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Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

Who are your two favorite male characters in this story?


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Salty~Otaku

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Salty~Otaku

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Are boss ye story mein kya lafda kar diya, sala dimag ka dahi ho gaya hai.
Please make everything right
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Jus Kidding! story me kuch bigda he nahi hai ke sahi karu :idk1:
 
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as per the deal next update ajana chaihye 10 tarikh ko so hope ki Salty~Otaku bhai writing start ho chuki hogi next arc ko late start nahi karoge ya ala words mai kahu to next arc ke pehle update par hi hume intezar nahi karaoge
 

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Kaafi interesting things hui hai es update me ...dil khush ho gya read kr k but saath me dil bhi toot gya Urvi or Yojoong ki sister k marne se....yahan story thodi fast forward bhi hui kuch sawaalo me uljhaate hue
:thanks: and :welcome1:
1.... I don't think ki Urvi ka role abhi khatam huaaa hai ...sprit clan se belong krte hai .... to Urvi k liye aage kuch naa kuch interesting sa hi hoga....May Be future me Aarav k Pagalpan ko rokne k liye wo bapis aaye.... kyuki uski body ko samhaal k le jaaya gya hai to Usko safe hi rakkha jaayega jis trha tower me uske father k body ko rakkha gya safe
Urvi aur Avinash ko le jaane wale 2 Alag faction hai! Avinash ek Monarch tha to uss ki body apnr saath bohat se raaz rakhe huwe the jo Ezra reveal nahi karna chahti thi!
2....... yahan Yojong ki Past de related baate patta to chali lekin bahut se sawaal khade kar gayi..... Fire clan ki leader ki beti batai gyi hai ..but itne high status k babjood unko itni problem kyu face krni padi.... उनकी maa ka kya huaa..... unke father me enka saath kyu nahi diya ......fire clan enke peeche laga huaa hai haath dho kar to pakka sirf Ye next successor ka nahi ho sakta Cause jinhone bhi fire clan ko enke peeche bheja hai wo Yojong k baare me kuch khaas jaante honge...3rd elder main culprit nahi ho sakti Yojong k liye
Main kuch hint dia tha beech me ke Yoo-Jung kiu Fire Clan ki part nahi hai! Fire Clan ka utna kuch reveal nahi kia hu abhi to kuch keh nahi sakte, Aur ye sabhi ke liye kahu ga, 3rd Elder Wind Clan ki part hai.....Sabhi Clans ke apne apne Elders hai :hint:
3..... archna ka ye sab karna aur without any feelings k wahan khde reh k sab chupchaap hote dekhan...kuch to bahut badde jhol ki taraf ishara kr rha hai ....May Be jis trha Ela ko majdoori kiya gya uske father k against usi trha yahan pe bhi huaa ho yaa may bhi koi big game huaa hai Aarav k saath
Kuch bhi ho sakta hai! Ye sab to samay he bataye ga ab :approve:
4..... es sab me Aakash kha gya.....itna badda kaand ho gya aur use bhanak tak nahi lagi...usko Jisko aarav k har ek pal ki Khabar rehti thi use itne badde kaand ka kese patta naa chala
Wo bhi to part ho sakta hai na :notme: Ye sab kuch bhi samay he bataye ga :D
5 ....... yaa phir ye sab jaanbujh k aarav k saath to nahi kiya gya taaki use es dimension me bheja jaa sake kisi khaas maksad k liye ..kisi khaas person ko us dimension se bahar nikalne k liye ..cause koi bhi us dimension se bahar nahi nikal sakta ...but may be unko malum chal gya ho ki aarav me wo ability h jo ki us dimension se bahar aa sakta hai
Aisi konsi Ability hai Aarav ke paas :shocked: Itni planning bhi ho sakti hai kia :roll: Waise agar kisi nikalwana hota to Direct Quest bhi to aa sakti thi na :sip:
Kuch bhi jhol ho sakta hai ....bit over-all kehna chaahunga...behad shaandaar update rhe ab tak k aapke
But Haan...Urvi or Yoo-ri k Characters k saath hue kaand ko justify kiya jaaye
Cause ye wo Characters nahi जिन्हें sacrifice kiya jaaye
:thanks: for your precious review! Umeed karta hu ap aage bhi aise he saath bane raho gye :ciao:
 
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Not only tutorial arc has ended but also the kind hearted Aarav's chapter has been ended rather most cruelly.
Once a Legend says:-

“Nothing ever goes as planned in this accursed world. The longer you live, the more you realize that the only things that truly exist in this reality are merely pain, suffering and futility. Listen, everywhere you look in this world, wherever there is light, there will always be shadows to be found as well”


Will Aarav ever be able to avenge his sister's death,
Agar wo Revenge nahi lia to Readers mujhe Infinite Prison bhej de gye :scared:Manzil ek he hai lekin asli maza safar me aye ga :approve:
Congrats dear bro for your giving us such a mind-blowing update. Awaiting your new arc eagerly
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Bahut badhiya update hai Bhai....
Mujhe to bahut maja aaya or sath me kafi question bhi aaya ki pehle yoo jung ki behen waqai mar geyi.....akhir us car me kiski body thi.....
Lag to aisa he raha hai :dazed:
karegi......or sab japan kyu jaa rahe hai.
Aarav apni behan ko Cure karne ke liye! Yoo-Jung apni behan ko wahan Aarav ke liye bhej rahi thi kiu ke usse vishwas tha ke Aarav usse protect ker le ga :declare:

mujhe pehle se pata tha archana vansh ko bahut peyaar karti hai isiliye jab aarav urbi pehli baar aaya tab use bhi peyar diya or jab aarav vansh ke liye khatra ban geya to archana ji apni bete ke pakh me chali geyi....usne pehle isiliye peyaar dikha rahi thi.....or wahi aab khud aarav ko marnr ke liye injection laga diya or to or urbi ko khud hi goli maari.
Obviously! Wo apne bacho ki wajha se he Aarav ko itni importance de rahi thi, Baki sab kuch to aage clear hota he rahe ga :good:
or baki ka kya hoga ki usko aarav yad hi na ho to.....waise me usse kaise pata chalega ki aarav kisliye or kyu un sab se badla lerahe hai.
Sabhi yaade Clear nahi huwi :hint:
or aakash ka kya roll hoga isme ki uske family ko koi hurt kar rahe hai
Wo khud hurt ker raha tha 2 din pehle he :redface:
Bahut badhiya update hai Bhai....
Mujhe to bahut maja aaya or sath me kafi question bhi aaya ki pehle yoo jung ki behen waqai mar geyi.....akhir us car me kiski body thi......or yoo jung aage kya karegi......or sab japan kyu jaa rahe hai....or ab aate hai Aarav par......mujhe pehle se pata tha archana vansh ko bahut peyaar karti hai isiliye jab aarav urbi pehli baar aaya tab use bhi peyar diya or jab aarav vansh ke liye khatra ban geya to archana ji apni bete ke pakh me chali geyi....usne pehle isiliye peyaar dikha rahi thi.....or wahi aab khud aarav ko marnr ke liye injection laga diya or to or urbi ko khud hi goli maari........or ab aarav kis lok ki prison me pouch geya or waha se kaise wapash aata hai dekhte hai.....
Ab aata hu muddhe per.....story ke naam par......ab dekhte hai aarav ka sweet revenge ka kaise leta hai.....or baki ka kya hoga ki usko aarav yad hi na ho to.....waise me usse kaise pata chalega ki aarav kisliye or kyu un sab se badla lerahe hai.....yahi samapt karta hoon new update intejaar rehega.....ager possible hua to 5 7 dino me dene ka prays karna kyu ki ab jawda intejar nhi seh payunga ki kab story chalu hogi or kab dekhunga ki kaise aarav sabse badla lega....or aakash ka kya roll hoga isme ki uske family ko koi hurt kar rahe hai
Waiting for next update
:thanks: for sharing you thoughts! Umeed karta hu aise he saath bane raho gye :ciao:
 
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Bhai kya esa ho sakta hai ki next arc me ya aane Wale kisi bhi arc me akansha ko aarav ki life dobara entry ho or abki baar dono ki love story bhi dekhne ko mile ek dam made for each other wali
Made for each other...Not to sure! Harem hai to waisa bond kisi se bhi ho ga uss ka kuch nahi keh sakta :sigh2:
 
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Nice update

It's a good update ... Unpredictable... Story

Nice update

तारीफ़ अपने आप की करना फ़िज़ूल है, खुशबु ख़ुद बता देती है कौन सा फूल है...!!

You did amazing bro
Literally superb
Heads up

Awesome update Bhai 😊☺️

Fantastic update.

Start of new beginning.

Kya hi kadak likha hai bro

Saloooo like karrooo

Awesomes bhai

Mast,ik number

Bhai i have no words ,too good.
Keep it up.

Nice update bhot awala par Kar Maza aya gya ab new update Ka intazar ha bhaii

Mast story

Must hai Bhai
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Salty~Otaku

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Ye tha hamare pehle Arc ka last Update, 6 maheene lag gye hume pehle Arc me aur ye sirf prologue tha :sweat: Mujhe andaza hai ke ye Best Update nahi ho ga, Not because of quality lekin ye Arc Character development ke liye Sacrifice wala Update tha :redface: Abhi ke liye ate hai kuch sawalo ke jawab per :thank_you:



Update Late kiu aa rahe the?


Kuch din pehle ek Review me kaha gaya tha ke agar Urvi ko kuch huwa to hum story na parhe shayad, blackblood agar ap ko yaad ho to wo ap the, Mujhe bura nahi laga aur na he kabhi lage ga, lekin uss Review ne ek alag point of view mere saamne rakh dia ke agar Urvi ko kuch huwa to koi story parhe ga kia? Main ne bohat se alag raaste sochne shuru ker diye, Koi bhi raasta leta to uss ke liye mujhe kuch Update pehle se tayari karni thi, Shayad kuch ne ajeeb changes daikhe bhi ho, Lekin un me se koi bhi change mujhe satisfied nahi ker raha tha, Main ne kuch senior se baat ki to unho ne mujhe mere original plot ke saath rehne ke liye kaha, Agar main story badalta to wo meri story nahi rehti, Main yahan Reader kamane aya hu aur wo main apni mehnat se kamau ga.




Aakash kon hai?


Good Question very Good! Never thought ke ye itni bari mystery ban jaye gi, Well uss ka jawab hai ke Aage khud daikh lena :D



Abilities ki sabhi details?


Sabhi details ap ko jald he First page per mil jaye gi, With Character intro and some other things.



Story Colors?



Ap sabhi ko pata ho ga ke main ab tak Werewolf ke font and style per story likh raha tha, Lekin wohi baat ke main kisi aur ki mehnat se apni original pehchan nahi bana sakta, Werewolf se shukriya kehna chahu ga, Un ke saath dene se story per meri 40% ke kareeb mehnat bach gayi thi, Uss ke chalte main story ko ache se likh paya ek ache style me aur uss ka main abhari hu, Lekin ab kuch badalne ka samay aa gaya hai to hum kuch new font aur color try kare gye ap sab bhi batate rahiye ga ke konse changes ache lag rahe hai aur konse nahi lag rahe hai.




Arc khatam hone ke saath he break period aa chuka hai, Hum Like target barhane wale hai, Next Arc se Like target 80 Likes ka ho ga, Lekin ye Update per Target 100 Like hai, Agar target Complete huwa to Arc 10th November se shuru ho jaye ga, Agar target na bhi huwa to 15th November se start ker he de gye, Ye time me aage ki sabhi planing intro aur sab kuch tayar karna hai to ye time lage ga he, Ab main chalta hu aur milte hai Review aur Intro ke saath tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!
Update ka target 100 Likes tha kiu ke beech me bohat time Gap tha! Lekin abhi 84 Likes huwe hai, Lekin mujhe target se utna kuch khaas matlab nahi hai target sirf motivate karta hai, Abhi to ek Wedding function per hu lekin 15 tak nahi wait karwau ga, 12th November Night 10:30 PM ko Update 40 aye ga!
 
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Control karna he kiu hai :sip:
Hahaha... Mera matlab pyar se control kerne ko tha. Urvi ke na rehne par Aarav ki personality bilkul change ho jayegi. Ek sanvedansheel aur sabki help kerne wala Aarav ab ek kroor, hinsak aur badla lene wala prani ban jayega. Waise bhi kahani ka main plot 'Venegeance. hai.
 
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