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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED
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Maanti hoon main. Haan karma hota hai. Jo karo so bharo.
Manoj ko mila jo ussne boya.
Jo bowoge so paoge yehi hai na kahawat.
Abhi usske ghar ka mehmaan tha jissko ussne beijat karke nikala tha to aaj upar wale ne ussko ussi beijati se mara.
Jabardast likha hai aap ne bhai.
Abhi ka dil dekho ab bhi wo usske bachon ka fikar kar raha hai. Insaaniyat hai Abhi mein jo Manoj mein nahin tha.
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Excellently written update mate.
Very deep this update indeed.
So shweta divorced her husband and returned to her mother and had a relationship with Abhi for the next 6 years. Why not when she is happy with Abhi she had the right to take her decision. And that was fair.
I have a clear idea of what secret shweta had to talk to Abhi but never did. I do not want to be the spoiler so I keep it for myself.
Good that Abhi was able to plan his meeting with Shweta and Navina never knew and never felt hurt.
And yes good that during the years Abhi was happy with Shweta. Happiness is important than anything else. It matters the most.
The update the suddenly turns dramatic when Shweta announced the death of Manoj which Abhi was unaware.....
The terrible accident of Manoj at the place where Abhi had cursed Manoj the day he was pushed from Ruhi's door.....
Yes how can I forget that. It was the 5th January when Abhi had been there to talk to Ruhi's parents and to ask Ruhi's hand in marriage..... Manoj had rejected and pushed Abhi on a rainy day when the whole country was covered with rainfall....
You copied the part of update 41.... that was a very painful update which had made me cry..... And the moment I had read that part then itself I was sure Manoj was cursed and will pay as Abhi's heart was really aching that day and he was suffering.
So it happened but that affected Abhi as he felt guilty for having cursed Manoj in that day.
Back home he cried and Navina supported him, calmed him....
To answer your questions yes bro I agree Karma exists.....
Its like you reap what you sow.
There is a famous saying, it goes;
'When you sow the wind, you will harvest the tempest'
So Monoj's part was decided bit came late but it came.
Wonderful update casi bro.
Hats off.
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Woooooowww
Very good update
Well written and described
Pahle update ki baat kar lete hai..... kyoki baaki jo chije hai.....unki baat aaj kaafi deep jaane waali hai....
Shweta ne divorce le liya or isme uske husband ne bhi koi dikkat nahi ki....
Matlab dono ko hee lag gaya tha ki ye Rishta jyada nahi chal sakta....OR jab aisa lagne lage....to sabse achcha vikalp hota hai....divorce.....
Abhi or Shweta ka Rishta kayam hai....Jo ki agle 6 saal tak chala....Shweta ko Abhi chahiye tha....Abhi ko Ruhi ka ahsaas.....Jo ki use Shweta bakhubi de rahi thi....
Wo baat alag hai ki abhi wo sab bas Ruhi ke ahsaas ke liye kar raha tha...lr Shweta kisi se badla lene ke liye....
Lekin Wo bhi iss chij ko enjoy kar rahi thi....
Shweta ke mann mai kai raaz chhupe hue hai....jinhe se 1 to hai ki wo kiske ek badla le rahi hai....2 hai uska or Ruhi ka Rishta....OR bhi kai ho sakte hai....
Shweta ne bahut bar Abhi ko batana chaha lekin bata nahi paayi....isme ak correction hai.....
Agar aadmi koi kaam dil se karna chahta hai to use kar hee deta hai...agar wo use nahi karna chahta to iska matlab hai ki wo uss kaam koi important nahi maanta....kabhi jyada hee jarurat hui to kar liya jaayega ....nahi to koi baat nahi....
Abhi ne Ruhi ke liye nahi pucha....iska kaaran hai kyoki use Ruhi ka ahsaas uski feeling....Shweta mai mill rahi thi....OR baaki ka samay Navina or kaam mai nikal jata hoga....
Abhi Shweta ke ghar bhi gaya....kai bar....wo bhi tab jab uske father ki death hui....yanha ak baat gor karne waali hai....ki jab wo wanha gaya to kya aise samay bhi.....jab ki family me kisi ki death hui hai....
Wo bhi Ruhi ke pita ke bhai ki....kya tab bhi Ruhi ki family wanha nahi gayi....OR gayi bhi tab bhi kya Abhi se mulakaat dur lekin un logo ne ya khud Abhi ne unme se kisi ko bhi nahi dekha......strange...
Shweta ne apni beti ka naam Abhi ki company se inspire ho kar rakha....ye chij dikhaai hai ki wo abhi ko kitna chahti hai... abhi ke AA use kiya thik.....lekin Ruhi ka naam kyo use kiya....
Beshak dono ne ak dusre ko 6 saal tak kaafi pyar diya....itna ki abhi ko ak pal ke liye bhi Ruhi yaad nahi aayi....kyoki uska pratiroop Abhi ke saath tha....Shweta ke roop mai....
OR abhi to waise bhi pyar ka bhukha tha...use jo Ruhi ne nahi diya...wo Shweta se mila....
Dono ki mulakaato ka kisi ko pata nahi chala.....good.....dono ne hee kaafi chalaki dikhaai.....OR abhi jo Ruhi se ak beti chahta tha use wo beti aaruhi me mil gayi.....jis par ki wo apna sara pyar leta raha hai.....
Ye miss print hai ya sahi mai..... mai jo padh raha hu wo hee hai....
Miss print he to thik nahi to kaafi badi baat ho sakti hai....jiske baare me mai aapke reply ke baad kahunga....
Shweta ne Abhi ko Manoj ke baare mai bataya....jis ko sun kar Abhi kaafi roya....isliye nahi ki Manoj mar gaya balki iss lawyer ki uske bachche bhi hai....chhote or abhi ko laga ki uski di hui haay ke kaaran Manoj ke saath aisa hua....
Kyoki jo bhi Manoj ke saath hua uski saza indirectly Manoj ke bachchon ko bhi milegi....jab ki unka isme kya dosh .....yahi soch kar Abhi ko bhi rona aa gaya....
Kaafi jor se roya Abhi ak kyoki Manoj or uske bachchon ko soch kar or dusra uske marne se kuch takleef Ruhi ko bhi hui hogi...OR 3rd and most use wo din yaad aa gaya jab Manoj ne use beijjat karke nikala tha...OR abhi ne baarish me bheegte hue....apne pure mann or sach he di se Manoj ko badd dua di thi....
Abhi ko laga ki agar wo badd dua na deta to shaayad aisa na hota....uske or uske bachchon ke saath....
Abhi ko lagta hai ki ye sab uski haay ke kaaran hua....jabki baaki logo ke liye ye ak normal accident tha jisme ki koi Marr gaya...
Abhi Navina Shweta or shaayad Ruhi bhi jaanti thi....isliye unhe ye Abhi ki badd dua ka asar lag sakta hai....
Lekin baaki logo ke liye ye ak normal see ghatna hai jo kisi ke saath bhi ho sakti hai....
Jaisa ki maine pahle bhi kaha hai.....
2 alag alag ghatnaao ko aapas me jod kar unka parinam nikalna....jabki vastav mai unka koi sambandh na ho....
Navina ne Abhi ko samjah ya ki tit for tat.....jaisa usne Abhi ke saath kiya waisa hee uske saath hua....
Haa ye baat mai bhi maanta hu ki ghar aaye mehmaan ka niradar nahi karna chahiye....
Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Anyways Very good and emotional update...
Thanks.....
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HA TO AB BAAT KARTE HAI HAM KARMA KI......
ISME MAI PAHLE HEE CLEAR KAR DU....MAI MYTHOLOGY KE LIYE KUCH BHI NAHI KAHUNGA....YE CHIJ MERE COURSE KE BAHAR HAI....
Mere liye karma bas itna hai ki apna kaam bina kisi ka dil dukhaaye ya bina kisi ka hak maare karte jaao....
Ye hee karma hai....and that's it.....
Ab agar ham story ke hisaab se baat kare....to
Manoj ke karma achche nahi the...isliye use saza mili....Saeed ke karma achche nahi the use bhi bhagwaan ne saza de diya....kyoki unhone kisi ka dil dukhaya tha or us ne unhe sach he dil se dua di thi....ki unhe bhagwan dekhega....
In short jo unhone kiya uska fal hee unhe future Mai mila...
OR agar ise aise hee dekhe to ho sakta hai ki abhi or Ruhi ke relation me jis jis ne bhi dikkat daale thi sabhi ko koi na koi saza bhagwaan de....kyoki unhone 2 sachcha pyar karne waalo ko alag kiya....unka dil dukhaya...
Lekin....lekin....phir Ruhi ka kya....usne bhi to Abhi ke saath galat kiya hai....to kya wo bhi karma ka fal bhugtegi.....
OR agar isi baat ko ham aage lekar jaaye to....Abhi ne bhi to galat kiya hai..
Jo Navina use itna pyar karti hai... qo jaisa hai use waisa hee accept kiya....use kabhi bhi Abhi ne Ruhi jitna pyar nahi diya.. ya phir Abhi ko har mod par sambhala hai...uski madad ki hai....qo bhi bina kuch maange...ya khushi khushi....
Uss Navina ko Abhi dhoka de raha hai....Abhi ka pyar uski tadap uski mazburi....ya Shweta ka pyar usme ruhi ki koshish....sab....sab ke sab ak alag chij hai....
Lekin Navina ke pith piche use dhoka dena ya uska vishwas todna.....ye bhi to bahut jyada galat mai aata hai....sab bakwaas hai hakikat ye hai ki Navina ke saath galat ho raha hai....
Navina ka pyar or samarpan unn sabhi baato par bhaari hai....jiske kaaran Shweta or abhi saath hai....
To kya Abhi ko bhi karma ka saamna karna padega...ye mera sawaal hai..??..
Thanks.....
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Shweta did well by divorcing her husband, because when a relationship is formed, it is very important to be happy in it, if there is no happiness in that relationship, then it seems like a burden to us.
On the other hand, the bonding and relation of Shweta and Abhi goes very deep. We all are desperate to know what happened, 6 years have passed but it could not happen because Abhi did not ask anything and Shweta did not tell anything.
Manoj was treated badly by Abhi that day. I still remember everything today, he might have been sentenced for his mistake.
I don't know about other people but I believe in karma. It is not a good thing to hurt someone.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
On the other hand, the bonding and relation of Shweta and Abhi goes very deep. We all are desperate to know what happened, 6 years have passed but it could not happen because Abhi did not ask anything and Shweta did not tell anything.
Manoj was treated badly by Abhi that day. I still remember everything today, he might have been sentenced for his mistake.
I don't know about other people but I believe in karma. It is not a good thing to hurt someone.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Abhi bhi nahi bachega....
Meine apne comment me ye point kuchh sochkar janbujhkar nahi likha... Lekin clear kar diya ki apke achche karm se apke bure karm ka fal na mile... Aisa nahi ho sakta.... Achchhai ka fal agar achchha mila apko....to bure karm ka bura fal bji jarur milega... Bach nahi sakte....