Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Ak47203]

Waiting for next update

 

[king cobra]

waiting waiting waiting

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Yoo jung...benchod ye to bahut hi jayada hi chuparustam nikali...
Iake pass bahut hi unic ability aur power hai..
Yoo jung ne pahale Aarav ko bachaya tha aur ab Aage ke Sathiyon Ko Bhi bachane ki koshish kar rahi hai

Yoo-Jung ka character un character me se hai jo story me lamba chale gye, There will be some Filler Character, Lekin Yoo-Jung important Character me se ek hai

Daisuke..... Unki Tarif jitni ki Jaaye utani kam Khud Ghayal Hote Hue bhi Apne Sathi ko Akele Nahin chhodana inke majbut charcter ko dikhata hai.

Sabhi to nahi lekin jo dil se force join karte hai, Unhe apne saathiyo aur dusro ki parwah hoti hai, Daisuke aisi halat me bhi apne andar ke farz ko bhula nahi sakta

Shandar update bhai...

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Bhai 1 number ka update hai dil kush krdiya aaj jaldi update dekar
Or kuch kya likhu kuch smj nhi aa rha hai

Bhai jo acha lage ap likh sakte ho, Update me jo galti dikhe wo point out bhi ker sakte ho,

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Very nice update bhai akhirkar sabhi sathi mil gye unhe to yoo jung bhi fire clan se belong karti hai slime auraarav ki bonding badhti ja rhi hai aur slime ka level bhi up ho rha hai vansh to sach me chutiya hai use paiso ka ghamand kuch jyada hi hai

for your precious words

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Best God arv ko new ability mili hai kuch new dekhne ko mile ga

Aur milta rahe ga bhi

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Aarav ne kisi tarah Isabelle ko pakad liya girte hue jaise bhi usko bachane ki kosish to karni hogi ushi ke karan to Aarav aaj jinda hai.aur wo khud usko zindagi dene ke karan maut aur zindagi ke bich me jhul rahi hai.Isabelle ke liye ya to usko theek hona chahiye taki wo aage ki zindagi theek se gujaar sake ya fir usko mukt ho jana chahiye

Ye he Aarav ker bhi raha hai, Bina ye soche k3 wo agle chhor ko pakar paye ga ya nahi kud jana har koi nahi ker sakta

chahiye.slime ki power badh gayi ek baar fir se idhar yoo jung ke andar ek aur power aag nikalne wali bhi hai.mast update dost

for your precious words

 

[Salty~Otaku]

behtreen mere dost..
buhat achi story likhii hai aap nha..
maza aa raha hai phar kar..
aapki story ahista ahista bulid hoo rahii hai..
story ka har character bulid hoo raha hai.
khas kar Aarve ka character.
aise hi likhte jaiyen shukriyaa

and ...Ap aise he saath bane rahiye ga story abhi bohat aage tak jaye gi

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Update is brilliant someone suggested this story in werewolf brother I'm quite surprised you are doing good job brother

I'm trying my best to give everyone a great experience with my stories... But as a new writer, I was just a little disappointed when I didn't get much response. He must have promoted the story to make me feel good.

have only one request and another readers have also same request if you have started this story so please be consistent with story and complete story

I came to write a story because I want to write it and see it through to completion. I'm going to do my best to take my story to the end as I envisioned it. However, if unforeseen circumstances arise, I will strive to provide a concise ending, but I won't leave it unfinished.

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Kuch ideas hai kal tak ju ko batao ga

Thanks for your suggestions