho gaya tab Abhi ko bataya ke ussne jhoot kaha tha Ruhi aur Mehboob wali baat.
Rahi baat Abhi ka Shweta ke taraf dobara jana to wo pata tha hoga hi hoga.
Bhai jiss tarah se aap ne jazbaaton ko describe kiya hai na wo taarife kaabil hai bhai. Jabardast update casi bhai hats off.

appreciation ke liye bahot shukriya shambhu bhai

 

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Woooooowww
Very beautiful and brilliant update

Abhi ko college mai milne waali Shweta hee thi....very good.....halanki Shweta ka nature uski masumiyat Abhi bhi pahle ki tarah hee hai.....OR khas kar uska Abhi se lagaav or affection......


Abhi ke na pahchan ne par....Shweta ka Abhiiiiiiiiiii kahna.....kaafi achcha laga......
OR uski aisa lagne par Abhi ko use pahchan kar iss tarah ka reaction dena.....natural tha.....

Kyoki Ruhi ke baad Shweta hee thi uss ghar mai...Jo ki abhi se sabse jyada judi hui thi.....
OR Shweta ko iss tarah se achanak apne saamne Pana.....wo bhi itne saal baad Abhi ka shock hona lazimi tha.....


Jab ham kisi ke saath itna deep relation mai hote hai or us se judi koi bhi chij kaafi samay baad hamaare saamne aati hai to mostly ye hee reaction hota hai.....same Abhi ke saath tha.....Shweta ko dekh kar...

Abhi ki goodwill Shweta tak bhi pahuch gayi....OR naam sirf Abhi ki Navina ki bhi.....good.....
Waise dono hee characters kuch aise hai jisse jo bhi mile unhe unn dono se pyar hoga hee....

Shweta kaafi fast hai or uska husband bhi....24 mahine shaadi ko hue.....OR 18 mahine ka Bachcha bhi hai.....very good...

WAISE AGAR MERI NAZAR SE DEKHA JAAYE TO SHAADI KO 24 MAHINE OR BACHCHI 18 MAHINE KI.......

YE CALCULATION KUCH GADBAD NAHI HAI.....

AGAR ISS HISAAB SE DEKHA JAAYE TO SHWETA SHAADI SE PAHLE HEE PREGNANT THI......

OR AGAR AISA HAI TO YE BHI KAHNA PADEGA KI RUHI KI FAMILY SE JUDA HAR SHAKHS.... SEXUALY KAAFI FAST OR ADVANCED HAI.....


Ruhi uss samay chachi ke ghar par hee thi yr baat maine pahle hee bata di thi....lekin Shweta ke kahne ek ye to confirm ho gayi ki.....chachi or Ruhi ke maa mai differences to hai.....ab wo kya hai ye aage pata chal sakte hai.....

OR worst part.....ki.jab Shweta ne chilla kar Abhi ko batana chaha tab uski maa ne uska muh bnd kar diya.....apne haath se....

Ye chij dikhaai hai ki bhale hee baat chhoti ho.....lekin Ruhi ki maa or chachi me jhagda bada hai.....


Ab baat karte hai update ke absence best part ki......
Abhi and shweta's talk......

Ise ham aise dekh sakte aisa ki jab bhi koi Bachcha.....bhale hee wo chhota ho ya middle age ka.....5 se 10....
Jo use jyada pyar karta hai....jyada attention or affection deta hai....bachche ka jhukaaye usi ki taraf ho jata hai.....
And it's natural.....

OR jaisa ki Shweta ne kaha ki use sabse jyada affection aur attention Abhi se mila to ye hona to swabhavik hee tha....

Phir Abhi or Ruhi ka juda hona or Ruhi ka rona jo ki Shweta ne dekha hee hoga....OR wo hee sab bachpan se uske nind mai chalta aaya hai.....
In short Abhi bahut achcha hai pyara hai....mera kitna haal rakhta hai....Ruhi di ko kitna pyar karta hai.....
Kya mujhe bhi karega.....ha karega...mujhse bhi to itna pyar karta hai mujhe chocolate deta hai....God me leta hai.....mujhe bhi wo Ruhi di jaisa hee pyar karega....karta hoga.

Yahi sab....bachpan se uske dimaag me chalta aaya hai.....
OR isi ki wajah se qo Abhi ki taraf attract ho gayi......OR usko hee apna sab kuch maan ne lagi.....
Phir Abhi ke kaamyaab hone ki news use mili jo ki uske iss attraction ko bhadawa dene ke liye kaafi thi....kyoki aaj Abhi ke pass wo sab hai jo normally sabhi sapne mai dekhte hai.....

OR phir Abhi ke paise wala hone par Shweta ke aa baap ne bhi haal kar di....ro use or jyada badhawa mila.....

In his sab chijo ke kaaran wo abhi ko pyar karne lagi.....OR jab ki ye sab kaafi Lambe samay se chala aa raha hai to ye samay ke saath or bhi strong ho gaya hai.....

Abhi ke saath Shweta ka bachchon ke jaise hee milna or bahut saari baate karna kaafi achcha laga.....

Khair Abhi to kaafi raaz khulne baaki hai.....May be Shweta se kaafi kuch pata chal sakta hai.....


Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai
Anyways
Very good update....
Thanks....

bahot bahot shukriya Vikram bhai appreciate karne ke liye

bhai calculation mein koyi bhi ghalati bahin hai shaadi ko 2 saal kaha tha ab 2 saal aur 5 mahine to nahin kehti nah generally speaking 2 saal keh diya 2 years... aap 5 mahina jod kar calculation kar lena ab vikaram bhai

 

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amazing update casi bhai,
Behad hi shandaar aur lajawab update hai bhai,
ab ye shweta abhi ke saath sambandh bana kar kisase badla le rahi hai,
abhi ki to haalat aisi ho gayi hai ki na to vo shweta se door hi ja sakta hai ab aur na hi use ye rista sahi lag raha hai,
ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

bahot bahot shukriya Appreciation ke liye Aman bhai

 

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Hmmmm
Good update.....

Sach kahu to ye wala update mujhe thoda azib laga..
Ha mana ki inki bich jo baate hui wo achchi thi.....Shweta kaafi jyada pasand karti hai abhi ko....OR wo apni married life se khush nahi hai... .

Lekin.....lekin.....aaj iss update ko padhte hue mujhe kahi bhi aisa nahi laga ki mai koi romantic story padh raha hu.....

Aisa laga jaise koi thriller story ho.....OR usme kaise bhi karke kisi ko ladki apne ghar le kar jana chahti hai....taaki uske saath kuch kar ya karwa sake....

OR phir bar bar Shweta ka ye kahna.....ki AT MY PLACE....AT MY PLACE..

bar bar at my place to aise kah rahi hai jaise ghar jaate hee kapde utar kar shuru ho jaayegi ki bhai mai to puri taiyaar hu karle jo karna hai......
Ye chij kaafi awkward lagi.....mana ki wo kaafi jyada attached hai abhi se lekin kisi ke ghar par nahin one hue use ghar par bulana or phir uska baat kahne ka jo lahja tha.....
Us se mujhe kaafi gadbad laga.....iss tarah ki language koi ladki ya aurat tab bolti hai jab use kisi mard ko khud ki taraf attract karna ho use fasana ho...
Apne aap ko mazbur.....dukho-gum me gharib hui....sab aur se pareshan abla ki tarah.....jis se ki log sympathy kare..... wo bhi bhar bhar ke.....



Khair Dekhte hai inn logon ki ye mulakaat kya rang laati hai

Anyways
Good update
Thanks....

thaks vevry much Vikram bhai......
kuch ajeeb nahin tha.... aap ne jitne baar aat my place likha hai utne baar to nahin kaha tha shweta ne
jab koyi itna close aur emotionally attached hote hein to aise closeness hote hein aksar dekha gaya hai

 

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Bahut badhya update bhai.
Shaandar lajawab.
Saeed ne jhoot kaha tha ussko usski saza mili.
Baaki kia likha hai bhai jajbaton ko wah.
Sab dil se jude hue emotions dikgaye hein aap ne. Superb bhai.

Appreciation ke liye bahot shukriya Husein bhai