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Romance Vanita aur Kabadiwale ki love story

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Hello everyone, Aaj main apke liye ek story likhne ja raha hoon. Ye story Yahan likhi gyi kyi stories se inspired hai. Ye kahani ek aise pyaar ki hai jo asambhav sa lagta tha..par sambhav huya, Aur kaise pyaar andha kar deta hai, pyaar mein hum kuch faisle aise kar jaate hain jo sahi hote huye bhi galat hote hain aur jiska asar kyi zindagion par hota hai. Aur ek baat.. main koi lekhak nhi hoon bass apne shounk se likh rha hoon, agar apko pasand aye to comment zaroor kre, lekin agar kuch thik na lagge fir bhi main chahunga ke aap mujhe batayein.


Ye kahani hai Jammu ke ek pariwaar ki eklauti ladki Vanita ki. Jisne abhi abhi 12th ke exam diye hain aur kuch hi din pehle 18 ki huyi hai. Vanita bala ki khoobsurat aur dikhne mein behadd masoom c hai, hassmukh chehra, Gora rang, rasile gulabi honth, kadd 5 foot 4 inch, slim lekin sudol jism. uske badan murde ki bhi kaamvasna jga de. Vanita ek kachi-kali thi, Wo Jammu ke ek girls school mein padti thi aur abhi abhi usne 12th ke exam diye the aur 18 ki huyi thi, par dikhne me uski age 18 se bhi kamm lgti thi. Vanita study mein bohot tez thi aur ghar ke kaam mein bhi. Vanita ka kabhi koi boyfriend nhi tha, uska dhyaan apni family aur study mein hi tha.


Vanita ke ghar mein Uske papa Pranav Singh aur uski daadi thi. Uske papa civil Engg. the. Pichle saal Vanita ki maa ka dehant ho gya tha. Vanita ek sidhe-sadhe, bohot ache aur izzatdaar pariwar se thi. Maa ke dehant ke baad ghar ki responsibilty bohot ache se nibha rhi thi. Vanita apni daadi se bohot pyaar krti thi, uski daadi ko bina kaan ki machine lgye sunta nhi tha aur nazar bhi kamm thi. Vanita ki daadi kuch mahine unke ghar aur kuch mahine Vanite ke chacha ke ghar rehti thi. Aaj kal Vanita ki daadi unke chacha ke ghar gyi thi. To Vanita din mein ghar pe akeli hoti thi.


Kuch hi din pehle Vanita ke papa ne useke birthday par usse scooty gift ki thi. Vanita scooty ko lekar behadd khush thi. Vanita ko friends ke saath faltu gumna firna itna pasand nhi tha usse ghar mein rehna hi pasand tha, lekin fir bhi wo khush thi ke abh scooty pe kahi bhi aa ja sakti hai, aur usse ab papa se kuch mangavne ki zaroort nhi wo abh khud hi bazaar ja sakti hai. Vanita ke papa ko Vanita par pura bharosa tha ke unki bachi bohat hi samjhdaar hai aur wo bhi kabhi Vanita ko rokte-tokte nhi the.


Vanita ka ghar shehar se thoda bahar tha, isi liye aas paas traffic bohot hi kamm tha. Jab bhi Vanita ghar se bahar nikalti, uski khoobsurti har ek ko apni aur aakarshit krti. Buddha ho ya jawaan sabki nazar bss us par hoti. Lekin Vanita kisi ko bhav nhi deti thi. Papa ki Pari jo thi.


Lekin wo kehte hain na ke pyaar andha hota hai. kya pta kon pyaar mein andha ho jaye.


Vanita ke ghar ke thodi hi dur ik kabaadiwala rehta tha, Manohar laal. Uska chhota sa ghar tha aur usi ghar ke bahar wale kamre ko usne kabaad ka store bna rkha tha. Manohar laal ki umaar lagabhag 55 saal thi, Manohar sanwale rang ka, hatta-katta insaan tha. uska kadd 5” 8’ tha. uske sir par baal bohot kamm the lagh-bhag ganja tha, dekhne mein wo chor-uchakka zada lagta tha par chor nhi tha. Manohar paan bidi ka shounkeen tha. Abb greeb ke aur kya shounk ho skte hain. Pariwaar uska tha nhi, lekin fir bhi apni mauj mein jeene wala insaan tha. Din bhar gali muhalle mein ghoom kar kabaad ikatha krta fir use bech kar kuch paise bna leta. yahi uski life thi. Manohar ki ek khasiyat thi, wo tha uska hamesha attam vishwas se jeena aur khush rehna.



Ek din Manohar laal Vanita ke ghar ke paas apna jholla liye ghoom rha tha. Tabhi Vanita ko usne pehli baar dekha aur dekhta hi reh gya, kuch pal ke liye jaise sab kuch thamm sa gya. bass wo Vanita ko dekhe ja rha tha. Vanita apni scooty se ghar ka kuch samaan bazaar se leke ayi thi. Us din Vanita salwaar suit mein thi, Usne sirf ankhon mein kajal lagya tha, aur koi make up ki usse zaroort bhi nhi thi.


Manohar jis tarah se usse dekh rha tha aisa lagg rha tha jaise usne kisi pari ko dekh liya ho. Vanita ne apni scooty ghar andar ki aur gate band kr diya. Tabhi jaise Manohar hosh mein aya. ussne socha ye kya houya? larkiya ton ussne pehle bhi dekhi thi, par aaj kuch alag ehsaas tha. Manohar laal soch rha tha ke wo larki bohot kamm umar ki lagti hai, use bura bhi lgga ke wo uss larki ke dada ki age ka hoga. Vanita ko iss nazar se dekhne ke liye usse thoda bura bhi lagg rha tha. Vanita ke husan ko apne dil me samaye wo apne ghar ki or chal diya.



Par reh reh kar Manohar ke mann mein Vanita ka masoom chehra ghoom rha tha. Wo baar baar koshish krta ke Vanita uske mann mein na aye par fir bhi uska dil usse baar baar dekhne ka kar rha tha. Abb chahe koi kuch soche par kya ye pehli nazar ka pyaar tha? ya bss ek aakarshan? lekin Hawas to nhi thi. Manohar greeb tha par dil ka bura nhi tha. Ummar ke difference ki wajah se Manohar ko bura bhi lagg rha tha ke uss larki ki khubsoorti use itna aakarshit kr rhi hai. Par dil to dil hai…aur pyaar andha bhi hota hai.


Agle din na chahte huye bhi Manohar laal Vanita ke ghar ke paas gya, wo apna jholla uthyae Vanita ke ghar ke aas paas chakkar lga rha tha. Uss area ke log Manohar ko jante the or usse imaandar insaan mante the, to kisi ko Manohar par koi shakk bhi nhi tha. Bas wo uss hoor pari ki ek jhalak pana chahta tha. Bohot time ho gya usse chakkr lgaate lekin usse Vanita nhi dikhi. Tabhi Manohar ki kismat ne uska saath diya. Vanita kuch kaam se chatt par gyi. Tabhi Manohar laal ne dusri baar vanita ko dekh, fir se whi ehsaas, jaise waqt thamm sa gya ho. Manohar mann mein soch rha tha ke bhagwaan ne kya hussan diya hai. Vanita 2min ke liye hi chatt par ayi thi, par ye 2min Manohar ke liye kaafi the. Vanita ne Manohar ko apni aur dekhte dekha, wo bhi soch rhi thi ke ye kabaadiwala bhuddha kaise tak-taki lagake usse dekh rha hai. Vanita ne apna chehra dusri aur kr liya aur Manohar ko nazar-andaaz krte huye chali gyi. Vanita 12th ke exam ke baad ghar par hi rhti thi, abhi uska result nhi aya tha.



Ab ye roz ka kaam ho gya, Manohar har roz Vanita ke ghar ke chakkar lgatta aur usse dur se hi dekh kar khush ho jata. Manohar laal dil hi dil mein Vanita ko chahne lgga tha. Vanita apne aap mein mast thi, Vanita ne kyi baar Manohar laal ko apne ghar ke paas dekha tha, Vanita soch rhi the abb ye buddha bhi uspe line maar rha hai. lekin kabadiwale par wo kyu dhyaan deti ?, Usse to Manohar shakal sekoi chor uchakka lgga tha. Lekin usse kya ptta tha ke uske baap se zada umar ka ek kabadiwala usse dil hi dil mein chahta hai.



Pichle kyi dino se Manohar laal Vanita ke husan ka deedar kr rha tha. Shayad usse pyaar tha iss nazuk pari se. Sundar larkiyion ke diwaane bohot hoten hain, isme kya badi baat hai. Par Manohar laal ke liye badi baat thi. Manohar laal samaaz ke nichle tabke se tha, uper se garib, badsurat aur buddha bhi. Saari batein uske pyaar ke raste mein diwaar ban ke khadi thi. Ek baat Manohar ko dusron se alag bnati thi aur wo tha uska ashawadi hona. Usne Vanita se baat krne ka faisla liya. Ab chahe jo bhi ho ab wo apne bass dil ki sunega. Ab hum jo bhi soche, par kya pyaar ki koi umar hoti hai? kya kisi buddhe ko pyaar nhi ho skta? ho sakta hai... aur Manohar ko hua bhi.
 

Abhishek Kumar98

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Hello everyone, Aaj main apke liye ek story likhne ja raha hoon. Ye story Yahan likhi gyi kyi stories se inspired hai. Ye kahani ek aise pyaar ki hai jo asambhav sa lagta tha..par sambhav huya, Aur kaise pyaar andha kar deta hai, pyaar mein hum kuch faisle aise kar jaate hain jo sahi hote huye bhi galat hote hain aur jiska asar kyi zindagion par hota hai. Aur ek baat.. main koi lekhak nhi hoon bass apne shounk se likh rha hoon, agar apko pasand aye to comment zaroor kre, lekin agar kuch thik na lagge fir bhi main chahunga ke aap mujhe batayein.


Ye kahani hai Jammu ke ek pariwaar ki eklauti ladki Vanita ki. Jisne abhi abhi 12th ke exam diye hain aur kuch hi din pehle 18 ki huyi hai. Vanita bala ki khoobsurat aur dikhne mein behadd masoom c hai, hassmukh chehra, Gora rang, rasile gulabi honth, kadd 5 foot 4 inch, slim lekin sudol jism. uske badan murde ki bhi kaamvasna jga de. Vanita ek kachi-kali thi, Wo Jammu ke ek girls school mein padti thi aur abhi abhi usne 12th ke exam diye the aur 18 ki huyi thi, par dikhne me uski age 18 se bhi kamm lgti thi. Vanita study mein bohot tez thi aur ghar ke kaam mein bhi. Vanita ka kabhi koi boyfriend nhi tha, uska dhyaan apni family aur study mein hi tha.


Vanita ke ghar mein Uske papa Pranav Singh aur uski daadi thi. Uske papa civil Engg. the. Pichle saal Vanita ki maa ka dehant ho gya tha. Vanita ek sidhe-sadhe, bohot ache aur izzatdaar pariwar se thi. Maa ke dehant ke baad ghar ki responsibilty bohot ache se nibha rhi thi. Vanita apni daadi se bohot pyaar krti thi, uski daadi ko bina kaan ki machine lgye sunta nhi tha aur nazar bhi kamm thi. Vanita ki daadi kuch mahine unke ghar aur kuch mahine Vanite ke chacha ke ghar rehti thi. Aaj kal Vanita ki daadi unke chacha ke ghar gyi thi. To Vanita din mein ghar pe akeli hoti thi.


Kuch hi din pehle Vanita ke papa ne useke birthday par usse scooty gift ki thi. Vanita scooty ko lekar behadd khush thi. Vanita ko friends ke saath faltu gumna firna itna pasand nhi tha usse ghar mein rehna hi pasand tha, lekin fir bhi wo khush thi ke abh scooty pe kahi bhi aa ja sakti hai, aur usse ab papa se kuch mangavne ki zaroort nhi wo abh khud hi bazaar ja sakti hai. Vanita ke papa ko Vanita par pura bharosa tha ke unki bachi bohat hi samjhdaar hai aur wo bhi kabhi Vanita ko rokte-tokte nhi the.


Vanita ka ghar shehar se thoda bahar tha, isi liye aas paas traffic bohot hi kamm tha. Jab bhi Vanita ghar se bahar nikalti, uski khoobsurti har ek ko apni aur aakarshit krti. Buddha ho ya jawaan sabki nazar bss us par hoti. Lekin Vanita kisi ko bhav nhi deti thi. Papa ki Pari jo thi.


Lekin wo kehte hain na ke pyaar andha hota hai. kya pta kon pyaar mein andha ho jaye.


Vanita ke ghar ke thodi hi dur ik kabaadiwala rehta tha, Manohar laal. Uska chhota sa ghar tha aur usi ghar ke bahar wale kamre ko usne kabaad ka store bna rkha tha. Manohar laal ki umaar lagabhag 55 saal thi, Manohar sanwale rang ka, hatta-katta insaan tha. uska kadd 5” 8’ tha. uske sir par baal bohot kamm the lagh-bhag ganja tha, dekhne mein wo chor-uchakka zada lagta tha par chor nhi tha. Manohar paan bidi ka shounkeen tha. Abb greeb ke aur kya shounk ho skte hain. Pariwaar uska tha nhi, lekin fir bhi apni mauj mein jeene wala insaan tha. Din bhar gali muhalle mein ghoom kar kabaad ikatha krta fir use bech kar kuch paise bna leta. yahi uski life thi. Manohar ki ek khasiyat thi, wo tha uska hamesha attam vishwas se jeena aur khush rehna.



Ek din Manohar laal Vanita ke ghar ke paas apna jholla liye ghoom rha tha. Tabhi Vanita ko usne pehli baar dekha aur dekhta hi reh gya, kuch pal ke liye jaise sab kuch thamm sa gya. bass wo Vanita ko dekhe ja rha tha. Vanita apni scooty se ghar ka kuch samaan bazaar se leke ayi thi. Us din Vanita salwaar suit mein thi, Usne sirf ankhon mein kajal lagya tha, aur koi make up ki usse zaroort bhi nhi thi.


Manohar jis tarah se usse dekh rha tha aisa lagg rha tha jaise usne kisi pari ko dekh liya ho. Vanita ne apni scooty ghar andar ki aur gate band kr diya. Tabhi jaise Manohar hosh mein aya. ussne socha ye kya houya? larkiya ton ussne pehle bhi dekhi thi, par aaj kuch alag ehsaas tha. Manohar laal soch rha tha ke wo larki bohot kamm umar ki lagti hai, use bura bhi lgga ke wo uss larki ke dada ki age ka hoga. Vanita ko iss nazar se dekhne ke liye usse thoda bura bhi lagg rha tha. Vanita ke husan ko apne dil me samaye wo apne ghar ki or chal diya.



Par reh reh kar Manohar ke mann mein Vanita ka masoom chehra ghoom rha tha. Wo baar baar koshish krta ke Vanita uske mann mein na aye par fir bhi uska dil usse baar baar dekhne ka kar rha tha. Abb chahe koi kuch soche par kya ye pehli nazar ka pyaar tha? ya bss ek aakarshan? lekin Hawas to nhi thi. Manohar greeb tha par dil ka bura nhi tha. Ummar ke difference ki wajah se Manohar ko bura bhi lagg rha tha ke uss larki ki khubsoorti use itna aakarshit kr rhi hai. Par dil to dil hai…aur pyaar andha bhi hota hai.


Agle din na chahte huye bhi Manohar laal Vanita ke ghar ke paas gya, wo apna jholla uthyae Vanita ke ghar ke aas paas chakkar lga rha tha. Uss area ke log Manohar ko jante the or usse imaandar insaan mante the, to kisi ko Manohar par koi shakk bhi nhi tha. Bas wo uss hoor pari ki ek jhalak pana chahta tha. Bohot time ho gya usse chakkr lgaate lekin usse Vanita nhi dikhi. Tabhi Manohar ki kismat ne uska saath diya. Vanita kuch kaam se chatt par gyi. Tabhi Manohar laal ne dusri baar vanita ko dekh, fir se whi ehsaas, jaise waqt thamm sa gya ho. Manohar mann mein soch rha tha ke bhagwaan ne kya hussan diya hai. Vanita 2min ke liye hi chatt par ayi thi, par ye 2min Manohar ke liye kaafi the. Vanita ne Manohar ko apni aur dekhte dekha, wo bhi soch rhi thi ke ye kabaadiwala bhuddha kaise tak-taki lagake usse dekh rha hai. Vanita ne apna chehra dusri aur kr liya aur Manohar ko nazar-andaaz krte huye chali gyi. Vanita 12th ke exam ke baad ghar par hi rhti thi, abhi uska result nhi aya tha.



Ab ye roz ka kaam ho gya, Manohar har roz Vanita ke ghar ke chakkar lgatta aur usse dur se hi dekh kar khush ho jata. Manohar laal dil hi dil mein Vanita ko chahne lgga tha. Vanita apne aap mein mast thi, Vanita ne kyi baar Manohar laal ko apne ghar ke paas dekha tha, Vanita soch rhi the abb ye buddha bhi uspe line maar rha hai. lekin kabadiwale par wo kyu dhyaan deti ?, Usse to Manohar shakal sekoi chor uchakka lgga tha. Lekin usse kya ptta tha ke uske baap se zada umar ka ek kabadiwala usse dil hi dil mein chahta hai.



Pichle kyi dino se Manohar laal Vanita ke husan ka deedar kr rha tha. Shayad usse pyaar tha iss nazuk pari se. Sundar larkiyion ke diwaane bohot hoten hain, isme kya badi baat hai. Par Manohar laal ke liye badi baat thi. Manohar laal samaaz ke nichle tabke se tha, uper se garib, badsurat aur buddha bhi. Saari batein uske pyaar ke raste mein diwaar ban ke khadi thi. Ek baat Manohar ko dusron se alag bnati thi aur wo tha uska ashawadi hona. Usne Vanita se baat krne ka faisla liya. Ab chahe jo bhi ho ab wo apne bass dil ki sunega. Ab hum jo bhi soche, par kya pyaar ki koi umar hoti hai? kya kisi buddhe ko pyaar nhi ho skta? ho sakta hai... aur Manohar ko hua bhi.
Congratulations Bhai for your new thread Bhai es title ki story Mai bahut din se chahta tha aur es story ko aapne start bhi bahut achha kiya introduction bhi thik hai story ka plot bhi bahut achha hai bas hero ki age 26 ya jyada se jyada 30 kar dete toh jyada hum log story se attach ho pate aur baki story ko dheere dheere seduction aur love ke sath aage badhana aur ho sake toh lund size bada rakhna aur stamina bhi jisse heroine akele handle na kar paye isse ye hoga ki kuch aur female characters aap badha sakte ho suggestion bura laga ho toh sorry but koi bhi likhi hi isliye jati taki readers usse apnapan aur maja mehsus karke maje le sake toh koshish karna ki age kam kar sako hero ki thodi
 
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Congratulations Bhai for your new thread Bhai es title ki story Mai bahut din se chahta tha aur es story ko aapne start bhi bahut achha kiya introduction bhi thik hai story ka plot bhi bahut achha hai bas hero ki age 26 ya jyada se jyada 30 kar dete toh jyada hum log story se attach ho pate aur baki story ko dheere dheere seduction aur love ke sath aage badhana aur ho sake toh lund size bada rakhna aur stamina bhi jisse heroine akele handle na kar paye isse ye hoga ki kuch aur female characters aap badha sakte ho suggestion bura laga ho toh sorry but koi bhi likhi hi isliye jati taki readers usse apnapan aur maja mehsus karke maje le sake toh koshish karna ki age kam kar sako hero ki thodi
Bura lagne wali koi baat nhi bhai, ek writer yhi to chahta hai ke usse feedback mile. Iss story ko dheere dheere seduction aur love ke sath hi aage badhaya jayega. thanks
 

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Bhai sach mein yaar gajab Story he bohat dino baad aisi story dekhne ko mili aur behetareen start diye ho majaa aagaya
 

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well for once i thought that it's going to be an another lame interfaith story .. thank god it's not ...

it's totally surprising .. very well articulated .. keep it pure and i hope u are not going to contaminate this story with illogical idiotic sexual incidents ...

liked so far .. keep at it .. good work ...
 
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bas bhai ye story bij mein chod k mat janaa aur jaise pyaar se pura starting diye ho waise hi rakhna ye nhi bohat female character dal do Vanita ko sbse chudwa do aise Mt karna aaram se manohar k Vanita se setting karao pehele ache se usko manohar se chudwa phir aage ka aaram se dekhna........
 

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well for once i thought that it's going to be an another lame interfaith story .. thank god it's not ...

it's totally surprising .. very well articulated .. keep it pure and i hope u are not going to contaminate this story with illogical idiotic sexual incidents ...

liked so far .. keep at it .. good work ...
When I started writing I had this in mind that I won't add meaningless sex. thanks
 
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