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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

Casinar

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abhi ne bahut kosish kiya swetha ko avoid karne ka pr kr nhi paya wo uski feeling ko hurn nhi karna chahta tha isliye gya sweta se milne dono phir se ek hue aur enjoy kiya abhi ko phir sweta me ruhi feel hua
swetha kisi se badla le rhi hai pr kisse apne pati se ya apni maa se yaa ruhi se pta nhi kis se badla le rhi hai
jabardast update

appreciation ke liye bahot bahot shukriya james bro
 

Casinar

Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
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Woooooowww
Very good update......
Beautifully presented and well written.....

Waise jis tarah ke situation thi......pr Shweta ko language body language....harkate......uska Abhi ke seene par haath ferna.......Mujhe pata chal gaya tha ki ye hone wala hee hai.....

Or usme ak baat ye bhi hoti hai ki agar ak lady chahe to wo kuch bhi kar sakti hai.....apne adaaon or jism ke bal par.....
OR asse mai mard kitna bhi sakht ho......ak bar to pighla hee jata hai.....

Kyoki jaisa aine pahle bhi kaha hai.....ki ham ladko mai sex ko lekar kuch jyada hee fast hote hai.....

OR ak baat jyada emotional banda jo hota hai.....doesn't matter wo ladka ho ya ladki.....use convince karna jyada aasan hota hai....
Ye dhyaan rahe yanha mai Shweta ko galat nahi kah raha hu.....wo itne time se Abhi ki taraf attract goto aayi hai....

Ak bahut jyada strong attraction or jise ham ak tarfa pyar lag sakte hai....wo hai Shweta ko....Abhi se.....
Ab bhale hee wo dusro ke liye ak tarfa ho....lekin jo karta hai uske I ye to wo pura hee hota hai.....

Shweta jo ki itne Lambe samay se uski taraf attracted hai......ye hee sab use Abhi ke prati sexualy attract kar ne lagi....
OR ak time ke baad se wo abhi ko more sensual or desirable maan ne lagi.....

OR upar se uske pati ka sex mai jyada active na hona.....uske desires ko uski jo aammmm kya kahu use......uski body need ko full fell nahi kar paa raha hai....

Ab baat kare Abhi ki to.....

Abhi ak time tak resist kar raha tha.....lekin jab use laga ki jis chij ke liye resist kar raha hai.....
Wo to uski hee hai.....matlab use jab pata laga ki wo touch wo feel uski Ruhi ka hee hai.....tab wo control nahi kar paya....

OR isme uski galati bhi nahi hai.....jis Ruhi ke bas naam ke liye wo itna paagal hai.....sirf naam or uski ak jhalak ke liye.....
Usi Ruhi ka touch use mil raha hai....feel use mill raha hai.....wo kyo dunidaari ke chakkar mai padhkar us se dur hoga.....

Jis chij se wo itne din dur raha itna takleef mai itni tadap mai....aaj jab wo mil rahi hai to wo piche kyo rahega....

OR agar uska dimaag use aisa karne se rokna bhi chahe to bhi mann nahi manega....

Shweta ka ghar bhi kaafi bada or achcha hai or kaafi mahanga bhi.....

Ha ak chij hai jo ki mujhe achchi nahi lagi or wo hai ki ak jagah aapne Abhi ko BHUKHA BHEDIYA....YA HAWAS KA BHUKHA JO bhi kaha he....

Ye mujhe bilkul pasand nahi aaya.....agar abhi ko usme Ruhi wala feel nahi aata to confirm wo uske paas bhi nahi jata.....touch karna to dur....


Abhi chala gaya.....halanki Shweta ne use rokna chaha lekin phir bhi wo nikal gaya.....lekin usne u turn liya.....

Shaayad ab wo jaakar Shweta se puchega uska or Ruhi ka real Rishta.....
Wo Dono cousins hai....OK but ye shaayad sach nahi hai.....ab mai kah sakta hu KI KAAMDEV bhai ki baat sahi hui....
Ruhi or Shweta ke relation ko lekar....
Ya phir dono cousins na hokar khas badhne ho.....

Otherwise itni strong feeling Ruhi ke baare mai....Abhi ko nahi hoti....

Shweta ne Abhi se number kaise liya jabki khud wo puri nude thi or abhi bhi us se gale milkar hee chala gaya tha....

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Anyways
Very good update....
Thanks...

bahoit bahot shukriya Vikram bhai shukar hai aap ko update mein kuch gadbad nahin laga
tha ls loads for te appreciation and detailed review bhai
 

Casinar

Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
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HELLO bro....
Iske baare mai mera bas itna hee kah na hai ki....aap likhe jo bhi aapko likhna hai....

Mere khayal se koi bhi reader ye nahi sochega ki aisa kyo hua ya kyo nahi hua....kyoki lagbhag sabhi jaante hai ki ye ak biography story hai....note only romance....
OR har koi iss story se apni life ko kisi na kisi tarah relate kar ke dekh raha hai....

So aap apne hisaab se likhe....

Rahi baat MAIRE or KAAMDEV bhai ke jaan ne ki...to ye baat to maine pahle bhi kahi hai ki mai hamesha jis update jo padhta hu....usi ko dhyaan me rakh kar reply deta hu...
Bhale hee mujhe pata hai aage ka..... ya phir reality....lekin mera koi bhi review aapki future post ko kisi bhi tarah affect nahi karega....
Thanks...


bahot bahot shukriya sab samajhne aur saath dene ke liye vikram bhai
 

Casinar

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Ye to hona hi tha. pata tha ke Abhi nahin reh paega aurcjarue jaega firse Shweta k paas kyunke Shweta mein Ruhi jo bassi hui hai.
Aap ne jiss andaz mein iss update ko likha hai wo gajab ki hai.
Aap ho jo sahi ko galat aut galat ko sahi peah kar sakte ho apne bunde hue shabdon ki jaal mein. Jiss tarah se raat ki aur usski tanhaayi mein dil ke armanon ko ubharte hue likha hai ussko mujhe kayi baar padhna para. Laga ke kissi upanyaas ke pannon ko padh rahi hoon.
Haan iss update mein ye jaan kar bahut acha laga ke Saeed ko usske kiye ki saja mil gayi aur Mehboob aur Ruhi par lagi tohmat jhoot saabit hui
Behtareen update casi ji. :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:

thanks very very much for the lovely appreciation Swathi dear
 

Casinar

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Wow Casinar ji your narrative descriptions kill.
You are just admirable.
Don't know how you do that. Just amazing.
This update is just excellent, magnificent, formidable, awesome.
The way you describe feelings and atmosphere plus desire within is MAGICAL. Being a non hindi writer to excel in writing like this is over praiseworthy. :bow: :adore:
I just loved this update from start to end and wanted to read much more.
Each and every paragraph is important and hv its place in the update and brings its plus to the update.
Happy to know about Saeed's confession and his deserving situation.
Abhi was already sure that he had lied but now got it confirmed.
So Ruhi and Mehboob NEVER had any such illicit relationship. But Saeed said instead Ruhi considered as a father and was rather AFRAID OF HIM FOR A CERTAIN REASON...... That reason is yet to be revealed.
We hv beed reading this since the days Abhi was working there and 18 years have elapsed still we hv not yet known that REASON.
Hope that will now come up in future updates.
Thanks very much for this wonderful updarte Casinar ji. Hats off. :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:

thanks so very very much for this beautiful appreciative review Amity dear :love:
 
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