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Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

Who are your two favorite male characters in this story?


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Salty~Otaku

ᴺᵒ ᴹᵃᵗᵗᵉʳ ᵂʰᵃᵗ ᴵ’ᵐ ᶜˡᵒᶜᵏⁱⁿᵍ ᴼᵘᵗ ᴮʸ ˢⁱˣ
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Story line bilkul alag hai dono story ki aur aisa hi rahe tabhi maja aayega kahin se bhi mach na hona chahiye jara bhi.uske baad story padhna achchi baat hai
Plot bilkul alag hai, Story ka plot mere Forum per ane se pehle se ready hai, By similarities i mean ke Character ke naam ya Personality thori bohat mil sakti hai :approve:
 

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Update 2 ghante me aa raha hai!
Bahut khusi hui jaankar :vhappy:
 

Salty~Otaku

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UPDATE 24 ~
(DESCENDING FURTHER)




Darkvale Forest ~
55 Hours 47 Minutes Remaining


*Thud*



Yoo-Jung, Daisuke aur Vansh wapis safe zone me aa gye, Wo khayi se neeche jaane ka raasta dhoondh he rahe the jab Dharti kaanpne lagi aur khayi unn ki aankhon ke saamne se khayi gayab ho gayi, Unhe kuch samajh nahi ayi ke huwa kia hai.



Yoo-Jung bhi kuch soch sakti uss se pehle wahan khoonkar Monsters aa gye, Unho ne koshis ki lekin raat ke andhere me un ka larna Mumkin he nahi tha, Aur akhir me unhe retreat karna per gaya.



Daisuke abhi bhi khud ko zimmedar maan raha tha Aarav aur Bella ko khone ka, Wanhi Yoo-Jung aage kis karna hai uss baare me sochne laga, Vansh ko kuch khaas farak nahi parta tha to wo Araam karne ke liye chala gaya.



Yoo-Jung: Daisuke, Ap itna stress mat lo! Abhi tak hume koi bhi notification nahi aya, Matlab wo abhi bhi zinda hai.



Daisuke: Phir kia main yahan Notification ane ka intezar karu? Wo zinda hai lekin kab tak? Jahan wo zinda rehne ki koshis ker rahe hai wanhi main wahan larai me bhi kuch saath nahi ker saka!




Yoo-Jung(Sigh): Aise khud ko Blame ker ke kia mil jaye ga?




Daisuke: Huh?



Yoo-Jung: Kia mil jaye ga? Agar ap abhi nahi lar sake to kia huwa? Hum raat me wahan nahi ja sakte to kia huwa? Hum ye waqt aage ane wale battle ke liye khud ko tayar karne me istemal kare gye, Hamare paas waqt hai ap kuch nat sochiye aur khud ko heal hone do!



Yoo-Jung ki baat sun Daisuke jo sirf ek nazariye se sab kuch daikh raha tha uss ke saamne dusra nazariya khul gaya, Daisuke kuch had tak heal ho chuka tha aur agar usse subha tak ka waqt mil raha tha to wo khud ko 70% Heal ker sakta tha, Usse sirf khud ko Heal karne per dhayan lagane ki zaroorat thi.




Daisuke: Theek keh rahi ho tum! Abhi baahir jaana khatarnak ho ga, Aur hum abhi kuch ker bhi nahi sakte, Jab tak main Heal ker lu tum kuch soch sako to soch lena, Un dono ko subha taj survive karna ho ga.



Yoo-Jung: Hume uss ki zaroorat nahi pare gi! Aarav itni jaldi haar man'nne walo me se nahi hai, Usse apni behan ke paas waapis jo jana hai.



Yoo-Jung ke shabdo me Vishwas jhalak raha tha, Daisuke bhi ek jagha daikh ker lait gaya aur khud ko ek proper rest dene laga, Yoo-Jung ne ek round lagate huwe pura Area secure ker lia.



Area secure karne ke baad Yoo-Jung waapis tent ke paad aa gayi, Daisuke Araam ker raha tha wanhi Vansh baahir baitha kuch ker raha tha.



Yoo-Jung: Kia ker rahe ho? Tumhe khud ko rest dena chahiye abhi ke liye!



Vansh(Mumble): Kuch khaas nahi ker raha! Tumhare uss Aarav ne kuch banane ko kaha hai, Ye mat samajhna ke tum sab ke orders maano ga main, Ye sirf iss liye ker raha hu ke mere survive karne ke Chance barh sake.



Vansh ka lehja khincha huwa tha, Yoo-Jung ne uss ke saath zada behas na karna he sahi samjha, Vansh wanhi rakhe pathro se kuch bana raha tha, Aarav ne uss ko pura samaan yahan subha he rakh dia tha jis se Vansh Blacksmithing ka kaam ache se ker paa raha tha, Wanhi pehli baar Yoo-Jung ko aise pura focuse daikh rahi thi.



Yoo-Jung: Tum ne ye pehle bhi kia hai kiya?



Vansh(Sigh): Huh! Hamari family purane waqto se raja maharajaon ke liye Weapons banati ayi hai, Aj bhi hum apne Weapons ke liye jaane jate hai, Blacksmithing mujhe mere Papa ne seekhai thi.



Vansh ko ye kaam ker ke maza aa raha tha, Wo keh nahi raha tha lekin uss ki baato se pata chal raha tha, Yoo-Jung ko usse distract karna sahi nahi laga to wo ek taraf ja ker baith gayi.



Yoo-Jung Upar sar karte huwe asmaan ko daikhne ki koshis karne lagi, Lekin ped ne sab dhaka huwa tha, Yoo-Jung waise he baithi araam karne lagi.


Yoo-Jung: Hum dono ko apne apno ke liye waapis jana ho ga!


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Darkvale Forest ~
54 Hours 16 Minutes Remaining



*Crunch*

*Shivering*


Aarav ne apne haath Bella me gird lapait liye, Bella ka pura shareer buri tarha kaanp raha tha, Aarav uss ke peeth ko sahlane laga.



Dono Aarav ke dewaar me banaye uss chhed ke andar the, Khayi puri tarha se band ho chuki thi aur dono uss ke beech me phans chuke the, Kaha jaye to dono zinda dafan ho chuke the, wo bhi zameen ke itna andar ke Aarav apni takat se baahir nahi aa sakta tha, Slime ko bhi Aarav ne kho dia tha lekin wo mehsoos ker sakta tha ke Slime abhi zinda thi.



Andheri jagha jahan hawa bhi sirf kuch lamho ke liye he bachi thi, Wahan kaise koi apne hosh me reh sakta tha, Aarav ki higher Intelligence ki wajha se wo apne hosh me tha, Lekin wanhi Bella apni sanity khoti ja rahi thi.



Aarav(Gently): Bella! Daro mat, Hum yahan se baahir nikal jaye gye!



Bella(Frightened): Lekin kaise? Hum yahan se kaise nikle gye Aarav? Agar baki hume bachane aye bhi to wo hume kaise dhoonde gye?


Aarav ne bella ko dobara zor se pakra, Bella Aarav ke upar laiti huwi thi aur uss ka chehra Aarav ke saamne tha, Aarav ke saath hone se wo bilkul hosh nahi kho rahi thi lekin wo kuch soch bhi nahi paa rahi thi.



Wanhi Aarav baahir se to shaant tha, Lekin andar se wo bhi dar raha tha, Lekin abhi uss ke paas darne ka waqt nahi tha usse apne saath Bella ko bhi bachana tha.



Aarav: Mujhe nahi pata kaise! Lekin hum yahan se baahir nikal jaye gye, Hume sirf dhayaan se sochna ho ga!



Bella Aarav ke agosh me khamoosh laiti rahi, Kuch pal pehle he wo moat ke muh se waapis ayi thi, Lekin aise zinda dafan hona uss ke liye aur bhi zada khofnaak tha.




Aarav: Socho! Aise he to koi khayi Achanak band to nahi ho sakti, Kuch to hai jo hum daikh nahi paa rahe.




Aarav ka sawal sunte he jaise Bella ko kuch yaad aya aur uss ke chehre per waapis himmat jhalakne lagi.



Bella: Haan! Jab main Daisuke ke saath raat ko yahan se gayi thi tab bhi yahan koi Cliff nahi thi, Hum Yoo-Jung ke banaye signs ko follow ker rahe the, Daisuke to uss waqt puri tarha exhaust ho ker bus chalte ja rahe the, Lekin main dhayan de rahi thi ke hume koi Yoo-Jung ka banaya koi aur sign mil jaye, Main sure hu yahan raat koi Cliff nahi thi



Bella ki baat sun Aarav bhi heraan ho gaya.



Aarav: Daisuke ko pata hai kia iss baare me?



Bella: Mujhe moka he nahi mila! Pehle to main heraan huwi thi, Lekin tab hamare peeche spiders the to main ne kuch bhi nahi kaha, Ab tum ne pucha to dobara yaad aya.



Bella ki puri baat sun'nne ke baad Aarav samajhne ki koshis karne laga ke akhir kia Majra hai.



Aarav: Agar kal Raat bhi yahan kuch nahi tha? Matlab ye Cliff sirf din me khulti hai! Per kaise? Kia signal ho ga? Sun Light? Wait! Kanhi ye Cliff Forest ka banaya ja to nahi kia? Subha yahan girne ke baad raat hote he deeware gire huwe vyakti ko maarne ke liye?



Aarav ki soch agar sahi thi to Forest ko jitna uss ne samjha thawo uss se bhi zada khatarnak thi, Yahan unhe sirf Rakshason se nahi balke forest se bhi bachna tha, Aarav deewaro ke beech pisne se to bach gaya tha, Lekin wo kab tak yahan reh sakta tha jahan Oxygen bhi khatam hone wali thi.



Aarav: Hume subha tak Survive karna ho ga! Mujhe nahi pata ke hum ye kaise kare gye, Main smart bhi nahi hu, Lekin hume Survive karna ho ga.




Bella: Per kaise? Har guzarta pal pressure barha raha hai.



Aarav: Hume pehle apna mind clear karna ho ga! Kuch aur baate kare kia? Aise dhayan bhatak sakta hai!



Bella: Per hamare paad utna Oxygen nahi-! Well kitna oxygen he bacha le gye hum? Agar ye akhri pal hai to main tum se baat karte huwe ye pal guzarna chahu gi!





Aarav: Wait!



Aarav ne apne Infinite Bag me haath daala aur kuch pal dhoodne ke baad usse ek Flash light mil gayi, Aarav ne uss nikal ker jalaya to andar roshni ho gayi.




Aarav: Kam se kam ab hum ek dusre ko daikh to sakte hai na?




Dono paseene se bheege huwe the, Bella ka bheega huwa badan Aarav ke upar tha, Aarav ne pehle baar kisi larki ko iss angle se daikha tha, Aarav ne foran apni nazre pher li, Dono ke chehre per sharam ki laali chaa gayi



Aarav: Waise! Hum ne abhi tak baahir jo huwa uss baare me bhi baat nahi ki.



Bella(Blush): Kis baare me?




Aarav: Wo baahir jo hum ne kia? W-wo kiss!



Bella: Hmm!



Aarav: Uss ka kia matlab tha? Kia ab hum saath me hai kia?



Bella(Sigh): I'm sorry, Aarav! Mujhe khud nahi pata ke mujhe kia huwa tha, Aur sach kahu to mujhe koi regret nahi hai, Lekin mera pehle se ek fiance hai, Hum dono bachpan se saath hai aur ek dusre ko pyaar karte hai, Agar tum mujhe pehle mile hotw to shayad halaat kuch alag hote, Lekin main usse chhor nahi sakti.




Dono ke beeche dobara shaanti chaa gayi, Jahan Aarav kia bole wo soch raha tha, Wanhi bella ko Aarav ke liye bura lag raha tha, Wo Aarav ko pasand karti thi shayad mohabbat bhi karti thi, Lekin wo apne pehle pyaar ko bhi chhorna nahi chahti thi.



Aarav(Sigh): Huh! Kia he ker sakte hai iss bare me, Sach kahu to mujhe dar lag raha tha ke shayad main tumhari feelings ko accept nahi ker sakta tha, Kiu ke mere paas bhi koi hai jo pehle he mere Dil me jagha bana chuki hai.



Bella ko sun ker kuch sakoon huwa aur un ke beech dobara mahool sahi hone laga.



Bella(Smile) Tum to chupe rustam nikle! Kon hai wo? Ruko- Kanhi Yoo-Jung?



Aarav(Flustered): Nahi, Nahi! Yoo-Jung ke baare me main aisa kaise soch sakta hu? Wo meri Comrade hai! Uss ke baare me to main kab-



Aarav ke bolte bolte he dimagh me wo Yoo-Jung ki moan aa gayi, Aarav ke gaalo per laali barhne lagi jis ko daikh bella hansne lagi.


Aarav (Blush): Sach me wo Yoo-Jung nahi hai! Hanso to mat!




Bella: Haan, Haan, Maan li tumhari baat! To batao kon hai wo?



Aarav: It's complicated! Ek baar me aone thoughts ko clear ker lu to tumhe batao ga, Main aise he kuch Announce nahi karna chahta!



Bella: Done! Main itne se he khush hu ke hamare beech kuch awkward nahi huwa, Hum abhi bhi ek decent conversation ker sakte hai.




Aarav: Bilkul, Lovers nahi to kia? Hum friends to hai he na! Waise meri behan bhi tumhari tarha he ek doctor ban'nna chahti hai, Sab sahi ho jaane ke baad tumhe milwao ga, Tum usse kuch seekha bhi do gi.



Bella: Zaroor! Main usse personally sab seekhao gi.


Dono ke beech sab kuch sahi hone laga, Bina kisi grudge ke dono ek dusre se baat ker he rahe the ke.


*Crack*



Upar se deewar tooti aur Ek chhed me se Slime baahir aa gayi, Aarav ne upar daikha to uss ki ankhe khul gayi, Acid Slime ne upar tak ek chhed bana dia tha jo seedha upar surface per jata tha, wo tha to chota he lekin uss pal wo kisi anmol tohfe se kam nahi tha.



Aarav: Kamal ker dia! Sach me tum to bohat samjdar nikli!



ᕙ(͡°‿ ͡°)ᕗ



Slime Aarav se tareef sun ker khush hone lagi, Aarav ne apni Inner Qi ko apne haath me ikathi karna shuru kia, Inner Qi barhne ke baad Aarav flow ko aur bhi ache se focus ker sakta tha.



[(Inner Qi Gathering) Energies converge in the player's palm]



Aarav ne apne haath me ek jagha puri Inner Qi ko focus kia aur dhayan se usse Hole me bhejne laga.


[(Inner Qi Release) Player channels and unleashes their inner energy.]



[(Groundbreaker Achievement Unlocked) Oxygen Path Carver - Player successfully creates an oxygen route while buried deep underground.]





Aarav ki Inner Qi pure Hole me phel gayi, Aarav ne Oxygen ko upar se neeche kheenchte huwe two wat route bana dia ek oxygen ane ke liye aur ek jaane ke liye, Ab dono ko andar kuch rahat mehsoos huwi.



Bella(Cheerful): Ab to hum subha tak Survive ker sakte hai! Sab iss chotu ki madad se, Waise kon hai ye?



Aarav: Mera naya dost! Main ne abhi tak isse koi naam nahi dia ke kanhi phir main Mana overuse se unconscious na ho jao.


Bella: Main yahan hu na ab! Mere paas bohat Mana store hai tum Naam de sakte ho.



Aarav: Sach me? Phir aj se tumhara naam hai, Lime!


[Player bestows a name upon their loyal Tame Creature]



[Naming Success: Acid Slime officially named (Lime) by the player]



[System Notification (Level Up) Lime, the Acid Slime, has gained a new level of power.]




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Unknown Place ~



Pathar ki bani Vishal murtiye chaaro taraf khari huwi thi, Har Murti alag alag roop ki thi, Har taraf andhera chhaya huwa tha, Uss andhere ke beech me koi Kisi shandar takht ke jaisi kursi per baitha huwa tha.

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Uss ke saamne he bohat si System windows khuli huwi thi, Har window me Tutorial Tower ka alag alag Hissa dikh raha tha, Wanhi ek per Aarav aur Bella to dusri per Yoo-Jung aur baki dono dikhayi de rahe the.



Kursi per baitha wo vyakti un ki har harkat ko dhayan se daikh raha tha, Uss ke paas he ek jagha kaala dhuan ban'nne laga, Lekin wo Vyakti apni nazre system Windows per tikaye baitha raha.



Dhuan me se ek shadow figure uthne laga, Palak jhapakte he wo Dhuan Uss saye me badal gaya aur kursi per baithe vyakti ke peeche aa gaya.

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Saya: to ye hai naye log?



Shadow figure ke peeche ane ke baad bhi wo vyakti wanhi baitha raha-



Vyakti: Haan! Ye he hai jin ko tumhe janchana ho ga!



Shadow Figure aur bhi Window ke nazdeek aa gaya aur sab ko dhayan se daikhne laga, Jaise wo kuch dhoondh raha ho.



Saya: Ye sab to mujhe kamzoor lag rahe hai! Tumhe sach me lagta hai ke ye mera saamna karne layak huwe hai?



Vyakti: Ezra, Tum bina daikhe samajh nahi sakte! Un ki asli kshamata un ke bheetar chupi huwi hai, Tumhe usse bahir nikalna ho ga unhe jan'nne ke liye.



Kursi per baithe Vyakti ne pehli baar nazre hata ker Uss Shadow Figure Ezra ki taraf daikha, Ezra uss ko aise sanjeedah daikh ker khud bhi serious ho gayi, Dobara wo window ki taraf daikhne lagi ke akhir kia aisa khaas hai in me?



Ezra: Itne samay me pehli baar main tumhe aise daikh rahi hu! Mujhe nahi pata ke wo sab kis had tak ja sakte hai, Lekin agar tum in per itna dhayan de rahe ho matlab ye sab khaas hai, aur ye kitne khaas hai wo main khud daikh lu gi.




Vyakti: I'm certain they're not going to disappoint you!



Ezra: Mujhe nahi lagta ke mujhe ant tak intezar karne ki zaroorat hai! Main koshis karu gi ke un me se kisi ko zinda chhor saku.



Vyakti (Chuckle): Main zaroor daikhna chahu ga ke akhir wahan kia ho ga?



Ezra ne Vyakti ki taraf daikha, Vyakti ne apna haath aage ker dia, Ezra ke saamne ek portal Gate khulne laga, Ezra uss ke andar ki taraf jaane lagi.



Ezra: It's time to begin the quest for real!




Ezra ko uss gate ne andar kheench lia, Vyakti usse jata huwa daikhta raha, Ezra ke jaane ke baad wo waapis se Window ki taraf daikhne laga, Uss ki Aankhon me ek Utsukta aur Aasha dono jhalak rahi thi, Honto per ek muskan liye wo un sab ko daikhta raha.



Vyakti: Sab kuch dilchasp hota ja raha hai! Ab daikhne me asli maza aye ga, Akhir ye apni duniya ko bachane ke kabil hai bhi ya nahi?



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Darkvale Forest ~
42 Hours 29 Minutes Remaining




“Kaisa lag raha hai ab?”



Yoo-Jung ne tent se Daisuke ko baahir ata daikh pucha aur apne haath me pakri drink usse pakra di, Daisuke bhi wanhi uss ke paas ek pathar per aa ker baith gaya.



Daisuke: Kal se to acha he lag raha hai! Lekin abhi bhi kuch samay lage ga, Hume jald se jald un dono ko dhoond ker waapis ana ho ga.




Yoo-Jung: Vansh abhi soo raha hai! Kuch aur waqt intezar ker lo, Main nikalne ki tiyari ker leti hu tab tak, Aj hume pura neeche tak khudai ker ke he kiu na jana per jaye hum unhen le ker aye gye.


Yoo-Jung ne pure Confidence se kaha, Daisuke ko hansi aa gayi.


Yoo-Jung: Kia huwa? Koi joke to nahi sunaya main ne!


Daisuke: Kuch nahi! Bus ye soch raha tha ke waqt kaise guzarta hai, Abhi kuch din pehle he tum sab ko main le ker chal raha tha, Lekin ab aise lag raha hai ke tum mujh se bhi zada aage nikal gye ho.



Daisuke ki baat sun Yoo-Jung bhi muskura di, Daisuke he wo insaan tha jis ki wajha se wo pichli baar survive ker sake the, Ab Yoo-Jung ko uss ke saath chalna ek farz lag raha tha.



Daisuke: Tum ja ker tayari karo! Main kuch der yanhi baithu ga.



Yoo-Jung bhi chali gayi aur sab kuch sametne lagi, Vansh bhi uth gaya aur sab thora sa khaane ke baad nikalne ke liye tayar hone lage.



Yoo-Jung: Sab tayar hai! Ab chalte hai hum.



Yoo-Jung ne dono se pucha to dono ne haan me sar hila dia, Teeno waapis Khayi ki taraf jaane lage, Ab Daisuke khud bhaag paa raha tha aur ache se move ker paa raha tha, Yahan ane ke baad sab ke kuch level up huwe the jis ke Point wo add karte ja rahe the.



Har level up ke baad agla Level Up zada Experience lene lag chuka tha, Lekin abhi bhi wo Easily Level ker paa rahe the.


“Vansh! Tumhare peeche!!!”



Yoo-Jung ne chilate huwe bola to Vansh tezi se wahan se hat gaya, Vansh seedhe ek ped se ja takraya uss ne aankhen khol saamne daikha to dar se uss ke haath aur paon kaanpne lage.



Vansh ke saamne ek Dzanum tha, Lekin iss wale ka size uss ke ghar ke jitna tha, Vansh ki body kaam karna chhorne lagi Dzanum jo ek baar Vansh ko apne muh me daalne se chuk gaya wo dobara uss ki taraf barha per Vansh kuch bhi nahi ker paa raha tha.

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*Woosh*


Ek Arrow seedha uss Dzanum ki Aankh per ja laga, Dzanum dard se chilate huwe idhar udhar hone laga, Utne me Daisuke ne aage barh Vansh ko utha lia aur Yoo-Jung ke paas chala gaya.


Daisuke (Frightened): Ye itne bare kaise ho gye?



Yoo-Jung: Ye wala daikh ker he ye halat ho rahi hai, Jo ane wala hai wo iss se bhi badtar hai!



Yoo-Jung ne ishara kia to Vansh aur Daisuke ne uss taraf daikha, Saamne se waise he 3 aur Dzanum bhi aa rahe the aur un ke peeche ek aur bhi vishaal Dzanum aa raha tha lekin uss ke 2 ki jagha 3 muh the.

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Vansh(Zoinks): Hum yahan se kaise nikle gye?




Yoo-Jung: Nikalna hai to hume lar ker nikalna ho ga!



*Hmph*



Yoo-Jung ne apne Dagger nikalte huwe Stance le lia, Daisuke ne bhi Apni swords nikal li, Wanhi Vansh khoof ki nazro se dono ko daikhta raha.



Vansh: Hum jeet paye gye bhi kia? Wo uss Orc King ke jitna powerful lagta hai!



Yoo-Jung: Ye to try ker ke he pata chale ga!



Saamne wala Dzanum bhaagte huwe un ki taraf aya to Yoo-Jung uchalte huwe ek pathar per kadam rakh ker Dzanum ke upar charh gayi, Apne Dagger Dzanum ke andar ghusa ker Yoo-Jung usse girane ki koshis karne lagi.



Dzanum itna tez uchal raha tha ke wahan ki puri zameen kaanpni shuru ho gayi, Ek aur Dzanum aage ane ko huwa to Daisuke ne apni Sword se uss ki taango per vaar karne shuru ker diye, Vansh bhi Daisuke ke saath aage barha aur apna Spear neeche se Dzanum ke muh me ghusa dia.



Daisuke (Shout): Ye wala hum sambhal le gye!



Yoo-Jung: Ye wala main sambhal lu gi! Vansh tum teesre wale ka dhayab bhatkao, Tab tak hum inhe khatam ker ke ate hai.



Yoo-Jung ne dono ko un ka kaam samjhate huwe chalaang maar ker Dzanum ko side se cheerte huwe neeche aa gayi, Uss ki body abhi bhi Dzanum ki wajha se balance me nahi thi.



Yoo-Jung ne apna Bow nikala aur bhaagte huwe slide maar ker Dzanum ke neeche se jaate huwe Arrows se usse zakhmi ker dia, Akhir me aa ker Yoo-Jung ne Dzanum ka paon pakra aur zor dete huwe usse patak ker neeche gira dia.



Yoo-Jung dobara attack ker sakti uss se Pehle Dzanum ki tail Yoo-Jung se ja lagi aur Yoo-Jung hawa me urte huwe peeche ja giri, Khud ko sambhalte huwe Yoo-Jung dobara khari ho gayi.



Dzanum bhi waapis khara ho gaya, Itna Ghayal hone ke baad bhi wo aise khara tha jaise usse kuch huwa he na ho, Ab tak wo vishaal 3 muh wala Dzanum aage nahi aya tha.



Daisuke: Yoo-Jung! Tumhare peeche!!!!



Daisuke chilaya jab uss ne Yoo-Jung ke peeche se ek Dzanum ko muh khole uss ki taraf barhta daikha, Lekin Yoo-Jung apni jagha se hil bhi nahi rahi thi.



Daisuke (Mumble): Nahi! Yoo-Jung hil kiu nahi rahi? Aise to wo....Nahi main usse kuch nahi hone du ga.....Mujhe usse istemal karna ho ga.


Daisuke umeed ker raha tha ke Yoo-Jung move kare, Lekin Yoo-Jung hil bhi nahi rahi thi, Daisuke ne khud ko tayar kia aur stance le li.




Daisuke: Wi-


[Deathly Slash]
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[Aj ke liye itna he, Ye update 4.5K Words ka hai, Jahan ap ko Tower ke andar ki kuch jhalak daikhne ko mili ho gi, Target wo he hai agar 30 Likes huwe to Next Update Saturday Night ko aye ga, Milte hai agle update per, Tab tak ke liye Sayonara!!!]
 

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Bella bach gayi dil ko sukoon mil gawa slime ne bhi bahut help ki nahi to ye dono aaj pakka mare jate.Yo Jong ki jitni tareef karen kam hogi story hero ke baad wahi ek hai jinki jodi super strong hai.ab inna heroine hui gayi hai kya bolun mai filhaal meko to yahi lagta ki Yo jong hi sahi rahegi baki dekhte kya hota hai

Jabardast update

Shandar update bhai..
Yu ..jung dwara Bataye Gaye sambhavnaon ke tahat Bela bhi Arav ki ek bhediya Sathi hai Jiski Mana ya Urja Khud Hi Aarv Ko Sarv kar rahi hai...kyu aur kaise abhi iske uper bus usne chota sa theroy di hai....
Bela aur Arav ke bich kiss ki vajah se Bela ke andar nihit Mana ko arav absorb kar raha tha aur apne inner..ki ko master level par le gaya..
Jiski vajah se ine donon ki halat mein Sudhar hua..

System ke dwara Bela aur aarav Ke bich kya relationship develop Hui Hai unke bare mein abhi tak Koi pukhta Jankari Hath Nahin Laga..
Yuu..jung ka rehasye abhi tak barkarar hai...lekin kabb tak???

Very nice update bhai
Kya theory lagai yoo jung ne sabke upar bomb hi phod diya sach me yoo jung bahut intelligent hai Issabelle ne apne pyar ka ijhar kar diya aarav ke samne ab dekhte hai aarav kya karta hai aur aarav ke inner qi ka level bhi increse ho gya hai

Superb and fantastic update bhai.....🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺

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Nice update

Update brilliant tha bro writting skill bhut heavy hai
Finally aarav got some kiss and purpose from Bella
Aarav ki life main abhi to 3 ladki smjh ayi Jo ki future wife ki Davedar ban sakti hai Bella vanshika or uski gaon Wale uncle ki beti

Mast mast update bhai

As always superb update brother apki writing skill kamaal he or story or mazedaar hoti Jaa Rahi he har update ke sath can't wait Bella and aarav reunite or nya kand bhi hogya kul milega new update ke liye curiousity abi he se bahot jada he but bro next update Tuesday night ko cahiye ye update apne late diya abi hum target bhi pura kar rahe hain so please agar Monday Tak 30 like hogye to Tuesday ko update dedena please ok bro
Thanks for this awesome story ❤️

Jabardast update

Nice update Bhai ☺️😊

Behtreen update

Bhai kya hi update tha padte padte pta hi nahi chla kb khtm hogya
Bhai ab to pack mein ek female bhi aagai or bhai kya Isabelle bhi wolf mein badal skati hai ?
Bhai next update ka bhut zada intezar hai lakin ye bhi hai itna bada update likne mein time or mehnat bhi bhut lagti

Jang fire clan se b nae hai
tu kis clan se hai yeh b aik mystery hogi
aarav ne bella ko bacha liya aur uska mana b transfer kr k usko normal kr liya
aarav aik mystery hai why he has the most powers

60 hours to go kiya aarav aur bella wahin rahain gy

Mast update

Full sakoon



Awesome update bhai

waiting ek aur shaandaar wala update aur wo sab bhediya dost log kahan gaye sab slime mili to kya bakiyon ki kauno jaroorat noi hai

Bohothi bariya story aur updates hey, sab cerectars awesome hey,sirf Vansh ko chorkey but sab achcha hongey to maza kaha. Bhai ek baat bolna chahunga ki aap bohot kuch aad kartey jareheho jeysey System, Werewolf,Clan etc kahi baad mey muskil na ho jay sab sambhal ney mey. Bura maat manna q ki isliye bol rahahu is tarha ki jitney stories hey sab band hey sirf WEREWOLF Bhai ki story chorkey.
Akhri mey ek question hey kya Akash Arav ko pehley sey janta q ki usne barbie samney bola tha ki "ye bachpan mey jeysa tha ab bhi yesa hey"
Dekhtey hey agey kya hota hey
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR

Nice story... waiting for update Bhai...

Bohat achi storie hai :thumbup:

Waiting for next update

Nice and fantastic updates Bhai keep posting

Wating for update

Waiting for next update

waiting waiting waiting

Story line bilkul alag hai dono story ki aur aisa hi rahe tabhi maja aayega kahin se bhi mach na hona chahiye jara bhi.uske baad story padhna achchi baat hai

Bhai jaldi se update de do na bahut wait kar rahe hai update ka
Update 24 has been posted Guys!!! :yo:
 

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UPDATE 22
(BEYOND THE HORIZON)


Darkvale Forest ~
84 Hours 32 Minutes Remaining


*Sshhhrrrr*



Aarav Khali ankho ke saath kadam aage barhata ja raha tha, Uss ke haath se Ki Blade neeche zameen se lagte huwe uss phaarte huwe aage barh rahi thi, Aarav ki nazre Kabhi Yoo-Jung to kabhi Shadow ke kate huwe sar ki taraf jaati.



Aarav ne apni nazre upar karte huwe apne saamne khare Orc King ki taraf daikha, Orc King chehre per ek ghinoni muskan liye Aarav ko daikh raha tha, Aarav ki ankho me gussa bharne laga.



[Alpha Authority Activated]

[Unique Ability (Will to live) Activated]

[Beast Transformation (Wolf Claws)]



Aarav ne kehar bhari nazro se Orc King ki taraf daikha, Orc King ke chehre aur bhi khusi aa gayi jaise wo Aarav ki halat Enjoy ker raha ho, Aarav ne raftaar pakri aur aage barhte huwe chalaang maari aur hawa me apni blade ko rotation dete huwe.



[Deathly Slash]




Aarav ne pehla vaar he Deathly Slash ka kia jaise wo Orc King ki ghinoni muskan ko ek bhi aur pal nahi daikhna chahta tha, Aarav ko khud ehsaas na huwa lekin uss ke Deathly Slash ne neeche Ground per ek cut bana dia.



Aarav ne neeche kadam rakhte he saamne daikha, Lekin Orc King wahan tha he nahi Aarav ne ghoomte huwe peeche Slash mara to Zameen se ek Blood spike baahir aa gayi, Aarav ne uchalte huwe apne haatho per Balance ker khud ko peeche ghaseet lia.



*Grooowwwwrrrrr*



Aarav ka gussa barhne laga, Uss ki Ki Blade roop badal ker Claws ke saath dalne lagi, Aarav tezi se aage barha aur ek ke baad ek Vaar karne laga, Orc King ki raftaar bhi barhne lagi aur wo Aarav ke har Attack ko dodge karne laga.




Orc King ne Aarav per Vaar karna chaha to Aarav hawa me uchal gaya, Uss ki ankhe Neele rang se laal me badalne lagi, Aarav ne apna haath aage barhaya to uss ke haath me Ki energy ikathi hone lagi, Inner Ki kisi Ball ke roop me Aarav ke haath me Rotate karne lagi.



Aarav: Arrrggghhhhh!




Aarav haath neeche karte huwe neeche Orc Ki ki taraf jaane laga, Aarav hava me jaise Levitate ker raha tha uss pal, Aarav ka haath Orc King ko lagne he wala tha.



*Pssshhhhh*



Aarav ki kalayi me tez jalan huwi aur Inner Ki ki bani wo ball nasht ho gayi, Aarav zameen per ja gira uss ki ankhe dobara waapis normal hone lagi, Aarav ka sar bhaari hone laga.



Aarav: Ye kia huwa? Or-



*Pch*



Aarav kuch aur bolta ke uss ke chehre oer kuch aa gaya, Aarav ne dhayan se daikh to wo Slime thi, Aarav waapis baitha aur chaaro taraf daikhne laga, Wahan koi bhi Orc ya Orc King nahi tha.



Aarav: Kahan gye wo sab? Abhi to yanhi the! Kuc-



Aarav ne saamne daikha to Vansh aur Yoo-Jung dono bilkul sahi the, Dono ke chehro per khoof tha, Jahan Vansh hava me ghabraye huwe Spear ghoomaye ja raha tha.


Wanhi Yoo-Jung ek jagha baithi dar se kaanp rahi thi, Yoo-Jung ki ankho me ansoo the wo khari bhi nahi ho paa rahi thi.

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Aarav: Ye sab kia ho raha hai? Was it just in my mind?



Aarav ne khud se sawal kia, Uski awaz me shanka aur Ashcharya dono ka ehsaas tha, Wo samajhne ki koshis ker raha tha ke jo drishya uss ne kuch pal pehle daikha wo sach tha ya sirf uss ki kalpana, aur phir jaise usse kuch yaad aya to wo apne saath latke uss bag ko khol uss me wo kitaab dhondne laga.



Bag me rakhna to Easy tha, Lekin uss ko Dhoondne me kuch waqt lagta tha, Kitaab milte he Aarav ne uss ko khool panne palatne laga, Kuch pal me he Aarav ko wo page mil gaya jis ko wo dhoondh raha tha.




[The Illusion Mist is a creature that uses mist to create illusions from a distance. When someone breathes in the mist, they start seeing these illusions. If the person gets hurt outside of the illusion, it breaks the spell. However, they must avoid inhaling the mist again, or they can get trapped in the illusions once more.]



Slime Aarav ka chehra iss liye dhake huwe thi ke wo dobara Illusion Mist me saans na le, Aarav ke paas aisi situation se bachne ka raasta tha, Inner Ki ko saanse lene ke raaste me balance karte huwe ek filter bana lia Aarav ne, Filter se hava me chupe sabhi poison sirf purify ho ker Body me ja sakte the.



Aarav: Ab tum mere chehre se hat sakte ho!


Slime Aarav ki baat maante huwe neeche utar gaya, Aarav ne gehra saans bhara lekin usse kuch bhi na huwa, Aarav ne muskurate huwe Slime ko thap thapate huwe usse uss ke kaam ke liye shabashi di.


(◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。




Aarav waapis khara huwa, Uss ne apne kareeb daikha, Uss ki banayi Ki Ball beech me nasht to ho gayi thi, Lekin uss ke Impact se wahan ek bara gadha ban chuka tha, Aarav ko khud samajh na ayi ke uss ne ye kaise kia tha, Uss pal jaise Aarav khud ki body se control kho raha tha.



Aarav: Akhir kitni takatwar thi wo Ki Ball? Zameen ko chhue bina he itna bara gadha wo bhi in pathro per jis ko Slime bhi pighla na payi!



Aarav ne abhi ke liye un khayalo ko mann se nikala aur apne saathiyo ko bachane chala gaya, Aarav ne Vansh se pehle Yoo-Jung ko Illusion se nikalna sahi samjha, Wo Vansh ko Yoo-Jung ki ye halat nahi dikhana chahta tha.


Aarav Yoo-Jung ke paas gaya ti wo ghabrate huwe khud ko peeche ghaseetne lagi, Yoo-Jung Aarav se bhi dar rahi thi lekin Aarav ko ab pata tha ke wo Aarav se nahi jis ko wo Aarav ki jagha daikh rahi thi uss se dar rahi thi.



Aarav ne apne tez kadmo aur Movement ko Use karte huwe Yoo-Jung ke peeche ja ker uss ka pakar lia, Yoo-Jung Chutne ki koshis karne lagi per Uss me abhi wo pehle wali strength nahi thi, Aarav ne apne haath Yoo-Jung ke Gulabi honto per rakhte aur Yoo-Jung ko khud se chipka lia, Apna chehra Yoo-Jung ke kandhe per le jaate huwe apne daanto ko Yoo-Jung ki makmali tawacha per gaar diye.



*Aghhh, Uhmmmm*



Yoo-Jung ke muh se awaz nikli, Lekin wo dard se cheekhne se zada Moan zada lag rahi thi, Yoo-Jung se zada Aarav ghabra gaya, Uss ne to ye Yoo-Jung ko bachane ke liye kia tha lekin uss Pahari larke ko kia pata tha ke ye kitna galat dikh raha hai.



Lekin ab Aarav ne ye ker he dia tha to wo ruka nahi aur daant se aur bhi kaatne laga, Yoo-Jung ki pakar Aarav ke haatho per kasne lagi aur uss ka dar khatam hote huwe wo hosh me aa gayi, Aarav ne apna chehra peeche kia aur Yoo-Jung ke muh aur naak per haath rakhe baitha raha.




Aarav: Tum hava me saane nahi le sakti! Mujhe nahi pata tum ne kia daikha, Lekin wo jo bhi tha wo sirf ek Illusion tha, Hume tumhare liye koi mask chahiye per mere paas mask nahi hai.



Yoo-Jung ne kuch pal chaaro taraf nazre ghoomayi, Usse Aarav ki baat per vishwas ho gya ke wo sahi keh raha hai, Yoo-Jung ne angoothe se Good ka ishara kia to Aarav apna haath uss ke chehre aur kamar se hatate huwe khara ho gya.



Aarav ab jab dobara Yoo-Jung ki taraf daikh raha tha to Situation Awkward ho gayi uss ke liye, Ab tak pehli baar Aarav mekisi larki ko aise Moan karte suna tha.



Aarav (Awkwardly): H-Hum mask dhoond-



Yoo-Jung: Uss ki zaroorat nahi hai! Main hava me chupe toxic se bach sakti hu, Pehle sirf meri Laparwahi ki wajha se main Illusion me phans gayi thi, Hamare liye abhi uss Mist Monster ko dhoodna zaroori hai, Mist me aur bhi koi Toxic ho sakta hai jo hume Harm ker sakta hai.




Aarav: Right! Lekin hum usse dhoonde gye kaise? Wo kanhi bhi ho sakta hai!



Yoo-Jung (Sigh): Huh! Mujhe laga tha tum ab tak Figure out ker chuke ho gye.



Aarav: Kia?



Yoo-Jung: Tumhe kis lagta hai? Dzanum se larte waqt mujhe kaise pata chal gaya ke tum wahan ho?



Ab jab Aarav dobara soch raha tha to sach me Yoo-Jung ne bina daikhe he Aarav ko pukar lia tha, Jahan Aarav tha wahan Yoo-Jung ko dikhna possible he nahi tha.


Aarav: Kaise?



Yoo-Jung: Mujhe last Quest ki MVP Banne per ek new Ability mili thi! Holoscan, Main apne around 50 Meter tak Area ko Scan ker sakti hu, Bilkul kisi Radar ki tarha, Sab kuch to nahi dikhta lekin agar mujhe pata hai ke main kia dhoond rahi hu aur wo 50 meter ke Radius ke andar hai to main uss ki location detect ker sakti hu.



Ye ability Aarav ki sense ki tarha ki thi, Lekin Aarav aise detect nahi ker sakta tha, Jahan Holoscan zada specifically mosnter ki location pin ker sakti thi.


Aarav: Vansh ko bhi uss waqt ais-


Yoo-Jung: Nahi! Vansh chutiya hai, Uss ke chehre se uss ki tharak jhalak rahi thi, Mujhe Holoscan ki bhi zaroorat nahi thi!



Aarav apna sar pakar khara ho gya, Sach me Vansh ek chutiya tha, Upar se Yoo-Jung ek pal ke liye bhi nahi jhijhki kuch kehne se pehle, Aarav shayad pehli curse word sun raha tha kisi larki ke muh se, Aarav ne dobara apne sar se ye baate nikali aur jo zaroori hai uss per dhayan dene laga.



*Ahhhhh*




Vansh apna spear liye bhaagte huwe un ki taraf aya, Yoo-Jung bina kisi effort ke uss ke side per gayi aur Vansh ko pakarte huwe kisi Wrestler ki tarha Chokeslam dete huwe zameen per patak dia, Vansh wanhi neeche Unconscious ho ker gir gaya.




Yoo-Jung: Ab hamare liye zada easy rahe ga! Shuru karte hai phir.



Yoo-Jung dikhne me kisi Pari ki tarha ki thi, Lekin uss ke move kisi Demon se kam khatarnak nahi the, Beauty with Brain to tha he lekin Yoo-Jung ke liye Demon lagana galat nahi tha.



Aarav (whisper): Shayad mujhe wo moan wali baat kabhi pata nahi lagne deni chaiye iss ko!



Yoo-Jung: What?



Aarav: Kuch bhi nahi! Tum shuru karo.



Yoo-Jung ne apna dhayan saamne kia aur hava me he Ungliya chalane lagi, Matlab uss ke saamne uss ki System window open thi.


Yoo-Jung: Mil gaya hume hamara mujrim!


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Darkvale Forest ~
83 Hours 27 Minutes Remaining




*Gasping*



Daisuke ki saanse bhaari ho chuki thi, Wo Pichle ghante se apne pratidwand ko harane ki koshish ker raha tha, Lekin Daisuke ki kanhi se bhi jeet hoti dikh nahi rahi thi, Daisuke ne apne dusri taraf daikha to wahan Pathro ke neeche Isabelle dabi huwi thi.



Daisuke (Annoyed): Akhir chahte kia ho tum? Yahan aa kaise gye tum?



Daisuke ko uljhan hone lagi thi, Lekin Dusri taraf se koi bhi jawab na aya, Daisuke ne dobara apni swords uthayi aur apne pratidwandi ki taraf tezi se bhaagne laga, Paas jate he Daisuke ne apni Sword ko ghoomate huwe vaar karna chaha, Lekin ek baar dobara wo asafal raha aur ulta khud zakhmi hote huwe peeche ja gira.




Daisuke ki halat ab uthne layak nahi rahi thi, Wo zor lagate huwe uthna chah raha tha, Lekin uss ki halat usse uthne nahi de rahi thi, Saamne khara vyakti chalte huwe Daisuke ki taraf ane laga, Daisuke apni haar maan chuka tha Vyakti ne apna haath Daisuke ke sar per rakha.



[Healer detected! Mana transfer to player in progress]


[Player's Mana Zone Activated]



Daisuke ne sar utha saamne daikha to wahan wo Vyakti nahi, Isabelle baithi huwi thi Daisuke ke sar per haath rakhe, Daisuke ki HP bhi recover hone lagi, Daisuke ko situation samajhte waqt nahi laga.



Daisuke: Sab kuch ek chhalava tha kia?



Isabelle: Shayad! Lekin Achanak se tum ajeeb harkate karne lage, Main ne pehle koshis ki ke apni shaktiyan istemal na karu, Lekin jab halat bigarne lagi to mujhe Ability Istemal karni per gayi, Agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mujhe kon bachata?



Isabelle ne Daisuke ko Calm karne ke liye dhayan se apne shabdon ko chuna tha, Daisuke bhi Isabelle se kuch kehne ki halat me nahi tha, Daisuke uthte huwe deewar se tik ker baith gaya.



Daisuke: Tum ne kia kiya?



Isabelle: Pata nahi! Lekin mujhe ye pata chala hai ke itna zada Mana hone ki wajha se main Ek Mana Zone bana sakti hu, Ye kia hai mujhe bhi nahi pata lekin main ne koshis ki to tum apne hoosh me waapis aa gye kisi tarha iss se!



Daisuke: Hmm!



Dono ke beech shanti chaa gayi, Jahan Isabelle Daisuke ki ajeeb harkate daikh ker dar gayi thi, Wanhi Daisuke abhi huwe chhalave ki socho me dooba huwa tha.



Isabelle (Concern): Kia daikha Chhalave me tum ne?




Daisuke (Sigh): Huh! Kuch purane zakhm the, Dobara hare ho gye hai wo, Daro mat abhi ke liye theek hu main, Tum batao kitni der ye Mana Zone bana ker rakh sakti ho.



Isabelle: Pata nahi! Lekin zada samay nahi banaye rakh pao gi, Ab ki baae shayad Mujhe bhi ye Mana Zone na bachaye, Lekin ab hume pata to chal gaya na ke wo ek Chhalava hai, Hum dobara shayad na phanse uss me!




Daisuke: Nahi! Main ne jo mehsoos kia hai wo ajeeb tha, Main jaanta tha ke wo sach nahi hai, Lekin main usse jhuthla bhi nahi paa raha tha, Chhalave se mili ye chhote bhi abhi tak hai, Agar dobara hum phanse to shayad waapis na aa sake hum.



Isabelle: Hume kuch karna chaiye!




Daisuke: Kia kare? Meri halat aisi nahi hai ke hum chal sake, Tumhare bina ye Mana Zone bhi nahi rahe ga to tumhe peeche chhor kuch daikhne bhi nahi ja sakta, Agar tum ne Heal Use ki to Durability kam ho jaye gi, Hum sirf Prarthana ker sakte hai, Agar ye Dhundh se Illusion aye hai to Dhundh ke saath chale bhi jaye gye, Ye prarthana karo ke hamare khatam hone se pehle khatam ho jaye ye Dhundh, Warna sach me hum yahan 24 Ghante bhi pure nahi ker sake gye.




Daisuke peeche deewar se sar sata ker baith gaya, Isabelle bhi darne lagi aur puri koshis karne lagi ke wo kuch he aur pal kiu nahi lekin Mana Zone banaye rakh sake, Lekin unhe lag nahi raha tha ke wo nikal sake gye ab ki baar.



Isabelle (Sob): Lagta hai akhri baar usse daikhne ka moka bhi nahi mila ga mujhe!



Daisuke (Smile): Huh! Itna pyaar karti ho to keh kiu nahi deti uss se?




Isabelle: Pyaar nahi keh sakti usse main! Pyaar to ek baar main ker chuki hu, Mera Fiance jo budhu ye samajh raha ke main trip per hu, Lekin jo Aarav ke saath main mehsoos ker rahi hu wo bhi bohat ajeeb hai, Sirf ek baar usse daikhne ki chahat mere andar se jaye nahi ja rahi, Na Jaane uss ki chumban ne kia ker dia hai mujh per, Aisa hai jaise ek khinchav mujhe uss ki taraf kheenche ja raha hai, Huh! Kia lagta hai kaisa ho ga wo?



Daisuke: Kaisa hai ye to nahi keh sakta! Lekin kam se kam wo zinda hai, Andrew ke waqt jo notification aya tha abhi tak waisa koi Notification nahi aya, Jab tak wo notification nahi aye ga Matlab wo zinda hai!




Isabelle (Relief): Thank You! Kam se kam wo zinda hai ye jan'nne ko mila, Na jane kia ker raha ho ga wo?





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Darkvale Forest ~
81 Hours 59 Minutes Remaining




*Woosh* *Woosh*



Aarav aur Yoo-Jung dono bina kadmo ki awaz kiye bhaagte huwe Mist Monster ki taraf jaa rahe the, Vansh ko Unconscious Aarav ne kandhe per uthaya huwa tha, Unhe nikle huwe kafi samay ho chuka tha lekin jaise Mist Monster bhi unn se dur bhaag raha tha.



Yoo-Jung: Hamare saamne he wo kanhi ruka huwa hai! Lagta hai thak chuka hai wo itna bhaagne ke baad.



Aarav aur Yoo-Jung Location wali jagha pohanch khare ho gye, Lekin wahan unhe koi bhi nahi dikh raha tha, Dono har taraf dhoondne lage lekin wahan koi bhi nahi tha.



Aarav: Kahan hai wo?



Yoo-Jung: Mujhe nahi pata! Main sirf location pata ker sakti hu, Wo yanhi kanhi hai, Lekin hamari nazro me nahi aa raha, Kanhi wo Invisible to nahi hai kia?



Aarav: Tum ne apna kaam ker dia hai! Ab meri baari hai.



Aarav ne Vansh ko neeche laita dia aur zameen ko chhute huwe ankhe band ker dhayan lagane laga, Uss ki Sense ne kaam karna shuru kia aur wo apne kareeb dhoodne laga Mist Monster ko.



Aarav: Wahan us ped ke upar!



Aarav ne ishara kia to Yoo-Jung tezi se uss taraf uchli, Eagle Eye ko Use karte huwe uss ne dhayan se daikha to usse apne saamne Mist Monster mil gaya, Kisi machar ke Aakar ka ek keera uss ke pankh Alaukik roshni me chamak rahe the, Roshni me ek Vibration se Mist ban rahi thi, Yoo-Jung ko daikhte he wo waapis urte huwe bhaaga.

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Yoo-Jung ne apne Dagger se Vaar karna chaha, Chote Aakar ki wajha se Uss ne Aasani se khud ko Yoo-Jung ke vaar se bacha lia, Yoo-Jung se bachte he wo dobara bhaagne ko huwa.



Uss se pehle Aarav apne sharp Senses se Yoo-Jung ki lead follow karte huwe uss ke saamne aya aur apni Ki Blade uss ko kaatne ko huwa, Lekin dobara uss ne khud ko bacha lia lekin ab ki baar uss ki direction ki sense freeze ho gayi thi ek pal ke liye.



*Swish*



Ek Arrow hava ko cheerte huwe uss machar jaise praani ko apni nok per le jaate huwe saamne ped ne ja ghusa, Uss ke pankho ki roshti dheemi hote hote khatam ho gayi.



Aarav ne Yoo-Jung ki taraf daikha jo apna bow liye khari huwi thi, Andhere me ek keere ke Aakar ke praani per itna accurate Aim karna koi sadharan baat nahi tha, Dhundh khatam hone lagi aur waapis se sab kuch saaf dikhna shuru ho gya.



Aarav ped ke paas gaya aur Arrow ko baahir nikal daikhne laga, Arrow ki tip per Mist Monster tha, Lekin wahan koi Mana Stone nahi dikh raha tha.



Aarav: Ab iss ka kia kare?



“Noum”



Aarav ki kalayi se Slime ki halki awaz ayi, Aarav ne slime ki taraf daikha to wo Mist monster ki taraf daikh rahi thi.



Aarav: Kia huwa? Khaana chahte ho to kha sakte ho tum!



(●♡∀♡)



(╯°□°)╯︵ `



Slime ne Arrow ko Monster ke saath jhapat lia, Kuch he lamho me monster aur Arrow dono puri tarha nasht ho gye the.



[Acid Slime Devoured a Higher Level Creature]


[Acid Slime Power Leveled Up]

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Acid Slime ke Mist Monster ko khaate he uss ka level up ho gya, Ab tak Aarav ye bhi nahi samjh saka tha ke Rank aur Level me kia difference hai? Aarav ne ye Waapis jaane ke baad sochne ke liye chhor dia.



Yoo-Jung: Hume waapis jana chahiye! Kuch ghanto me waapis roshni ho jaye gi, Hamare paas araam ke liye kuch ghante he hai, Hum me se koi ek pehle soo jaye ga aur dusra Guard kare ga, Phir dusra soo jaye ga aur pehla Guard kare ga!



Yoo-Jung ne duty samjha di, Vansh ki halat Guard karne wali thi nahi to usse count nahi kia, Dono waapis Safe Zone ki taraf chale gye, Waapis ane ke baad Aarav ne Infinity bag me se Tent aur Heater jaisi cheeze nikaal li jo wo saath le ker aya tha.



Tent set karne ke baad Pehle Aarav ne Guard duty lene ka decide kia, Vansh ko ek taraf laita dia gaya aur Yoo-Jung alag se lait gayi, Aarav baahir ek bare pathar ke upar baith gaya.



Acid Slime ko apne saamne Rakh Aarav usse dhayan se daikhne laga, Ek din me he dobara kitna kuch badal chuka tha, Jo Slime subha Aarav ki dushman thi ab wo he Slime Aarav ke saath thi, Agar Slime madad na karti to shayad wo log Illusion se kabhi baahir he na aa pate!




Aarav Slime ko daikha apne Purane saathiyo ko yaad karne se reh na saka, Akhir kanha the sab Demon Wolf? Kiu wo unhe Sense nahi ker paa raha tha? Wo un Orc's se bach ker nikal to gye the na? Aise bohat se sawal Aarav ke mann ko uthal puthal ker rahe the.



Aise he khayalo me waqt beetata gaya, Kuch ghanto ke baad Yoo-Jung khud he uth gayi aur Aarav ko araam karne ke liye bhej ked Guard duty per baith gayi, Aarav abhi laita he tha ke pure din ki thakan ek saath effect ki aur Aarav agle he pal neend ki gehrayio me chala gaya.



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*Ughhhh*



Aarav jaldi se uth ker baith gaya, Uss ka badan paseene se bheega huwa tha aur saanse tez tez chal rahi thi, Aarav ne baahir daikha to roshni jo chuki thi, Aarav baahir nikla saamne he usse Vansh dikh gaya.



Vansh: Kuch zada nahi soo liye kia?



Aarav ko ek pal ke liye gussa aya ke akhir kon puri raat sota raha hai? Lekin wo bina kuch bole Yoo-Jung ke paas chala gaya jo apne weapons tayar ker rahi thi.



Aarav: Nikal rahe hai kia hum?



Yoo-Jung: Haan! Abhi ke liye hum waapis uss taraf jaye gye jis taraf se main ayi thi, Agar mere Holoscan me Isabelle ya Daisuke me so koi aa gaya to hum un ke saath mil sakte hai.




Aarav: Good! Main Tent le leta hu waapis.



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Darkvale Forest ~
73 Hours 13 Minutes Remaining




*Thud*




Ek pathar ke girne ki awaz se Daisuke ki aankh khul gayi, Apne saath daikha to neeche Isabelle laiti huwi thi, Kab un ki aankh lag gayi dono ko he pata nahi chala, Der raat tak Isabelle Mana Zone banaye rakhe huwe thi.



Daisuke ne upar daikha to pedon ke beech me se halki dhoop darshan de rahi thi, Daisuke khara hone ki koshish ker raha tha lekin abhi bhi uss ki body bohat damage thi, Daisuke apna sar dobara deewar se sata ker baith gaya.



Daisuke: Akhir 24 Ghante survive ker he lia! Ab jald se jald baki-



*Glup*



Ek safed rang ki cheez Daisuke ki taraf ayi to wo Isabelle ko lete huwr Side per sarak gaya, Aise Achanak movement se Isabelle bhi ankhe khol ker daikhne lagi ke kia huwa? Daisuke uss taraf daikha jahan wo kuch pal pehle baithe the to wahan ek jaal sa ban gaya tha.



Daisuke: Spider! Lekin kahan?



Daisuke ne apni Swords per pakar banayi aur Spider ko dhoondne laga, Usse zada dhoondna nahi para, Ek taraf se Spider ati Daisuke ko dikh gayi jo kisi Billi ke size jitni bari thi, Daisuke aage barhne ko huwa he tha ke uss ke kadam wanhi tham gye, Uss ek Spider ke baad wahan se ek aur Spider ayi phir ek aur phir ek aur nikal ayi.

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Wo sirf ek spider nahi puri Spider Army thi, Daisuke ne Isabelle ko uthaya aur wahan se bhaagne laga, Daisuke ko spider ki power ka andaza nahi tha lekin itne bare number se larna Daisuke ki haar ban'nne wala tha.



Isabelle: Ab kia kare hum? Mera Mana pura Exhaust ho chuka hai, Main simple boost bhi nahi Use ker sakti hu!



Daisuke ki halat abhi bhi khaas sudhri nahi thi, Lekin aisi khatarnak me zinda bach jaane ke baad Daisuke haar nahi man'nna chahta tha, Bachi huwi takat istemal karte huwe Daisuke bhaage ja raha tha, Spiders bhi jaise aj uss ka peecha na chhorne ka faisla ker ke ayi thi.



Daisuke bhaage ja raha tha jab tak uss ke saamne ek Cliff nahi aa gayi, Cliff itni deep thi ke upar se uss ka ground dikh bhi nahi raha tha, Daisuke ne apne kadam Dusri taraf ghoomate huwe Cliff ke saath bhaagne laga, Lekin Spiders ne dono taraf se Cover ker lia tha unhe jis se Daisuke sirf ek direction me he bhaag sakta tha.



Lekin Spiders kisi pal bhi uss ke saamne aa sakti thi, Kuch Spiders bare patharo ko sirf apne Webs se kheench ker idhar udhar phenk rahi thi, Daisuke aur Isabelle ko un ka ant dikhne laga har kadam ke saath un ki umeed khatam hoti ja rahi thi.



“Daisuke!!!!”




Ek awaz ne Daisuke ko waapis hosh me le aya, Awaz Cliff ke dusri taraf se ayi thi, Dono ne uss taraf daikha to Cliff ke dusri taraf un ke saath Baki teeno bhaag rahe the, Un dono ke liye Andhere me ujala ban ker aye the wo teeno, Aarav bhaagte huwe idhar udhar daikhne laga aur phir jaise Aarav ko jo chahiye tha wo usse mil gaya.




Aarav: Yoo-Jung! Mere saath aoo.




[Unique Ability (Will to Live) Activated]


[Current Progress (13.2%)]


[Fear Decreased -100%]


[Endurance Increased +41]


[Intelligence Increased +41]


[Strength Increased +41]


[Stamina Increased +41]


[Agility Increased +41]


[Sense Increased +7]


[All stats return to normal after the Unique Ability (Will To Live) deactivated]



Ek zameen se ukhra huwa ped jo Neeche gira huwa tha, Aarav ne uss ka ek chhorr pakra aur Yoo-Jung ne uss ka dusra chhorr pakra, Uthate huwe Aarav ne beech se ped pakar lia aur Yoo-Jung uss ko sahara dene lagi, Bhaagte huwe Cliff ke kinare aa ker Aarav ne aur Yoo-Jung ne zor lagate huwe ped ko phenka to wo Daisuke ke side ja laga aur idhar se Aarav ne usse pakar ker girne se bacha lia.




Aarav (Shout): Daisuke! Yahan aoo!



Daisuke ne Aarav ki tarac daikha to wahan nikalne ka raasta ban chuka tha, Aarav ko ane me waqt lag sakta tha, Tab tak Daisuke wahan ruk nahi sakta tha to usse he uss taraf jana tha.



Daisuke: Isabelle! Bachi huwi puri takat se pakar lo mujhe.




Daisuke bhaagte huwe Ped ke upar charh gaya, Yoo-Jung Arrows se Spider ko rokne ki koshis ker rahi thi, Wanhi Aarav dusri taraf se ped ko pakre huwa tha, Daisuke ki umeed barhne lagi wo kadam barhata raha, Uss ki ankho ke aage andhera chaane laga saanse bhaari hone lagi aur akhir uss ka paon phisal gaya.



Aarav: Daisuke!!!




Daisuke Ped ki tehni ko pakre jhool raha tha, Lekin wo apni halat me zada der usse nahi pakar sakta tha, Yoo-Jung ko ped ke upar charhna per gaya aur wo Daisuke ki taraf bhaagi, Lekin Daisuke ka haath phisalne laga tha uss ke peeche latki Isabelle neeche ki gehrai daikh dar rahi thi, Daisuke tehni ki tip per aa chuka tha.



Isabelle: Sorry!


Isabelle ne Daisuke ka kandha choor dia, Daisuke ki ankhe herat se khul gayi jab uss ke peeche wazan kam huwa, Yoo-Jung ne Daisuke ka haath pakar lia oer Daisuke ki nazre neeche gir rahi Isabelle per thi jo ankho me ansoo liye gir rahi thi, Wanhi dusri taraf khare Aarav ka pura badan sehar utha, Kia wo dobara apne saathi ko khone wala tha?



“Kia phir se wohi hone wala hai? Itni mehnat ke baad bhi main kuch nahi ker pao ga kia? Kia mujhe bachane kudna chahiye kia? Lekin main wahan itni dur tak Isabelle ko pakarne ke liye pohanch pao ga kia? Agar sirf main Tsubame ki movement seekh pata! Lekin mujhe kiu uss ko seekhne ki itni zaroorat dikhti thi? Kiu uss ke bina adhoora lagta tha? Haan, Main saamne daikhne ki koshis me kabhi peeche daikh he nahi paya! Kia waisi Movement sird Tsubame ki thi? Nahi, Wo chahat mujhe Tsubame se nahi kisi aur se ayi thi! Mera sab se pehla opponent”



[Forceful Unsealing of Alpha's Abilities Detected!]


[Alpha's Abilities Unsealed: Forceful Override Detected!]



[Alpha's Ability Successfully Unsealed!]


[New Ability Acquired (Flash Steps)]


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Aarav: Flash Steps!



Aarav ke pairon me Vibration mehsoos hone lagi, Ek jhatke ke saath Aarav Cliff se kud gaya, Sabhi ki nazro me Aarav ek jagha se dusri Jagha teleport huwa tha, Lekin Isabelle kafi neeche ja chuki thi to Aarav ne Isabelle ko pakra aur paas ke pathro ko pakarne ki koshish karne laga, Lekin tez movement se uss ka haath kisi bhi pathar per sahi se nahi laga.



Ek haath se Isabelle ko kamar se pakre dusre haath se rukne ki nakam koshis karte huwd Aarav bhi Isabelle ke saath he khayi me chala gaya, Kuch he pal me dono bakiyo ki nazro se ojhal ho gye.



Yoo-Jung ne Daisuke ko upar kheencha aur Usse le ker Vansh ke paas aa gayi, Daisuke ke hosh abhi bhi salamat nahi huwe the, wanhi Spiders dusri taraf se web shoot ker ke iss taraf aa rahi thi, Ek baar dobara wo ghirne lage Spiders ke beeche me, Yoo-Jung sar jhukaye khayi se neeche daikhe ja rahi thi.




Yoo-Jung: Hume nikalna ho ga! Hum yahan se seedha neeche nahi ja sakte hume ek safe route dhoondn ho ga.



Vansh(Scared): Pagla gayi ho kia? Tumhe lagta hai yahan se gir ker dono me se koi bhi bacha ho ga?



Daisuke: Wo zinda hai! Abhi tak notification nahi aya, Yoo-Jung sahi keh rahi hai hume Safe route dhoondna ho ga.




Vansh(Annoyed): Yahan In makriyo se kaise bach kef nikle pehle wo socho!



Daisuke me itni takat nahi thi ke wo bhaag pata ya lar sakta, Kia Vansh aur Yoo-Jung itne Spiders ko ek saath maar sakte the kia? Dikhne me wo Na-Mumkin lag raha tha, Yoo-Jung dono ko peeche chorte huwe Spiders ke paas jaane lagi.



Daisuke (Concern): Yoo-Jung! Chances mat lo, Wo-



Daisuke ke shabd beech me he ruk gye, Yoo-Jung haatho ko phela gehre saans bharne lagi, Thumb aur Index finger se ek Hole banate huwe Aim bana ker Yoo-Jung ne zor se saans choori to uss ke muh se Aag nikalne lagi aur makriyo ko jalane lagi.


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Daisuke: Fire Realm Clan!

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